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Based on a review of the subject document, please consider the following co=
mments:


1)  Section 2.6 states that "a CFM MEP resides in the "802.1Q Port VLAN Pro=
cessing" block" of Figure 2.  I was not able to find a block with that titl=
e in Figure 2.



2)  Section 2.6 states that "A TRILL OAM solution that conforms to this fra=
mework" MAY support UP MEP's and MAY support DOWN MEP's on TRILL physical p=
orts.  I was unclear about the implications of these statements.  Does that=
 imply that a solution could be acceptable even though it does not support =
either UP or DOWN MEP's?



3)  Section 3.1 at the top of Page 16 states, "The TRILL Header is as speci=
fied in [RFC6325]".  Should this paragraph include some discussion or refer=
ence to the TRILL Header as specified in the Fine Grained Labeling (FGL) do=
cument, especially since the FGL document "changes the description of the T=
RILL Header" in its Section 2.2?



4)  Section 3.3 states, "The use of [802.1Q] CFM encoding format for the OA=
M Message channel is one possible choice."  Given the amount of Y.1731 term=
inology used in this document, it might be helpful to at least make some st=
atement about the possibility of using Y.1731 formatting.  I understand tha=
t the formats are compatible, but there are some differences.



5)  Section 3.3 references [TRILL-OAM] which is listed as "draft-tissa-tril=
l-8021ag".  This document is expired.  Has it been replaced by "draft-tissa=
-trill-oam-fm-01.txt"?



6)  Section 3.4 suggests "using a reserved MAC address as the inner MAC SA"=
 to identify a TRILL OAM packet.  It is unclear to me how this is more back=
wards compatible than using previously unused fields or bits in the TRILL H=
eader as suggested in the preceding paragraph.  Is not the inner MAC SA use=
d in some configurations for hashing at hops with equal-cost paths?



7)  Section 4.1.2.2 describes Reverse Defect Indication (RDI).  Given that =
Section 4.1.1 states that fault detection must be able to exercise each equ=
al-cost path individually, Section 4.1.2.2 should probably state that RDI m=
ust be able to identify on which equal-cost path the failure was detected.



8)  Section 4.2.1 discusses carrying "test patterns as defined in [RFC2544]=
."  RFC 2544 is a substantial document but it does not contain the word "pa=
ttern".  Is this a reference to the frame formats in Appendix C or to some =
other section of the RFC?



9)  Section 4.2.1.2 discusses an un-pruned tree and a campus wide diagnosti=
c VLAN. A campus wide diagnostic FGL is probably also required.



10) Section 4.2.2 discusses fault isolation.  It would be helpful to includ=
e a statement that fault isolation has to work for both known unicast and m=
ulti-destination packets.

As a general comment, Section 1.2 states that the document "leverages conce=
pts and draws upon elements defined and/or used" in multiple existing OAM s=
tandards including 802.1ag CFM and Y.1731.  The document contains a mixture=
 of terms from these two standards.  For example, the Y.1731 term Maintenan=
ce Entity Group (MEG) is used as opposed to the 802.1ag term Maintenance As=
sociation (MA).  However, the 802.1ag term Maintenance Point (MP) is used a=
s opposed to the Y.1731 term Maintenance Entity (ME).  It does not appear t=
o affect the technical content but it is unclear why the terminology is mix=
ed.  Some statement about the method used to determine which terms to use m=
ight be helpful.

Please let me know if you would like to discuss any of these items further.

Cheers,
Olen

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nk=3Dpurple><div class=3DWordSection1><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'f=
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class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"=
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<span style=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp; </span></span></span><!=
[endif]><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Section =
2.6 states that &#8220;a CFM MEP resides in the &quot;802.1Q Port VLAN Proc=
essing&quot; block&#8221; of Figure 2. &nbsp;I was not able to find a block=
 with that title in Figure 2.</span><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-fa=
mily:"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph><span=
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pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp; </span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D'=
font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Section 2.6 states that &#8220;=
A TRILL OAM solution that conforms to this framework&#8221; MAY support UP =
MEP&#8217;s and MAY support DOWN MEP&#8217;s on TRILL physical ports.&nbsp;=
 I was unclear about the implications of these statements.&nbsp; Does that =
imply that a solution could be acceptable even though it does not support e=
ither UP or DOWN MEP&#8217;s?&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoLis=
tParagraph><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p>=
&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'text-indent:-.2=
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><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Section 3.1 at =
the top of Page 16 states, &#8220;</span><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:"Courier New"'>The TRILL Header is as specified in [RFC6325]&#822=
1;.&nbsp; Should this paragraph include some discussion or reference to the=
 TRILL Header as specified in the Fine Grained Labeling (FGL) document, esp=
ecially since the FGL document &#8220;changes the description of the TRILL =
Header&#8221; in its Section 2.2?</span><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;fon=
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=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Section 3.3 states, &#8220;=
The use of [802.1Q] CFM encoding format for the OAM Message channel is one =
possible choice.&#8221;&nbsp; Given the amount of Y.1731 terminology used i=
n this document, it might be helpful to at least make some statement about =
the possibility of using Y.1731 formatting.&nbsp; I understand that the for=
mats are compatible, but there are some differences.&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-fami=
ly:"Courier New"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph s=
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</span></span><![endif]><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courie=
r New"'>Section 3.3 references [TRILL-OAM] which is listed as </span><span =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>&#8220;draft-tissa-tri=
ll-8021ag&#8221;.&nbsp; This document is expired.&nbsp; Has it been replace=
d by &#8220;draft-tissa-trill-oam-fm-01.txt&#8221;?</span><span style=3D'fo=
nt-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3D=
MsoListParagraph><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'=
><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'text-inde=
nt:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D'font=
-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>6)<=
span style=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp; </span></span></span><![=
endif]><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Section 3=
.4 suggests &#8220;using a reserved MAC address as the inner MAC SA&#8221; =
to identify a TRILL OAM packet.&nbsp; It is unclear to me how this is more =
backwards compatible than using previously unused fields or bits in the TRI=
LL Header as suggested in the preceding paragraph.&nbsp; Is not the inner M=
AC SA used in some configurations for hashing at hops with equal-cost paths=
?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph><span style=3D'font-size=
:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DM=
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span style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>7)<span style=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman=
"'>&nbsp; </span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:"Courier New"'>Section 4.1.2.2 describes Reverse Defect Indicatio=
n (RDI).&nbsp; Given that Section 4.1.1 states that fault detection must be=
 able to exercise each equal-cost path individually, Section 4.1.2.2 should=
 probably state that RDI must be able to identify on which equal-cost path =
the failure was detected.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph>=
<span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p=
></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'text-indent:-.25in;mso-lis=
t:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font=
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t:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp; </span></span></span><![endif]><span styl=
e=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Section 4.2.1 discusses ca=
rrying &#8220;test patterns as defined in [RFC2544].&#8221;&nbsp; RFC 2544 =
is a substantial document but it does not contain the word &#8220;pattern&#=
8221;.&nbsp; Is this a reference to the frame formats in Appendix C or to s=
ome other section of the RFC?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagr=
aph><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p>&nbsp;<=
/o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'text-indent:-.25in;mso=
-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;=
font-family:"Courier New"'><span style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>9)<span style=3D=
'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp; </span></span></span><![endif]><span =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Section 4.2.1.2 discus=
ses an un-pruned tree and a campus wide diagnostic VLAN. A campus wide diag=
nostic FGL is probably also required.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoLi=
stParagraph><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p=
>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'text-indent:-.=
25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D'font-size=
:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>10)</spa=
n></span><![endif]><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New=
"'> Section 4.2.2 discusses fault isolation.&nbsp; It would be helpful to i=
nclude a statement that fault isolation has to work for both known unicast =
and multi-destination packets.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><s=
pan style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p><=
/span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=
"Courier New"'>As a general comment, Section 1.2 states that the document <=
/span><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>&#8220;lev=
erages concepts and draws upon elements defined and/or used&#8221; in multi=
ple existing OAM standards including 802.1ag CFM and Y.1731.&nbsp; The docu=
ment contains a mixture of terms from these two standards.&nbsp; For exampl=
e, the Y.1731 term Maintenance Entity Group (MEG) is used as opposed to the=
 802.1ag term Maintenance Association (MA).&nbsp; However, the 802.1ag term=
 Maintenance Point (MP) is used as opposed to the Y.1731 term Maintenance E=
ntity (ME).&nbsp; It does not appear to affect the technical content but it=
 is unclear why the terminology is mixed.&nbsp; Some statement about the me=
thod used to determine which terms to use might be helpful.</span><span sty=
le=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"=
'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size=
:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Please let me know if you would like to =
discuss any of these items further.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNorm=
al><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-fa=
mily:"Courier New"'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span=
 style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Olen<o:p></o:p></span=
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Hi Gayle,

On Mon, Apr 1, 2013 at 1:13 AM, gayle noble <windy_1@skyhighway.com> wrote:
>  In reading some of the drafts it occurred to me that something should be
> specified as to how one should handle OAM messages that might be sent from
> outside the TRILL campus in the draft that talks about this.
>
> Currently in draft draft-ietf-trill-oam-framework-01.txt, in the Security
> Considerations Section it says:
> "Optionally authenticate communicating endpoints (MEPs and MIPs)"
>
> To be real clear I think it should read something like::
>
> "Optionally authenticate at communicating endpoints (MEPs and MIPs)
> that an OAM message has originated at a communicating endpoint."

