Subject: Re: [apps-discuss] Apps Dir review for: draft-daboo-webdav-sync-06

From: Cyrus Daboo <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 02 Jan 2012 13:42:04 -0500

Hi Salvatore,
Thank you for your review. Comments inline:

--On December 18, 2011 9:33:58 PM +0200 Salvatore Loreto 
<[email-masked]> wrote:

> Minor Issues:
>
>
> Abstract:
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>
>     expand the WebDAV acronym on the first use.

Fixed for -07.

>    Preconditions:
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>       (DAV:valid-sync-token): The DAV:sync-token element value MUST be a
>       valid token previously returned by the server.
>
>
> please clarify that the token is collection specific, so it needs to be
> originated
>  from the same collection.

Fixed in -07. Now reads:

    The DAV:sync-token element value MUST be a valid token previously
    returned by the server for the collection targeted by the request-URI.

> 	   <!ELEMENT multistatus (DAV:response*, DAV:responsedescription?,
> 	                          sync-token?) >
>
>
>
>
> remove the DAV: prefix.

Fixed in -07.

>
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> Nits:
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> References:
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> - draft-ietf-vcarddav-carddav has been published as RFC 6352

Fixed in -07.

>  - the nits tools also report the following error:
>            Downref: Normative reference to an Experimental RFC: RFC 5842

AD is aware that a Downref occurs.

-- 
Cyrus Daboo