Subject: [AAA-WG]: RE: Few nits in diameter base-08

From: <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2002 11:19:49 +0200

Hi Aki,

Thanks for the nits - I've correct these now.

John

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Niemi Aki (NET/Espoo) 
> Sent: 21 February, 2002 12:15
> To: [email-masked]
> Cc: Loughney John (NRC/Helsinki)
> Subject: Few nits in diameter base-08
> 
> 
> Hi, 
> 
> I was reading through the diameter base protocol -08, and found some
> nits: 
> 
> - page 81: Chapter 8.0, first sentence "Diameter can provide two
> different type of ..." s/type/types 
> 
> - page 81: Chapter 8.0, third paragraph "The Auth-Grace-Period AVP
> contains ... the server will release an state information 
> ..." s/an/all 
> 
> - page 82: first sentence, second line from top "... implies 
> the maximum
> length the session ..." s/length/length of 
> 
> - page 82: Chapter 8.1, first paragraph, third line 
> "...implementations
> that makes use ..." s/makes/make 
> 
> - page 102: Chapter 9.5, third paragraph, 6th line "When the initial
> Accounting-Request is sent for a given session is sent, ..." 
> get rid of
> the first "is sent" 
> 
> Cheers,
> Aki
> 
> 
>