Thanks for the comment...
Maybe it should even say "... has originated at an appropriate
communicating endpoint."

> Perhaps even add in that if the OAM message fails authentication, the switch
> should log the attempt and notify the sys admin. Or maybe that is obvious?

I don't think the IETF is complete consistent on this point but
generally IETF specifications concentrate on the bits on the wire and
the state machines at the end points so they frequently omit saying
anything explicit about logging...

Thanks,
Donald
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> gayle

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On 3/22/13 8:06 AM, Donald Eastlake wrote:
>> >3a) First, if you are using both VL-Edges and FGL-edges, what is the
>> >interoperabilty model intended to be? If RB1 is VL-only and supports
>> >VLAN 1, but RB3 is an FGL-edge and also accepts traffic on VLAN 1,
>> >what is supposed to happen? Is traffic supposed to be relayed between
>> >those two VLANs? Why or why not?
 >
> I don't quite understand your questions and, like almost everything,
> it depends on whether you are doing 0, 1, or 2 and your topology, at
> least whether your FGL-safe TRILL switches are all contiguous, as they
> should be, or your campus is misconfigured to have disjoint FGL
> islands.

I think Thomas question is not so much about the transit behavior, but 
about the semantics of a VLAN vs. a FGL at the edge.

FWIW VLAN 1 is a bad example, because it special from 802.1's 
perspective. I'll use VLAN 100 below aka VLAN 0x64 (in hex).

When RB1 receives a native packet with VLAN 100 (or a co-located bridge 
tags an untagged from a port configured to tag with VLAN 100), then this 
packet will be encapsulated by TRILL with an inner VLAN 100.

If the port on RB3 (recall, FGL is configured per port at the edge) has 
been configured as a VL port, then the same thing happens on RB3 as on RB1.

But if the port on RB3 has been configured as FGL, then RB3 will map 
VLAN 100 to some FGL. That FGL value could be 0x000064 (i.e., a FGL 
label with the value of 100) or it could be 0x123456.
In neither of those cases will that be equivalent to a packet with VL 
0x064. The VL space is disjoint from the FGL space.

All of the above is orthogonal to how the transit works - whether or not 
there are some VL RBridges or only FGL-safe RBridges in the network.

    Erik


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On 3/20/13 2:19 PM, Thomas Narten wrote:

 > The above says to me that you now have a TRILL campus where R1 does
 > process FGL frames and R2 does not. But doesn't that contradict the
 > model:
 >
 >> 1) VL-only (today's deployment), then
 >> 2) A mixture of VL and FGL-safe, until
 >> 3) EVERYone upgraded to FGL-safe, then
 >> 4) FGL-links can be introduced.

FWIW Your use of "FGL-link" is not consistent with the definition in the 
document.
The document defines it as "A link where all of the attached TRILL 
switches are FGL."

I think what you refer to in #4 is what the document calls FGL-edge.

 > Or maybe we are having a violent agreement? if we are at step 2)
 > above, then isn't the entire campus operating in "VL mode"? I.e., at
 > step 2, no one is sending/receiving/processing FGL frames. (Right?)
 >
 > It's not until step 3/4 that you see *any* FGL frames being used. And
 > for that, you can't have *any* RBs still operating only in VL mode -
 > they *all* have to support FGL.

While the above 1-4 is a reasonable way to deploy FGL, the protocol 
mechanisms must be robust against there (perhaps accidentally) being VL 
RBridges when FGL-edges are in use; whether that is because not all was 
upgraded to FGL-safe, or after everything is FGL-safe someone (perhaps 
accidentally) connects one or more VL RBridges to the network.

That is why we have the rules about safety - not forwarding a FGL frame 
to a VL RBridge.

Regards,
    Erik




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Hi,

Here are my comments on draft-ietf-trill-oam-framework-01.txt

I have divided them in Technical and Editorial.=20


Technical

T1. The references are broken in many ways. Many references in the text are=
 not included in the References sections - runing id-nits shows this immedi=
ately. Listed references point to documents that do not exist [TRILL-OAM], =
[TRILL-IP].=20

T2. I have mixed feelings about the usage of RFC 2119 capitalized keywords =
in this document. My preference would be to drop them completely, especiall=
y as the document is targeting Informational status. If they stay, we need =
to carefully review the usage, right now it's quite inconsistent.=20

T3. The document does not include a section on operational and manageabilit=
y considerations. I believe that this is necessary, and this section should=
 include as a minimum:=20
- what parameters need to be configured on Rbridges in order to activate TR=
ILL OAM - activation of specific OAM functions, periodicity of OAM messages=
, activation of synthetic traffic (periodic or on demand)
- how are these parameters configured? Are there recommended default values=
?=20
- how are results of Performance Management used or retrieved?

T4. Several terms are used according to the terminology defined in RFC 6905=
 - Section, Flow, Connectivity, Continuity Indication, etc. I suggest to me=
ntion this in Section 1.2

T5. Are the references to L2VPN and MPLS-TP (and the respective [RFC6136] a=
nd [RFC6371]) in Section 1.2 needed at all? I do not see these technologies=
 mentioned in any other part of the document, and if there is no relevant r=
elationship with the OAM functions on these layers I would suggest to drop =
these.=20

T6. In 2.4 we have an example why using 2119 capitalized keywords is proble=
matic:

> When considering multi-domain scenarios, the following
   rules must be followed: TRILL OAM domains MUST NOT overlap, but MUST
   either be disjoint or nest to form a hierarchy (i.e. a higher
   Maintenance Domain MAY completely engulf a lower Domain).

If I was to chose, I would prefer not to use capitalization, or use capital=
ization only for the first 'must' which is not capitalized in the text. 'MU=
ST either ...' is a strange combination. One may argue that nesting is a fo=
rm of overlapping, and actually 'MUST not overlap' is should rather be 'MUS=
T not partially intersect'.=20

T.7 In Section 3.1:=20

> Additionally
   methods must be provided to prevent OAM packets from being
   transmitted out as native frames.

If capitalized RFC 2119 keywords are to be kept, this 'must' must be a 'MUS=
T' (because of the critical impact on the bits on wire)=20

T.8 In section 3.2:=20

>  When running OAM functions over Test Flows, the TRILL OAM should
   provide a mechanism for discovering the flow entropy parameters by
   querying the RBridges dynamically.

I am wondering why this is a 'should' and not a 'must'. Are there any excep=
tion cases?=20

T.9 Section 3.4:=20

>  RBridges must be able to identify OAM messages that are destined to
   them, either individually or as a group, so as to properly process
   those messages.=20

OK - so a method must be in place.=20

   It may be possible to use a combination of one of the unused fields
   or bits in the TRILL Header and the OAM EtherType to identify TRILL
   OAM messages.=20

' one of the unused fields or bits in the TRILL Header' - which ones? Are w=
e talking about an update to RFC 6395? Where is this defined?=20

Is the 'and' between the TRILL header combinations and the OAM EtherType re=
ally an 'and' or rather an 'or'? 'OAM EtherType' is rather 'TRILL OAM Ether=
Type'?=20

   [RFC6325] does not specify any method of identifying OAM messages.
   Hence, for backwards compatibility reasons, TRILL OAM solutions must
   provide methods to identify OAM messages through the use of well-
   known patterns in the Flow Entropy field; for e.g., by using a
   reserved MAC address as the inner MAC SA.

Is this an alternate method to the ones described in the previous paragraph=
? Then, the 'must' is probably rather a 'may' or should'. What ' reserved M=
AC address' are we talking about? Is this something that we should ask from=
 the IEEE RAC? Where is this specified?=20

T.10 Section 4.1.1 - What does 'Period mis-configuration' mean? Is this abo=
ut the periodicity of the OAM messages? If so this defect is about OAM conf=
iguration, not about continuity check. If it's something different, please =
explain or provide a reference.=20

T.11 Section 4.2:=20

>  On-demand fault management functions are initiated manually by the
   network operator and continue for a time bound period.

