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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Deterministic Networking WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Deterministic Networking Architecture
        Authors         : Norman Finn
                          Pascal Thubert
                          BalÃ¡zs Varga
                          JÃ¡nos Farkas
	Filename        : draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-07.txt
	Pages           : 41
	Date            : 2018-08-03

Abstract:
   Deterministic Networking (DetNet) provides a capability to carry
   specified unicast or multicast data flows for real-time applications
   with extremely low data loss rates and bounded latency.  Techniques
   used include: 1) reserving data plane resources for individual (or
   aggregated) DetNet flows in some or all of the intermediate nodes
   (e.g., bridges or routers) along the path of the flow; 2) providing
   explicit routes for DetNet flows that do not immediately change with
   the network topology; and 3) distributing data from DetNet flow
   packets over time and/or space to ensure delivery of each packet's
   data in spite of the loss of a path.


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Hi,

We have updated the architecture draft to resolve the extended WGLC 
comments. The current revision is v07: 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-07.

All WGLC comments have been addressed; most of them can be found below. 
Some further nits have been also resolved.

The main changes:

1)
Based on the last discussion item below, a new sentence has been added 
to congestion protection in section 3.1, where it is first described:
"Note that congestion
protection provided via congestion detection and notification is
explicitly excluded from consideration in DetNet, as it serves a
different set of applications."

(Note that throttling/throttled has been already part of the text, there 
are three occurrences.)

2)
Based on the discussion below, the following introductory text has been 
added to section 4.1:
"DetNet functionality (Section 3) is implemented in two adjacent
layers in the protocol stack: the DetNet service layer and the DetNet
transport layer. The DetNet service layer provides DetNet service,
e.g., service protection, to higher layers in the protocol stack and
applications. The DetNet transport layer supports DetNet service in
the underlying network, e.g., by providing explicit routes and
congestion protection to DetNet flows."

Consequently, the definition of DetNet service layer has been updated to:
"The layer at which A DetNet service, e.g., service protection
is provided."

3)
Based on 
https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/detnet/current/msg01577.html, the 
following sentence has been added to the OAM paragraph in section 4.1.1:
"Active and hybrid OAM
methods require additional bandwidth to perform fault management and
performance monitoring of the DetNet domain. OAM may, for instance,
generate special test probes or add OAM information into the data
packet."

4)
Based on the consensus reached at the DetNet session at IETF 102, 
Controller Plane Entity (CPE) has been replaced with Controller Plane 
Function (CPF).

5)
In order to clarify, the last sentence of the introduction has been 
updated to:
"DetNet can
accommodate various time synchronization techniques and profiles that
are defined elsewhere to address the needs of different market
segments."

6)
In order to clarify, the packet loss bullet in section 3.1 has been 
updated to:
"Packet loss ratio, under various assumptions as to the operational
states of the nodes and links."

7)
DetNet t-aware has been updated to:
"A DetNet transport-aware system. It knows about
some TSN functions (e.g., reservation), but not about service
protection."

8)
DetNet s-aware has been updated to:
"DetNet service-aware system. It supplies
sequence numbers, but doesnâ€™t know about zero congestion loss."


