Subject: [AAA-WG]: FW: IESG evaluation and IETF Last Calll - Diameter Credit Control - Thomas Narten's DISCUSS

From: <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 3 Aug 2004 19:55:46 +0300

These are Thomas's comments - we will udpate the draft accordingly.

Discuss:
[2004-06-24] > 12.1 Application Identifier  
>    
>    This specification assigns the value XXX [IANA please fill in XXX 
>    (suggested value 4) and remove this note] to the Application 
>    Identifier namespace defined in [DIAMBASE]. See section 1.3 for
>    more information.  

Please provide the name of the application identifier.

> 12.3 AVP Codes  
>      
>    This specification assigns the values XXX - YYY [IANA please fill in 
>    XXX, YYY (suggested values 411, 457) and remove this note] from the 
>    AVP code namespace defined in [DIAMBASE] See section 8 for the 
>    assignment of the namespace in this specification.  

would be good to include a table with all the needed TBDs, refering to
the section where each is defined.

> 12.4 Result-Code AVP Values  

ditto.

> 12.5 CC-Request-Type AVP 
>    
>    As defined in section 8.3, the CC-Request-Type AVP defines the values 
>    X1-X3 [IANA please fill in X1-X3 (suggested value 1, 3) and remove 
>    this note]. All remaining values are available for assignment via 
>    Designated Expert [IANA]. 

Better:    

  12.5 CC-Request-Type AVP 
    
  As defined in section 8.3, the CC-Request-Type AVP includes an Enumerated
  type  value. IANA is to create and maintain  a namespace for this
  AVP. [IANA please fill in X1-X3 (suggested value 1, 3) and remove 
  this note]. All remaining values are available for assignment via 
  Designated Expert [IANA]. 

i.e., make it clear that this is a name space that IANA must create
and maintain.

Similar comments    apply to other subsections.

BTW, IANA seemed to have raised similar issues in mail on June 15.

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From IANA:
 Date and Time: 2004-06-15, 14:8:59 
 Version: 05 
 Commented by: Michelle Cotton 
 State before Comment: In Last Call 
 State after Comment: In Last Call 
 Comment: IANA Last Call Comments:
 Section 12.1
 The name of the application identifier to be assigned should be
 included in this section.

 Sction 12.2
 The name of the command code to be assigned should be
 included in this section.

 Section 12.3
 We will use section 8 as the guide for assigning
 AVP Codes (total values = 50)

 Section 12.4
 We will use section 9 as the guide for assigning
 Result-Code AVP Values (total values = 5).

 Sections 12.5-12.18
 We will create sub-registries for AVP Specific Values