The last part of the statement is not always true, as some fault management=
 functions may be one-time actions or tests. =20

T.12 Section 5. - Performance Management - I am not thrilled about this sec=
tion at all. Note that RFC 6905 talks about Performance Monitoring (not Man=
agement) and it's not a mandatory function. Terminology aside, I dislike ge=
nerating synthetic traffic in order to measure packet loss - how much traff=
ic? Limiting this seems mandatory. Who compares what was sent with what was=
 received?  5.2 talks about hardware-based time-stamping to measure Packet =
Delay. This implies some kind of clocks synchronization between RBridges. W=
hat are the requirements?=20

T.13 The Security Considerations section should be more explicit on what 'e=
xploitation of the OAM message channel' means. Specifically the threats rel=
ated to overloading the network and the Rbridges with OAM messages should b=
e mentioned, as well as the impact of interrupting the OAM services.=20

=20

Editorial

E1. In Section 1:=20

>  Some
   characteristics of a TRILL network that are different from Ethernet
   bridging ...

s/Ethernet bridging/IEEE 802.1 bridging/

E2. Check for completeness of the acronyms list in section 1.1. For example=
 ECMP is used a few times in the document, but not listed here and never ex=
panded.=20

E3. In several places (2.1.3 is the first) I found 'For e.g.,'. I believe t=
hat this is a pleonasm, either use 'For example', or just e.g.=20

E4. In section 2.2: s/TRILL OAM processing can be modeled as a layer/TRILL =
OAM processing can be represented as a layer/

E5. In Section 2.3:=20

>  Network OAM mechanisms provide fault and performance management
   functions in the context of a representative 'test' VLAN or fine-
   grained label [TRILL-FGL].
=20
What does 'representative' mean here?=20

E6. 'faults in connectivity or performance' - 'connectivity faults and perf=
ormance degradation' is probably better

E7. In Section 2.6:=20

> MEPs are the active components of TRILL OAM: MEPs source TRILL OAM
   messages proactively or on-demand based on operator invocation.

The usage of the term 'proactively' seems to me to be incorrect. I would ra=
ther use 'periodically'. Also s/operator invocation/operator configuration =
actions/



E8. In Section 2.6:=20

> - MUST support the UP MEP function on a TRILL virtual port (to=20
     support OAM functions on Sections)

I would add for clarity inside the brackets '... as defined in 'rfc6905'

Regards,

Dan


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>=20
> > Perhaps even add in that if the OAM message fails authentication, the
> > switch should log the attempt and notify the sys admin. Or maybe that
> is obvious?
>=20
> I don't think the IETF is complete consistent on this point but
> generally IETF specifications concentrate on the bits on the wire and
> the state machines at the end points so they frequently omit saying
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>=20

[[DR]] As Donald says (politely) the IETF is not completely consistent on t=
his point. My preference is for an Operational and Manageability Considerat=
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recommended tools to be  implemented in the routers or hosts for administra=
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Donald, Sam, Tissa, and Samer:

 

General comments: Nicely written and enjoyable to read after all of the
debates. 

 

Two technical issues concern me as underspecified in the document: 

 

1.       Section 2.4 has maintenance Domains which can be "nested to form a
hierarchy" (p. 12, para. 1) 

a.       The nesting of Domains seems to be underspecified in this draft and
it is unclear exactly how these domains would nest. 

b.      There are mechanism for finding the hierarchy (Domain name and
maintenance level (numeric ID), but it is not clear from the document how
this works. 

2.       Section 4.2.1.2 - Multicast prevention of reply storms from
overwhelming the initiating RBridge. 

a.       Staggering or Jittering responses  may or may not protect the
initiating RBridge

b.      Again - this may be right or wrong, but the lack of additional
details concerns me whether this solution has been written down correctly.
I suspect from Tissa's comments that it is working. 

 

Editorial comments: 

1.       Replace TRILL-OAM-REQ with RFC6905 in all document,

2.       p. 4 TRILL in para. 2 has an extra space "-     TRILL" to "-TRILL"

3.       use of "multipathing" - has this been defined elsewhere? - it
should be defined or referenced,

4.       page 6. Para. 2 beginning [RFC6371].  Please change
/protection-switching management and/protection-switching management/

5.       page 8 sentence:  "The output ports on which TRILL OAM message are
sent are determined by the TRILL routing function, which will only send on
links that are in the up state and have been incorporated into the local
view of the campus topology"  - Suggest

a.       "The output ports on which TRILL OAM messages are sent are
determined by the TRILL routing function. The TRILL Routing function will
only send on links that are in the up state and have been incorporated into
the local view of the campus topology".  

6.       Page 11 - [TRILLML] - is not listed in the references - 

7.       Page 16.  Suggest changing 1st sentence of paragraph into two
parts.  /[RFC6325] and the Link Header/[RFC6325]. The Link header" 

8.       Page 4.1.2.2 add at end of sentence 2 /section./ section (4.1.2.1).


 

Sue Hares

Reviewer


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on which TRILL OAM message are sent are determined by the TRILL routing =
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messages are sent are determined by the TRILL routing function. The =
TRILL Routing function will only send on links that are in the up state =
and have been incorporated into the local view of the campus =
topology&#8221;.&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph =
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Hi Olen,

Thanks for promptly posting these comments.

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On Wed, Apr 3, 2013 at 4:21 PM, Olen Stokes <ostokes@extremenetworks.com> w=
rote:
> Based on a review of the subject document, please consider the following
> comments:
>
>
>
> 1)  Section 2.6 states that =93a CFM MEP resides in the "802.1Q Port VLAN
> Processing" block=94 of Figure 2.  I was not able to find a block with th=
at
> title in Figure 2.
>
>
>
> 2)  Section 2.6 states that =93A TRILL OAM solution that conforms to this
> framework=94 MAY support UP MEP=92s and MAY support DOWN MEP=92s on TRILL=
 physical
> ports.  I was unclear about the implications of these statements.  Does t=
hat
> imply that a solution could be acceptable even though it does not support
> either UP or DOWN MEP=92s?
>
>
>
> 3)  Section 3.1 at the top of Page 16 states, =93The TRILL Header is as
> specified in [RFC6325]=94.  Should this paragraph include some discussion=
 or
> reference to the TRILL Header as specified in the Fine Grained Labeling
> (FGL) document, especially since the FGL document =93changes the descript=
ion
> of the TRILL Header=94 in its Section 2.2?
>
>
>
> 4)  Section 3.3 states, =93The use of [802.1Q] CFM encoding format for th=
e OAM
> Message channel is one possible choice.=94  Given the amount of Y.1731
> terminology used in this document, it might be helpful to at least make s=
ome
> statement about the possibility of using Y.1731 formatting.  I understand
> that the formats are compatible, but there are some differences.
>
>
>
> 5)  Section 3.3 references [TRILL-OAM] which is listed as
> =93draft-tissa-trill-8021ag=94.  This document is expired.  Has it been r=
eplaced
> by =93draft-tissa-trill-oam-fm-01.txt=94?
>
>
>
> 6)  Section 3.4 suggests =93using a reserved MAC address as the inner MAC=
 SA=94
> to identify a TRILL OAM packet.  It is unclear to me how this is more
> backwards compatible than using previously unused fields or bits in the
> TRILL Header as suggested in the preceding paragraph.  Is not the inner M=
AC
> SA used in some configurations for hashing at hops with equal-cost paths?
>
>
>
> 7)  Section 4.1.2.2 describes Reverse Defect Indication (RDI).  Given tha=
t
> Section 4.1.1 states that fault detection must be able to exercise each
> equal-cost path individually, Section 4.1.2.2 should probably state that =
RDI
> must be able to identify on which equal-cost path the failure was detecte=
d.
>
>
>
> 8)  Section 4.2.1 discusses carrying =93test patterns as defined in
> [RFC2544].=94  RFC 2544 is a substantial document but it does not contain=
 the
> word =93pattern=94.  Is this a reference to the frame formats in Appendix=
 C or
> to some other section of the RFC?
>
>
>
> 9)  Section 4.2.1.2 discusses an un-pruned tree and a campus wide diagnos=
tic
> VLAN. A campus wide diagnostic FGL is probably also required.
>
>
>
> 10) Section 4.2.2 discusses fault isolation.  It would be helpful to incl=
ude
> a statement that fault isolation has to work for both known unicast and
> multi-destination packets.
>
>
>
> As a general comment, Section 1.2 states that the document =93leverages
> concepts and draws upon elements defined and/or used=94 in multiple exist=
ing
> OAM standards including 802.1ag CFM and Y.1731.  The document contains a
> mixture of terms from these two standards.  For example, the Y.1731 term
> Maintenance Entity Group (MEG) is used as opposed to the 802.1ag term
> Maintenance Association (MA).  However, the 802.1ag term Maintenance Poin=
t
> (MP) is used as opposed to the Y.1731 term Maintenance Entity (ME).  It d=
oes
> not appear to affect the technical content but it is unclear why the
> terminology is mixed.  Some statement about the method used to determine
> which terms to use might be helpful.
>
>
>
> Please let me know if you would like to discuss any of these items furthe=
r.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Olen
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Hi Dan,

Thanks for your prompt comments.