Best regards,
JÃ¡nos


On 7/19/2018 2:04 AM, Prof. Diego Dujovne wrote:
> +1
>
> El miÃ©., 18 de jul. de 2018 19:53, Black, David <David.Black@dell.com 
> <mailto:David.Black@dell.com>> escribiÃ³:
>
>     +1, Thanks, --David
>
>     *From:*Lou Berger [mailto:lberger@labn.net <mailto:lberger@labn.net>]
>     *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 6:52 PM
>     *To:* Norman Finn; Janos Farkas; Black, David
>     *Cc:* DetNet WG
>     *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>     draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>     This sounds sensible to me...
>
>     Lou
>
>     ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>     On July 18, 2018 6:47:01 PM Norman Finn
>     <norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com
>     <mailto:norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com>> wrote:
>
>         "Congestion loss protection" is better than "congestion
>         protection".  That's good.
>
>         It's a big change, and makes the document unnecessarily
>         wordy.  That's bad.
>
>         I would use "congestion protection" but explain somewhere that
>         we are not talking about source throttling.
>
>         And if adding that explanation is difficult or controversial,
>         I would stick with "congestion protection".
>
>         -- Norm
>
>         ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>         *From:*detnet [detnet-bounces@ietf.org
>         <mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org>] on behalf of Janos Farkas
>         [Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com <mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com>]
>         *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 2:26 PM
>         *To:* Black, David
>         *Cc:* DetNet WG
>         *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>         Both â€œcongestion protectionâ€� and â€œcongestion loss protectionâ€�
>         work for me.
>
>         Note that the architecture document is quite populated with
>         the term â€œcongestion protectionâ€�. I do not know the other
>         documents by heart.
>
>         So it would be a bit of a change..
>
>         Iâ€™d like to have the groupâ€™s opinion before making such a
>         change, e.g., any objections?
>
>         Thanks,
>
>         Janos
>
>         *From:*Black, David <David.Black@dell.com
>         <mailto:David.Black@dell.com>>
>         *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 8:19 PM
>         *To:* Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com
>         <mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com>>
>         *Cc:* DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>>
>         *Subject:* RE: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>         Hi Janos,
>
>         That text works nicely.  In briefly talking to Lou, a related
>         suggestion surfaced: â€œcongestion protectionâ€� -> â€œcongestion
>         loss protectionâ€� where possible (may need to be abbreviated in
>         the Figure) .
>
>         This change would make it clearer that the primary focus is
>         protection from losses caused by congestion as opposed to
>         protection from all congestion. DetNet should be able to
>         tolerate some modest congestion (e.g., in nodes that donâ€™t
>         have reserved DetNet resources) as long as delivery is
>         reliable and timely.
>
>         Thanks, --David
>
>         *From:*Janos Farkas [mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com]
>         *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 11:45 AM
>         *To:* Black, David
>         *Cc:* DetNet WG
>         *Subject:* RE: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>         Hi David,
>
>         This implies updating the definition of the DetNet service
>         layer, e.g., to:
>
>         DetNet service layer
>
>         The layer at which A DetNet Service, e.g., service protection
>         is provided.
>
>         The definition of the DetNet transport layer remains the same:
>
>         DetNet transport layer
>
>         The layer that optionally provides congestion protection for
>
>         DetNet flows over paths provided by the underlying network.
>
>         Regards,
>
>         Janos
>
>         *From:*Black, David <David.Black@dell.com
>         <mailto:David.Black@dell.com>>
>         *Sent:* Monday, July 16, 2018 3:21 PM
>         *To:* Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com
>         <mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com>>
>         *Cc:* DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>>
>         *Subject:* RE: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>         Donâ€™t use â€œcongestion protectionâ€� in the definitions for both
>         levels.
>
>         Thanks, --David
>
>         *From:*JÃ¡nos Farkas [mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com]
>         *Sent:* Sunday, July 15, 2018 10:43 PM
>         *To:* Black, David
>         *Cc:* DetNet WG
>         *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>         Thank you David!
>
>         I think we are set. :-)
>
>         You got a point, we should update
>         "DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet Service,
>         such as congestion or service protection is provided."
>         to
>         "DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet Service,
>         such as congestion protection and/or service protection is
>         provided."
>         in the definitions as well to make it clear.
>
>         Thanks,
>         Janos
>
>         On 7/16/2018 3:03 AM, Black, David wrote:
>
>             Moving the only two open items to the top â€¦
>
>             -- Section 4
>
>             > We could add some introductory text to 4.1 or 4.1.1, for
>             instance:
>             > The functionality needed for DetNet (Section 3) are
>             implemented in the DetNet layer which comprises the DetNet
>             service layer and the DetNet transport layer.
>
>             > The DetNet service layer functions rely on flow
>             identification and sequencing. The DetNet transport layer
>             function may rely on flow identification.
>             >
>             > What do you think?
>
>             I prefer functional (what it does) characterization to
>             mechanistic (how it works) characterization in an
>             overview, e.g., excerpting from what I originally wrote:
>
>             Â·The DetNet Service layer provides timely reliable
>             in-order DetNet flow delivery to applications that use DetNet.
>
>             Â·The DetNet Transport layer insulates DetNet flows from
>             interference by network mechanisms, primarily queuing and
>             routing
>
>             I understand the principle.
>
>             What about just copying the two definitions here:
>             DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet
>             Service, such as congestion or service protection is provided.
>             DetNet transport layer optionally provides congestion
>             protection for DetNet flows over paths provided by the
>             underlying network.
>
>             David> Yes, that works, although I donâ€™t think
>             â€œcongestionâ€� was meant to be included in the first
>             definition â€¦
>
>                Many real-time networks rely on physical rings or
>             chains of two-port
>
>                devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol.
>
>             How does a â€œring control protocolâ€� control â€œchainsâ€�? 
>             Suggest: â€œring control protocolâ€� -> â€œcontrol protocolâ€�
>
>             Also, are paired chains between common endpoints intended,
>             or a more general notion of chains?
>
>             This text refers to typical factory deployment, which is
>             chain or ring..
>             It seems better to keep â€œring control protocolâ€� because
>             they are often very different from generic control
>             protocols applicable to mesh networks.
>
>             Would flipping chain and ring resolve your concern?
>
>                Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or
>             rings of two-port
>
>                devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol.
>
>             */[David>] /*It feels like â€œring control protocolâ€� is an
>             important phrase to retain. In the original text, would it
>             be reasonable to add â€œ(applies to both rings and chains)â€�
>             to the end of the sentence?
>
>             Well, I guess the point is that there are many specific
>             ring protocols, but we are looking for a generic solution.
>             What about deleting "chains" from the sentence?
>
>             David> Yes, if the sentence is all about rings, itâ€™s clear.
>
>             Thanks, --David
>
>             *From:*JÃ¡nos Farkas [mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com]
>             *Sent:* Sunday, July 15, 2018 7:25 PM
>             *To:* Black, David
>             *Cc:* DetNet WG
>             *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>             draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>             Hi David,
>
>             Please see in-line.
>
>             Thank you!
>             Janos
>
>             On 7/6/2018 11:50 PM, Black, David wrote:
>
>                 -- Bridged path definition
>
>                 >  Or should we do something else?
>
>                 > There is only one occurrence of "bridged path" in the
>                 text in brackets.
>
>                 That sounds like a better suggestion â€“ change that
>                 occurrence and remove the definition of â€œbridged pathâ€�
>                 from the draft.  That occurrence is in Section 4.1.1:
>
>                 Congestion protection
>
>                 The DetNet transport layer provides congestion protection.
>
>                 See Section 4.5.  The actual queuing and shaping
>                 mechanisms
>
>                 are typically provided by underlying subnet layers,
>                 these can
>
>                 be closely associated with the means of providing
>                 paths for
>
>                           DetNet flows (e.g., MPLS LSPs or bridged
>                 paths), the path and
>
>                 the congestion protection are conflated in this figure.
>
>                 Perhaps: (e.g., MPLS LSPs or bridged paths) -> (MPLS
>                 LSPs or other network paths)
>
>                 or just delete the entire parenthetical example.
>
>             OK. Let's just delete the entire parenthetical example.
>
>                 -- Section 4
>
>                 > We could add some introductory text to 4.1 or 4.1.1,
>                 for instance:
>                 > The functionality needed for DetNet (Section 3) are
>                 implemented in the DetNet layer which comprises the
>                 DetNet service layer and the DetNet transport layer.
>
>                 > The DetNet service layer functions rely on flow
>                 identification and sequencing. The DetNet transport
>                 layer function may rely on flow identification.
>                 >
>                 > What do you think?
>
>                 I prefer functional (what it does) characterization to
>                 mechanistic (how it works) characterization in an
>                 overview, e.g., excerpting from what I originally wrote:
>
>                   * The DetNet Service layer provides timely reliable
>                     in-order DetNet flow delivery to applications that
>                     use DetNet.
>                   * The DetNet Transport layer insulates DetNet flows
>                     from interference by network mechanisms, primarily
>                     queuing and routing
>
>             I understand the principle.
>
>             What about just copying the two definitions here:
>             DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet
>             Service, such as congestion or service protection is provided.
>             DetNet transport layer optionally provides congestion
>             protection for DetNet flows over paths provided by the
>             underlying network.
>
>
>                 > Should we also rearrange, e.g., indent the text after
>                 Figure 2 such that
>                 > Packet sequencing, Duplicate elimination, Flow
>                 replication, Flow merging, Packet encoding, and Packet
>                 decoding get under Service layer
>                 > and
>                 > Congestion protection and Explicit routes get under
>                 Transport layer?
>
>                 No, I donâ€™t think thatâ€™s necessary â€“ Figure 2 provides
>                 sufficient structure.
>
>             OK.
>
>                 Plus a few more minor comments inline â€¦
>
>                 Thanks, --David
>
>                 *From:*JÃ¡nos Farkas [mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com]
>                 *Sent:* Wednesday, July 4, 2018 2:15 PM
>                 *To:* Black, David
>                 *Cc:* DetNet WG
>                 *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>                 draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>                 Hi David,
>
>                 Thank you very much for your review and comments!
>
>                 Please see in-line.
>
>                 On 6/29/2018 4:10 PM, Black, David wrote:
>
>                     The -06 version of this draft is much improved
>                     over the -05 version â€“ lots of diligent work by
>                     the authors is evident and appreciated.
>
>                     I have two minor content concerns and some smaller
>                     editorial items.
>
>                     ** Content
>
>                     -- Section 2.2
>
>                     The definition of â€œbridged pathâ€� looks like a
>                     definition of â€œbridged forwardingâ€� â€“ the
>                     definition needs to encompass the notion of a path
>                     that involves more than one bridge.
>
>                        bridged path
>
>                                A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the
>                     destination MAC
>
>                                address to select the outbound port
>                     hence the path for a
>
>                                frame.
>
>                 You are right, it looks like the emphasis is on bridge
>                 forwarding rather than path.
>                 However, the superposition of the outbound ports
>                 provides a path, which was tried to be captured by
>                 "hence the path".
>                 The idea was to keep it simple not dive into the
>                 details, which are not necessary in this document.
>
>                 Would it be good to update to:
>
>                    bridged path
>
>                            A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the
>                 destination MAC
>
>                            address to select the outbound port. The
>                 superposition
>
>                            of the outbound ports is the path for a frame.
>
>                 ?
>
>                 Or should we do something else?
>                 There is only one occurrence of "bridged path" in the
>                 text in brackets.
>
>                     -- Section 4
>
>                     Figure 2 in Section 4.1.1 introduces the Detnet
>                     service and transport layers.   The associated
>                     text quickly dives into explaining the
>                     functionality in those layers, but it would be
>                     helpful to start with an initial high level
>                     description of each of those layers that helps
>                     motivate their separation.  It appears that:
>
>                     - The DetNet Service layer provides timely
>                     reliable in-order DetNet flow delivery to
>                     applications that use DetNet.   A DetNet flow at
>                     the top of the DetNet Service layer may or may not
>                     be a compound flow at the bottom of that layer.
>
>                     - The DetNet Transport layer insulates DetNet
>                     flows (at the bottom of the DetNet Service layer)
>                     from interference by network mechanisms, primarily
>                     queuing and routing, where congestion is an
>                     indication of queueing interference.  A DetNet
>                     flow at the top of the DetNet Transport layer may
>                     or may not be a member flow that is part of a
>                     compound flow, depending on what is done in the
>                     DetNet Service layer.
>
>
>                 You are right, section 4 jumps into the details
>                 without much of an introduction. I guess we had a kind
>                 of chicken and egg problem here. Figure 4 provides a
>                 higher level view than Figure 2. However, Figure 4
>                 captures different aspects, dives into the details of
>                 data plane options. So, it seems better to keep the order.
>
>                 We could add some introductory text to 4.1 or 4.1.1,
>                 for instance:
>                 The functionality needed for DetNet (Section 3) are
>                 implemented in the DetNet layer which comprises the
>                 DetNet service layer and the DetNet transport layer.
>                 The DetNet service layer functions rely on flow
>                 identification and sequencing. The DetNet transport
>                 layer function may rely on flow identification.
>
>                 What do you think?
>
>                 Should we also rearrange, e.g., indent the text after
>                 Figure 2 such that
>                 Packet sequencing, Duplicate elimination, Flow
>                 replication, Flow merging, Packet encoding, and Packet
>                 decoding get under Service layer
>                 and
>                 Congestion protection and Explicit routes get under
>                 Transport layer?
>
>                     Thereâ€™s a related paragraph of text between
>                     Figures 3 and 4 in Section 4.1.2, but it doesnâ€™t
>                     provide useful intuition about which functionality
>                     belongs in which layer.
>
>                     ** Editorial
>
>                     -- Section 2.1
>
>                     â€œexpectedâ€� seems off in the definition of reservation:
>
>                     reservation
>
>                     The set of resources allocated between a source
>                     and one or
>
>                     more destinations through transit nodes and subnets
>
>                     associated with a DetNet flow, to provide the
>                     expected DetNet
>
>                     Service.
>
>                     Suggest either â€œto provide the provisioned DetNet
>                     Service to that flowâ€�
>
>                 I like this one, will update to this one.
>
>                     or â€œto provide the specified DetNet Service to
>                     that flow.â€�
>
>                     -- Section 3.1
>
>                        o  An upper bound on out-of-order packet
>                     delivery.  It is worth
>
>                           noting that some DetNet applications are
>                     unable to tolerate any
>
>                           out-of-order delivery.
>
>                     Is that a sequence bound or a time bound or both?
>                     I suspect that a sequence bound (maximum degree of
>                     reordering in a flow, independent of flow rate)
>                     was intended.  An analogous clarification would be
>                     helpful in section 3.2.2.1 .
>
>                 It is intentionally kept high level in the
>                 architecture draft. Details are to be provided by the
>                 flow information model draft. Please see my previous
>                 mail:
>                 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/detnet/AWG2eemg_AWsvF2FwtREyd_xtC8.
>
>                 */[David>] /*OK.
>
>                     -- Section 3.2.3
>
>                     I donâ€™t understand â€œdefinedâ€� in:
>
>                        Even the use of
>
>                        redundant paths through a network defined,
>                     e.g., by [RFC6372] do not
>
>                        eliminate the chances of packet loss.
>
>                     Was â€œe.g., as defined by [RFC6372],â€� intended?
>
>                 Yes, this was the intention, will update to this one.
>
>                        Many real-time networks rely on physical rings
>                     or chains of two-port
>
>                        devices, with a relatively simple ring control
>                     protocol.
>
>                     How does a â€œring control protocolâ€� control
>                     â€œchainsâ€�?  Suggest: â€œring control protocolâ€� ->
>                     â€œcontrol protocolâ€�
>
>                     Also, are paired chains between common endpoints
>                     intended, or a more general notion of chains?
>
>                 This text refers to typical factory deployment, which
>                 is chain or ring.
>                 It seems better to keep â€œring control protocolâ€�
>                 because they are often very different from generic
>                 control protocols applicable to mesh networks.
>
>                 Would flipping chain and ring resolve your concern?
>
>                    Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or
>                 rings of two-port
>
>                    devices, with a relatively simple ring control
>                 protocol.
>
>                     */[David>] /*It feels like â€œring control protocolâ€�
>                     is an important phrase to retain.   In the
>                     original text, would it be reasonable to add
>                     â€œ(applies to both rings and chains)â€� to the end of
>                     the sentence?
>
>             Well, I guess the point is that there are many specific
>             ring protocols, but we are looking for a generic solution.
>             What about deleting "chains" from the sentence?
>
>                        Explicit routes can be established various ways,
>
>                     established various -> established in various
>
>                 OK.
>
>                        This is
>
>                        irrespective of the distribution method used,
>                     also applies to service
>
>                        protection over explicit routes.
>
>                     used, also -> used, and also
>
>                 OK.
>
>                     -- Figure 5 (Section 4.1.3)
>
>                     The UNI acronym is introduced without expansion or
>                     definition â€“ please correct that, e.g., by
>                     defining UNI in Section 2.1.
>
>                 DetNet-UNI is there among the definitions. It seems
>                 enough to me.
>
>                 */[David>] /*Thatâ€™s fine â€“ I overlooked that
>                 definition, sorry.
>
>                     -- Figure 9 (Section 4.7.2)
>
>                     I think I understand whatâ€™s going on, but the use
>                     of â€œadd/removeâ€� in the figure should be explained
>                     in associated text.
>
>                 What about updating the sentence above Figure 9 to:
>                 A packet with corresponding Flow-IDs is illustrated in
>                 Figure 9, which also indicates where Flow-ID can be
>                 added or removed.
>
>                 */[David>] /*Sure, with one minor edit: â€œwhere
>                 Flow-IDâ€� -> â€œwhere each Flow-IDâ€�
>
>             OK.
>
>                     Thanks, --David
>
>
>                 Thank you!
>                 Janos
>
>                     *From:*detnet [mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org] *On
>                     Behalf Of *JÃ¡nos Farkas
>                     *Sent:* Thursday, June 28, 2018 9:09 PM
>                     *To:* Lou Berger; Stewart Bryant; detnet@ietf.org
>                     <mailto:detnet@ietf.org> >> DetNet WG
>                     *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>                     draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>
>                     Dear all,
>
>                     Off-line discussions among Lou, Stewart, and
>                     authors followed the discussions to properly
>                     address the WGLC comments, including the detailed
>                     comments.
>
>                     A new revision of the draft has been uploaded:
>                     draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-06.
>
>                     In addition to the changes already described in
>                     this thread, the following bigger changes have
>                     been made to the draft:
>
>
>                     *Section 2.1 Terms used in this document*
>
>                     Some definitions refined as suggested by the
>                     detailed comments
>
>                     New definitions have been added:
>
>                        "allocation
>                                Resources are dedicated to support a
>                     DetNet flow.  Depending
>                                on an implementation, the resource may
>                     be reused by non-
>                                DetNet flows when it is not used by the
>                     DetNet flow.
>
>
>                        PEF     A Packet Elimination Function (PEF)
>                     eliminates duplicate
>                                copies of packets to prevent excess
>                     packets flooding the
>                                network or duplicate packets being sent
>                     out of the DetNet
>                                domain.  PEF can be implemented by an
>                     edge node, a relay
>                                node, or an end system.
>
>                       PRF     A Packet Replication Function (PRF)
>                     replicates DetNet flow
>                                packets and forwards them to one or
>                     more next hops in the
>                                DetNet domain.  The number of packet
>                     copies sent to each next
>                                hop is a DetNet flow specific parameter
>                     at the node doing the
>                                replication. PRF can be implemented by
>                     an edge node, a relay
>                                node, or an end system.
>
>                        PREOF   Collective name for Packet Replication,
>                     Elimination, and
>                                Ordering Functions.
>
>                        POF     A Packet Ordering Function (POF)
>                     re-orders packets within a
>                                DetNet flow that are received out of
>                     order.  This function
>                                can be implemented by an edge node, a
>                     relay node, or an end
>                                system.
>
>                       DetNet service proxy
>                                Maps between App-flows and DetNet flows.
>
>                        bridged path
>                                A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the
>                     destination MAC
>                                address to select the outbound port
>                     hence the path for a
>                                frame."
>
>
>                     *Section 3.1 Primary goals defining the DetNet QoS*
>
>                     A new QoS aspect has been added:
>                        "o  An upper bound on out-of-order packet
>                     delivery.  It is worth
>                           noting that some DetNet applications are
>                     unable to tolerate any
>                           out-of-order delivery."
>
>
>                     The 3rd paragraph on loss on page 8 after the
>                     bullet list has been extended to:
>                        "After congestion, the most important
>                     contributions to packet loss are
>                        typically from random media errors and
>                     equipment failures. Service
>                        protection is the name for the mechanisms used
>                     by DetNet to address
>                        these losses.  The mechanisms employed are
>                     constrained by the
>                        requirement to meet the users' latency
>                     requirements.  Packet
>                        replication and elimination (Section 3.2.2) and
>                     packet encoding
>                        (Section 3.2.2.3) are described in this
>                     document to provide service
>                        protection; others may be found.  For instance,
>                     packet encoding can
>                        be used to provide service protection against
>                     random media errors,
>                        packet replication and elimination can be used
>                     to provide service
>                        protection against equipment failures. This
>                     mechanism distributes
>                        the contents of DetNet flows over multiple
>                     paths in time and/or
>                        space, so that the loss of some of the paths
>                     does need not cause the
>                        loss of any packets."
>
>
>                     *3.2.2.  Service Protection*
>
>                     Service protection is used as a more generic term.
>                     Introductory text added:
>                        "Service protection aims to mitigate or
>                     eliminate packet loss due to
>                        equipment failures, random media and/or memory
>                     faults.  These types
>                        of packet loss can be greatly reduced by
>                     spreading the data over
>                        multiple disjoint forwarding paths. Various
>                     service protection
>                        methods are described in [RFC6372], e.g., 1+1
>                     linear protection.
>                        This section describes the functional details
>                     of an additional method
>                        in Section 3.2.2.2, which can be implemented as
>                     described in
>                        Section 3.2.2.3 or as specified in
>                     [I-D.ietf-detnet-dp-sol-mpls] in
>                        order to provide 1+n hitless protection.  The
>                     appropriate service
>                        protection mechanism depends on the scenario
>                     and the requirements."
>
>
>                     New sub-section added:
>
>                     "3.2.2.1.  In-Order Delivery
>
>                        Out-of-order packet delivery can be a side
>                     effect of service
>                        protection.  Packets delivered out-of-order
>                     impact the amount of
>                        buffering needed at the destination to properly
>                     process the received
>                        data.  Such packets also influence the jitter
>                     of a flow.  The DetNet
>                        service includes maximum allowed misordering as
>                     a constraint.  Zero
>                        misordering would be a valid service constraint
>                     to reflect that the
>                        end system(s) of the flow cannot tolerate any
>                     out-of-order delivery.
>                        Service protection may provide a mechanism to
>                     support in-order
>                        delivery."
>
>
>                     *3.2.2.2. Packet Replication and Elimination*
>
>                     New bullet added as the last one:
>                        "o  The Packet Ordering Function (POF) uses the
>                     sequencing information
>                           to re-order a DetNet flow's packets that are
>                     received out of
>                           order."
>
>                     New sentence added after the bullet list:
>                     "The order in which a node applies the PEF and the
>                     PRF to a DetNet
>                     flow is implementation specific."
>
>                     2nd paragraph after the bullet list has been
>                     updated to:
>                     "Some service protection mechanisms rely on
>                     switching from one flow to
>                        another when a failure of a flow is detected. 
>                     Contrarily, packet
>                        replication and elimination combines the DetNet
>                     member flows sent
>                        along multiple different paths, and performs a
>                     packet-by-packet
>                        selection of which to discard, e.g., based on
>                     sequencing information."
>
>
>                     *3.2.3.  Explicit routes*
>
>                     Out-of-order aspect added to the first paragraph,
>                     which is about distributed routing:
>                     "Furthermore, out-of-order
>                     packet delivery can be a side effect of route
>                     changes."
>
>                     New sentence added to the 3rd paragraph:
>                     "Explicit routes can be established various
>                     ways, e.g., with RSVP-TE [RFC3209], with Segment
>                     Routing (SR)
>                     [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], via a Software
>                     Defined Networking
>                     approach [RFC7426], with IS-IS [RFC7813], etc."
>
>                     New paragraph added:
>                        "Out-of-order packet delivery can be a side
>                     effect of distributing a
>                        single flow over multiple paths especially when
>                     there is a change
>                        from one path to another when combining the
>                     flow.  This is
>                        irrespective of the distribution method used,
>                     also applies to service
>                        protection over explicit routes.  As described
>                     in Section 3.2.2.1,
>                        out-of-order packets influence the jitter of a
>                     flow and impact the
>                        amount of buffering needed to process the data;
>                     therefore, DetNet
>                        service includes maximum allowed misordering as
>                     a constraint.  The
>                        use of explicit routes helps to provide
>                     in-order delivery because
>                        there is no immediate route change with the
>                     network topology, but the
>                        changes are plannable as they are between the
>                     different explicit
>                        routes."
>
>                     *
>                     4.1.1. Representative Protocol Stack Model*
>
>                     "Explicit routes" have been added to Figure 2 with
>                     the corresponding explanation:
>                      "Explicit routes
>                                The DetNet transport layer provides
>                     mechanisms to ensure that
>                                fixed paths are provided for DetNet
>                     flows.  These explicit
>                                paths avoid the impact of network
>                     convergence."
>
>
>                     Section 4.11 Connected islands vs. networks of v05
>                     has been deleted because it was just a leftover
>                     from early drafts on what DetNet WG should do;
>                     which are covered by the charter anyways.
>
>
>                     References have been cleaned up and brought
>                     up-to-date.
>
>
>                     Refinements have been implemented in the draft
>                     according to Lou's detailed comments. They are not
>                     listed here because they are minor changes.
>
>
>                     Best regards,
>                     Janos
>
>                     On 6/12/2018 2:48 PM, Lou Berger wrote:
>
>
>                         BalÃ¡zs,
>
>                         Thanks for the response -- please see below.
>
>                         ----------
>                         On June 12, 2018 4:07:35 AM BalÃ¡zs Varga A
>                         <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
>                         <mailto:balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> wrote:
>
>                             Hi Lou, Thanks for the comments. See
>                             reactions inline. Document update in
>                             progress. Cheers Bala'zs
>
>                             -----Original Message-----
>                             From: detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org>
>                             <mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf
>                             Of Lou Berger
>                             Sent: 2018. jÃºnius 1. 22:42
>                             To: DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org>
>                             <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>;
>                             draft-ietf-detnet-architecture@ietf.org
>                             <mailto:draft-ietf-detnet-architecture@ietf.org>
>
>                             Subject: [Detnet] Promised comments on
>                             draft-ietf-detnet-architecture
>
>                             Hi,
>
>                                  I have a number of high level
>                             comments on the document that I'd like to
>                              raise below.  I also have a number of
>                             more editorial/specific comments that  I'd
>                             like to review directly with the authors
>                             and then have them report back  on changes
>                             -- if any turn out to be more substantive
>                             discussions from the  author's
>                             perspective, I'll raise these on the list
>                             separately.
>
>                         ...
>
>
>                             - WRT Section 4.4.3, I think the inclusion
>                             of a distributed control plane in the
>                             "Network Plane" is inconsistent with other
>                             functional definitions and conflates where
>                             a function resides from the actual
>                             function and that whether control is
>                             implemented in a fully centralized, fully
>                             distributed or some hybrid form doesn't
>                             fundamentally change  the control
>                             function's role -- therefore I think the
>                             sections 4..4.2 and .3 should be revised
>                             accordingly
>                             [BalÃ¡zs Varga A] Agree in principal. Let's
>                             discuss the details.
>
>                         Okay - I'll work with you off line and we can
>                         report back the results/proposed changes.
>
>                             - In several places it's not clear that
>                             DetNet service is always a L3 service
>                             which is controlled using L3 identifiers,
>                             i.e., IP addresses -- this is true even in
>                             the MPLS service case and the TSN over
>                             MPLS case. I think this is an important
>                             point to be clear on in the document.
>                             [BalÃ¡zs Varga A] I am not sure. DetNet
>                             service is always provided over a L3
>                             network (IP or MPLS), that is fine.
>                             However the service itself can be L2 or
>                             L3. In case of TSN Ethernet frames are
>                             transported, so it is a L2 service. In
>                             case of IP end systems IP packets are
>                             transported so it is a L3 service.
>
>
>                         Humm - While I agree that DetNet is providing
>                         an (enhanced) L2VPN service, it is not itself
>                         providing control or service of L2 devices --
>                         this is TSN's job.  The fact that DetNet is
>                         all about behavior of L3 nodes (i.e., IP and
>                         PW/MPLS) and not L2 nodes (i.e., TSN bridges)
>                         is something the architecture should make
>                         unambiguous.
>
>                         Thanks,
>                         Lou
>
>                             Please let me know what you think.
>
>                             Cheers,
>
>                             Lou
>
>
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>
>                     On 6/12/2018 6:27 PM, Stewart Bryant wrote:
>
>                         Dear Bala'zs
>
>                         Thank you your for your consideration of these
>                         points. I will just pick up a few that need
>                         some further thought:
>
>                             DetNet transit node
>
>                             A node operating at the DetNet transport
>                             layer, that utilizes
>
>                             link layer and/or network layer switching
>                             across multiple
>
>                             links and/or sub-networks to provide paths
>                             for DetNet service
>
>                             layer functions. Optionally provides
>                             congestion protection
>
>                             over those paths. An MPLS LSR is an
>                             example of a DetNet
>
>                             transit node.
>
>                             SB> In that example it would have to be a
>                             DetNet enable/aware LSR. An
>
>                             SB> ordinary LSR would not know anything
>                             about DetNet.
>
>                             [BalÃ¡zs Varga A] No, A DetNet aware LSR
>                             would be a relay node (S-PE).
>
>
>                         I think the confusion is what "DetNet
>                         Transport Layer" means. This
>                         technology touches on Transport Layer in the
>                         L4 sense, and the
>                         Transport Network Layer as in the packet
>                         network that carries
>                         L3 packets.
>
>                         So I think that we need to clarify whether a
>                         DetNet transit node
>                         is an S-PE (i.e. a a transit node in the
>                         DetNet layer), or a P node
>                         (i.e. a transit node that is carrying DetNet
>                         packets but could be
>                         carrying any sort of MPLS packet)
>
>                             ============
>
>                             These three techniques can be applied
>                             independently, giving eight
>
>                             possible combinations, including none (no
>                             DetNet), although some
>
>                             combinations are of wider utility than
>                             others.  This separation keeps
>
>                             the protocol stack coherent and maximizes
>                             interoperability with
>
>                             existing and developing standards in this
>                             (IETF) and other Standards
>
>                             Development Organizations. Some examples
>                             of typical expected
>
>                             combinations:
>
>                             o  Explicit routes plus service protection
>                             are exactly the techniques
>
>                             employed by [HSR-PRP]. Explicit routes are
>                             achieved by limiting
>
>                             the physical topology of the network, and
>                             the sequentialization,
>
>                             replication, and duplicate elimination are
>                             facilitated by packet
>
>                             tags added at the front or the end of
>                             Ethernet frames.
>
>                             SB> ER can be done virtually as well as
>                             physically. RSVP is a type of
>
>                             SB> ER, as is Adj-SID based SR, and we can
>                             design other types.
>
>                             [BalÃ¡zs Varga A] Agree, but these are
>                             examples. Statement is for HSR-PRP.
>
>                         So the question is whether we should expand
>                         the set of examples, particularly
>                         to more accessible ones.
>
>                         ============
>
>                             Packet replication and elimination
>
>                             > > > > > > > > > relay > > > > > > > >
>
>                             > /------------+ R node E +------------\ >
>
>                             > / v + ^               \ >
>
>                             end    R + v | ^                + E end
>
>                             system + v | ^ +   system
>
>                             > \ v + ^               / >
>
>                             > \------------+ R relay E +-----------/ >
>
>                             > > > > > > > > > node > > > > > > > >
>
>                             Figure 1
>
>                             Packet replication and elimination does
>                             not react to and correct
>
>                             failures; it is entirely passive. Thus,
>                             intermittent failures,
>
>                             SB> I think it copes with intermittent
>                             failures OK.
>
>                             [BalÃ¡zs Varga A] Yes, PRF and PEF can
>                             eliminate the effect of such failures. But
>                             text
>
>                             intends to say that it is passive. It is
>                             not reacting to such failures. No change
>                             in text.
>
>
>                         You say that PREF does not correct failures. I
>                         would contend that is exactly
