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The security design team will have a conference call to discuss this =
issue and other security related issues.  I'm suggesting either Aug. 14 =
or Aug. 18 as possible dates at 10AM EST USA.

Please send me e-mail if you wish to join us and indicate what date =
would be good for you.  Or you can suggest another time.

-- maureen

-----Original Message-----
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Subject: RE: [Rserpool] Two security issues from IETF #57


Hi Maureen,

Comments inline.

Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:
> The security discussion at IETF #57 raised two issues that we agreed
> would be brought to the list for comment.=20
>=20
> Issue #1
> TLS or IPsec mandatory to implement?
>=20
> The security design team consensus was that the network designer
> could either use TLS or IPsec as mandatory to implement for ENRP-PE
> and ENRP-ENRP communication.  The PU-ENRP was previously decided to
> be mandatory to implement TLS for reasons of interoperability.  =20
> Direction from the ADs and consensus in the meeting was that one
> security mechanism should be made mandatory to implement for all.  It
> was agreed to select TLS as mandatory to implement by those attending
> the meeting.  Do the people on the list agree?=20

Agree. =20
   =20
>=20
> Issue #2
> Security of ENRP server registrations and ENRP to ENRP communications
>=20

<snip>

 It was agreed to
> restrict the ENRP database to secure registrations only and secure
> communications between ENRP servers OR insecure registrations only by
> those attending the meeting.  Do the people on the list agree? =20

I'm not sure that I understand what was agreed upon.  Are we talking =
about
two modes of operation:

(1) Secure registrations only and secure ENRP-ENRP traffic, and
(2) Insecure registrations only and insecure ENRP-ENRP traffic?

My feeling is that ENRP-ENRP should be secured in any case, but this may =
not
be practical.  This will have an affect on the use of multicast between =
ENRP
servers and I believe that we should discuss this during the next =
security
design team meeting.  (I have previously sent an email regarding this to =
the
design team members.)  My thought would be to disallow use of multicast =
in
ENRPv1, but leave a section in the draft explaining how it could be used
properly with secure multicast.  Perhaps by ENRPv2, there will be a =
secure
IGMP or something similar.  Developing our own custom secure multicast
option should not be an option in my opinion.=20

In all likelihood, an operator with a closed system (not traversing the
Internet) will probably choose to do whatever they want in terms of
ENRP-ENRP security and multicast.
  =20
>=20
> Comments?
>=20
> -- maureen
>=20

Regards,

Aron

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The security design team will have a conference call to discuss this =
issue and other security related issues.  I'm suggesting either Aug. 14 =
or Aug. 18 as possible dates at 10AM EST USA.

Please send me e-mail if you wish to join us and indicate what date =
would be good for you.  Or you can suggest another time.

-- maureen

-----Original Message-----
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To: Stillman Maureen (NVO-NIC/Ithaca); 'rserpool@ietf.org'
Subject: RE: [Rserpool] Two security issues from IETF #57


Hi Maureen,

Comments inline.

Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:
> The security discussion at IETF #57 raised two issues that we agreed
> would be brought to the list for comment.=20
>=20
> Issue #1
> TLS or IPsec mandatory to implement?
>=20
> The security design team consensus was that the network designer
> could either use TLS or IPsec as mandatory to implement for ENRP-PE
> and ENRP-ENRP communication.  The PU-ENRP was previously decided to
> be mandatory to implement TLS for reasons of interoperability.  =20
> Direction from the ADs and consensus in the meeting was that one
> security mechanism should be made mandatory to implement for all.  It
> was agreed to select TLS as mandatory to implement by those attending
> the meeting.  Do the people on the list agree?=20

Agree. =20
   =20
>=20
> Issue #2
> Security of ENRP server registrations and ENRP to ENRP communications
>=20

<snip>

 It was agreed to
> restrict the ENRP database to secure registrations only and secure
> communications between ENRP servers OR insecure registrations only by
> those attending the meeting.  Do the people on the list agree? =20

I'm not sure that I understand what was agreed upon.  Are we talking =
about
two modes of operation:

(1) Secure registrations only and secure ENRP-ENRP traffic, and
(2) Insecure registrations only and insecure ENRP-ENRP traffic?

My feeling is that ENRP-ENRP should be secured in any case, but this may =
not
be practical.  This will have an affect on the use of multicast between =
ENRP
servers and I believe that we should discuss this during the next =
security
design team meeting.  (I have previously sent an email regarding this to =
the
design team members.)  My thought would be to disallow use of multicast =
in
ENRPv1, but leave a section in the draft explaining how it could be used
properly with secure multicast.  Perhaps by ENRPv2, there will be a =
secure
IGMP or something similar.  Developing our own custom secure multicast
option should not be an option in my opinion.=20

In all likelihood, an operator with a closed system (not traversing the
Internet) will probably choose to do whatever they want in terms of
ENRP-ENRP security and multicast.
  =20
>=20
> Comments?
>=20
> -- maureen
>=20

Regards,

Aron

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Hello,

I've just read the draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt and several other
Rserpool docs and I've found some typos and there are some paragraphs
that I don't understand.

Draft draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt says:

Page 4: "The PU's  may try to find out via the endpoint resolution
protocol(ENRP) which PE's are active"

As I have understood after reading draft-ietf-rserpool-arch-06.txt,
(although the "Endpoint Name RESOLUTION Protocol" name is a bit
misleading) ENRP is not employed by PUs to resolve the pool handle into
the list of PEs belonging to the pool, but ASAP.NAME_RESOLUTION is used
instead. ENRP servers (NS) speak ENRP among them to maintain a
consistent view of the pools namespace.=20

IMHO this paragraph and some others later in the same page about this
issue are misleading, aren't they? or is my view of Rserpool wrong?


Some typos:

Page 1: "...to applications which want to have High avialebility
services."

s/avialebility/availability/

Page 3: "Reliable server pooling provides protocols for providing higly=20
available services."

s/higly/highly/

Page 3: "Transport and network level redundancy are handle by the
transport and network layer protcols."

s/handle/handled/
s/protcols/protocols/

Page 3: "The terms are commonly identified in related work and can be
found in the Aggregate Server Access Protocol and Endpoint Name
Resolution Protocol Common Parameters documentRFC COMM [5]."

This document does not define any terminology, maybe reference [2]=20
"Architecture for Reliable Server Pooling" is better.

Page 5: "May be used by allready existing applications which do not want
to change the interface between PU and PE."

s/allready/already/

Page 5: "All entities wil use Rspool protocols for communication withs
their respective peers"

s/wil/will/
s/Rspool/Rserpool/
s/withs/with/

Page 7: "No conegstion control is done..."

s/conegstion/congestion/

Page 7: "Only the ENRP server responsible for that particular server
pool will have a up to date view of the load distribution in the pool."

s/a up/an up/

Page 10: "Rserpool protocols(ENRP and ASAP) do NOT provide any service
for transfering state information of a application from one Processing
Element(PE) to another"

s/Processing Element/Pool Element/

Maybe the ASAP-Cookie mechanism should be cited here?