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On Thu, Apr 4, 2013 at 4:56 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) <dromasca@avaya.com> w=
rote:
> Hi,
>
> Here are my comments on draft-ietf-trill-oam-framework-01.txt
>
> I have divided them in Technical and Editorial.
>
>
> Technical
>
> T1. The references are broken in many ways. Many references in the text a=
re not included in the References sections - runing id-nits shows this imme=
diately. Listed references point to documents that do not exist [TRILL-OAM]=
, [TRILL-IP].
>
> T2. I have mixed feelings about the usage of RFC 2119 capitalized keyword=
s in this document. My preference would be to drop them completely, especia=
lly as the document is targeting Informational status. If they stay, we nee=
d to carefully review the usage, right now it's quite inconsistent.
>
> T3. The document does not include a section on operational and manageabil=
ity considerations. I believe that this is necessary, and this section shou=
ld include as a minimum:
> - what parameters need to be configured on Rbridges in order to activate =
TRILL OAM - activation of specific OAM functions, periodicity of OAM messag=
es, activation of synthetic traffic (periodic or on demand)
> - how are these parameters configured? Are there recommended default valu=
es?
> - how are results of Performance Management used or retrieved?
>
> T4. Several terms are used according to the terminology defined in RFC 69=
05 - Section, Flow, Connectivity, Continuity Indication, etc. I suggest to =
mention this in Section 1.2
>
> T5. Are the references to L2VPN and MPLS-TP (and the respective [RFC6136]=
 and [RFC6371]) in Section 1.2 needed at all? I do not see these technologi=
es mentioned in any other part of the document, and if there is no relevant=
 relationship with the OAM functions on these layers I would suggest to dro=
p these.
>
> T6. In 2.4 we have an example why using 2119 capitalized keywords is prob=
lematic:
>
>> When considering multi-domain scenarios, the following
>    rules must be followed: TRILL OAM domains MUST NOT overlap, but MUST
>    either be disjoint or nest to form a hierarchy (i.e. a higher
>    Maintenance Domain MAY completely engulf a lower Domain).
>
> If I was to chose, I would prefer not to use capitalization, or use capit=
alization only for the first 'must' which is not capitalized in the text. '=
MUST either ...' is a strange combination. One may argue that nesting is a =
form of overlapping, and actually 'MUST not overlap' is should rather be 'M=
UST not partially intersect'.
>
> T.7 In Section 3.1:
>
>> Additionally
>    methods must be provided to prevent OAM packets from being
>    transmitted out as native frames.
>
> If capitalized RFC 2119 keywords are to be kept, this 'must' must be a 'M=
UST' (because of the critical impact on the bits on wire)
>
> T.8 In section 3.2:
>
>>  When running OAM functions over Test Flows, the TRILL OAM should
>    provide a mechanism for discovering the flow entropy parameters by
>    querying the RBridges dynamically.
>
> I am wondering why this is a 'should' and not a 'must'. Are there any exc=
eption cases?
>
> T.9 Section 3.4:
>
>>  RBridges must be able to identify OAM messages that are destined to
>    them, either individually or as a group, so as to properly process
>    those messages.
>
> OK - so a method must be in place.
>
>    It may be possible to use a combination of one of the unused fields
>    or bits in the TRILL Header and the OAM EtherType to identify TRILL
>    OAM messages.
>
> ' one of the unused fields or bits in the TRILL Header' - which ones? Are=
 we talking about an update to RFC 6395? Where is this defined?
>
> Is the 'and' between the TRILL header combinations and the OAM EtherType =
really an 'and' or rather an 'or'? 'OAM EtherType' is rather 'TRILL OAM Eth=
erType'?
>
>    [RFC6325] does not specify any method of identifying OAM messages.
>    Hence, for backwards compatibility reasons, TRILL OAM solutions must
>    provide methods to identify OAM messages through the use of well-
>    known patterns in the Flow Entropy field; for e.g., by using a
>    reserved MAC address as the inner MAC SA.
>
> Is this an alternate method to the ones described in the previous paragra=
ph? Then, the 'must' is probably rather a 'may' or should'. What ' reserved=
 MAC address' are we talking about? Is this something that we should ask fr=
om the IEEE RAC? Where is this specified?
>
> T.10 Section 4.1.1 - What does 'Period mis-configuration' mean? Is this a=
bout the periodicity of the OAM messages? If so this defect is about OAM co=
nfiguration, not about continuity check. If it's something different, pleas=
e explain or provide a reference.
>
> T.11 Section 4.2:
>
>>  On-demand fault management functions are initiated manually by the
>    network operator and continue for a time bound period.
>
> The last part of the statement is not always true, as some fault manageme=
nt functions may be one-time actions or tests.
>
> T.12 Section 5. - Performance Management - I am not thrilled about this s=
ection at all. Note that RFC 6905 talks about Performance Monitoring (not M=
anagement) and it's not a mandatory function. Terminology aside, I dislike =
generating synthetic traffic in order to measure packet loss - how much tra=
ffic? Limiting this seems mandatory. Who compares what was sent with what w=
as received?  5.2 talks about hardware-based time-stamping to measure Packe=
t Delay. This implies some kind of clocks synchronization between RBridges.=
 What are the requirements?
>
> T.13 The Security Considerations section should be more explicit on what =
'exploitation of the OAM message channel' means. Specifically the threats r=
elated to overloading the network and the Rbridges with OAM messages should=
 be mentioned, as well as the impact of interrupting the OAM services.
>
>
>
> Editorial
>
> E1. In Section 1:
>
>>  Some
>    characteristics of a TRILL network that are different from Ethernet
>    bridging ...
>
> s/Ethernet bridging/IEEE 802.1 bridging/
>
> E2. Check for completeness of the acronyms list in section 1.1. For examp=
le ECMP is used a few times in the document, but not listed here and never =
expanded.
>
> E3. In several places (2.1.3 is the first) I found 'For e.g.,'. I believe=
 that this is a pleonasm, either use 'For example', or just e.g.
>
> E4. In section 2.2: s/TRILL OAM processing can be modeled as a layer/TRIL=
L OAM processing can be represented as a layer/
>
> E5. In Section 2.3:
>
>>  Network OAM mechanisms provide fault and performance management
>    functions in the context of a representative 'test' VLAN or fine-
>    grained label [TRILL-FGL].
>
> What does 'representative' mean here?
>
> E6. 'faults in connectivity or performance' - 'connectivity faults and pe=
rformance degradation' is probably better
>
> E7. In Section 2.6:
>
>> MEPs are the active components of TRILL OAM: MEPs source TRILL OAM
>    messages proactively or on-demand based on operator invocation.
>
> The usage of the term 'proactively' seems to me to be incorrect. I would =
rather use 'periodically'. Also s/operator invocation/operator configuratio=
n actions/
>
>
>
> E8. In Section 2.6:
>
>> - MUST support the UP MEP function on a TRILL virtual port (to
>      support OAM functions on Sections)
>
> I would add for clarity inside the brackets '... as defined in 'rfc6905'
>
> Regards,
>
> Dan
>
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Hi,

I read draft-tissa-trill-oam-fm-01.txt. It needs a lot of editorial cleanin=
g, both in organization of the material and details of editing. The princip=
al challenge is the separation of work between the IETF and IEEE 802.1 - as=
 much of what is described in this I-D is an extension of the IEEE 802.1Q C=
FM OAM. We need a clear separation of what is defined in TRILL and what is =
expected from the IEEE 802.1 and this needs to receive positive acknowledgm=
ent from the IEEE 802.1 WG in order to make progress.=20

Please find below a set of comments divided into Technical and Editorial. P=
lease address the issues raised below in the coming reviews.=20


Technical

T1. In Figure 1 the TRILL Header is said to be 8 bytes, while the explanati=
on speaks about 'Minimum of 8 bytes when the Extended Header is not include=
d'. If there are reasons to believe that the Extended Header may be used fo=
r OAM Messages this needs to be specified clearly, including the cases wher=
e this happens. The information in Section 3.1 and Figure 5 of draft-ietf-t=
rill-oam-framework-01 would also need to be corrected. However this would b=
e problematic, as the OAM EtherType is expected at a deterministic offset f=
rom the TRILL Header.

T2. In section 3:=20

> This document specifies using
   the EtherType allocated for 802.1ag for this purpose.

Is this what was agreed with IEEE 802.1? Is this true also if the backwards=
 compatibility method in 3.3 is used?

Further in section 16 I see:=20

> 16.1. IEEE Allocation Considerations

   The IEEE 802.1 Working Group is requested to allocate a separate
   opcode and TLV space within 802.1QCFM messages for TRILL purpose.

Did you discuss with IEEE 802.1 how this allocation will be performed. Does=
 this need to be included in an update of IEEE 802.1Q?

T3. In Section 5:=20

>  We propose to augment the [8021Q] MIB to add the TRILL specific
   information. Figure 6, below depicts the augmentation of the CFM MIB
   to add the TRILL specific Flow Entropy.