>                         what it does. Sure it does not react but it
>                         does correct, and it does
>                         address intermittent failures.
>
>                             ===========
>
>                             transported between the peer end systems.
>                             Therefore, the following
>
>                             possible types / formats of a DetNet flow
>                             are distinguished in this
>
>                             document:
>
>                             o  App-flow: native format of a DetNet
>                             flow.  It does not contain any
>
>                             DetNet related attributes.
>
>                             o  DetNet-t-flow: specific format of a
>                             DetNet flow. Only requires
>
>                             the congestion / latency features provided
>                             by the Detnet transport
>
>                             layer.
>
>                             o  DetNet-s-flow: specific format of a
>                             DetNet flow. Only requires
>
>                             the replication/elimination feature
>                             ensured by the DetNet service
>
>                             layer.
>
>                             o  DetNet-st-flow: specific format of a
>                             DetNet flow.  It requires
>
>                             both DetNet service layer and DetNet
>                             transport layer functions
>
>                             during forwarding.
>
>                             SB> I find the relisting of these types
>                             confusing. Wheren't they defined
>
>                             SB> in the section above?
>
>                             [BalÃ¡zs Varga A] This is inline with the
>                             previous section " Grouping of end systems ".
>
>                         Surely if we have defined them we never need
>                         to do anything but name them in
>                         later sections. Redefinition is never a good
>                         idea because it often leads to
>                         conflicting definitions.
>
>                             ============
>
>                             [HSR-PRP]  IEC, "High availability
>                             seamless redundancy (HSR) is a
>
>                             further development of the PRP approach,
>                             although HSR
>
>                             functions primarily as a protocol for
>                             creating media
>
>                             redundancy while PRP, as described in the
>                             previous
>
>                             section, creates network redundancy.  PRP
>                             and HSR are both
>
>                             described in the IEC 62439 3 standard.",
>
>                             <http://webstore.iec.ch/webstore/webstore.nsf/
>
>                             artnum/046615!opendocument>.
>
>                             SB> Not available at the time of this
>                             review, but my recollection is
>
>                             SB> that this is not readily available
>                             without paying a large fee.
>
>
>                         If we decide that this is essential as a key
>                         reference, there needs to be
>                         some suitable text, as this will get raised a
>                         number of times between
>                         here an publication as first the directorates
>                         and then the ADs run
>                         into this.
>
>                             ===========
>
>                             [ISA95] ANSI/ISA, "Enterprise-Control
>                             System Integration Part 1:
>
>                             Models and Terminology", 2000,
>
>                             <https://www.isa.org/isa95/>.
>
>                             SB> Should that be 2000, or 2010.
>
>                             SB> Note that this seems to be a very
>                             expensive document to access.
>
>                         You did not comment on the correctness of the
>                         reference.
>
>
>                         Best Regards
>
>                         Stewart
>
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    Hi,<br>
    <br>
    We have updated the architecture draft to resolve the extended WGLC
    comments. The current revision is v07:
    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-07">https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-07</a>.<br>
    <br>
    All WGLC comments have been addressed; most of them can be found
    below. Some further nits have been also resolved.<br>
    <br>
    The main changes:<br>
    <br>
    1)<br>
    Based on the last discussion item below, a new sentence has been
    added to congestion protection in section 3.1, where it is first
    described: <br>
    "Note that congestion<br>
    protection provided via congestion detection and notification is<br>
    explicitly excluded from consideration in DetNet, as it serves a<br>
    different set of applications."<br>
    <br>
    (Note that throttling/throttled has been already part of the text,
    there are three occurrences.)<br>
    <br>
    2)<br>
    Based on the discussion below, the following introductory text has
    been added to section 4.1:<br>
    "DetNet functionality (Section 3) is implemented in two adjacent<br>
    layers in the protocol stack: the DetNet service layer and the
    DetNet<br>
    transport layer. The DetNet service layer provides DetNet service,<br>
    e.g., service protection, to higher layers in the protocol stack and<br>
    applications. The DetNet transport layer supports DetNet service in<br>
    the underlying network, e.g., by providing explicit routes and<br>
    congestion protection to DetNet flows."<br>
    <br>
    Consequently, the definition of DetNet service layer has been
    updated to:<br>
    "The layer at which A DetNet service, e.g., service protection<br>
    is provided."<br>
    <br>
    3)<br>
    Based on
    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/detnet/current/msg01577.html">https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/detnet/current/msg01577.html</a>,
    the following sentence has been added to the OAM paragraph in
    section 4.1.1:<br>
    "Active and hybrid OAM<br>
    methods require additional bandwidth to perform fault management and<br>
    performance monitoring of the DetNet domain. OAM may, for instance,<br>
    generate special test probes or add OAM information into the data<br>
    packet."<br>
    <br>
    4)<br>
    Based on the consensus reached at the DetNet session at IETF 102,
    Controller Plane Entity (CPE) has been replaced with Controller
    Plane Function (CPF).<br>
    <br>
    5)<br>
    In order to clarify, the last sentence of the introduction has been
    updated to:<br>
    "DetNet can<br>
    accommodate various time synchronization techniques and profiles
    that<br>
    are defined elsewhere to address the needs of different market<br>
    segments."<br>
    <br>
    6)<br>
    In order to clarify, the packet loss bullet in section 3.1 has been
    updated to:<br>
    "Packet loss ratio, under various assumptions as to the operational<br>
    states of the nodes and links."<br>
    <br>
    7)<br>
    DetNet t-aware has been updated to:<br>
    "A DetNet transport-aware system. It knows about<br>
    some TSN functions (e.g., reservation), but not about service<br>
    protection."<br>
    <br>
    8)<br>
    DetNet s-aware has been updated to:<br>
    "DetNet service-aware system. It supplies<br>
    sequence numbers, but doesnâ€™t know about zero congestion loss."<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    Best regards,<br>
    JÃ¡nos<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 7/19/2018 2:04 AM, Prof. Diego
      Dujovne wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote
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        <div dir="ltr">El miÃ©., 18 de jul. de 2018 19:53, Black, David
          &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
            href="mailto:David.Black@dell.com">David.Black@dell.com</a>&gt;
          escribiÃ³:<br>
        </div>
        <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0
          .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
          <div bgcolor="white" link="blue" vlink="purple" lang="EN-US">
            <div class="m_-571608442216698499WordSection1">
              <p class="MsoNormal"><a moz-do-not-send="true"
                  name="m_-571608442216698499__MailEndCompose"
                  rel="noreferrer"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">+1,
                  </span></a><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Thanks,
                  --David</span></p>
              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
              <div style="border:none;border-left:solid blue
                1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt">
                <div>
                  <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #e1e1e1
                    1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                        Lou Berger [mailto:<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                          href="mailto:lberger@labn.net" target="_blank"
                          rel="noreferrer">lberger@labn.net</a>]
                        <br>
                        <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2018 6:52 PM<br>
                        <b>To:</b> Norman Finn; Janos Farkas; Black,
                        David<br>
                        <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                        <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
                        draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                  </div>
                </div>
                <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                <div>
                  <div>
                    <p style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                        style="color:black">This sounds sensible to
                        me...</span></p>
                    <p style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                        style="color:black">Lou</span></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:center"
                      align="center">
                      <hr align="center" size="3" width="100%">
                    </div>
                    <p
                      style="margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:8.0pt;margin-left:0in">
                      <span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:black">On
                        July 18, 2018 6:47:01 PM Norman Finn &lt;<a
                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                          href="mailto:norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com"
                          target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com</a>&gt;
                        wrote:</span></p>
                    <blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid
                      gray 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in
                      5.0pt;margin-left:4.5pt;margin-right:0in">
                      <div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">"Congestion
                              loss protection" is better than
                              "congestion protection".Â  That's good.</span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">Â </span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">It's
                              a big change, and makes the document
                              unnecessarily wordy.Â  That's bad.</span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">Â </span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">I
                              would use "congestion protection" but
                              explain somewhere that we are not talking
                              about source throttling.</span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">Â </span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">And
                              if adding that explanation is difficult or
                              controversial, I would stick with
                              "congestion protection".</span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">Â </span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">--
                              Norm</span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                              style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">Â </span></p>
                        </div>
                        <div>
                          <div class="MsoNormal"
                            style="text-align:center" align="center">
                            <hr align="center" size="3" width="100%">
                          </div>
                          <div id="m_-571608442216698499divRpF821151">
                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span
                                  style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">
                                detnet [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                                  href="mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org"
                                  target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">detnet-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
                                on behalf of Janos Farkas [<a
                                  moz-do-not-send="true"
                                  href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                  target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>]<br>
                                <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2018
                                2:26 PM<br>
                                <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Detnet] WG Last
                                Call: draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <div>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Both
                                  â€œcongestion protectionâ€� and
                                  â€œcongestion loss protectionâ€� work for
                                  me.</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Note
                                  that the architecture document is
                                  quite populated with the term
                                  â€œcongestion protectionâ€�. I do not know
                                  the other documents by heart.</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">So
                                  it would be a bit of a change..</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Iâ€™d
                                  like to have the groupâ€™s opinion
                                  before making such a change, e.g., any
                                  objections?</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Thanks,</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Janos</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                              <div>
                                <div style="border:none;border-top:solid
                                  #e1e1e1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in
                                  0in">
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                      Black, David &lt;<a
                                        moz-do-not-send="true"
                                        href="mailto:David.Black@dell.com"
                                        target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">David.Black@dell.com</a>&gt;
                                      <br>
                                      <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18,
                                      2018 8:19 PM<br>
                                      <b>To:</b> Janos Farkas &lt;<a
                                        moz-do-not-send="true"
                                        href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                        target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>&gt;<br>
                                      <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG &lt;<a
                                        moz-do-not-send="true"
                                        href="mailto:detnet@ietf.org"
                                        target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">detnet@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
                                      <b>Subject:</b> RE: [Detnet] WG
                                      Last Call:
                                      draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                </div>
                              </div>
                              <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Hi
                                  Janos,</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Â </span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">That
                                  text works nicely.Â  In briefly talking
                                  to Lou, a related suggestion surfaced:
                                  â€œcongestion protectionâ€� -&gt;
                                  â€œcongestion loss protectionâ€� where
                                  possible (may need to be abbreviated
                                  in the Figure) .</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Â </span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">This
                                  change would make it clearer that the
                                  primary focus is protection from
                                  losses caused by congestion as opposed
                                  to protection from all congestion.Â 
                                  DetNet should be able to tolerate some
                                  modest congestion (e.g., in nodes that
                                  donâ€™t have reserved DetNet resources)
                                  as long as delivery is reliable and
                                  timely.</span></p>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Â </span></p>
                              <div>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Thanks,
                                    --David</span></p>
                              </div>
                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Â </span></p>
                              <div style="border:none;border-left:solid
                                blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt">
                                <div>
                                  <div
                                    style="border:none;border-top:solid
                                    #e1e1e1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in
                                    0in">
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                        Janos Farkas [<a
                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                                          href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          rel="noreferrer">mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>]
                                        <br>
                                        <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18,
                                        2018 11:45 AM<br>
                                        <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                        <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                        <b>Subject:</b> RE: [Detnet] WG
                                        Last Call:
                                        draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                  </div>
                                </div>
                                <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Hi
                                    David,</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">This
                                    implies updating the definition of
                                    the DetNet service layer, e.g., to:</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                  style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                    style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">DetNet
                                    service layer</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                  style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                    style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">The
                                    layer at which A DetNet Service,
                                    e.g., service protection is
                                    provided.</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">The
                                    definition of the DetNet transport
                                    layer remains the same:</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                  style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                    style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">DetNet
                                    transport layer</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                  style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                    style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">The
                                    layer that optionally provides
                                    congestion protection for</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                    style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">DetNet
                                    flows over paths provided by the
                                    underlying network.</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Regards,</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Janos</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Â </span></p>
                                <div>
                                  <div
                                    style="border:none;border-top:solid
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                                    0in">
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                        Black, David &lt;<a
                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                                          href="mailto:David.Black@dell.com"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          rel="noreferrer">David.Black@dell.com</a>&gt;
                                        <br>
                                        <b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16,
                                        2018 3:21 PM<br>
                                        <b>To:</b> Janos Farkas &lt;<a
                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                                          href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          rel="noreferrer">Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>&gt;<br>
                                        <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG &lt;<a
                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                                          href="mailto:detnet@ietf.org"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          rel="noreferrer">detnet@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
                                        <b>Subject:</b> RE: [Detnet] WG
                                        Last Call:
                                        draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                  </div>
                                </div>
                                <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:olive">Donâ€™t
                                    use â€œcongestion protectionâ€� in the
                                    definitions for both levels.</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:olive">Â </span></p>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:olive">Thanks,
                                      --David</span></p>
                                </div>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:olive">Â </span></p>
                                <div
                                  style="border:none;border-left:solid
                                  blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt">
                                  <div>
                                    <div
                                      style="border:none;border-top:solid
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                                      0in 0in">
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                          JÃ¡nos Farkas [<a
                                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com"
                                            target="_blank"
                                            rel="noreferrer">mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com</a>]
                                          <br>
                                          <b>Sent:</b> Sunday, July 15,
                                          2018 10:43 PM<br>
                                          <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                          <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                          <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Detnet]
                                          WG Last Call:
                                          draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                    </div>
                                  </div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Thank
                                    you David!<br>
                                    <br>
                                    I think we are set. :-)<br>
                                    <br>
                                    You got a point, we should update<br>
                                    "DetNet service layer is the layer
                                    at which A DetNet Service, such as
                                    congestion or service protection is
                                    provided."<br>
                                    to<br>
                                    "DetNet service layer is the layer
                                    at which A DetNet Service, such as
                                    congestion protection and/or service
                                    protection is provided."<br>
                                    in the definitions as well to make
                                    it clear.<br>
                                    <br>
                                    Thanks,<br>
                                    Janos</p>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal">On 7/16/2018
                                      3:03 AM, Black, David wrote:</p>
                                  </div>
                                  <blockquote
                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Moving
                                        the only two open items to the
                                        top â€¦</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Â </span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">--
                                        Section 4</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
                                        style="color:#006600">&gt; We
                                        could add some introductory text
                                        to 4.1 or 4.1.1, for instance:</span><br>
                                      &gt; The functionality needed for
                                      DetNet (Section 3) are implemented
                                      in the DetNet layer which
                                      comprises the DetNet service layer
                                      and the DetNet transport layer.</p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in">&gt; The
                                      DetNet service layer functions
                                      rely on flow identification and
                                      sequencing. The DetNet transport
                                      layer function may rely on flow
                                      identification.<br>
                                      &gt;<br>
                                      <span style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                        What do you think?</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
                                        style="color:#006600">Â </span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">I
                                        prefer functional (what it does)
                                        characterization to mechanistic
                                        (how it works) characterization
                                        in an overview, e.g., excerpting
                                        from what I originally wrote:</span></p>
                                    <p
                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoListParagraph"
                                      style="margin-left:1.0in"><span
                                        style="font-family:Symbol">Â·</span><span
                                        style="font-size:7.0pt">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                      </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                        DetNet Service layer provides
                                        timely reliable in-order DetNet
                                        flow delivery to applications
                                        that use DetNet.</span></p>
                                    <p
                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoListParagraph"
                                      style="margin-left:1.0in"><span
                                        style="font-family:Symbol">Â·</span><span
                                        style="font-size:7.0pt">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                      </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                        DetNet Transport layer insulates
                                        DetNet flows from interference
                                        by network mechanisms, primarily
                                        queuing and routing</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in">I
                                      understand the principle.<br>
                                      <br>
                                      What about just copying the two
                                      definitions here:<br>
                                      DetNet service layer is the layer
                                      at which A DetNet Service, such as
                                      congestion or service protection
                                      is provided.<br>
                                      DetNet transport layer optionally
                                      provides congestion protection for
                                      DetNet flows over paths provided
                                      by the underlying network.</p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">David&gt;
                                        Yes, that works, although I
                                        donâ€™t think â€œcongestionâ€� was
                                        meant to be included in the
                                        first definition â€¦</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Â </span></p>
                                    <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">Â Â  Many real-time networks rely on physical rings or chains of two-port</span></pre>
                                    <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">Â Â  devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">How
                                        does a â€œring control protocolâ€�
                                        control â€œchainsâ€�?Â  Suggest:
                                        â€œring control protocolâ€� -&gt;
                                        â€œcontrol protocolâ€�</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Also,
                                        are paired chains between common
                                        endpoints intended, or a more
                                        general notion of chains?</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
                                        style="color:#006600">This text
                                        refers to typical factory
                                        deployment, which is chain or
                                        ring..<br>
                                        It seems better to keep â€œring
                                        control protocolâ€� because they
                                        are often very different from
                                        generic control protocols
                                        applicable to mesh networks.<br>
                                        <br>
                                        Would flipping chain and ring
                                        resolve your concern?</span></p>
                                    <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">Â Â  Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or rings of two-port</span></pre>
                                    <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">Â Â  devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in"><b><i><span
                                            style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                          </span></i></b><span
                                        style="color:#993366">It feels
                                        like â€œring control protocolâ€� is
                                        an important phrase to retain.Â Â 
                                        In the original text, would it
                                        be reasonable to add â€œ(applies
                                        to both rings and chains)â€� to
                                        the end of the sentence?</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-left:.5in">Well, I
                                      guess the point is that there are
                                      many specific ring protocols, but
                                      we are looking for a generic
                                      solution.<br>
                                      What about deleting "chains" from
                                      the sentence?</p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">David&gt;
                                        Yes, if the sentence is all
                                        about rings, itâ€™s clear.</span></p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Â </span></p>
                                    <div>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Thanks,
                                          --David</span></p>
                                    </div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Â </span></p>
                                    <div
                                      style="border:none;border-left:solid
                                      blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in
                                      4.0pt">
                                      <div>
                                        <div
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                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                              JÃ¡nos Farkas [<a
                                                moz-do-not-send="true"
                                                href="mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com"
                                                target="_blank"
                                                rel="noreferrer">mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com</a>]
                                              <br>
                                              <b>Sent:</b> Sunday, July
                                              15, 2018 7:25 PM<br>
                                              <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                              <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                              <b>Subject:</b> Re:
                                              [Detnet] WG Last Call:
                                              draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                        </div>
                                      </div>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Hi
                                        David,<br>
                                        <br>
                                        Please see in-line.<br>
                                        <br>
                                        Thank you!<br>
                                        Janos</p>
                                      <div>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal">On 7/6/2018
                                          11:50 PM, Black, David wrote:</p>
                                      </div>
                                      <blockquote
                                        style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">--
                                            Bridged path definition</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="color:#006600">Â </span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                            Â Or should we do something
                                            else?</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                            style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                            There is only one occurrence
                                            of "bridged path" in the
                                            text in brackets.</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">That
                                            sounds like a better
                                            suggestion â€“ change that
                                            occurrence and remove the
                                            definition of â€œbridged pathâ€�
                                            from the draft.Â  That
                                            occurrence is in Section
                                            4.1.1:</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Â Â 
                                            Congestion protection</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                            The DetNet transport layer
                                            provides congestion
                                            protection.</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                            See Section 4.5.Â  The actual
                                            queuing and shaping
                                            mechanisms</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                            are typically provided by
                                            underlying subnet layers,
                                            these can</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                            be closely associated with
                                            the means of providing paths
                                            for</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â DetNet
                                            flows (e.g., MPLS LSPs or
                                            bridged paths), the path and</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                            the congestion protection
                                            are conflated in this
                                            figure.</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Perhaps:
                                            (e.g., MPLS LSPs or bridged
                                            paths) -&gt; (MPLS LSPs or
                                            other network paths)</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">or
                                            just delete the entire
                                            parenthetical example.</span></p>
                                      </blockquote>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">OK.
                                        Let's just delete the entire
                                        parenthetical example.</p>
                                      <blockquote
                                        style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">--
                                            Section 4</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                            We could add some
                                            introductory text to 4.1 or
                                            4.1.1, for instance:</span><br>
                                          &gt; The functionality needed
                                          for DetNet (Section 3) are
                                          implemented in the DetNet
                                          layer which comprises the
                                          DetNet service layer and the
                                          DetNet transport layer.</p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal">&gt; The
                                          DetNet service layer functions
                                          rely on flow identification
                                          and sequencing. The DetNet
                                          transport layer function may
                                          rely on flow identification.<br>
                                          &gt;<br>
                                          <span style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                            What do you think?</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="color:#006600">Â </span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">I
                                            prefer functional (what it
                                            does) characterization to
                                            mechanistic (how it works)
                                            characterization in an
                                            overview, e.g., excerpting
                                            from what I originally
                                            wrote:</span></p>
                                        <ul style="margin-top:0in"
                                          type="disc">
                                          <li class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                              DetNet Service layer
                                              provides timely reliable
                                              in-order DetNet flow
                                              delivery to applications
                                              that use DetNet.</span></li>
                                          <li class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                              DetNet Transport layer
                                              insulates DetNet flows
                                              from interference by
                                              network mechanisms,
                                              primarily queuing and
                                              routing</span></li>
                                        </ul>
                                      </blockquote>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">I
                                        understand the principle.<br>
                                        <br>
                                        What about just copying the two
                                        definitions here:<br>
                                        DetNet service layer is the
                                        layer at which A DetNet Service,
                                        such as congestion or service
                                        protection is provided.<br>
                                        DetNet transport layer
                                        optionally provides congestion
                                        protection for DetNet flows over
                                        paths provided by the underlying
                                        network.</p>
                                      <blockquote
                                        style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><br>
                                          <span style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                            Should we also rearrange,
                                            e.g., indent the text after
                                            Figure 2 such that
                                            <br>
                                            &gt; Packet sequencing,
                                            Duplicate elimination, Flow
                                            replication, Flow merging,
                                            Packet encoding, and Packet
                                            decoding get under Service
                                            layer<br>
                                            &gt; and<br>
                                            &gt; Congestion protection
                                            and Explicit routes get
                                            under Transport layer?</span></p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                        <div>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">No,
                                              I donâ€™t think thatâ€™s
                                              necessary â€“ Figure 2
                                              provides sufficient
                                              structure.</span></p>
                                        </div>
                                      </blockquote>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">OK.</p>