Regards,
--Manuel

--=20
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Hello,

I've just read the draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt and several other
Rserpool docs and I've found some typos and there are some paragraphs
that I don't understand.

Draft draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt says:

Page 4: "The PU's  may try to find out via the endpoint resolution
protocol(ENRP) which PE's are active"

As I have understood after reading draft-ietf-rserpool-arch-06.txt,
(although the "Endpoint Name RESOLUTION Protocol" name is a bit
misleading) ENRP is not employed by PUs to resolve the pool handle into
the list of PEs belonging to the pool, but ASAP.NAME_RESOLUTION is used
instead. ENRP servers (NS) speak ENRP among them to maintain a
consistent view of the pools namespace.=20

IMHO this paragraph and some others later in the same page about this
issue are misleading, aren't they? or is my view of Rserpool wrong?


Some typos:

Page 1: "...to applications which want to have High avialebility
services."

s/avialebility/availability/

Page 3: "Reliable server pooling provides protocols for providing higly=20
available services."

s/higly/highly/

Page 3: "Transport and network level redundancy are handle by the
transport and network layer protcols."

s/handle/handled/
s/protcols/protocols/

Page 3: "The terms are commonly identified in related work and can be
found in the Aggregate Server Access Protocol and Endpoint Name
Resolution Protocol Common Parameters documentRFC COMM [5]."

This document does not define any terminology, maybe reference [2]=20
"Architecture for Reliable Server Pooling" is better.

Page 5: "May be used by allready existing applications which do not want
to change the interface between PU and PE."

s/allready/already/

Page 5: "All entities wil use Rspool protocols for communication withs
their respective peers"

s/wil/will/
s/Rspool/Rserpool/
s/withs/with/

Page 7: "No conegstion control is done..."

s/conegstion/congestion/

Page 7: "Only the ENRP server responsible for that particular server
pool will have a up to date view of the load distribution in the pool."

s/a up/an up/

Page 10: "Rserpool protocols(ENRP and ASAP) do NOT provide any service
for transfering state information of a application from one Processing
Element(PE) to another"

s/Processing Element/Pool Element/

Maybe the ASAP-Cookie mechanism should be cited here?

Regards,
--Manuel

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Hi Folks,

Sorry for the delay, both of your co-chairs were out of the office for a bit.

We'd like to start WG Last Call on the Comparisons document
(http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-rserpool-comp-06.txt)

and the Architecture document, as discussed at the Vienna meeting
(http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-rserpool-arch-06.txt).

WG Last Call on the Comparisons document will be one week, since
the document is an update to the previous one which already passed
last call.  Last Call will end on Friday, August 22nd.

WG Last Call on the Architecture document will be two weeks, as
we have not last called it before.  Last Call will end on Friday, August 29th.

If you have comments, please add the document title in the subject
line, e.g., "Comparison Last Call Comment" or "Architecture Last Call Comment".

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Hi Folks,

Sorry for the delay, both of your co-chairs were out of the office for a bit.

We'd like to start WG Last Call on the Comparisons document
(http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-rserpool-comp-06.txt)

and the Architecture document, as discussed at the Vienna meeting
(http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-rserpool-arch-06.txt).

WG Last Call on the Comparisons document will be one week, since
the document is an update to the previous one which already passed
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WG Last Call on the Architecture document will be two weeks, as
we have not last called it before.  Last Call will end on Friday, August 29th.

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Hello,

I have the following suggested changes to the procedure for taking-over a
failed peer server.  In particular, the Take-over Target Peer Server
procedure in Section 4.10.2.  I believe that this change will simplify the
procedure by removing at least one message and eliminating a possible race
condition that exists when the aggressor, i.e., the server initiating the
take-over, fails between the PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message and the
PEER_OWNERSHIP_CHANGE message(s).  

As the procedure is written today, a peer server will remove the failed peer
from it's peer list upon receiving the PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message from the
initiating server, but it will not update it's PE list until one or more
PEER_OWNERSHIP_CHANGE messages are received.  This creates a period of time
when an ENRP server has PEs marked as being owned by another server which is
no longer a peer.  These orphaned PEs will not be resolved until an audit
takes place or the PE realizes that its home server is no longer alive and
looks for a new one.  I think that we can avoid the delay and simplify the
entire exchange as follows:

4.10.2 Take-over Target Peer Server

   The initiating ENRP server SHOULD first send, via an announcement, a
   PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message to inform all its active peers that the
   take-over is enforced. The target server's ID MUST be filled in the
   message. The initiating server SHOULD then remove the target server
   from its internal peer list.

   Then it SHOULD examine its local copy of the namespace and claim
   ownership of each of the PEs originally owned by the target server,
   by following these steps:

   1.  mark itself as the home ENRP server of each of the PEs originally
       owned by the target server;

   2.  send a point-to-point ENDPOINT_KEEP_ALIVE message to each of the
       PEs. This will trigger the PE to adopt the initiating server as
       its new home ENRP server;

   When a peer receives the PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message from the initiating
   server, it SHOULD update its local peer list and PE cache by following 
   these steps:

   1.  remove the target server from its internal peer list;

   2.  update the home ENRP server of each PE in its local copy of the 
       namespace to be the sender of the message, i.e., the initiating
       server.

The PEER_OWNERSHIP_CHANGE exchanges are not needed in this procedure.

Regards,

Aron

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Hello,

I have the following suggested changes to the procedure for taking-over a
failed peer server.  In particular, the Take-over Target Peer Server
procedure in Section 4.10.2.  I believe that this change will simplify the
procedure by removing at least one message and eliminating a possible race
condition that exists when the aggressor, i.e., the server initiating the
take-over, fails between the PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message and the
PEER_OWNERSHIP_CHANGE message(s).  

As the procedure is written today, a peer server will remove the failed peer
from it's peer list upon receiving the PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message from the
initiating server, but it will not update it's PE list until one or more
PEER_OWNERSHIP_CHANGE messages are received.  This creates a period of time
when an ENRP server has PEs marked as being owned by another server which is
no longer a peer.  These orphaned PEs will not be resolved until an audit
takes place or the PE realizes that its home server is no longer alive and
looks for a new one.  I think that we can avoid the delay and simplify the
entire exchange as follows:

4.10.2 Take-over Target Peer Server

   The initiating ENRP server SHOULD first send, via an announcement, a
   PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message to inform all its active peers that the
   take-over is enforced. The target server's ID MUST be filled in the
   message. The initiating server SHOULD then remove the target server
   from its internal peer list.

   Then it SHOULD examine its local copy of the namespace and claim
   ownership of each of the PEs originally owned by the target server,
   by following these steps:

   1.  mark itself as the home ENRP server of each of the PEs originally
       owned by the target server;

   2.  send a point-to-point ENDPOINT_KEEP_ALIVE message to each of the
       PEs. This will trigger the PE to adopt the initiating server as
       its new home ENRP server;

   When a peer receives the PEER_TAKEOVER_SERVER message from the initiating
   server, it SHOULD update its local peer list and PE cache by following 
   these steps:

   1.  remove the target server from its internal peer list;

   2.  update the home ENRP server of each PE in its local copy of the 
       namespace to be the sender of the message, i.e., the initiating
       server.