The augmentation of the MIB as described in this section is a challenge, as=
 MIB development is now under the responsibility of the IEEE 802.1 WG. Here=
 also there would be a need to cooperate closely with the IEEE 802.1 WG - w=
as this agreed?=20

T4. Section 7 seems to contain information that is not related to the bits =
on the wire but to the internal implementation. Should not this be moved to=
 an appendix? =20

T5. Section 9.1:=20

>     o MD-L: Maintenance Domain Level (3 bits). Identifies the
        maintenance domain level. For TRILL, this MAY be always set to
        zero. However, in multilevel TRILL, backbone MAY be of a
        different MD-LEVEL. (Please refer to [8021Q] for the definition
        of MD-Level)

What does 'MAY be always' mean?=20

T6. Section 9.1:=20

>     o Version: Indicates the version (5 bits). As specified in
        [8021Q].

Is this document an update of the version?=20



E1. There is more work to put references in order. I suggest to run idnits =
before submission, this immediately will point on most of the references-re=
lated problems. Currently idnits points to the following problems:=20

Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
---------------------------------------------------------------------------=
-

     (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative referenc=
es
     to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)

  =3D=3D Missing Reference: 'TRLLOAMMIB' is mentioned on line 977, but not
     defined
     'raise SNMP TRAPs [TRLLOAMMIB] as Alarms when a connectivity failu...'

  =3D=3D Unused Reference: 'RFC5226' is defined on line 2039, but no explic=
it
     reference was found in the text
     '[RFC5226] Narten, T. and H. Alvestrand, "Guidelines for Writing an I.=
..'

  =3D=3D Outdated reference: draft-ietf-trill-oam-req has been published as=
 RFC
     6905
=20
E2. In the Introduction section:=20

>    The OAM message channel, if defined properly, can be shared between
   different technologies. A common OAM channel allows a uniform user
   experience for the customers, savings on operator training, re-use
   of software code base and faster time to market.

This sounds a little bit 'marketing'. I would rather replace this with a sh=
orter definition and explanation about the role of the OAMA channel of ensu=
ring consistency between message formats whatever transport TRILL runs on. =
Also avoid to say 'if defined properly' - there is no reason not to define =
properly in IETF documents :-)

E3. Also in the Introduction:=20

> The ITU-T Y.1731 standard utilizes the same messaging format as
   [8021Q] and OAM messages where applicable.

Probably better:=20

> The ITU-T Y.1731 [REFERENCE] standard utilizes the same messaging format =
as
   [8021Q] and reuses OAM messages where applicable.

Note the need to provide a reference to Y.1731

E4. The acronyms section is incomplete - for example ECMP, ISS should be ad=
ded, probably more

E5. Section 3.4 (and other  sections in the document) - avoid the 'We propo=
se' language - this is a specification, not just a proposal

Also here s/the implementation is OAM capable but utilize backwards compati=
ble method defined in section 3.3/the implementation is OAM capable and uti=
lizes the backwards compatible method defined in section 3.3/

E6. Section 16.2 - the different registries and sub-registries maintained b=
y IANA need to point back to specific sections in the document, also need t=
o use consistent naming in these sections and here.=20

E7. [8021Q] must be a normative reference.=20


Regards,

Dan


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Draft minutes of the TRILL WG meeting in Orlando have been posted. See
http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/86/minutes/minutes-86-trill

Thanks,
Donald
=============================
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Hi Sue,

Thank you for the review comments. We will incorporate them in the updated =
revision of the draft.

Best Regards,
Samer

From: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com<mailto:shares@ndzh.com>>
Date: Thursday, April 4, 2013 2:36 PM
To: 'Donald Eastlake' <d3e3e3@gmail.com<mailto:d3e3e3@gmail.com>>, "sam.ald=
rin@gmail.com<mailto:sam.aldrin@gmail.com>" <sam.aldrin@gmail.com<mailto:sa=
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Cc: "trill@ietf.org<mailto:trill@ietf.org>" <trill@ietf.org<mailto:trill@ie=
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Subject: TRILL OAM framework review (draft-ietf-trill-oam-framework-01)

Donald, Sam, Tissa, and Samer:

General comments: Nicely written and enjoyable to read after all of the deb=
ates.

Two technical issues concern me as underspecified in the document:


1.       Section 2.4 has maintenance Domains which can be =93nested to form=
 a hierarchy=94 (p. 12, para. 1)

a.       The nesting of Domains seems to be underspecified in this draft an=
d it is unclear exactly how these domains would nest.

b.      There are mechanism for finding the hierarchy (Domain name and main=
tenance level (numeric ID), but it is not clear from the document how this =
works.

2.       Section 4.2.1.2 =96 Multicast prevention of reply storms from over=
whelming the initiating RBridge.

a.       Staggering or Jittering responses  may or may not protect the init=
iating RBridge

b.      Again =96 this may be right or wrong, but the lack of additional de=
tails concerns me whether this solution has been written down correctly.  I=
 suspect from Tissa=92s comments that it is working.

Editorial comments:

1.       Replace TRILL-OAM-REQ with RFC6905 in all document,

2.       p. 4 TRILL in para. 2 has an extra space =93-     TRILL=94 to =93-=
TRILL=94

3.       use of =93multipathing=94 =96 has this been defined elsewhere? =96=
 it should be defined or referenced,

4.       page 6. Para. 2 beginning [RFC6371].  Please change /protection-sw=
itching management and/protection-switching management/

5.       page 8 sentence:  =93The output ports on which TRILL OAM message a=
re sent are determined by the TRILL routing function, which will only send =
on links that are in the up state and have been incorporated into the local=
 view of the campus topology=94  - Suggest

a.       =93The output ports on which TRILL OAM messages are sent are deter=
mined by the TRILL routing function. The TRILL Routing function will only s=
end on links that are in the up state and have been incorporated into the l=
ocal view of the campus topology=94.

6.       Page 11 =96 [TRILLML] =96 is not listed in the references =96

7.       Page 16.  Suggest changing 1st sentence of paragraph into two part=
s.  /[RFC6325] and the Link Header/[RFC6325]. The Link header=94

8.       Page 4.1.2.2 add at end of sentence 2 /section./ section (4.1.2.1)=
.

Sue Hares
Reviewer

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<div>Hi Sue,</div>
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</div>
<div>Thank you for the review comments. We will incorporate them in the upd=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Donald, Sam, Tissa, and Samer:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">General comments: Nicely written and enjoyable to re=
ad after all of the debates.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Two technical issues concern me as underspecified in=
 the document:
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level=
1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Section 2.4 has maintenance Domains which can b=
e =93nested to form a hierarchy=94 (p. 12, para. 1)
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in=
;mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">a.<span style=3D"f=
ont:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->The nesting of Domains seems to be underspecifi=
ed in this draft and it is unclear exactly how these domains would nest.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in=
;mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">b.<span style=3D"f=
ont:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->There are mechanism for finding the hierarchy (=
Domain name and maintenance level (numeric ID), but it is not clear from th=
e document how this works.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level=
1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Section 4.2.1.2 =96 Multicast prevention of rep=
ly storms from overwhelming the initiating RBridge.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in=
;mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">a.<span style=3D"f=
ont:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Staggering or Jittering responses &nbsp;may or =
may not protect the initiating RBridge<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in=
;mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">b.<span style=3D"f=
ont:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Again =96 this may be right or wrong, but the l=
ack of additional details concerns me whether this solution has been writte=
n down correctly.&nbsp; I suspect from Tissa=92s comments that it is workin=
g.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Editorial comments: <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Replace TRILL-OAM-REQ with RFC6905 in all docum=
ent,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->p. 4 TRILL in para. 2 has an extra space =93-&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TRILL=94 to =93-TRILL=94<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">3.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->use of =93multipathing=94 =96 has this been def=
ined elsewhere? =96 it should be defined or referenced,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">4.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->page 6. Para. 2 beginning [RFC6371].&nbsp; Plea=
se change /protection-switching management and/protection-switching managem=
ent/<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">5.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->page 8 sentence: &nbsp;=93The output ports on w=
hich TRILL OAM message are sent are determined by the TRILL routing functio=
n, which will only send on links that are in the up state and have been inc=
orporated into the local view of the campus
 topology=94&nbsp; - Suggest<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in=
;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">a.<span style=3D"f=
ont:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->=93The output ports on which TRILL OAM messages=
 are sent are determined by the TRILL routing function. The TRILL Routing f=
unction will only send on links that are in the up state and have been inco=
rporated into the local view of the
 campus topology=94.&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">6.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Page 11 =96 [TRILLML] =96 is not listed in the =
references =96
<o:p></o:p></p>
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1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">7.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Page 16.&nbsp; Suggest changing 1<sup>st</sup> =
sentence of paragraph into two parts.&nbsp; /[RFC6325] and the Link Header/=
[RFC6325]. The Link header=94
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo2"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">8.<span st=
yle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Page 4.1.2.2 add at end of sentence 2 /section.=
/ section (4.1.2.1).
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Sue Hares<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Reviewer<o:p></o:p></p>
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Hi Dan,

Thank you for your comments, we will incorporate them into the updated
draft.