                                      <blockquote
                                        style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                        <div>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Plus
                                              a few more minor comments
                                              inline â€¦</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Thanks,
                                              --David</span></p>
                                        </div>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Â </span></p>
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                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                                  JÃ¡nos Farkas [<a
                                                    moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com</a>]
                                                  <br>
                                                  <b>Sent:</b>
                                                  Wednesday, July 4,
                                                  2018 2:15 PM<br>
                                                  <b>To:</b> Black,
                                                  David<br>
                                                  <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                                  <b>Subject:</b> Re:
                                                  [Detnet] WG Last Call:
draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                            </div>
                                          </div>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">Hi
                                              David,<br>
                                              <br>
                                              Thank you very much for
                                              your review and comments!<br>
                                              <br>
                                              Please see in-line.</span></p>
                                          <div>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal">On
                                              6/29/2018 4:10 PM, Black,
                                              David wrote:</p>
                                          </div>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                -06 version of this
                                                draft is much improved
                                                over the -05 version â€“
                                                lots of diligent work by
                                                the authors is evident
                                                and appreciated.</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I
                                                have two minor content
                                                concerns and some
                                                smaller editorial items.</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">**
                                                Content</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                Section 2.2</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                definition of â€œbridged
                                                pathâ€� looks like a
                                                definition of â€œbridged
                                                forwardingâ€� â€“ the
                                                definition needs to
                                                encompass the notion of
                                                a path that involves
                                                more than one bridge.</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  bridged path</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the destination MAC</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  address to select the outbound port hence the path for a</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  frame.</span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">You
                                              are right, it looks like
                                              the emphasis is on bridge
                                              forwarding rather than
                                              path.<br>
                                              However, the superposition
                                              of the outbound ports
                                              provides a path, which was
                                              tried to be captured by
                                              "hence the path".<br>
                                              The idea was to keep it
                                              simple not dive into the
                                              details, which are not
                                              necessary in this
                                              document.<br>
                                              <br>
                                              Would it be good to update
                                              to:</span></p>
                                          <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  bridged path</span></pre>
                                          <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the destination MAC</span></pre>
                                          <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  address to select the outbound port. The superposition</span></pre>
                                          <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  of the outbound ports is the path for a frame.</span></pre>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">?<br>
                                              <br>
                                              Or should we do something
                                              else? <br>
                                              There is only one
                                              occurrence of "bridged
                                              path" in the text in
                                              brackets.</span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                Section 4</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Figure
                                                2 in Section 4.1.1
                                                introduces the Detnet
                                                service and transport
                                                layers.Â Â  The associated
                                                text quickly dives into
                                                explaining the
                                                functionality in those
                                                layers, but it would be
                                                helpful to start with an
                                                initial high level
                                                description of each of
                                                those layers that helps
                                                motivate their
                                                separation.Â  It appears
                                                that:</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">-
                                                The DetNet Service layer
                                                provides timely reliable
                                                in-order DetNet flow
                                                delivery to applications
                                                that use DetNet.Â Â  A
                                                DetNet flow at the top
                                                of the DetNet Service
                                                layer may or may not be
                                                a compound flow at the
                                                bottom of that layer.</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">-
                                                The DetNet Transport
                                                layer insulates DetNet
                                                flows (at the bottom of
                                                the DetNet Service
                                                layer) from interference
                                                by network mechanisms,
                                                primarily queuing and
                                                routing, where
                                                congestion is an
                                                indication of queueing
                                                interference.Â  A DetNet
                                                flow at the top of the
                                                DetNet Transport layer
                                                may or may not be a
                                                member flow that is part
                                                of a compound flow,
                                                depending on what is
                                                done in the DetNet
                                                Service layer.</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                            <span style="color:#006600">You
                                              are right, section 4 jumps
                                              into the details without
                                              much of an introduction. I
                                              guess we had a kind of
                                              chicken and egg problem
                                              here. Figure 4 provides a
                                              higher level view than
                                              Figure 2. However, Figure
                                              4 captures different
                                              aspects, dives into the
                                              details of data plane
                                              options. So, it seems
                                              better to keep the order.<br>
                                              <br>
                                              We could add some
                                              introductory text to 4.1
                                              or 4.1.1, for instance:</span><br>
                                            The functionality needed for
                                            DetNet (Section 3) are
                                            implemented in the DetNet
                                            layer which comprises the
                                            DetNet service layer and the
                                            DetNet transport layer. The
                                            DetNet service layer
                                            functions rely on flow
                                            identification and
                                            sequencing. The DetNet
                                            transport layer function may
                                            rely on flow identification.<br>
                                            <br>
                                            <span style="color:#006600">What
                                              do you think?</span><br>
                                            <br>
                                            <span style="color:#006600">Should
                                              we also rearrange, e.g.,
                                              indent the text after
                                              Figure 2 such that
                                              <br>
                                              Packet sequencing,
                                              Duplicate elimination,
                                              Flow replication, Flow
                                              merging, Packet encoding,
                                              and Packet decoding get
                                              under Service layer<br>
                                              and<br>
                                              Congestion protection and
                                              Explicit routes get under
                                              Transport layer?</span><br>
                                            <br>
                                          </p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Thereâ€™s
                                                a related paragraph of
                                                text between Figures 3
                                                and 4 in Section 4.1.2,
                                                but it doesnâ€™t provide
                                                useful intuition about
                                                which functionality
                                                belongs in which layer.</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">**
                                                Editorial</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                Section 2.1</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">â€œexpectedâ€�
                                                seems off in the
                                                definition of
                                                reservation:</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier
                                                New&quot;">Â Â 
                                                reservation</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier
                                                New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                The set of resources
                                                allocated between a
                                                source and one or</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier
                                                New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                more destinations
                                                through transit nodes
                                                and subnets</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier
                                                New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                associated with a DetNet
                                                flow, to provide the
                                                expected DetNet</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier
                                                New&quot;">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                Service.</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Suggest
                                                either â€œto provide the
                                                provisioned DetNet
                                                Service to that flowâ€�
                                              </span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">I
                                              like this one, will update
                                              to this one.</span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">or
                                                â€œto provide the
                                                specified DetNet Service
                                                to that flow.â€�</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                Section 3.1</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  oÂ  An upper bound on out-of-order packet delivery.Â  It is worth</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â  noting that some DetNet applications are unable to tolerate any</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â Â Â Â  out-of-order delivery.</span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Is
                                                that a sequence bound or
                                                a time bound or both?Â Â 
                                                I suspect that a
                                                sequence bound (maximum
                                                degree of reordering in
                                                a flow, independent of
                                                flow rate) was
                                                intended.Â  An analogous
                                                clarification would be
                                                helpful in section
                                                3.2.2.1 .</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">It
                                              is intentionally kept high
                                              level in the architecture
                                              draft. Details are to be
                                              provided by the flow
                                              information model draft.
                                              Please see my previous
                                              mail:
                                              <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/detnet/AWG2eemg_AWsvF2FwtREyd_xtC8"
                                                target="_blank"
                                                rel="noreferrer">
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/detnet/AWG2eemg_AWsvF2FwtREyd_xtC8</a>.</span><br>
                                            <br>
                                            <b><i><span
                                                  style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                                </span></i></b><span
                                              style="color:#993366">OK.</span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                Section 3.2.3</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I
                                                donâ€™t understand
                                                â€œdefinedâ€� in:</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  Even the use of</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  redundant paths through a network defined, e.g., by [RFC6372] do not</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  eliminate the chances of packet loss. </span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Was
                                                â€œe.g., as defined by
                                                [RFC6372],â€� intended?</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">Yes,
                                              this was the intention,
                                              will update to this one.</span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  Many real-time networks rely on physical rings or chains of two-port</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">How
                                                does a â€œring control
                                                protocolâ€� control
                                                â€œchainsâ€�?Â  Suggest:
                                                â€œring control protocolâ€�
                                                -&gt; â€œcontrol protocolâ€�</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Also,
                                                are paired chains
                                                between common endpoints
                                                intended, or a more
                                                general notion of
                                                chains?</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">This
                                              text refers to typical
                                              factory deployment, which
                                              is chain or ring.<br>
                                              It seems better to keep
                                              â€œring control protocolâ€�
                                              because they are often
                                              very different from
                                              generic control protocols
                                              applicable to mesh
                                              networks.<br>
                                              <br>
                                              Would flipping chain and
                                              ring resolve your concern?</span></p>
                                          <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or rings of two-port</span></pre>
                                          <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span
style="color:#993366">[David&gt;] </span></i></b><span
                                                style="color:#993366">It
                                                feels like â€œring control
                                                protocolâ€� is an
                                                important phrase to
                                                retain.Â Â  In the
                                                original text, would it
                                                be reasonable to add
                                                â€œ(applies to both rings
                                                and chains)â€� to the end
                                                of the sentence?</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                        </div>
                                      </blockquote>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Well,
                                        I guess the point is that there
                                        are many specific ring
                                        protocols, but we are looking
                                        for a generic solution.<br>
                                        What about deleting "chains"
                                        from the sentence?</p>
                                      <blockquote
                                        style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                        <div
                                          style="border:none;border-left:solid
                                          blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in
                                          4.0pt">
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  Explicit routes can be established various ways,</span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">established
                                                various -&gt;
                                                established in various</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">OK.</span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  This is</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  irrespective of the distribution method used, also applies to service</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">Â Â  protection over explicit routes. </span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">used,
                                                also -&gt; used, and
                                                also</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">OK.</span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                Figure 5 (Section 4.1.3)</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                UNI acronym is
                                                introduced without
                                                expansion or definition
                                                â€“ please correct that,
                                                e.g., by defining UNI in
                                                Section 2.1.</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">DetNet-UNI
                                              is there among the
                                              definitions. It seems
                                              enough to me.</span><br>
                                            <br>
                                            <b><i><span
                                                  style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                                </span></i></b><span
                                              style="color:#993366">Thatâ€™s
                                              fine â€“ I overlooked that
                                              definition, sorry.</span></p>
                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                Figure 9 (Section 4.7.2)</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I
                                                think I understand
                                                whatâ€™s going on, but the
                                                use of â€œadd/removeâ€� in
                                                the figure should be
                                                explained in associated
                                                text.</span></p>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#009900">What
                                              about updating the
                                              sentence above Figure 9
                                              to:</span><br>
                                            A packet with corresponding
                                            Flow-IDs is illustrated in
                                            Figure 9, which also
                                            indicates where Flow-ID can
                                            be added or removed.<br>
                                            <br>
                                            <b><i><span
                                                  style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                                </span></i></b><span
                                              style="color:#993366">Sure,
                                              with one minor edit:
                                              â€œwhere Flow-IDâ€� -&gt;
                                              â€œwhere each Flow-IDâ€�</span></p>
                                        </div>
                                      </blockquote>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">OK.</p>
                                      <blockquote
                                        style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                        <div
                                          style="border:none;border-left:solid
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                                          <blockquote
                                            style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Â </span></p>
                                            <div>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Thanks,
                                                  --David</span></p>
                                            </div>
                                          </blockquote>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#009900"><br>
                                              Thank you!<br>
                                              Janos</span><br>
                                            <br>
                                          </p>
                                          <blockquote
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                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
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                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                                      detnet [<a
                                                        moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
                                                      <b>On Behalf Of </b>JÃ¡nos
                                                      Farkas<br>
                                                      <b>Sent:</b>
                                                      Thursday, June 28,
                                                      2018 9:09 PM<br>
                                                      <b>To:</b> Lou
                                                      Berger; Stewart
                                                      Bryant; <a
                                                        moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:detnet@ietf.org" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">
                                                        detnet@ietf.org</a>
                                                      &gt;&gt; DetNet WG<br>
                                                      <b>Subject:</b>
                                                      Re: [Detnet] WG
                                                      Last Call:
                                                      draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                                </div>
                                              </div>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Dear
                                                all,<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Off-line discussions
                                                among Lou, Stewart, and
                                                authors followed the
                                                discussions to properly
                                                address the WGLC
                                                comments, including the
                                                detailed comments.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                A new revision of the
                                                draft has been uploaded:
draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-06.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                In addition to the
                                                changes already
                                                described in this
                                                thread, the following
                                                bigger changes have been
                                                made to the draft:<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                <b>Section 2.1 Terms
                                                  used in this document</b><br>
                                                <br>
                                                Some definitions refined
                                                as suggested by the
                                                detailed comments<br>
                                                <br>
                                                New definitions have
                                                been added:<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â Â  "allocation<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  Resources are
                                                dedicated to support a
                                                DetNet flow.Â  Depending<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  on an
                                                implementation, the
                                                resource may be reused
                                                by non-<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  DetNet flows
                                                when it is not used by
                                                the DetNet flow.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â Â  PEFÂ Â Â Â  A Packet
                                                Elimination Function
                                                (PEF) eliminates
                                                duplicate<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  copies of
                                                packets to prevent
                                                excess packets flooding
                                                the<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  network or
                                                duplicate packets being
                                                sent out of the DetNet<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  domain.Â  PEF
                                                can be implemented by an
                                                edge node, a relay<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  node, or an
                                                end system.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â  PRFÂ Â Â Â  A Packet
                                                Replication Function
                                                (PRF) replicates DetNet
                                                flow<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  packets and
                                                forwards them to one or
                                                more next hops in the<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  DetNet
                                                domain.Â  The number of
                                                packet copies sent to
                                                each next<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  hop is a
                                                DetNet flow specific
                                                parameter at the node
                                                doing the<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  replication.Â 
                                                PRF can be implemented
                                                by an edge node, a relay<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  node, or an
                                                end system.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â Â  PREOFÂ Â  Collective
                                                name for Packet
                                                Replication,
                                                Elimination, and<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  Ordering
                                                Functions.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â Â  POFÂ Â Â Â  A Packet
                                                Ordering Function (POF)
                                                re-orders packets within
                                                a<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  DetNet flow
                                                that are received out of
                                                order.Â  This function<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  can be
                                                implemented by an edge
                                                node, a relay node, or
                                                an end<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  system.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â  DetNet service proxy<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  Maps between
                                                App-flows and DetNet
                                                flows.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â Â  bridged path<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  A VLAN bridge
                                                uses the VLAN ID and the
                                                destination MAC<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  address to
                                                select the outbound port
                                                hence the path for a<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  frame."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                <b>Section 3.1 Primary
                                                  goals defining the
                                                  DetNet QoS</b><br>
                                                <br>
                                                A new QoS aspect has
                                                been added:<br>
                                                Â Â  "oÂ  An upper bound on
                                                out-of-order packet
                                                delivery.Â  It is worth<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â  noting that some
                                                DetNet applications are
                                                unable to tolerate any<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â  out-of-order
                                                delivery."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                The 3rd paragraph on
                                                loss on page 8 after the
                                                bullet list has been
                                                extended to:<br>
                                                Â Â  "After congestion,
                                                the most important
                                                contributions to packet
                                                loss are<br>
                                                Â Â  typically from random
                                                media errors and
                                                equipment failures.Â 
                                                Service<br>
                                                Â Â  protection is the
                                                name for the mechanisms
                                                used by DetNet to
                                                address<br>
                                                Â Â  these losses.Â  The
                                                mechanisms employed are
                                                constrained by the<br>
                                                Â Â  requirement to meet
                                                the users' latency
                                                requirements.Â  Packet<br>
                                                Â Â  replication and
                                                elimination (Section
                                                3.2.2) and packet
                                                encoding<br>
                                                Â Â  (Section 3.2.2.3) are
                                                described in this
                                                document to provide
                                                service<br>
                                                Â Â  protection; others
                                                may be found.Â  For
                                                instance, packet
                                                encoding can<br>
                                                Â Â  be used to provide
                                                service protection
                                                against random media
                                                errors,<br>
                                                Â Â  packet replication
                                                and elimination can be
                                                used to provide service<br>
                                                Â Â  protection against
                                                equipment failures.Â 
                                                This mechanism
                                                distributes<br>
                                                Â Â  the contents of
                                                DetNet flows over
                                                multiple paths in time
                                                and/or<br>
                                                Â Â  space, so that the
                                                loss of some of the
                                                paths does need not
                                                cause the<br>
                                                Â Â  loss of any packets."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                <b>3.2.2.Â  Service
                                                  Protection</b><br>
                                                <br>
                                                Service protection is
                                                used as a more generic
                                                term. Introductory text
                                                added:<br>
                                                Â Â  "Service protection
                                                aims to mitigate or
                                                eliminate packet loss
                                                due to<br>
                                                Â Â  equipment failures,
                                                random media and/or
                                                memory faults.Â  These
                                                types<br>
                                                Â Â  of packet loss can be
                                                greatly reduced by
                                                spreading the data over<br>
                                                Â Â  multiple disjoint
                                                forwarding paths.Â 
                                                Various service
                                                protection<br>
                                                Â Â  methods are described
                                                in [RFC6372], e.g., 1+1
                                                linear protection.<br>
                                                Â Â  This section
                                                describes the functional
                                                details of an additional
                                                method<br>
                                                Â Â  in Section 3.2.2.2,
                                                which can be implemented
                                                as described in<br>
                                                Â Â  Section 3.2.2.3 or as
                                                specified in
                                                [I-D.ietf-detnet-dp-sol-mpls]
                                                in<br>
                                                Â Â  order to provide 1+n
                                                hitless protection.Â  The
                                                appropriate service<br>
                                                Â Â  protection mechanism
                                                depends on the scenario
                                                and the requirements."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                New sub-section added:<br>
                                                <br>
                                                "3.2.2.1.Â  In-Order
                                                Delivery<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Â Â  Out-of-order packet
                                                delivery can be a side
                                                effect of service<br>
                                                Â Â  protection.Â  Packets
                                                delivered out-of-order
                                                impact the amount of<br>
                                                Â Â  buffering needed at
                                                the destination to
                                                properly process the
                                                received<br>
                                                Â Â  data.Â  Such packets
                                                also influence the
                                                jitter of a flow.Â  The
                                                DetNet<br>
                                                Â Â  service includes
                                                maximum allowed
                                                misordering as a
                                                constraint.Â  Zero<br>
                                                Â Â  misordering would be
                                                a valid service
                                                constraint to reflect
                                                that the<br>
                                                Â Â  end system(s) of the
                                                flow cannot tolerate any
                                                out-of-order delivery.<br>
                                                Â Â  Service protection
                                                may provide a mechanism
                                                to support in-order<br>
                                                Â Â  delivery."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                <b>3.2.2.2. Packet
                                                  Replication and
                                                  Elimination</b><br>
                                                <br>
                                                New bullet added as the
                                                last one:<br>
                                                Â Â  "oÂ  The Packet
                                                Ordering Function (POF)
                                                uses the sequencing
                                                information<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â  to re-order a