The PEER_OWNERSHIP_CHANGE exchanges are not needed in this procedure.

Regards,

Aron

Aron J. Silverton
Senior Staff Research Engineer
Motorola Labs, Networks and Infrastructure Research
Motorola, Inc.

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There is no security considerations section in the architecture draft.  =
I should have caught this earlier -- my bad!

Here is a suggestion:

The Rserpool protocol must allow us to secure the Rserpool =
infrastructure.  There are security and privacy issues that relate to =
the namespace, pool element registration and user queries of the =
namespace.  In [1] a complete threat analysis of Rserpool components is =
presented.

[1] Threats Introduced by Rserpool and Requirements for Security in =
response to Threats, draft-ietf-rserpool-threats-00.txt, work in =
progress.

This is how it is handled in the OPES architecture document =
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-opes-architecture-04.txt.

I have some nits, but I'll send them tomorrow. =20

Of course, other suggestions are welcome.

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There is no security considerations section in the architecture draft.  =
I should have caught this earlier -- my bad!

Here is a suggestion:

The Rserpool protocol must allow us to secure the Rserpool =
infrastructure.  There are security and privacy issues that relate to =
the namespace, pool element registration and user queries of the =
namespace.  In [1] a complete threat analysis of Rserpool components is =
presented.

[1] Threats Introduced by Rserpool and Requirements for Security in =
response to Threats, draft-ietf-rserpool-threats-00.txt, work in =
progress.

This is how it is handled in the OPES architecture document =
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-opes-architecture-04.txt.

I have some nits, but I'll send them tomorrow. =20

Of course, other suggestions are welcome.

-- maureen




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sorry for the delay in answering.
See below for comments.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Manuel Urue=F1a [mailto:muruenya@it.uc3m.es]
> Sent: Wednesday, August 06, 2003 2:23 PM
> To: rserpool@ietf.org
> Subject: [Rserpool] Some comments about
> "draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt"
>=20
>=20
> Hello,
>=20
> I've just read the draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt and several =
other
> Rserpool docs and I've found some typos and there are some paragraphs
> that I don't understand.
>=20
> Draft draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt says:
>=20
> Page 4: "The PU's  may try to find out via the endpoint resolution
> protocol(ENRP) which PE's are active"
>=20
> As I have understood after reading draft-ietf-rserpool-arch-06.txt,
> (although the "Endpoint Name RESOLUTION Protocol" name is a bit
> misleading) ENRP is not employed by PUs to resolve the pool=20
> handle into
> the list of PEs belonging to the pool, but=20
> ASAP.NAME_RESOLUTION is used
> instead. ENRP servers (NS) speak ENRP among them to maintain a
> consistent view of the pools namespace.=20
>=20
> IMHO this paragraph and some others later in the same page about this
> issue are misleading, aren't they? or is my view of Rserpool wrong?

Yep, they are. I'll try to come up with something more correct. Must =
have
been confused...
Does happen from time to time...
>=20
>=20
> Some typos:
>=20
> Page 1: "...to applications which want to have High avialebility
> services."
>=20
> s/avialebility/availability/
>=20
> Page 3: "Reliable server pooling provides protocols for=20
> providing higly=20
> available services."
>=20
> s/higly/highly/
>=20
> Page 3: "Transport and network level redundancy are handle by the
> transport and network layer protcols."
>=20
> s/handle/handled/
> s/protcols/protocols/
>=20
> Page 3: "The terms are commonly identified in related work and can be
> found in the Aggregate Server Access Protocol and Endpoint Name
> Resolution Protocol Common Parameters documentRFC COMM [5]."
>=20
> This document does not define any terminology, maybe reference [2]=20
> "Architecture for Reliable Server Pooling" is better.
>=20
> Page 5: "May be used by allready existing applications which=20
> do not want
> to change the interface between PU and PE."
>=20
> s/allready/already/
>=20
> Page 5: "All entities wil use Rspool protocols for communication =
withs
> their respective peers"
>=20
> s/wil/will/
> s/Rspool/Rserpool/
> s/withs/with/
>=20
> Page 7: "No conegstion control is done..."
>=20
> s/conegstion/congestion/
>=20
> Page 7: "Only the ENRP server responsible for that particular server
> pool will have a up to date view of the load distribution in=20
> the pool."
>=20
> s/a up/an up/
>=20

All typos fixed...
Thanks

> Page 10: "Rserpool protocols(ENRP and ASAP) do NOT provide any =
service
> for transfering state information of a application from one =
Processing
> Element(PE) to another"
>=20
> s/Processing Element/Pool Element/
>=20
> Maybe the ASAP-Cookie mechanism should be cited here?

Put something extra here. It is true that the protocol does not have
provisions for the direct state transfer between 2 PE(meaning from one =
PE
directly to another PE) but the ASAP cookie mechanism can be used to do =
some
state sharing via the PU(more or less indirect..PE -> PU -> PE..)
Will try to make it clearer.


>=20
> Regards,
> --Manuel
>=20
> --=20
> Manuel Uruen~a - Universidad Carlos III de Madrid
> GPG FP: 9BE9 9FFF ACFF 2887 80E6 50FE FABC A79F 5535 5A75
>=20
I've also put in some stuff from the service draft(more particular the
chapter 4 of the services draft)
I'm going to let it pass by Petere and Phil so they can check it out
first.(and add or/and remove some stuff...)

Thanks  Manuel for the comments.

your sincerly,
Lode

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sorry for the delay in answering.
See below for comments.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Manuel Urue=F1a [mailto:muruenya@it.uc3m.es]
> Sent: Wednesday, August 06, 2003 2:23 PM
> To: rserpool@ietf.org
> Subject: [Rserpool] Some comments about
> "draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt"
>=20
>=20
> Hello,
>=20
> I've just read the draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt and several =
other
> Rserpool docs and I've found some typos and there are some paragraphs
> that I don't understand.
>=20
> Draft draft-ietf-rserpool-applic-00.txt says:
>=20
> Page 4: "The PU's  may try to find out via the endpoint resolution
> protocol(ENRP) which PE's are active"
>=20
> As I have understood after reading draft-ietf-rserpool-arch-06.txt,
> (although the "Endpoint Name RESOLUTION Protocol" name is a bit
> misleading) ENRP is not employed by PUs to resolve the pool=20
> handle into
> the list of PEs belonging to the pool, but=20
> ASAP.NAME_RESOLUTION is used
> instead. ENRP servers (NS) speak ENRP among them to maintain a
> consistent view of the pools namespace.=20
>=20
> IMHO this paragraph and some others later in the same page about this
> issue are misleading, aren't they? or is my view of Rserpool wrong?