Best Regards,
Samer

On 13-04-04 1:56 AM, "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> wrote:

>Hi,
>
>Here are my comments on draft-ietf-trill-oam-framework-01.txt
>
>I have divided them in Technical and Editorial.
>
>
>Technical
>
>T1. The references are broken in many ways. Many references in the text
>are not included in the References sections - runing id-nits shows this
>immediately. Listed references point to documents that do not exist
>[TRILL-OAM], [TRILL-IP].
>
>T2. I have mixed feelings about the usage of RFC 2119 capitalized
>keywords in this document. My preference would be to drop them
>completely, especially as the document is targeting Informational status.
>If they stay, we need to carefully review the usage, right now it's quite
>inconsistent.=20
>
>T3. The document does not include a section on operational and
>manageability considerations. I believe that this is necessary, and this
>section should include as a minimum:
>- what parameters need to be configured on Rbridges in order to activate
>TRILL OAM - activation of specific OAM functions, periodicity of OAM
>messages, activation of synthetic traffic (periodic or on demand)
>- how are these parameters configured? Are there recommended default
>values?=20
>- how are results of Performance Management used or retrieved?
>
>T4. Several terms are used according to the terminology defined in RFC
>6905 - Section, Flow, Connectivity, Continuity Indication, etc. I suggest
>to mention this in Section 1.2
>
>T5. Are the references to L2VPN and MPLS-TP (and the respective [RFC6136]
>and [RFC6371]) in Section 1.2 needed at all? I do not see these
>technologies mentioned in any other part of the document, and if there is
>no relevant relationship with the OAM functions on these layers I would
>suggest to drop these.
>
>T6. In 2.4 we have an example why using 2119 capitalized keywords is
>problematic:
>
>> When considering multi-domain scenarios, the following
>   rules must be followed: TRILL OAM domains MUST NOT overlap, but MUST
>   either be disjoint or nest to form a hierarchy (i.e. a higher
>   Maintenance Domain MAY completely engulf a lower Domain).
>
>If I was to chose, I would prefer not to use capitalization, or use
>capitalization only for the first 'must' which is not capitalized in the
>text. 'MUST either ...' is a strange combination. One may argue that
>nesting is a form of overlapping, and actually 'MUST not overlap' is
>should rather be 'MUST not partially intersect'.
>
>T.7 In Section 3.1:
>
>> Additionally
>   methods must be provided to prevent OAM packets from being
>   transmitted out as native frames.
>
>If capitalized RFC 2119 keywords are to be kept, this 'must' must be a
>'MUST' (because of the critical impact on the bits on wire)
>
>T.8 In section 3.2:
>
>>  When running OAM functions over Test Flows, the TRILL OAM should
>   provide a mechanism for discovering the flow entropy parameters by
>   querying the RBridges dynamically.
>
>I am wondering why this is a 'should' and not a 'must'. Are there any
>exception cases?=20
>
>T.9 Section 3.4:=20
>
>>  RBridges must be able to identify OAM messages that are destined to
>   them, either individually or as a group, so as to properly process
>   those messages.
>
>OK - so a method must be in place.
>
>   It may be possible to use a combination of one of the unused fields
>   or bits in the TRILL Header and the OAM EtherType to identify TRILL
>   OAM messages.=20
>
>' one of the unused fields or bits in the TRILL Header' - which ones? Are
>we talking about an update to RFC 6395? Where is this defined?
>
>Is the 'and' between the TRILL header combinations and the OAM EtherType
>really an 'and' or rather an 'or'? 'OAM EtherType' is rather 'TRILL OAM
>EtherType'?=20
>
>   [RFC6325] does not specify any method of identifying OAM messages.
>   Hence, for backwards compatibility reasons, TRILL OAM solutions must
>   provide methods to identify OAM messages through the use of well-
>   known patterns in the Flow Entropy field; for e.g., by using a
>   reserved MAC address as the inner MAC SA.
>
>Is this an alternate method to the ones described in the previous
>paragraph? Then, the 'must' is probably rather a 'may' or should'. What '
>reserved MAC address' are we talking about? Is this something that we
>should ask from the IEEE RAC? Where is this specified?
>
>T.10 Section 4.1.1 - What does 'Period mis-configuration' mean? Is this
>about the periodicity of the OAM messages? If so this defect is about OAM
>configuration, not about continuity check. If it's something different,
>please explain or provide a reference.
>
>T.11 Section 4.2:=20
>
>>  On-demand fault management functions are initiated manually by the
>   network operator and continue for a time bound period.
>
>The last part of the statement is not always true, as some fault
>management functions may be one-time actions or tests.
>
>T.12 Section 5. - Performance Management - I am not thrilled about this
>section at all. Note that RFC 6905 talks about Performance Monitoring
>(not Management) and it's not a mandatory function. Terminology aside, I
>dislike generating synthetic traffic in order to measure packet loss -
>how much traffic? Limiting this seems mandatory. Who compares what was
>sent with what was received?  5.2 talks about hardware-based
>time-stamping to measure Packet Delay. This implies some kind of clocks
>synchronization between RBridges. What are the requirements?
>
>T.13 The Security Considerations section should be more explicit on what
>'exploitation of the OAM message channel' means. Specifically the threats
>related to overloading the network and the Rbridges with OAM messages
>should be mentioned, as well as the impact of interrupting the OAM
>services.=20
>
>=20
>
>Editorial
>
>E1. In Section 1:=20
>
>>  Some
>   characteristics of a TRILL network that are different from Ethernet
>   bridging ...
>
>s/Ethernet bridging/IEEE 802.1 bridging/
>
>E2. Check for completeness of the acronyms list in section 1.1. For
>example ECMP is used a few times in the document, but not listed here and
>never expanded.=20
>
>E3. In several places (2.1.3 is the first) I found 'For e.g.,'. I believe
>that this is a pleonasm, either use 'For example', or just e.g.
>
>E4. In section 2.2: s/TRILL OAM processing can be modeled as a
>layer/TRILL OAM processing can be represented as a layer/
>
>E5. In Section 2.3:
>
>>  Network OAM mechanisms provide fault and performance management
>   functions in the context of a representative 'test' VLAN or fine-
>   grained label [TRILL-FGL].
>=20
>What does 'representative' mean here?
>
>E6. 'faults in connectivity or performance' - 'connectivity faults and
>performance degradation' is probably better
>
>E7. In Section 2.6:
>
>> MEPs are the active components of TRILL OAM: MEPs source TRILL OAM
>   messages proactively or on-demand based on operator invocation.
>
>The usage of the term 'proactively' seems to me to be incorrect. I would
>rather use 'periodically'. Also s/operator invocation/operator
>configuration actions/
>
>
>
>E8. In Section 2.6:
>
>> - MUST support the UP MEP function on a TRILL virtual port (to
>     support OAM functions on Sections)
>
>I would add for clarity inside the brackets '... as defined in 'rfc6905'
>
>Regards,
>
>Dan
>
>_______________________________________________
>trill mailing list
>trill@ietf.org
>https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill


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The following is a good reminder about the IETF IPR policy patterned
after a message that Kathleen Moriarty sent to the MILE WG in August
2012 and one that was recently sent to the DHC WG.

Dear TRILL WG:

As TRILL WG chairs, we would like to minimize or hopefully even
eliminate late disclosures relating to documents under consideration
within the TRILL WG.  So you might see us send "reminder" messages in
the future to authors or to the TRILL WG email list as a whole, asking
people whether they know of Intellectual Property Rights (IPR)
relating to specific documents.  In order to comply with IETF
processes and avoid unnecessary delays, document authors and
contributors to our discussions in the TRILL WG are asked to pay
attention to these messages.

Please note that these messages are only reminders of existing IETF
policy, and we are all bound by that policy even in the absence of
such reminder messages.  Everyone who participates in the IETF
Standards Process (whether by posting to mailing lists, authoring
documents, attending IETF meetings, or in other ways) needs to be
aware of the IETF rules with regard to IPR.  These rules are described
in BCP 79 and can be referenced through
http://www.ietf.org/ipr/policy.html.  In addition, online tools for
filing IPR disclosures can be found at
http://www.ietf.org/ipr/file-disclosure.  Finally, existing
disclosures can be searched online at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/.

Also note that these are personal requirements applying to all IETF
participants as individuals, and that these requirements also apply to
all participants in the TRILL WG. Disclosures are required on
individual submissions, as soon as practical after the -00 version...
not just on
working group documents.  There are many people who think it's okay to
disclose only after adoption, and everyone needs to be reminded that
it's not.

Thanks,
Donald & Erik
(TRILL WG Co-chairs)

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Greetings Authors!


I am the Document Shepard for you draft.


Initial review of your draft brings up three initial small issues and one
small suggestion


(1) Acronyms that are not common IETF acronyms need to be spelled out

on first use in the Abstract and Introduction. (TRILL is spelled out

on second use in the abstract but there are others not spelled out at

all.)


(2) The list of acknowledgements should include Sam Aldrin and Yizhou

Li who did reviews.


(3) A light editing pass should be done by someone who is a native

English speaker to add articles and the like so it reads more smoothly.Some
statements are a wee bit awkward. Just in the paragraph below "...where VMs
migrates" needs to be either where a VM migrates or where VMs migrate.