                                                DetNet flow's packets
                                                that are received out of<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â  order."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                New sentence added after
                                                the bullet list: <br>
                                                "The order in which a
                                                node applies the PEF and
                                                the PRF to a DetNet<br>
                                                flow is implementation
                                                specific."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                2nd paragraph after the
                                                bullet list has been
                                                updated to:<br>
                                                "Some service protection
                                                mechanisms rely on
                                                switching from one flow
                                                to<br>
                                                Â Â  another when a
                                                failure of a flow is
                                                detected.Â  Contrarily,
                                                packet<br>
                                                Â Â  replication and
                                                elimination combines the
                                                DetNet member flows sent<br>
                                                Â Â  along multiple
                                                different paths, and
                                                performs a
                                                packet-by-packet<br>
                                                Â Â  selection of which to
                                                discard, e.g., based on
                                                sequencing information."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                <b>3.2.3.Â  Explicit
                                                  routes</b><br>
                                                <br>
                                                Out-of-order aspect
                                                added to the first
                                                paragraph, which is
                                                about distributed
                                                routing:<br>
                                                "Furthermore,
                                                out-of-order<br>
                                                packet delivery can be a
                                                side effect of route
                                                changes."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                New sentence added to
                                                the 3rd paragraph:<br>
                                                "Explicit routes can be
                                                established various<br>
                                                ways, e.g., with RSVP-TE
                                                [RFC3209], with Segment
                                                Routing (SR)<br>
[I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], via a Software Defined Networking<br>
                                                approach [RFC7426], with
                                                IS-IS [RFC7813], etc."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                New paragraph added:<br>
                                                Â Â  "Out-of-order packet
                                                delivery can be a side
                                                effect of distributing a<br>
                                                Â Â  single flow over
                                                multiple paths
                                                especially when there is
                                                a change<br>
                                                Â Â  from one path to
                                                another when combining
                                                the flow.Â  This is<br>
                                                Â Â  irrespective of the
                                                distribution method
                                                used, also applies to
                                                service<br>
                                                Â Â  protection over
                                                explicit routes.Â  As
                                                described in Section
                                                3.2.2.1,<br>
                                                Â Â  out-of-order packets
                                                influence the jitter of
                                                a flow and impact the<br>
                                                Â Â  amount of buffering
                                                needed to process the
                                                data; therefore, DetNet<br>
                                                Â Â  service includes
                                                maximum allowed
                                                misordering as a
                                                constraint.Â  The<br>
                                                Â Â  use of explicit
                                                routes helps to provide
                                                in-order delivery
                                                because<br>
                                                Â Â  there is no immediate
                                                route change with the
                                                network topology, but
                                                the<br>
                                                Â Â  changes are plannable
                                                as they are between the
                                                different explicit<br>
                                                Â Â  routes."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <b><br>
                                                  4.1.1. Representative
                                                  Protocol Stack Model</b><br>
                                                <br>
                                                "Explicit routes" have
                                                been added to Figure 2
                                                with the corresponding
                                                explanation:<br>
                                                Â "Explicit routes<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  The DetNet
                                                transport layer provides
                                                mechanisms to ensure
                                                that<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  fixed paths
                                                are provided for DetNet
                                                flows.Â  These explicit<br>
                                                Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  paths avoid
                                                the impact of network
                                                convergence."<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                Section 4.11 Connected
                                                islands vs. networks of
                                                v05 has been deleted
                                                because it was just a
                                                leftover from early
                                                drafts on what DetNet WG
                                                should do; which are
                                                covered by the charter
                                                anyways.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                References have been
                                                cleaned up and brought
                                                up-to-date.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                Refinements have been
                                                implemented in the draft
                                                according to Lou's
                                                detailed comments. They
                                                are not listed here
                                                because they are minor
                                                changes.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                <br>
                                                Best regards,<br>
                                                Janos</p>
                                              <div>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal">On
                                                  6/12/2018 2:48 PM, Lou
                                                  Berger wrote:</p>
                                              </div>
                                              <blockquote
                                                style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                  BalÃ¡zs, <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Thanks for the
                                                  response -- please see
                                                  below. <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  ---------- <br>
                                                  On June 12, 2018
                                                  4:07:35 AM BalÃ¡zs
                                                  Varga A <a
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href="mailto:balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com" target="_blank"
                                                    rel="noreferrer">
&lt;balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com&gt;</a> wrote: <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                </p>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Hi
                                                    Lou, Thanks for the
                                                    comments. See
                                                    reactions inline.
                                                    Document update in
                                                    progress. Cheers
                                                    Bala'zs
                                                    <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    -----Original
                                                    Message----- <br>
                                                    From: detnet <a
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href="mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">&lt;detnet-bounces@ietf.org&gt;</a>
                                                    On Behalf Of Lou
                                                    Berger
                                                    <br>
                                                    Sent: 2018. jÃºnius
                                                    1. 22:42 <br>
                                                    To: DetNet WG <a
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href="mailto:detnet@ietf.org" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">&lt;detnet@ietf.org&gt;</a>;
                                                    <a
                                                      moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:draft-ietf-detnet-architecture@ietf.org" target="_blank"
                                                      rel="noreferrer">draft-ietf-detnet-architecture@ietf.org</a>
                                                    <br>
                                                    Subject: [Detnet]
                                                    Promised comments on
draft-ietf-detnet-architecture <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    Hi, <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    Â Â Â Â  I have a number
                                                    of high level
                                                    comments on the
                                                    document that I'd
                                                    like to Â raise
                                                    below.Â  I also have
                                                    a number of more
                                                    editorial/specific
                                                    comments that Â I'd
                                                    like to review
                                                    directly with the
                                                    authors and then
                                                    have them report
                                                    back Â on changes --
                                                    if any turn out to
                                                    be more substantive
                                                    discussions from the
                                                    Â author's
                                                    perspective, I'll
                                                    raise these on the
                                                    list separately.
                                                  </p>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">...
                                                </p>
                                                <blockquote
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                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                    - WRT Section 4.4.3,
                                                    I think the
                                                    inclusion of a
                                                    distributed control
                                                    plane in the
                                                    "Network Plane" is
                                                    inconsistent with
                                                    other functional
                                                    definitions and
                                                    conflates where a
                                                    function resides
                                                    from the actual
                                                    function and that
                                                    whether control is
                                                    implemented in a
                                                    fully centralized,
                                                    fully distributed or
                                                    some hybrid form
                                                    doesn't
                                                    fundamentally
                                                    changeÂ  the control
                                                    function's role --
                                                    therefore I think
                                                    the sections 4..4.2
                                                    and .3 should be
                                                    revised accordingly
                                                    <br>
                                                    [BalÃ¡zs Varga A]
                                                    Agree in principal.
                                                    Let's discuss the
                                                    details. </p>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Okay
                                                  - I'll work with you
                                                  off line and we can
                                                  report back the
                                                  results/proposed
                                                  changes.
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                </p>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">-
                                                    In several places
                                                    it's not clear that
                                                    DetNet service is
                                                    always a L3 service
                                                    which is controlled
                                                    using L3
                                                    identifiers, i.e.,
                                                    IP addresses -- this
                                                    is true even in the
                                                    MPLS service case
                                                    and the TSN over
                                                    MPLS case. I think
                                                    this is an important
                                                    point to be clear on
                                                    in the document. <br>
                                                    [BalÃ¡zs Varga A] I
                                                    am not sure. DetNet
                                                    service is always
                                                    provided over a L3
                                                    network (IP or
                                                    MPLS), that is fine.
                                                    However the service
                                                    itself can be L2 or
                                                    L3. In case of TSN
                                                    Ethernet frames are
                                                    transported, so it
                                                    is a L2 service. In
                                                    case of IP end
                                                    systems IP packets
                                                    are transported so
                                                    it is a L3 service.
                                                  </p>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                  Humm - While I agree
                                                  that DetNet is
                                                  providing an
                                                  (enhanced) L2VPN
                                                  service, it is not
                                                  itself providing
                                                  control or service of
                                                  L2 devices -- this is
                                                  TSN's job.Â  The fact
                                                  that DetNet is all
                                                  about behavior of L3
                                                  nodes (i.e., IP and
                                                  PW/MPLS) and not L2
                                                  nodes (i.e., TSN
                                                  bridges) is something
                                                  the architecture
                                                  should make
                                                  unambiguous. <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Thanks, <br>
                                                  Lou <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                </p>
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                                                  <p class="MsoNormal">Please
                                                    let me know what you
                                                    think. <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    Cheers, <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    Lou <br>
                                                    <br>
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                                                <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                              </blockquote>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                <br>
                                              </p>
                                              <div>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal">On
                                                  6/12/2018 6:27 PM,
                                                  Stewart Bryant wrote:</p>
                                              </div>
                                              <blockquote
                                                style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                <p><span
                                                    style="color:black">Dear
                                                    Bala'zs</span></p>
                                                <p><span
                                                    style="color:black">Thank
                                                    you your for your
                                                    consideration of
                                                    these points. I will
                                                    just pick up a few
                                                    that need some
                                                    further thought:</span></p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Â </p>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <div>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â 
                                                      DetNet transit
                                                      node</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      A node operating
                                                      at the DetNet
                                                      transport layer,
                                                      that utilizes</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      link layer and/or
                                                      network layer
                                                      switching across
                                                      multiple</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      links and/or
                                                      sub-networks to
                                                      provide paths for
                                                      DetNet service</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      layer functions.Â 
                                                      Optionally
                                                      provides
                                                      congestion
                                                      protection</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      over those paths.Â 
                                                      An MPLS LSR is an
                                                      example of a
                                                      DetNet</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      transit node.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      In that example it
                                                      would have to be a
                                                      DetNet
                                                      enable/aware LSR.
                                                      An
                                                    </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      ordinary LSR would
                                                      not know anything
                                                      about DetNet.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[BalÃ¡zs
                                                      Varga A] No, A
                                                      DetNet aware LSR
                                                      would be a relay
                                                      node (S-PE).</p>
                                                  </div>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                  I think the confusion
                                                  is what "DetNet
                                                  Transport Layer"
                                                  means. This <br>
                                                  technology touches on
                                                  Transport Layer inÂ 
                                                  the L4 sense, and the<br>
                                                  Transport Network
                                                  Layer as in the packet
                                                  network that carries<br>
                                                  L3 packets. <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  So I think that we
                                                  need to clarify
                                                  whether a DetNet
                                                  transit node<br>
                                                  is an S-PE (i.e. a a
                                                  transit node in the
                                                  DetNet layer), or a P
                                                  node<br>
                                                  (i.e. a transit node
                                                  that is carrying
                                                  DetNet packets but
                                                  could be<br>
                                                  carrying any sort of
                                                  MPLS packet)<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                </p>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <div>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">============</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      These three
                                                      techniques can be
                                                      applied
                                                      independently,
                                                      giving eight</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      possible
                                                      combinations,
                                                      including none (no
                                                      DetNet), although
                                                      some</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      combinations are
                                                      of wider utility
                                                      than others.Â  This
                                                      separation keeps</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      the protocol stack
                                                      coherent and
                                                      maximizes
                                                      interoperability
                                                      with</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      existing and
                                                      developing
                                                      standards in this
                                                      (IETF) and other
                                                      Standards</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      Development
                                                      Organizations.Â 
                                                      Some examples of
                                                      typical expected</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      combinations:</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      oÂ  Explicit routes
                                                      plus service
                                                      protection are
                                                      exactly the
                                                      techniques</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      employed by
                                                      [HSR-PRP].Â 
                                                      Explicit routes
                                                      are achieved by
                                                      limiting</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      the physical
                                                      topology of the
                                                      network, and the
                                                      sequentialization,</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      replication, and
                                                      duplicate
                                                      elimination are
                                                      facilitated by
                                                      packet</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      tags added at the
                                                      front or the end
                                                      of Ethernet
                                                      frames.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      ER can be done
                                                      virtually as well
                                                      as physically.
                                                      RSVP is a type of
                                                    </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      ER, as is Adj-SID
                                                      based SR, and we
                                                      can design other
                                                      types.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[BalÃ¡zs
                                                      Varga A] Agree,
                                                      but these are
                                                      examples.
                                                      Statement is for
                                                      HSR-PRP.</p>
                                                  </div>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">So
                                                  the question is
                                                  whether we should
                                                  expand the set of
                                                  examples, particularly<br>
                                                  to more accessible
                                                  ones.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  ============</p>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <div>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      Packet replication
                                                      and elimination</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                      relay &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      &gt;
                                                      /------------+ R
                                                      node E
                                                      +------------\
                                                      &gt;</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      &gt;
                                                      /Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      v +
                                                      ^Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  \
                                                      &gt;</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      endÂ Â Â  R
                                                      +Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      v |
                                                      ^Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  +
                                                      E end</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      systemÂ Â 
                                                      +Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      v |
                                                      ^Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      +Â Â  system</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      &gt;
                                                      \Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      v +
                                                      ^Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  /
                                                      &gt;</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      &gt;
                                                      \------------+ R
                                                      relay E
                                                      +-----------/ &gt;</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;Â 
                                                      node &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                      &gt; &gt; &gt;</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      Figure 1</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      Packet replication
                                                      and elimination
                                                      does not react to
                                                      and correct</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      failures; it is
                                                      entirely passive.Â 
                                                      Thus, intermittent
                                                      failures,</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      I think it copes
                                                      with intermittent
                                                      failures OK.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[BalÃ¡zs
                                                      Varga A] Yes, PRF
                                                      and PEF can
                                                      eliminate the
                                                      effect of such
                                                      failures. But text
                                                    </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">intends
                                                      to say that it is
                                                      passive. It is not
                                                      reacting to such
                                                      failures. No
                                                      change in text.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                  </div>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                  You say that PREF does
                                                  not correct failures.
                                                  I would contend that
                                                  is exactly<br>
                                                  what it does. Sure it
                                                  does not react but it
                                                  does correct, and it
                                                  does<br>
                                                  address intermittent
                                                  failures.</p>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <div>
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">===========</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      transported
                                                      between the peer
                                                      end systems.Â 
                                                      Therefore, the
                                                      following</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      possible types /
                                                      formats of a
                                                      DetNet flow are
                                                      distinguished in
                                                      this</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      document:</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      oÂ  App-flow:
                                                      native format of a
                                                      DetNet flow.Â  It
                                                      does not contain
                                                      any</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      DetNet related
                                                      attributes.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      oÂ  DetNet-t-flow:
                                                      specific format of
                                                      a DetNet flow.Â 
                                                      Only requires</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      the congestion /
                                                      latency features
                                                      provided by the
                                                      Detnet transport</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      layer.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      oÂ  DetNet-s-flow:
                                                      specific format of
                                                      a DetNet flow.Â 
                                                      Only requires</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      the
                                                      replication/elimination
                                                      feature ensured by
                                                      the DetNet service</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      layer.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      oÂ  DetNet-st-flow:
                                                      specific format of
                                                      a DetNet flow.Â  It
                                                      requires</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      both DetNet
                                                      service layer and
                                                      DetNet transport
                                                      layer functions</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      during forwarding.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      I find the
                                                      relisting of these
                                                      types confusing.
                                                      Wheren't they
                                                      defined
                                                    </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      in the section
                                                      above?</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[BalÃ¡zs
                                                      Varga A] This is
                                                      inline with the
                                                      previous section "
                                                      Grouping of end
                                                      systems ".</p>
                                                  </div>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Surely
                                                  if we have defined
                                                  them we never need to
                                                  do anything but name
                                                  them in<br>
                                                  later sections.
                                                  Redefinition is never
                                                  a good idea because it
                                                  often leads to <br>
                                                  conflicting
                                                  definitions.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                </p>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <div>
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">============</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â 
                                                      [HSR-PRP]Â  IEC,
                                                      "High availability
                                                      seamless
                                                      redundancy (HSR)
                                                      is a</p>
                                                    <p
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                                                      further
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                                                      section, creates
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                                                      and HSR are both</p>
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                                                      described in the
                                                      IEC 62439 3
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href="http://webstore.iec.ch/webstore/webstore.nsf/" target="_blank"
                                                        rel="noreferrer">http://webstore.iec.ch/webstore/webstore.nsf/</a></p>
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artnum/046615!opendocument&gt;.</p>
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                                                      recollection is
                                                    </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      that this is not
                                                      readily available
                                                      without paying a
                                                      large fee.</p>
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                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                  If we decide that this
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                                                  reference, there needs
                                                  to be<br>
                                                  some suitable text, as
                                                  this will get raised a
                                                  number of times
                                                  between<br>
                                                  here an publication as
                                                  first the directorates
                                                  and then the ADs run<br>
                                                  into this.<br>
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                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
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                                                      System Integration
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                                                      Models and
                                                      Terminology",
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                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
                                                      &lt;<a
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href="https://www.isa.org/isa95/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer"><span
style="color:windowtext;text-decoration:none">https://www.isa.org/isa95/</span></a>&gt;.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      Should that be
                                                      2000, or 2010.</p>
                                                    <p
                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                      Note that this
                                                      seems to be a very
                                                      expensive document
                                                      to access.</p>
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                                                      class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">Â </p>
                                                  </div>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">You
                                                  did not comment on the
                                                  correctness of the
                                                  reference.</p>
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                                                  </div>
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                                                  Best Regards<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Stewart</p>
                                              </blockquote>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal">Â </p>
                                            </div>
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Hi Vladimir,