Yep, they are. I'll try to come up with something more correct. Must =
have
been confused...
Does happen from time to time...
>=20
>=20
> Some typos:
>=20
> Page 1: "...to applications which want to have High avialebility
> services."
>=20
> s/avialebility/availability/
>=20
> Page 3: "Reliable server pooling provides protocols for=20
> providing higly=20
> available services."
>=20
> s/higly/highly/
>=20
> Page 3: "Transport and network level redundancy are handle by the
> transport and network layer protcols."
>=20
> s/handle/handled/
> s/protcols/protocols/
>=20
> Page 3: "The terms are commonly identified in related work and can be
> found in the Aggregate Server Access Protocol and Endpoint Name
> Resolution Protocol Common Parameters documentRFC COMM [5]."
>=20
> This document does not define any terminology, maybe reference [2]=20
> "Architecture for Reliable Server Pooling" is better.
>=20
> Page 5: "May be used by allready existing applications which=20
> do not want
> to change the interface between PU and PE."
>=20
> s/allready/already/
>=20
> Page 5: "All entities wil use Rspool protocols for communication =
withs
> their respective peers"
>=20
> s/wil/will/
> s/Rspool/Rserpool/
> s/withs/with/
>=20
> Page 7: "No conegstion control is done..."
>=20
> s/conegstion/congestion/
>=20
> Page 7: "Only the ENRP server responsible for that particular server
> pool will have a up to date view of the load distribution in=20
> the pool."
>=20
> s/a up/an up/
>=20

All typos fixed...
Thanks

> Page 10: "Rserpool protocols(ENRP and ASAP) do NOT provide any =
service
> for transfering state information of a application from one =
Processing
> Element(PE) to another"
>=20
> s/Processing Element/Pool Element/
>=20
> Maybe the ASAP-Cookie mechanism should be cited here?

Put something extra here. It is true that the protocol does not have
provisions for the direct state transfer between 2 PE(meaning from one =
PE
directly to another PE) but the ASAP cookie mechanism can be used to do =
some
state sharing via the PU(more or less indirect..PE -> PU -> PE..)
Will try to make it clearer.


>=20
> Regards,
> --Manuel
>=20
> --=20
> Manuel Uruen~a - Universidad Carlos III de Madrid
> GPG FP: 9BE9 9FFF ACFF 2887 80E6 50FE FABC A79F 5535 5A75
>=20
I've also put in some stuff from the service draft(more particular the
chapter 4 of the services draft)
I'm going to let it pass by Petere and Phil so they can check it out
first.(and add or/and remove some stuff...)

Thanks  Manuel for the comments.

your sincerly,
Lode

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I read this carefully.  Here are my comments.

Non-nits:

2.2.1 Endpoint Name Resolution Protocol

   The name servers use a protocol called Endpoint Name Resolution
   Protocol (ENRP) for communication with each other to make sure that
   all have the same information about the server pools.

I'm concerned that this will spark a lengthy debate about =
synchronization of ENRP databases.  We can't guarantee instantaneous =
updates of the database and a perfectly synchronized name space.  How =
about something like:

   The name servers use a protocol called Endpoint Name Resolution
   Protocol (ENRP) for communication with each other to exchange =
information and updates
   about the server pools.

2.2.2 Aggregate Server Access Protocol


   ASAP in conjunction with ENRP provides a fault tolerant data transfer
   mechanism over IP networks.=20

I'm concerned that this will be interpreted as a general feature with =
some sort of guarantee.  It is only offered by use of specific services =
described in services document.  In other words, this will imply that it =
offers transparent fail-over in all cases which is not true.  Even with =
that, there is no guarantee of uninterrupted service.  It is best =
effort.  I would delete this sentence or talk about services and =
different possibilities.  These are discussed in the services document.

   In addition, ASAP defines each logical communication destination as a
   server pool, providing full transparent support for server-pooling
   and load sharing.

I don't understand this statement.  What is a logical communication =
destination? =20

ASAP is also used by a server to join or leave a server pool.  It
   registers or deregisters itself by communicating with a name server,
   which will normally the home NS. =20

see changes below:

ASAP is also used by a PE to join or leave a server pool.  It
   registers or deregisters itself by communicating with a name server,
   which will normally be the home NS. =20

ASAP allows dynamic system
   scalability, allowing the pool membership to change at any time
   without interruption of the service.

Same concern as above.  This is only offered by use of specific services =
described in services document.  Even with that, there is no guarantee =
of uninterrupted service.  It is best effort.

Nits:

1.1 Overview

This document defines an architecture, for providinge a highly
   available reliable server function in support of some service. The
   way this is achieved is by forming a pool of servers, each of which
   is capable of supporting the desired service, and providing a name
   service that=20

see changes below, misspelled words:

This document defines an architecture, for *providing* a highly
   available reliable server function in support of a service or set of =
services.=20
   This is achieved by forming a pool of servers, each of which
   is capable of supporting the desired service(s), and providing a name
   service that...

2.1 RSerPool Functional Components

Each server pool will be identifiable by a unique name which is
   simply a byte string, called the pool handle.=20

see changes below:

Each server pool is identified by a unique name which is
   simply a byte string, called the pool handle.=20

   o  A protocol field of the IP header specifying the transport layer
      protocol or protocols.

see changes below:

   o  A protocol field specifying the transport layer
      protocol or protocols.

Please note that the RSerPool architecture supports both IPv4 and
   IPv6 addressing. A PE can also support multiple transport layers.

see changes below:

Note that the RSerPool architecture supports both IPv4 and
   IPv6 addressing. A PE can also support multiple transport protocols.

2.2.1

ENRP employs a client-server
   model with which an name server will respond to the name translation
 service requests from endpoint clients running on the same host or
   running on different hosts.

see changes below:

ENRP employs a client-server
   model in which a name server will respond to the name translation
 service requests from endpoint clients.

2.2.3 PU <-> NS Communication

   The PU <-> NS communication is used for doing name queries.=20

see changes below:

   The PU <-> NS communication is used for performing name queries.

2.2.4 PE <-> NS Communication

   The PE <-> NS communication is used for registration and
   deregistration of the PE in one ore more pools and for the

misspelled word:

   The PE <-> NS communication is used for registration and
   deregistration of the PE in one *or* more pools and for the


   o  Multiplexed data and control channel. Both channels are
      transported over one transport connection. This can either be an
      SCTP association, with data and control channel are seperated by
      the PPID, or an TCP connection, with data and control channel
      being handled by a TCP mapping layer.

misspelled word:

   o  Multiplexed data and control channel. Both channels are
      transported over one transport connection. This can either be an
      SCTP association, with data and control channel are *separated* by
      the PPID, or an TCP connection, with data and control channel
      being handled by a TCP mapping layer.


   When a name server boots up a UDP multicast message may be sent out
   for initial detection of other name servers in the operational scope.
   The other name servers send an answer using a unicast UDP message.

Aren't we addressing multicast at a later time?  If so, delete this =
paragraph.  Otherwise, some nits:

      When a name server initializes a UDP multicast message may be =
transmitted
   for initial detection of other name servers in the operational scope.
   The other name servers send a response using a unicast UDP message.

2.3.1

communication may not be know by the peer.