(4) Just a suggestion: the last paragraph in section 3.1 ( lovely ascii
pictures by the way)


    - In an environment where VMs migrates, there is higher chance of

        cached information becoming invalid, causing traffic to be

        black-holed by the ingress RBridge, that is, persistently sent

        to the wrong egress RBridge. If VMs do not flood gratuitous

        ARP/ND or VDP [802.1Qbg] messages upon arriving at new

        locations, the ingress nodes might not have MAC entries for the

        MAC of the newly arrived VMs, causing unknown address flooding.



It may be worth noting that the issues with reliance on the gratuitous ARP
is exacerbated by the fact that individual implementations in the field
vary, and even between product lines in the same vendor you will different
timers as to how long it takes for a switch to act on a gratuitous arp. The
inconsistency this creates is so troublesome I have worked in some shops
that flat never relied on gratuitous ARPs for anything.


Now since this amounts to implementation issues, and not any issues with
802.1bg, it may not be worth mentioning. However it is the first thing I
think of when I think of the value learning by directory would bring me in
a datacenter.


Just a suggestion, 4 is not a blocking issue.


Other than the items above, the draft is looking quite good.


Cheers,

Jon

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<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">I am the Document Shepard for you draft.=A0</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">Initial review of your draft brings up three initia=
l small issues and one small suggestion</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">(1) Acronyms that are not common IETF acronyms need=
 to be spelled out</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">on first use in the Abstract and Introduction. (TRI=
LL is spelled out</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">on second use in the abstract but there are others =
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<p style=3D"margin:0px">all.)</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">(2) The list of acknowledgements should include Sam=
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<p style=3D"margin:0px">Li who did reviews.</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">(3) A light editing pass should be done by someone =
who is a native</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">English speaker to add articles and the like so it =
reads more smoothly.Some statements are a wee bit awkward. Just in the para=
graph below &quot;...where VMs migrates&quot; needs to be either where a VM=
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<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">(4) Just a suggestion: the last paragraph in sectio=
n 3.1 ( lovely ascii pictures by the way)=A0</p>
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<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier">=A0 =A0=A0- In a=
n environment where VMs migrates, there is higher chance of</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier">=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
cached information becoming invalid, causing traffic to be</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier">=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
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<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier">=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
to the wrong egress RBridge. If VMs do not flood gratuitous</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier">=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
ARP/ND or VDP [802.1Qbg] messages upon arriving at new</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier">=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
locations, the ingress nodes might not have MAC entries for the</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier">=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
MAC of the newly arrived VMs, causing unknown address flooding.</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier;min-height:16px">=
<br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:13px;font-family:Courier;min-height:16px">=
<br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">It may be worth noting that the issues with relianc=
e on the gratuitous ARP is exacerbated by the fact that individual implemen=
tations in the field vary, and even between product lines in the same vendo=
r you will different timers as to how long it takes for a switch to act on =
a gratuitous arp. The inconsistency this creates is so troublesome I have w=
orked in some shops that flat never relied on gratuitous ARPs for anything.=
=A0</p>

<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">Now since this amounts to implementation issues, an=
d not any issues with 802.1bg, it may not be worth mentioning. However it i=
s the first thing I think of when I think of the value learning by director=
y would bring me in a datacenter.=A0</p>

<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">Just a suggestion, 4 is not a blocking issue.=A0</p=
>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">Other than the items above, the draft is looking qu=
ite good.=A0</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px;min-height:16px"><br></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">Cheers,</p>
<p style=3D"margin:0px">Jon</p><p></p></div><div><div style><br></div><div =
style>=A0</div></div></div>

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The IESG has received a request from the Transparent Interconnection of
Lots of Links WG (trill) to consider the following document:
- 'TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links): Fine-Grained
   Labeling'
  <draft-ietf-trill-fine-labeling-06.txt> as Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
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Abstract


   The IETF has standardized TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots
   of Links), a protocol for least cost transparent frame routing in
   multi-hop networks with arbitrary topologies and link technologies,
   using link-state routing and a hop count. The TRILL base protocol
   standard supports labeling of TRILL data with up to 4K IDs. However,
   there are applications that require more fine-grained labeling of
   data. This document updates RFC 6325 by specifying optional
   extensions to the TRILL base protocol to safely accomplish this.





The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-fine-labeling/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-fine-labeling/ballot/


The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:

   http://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1688/




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Jon,

Thank you very much for shepherding this draft.

Reply to your comments are inserted below:

From: Jon Hudson [mailto:jon.hudson@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, April 24, 2013 2:43 AM
To: Linda Dunbar; Donald Eastlake; Radia Perlman; igor@yahoo-inc.com
Cc: trill@ietf.org
Subject: Edge Directory Assistance Framework draft-ietf-trill-directory-fra=
mework-04.txt


Greetings Authors!



I am the Document Shepard for you draft.



Initial review of your draft brings up three initial small issues and one s=
mall suggestion



(1) Acronyms that are not common IETF acronyms need to be spelled out

on first use in the Abstract and Introduction. (TRILL is spelled out

on second use in the abstract but there are others not spelled out at

all.)



[Linda] Can you point out the exact acronyms? Terminology Section should ha=
ve the definitions for all of acronyms used in the document.  But we might =
missed some.



(2) The list of acknowledgements should include Sam Aldrin and Yizhou

Li who did reviews.



[Linda] Absolutely. We can re-spin the draft to include the people who prov=
ided valuable comments.





(3) A light editing pass should be done by someone who is a native

English speaker to add articles and the like so it reads more smoothly.Some=
 statements are a wee bit awkward. Just in the paragraph below "...where VM=
s migrates" needs to be either where a VM migrates or where VMs migrate.



[Linda] I will leave it to Donald for a final check.





(4) Just a suggestion: the last paragraph in section 3.1 ( lovely ascii pic=
tures by the way)



    - In an environment where VMs migrates, there is higher chance of

        cached information becoming invalid, causing traffic to be

        black-holed by the ingress RBridge, that is, persistently sent

        to the wrong egress RBridge. If VMs do not flood gratuitous

        ARP/ND or VDP [802.1Qbg] messages upon arriving at new

        locations, the ingress nodes might not have MAC entries for the

        MAC of the newly arrived VMs, causing unknown address flooding.





It may be worth noting that the issues with reliance on the gratuitous ARP =
is exacerbated by the fact that individual implementations in the field var=
y, and even between product lines in the same vendor you will different tim=
ers as to how long it takes for a switch to act on a gratuitous arp. The in=
consistency this creates is so troublesome I have worked in some shops that=
 flat never relied on gratuitous ARPs for anything.



Now since this amounts to implementation issues, and not any issues with 80=
2.1bg, it may not be worth mentioning. However it is the first thing I thin=
k of when I think of the value learning by directory would bring me in a da=
tacenter.



[Linda] So you are agreeing with the statement in our draft? i.e. You can't=
 depend on Gratuitous ARP to flush stalled entries. You can't depend on 802=
.1bg either because not every server support this feature.





Just a suggestion, 4 is not a blocking issue.



Other than the items above, the draft is looking quite good.



Cheers,

Jon



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on [mailto:jon.hudson@gmail.com]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, April 24, 2013 2:43 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Linda Dunbar; Donald Eastlake; Radia Perlman; igor@yahoo-inc.com=
<br>
<b>Cc:</b> trill@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Edge Directory Assistance Framework draft-ietf-trill-direct=
ory-framework-04.txt<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Greetings Authors!<o:p></o:p>=
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<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">I am the Document Shepard for=
 you draft.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Initial review of your draft =
brings up three initial small issues and one small suggestion<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">(1) Acronyms that are not com=
mon IETF acronyms need to be spelled out<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">on first use in the Abstract =
and Introduction. (TRILL is spelled out<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">on second use in the abstract=
 but there are others not spelled out at<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">all.)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">[L=
inda] Can you point out the exact acronyms? Terminology Section should have=
 the definitions for all of acronyms used in the document.
 &nbsp;But we might missed some. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">(2) The list of acknowledgeme=
nts should include Sam Aldrin and Yizhou<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Li who did reviews.<o:p></o:p=
></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">[L=
inda] Absolutely. We can re-spin the draft to include the people who provid=
ed valuable comments.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">(3) A light editing pass shou=
ld be done by someone who is a native<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">English speaker to add articl=
es and the like so it reads more smoothly.Some statements are a wee bit awk=
ward. Just in the paragraph below &quot;...where VMs migrates&quot; needs t=
o be either where a VM migrates or where VMs
 migrate.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">[L=
inda] I will leave it to Donald for a final check.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">(4) Just a suggestion: the la=
st paragraph in section 3.1 ( lovely ascii pictures by the way)&nbsp;<o:p><=
/o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:15px"><span style=
=3D"font-size:8.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:8.0p=
t;font-family:Courier">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;- In an environment where VMs mig=
rates, there is higher chance of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:8.0p=
t;font-family:Courier">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; cached information becom=
ing invalid, causing traffic to be<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:8.0p=
t;font-family:Courier">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; black-holed by the ingre=
ss RBridge, that is, persistently sent<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:8.0p=
t;font-family:Courier">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; to the wrong egress RBri=
dge. If VMs do not flood gratuitous<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:8.0p=
t;font-family:Courier">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; ARP/ND or VDP [802.1Qbg]=
 messages upon arriving at new<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:8.0p=
t;font-family:Courier">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; locations, the ingress n=
odes might not have MAC entries for the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:8.0p=
t;font-family:Courier">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; MAC of the newly arrived=
 VMs, causing unknown address flooding.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><span style=
=3D"font-size:8.0pt;font-family:Courier"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><span style=
=3D"font-size:8.0pt;font-family:Courier"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">It may be worth noting that t=
he issues with reliance on the gratuitous ARP is exacerbated by the fact th=
at individual implementations in the field vary, and even between product l=
ines in the same vendor you will different
 timers as to how long it takes for a switch to act on a gratuitous arp. Th=
e inconsistency this creates is so troublesome I have worked in some shops =
that flat never relied on gratuitous ARPs for anything.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Now since this amounts to imp=
lementation issues, and not any issues with 802.1bg, it may not be worth me=
ntioning. However it is the first thing I think of when I think of the valu=
e learning by directory would bring
 me in a datacenter.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">[L=
inda] So you are agreeing with the statement in our draft? i.e. You can&#82=
17;t depend on Gratuitous ARP to flush stalled entries. You can&#8217;t
 depend on 802.1bg either because not every server support this feature. <o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Just a suggestion, 4 is not a=
 blocking issue.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Other than the items above, t=
he draft is looking quite good.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px"><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Cheers,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style=3D"margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">Jon<o:p></o:p></p>
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Replying as a co-author,