Bridging including bridge management belong to IEEE 802.1: 
https://1.ieee802.org/. You may consider contributing to IEEE 802.1. The 
next Interim is hosed by your company in Oslo: 
https://1.ieee802.org/meetings.

IEEE 802.1Qcp is the basic bridge management specification, which is an 
approved draft standard to be published soon: 
http://standards.ieee.org/findstds/standard/802.1Qcp-2018.html. (The 
archived web page of the finished project: 
https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcp.)

The pages of the ongoing projects are available via the TSN page: 
https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/#Ongoing_TSN_Projects, including P802.1Qcw 
(https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcw/), which specifies YANG for various 
bridge scheduling mechanisms.

Best regards,
Janos


On 7/17/2018 4:26 PM, Vladimir Vassilev wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I have submitted a draft 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/ 
> that proposes a model for network bridge management based on the 
> concept of flows. The model has 2 components 1. Forwarding based on 
> flows. 2. Scheduling/QoS based on gate controller topologies that 
> provide a new and very generic way of modeling and managing the actual 
> scheduler design and map the flows to scheduler topology inputs.
>
> There is similar work on the flow based forwarding in detnet however I 
> am not sure detnet is the right workgroup to be defining the flow 
> model.  I think the flow concept is important and general. It is as 
> significant as the concept of interfaces and is not only relevant to 
> detnet. Let me know what is your opinion of the draft and the proposed 
> network bridge concept.
>
> Vladimir
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject:     New Version Notification for 
> draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt
> Date:     Sat, 14 Jul 2018 22:04:06 -0700
> From:     internet-drafts@ietf.org
> To:     Vladimir Vassilev <vladimir@transpacket.com>
>
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Vladimir Vassilev and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name:        draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge
> Revision:    00
> Title:        A YANG Data Model for Network Bridge Management
> Document date:    2018-07-14
> Group:        Individual Submission
> Pages:        44
> URL: 
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt
> Status: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/
> Htmlized: 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00
> Htmlized: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge
>
>
> Abstract:
>    This document introduces new YANG model of a network bridge.
>
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of 
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    Hi Vladimir,<br>
    <br>
    Bridging including bridge management belong to IEEE 802.1:
    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://1.ieee802.org/">https://1.ieee802.org/</a>. You may consider contributing to IEEE 802.1.
    The next Interim is hosed by your company in Oslo:
    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://1.ieee802.org/meetings">https://1.ieee802.org/meetings</a>.<br>
    <br>
    IEEE 802.1Qcp is the basic bridge management specification, which is
    an approved draft standard to be published soon:
    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://standards.ieee.org/findstds/standard/802.1Qcp-2018.html">http://standards.ieee.org/findstds/standard/802.1Qcp-2018.html</a>. (The
    archived web page of the finished project:
    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcp">https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcp</a>.)<br>
    <br>
    The pages of the ongoing projects are available via the TSN page:
    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/#Ongoing_TSN_Projects">https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/#Ongoing_TSN_Projects</a>, including P802.1Qcw
    (<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcw/">https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcw/</a>), which specifies YANG for
    various bridge scheduling mechanisms.<br>
    <br>
    Best regards,<br>
    Janos <font size="+1"><br>
      <br>
    </font><br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 7/17/2018 4:26 PM, Vladimir Vassilev
      wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote
      cite="mid:1671ad91-5627-fedf-ef1c-9a2a790accd4@transpacket.com"
      type="cite">Hi,
      <br>
      <br>
      I have submitted a draft
      <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/</a>
      that proposes a model for network bridge management based on the
      concept of flows. The model has 2 components 1. Forwarding based
      on flows. 2. Scheduling/QoS based on gate controller topologies
      that provide a new and very generic way of modeling and managing
      the actual scheduler design and map the flows to scheduler
      topology inputs.
      <br>
      <br>
      There is similar work on the flow based forwarding in detnet
      however I am not sure detnet is the right workgroup to be defining
      the flow model.Â  I think the flow concept is important and
      general. It is as significant as the concept of interfaces and is
      not only relevant to detnet. Let me know what is your opinion of
      the draft and the proposed network bridge concept.
      <br>
      <br>
      Vladimir
      <br>
      <br>
      -------- Forwarded Message --------
      <br>
      Subject:Â Â Â Â  New Version Notification for
      draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt
      <br>
      Date:Â Â Â Â  Sat, 14 Jul 2018 22:04:06 -0700
      <br>
      From:Â Â Â Â  <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org">internet-drafts@ietf.org</a>
      <br>
      To:Â Â Â Â  Vladimir Vassilev <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:vladimir@transpacket.com">&lt;vladimir@transpacket.com&gt;</a>
      <br>
      <br>
      <br>
      <br>
      A new version of I-D, draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt
      <br>
      has been successfully submitted by Vladimir Vassilev and posted to
      the
      <br>
      IETF repository.
      <br>
      <br>
      Name:Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge
      <br>
      Revision:Â Â Â  00
      <br>
      Title:Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  A YANG Data Model for Network Bridge Management
      <br>
      Document date:Â Â Â  2018-07-14
      <br>
      Group:Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  Individual Submission
      <br>
      Pages:Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  44
      <br>
      URL:Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt">https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt</a><br>
      Status:Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â 
      <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/</a>
      <br>
      Htmlized:Â Â Â Â Â Â 
      <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00">https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00</a>
      <br>
      Htmlized:Â Â Â Â Â Â 
<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge</a><br>
      <br>
      <br>
      Abstract:
      <br>
      Â Â  This document introduces new YANG model of a network bridge.
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I forgot to mention that the next step is gated by August vacations.