   Providing information to which PE the OU should failover can also be
   very important. Consider the scenario given in the following figure.

misspelled words:

communication may not be *known* by the peer.

   Providing information to which PE the *PU* should failover can also =
be
   very important. Consider the scenario *presented* in the following =
figure.

Figure 4

Two PE accessing the same PE

Should be:

Two PUs accessing the same PE

2.3.2 Cookies

   Cookies may be sent from the PE to the PU if the PE wants to do this.
   The PU only stores the last received cookie. In  case of a fail over
   it sends this last received cookie to the new PE.=20

some changes:

   Cookies may optionally be sent from the PE to the PU.
   The PU only stores the last received cookie. In  case of fail over
   the PU sends this last received cookie to the new PE.=20

[Editors note] This section has not been updated. The examples will
   be updated after the architecture has been finalized.

Please delete this.

3.1

After figure 8:


   1.  the Signaling Gateway (SG) receives an incoming signaling message
       to be forwarded to the GWC. SG(X)'s ASAP layer would send an ASAP
       request to its "local" NS to request the list of pool elements
       (PE's) of GWC (using (a)). The key used for this query is the
       pool handle of the GWC. The ASAP layer queues the data to be sent
       in local buffers until the NS responds.

Don't use the word "key" for this as it sounds like some security key.  =
Use bit string or some other phrase.

some change:

The bit string used for this query is the
       pool handle of the GWC. The ASAP layer queues the data to be sent =
to the GWC
       in local buffers until the NS responds.


OK, I think that is it for now.

-- maureen=20


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I read this carefully.  Here are my comments.

Non-nits:

2.2.1 Endpoint Name Resolution Protocol

   The name servers use a protocol called Endpoint Name Resolution
   Protocol (ENRP) for communication with each other to make sure that
   all have the same information about the server pools.

I'm concerned that this will spark a lengthy debate about =
synchronization of ENRP databases.  We can't guarantee instantaneous =
updates of the database and a perfectly synchronized name space.  How =
about something like:

   The name servers use a protocol called Endpoint Name Resolution
   Protocol (ENRP) for communication with each other to exchange =
information and updates
   about the server pools.

2.2.2 Aggregate Server Access Protocol


   ASAP in conjunction with ENRP provides a fault tolerant data transfer
   mechanism over IP networks.=20

I'm concerned that this will be interpreted as a general feature with =
some sort of guarantee.  It is only offered by use of specific services =
described in services document.  In other words, this will imply that it =
offers transparent fail-over in all cases which is not true.  Even with =
that, there is no guarantee of uninterrupted service.  It is best =
effort.  I would delete this sentence or talk about services and =
different possibilities.  These are discussed in the services document.

   In addition, ASAP defines each logical communication destination as a
   server pool, providing full transparent support for server-pooling
   and load sharing.

I don't understand this statement.  What is a logical communication =
destination? =20

ASAP is also used by a server to join or leave a server pool.  It
   registers or deregisters itself by communicating with a name server,
   which will normally the home NS. =20

see changes below:

ASAP is also used by a PE to join or leave a server pool.  It
   registers or deregisters itself by communicating with a name server,
   which will normally be the home NS. =20

ASAP allows dynamic system
   scalability, allowing the pool membership to change at any time
   without interruption of the service.

Same concern as above.  This is only offered by use of specific services =
described in services document.  Even with that, there is no guarantee =
of uninterrupted service.  It is best effort.

Nits:

1.1 Overview

This document defines an architecture, for providinge a highly
   available reliable server function in support of some service. The
   way this is achieved is by forming a pool of servers, each of which
   is capable of supporting the desired service, and providing a name
   service that=20

see changes below, misspelled words:

This document defines an architecture, for *providing* a highly
   available reliable server function in support of a service or set of =
services.=20
   This is achieved by forming a pool of servers, each of which
   is capable of supporting the desired service(s), and providing a name
   service that...

2.1 RSerPool Functional Components

Each server pool will be identifiable by a unique name which is
   simply a byte string, called the pool handle.=20

see changes below:

Each server pool is identified by a unique name which is
   simply a byte string, called the pool handle.=20

   o  A protocol field of the IP header specifying the transport layer
      protocol or protocols.

see changes below:

   o  A protocol field specifying the transport layer
      protocol or protocols.

Please note that the RSerPool architecture supports both IPv4 and
   IPv6 addressing. A PE can also support multiple transport layers.

see changes below:

Note that the RSerPool architecture supports both IPv4 and
   IPv6 addressing. A PE can also support multiple transport protocols.

2.2.1

ENRP employs a client-server
   model with which an name server will respond to the name translation
 service requests from endpoint clients running on the same host or
   running on different hosts.

see changes below:

ENRP employs a client-server
   model in which a name server will respond to the name translation
 service requests from endpoint clients.

2.2.3 PU <-> NS Communication

   The PU <-> NS communication is used for doing name queries.=20

see changes below:

   The PU <-> NS communication is used for performing name queries.

2.2.4 PE <-> NS Communication

   The PE <-> NS communication is used for registration and
   deregistration of the PE in one ore more pools and for the

misspelled word:

   The PE <-> NS communication is used for registration and
   deregistration of the PE in one *or* more pools and for the


   o  Multiplexed data and control channel. Both channels are
      transported over one transport connection. This can either be an
      SCTP association, with data and control channel are seperated by
      the PPID, or an TCP connection, with data and control channel
      being handled by a TCP mapping layer.

misspelled word:

   o  Multiplexed data and control channel. Both channels are
      transported over one transport connection. This can either be an
      SCTP association, with data and control channel are *separated* by
      the PPID, or an TCP connection, with data and control channel
      being handled by a TCP mapping layer.


   When a name server boots up a UDP multicast message may be sent out
   for initial detection of other name servers in the operational scope.
   The other name servers send an answer using a unicast UDP message.

Aren't we addressing multicast at a later time?  If so, delete this =
paragraph.  Otherwise, some nits:

      When a name server initializes a UDP multicast message may be =
transmitted
   for initial detection of other name servers in the operational scope.
   The other name servers send a response using a unicast UDP message.

2.3.1

communication may not be know by the peer.

   Providing information to which PE the OU should failover can also be
   very important. Consider the scenario given in the following figure.

misspelled words:

communication may not be *known* by the peer.

   Providing information to which PE the *PU* should failover can also =
be
   very important. Consider the scenario *presented* in the following =
figure.

Figure 4

Two PE accessing the same PE

Should be:

Two PUs accessing the same PE

2.3.2 Cookies

   Cookies may be sent from the PE to the PU if the PE wants to do this.
   The PU only stores the last received cookie. In  case of a fail over
   it sends this last received cookie to the new PE.=20

some changes:

   Cookies may optionally be sent from the PE to the PU.
   The PU only stores the last received cookie. In  case of fail over
   the PU sends this last received cookie to the new PE.=20

[Editors note] This section has not been updated. The examples will
   be updated after the architecture has been finalized.

Please delete this.