On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 6:03 PM, Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@huawei.com> wro=
te:
> Jon,
>
> Thank you very much for shepherding this draft.
>
> Reply to your comments are inserted below:
>
> From: Jon Hudson [mailto:jon.hudson@gmail.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, April 24, 2013 2:43 AM
> To: Linda Dunbar; Donald Eastlake; Radia Perlman; igor@yahoo-inc.com
> Cc: trill@ietf.org
> Subject: Edge Directory Assistance Framework
> draft-ietf-trill-directory-framework-04.txt
>
> Greetings Authors!
>
> I am the Document Shepard for you draft.
>
> Initial review of your draft brings up three initial small issues and one
> small suggestion
>
> (1) Acronyms that are not common IETF acronyms need to be spelled out
> on first use in the Abstract and Introduction. (TRILL is spelled out
> on second use in the abstract but there are others not spelled out at
> all.)
>
> [Linda] Can you point out the exact acronyms? Terminology Section should
> have the definitions for all of acronyms used in the document.  But we mi=
ght
> missed some.

OK.

> (2) The list of acknowledgements should include Sam Aldrin and Yizhou
> Li who did reviews.
>
> [Linda] Absolutely. We can re-spin the draft to include the people who
> provided valuable comments.

OK.

> (3) A light editing pass should be done by someone who is a native
>
> English speaker to add articles and the like so it reads more smoothly.So=
me
> statements are a wee bit awkward. Just in the paragraph below "...where V=
Ms
> migrates" needs to be either where a VM migrates or where VMs migrate.
>
> [Linda] I will leave it to Donald for a final check.

OK.

> (4) Just a suggestion: the last paragraph in section 3.1 ( lovely ascii
> pictures by the way)
>
>     - In an environment where VMs migrates, there is higher chance of
>         cached information becoming invalid, causing traffic to be
>         black-holed by the ingress RBridge, that is, persistently sent
>         to the wrong egress RBridge. If VMs do not flood gratuitous
>         ARP/ND or VDP [802.1Qbg] messages upon arriving at new
>         locations, the ingress nodes might not have MAC entries for the
>         MAC of the newly arrived VMs, causing unknown address flooding.
>
> It may be worth noting that the issues with reliance on the gratuitous AR=
P
> is exacerbated by the fact that individual implementations in the field
> vary, and even between product lines in the same vendor you will differen=
t
> timers as to how long it takes for a switch to act on a gratuitous arp. T=
he
> inconsistency this creates is so troublesome I have worked in some shops
> that flat never relied on gratuitous ARPs for anything.
>
> Now since this amounts to implementation issues, and not any issues with
> 802.1bg, it may not be worth mentioning. However it is the first thing I
> think of when I think of the value learning by directory would bring me i=
n a
> datacenter.
>
> [Linda] So you are agreeing with the statement in our draft? i.e. You can=
=92t
> depend on Gratuitous ARP to flush stalled entries. You can=92t depend on
> 802.1bg either because not every server support this feature.

I'm not sure that is worth changing in the draft.

Thanks,
Donald
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> Just a suggestion, 4 is not a blocking issue.
>
>
>
> Other than the items above, the draft is looking quite good.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Jon
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts director=
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 This draft is a work item of the Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Li=
nks Working Group of the IETF.

	Title           : TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links): Ed=
ge Directory Assistance Framework
	Author(s)       : Linda Dunbar
                          Donald Eastlake
                          Radia Perlman
                          Igor Gashinsky
	Filename        : draft-ietf-trill-directory-framework-05.txt
	Pages           : 17
	Date            : 2013-04-26

Abstract:
   Edge TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links) switches
   currently learn the mapping between MAC addresses and their egress
   TRILL switch by observing the data packets they ingress or egress or
   by the TRILL ESADI (End Station Address Distribution Information)
   protocol. When an ingress TRILL switch receives a data frame whose
   destination address (MAC&VLAN) that switch does not know, the data
   frame is flooded within the frame's VLAN across the TRILL campus.

   This document describes the framework for using directory services to
   assist edge RBridges in reducing multi-destination frames,
   particularly unknown unicast frames flooding, and ARP/ND, thus
   improving TRILL network scalability.




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This revision incorporates most of the document shepherd comments.

Thanks,
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=============================
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On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 10:29 AM,  <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links Working Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links): Edge Directory Assistance Framework
>         Author(s)       : Linda Dunbar
>                           Donald Eastlake
>                           Radia Perlman
>                           Igor Gashinsky
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-trill-directory-framework-05.txt
>         Pages           : 17
>         Date            : 2013-04-26
>
> Abstract:
>    Edge TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links) switches
>    currently learn the mapping between MAC addresses and their egress
>    TRILL switch by observing the data packets they ingress or egress or
>    by the TRILL ESADI (End Station Address Distribution Information)
>    protocol. When an ingress TRILL switch receives a data frame whose
>    destination address (MAC&VLAN) that switch does not know, the data
>    frame is flooded within the frame's VLAN across the TRILL campus.
>
>    This document describes the framework for using directory services to
>    assist edge RBridges in reducing multi-destination frames,
>    particularly unknown unicast frames flooding, and ARP/ND, thus
>    improving TRILL network scalability.
>
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-directory-framework
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
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>
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>
>
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We are researchers from different parts of the world and conducted a study on  
the world’s biggest bogus computer science conference WORLDCOMP 
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(1). Binary logic is fuzzy logic and vice versa
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(6). Laptop is an example for a super computer
(7). Operating system is an example for computer hardware


Also, our paper did not express any conceptual meaning.  However, it 
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A possible revision of RFC 6327 "TRILL: Adjacency" has been posted
that may be of interest.

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Donald
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Subject: New Version Notification for draft-eastlake-trill-rfc6327bis-00.txt
To: Radia Perlman <radia@alum.mit.edu>, Vishwas Manral
<vishwas.manral@hp.com>, Anoop Ghanwani <anoop@alumni.duke.edu>,
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A new version of I-D, draft-eastlake-trill-rfc6327bis-00.txt
has been successfully submitted by Donald E. Eastlake and posted to the
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Filename:        draft-eastlake-trill-rfc6327bis
Revision:        00
Title:           TRILL: Adjacency
Creation date:   2013-04-28
Group:           Individual Submission
Number of pages: 39
URL:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-eastlake-trill-rfc6327bis-00.txt
Status:          http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-eastlake-trill-rfc6327bis
Htmlized:        http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-eastlake-trill-rfc6327bis-00


Abstract:
   The IETF TRILL (TRansparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)
   protocol supports arbitrary link technologies between TRILL switches
   including point-to-point links and multi-access LAN (Local Area
   Network) links that can have multiple TRILL switches and end stations
   attached. TRILL uses IS-IS (Intermediate System to Intermediate
   System) routing. This document specifies the establishment,
   reporting, and termination of IS-IS adjacency between TRILL switches,
   also known as RBridges. It also concerns four other link-local
   aspects of TRILL: Designated RBridge (DRB) selection, MTU (Maximum
   Transmission Unit) testing, pseudonode creation, and BFD (Bi-
   Directional Forwarding Detection) session bootstrapping in connection
   with adjacency. State diagrams are included where appropriate.  This
   document obsoletes RFC 6327 and updates RFC 6325.






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