Best regards,
János

On 8/3/2018 5:39 PM, János Farkas wrote:
> Hi,
>
> We have updated the architecture draft to resolve the extended WGLC 
> comments. The current revision is v07: 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-07.
>
> All WGLC comments have been addressed; most of them can be found 
> below. Some further nits have been also resolved.
>
> The main changes:
>
> 1)
> Based on the last discussion item below, a new sentence has been added 
> to congestion protection in section 3.1, where it is first described:
> "Note that congestion
> protection provided via congestion detection and notification is
> explicitly excluded from consideration in DetNet, as it serves a
> different set of applications."
>
> (Note that throttling/throttled has been already part of the text, 
> there are three occurrences.)
>
> 2)
> Based on the discussion below, the following introductory text has 
> been added to section 4.1:
> "DetNet functionality (Section 3) is implemented in two adjacent
> layers in the protocol stack: the DetNet service layer and the DetNet
> transport layer. The DetNet service layer provides DetNet service,
> e.g., service protection, to higher layers in the protocol stack and
> applications. The DetNet transport layer supports DetNet service in
> the underlying network, e.g., by providing explicit routes and
> congestion protection to DetNet flows."
>
> Consequently, the definition of DetNet service layer has been updated to:
> "The layer at which A DetNet service, e.g., service protection
> is provided."
>
> 3)
> Based on 
> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/detnet/current/msg01577.html, 
> the following sentence has been added to the OAM paragraph in section 
> 4.1.1:
> "Active and hybrid OAM
> methods require additional bandwidth to perform fault management and
> performance monitoring of the DetNet domain. OAM may, for instance,
> generate special test probes or add OAM information into the data
> packet."
>
> 4)
> Based on the consensus reached at the DetNet session at IETF 102, 
> Controller Plane Entity (CPE) has been replaced with Controller Plane 
> Function (CPF).
>
> 5)
> In order to clarify, the last sentence of the introduction has been 
> updated to:
> "DetNet can
> accommodate various time synchronization techniques and profiles that
> are defined elsewhere to address the needs of different market
> segments."
>
> 6)
> In order to clarify, the packet loss bullet in section 3.1 has been 
> updated to:
> "Packet loss ratio, under various assumptions as to the operational
> states of the nodes and links."
>
> 7)
> DetNet t-aware has been updated to:
> "A DetNet transport-aware system. It knows about
> some TSN functions (e.g., reservation), but not about service
> protection."
>
> 8)
> DetNet s-aware has been updated to:
> "DetNet service-aware system. It supplies
> sequence numbers, but doesn’t know about zero congestion loss."
>
>
> Best regards,
> János
>
>
> On 7/19/2018 2:04 AM, Prof. Diego Dujovne wrote:
>> +1
>>
>> El mié., 18 de jul. de 2018 19:53, Black, David <David.Black@dell.com 
>> <mailto:David.Black@dell.com>> escribió:
>>
>>     +1, Thanks, --David
>>
>>     *From:*Lou Berger [mailto:lberger@labn.net
>>     <mailto:lberger@labn.net>]
>>     *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 6:52 PM
>>     *To:* Norman Finn; Janos Farkas; Black, David
>>     *Cc:* DetNet WG
>>     *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>     draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>     This sounds sensible to me...
>>
>>     Lou
>>
>>     ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>     On July 18, 2018 6:47:01 PM Norman Finn
>>     <norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com
>>     <mailto:norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com>> wrote:
>>
>>         "Congestion loss protection" is better than "congestion
>>         protection".  That's good.
>>
>>         It's a big change, and makes the document unnecessarily
>>         wordy.  That's bad.
>>
>>         I would use "congestion protection" but explain somewhere
>>         that we are not talking about source throttling.
>>
>>         And if adding that explanation is difficult or controversial,
>>         I would stick with "congestion protection".
>>
>>         -- Norm
>>
>>         ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>         *From:*detnet [detnet-bounces@ietf.org
>>         <mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org>] on behalf of Janos Farkas
>>         [Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com <mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com>]
>>         *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 2:26 PM
>>         *To:* Black, David
>>         *Cc:* DetNet WG
>>         *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>         Both “congestion protection” and “congestion loss protection”
>>         work for me.
>>
>>         Note that the architecture document is quite populated with
>>         the term “congestion protection”. I do not know the other
>>         documents by heart.
>>
>>         So it would be a bit of a change..
>>
>>         I’d like to have the group’s opinion before making such a
>>         change, e.g., any objections?
>>
>>         Thanks,
>>
>>         Janos
>>
>>         *From:*Black, David <David.Black@dell.com
>>         <mailto:David.Black@dell.com>>
>>         *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 8:19 PM
>>         *To:* Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com
>>         <mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com>>
>>         *Cc:* DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>>
>>         *Subject:* RE: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>         Hi Janos,
>>
>>         That text works nicely.  In briefly talking to Lou, a related
>>         suggestion surfaced: “congestion protection” -> “congestion
>>         loss protection” where possible (may need to be abbreviated
>>         in the Figure) .
>>
>>         This change would make it clearer that the primary focus is
>>         protection from losses caused by congestion as opposed to
>>         protection from all congestion.  DetNet should be able to
>>         tolerate some modest congestion (e.g., in nodes that don’t
>>         have reserved DetNet resources) as long as delivery is
>>         reliable and timely.
>>
>>         Thanks, --David
>>
>>         *From:*Janos Farkas [mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com]
>>         *Sent:* Wednesday, July 18, 2018 11:45 AM
>>         *To:* Black, David
>>         *Cc:* DetNet WG
>>         *Subject:* RE: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>         Hi David,
>>
>>         This implies updating the definition of the DetNet service
>>         layer, e.g., to:
>>
>>         DetNet service layer
>>
>>         The layer at which A DetNet Service, e.g., service protection
>>         is provided.
>>
>>         The definition of the DetNet transport layer remains the same:
>>
>>         DetNet transport layer
>>
>>         The layer that optionally provides congestion protection for
>>
>>         DetNet flows over paths provided by the underlying network.
>>
>>         Regards,
>>
>>         Janos
>>
>>         *From:*Black, David <David.Black@dell.com
>>         <mailto:David.Black@dell.com>>
>>         *Sent:* Monday, July 16, 2018 3:21 PM
>>         *To:* Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com
>>         <mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com>>
>>         *Cc:* DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>>
>>         *Subject:* RE: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>         Don’t use “congestion protection” in the definitions for both
>>         levels.
>>
>>         Thanks, --David
>>
>>         *From:*János Farkas [mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com]
>>         *Sent:* Sunday, July 15, 2018 10:43 PM
>>         *To:* Black, David
>>         *Cc:* DetNet WG
>>         *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>         draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>         Thank you David!
>>
>>         I think we are set. :-)
>>
>>         You got a point, we should update
>>         "DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet Service,
>>         such as congestion or service protection is provided."
>>         to
>>         "DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet Service,
>>         such as congestion protection and/or service protection is
>>         provided."
>>         in the definitions as well to make it clear.
>>
>>         Thanks,
>>         Janos
>>
>>         On 7/16/2018 3:03 AM, Black, David wrote:
>>
>>             Moving the only two open items to the top …
>>
>>             -- Section 4
>>
>>             > We could add some introductory text to 4.1 or 4.1.1, for
>>             instance:
>>             > The functionality needed for DetNet (Section 3) are
>>             implemented in the DetNet layer which comprises the
>>             DetNet service layer and the DetNet transport layer.
>>
>>             > The DetNet service layer functions rely on flow
>>             identification and sequencing. The DetNet transport layer
>>             function may rely on flow identification.
>>             >
>>             > What do you think?
>>
>>             I prefer functional (what it does) characterization to
>>             mechanistic (how it works) characterization in an
>>             overview, e.g., excerpting from what I originally wrote:
>>
>>             ·The DetNet Service layer provides timely reliable
>>             in-order DetNet flow delivery to applications that use
>>             DetNet.
>>
>>             ·The DetNet Transport layer insulates DetNet flows from
>>             interference by network mechanisms, primarily queuing and
>>             routing
>>
>>             I understand the principle.
>>
>>             What about just copying the two definitions here:
>>             DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet
>>             Service, such as congestion or service protection is
>>             provided.
>>             DetNet transport layer optionally provides congestion
>>             protection for DetNet flows over paths provided by the
>>             underlying network.
>>
>>             David> Yes, that works, although I don’t think
>>             “congestion” was meant to be included in the first
>>             definition …
>>
>>                Many real-time networks rely on physical rings or
>>             chains of two-port
>>
>>                devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol.
>>
>>             How does a “ring control protocol” control “chains”? 
>>             Suggest: “ring control protocol” -> “control protocol”
>>
>>             Also, are paired chains between common endpoints
>>             intended, or a more general notion of chains?
>>
>>             This text refers to typical factory deployment, which is
>>             chain or ring..
>>             It seems better to keep “ring control protocol” because
>>             they are often very different from generic control
>>             protocols applicable to mesh networks.
>>
>>             Would flipping chain and ring resolve your concern?
>>
>>                Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or
>>             rings of two-port
>>
>>                devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol.
>>
>>             */[David>] /*It feels like “ring control protocol” is an
>>             important phrase to retain.   In the original text, would
>>             it be reasonable to add “(applies to both rings and
>>             chains)” to the end of the sentence?
>>
>>             Well, I guess the point is that there are many specific
>>             ring protocols, but we are looking for a generic solution.
>>             What about deleting "chains" from the sentence?
>>
>>             David> Yes, if the sentence is all about rings, it’s clear.
>>
>>             Thanks, --David
>>
>>             *From:*János Farkas [mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com]
>>             *Sent:* Sunday, July 15, 2018 7:25 PM
>>             *To:* Black, David
>>             *Cc:* DetNet WG
>>             *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>             draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>             Hi David,
>>
>>             Please see in-line.
>>
>>             Thank you!
>>             Janos
>>
>>             On 7/6/2018 11:50 PM, Black, David wrote:
>>
>>                 -- Bridged path definition
>>
>>                 >  Or should we do something else?
>>
>>                 > There is only one occurrence of "bridged path" in
>>                 the text in brackets.
>>
>>                 That sounds like a better suggestion – change that
>>                 occurrence and remove the definition of “bridged
>>                 path” from the draft. That occurrence is in Section
>>                 4.1.1:
>>
>>                 Congestion protection
>>
>>                 The DetNet transport layer provides congestion
>>                 protection.
>>
>>                 See Section 4.5.  The actual queuing and shaping
>>                 mechanisms
>>
>>                 are typically provided by underlying subnet layers,
>>                 these can
>>
>>                 be closely associated with the means of providing
>>                 paths for
>>
>>                           DetNet flows (e.g., MPLS LSPs or bridged
>>                 paths), the path and
>>
>>                 the congestion protection are conflated in this figure.
>>
>>                 Perhaps: (e.g., MPLS LSPs or bridged paths) -> (MPLS
>>                 LSPs or other network paths)
>>
>>                 or just delete the entire parenthetical example.
>>
>>             OK. Let's just delete the entire parenthetical example.
>>
>>                 -- Section 4
>>
>>                 > We could add some introductory text to 4.1 or 4.1.1,
>>                 for instance:
>>                 > The functionality needed for DetNet (Section 3) are
>>                 implemented in the DetNet layer which comprises the
>>                 DetNet service layer and the DetNet transport layer.
>>
>>                 > The DetNet service layer functions rely on flow
>>                 identification and sequencing. The DetNet transport
>>                 layer function may rely on flow identification.
>>                 >
>>                 > What do you think?
>>
>>                 I prefer functional (what it does) characterization
>>                 to mechanistic (how it works) characterization in an
>>                 overview, e.g., excerpting from what I originally wrote:
>>
>>                   * The DetNet Service layer provides timely reliable
>>                     in-order DetNet flow delivery to applications
>>                     that use DetNet.
>>                   * The DetNet Transport layer insulates DetNet flows
>>                     from interference by network mechanisms,
>>                     primarily queuing and routing
>>
>>             I understand the principle.
>>
>>             What about just copying the two definitions here:
>>             DetNet service layer is the layer at which A DetNet
>>             Service, such as congestion or service protection is
>>             provided.
>>             DetNet transport layer optionally provides congestion
>>             protection for DetNet flows over paths provided by the
>>             underlying network.
>>
>>
>>                 > Should we also rearrange, e.g., indent the text
>>                 after Figure 2 such that
>>                 > Packet sequencing, Duplicate elimination, Flow
>>                 replication, Flow merging, Packet encoding, and
>>                 Packet decoding get under Service layer
>>                 > and
>>                 > Congestion protection and Explicit routes get under
>>                 Transport layer?
>>
>>                 No, I don’t think that’s necessary – Figure 2
>>                 provides sufficient structure.
>>
>>             OK.
>>
>>                 Plus a few more minor comments inline …
>>
>>                 Thanks, --David
>>
>>                 *From:*János Farkas [mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com]
>>                 *Sent:* Wednesday, July 4, 2018 2:15 PM
>>                 *To:* Black, David
>>                 *Cc:* DetNet WG
>>                 *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>                 draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>                 Hi David,
>>
>>                 Thank you very much for your review and comments!
>>
>>                 Please see in-line.
>>
>>                 On 6/29/2018 4:10 PM, Black, David wrote:
>>
>>                     The -06 version of this draft is much improved
>>                     over the -05 version – lots of diligent work by
>>                     the authors is evident and appreciated.
>>
>>                     I have two minor content concerns and some
>>                     smaller editorial items.
>>
>>                     ** Content
>>
>>                     -- Section 2.2
>>
>>                     The definition of “bridged path” looks like a
>>                     definition of “bridged forwarding” – the
>>                     definition needs to encompass the notion of a
>>                     path that involves more than one bridge.
>>
>>                        bridged path
>>
>>                                A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the
>>                     destination MAC
>>
>>                                address to select the outbound port
>>                     hence the path for a
>>
>>                                frame.
>>
>>                 You are right, it looks like the emphasis is on
>>                 bridge forwarding rather than path.
>>                 However, the superposition of the outbound ports
>>                 provides a path, which was tried to be captured by
>>                 "hence the path".
>>                 The idea was to keep it simple not dive into the
>>                 details, which are not necessary in this document.
>>
>>                 Would it be good to update to:
>>
>>                    bridged path
>>
>>                            A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the
>>                 destination MAC
>>
>>                            address to select the outbound port. The
>>                 superposition
>>
>>                            of the outbound ports is the path for a frame.
>>
>>                 ?
>>
>>                 Or should we do something else?
>>                 There is only one occurrence of "bridged path" in the
>>                 text in brackets.
>>
>>                     -- Section 4
>>
>>                     Figure 2 in Section 4.1.1 introduces the Detnet
>>                     service and transport layers.   The associated
>>                     text quickly dives into explaining the
>>                     functionality in those layers, but it would be
>>                     helpful to start with an initial high level
>>                     description of each of those layers that helps
>>                     motivate their separation.  It appears that:
>>
>>                     - The DetNet Service layer provides timely
>>                     reliable in-order DetNet flow delivery to
>>                     applications that use DetNet.   A DetNet flow at
>>                     the top of the DetNet Service layer may or may
>>                     not be a compound flow at the bottom of that layer.
>>
>>                     - The DetNet Transport layer insulates DetNet
>>                     flows (at the bottom of the DetNet Service layer)
>>                     from interference by network mechanisms,
>>                     primarily queuing and routing, where congestion
>>                     is an indication of queueing interference.  A
>>                     DetNet flow at the top of the DetNet Transport
>>                     layer may or may not be a member flow that is
>>                     part of a compound flow, depending on what is
>>                     done in the DetNet Service layer.
>>
>>
>>                 You are right, section 4 jumps into the details
>>                 without much of an introduction. I guess we had a
>>                 kind of chicken and egg problem here. Figure 4
>>                 provides a higher level view than Figure 2. However,
>>                 Figure 4 captures different aspects, dives into the
>>                 details of data plane options. So, it seems better to
>>                 keep the order.
>>
>>                 We could add some introductory text to 4.1 or 4.1.1,
>>                 for instance:
>>                 The functionality needed for DetNet (Section 3) are
>>                 implemented in the DetNet layer which comprises the
>>                 DetNet service layer and the DetNet transport layer.
>>                 The DetNet service layer functions rely on flow
>>                 identification and sequencing. The DetNet transport
>>                 layer function may rely on flow identification.
>>
>>                 What do you think?
>>
>>                 Should we also rearrange, e.g., indent the text after
>>                 Figure 2 such that
>>                 Packet sequencing, Duplicate elimination, Flow
>>                 replication, Flow merging, Packet encoding, and
>>                 Packet decoding get under Service layer
>>                 and
>>                 Congestion protection and Explicit routes get under
>>                 Transport layer?
>>
>>                     There’s a related paragraph of text between
>>                     Figures 3 and 4 in Section 4.1.2, but it doesn’t
>>                     provide useful intuition about which
>>                     functionality belongs in which layer.
>>
>>                     ** Editorial
>>
>>                     -- Section 2.1
>>
>>                     “expected” seems off in the definition of
>>                     reservation:
>>
>>                     reservation
>>
>>                     The set of resources allocated between a source
>>                     and one or
>>
>>                     more destinations through transit nodes and subnets
>>
>>                     associated with a DetNet flow, to provide the
>>                     expected DetNet
>>
>>                     Service.
>>
>>                     Suggest either “to provide the provisioned DetNet
>>                     Service to that flow”
>>
>>                 I like this one, will update to this one.
>>
>>                     or “to provide the specified DetNet Service to
>>                     that flow.”
>>
>>                     -- Section 3.1
>>
>>                        o  An upper bound on out-of-order packet
>>                     delivery.  It is worth
>>
>>                           noting that some DetNet applications are
>>                     unable to tolerate any
>>
>>                           out-of-order delivery.
>>
>>                     Is that a sequence bound or a time bound or
>>                     both?   I suspect that a sequence bound (maximum
>>                     degree of reordering in a flow, independent of
>>                     flow rate) was intended. An analogous
>>                     clarification would be helpful in section 3.2.2.1 .
>>
>>                 It is intentionally kept high level in the
>>                 architecture draft. Details are to be provided by the
>>                 flow information model draft. Please see my previous
>>                 mail:
>>                 https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/detnet/AWG2eemg_AWsvF2FwtREyd_xtC8.
>>
>>                 */[David>] /*OK.
>>
>>                     -- Section 3.2.3
>>
>>                     I don’t understand “defined” in:
>>
>>                        Even the use of
>>
>>                        redundant paths through a network defined,
>>                     e.g., by [RFC6372] do not
>>
>>                        eliminate the chances of packet loss.
>>
>>                     Was “e.g., as defined by [RFC6372],” intended?
>>
>>                 Yes, this was the intention, will update to this one.
>>
>>                        Many real-time networks rely on physical rings
>>                     or chains of two-port
>>
>>                        devices, with a relatively simple ring control
>>                     protocol.
>>
>>                     How does a “ring control protocol” control
>>                     “chains”?  Suggest: “ring control protocol” ->
>>                     “control protocol”
>>
>>                     Also, are paired chains between common endpoints
>>                     intended, or a more general notion of chains?
>>
>>                 This text refers to typical factory deployment, which
>>                 is chain or ring.
>>                 It seems better to keep “ring control protocol”
>>                 because they are often very different from generic
>>                 control protocols applicable to mesh networks.
>>
>>                 Would flipping chain and ring resolve your concern?
>>
>>                    Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or
>>                 rings of two-port
>>
>>                    devices, with a relatively simple ring control
>>                 protocol.
>>
>>                     */[David>] /*It feels like “ring control
>>                     protocol” is an important phrase to retain.   In
>>                     the original text, would it be reasonable to add
>>                     “(applies to both rings and chains)” to the end
>>                     of the sentence?
>>
>>             Well, I guess the point is that there are many specific
>>             ring protocols, but we are looking for a generic solution.
>>             What about deleting "chains" from the sentence?
>>
>>                        Explicit routes can be established various ways,
>>
>>                     established various -> established in various
>>
>>                 OK.
>>
>>                        This is
>>
>>                        irrespective of the distribution method used,
>>                     also applies to service
>>
>>                        protection over explicit routes.
>>
>>                     used, also -> used, and also
>>
>>                 OK.
>>
>>                     -- Figure 5 (Section 4.1.3)
>>
>>                     The UNI acronym is introduced without expansion
>>                     or definition – please correct that, e.g., by
>>                     defining UNI in Section 2.1.
>>
>>                 DetNet-UNI is there among the definitions. It seems
>>                 enough to me.
>>
>>                 */[David>] /*That’s fine – I overlooked that
>>                 definition, sorry.
>>
>>                     -- Figure 9 (Section 4.7.2)
>>
>>                     I think I understand what’s going on, but the use
>>                     of “add/remove” in the figure should be explained
>>                     in associated text.
>>
>>                 What about updating the sentence above Figure 9 to:
>>                 A packet with corresponding Flow-IDs is illustrated
>>                 in Figure 9, which also indicates where Flow-ID can
>>                 be added or removed.
>>
>>                 */[David>] /*Sure, with one minor edit: “where
>>                 Flow-ID” -> “where each Flow-ID”
>>
>>             OK.
>>
>>                     Thanks, --David
>>
>>
>>                 Thank you!
>>                 Janos
>>
>>                     *From:*detnet [mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org]
>>                     *On Behalf Of *János Farkas
>>                     *Sent:* Thursday, June 28, 2018 9:09 PM
>>                     *To:* Lou Berger; Stewart Bryant; detnet@ietf.org
>>                     <mailto:detnet@ietf.org> >> DetNet WG
>>                     *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
>>                     draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05
>>
>>                     Dear all,
>>
>>                     Off-line discussions among Lou, Stewart, and
>>                     authors followed the discussions to properly
>>                     address the WGLC comments, including the detailed
>>                     comments.
>>
>>                     A new revision of the draft has been uploaded:
>>                     draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-06.
>>
>>                     In addition to the changes already described in
>>                     this thread, the following bigger changes have
>>                     been made to the draft:
>>
>>
>>                     *Section 2.1 Terms used in this document*
>>
>>                     Some definitions refined as suggested by the
>>                     detailed comments
>>
>>                     New definitions have been added:
>>
>>                        "allocation
>>                                Resources are dedicated to support a
>>                     DetNet flow.  Depending
>>                                on an implementation, the resource may
>>                     be reused by non-
>>                                DetNet flows when it is not used by
>>                     the DetNet flow.
>>
>>
>>                        PEF     A Packet Elimination Function (PEF)
>>                     eliminates duplicate
>>                                copies of packets to prevent excess
>>                     packets flooding the
>>                                network or duplicate packets being
>>                     sent out of the DetNet
>>                                domain. PEF can be implemented by an
>>                     edge node, a relay
>>                                node, or an end system.
>>
>>                       PRF     A Packet Replication Function (PRF)
>>                     replicates DetNet flow
>>                                packets and forwards them to one or
>>                     more next hops in the
>>                                DetNet domain.  The number of packet
>>                     copies sent to each next
>>                                hop is a DetNet flow specific
>>                     parameter at the node doing the
>>                     replication.  PRF can be implemented by an edge
>>                     node, a relay
>>                                node, or an end system.
>>
>>                        PREOF   Collective name for Packet
>>                     Replication, Elimination, and
>>                                Ordering Functions.
>>
>>                        POF     A Packet Ordering Function (POF)
>>                     re-orders packets within a
>>                                DetNet flow that are received out of
>>                     order.  This function
>>                                can be implemented by an edge node, a
>>                     relay node, or an end
>>                                system.
>>
>>                       DetNet service proxy
>>                                Maps between App-flows and DetNet flows.
>>
>>                        bridged path
>>                                A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the
>>                     destination MAC
>>                                address to select the outbound port
>>                     hence the path for a
>>                                frame."
>>
>>
>>                     *Section 3.1 Primary goals defining the DetNet QoS*
>>
>>                     A new QoS aspect has been added:
>>                        "o  An upper bound on out-of-order packet
>>                     delivery.  It is worth
>>                           noting that some DetNet applications are
>>                     unable to tolerate any
>>                           out-of-order delivery."
>>
>>
>>                     The 3rd paragraph on loss on page 8 after the
>>                     bullet list has been extended to:
>>                        "After congestion, the most important
>>                     contributions to packet loss are
>>                        typically from random media errors and
>>                     equipment failures.  Service
>>                        protection is the name for the mechanisms used
>>                     by DetNet to address
>>                        these losses.  The mechanisms employed are
>>                     constrained by the
>>                        requirement to meet the users' latency
>>                     requirements.  Packet
>>                        replication and elimination (Section 3.2.2)
>>                     and packet encoding
>>                        (Section 3.2.2.3) are described in this
>>                     document to provide service
>>                        protection; others may be found.  For
>>                     instance, packet encoding can
>>                        be used to provide service protection against
>>                     random media errors,
>>                        packet replication and elimination can be used
>>                     to provide service
>>                        protection against equipment failures. This
>>                     mechanism distributes
>>                        the contents of DetNet flows over multiple
>>                     paths in time and/or
>>                        space, so that the loss of some of the paths
>>                     does need not cause the
>>                        loss of any packets."
>>
>>
>>                     *3.2.2.  Service Protection*
>>
>>                     Service protection is used as a more generic
>>                     term. Introductory text added:
>>                        "Service protection aims to mitigate or
>>                     eliminate packet loss due to
>>                        equipment failures, random media and/or memory
>>                     faults.  These types
>>                        of packet loss can be greatly reduced by
>>                     spreading the data over
>>                        multiple disjoint forwarding paths. Various
>>                     service protection
>>                        methods are described in [RFC6372], e.g., 1+1
>>                     linear protection.
>>                        This section describes the functional details
>>                     of an additional method
>>                        in Section 3.2.2.2, which can be implemented
>>                     as described in
>>                        Section 3.2.2.3 or as specified in
>>                     [I-D.ietf-detnet-dp-sol-mpls] in
>>                        order to provide 1+n hitless protection.  The
>>                     appropriate service
>>                        protection mechanism depends on the scenario
>>                     and the requirements."
>>
>>
>>                     New sub-section added:
>>
>>                     "3.2.2.1.  In-Order Delivery
>>
>>                        Out-of-order packet delivery can be a side
>>                     effect of service