3.1

After figure 8:


   1.  the Signaling Gateway (SG) receives an incoming signaling message
       to be forwarded to the GWC. SG(X)'s ASAP layer would send an ASAP
       request to its "local" NS to request the list of pool elements
       (PE's) of GWC (using (a)). The key used for this query is the
       pool handle of the GWC. The ASAP layer queues the data to be sent
       in local buffers until the NS responds.

Don't use the word "key" for this as it sounds like some security key.  =
Use bit string or some other phrase.

some change:

The bit string used for this query is the
       pool handle of the GWC. The ASAP layer queues the data to be sent =
to the GWC
       in local buffers until the NS responds.


OK, I think that is it for now.

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I have mostly nits which are optional.  Non-nits are first.

Non-nits:

2.3.3 Summary of SLP Issues

4th paragraph

SLP security makes no attempt to address the confidentiality of data
   transmitted between SLP agents. To properly address this concern, SLP
   agents would need to establish secure communication with each other.
   This would be achieved through the use of IPSec Encapsulating
   Security Payload.

I know from David Black that they changed some of the security in SLP to =
accommodate IP Storage.  So I'm not sure if this is still an issue.  I =
can ask David what they changed or we can delete this, your choice.  =
This single point does not change the our conclusion, however.

3.2.2 Technical Issues

Most of the extended features of ASAP [6] and ENRP [7] are not met by
   a device employing L4 switching techniques.

The use of the word "extended" has potential for confusion.  They might =
think that ASAP and ENRP have a set of extensions that L4 switches don't =
support.  In fact, ASAP and ENRP don't have any extensions defined right =
now.  I have two suggestions: 1) delete the word extended and 2) add to =
the end of the sentence (see comparison table in section 5) OR you could =
list some of the requirements that L4 switches don't meet.

4.2 ENRP

   Another important aspect of ENRP is that itself is fully distributed
   and replicated. This is to avoid the name service itself becoming a
   single point of failure in the system.

This wording has the potential for the reader erroneously concluding =
that ENRP servers have perfectly synchronized databases.  Also "fully =
distributed" might cause confusion as it leaves out the operational =
scope which is technically what ENRP is limited to.

How about this excellent wording taken directly from the ENRP internet =
draft abstract.  Then put your last sentence at the end.:

Within the operational
   scope of Rserpool, ENRP defines the procedures and message formats of
   a distributed, fault-tolerant registry service for storing,
   bookkeeping, retrieving, and distributing pool operation and
   membership information.  This is to avoid the name service itself =
becoming a
   single point of failure in the system.

Nits:

   Name Server: Entity which the responsible for managing and
      maintaining the name space within the RSERPOOL operation scope.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

   Name Server: Entity which *is* responsible for managing and
      maintaining the name space within the RSERPOOL operation scope.

2.2

   One requirement to any solution proposed by RSERPOOL would be to
  =20
change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

   One requirement *of* any solution proposed by RSERPOOL would be to
  =20

2.2.1

   These requirements are related to DNS.

confusing.  How about:

   These requirements are discussed below in relation to DNS.

2.2.2.6

Without significant extensions, the current DNS would have difficulty
   to achieve this type of name mapping.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

Without significant extensions, the current DNS would have difficulty
   *achieving* this type of name mapping.

2.2.2.7

These models basically define how a PE is going to
   behave when another PE=20

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

These models basically define how a PE *behaves* when another PE

3.1 Introduction

Since these technologies
   are highly proprietary, it is difficult to detail these techniques in
   a thorough manner.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

Since these technologies
   are highly proprietary, it is difficult to *discuss* these techniques =
in
   a thorough manner.=20

4.1 ASAP

And ASAP
   allows extensions to be made in the future to accommodate new load

delete the And....

ASAP
   allows extensions to be made in the future to accommodate new load


   ASAP supports the "keepalive" monitoring of PEs by the name server
   and session failover, in which a set of application messages are
   defined as a "session" and ASAP provides best-effort transmission of
   all the messages in the "session" to the same PE in the destination
   pool, and failover the remaining message in the "session" to the same
   alternate PE if the first PE fails.

Failover is not provided for all classes of service.  Need to fix one =
word as well.  How about:

   and for some classes of service can provide failover *for* the =
remaining message in the "session" to *an*
   alternate PE if the first PE fails.

4.2 ENRP

ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
   can be added and existing servers be removed as needed. This feature
   can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
   often found requirement in many mission critical applications.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
   can be added and existing servers *can* be removed as needed. This =
feature
   can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
   *common* requirement *for* many mission critical applications.

I think this is it.  Thanks.  =20

-- maureen

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I have mostly nits which are optional.  Non-nits are first.

Non-nits:

2.3.3 Summary of SLP Issues

4th paragraph

SLP security makes no attempt to address the confidentiality of data
   transmitted between SLP agents. To properly address this concern, SLP
   agents would need to establish secure communication with each other.
   This would be achieved through the use of IPSec Encapsulating
   Security Payload.

I know from David Black that they changed some of the security in SLP to =
accommodate IP Storage.  So I'm not sure if this is still an issue.  I =
can ask David what they changed or we can delete this, your choice.  =
This single point does not change the our conclusion, however.

3.2.2 Technical Issues

Most of the extended features of ASAP [6] and ENRP [7] are not met by
   a device employing L4 switching techniques.

The use of the word "extended" has potential for confusion.  They might =
think that ASAP and ENRP have a set of extensions that L4 switches don't =
support.  In fact, ASAP and ENRP don't have any extensions defined right =
now.  I have two suggestions: 1) delete the word extended and 2) add to =
the end of the sentence (see comparison table in section 5) OR you could =
list some of the requirements that L4 switches don't meet.

4.2 ENRP

   Another important aspect of ENRP is that itself is fully distributed
   and replicated. This is to avoid the name service itself becoming a
   single point of failure in the system.

This wording has the potential for the reader erroneously concluding =
that ENRP servers have perfectly synchronized databases.  Also "fully =
distributed" might cause confusion as it leaves out the operational =
scope which is technically what ENRP is limited to.

How about this excellent wording taken directly from the ENRP internet =
draft abstract.  Then put your last sentence at the end.:

Within the operational
   scope of Rserpool, ENRP defines the procedures and message formats of
   a distributed, fault-tolerant registry service for storing,
   bookkeeping, retrieving, and distributing pool operation and
   membership information.  This is to avoid the name service itself =
becoming a
   single point of failure in the system.

Nits:

   Name Server: Entity which the responsible for managing and
      maintaining the name space within the RSERPOOL operation scope.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

   Name Server: Entity which *is* responsible for managing and
      maintaining the name space within the RSERPOOL operation scope.

2.2

   One requirement to any solution proposed by RSERPOOL would be to
  =20
change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

   One requirement *of* any solution proposed by RSERPOOL would be to
  =20

2.2.1

   These requirements are related to DNS.

confusing.  How about:

   These requirements are discussed below in relation to DNS.

2.2.2.6

Without significant extensions, the current DNS would have difficulty
   to achieve this type of name mapping.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

Without significant extensions, the current DNS would have difficulty
   *achieving* this type of name mapping.

