Subject: [AAA-WG]: RE: Evaluation: draft-ietf-aaa-diameter-mobileip - Diameter Mobil e IPv4 Application to Proposed Standard (fwd)

From: Bernard Aboba <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 17 Nov 2002 06:12:02 -0800 (PST)

From: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <[email-masked]>

Nits:
- document diameter-mobileip-13
    - needs IPR section
    - introduction 1st para:
        "an Application of 4" means ???I think you mean "Application-ID" or
        such, no?
    - sect 9.7 referes to sect 1.7, which should be sect 1.8 I think
    - [KEYWORDS] reference has been decided to be a normative reference