2.2.2.7

These models basically define how a PE is going to
   behave when another PE=20

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

These models basically define how a PE *behaves* when another PE

3.1 Introduction

Since these technologies
   are highly proprietary, it is difficult to detail these techniques in
   a thorough manner.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

Since these technologies
   are highly proprietary, it is difficult to *discuss* these techniques =
in
   a thorough manner.=20

4.1 ASAP

And ASAP
   allows extensions to be made in the future to accommodate new load

delete the And....

ASAP
   allows extensions to be made in the future to accommodate new load


   ASAP supports the "keepalive" monitoring of PEs by the name server
   and session failover, in which a set of application messages are
   defined as a "session" and ASAP provides best-effort transmission of
   all the messages in the "session" to the same PE in the destination
   pool, and failover the remaining message in the "session" to the same
   alternate PE if the first PE fails.

Failover is not provided for all classes of service.  Need to fix one =
word as well.  How about:

   and for some classes of service can provide failover *for* the =
remaining message in the "session" to *an*
   alternate PE if the first PE fails.

4.2 ENRP

ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
   can be added and existing servers be removed as needed. This feature
   can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
   often found requirement in many mission critical applications.

change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):

ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
   can be added and existing servers *can* be removed as needed. This =
feature
   can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
   *common* requirement *for* many mission critical applications.

I think this is it.  Thanks.  =20

-- maureen

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Hi Maureen,

I think that we should also add a subsection to the DNS section on the
differences between the DNS and RSERPOOL security models.  I'll volunteer to
do this.  Other comments related to the sections I wrote are below.  I do,
however, agree with the rest of your nits and non-nits.

John, if you'd like me to make the edits to the draft, let me know.  I
should have the cycles to do so.
 
Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:
> I have mostly nits which are optional.  Non-nits are first.
> 
> Non-nits:
> 

[snip]
    
> 
> 3.2.2 Technical Issues
> 
> Most of the extended features of ASAP [6] and ENRP [7] are not met by
>    a device employing L4 switching techniques.
> 
> The use of the word "extended" has potential for confusion.  They
> might think that ASAP and ENRP have a set of extensions that L4
> switches don't support.  In fact, ASAP and ENRP don't have any
> extensions defined right now.  I have two suggestions: 1) delete the
> word extended and 2) add to the end of the sentence (see comparison
> table in section 5) OR you could list some of the requirements that
> L4 switches don't meet.      
> 

I think that deleting the word and referncing the table is the way to go.  I
was trying to say that only a subset of the ASAP and ENRP features could be
met by L4 switching.  Your wording is better.

> 
> 3.1 Introduction
> 
> Since these technologies
>    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to detail these techniques
>    in a thorough manner.
> 
> change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):
> 
> Since these technologies
>    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to *discuss* these
>    techniques in a thorough manner.
> 

[snip]

Agreed.

[snip]

> 
> I think this is it.  Thanks.
> 
> -- maureen
> 

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Hi Maureen,

I think that we should also add a subsection to the DNS section on the
differences between the DNS and RSERPOOL security models.  I'll volunteer to
do this.  Other comments related to the sections I wrote are below.  I do,
however, agree with the rest of your nits and non-nits.

John, if you'd like me to make the edits to the draft, let me know.  I
should have the cycles to do so.
 
Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:
> I have mostly nits which are optional.  Non-nits are first.
> 
> Non-nits:
> 

[snip]
    
> 
> 3.2.2 Technical Issues
> 
> Most of the extended features of ASAP [6] and ENRP [7] are not met by
>    a device employing L4 switching techniques.
> 
> The use of the word "extended" has potential for confusion.  They
> might think that ASAP and ENRP have a set of extensions that L4
> switches don't support.  In fact, ASAP and ENRP don't have any
> extensions defined right now.  I have two suggestions: 1) delete the
> word extended and 2) add to the end of the sentence (see comparison
> table in section 5) OR you could list some of the requirements that
> L4 switches don't meet.      
> 

I think that deleting the word and referncing the table is the way to go.  I
was trying to say that only a subset of the ASAP and ENRP features could be
met by L4 switching.  Your wording is better.

> 
> 3.1 Introduction
> 
> Since these technologies
>    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to detail these techniques
>    in a thorough manner.
> 
> change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):
> 
> Since these technologies
>    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to *discuss* these
>    techniques in a thorough manner.
> 

[snip]

Agreed.

[snip]

> 
> I think this is it.  Thanks.
> 
> -- maureen
> 

Aron

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Hi Aron,

You have the XML source, so feel free to do so.

thanks,
John

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> Sent: 21 August, 2003 19:51
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> Subject: RE: [Rserpool] Comments on the comparison document
>=20
>=20
> Hi Maureen,
>=20
> I think that we should also add a subsection to the DNS section on the
> differences between the DNS and RSERPOOL security models. =20
> I'll volunteer to
> do this.  Other comments related to the sections I wrote are=20
> below.  I do,
> however, agree with the rest of your nits and non-nits.
>=20
> John, if you'd like me to make the edits to the draft, let me know.  I
> should have the cycles to do so.
> =20
> Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:
> > I have mostly nits which are optional.  Non-nits are first.
> >=20
> > Non-nits:
> >=20
>=20
> [snip]
>    =20
> >=20
> > 3.2.2 Technical Issues
> >=20
> > Most of the extended features of ASAP [6] and ENRP [7] are=20
> not met by
> >    a device employing L4 switching techniques.
> >=20
> > The use of the word "extended" has potential for confusion.  They
> > might think that ASAP and ENRP have a set of extensions that L4
> > switches don't support.  In fact, ASAP and ENRP don't have any
> > extensions defined right now.  I have two suggestions: 1) delete the
> > word extended and 2) add to the end of the sentence (see comparison
> > table in section 5) OR you could list some of the requirements that
> > L4 switches don't meet.     =20
> >=20
>=20
> I think that deleting the word and referncing the table is=20
> the way to go.  I
> was trying to say that only a subset of the ASAP and ENRP=20
> features could be
> met by L4 switching.  Your wording is better.
>=20
> >=20
> > 3.1 Introduction
> >=20
> > Since these technologies
> >    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to detail these=20
> techniques
> >    in a thorough manner.
> >=20
> > change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):
> >=20
> > Since these technologies
> >    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to *discuss* these
> >    techniques in a thorough manner.
> >=20
>=20
> [snip]
>=20
> Agreed.
>=20
> [snip]
>=20
> >=20
> > I think this is it.  Thanks.
> >=20
> > -- maureen
> >=20
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Hi Aron,

You have the XML source, so feel free to do so.

thanks,
John

> -----Original Message-----
> From: ext Silverton Aron-C1710C [mailto:Aron.J.Silverton@motorola.com]
> Sent: 21 August, 2003 19:51
> To: 'rserpool@ietf.org'
> Cc: Stillman Maureen (NVO-NIC/Ithaca)
> Subject: RE: [Rserpool] Comments on the comparison document
>=20
>=20
> Hi Maureen,
>=20
> I think that we should also add a subsection to the DNS section on the
> differences between the DNS and RSERPOOL security models. =20
> I'll volunteer to
> do this.  Other comments related to the sections I wrote are=20
> below.  I do,
> however, agree with the rest of your nits and non-nits.
>=20
> John, if you'd like me to make the edits to the draft, let me know.  I
> should have the cycles to do so.
> =20
> Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:
> > I have mostly nits which are optional.  Non-nits are first.
> >=20
> > Non-nits:
> >=20
>=20
> [snip]
>    =20
> >=20
> > 3.2.2 Technical Issues
> >=20
> > Most of the extended features of ASAP [6] and ENRP [7] are=20
> not met by
> >    a device employing L4 switching techniques.
> >=20
> > The use of the word "extended" has potential for confusion.  They
> > might think that ASAP and ENRP have a set of extensions that L4
> > switches don't support.  In fact, ASAP and ENRP don't have any
> > extensions defined right now.  I have two suggestions: 1) delete the
> > word extended and 2) add to the end of the sentence (see comparison
> > table in section 5) OR you could list some of the requirements that
> > L4 switches don't meet.     =20
> >=20
>=20
> I think that deleting the word and referncing the table is=20
> the way to go.  I
> was trying to say that only a subset of the ASAP and ENRP=20
> features could be
> met by L4 switching.  Your wording is better.
>=20
> >=20
> > 3.1 Introduction
> >=20
> > Since these technologies
> >    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to detail these=20
> techniques
> >    in a thorough manner.
> >=20
> > change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):
> >=20
> > Since these technologies
> >    are highly proprietary, it is difficult to *discuss* these
> >    techniques in a thorough manner.
> >=20
>=20
> [snip]
>=20
> Agreed.
>=20
> [snip]
>=20
> >=20
> > I think this is it.  Thanks.
> >=20
> > -- maureen
> >=20
>=20
> Aron
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Hi, Maureen,

Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:

...
> 4.2 ENRP
> 
>    Another important aspect of ENRP is that itself is fully distributed
>    and replicated. This is to avoid the name service itself becoming a
>    single point of failure in the system.
> 
> This wording has the potential for the reader erroneously concluding that ENRP servers have perfectly synchronized databases.  Also "fully distributed" might cause confusion as it leaves out the operational scope which is technically what ENRP is limited to.
> 
> How about this excellent wording taken directly from the ENRP internet draft abstract.  Then put your last sentence at the end.:
> 
> Within the operational
>    scope of Rserpool, ENRP defines the procedures and message formats of
>    a distributed, fault-tolerant registry service for storing,
>    bookkeeping, retrieving, and distributing pool operation and
>    membership information.  This is to avoid the name service itself becoming a
>    single point of failure in the system.

Agreed. 

....
>    ASAP supports the "keepalive" monitoring of PEs by the name server
>    and session failover, in which a set of application messages are
>    defined as a "session" and ASAP provides best-effort transmission of
>    all the messages in the "session" to the same PE in the destination
>    pool, and failover the remaining message in the "session" to the same
>    alternate PE if the first PE fails.
> 
> Failover is not provided for all classes of service.  Need to fix one word as well.  How about:
> 
>    and for some classes of service can provide failover *for* the remaining 
>    message in the "session" to *an* alternate PE if the first PE fails.

agreed.

> 
> 4.2 ENRP
> 
> ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
>    can be added and existing servers be removed as needed. This feature
>    can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
>    often found requirement in many mission critical applications.
> 
> change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):
> 
> ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
>    can be added and existing servers *can* be removed as needed. This feature
>    can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
>    *common* requirement *for* many mission critical applications.
> 

agreed.

> I think this is it.  Thanks.

Thanks for the comments. Aron, please make these changes as well when
you update the draft.

regards,
-Qiaobing

> 
> -- maureen
> 
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Hi, Maureen,

Maureen.Stillman@nokia.com wrote:

...
> 4.2 ENRP
> 
>    Another important aspect of ENRP is that itself is fully distributed
>    and replicated. This is to avoid the name service itself becoming a
>    single point of failure in the system.
> 
> This wording has the potential for the reader erroneously concluding that ENRP servers have perfectly synchronized databases.  Also "fully distributed" might cause confusion as it leaves out the operational scope which is technically what ENRP is limited to.
> 
> How about this excellent wording taken directly from the ENRP internet draft abstract.  Then put your last sentence at the end.:
> 
> Within the operational
>    scope of Rserpool, ENRP defines the procedures and message formats of
>    a distributed, fault-tolerant registry service for storing,
>    bookkeeping, retrieving, and distributing pool operation and
>    membership information.  This is to avoid the name service itself becoming a
>    single point of failure in the system.

Agreed. 

....
>    ASAP supports the "keepalive" monitoring of PEs by the name server
>    and session failover, in which a set of application messages are
>    defined as a "session" and ASAP provides best-effort transmission of
>    all the messages in the "session" to the same PE in the destination
>    pool, and failover the remaining message in the "session" to the same
>    alternate PE if the first PE fails.
> 
> Failover is not provided for all classes of service.  Need to fix one word as well.  How about:
> 
>    and for some classes of service can provide failover *for* the remaining 
>    message in the "session" to *an* alternate PE if the first PE fails.

agreed.

> 
> 4.2 ENRP
> 
> ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
>    can be added and existing servers be removed as needed. This feature
>    can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
>    often found requirement in many mission critical applications.
> 
> change to (* to help you find the word(s) to change):
> 
> ENRP itself is dynamically scalable, meaning that new ENRP servers
>    can be added and existing servers *can* be removed as needed. This feature
>    can be used to achieve zero planned downtime upgrade of a system - an
>    *common* requirement *for* many mission critical applications.
> 

agreed.

> I think this is it.  Thanks.

Thanks for the comments. Aron, please make these changes as well when
you update the draft.

regards,
-Qiaobing

> 
> -- maureen
> 
> _______________________________________________
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> rserpool@ietf.org
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This draft is a work item of the Reliable Server Pooling Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: Threats Introduced by Rserpool and Requirements for 
                          Security in response to Threats
	Author(s)	: M. Stillman et al.
	Filename	: draft-ietf-rserpool-threats-01.txt
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Hi Folks,

Maureen and I would like to start WG Last Call on the new version of the threats
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Last Call will start today and and end on Monday, September 8th (I know it's over 
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Hi Folks,

Maureen and I would like to start WG Last Call on the new version of the threats
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now been posted on the server.  This would address comments on the architecture
draft that a security section is needed - the security section would then reference
the threats assessment for detailed discussion of security considerations.

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This draft is a work item of the Reliable Server Pooling Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: Threats Introduced by Rserpool and Requirements for 
                          Security in response to Threats
	Author(s)	: M. Stillman et al.
	Filename	: draft-ietf-rserpool-threats-01.txt
	Pages		: 15
	Date		: 2003-8-25
	
Rserpool is an architecture and protocols for the management and
access to server pools supporting highly reliable applications
and for client access mechanisms to a server pool. This Internet
draft describes security threats to the Rserpool architecture and
presents requirements for security to thwart these threats.

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