>>                        protection. Packets delivered out-of-order
>>                     impact the amount of
>>                        buffering needed at the destination to
>>                     properly process the received
>>                        data.  Such packets also influence the jitter
>>                     of a flow.  The DetNet
>>                        service includes maximum allowed misordering
>>                     as a constraint.  Zero
>>                        misordering would be a valid service
>>                     constraint to reflect that the
>>                        end system(s) of the flow cannot tolerate any
>>                     out-of-order delivery.
>>                        Service protection may provide a mechanism to
>>                     support in-order
>>                        delivery."
>>
>>
>>                     *3.2.2.2. Packet Replication and Elimination*
>>
>>                     New bullet added as the last one:
>>                        "o  The Packet Ordering Function (POF) uses
>>                     the sequencing information
>>                           to re-order a DetNet flow's packets that
>>                     are received out of
>>                           order."
>>
>>                     New sentence added after the bullet list:
>>                     "The order in which a node applies the PEF and
>>                     the PRF to a DetNet
>>                     flow is implementation specific."
>>
>>                     2nd paragraph after the bullet list has been
>>                     updated to:
>>                     "Some service protection mechanisms rely on
>>                     switching from one flow to
>>                        another when a failure of a flow is detected. 
>>                     Contrarily, packet
>>                        replication and elimination combines the
>>                     DetNet member flows sent
>>                        along multiple different paths, and performs a
>>                     packet-by-packet
>>                        selection of which to discard, e.g., based on
>>                     sequencing information."
>>
>>
>>                     *3.2.3.  Explicit routes*
>>
>>                     Out-of-order aspect added to the first paragraph,
>>                     which is about distributed routing:
>>                     "Furthermore, out-of-order
>>                     packet delivery can be a side effect of route
>>                     changes."
>>
>>                     New sentence added to the 3rd paragraph:
>>                     "Explicit routes can be established various
>>                     ways, e.g., with RSVP-TE [RFC3209], with Segment
>>                     Routing (SR)
>>                     [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], via a Software
>>                     Defined Networking
>>                     approach [RFC7426], with IS-IS [RFC7813], etc."
>>
>>                     New paragraph added:
>>                        "Out-of-order packet delivery can be a side
>>                     effect of distributing a
>>                        single flow over multiple paths especially
>>                     when there is a change
>>                        from one path to another when combining the
>>                     flow.  This is
>>                        irrespective of the distribution method used,
>>                     also applies to service
>>                        protection over explicit routes.  As described
>>                     in Section 3.2.2.1,
>>                        out-of-order packets influence the jitter of a
>>                     flow and impact the
>>                        amount of buffering needed to process the
>>                     data; therefore, DetNet
>>                        service includes maximum allowed misordering
>>                     as a constraint.  The
>>                        use of explicit routes helps to provide
>>                     in-order delivery because
>>                        there is no immediate route change with the
>>                     network topology, but the
>>                        changes are plannable as they are between the
>>                     different explicit
>>                        routes."
>>
>>                     *
>>                     4.1.1. Representative Protocol Stack Model*
>>
>>                     "Explicit routes" have been added to Figure 2
>>                     with the corresponding explanation:
>>                      "Explicit routes
>>                                The DetNet transport layer provides
>>                     mechanisms to ensure that
>>                                fixed paths are provided for DetNet
>>                     flows.  These explicit
>>                                paths avoid the impact of network
>>                     convergence."
>>
>>
>>                     Section 4.11 Connected islands vs. networks of
>>                     v05 has been deleted because it was just a
>>                     leftover from early drafts on what DetNet WG
>>                     should do; which are covered by the charter anyways.
>>
>>
>>                     References have been cleaned up and brought
>>                     up-to-date.
>>
>>
>>                     Refinements have been implemented in the draft
>>                     according to Lou's detailed comments. They are
>>                     not listed here because they are minor changes.
>>
>>
>>                     Best regards,
>>                     Janos
>>
>>                     On 6/12/2018 2:48 PM, Lou Berger wrote:
>>
>>
>>                         Balázs,
>>
>>                         Thanks for the response -- please see below.
>>
>>                         ----------
>>                         On June 12, 2018 4:07:35 AM Balázs Varga A
>>                         <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
>>                         <mailto:balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> wrote:
>>
>>                             Hi Lou, Thanks for the comments. See
>>                             reactions inline. Document update in
>>                             progress. Cheers Bala'zs
>>
>>                             -----Original Message-----
>>                             From: detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org>
>>                             <mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org> On
>>                             Behalf Of Lou Berger
>>                             Sent: 2018. június 1. 22:42
>>                             To: DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org>
>>                             <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>;
>>                             draft-ietf-detnet-architecture@ietf.org
>>                             <mailto:draft-ietf-detnet-architecture@ietf.org>
>>
>>                             Subject: [Detnet] Promised comments on
>>                             draft-ietf-detnet-architecture
>>
>>                             Hi,
>>
>>                                  I have a number of high level
>>                             comments on the document that I'd like to
>>                              raise below.  I also have a number of
>>                             more editorial/specific comments that
>>                              I'd like to review directly with the
>>                             authors and then have them report back
>>                              on changes -- if any turn out to be more
>>                             substantive discussions from the
>>                              author's perspective, I'll raise these
>>                             on the list separately.
>>
>>                         ...
>>
>>
>>                             - WRT Section 4.4.3, I think the
>>                             inclusion of a distributed control plane
>>                             in the "Network Plane" is inconsistent
>>                             with other functional definitions and
>>                             conflates where a function resides from
>>                             the actual function and that whether
>>                             control is implemented in a fully
>>                             centralized, fully distributed or some
>>                             hybrid form doesn't fundamentally change 
>>                             the control function's role -- therefore
>>                             I think the sections 4..4.2 and .3 should
>>                             be revised accordingly
>>                             [Balázs Varga A] Agree in principal.
>>                             Let's discuss the details.
>>
>>                         Okay - I'll work with you off line and we can
>>                         report back the results/proposed changes.
>>
>>                             - In several places it's not clear that
>>                             DetNet service is always a L3 service
>>                             which is controlled using L3 identifiers,
>>                             i.e., IP addresses -- this is true even
>>                             in the MPLS service case and the TSN over
>>                             MPLS case. I think this is an important
>>                             point to be clear on in the document.
>>                             [Balázs Varga A] I am not sure. DetNet
>>                             service is always provided over a L3
>>                             network (IP or MPLS), that is fine.
>>                             However the service itself can be L2 or
>>                             L3. In case of TSN Ethernet frames are
>>                             transported, so it is a L2 service. In
>>                             case of IP end systems IP packets are
>>                             transported so it is a L3 service.
>>
>>
>>                         Humm - While I agree that DetNet is providing
>>                         an (enhanced) L2VPN service, it is not itself
>>                         providing control or service of L2 devices --
>>                         this is TSN's job. The fact that DetNet is
>>                         all about behavior of L3 nodes (i.e., IP and
>>                         PW/MPLS) and not L2 nodes (i.e., TSN bridges)
>>                         is something the architecture should make
>>                         unambiguous.
>>
>>                         Thanks,
>>                         Lou
>>
>>                             Please let me know what you think.
>>
>>                             Cheers,
>>
>>                             Lou
>>
>>
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>>
>>                     On 6/12/2018 6:27 PM, Stewart Bryant wrote:
>>
>>                         Dear Bala'zs
>>
>>                         Thank you your for your consideration of
>>                         these points. I will just pick up a few that
>>                         need some further thought:
>>
>>                             DetNet transit node
>>
>>                             A node operating at the DetNet transport
>>                             layer, that utilizes
>>
>>                             link layer and/or network layer switching
>>                             across multiple
>>
>>                             links and/or sub-networks to provide
>>                             paths for DetNet service
>>
>>                             layer functions. Optionally provides
>>                             congestion protection
>>
>>                             over those paths.  An MPLS LSR is an
>>                             example of a DetNet
>>
>>                             transit node.
>>
>>                             SB> In that example it would have to be a
>>                             DetNet enable/aware LSR. An
>>
>>                             SB> ordinary LSR would not know anything
>>                             about DetNet.
>>
>>                             [Balázs Varga A] No, A DetNet aware LSR
>>                             would be a relay node (S-PE).
>>
>>
>>                         I think the confusion is what "DetNet
>>                         Transport Layer" means. This
>>                         technology touches on Transport Layer in  the
>>                         L4 sense, and the
>>                         Transport Network Layer as in the packet
>>                         network that carries
>>                         L3 packets.
>>
>>                         So I think that we need to clarify whether a
>>                         DetNet transit node
>>                         is an S-PE (i.e. a a transit node in the
>>                         DetNet layer), or a P node
>>                         (i.e. a transit node that is carrying DetNet
>>                         packets but could be
>>                         carrying any sort of MPLS packet)
>>
>>                             ============
>>
>>                             These three techniques can be applied
>>                             independently, giving eight
>>
>>                             possible combinations, including none (no
>>                             DetNet), although some
>>
>>                             combinations are of wider utility than
>>                             others. This separation keeps
>>
>>                             the protocol stack coherent and maximizes
>>                             interoperability with
>>
>>                             existing and developing standards in this
>>                             (IETF) and other Standards
>>
>>                             Development Organizations. Some examples
>>                             of typical expected
>>
>>                             combinations:
>>
>>                             o  Explicit routes plus service
>>                             protection are exactly the techniques
>>
>>                             employed by [HSR-PRP]. Explicit routes
>>                             are achieved by limiting
>>
>>                             the physical topology of the network, and
>>                             the sequentialization,
>>
>>                             replication, and duplicate elimination
>>                             are facilitated by packet
>>
>>                             tags added at the front or the end of
>>                             Ethernet frames.
>>
>>                             SB> ER can be done virtually as well as
>>                             physically. RSVP is a type of
>>
>>                             SB> ER, as is Adj-SID based SR, and we
>>                             can design other types.
>>
>>                             [Balázs Varga A] Agree, but these are
>>                             examples. Statement is for HSR-PRP.
>>
>>                         So the question is whether we should expand
>>                         the set of examples, particularly
>>                         to more accessible ones.
>>
>>                         ============
>>
>>                             Packet replication and elimination
>>
>>                             > > > > > > > > > relay > > > > > > > >
>>
>>                             > /------------+ R node E +------------\ >
>>
>>                             > / v + ^ \ >
>>
>>                             end    R + v | ^ + E end
>>
>>                             system + v | ^ +   system
>>
>>                             > \ v + ^ / >
>>
>>                             > \------------+ R relay E +-----------/ >
>>
>>                             > > > > > > > > > node > > > > > > > >
>>
>>                             Figure 1
>>
>>                             Packet replication and elimination does
>>                             not react to and correct
>>
>>                             failures; it is entirely passive.  Thus,
>>                             intermittent failures,
>>
>>                             SB> I think it copes with intermittent
>>                             failures OK.
>>
>>                             [Balázs Varga A] Yes, PRF and PEF can
>>                             eliminate the effect of such failures.
>>                             But text
>>
>>                             intends to say that it is passive. It is
>>                             not reacting to such failures. No change
>>                             in text.
>>
>>
>>                         You say that PREF does not correct failures.
>>                         I would contend that is exactly
>>                         what it does. Sure it does not react but it
>>                         does correct, and it does
>>                         address intermittent failures.
>>
>>                             ===========
>>
>>                             transported between the peer end systems.
>>                             Therefore, the following
>>
>>                             possible types / formats of a DetNet flow
>>                             are distinguished in this
>>
>>                             document:
>>
>>                             o  App-flow: native format of a DetNet
>>                             flow. It does not contain any
>>
>>                             DetNet related attributes.
>>
>>                             o DetNet-t-flow: specific format of a
>>                             DetNet flow.  Only requires
>>
>>                             the congestion / latency features
>>                             provided by the Detnet transport
>>
>>                             layer.
>>
>>                             o DetNet-s-flow: specific format of a
>>                             DetNet flow.  Only requires
>>
>>                             the replication/elimination feature
>>                             ensured by the DetNet service
>>
>>                             layer.
>>
>>                             o DetNet-st-flow: specific format of a
>>                             DetNet flow.  It requires
>>
>>                             both DetNet service layer and DetNet
>>                             transport layer functions
>>
>>                             during forwarding.
>>
>>                             SB> I find the relisting of these types
>>                             confusing. Wheren't they defined
>>
>>                             SB> in the section above?
>>
>>                             [Balázs Varga A] This is inline with the
>>                             previous section " Grouping of end systems ".
>>
>>                         Surely if we have defined them we never need
>>                         to do anything but name them in
>>                         later sections. Redefinition is never a good
>>                         idea because it often leads to
>>                         conflicting definitions.
>>
>>                             ============
>>
>>                             [HSR-PRP]  IEC, "High availability
>>                             seamless redundancy (HSR) is a
>>
>>                             further development of the PRP approach,
>>                             although HSR
>>
>>                             functions primarily as a protocol for
>>                             creating media
>>
>>                             redundancy while PRP, as described in the
>>                             previous
>>
>>                             section, creates network redundancy.  PRP
>>                             and HSR are both
>>
>>                             described in the IEC 62439 3 standard.",
>>
>>                             <http://webstore.iec.ch/webstore/webstore.nsf/
>>
>>                             artnum/046615!opendocument>.
>>
>>                             SB> Not available at the time of this
>>                             review, but my recollection is
>>
>>                             SB> that this is not readily available
>>                             without paying a large fee.
>>
>>
>>                         If we decide that this is essential as a key
>>                         reference, there needs to be
>>                         some suitable text, as this will get raised a
>>                         number of times between
>>                         here an publication as first the directorates
>>                         and then the ADs run
>>                         into this.
>>
>>                             ===========
>>
>>                             [ISA95] ANSI/ISA, "Enterprise-Control
>>                             System Integration Part 1:
>>
>>                             Models and Terminology", 2000,
>>
>>                             <https://www.isa.org/isa95/>.
>>
>>                             SB> Should that be 2000, or 2010.
>>
>>                             SB> Note that this seems to be a very
>>                             expensive document to access.
>>
>>                         You did not comment on the correctness of the
>>                         reference.
>>
>>
>>                         Best Regards
>>
>>                         Stewart
>>
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    I forgot to mention that the next step is gated by August vacations.<br>
    <br>
    Best regards,<br>
    János<br>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 8/3/2018 5:39 PM, János Farkas
      wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote
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      Hi,<br>
      <br>
      We have updated the architecture draft to resolve the extended
      WGLC comments. The current revision is v07: <a
        moz-do-not-send="true" class="moz-txt-link-freetext"
        href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-07">https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-07</a>.<br>
      <br>
      All WGLC comments have been addressed; most of them can be found
      below. Some further nits have been also resolved.<br>
      <br>
      The main changes:<br>
      <br>
      1)<br>
      Based on the last discussion item below, a new sentence has been
      added to congestion protection in section 3.1, where it is first
      described: <br>
      "Note that congestion<br>
      protection provided via congestion detection and notification is<br>
      explicitly excluded from consideration in DetNet, as it serves a<br>
      different set of applications."<br>
      <br>
      (Note that throttling/throttled has been already part of the text,
      there are three occurrences.)<br>
      <br>
      2)<br>
      Based on the discussion below, the following introductory text has
      been added to section 4.1:<br>
      "DetNet functionality (Section 3) is implemented in two adjacent<br>
      layers in the protocol stack: the DetNet service layer and the
      DetNet<br>
      transport layer. The DetNet service layer provides DetNet service,<br>
      e.g., service protection, to higher layers in the protocol stack
      and<br>
      applications. The DetNet transport layer supports DetNet service
      in<br>
      the underlying network, e.g., by providing explicit routes and<br>
      congestion protection to DetNet flows."<br>
      <br>
      Consequently, the definition of DetNet service layer has been
      updated to:<br>
      "The layer at which A DetNet service, e.g., service protection<br>
      is provided."<br>
      <br>
      3)<br>
      Based on <a moz-do-not-send="true" class="moz-txt-link-freetext"
href="https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/detnet/current/msg01577.html">https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/detnet/current/msg01577.html</a>,
      the following sentence has been added to the OAM paragraph in
      section 4.1.1:<br>
      "Active and hybrid OAM<br>
      methods require additional bandwidth to perform fault management
      and<br>
      performance monitoring of the DetNet domain. OAM may, for
      instance,<br>
      generate special test probes or add OAM information into the data<br>
      packet."<br>
      <br>
      4)<br>
      Based on the consensus reached at the DetNet session at IETF 102,
      Controller Plane Entity (CPE) has been replaced with Controller
      Plane Function (CPF).<br>
      <br>
      5)<br>
      In order to clarify, the last sentence of the introduction has
      been updated to:<br>
      "DetNet can<br>
      accommodate various time synchronization techniques and profiles
      that<br>
      are defined elsewhere to address the needs of different market<br>
      segments."<br>
      <br>
      6)<br>
      In order to clarify, the packet loss bullet in section 3.1 has
      been updated to:<br>
      "Packet loss ratio, under various assumptions as to the
      operational<br>
      states of the nodes and links."<br>
      <br>
      7)<br>
      DetNet t-aware has been updated to:<br>
      "A DetNet transport-aware system. It knows about<br>
      some TSN functions (e.g., reservation), but not about service<br>
      protection."<br>
      <br>
      8)<br>
      DetNet s-aware has been updated to:<br>
      "DetNet service-aware system. It supplies<br>
      sequence numbers, but doesn’t know about zero congestion loss."<br>
      <br>
      <br>
      Best regards,<br>
      János<br>
      <br>
      <br>
      <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 7/19/2018 2:04 AM, Prof. Diego
        Dujovne wrote:<br>
      </div>
      <blockquote
cite="mid:CAH7SZV9-JU4W1pi56Ye8h6DHs-XwpX4LGrOTqfZangS8PhVBxw@mail.gmail.com"
        type="cite">
        <div dir="auto">+1</div>
        <br>
        <div class="gmail_quote">
          <div dir="ltr">El mié., 18 de jul. de 2018 19:53, Black, David
            &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
              href="mailto:David.Black@dell.com">David.Black@dell.com</a>&gt;
            escribió:<br>
          </div>
          <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0
            .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
            <div bgcolor="white" link="blue" vlink="purple" lang="EN-US">
              <div class="m_-571608442216698499WordSection1">
                <p class="MsoNormal"><a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    name="m_-571608442216698499__MailEndCompose"
                    rel="noreferrer"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">+1,
                    </span></a><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Thanks,
                    --David</span></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                <div style="border:none;border-left:solid blue
                  1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt">
                  <div>
                    <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #e1e1e1
                      1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                          Lou Berger [mailto:<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:lberger@labn.net"
                            target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">lberger@labn.net</a>]
                          <br>
                          <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2018 6:52 PM<br>
                          <b>To:</b> Norman Finn; Janos Farkas; Black,
                          David<br>
                          <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                          <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call:
                          draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                    </div>
                  </div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                  <div>
                    <div>
                      <p style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                          style="color:black">This sounds sensible to
                          me...</span></p>
                      <p style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                          style="color:black">Lou</span></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:center"
                        align="center">
                        <hr align="center" size="3" width="100%"> </div>
                      <p
                        style="margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:8.0pt;margin-left:0in">
                        <span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif;color:black">On
                          July 18, 2018 6:47:01 PM Norman Finn &lt;<a
                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com"
                            target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com</a>&gt;
                          wrote:</span></p>
                      <blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid
                        gray 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in
                        5.0pt;margin-left:4.5pt;margin-right:0in">
                        <div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">"Congestion
                                loss protection" is better than
                                "congestion protection".  That's good.</span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">It's
                                a big change, and makes the document
                                unnecessarily wordy.  That's bad.</span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">I
                                would use "congestion protection" but
                                explain somewhere that we are not
                                talking about source throttling.</span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">And
                                if adding that explanation is difficult
                                or controversial, I would stick with
                                "congestion protection".</span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">--
                                Norm</span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif"> </span></p>
                          </div>
                          <div>
                            <div class="MsoNormal"
                              style="text-align:center" align="center">
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                            </div>
                            <div id="m_-571608442216698499divRpF821151">
                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span
                                    style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,sans-serif">
                                  detnet [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                                    href="mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org"
                                    target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">detnet-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
                                  on behalf of Janos Farkas [<a
                                    moz-do-not-send="true"
                                    href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                    target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>]<br>
                                  <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2018
                                  2:26 PM<br>
                                  <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                  <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                  <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Detnet] WG Last
                                  Call:
                                  draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                            </div>
                            <div>
                              <div>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Both
                                    “congestion protection” and
                                    “congestion loss protection” work
                                    for me.</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Note
                                    that the architecture document is
                                    quite populated with the term
                                    “congestion protection”. I do not
                                    know the other documents by heart.</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">So
                                    it would be a bit of a change..</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">I’d
                                    like to have the group’s opinion
                                    before making such a change, e.g.,
                                    any objections?</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Thanks,</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Janos</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                <div>
                                  <div
                                    style="border:none;border-top:solid
                                    #e1e1e1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in
                                    0in">
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                        Black, David &lt;<a
                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                                          href="mailto:David.Black@dell.com"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          rel="noreferrer">David.Black@dell.com</a>&gt;
                                        <br>
                                        <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18,
                                        2018 8:19 PM<br>
                                        <b>To:</b> Janos Farkas &lt;<a
                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                                          href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          rel="noreferrer">Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>&gt;<br>
                                        <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG &lt;<a
                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                                          href="mailto:detnet@ietf.org"
                                          target="_blank"
                                          rel="noreferrer">detnet@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
                                        <b>Subject:</b> RE: [Detnet] WG
                                        Last Call:
                                        draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                  </div>
                                </div>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Hi
                                    Janos,</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal"> </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">That
                                    text works nicely.  In briefly
                                    talking to Lou, a related suggestion
                                    surfaced: “congestion protection”
                                    -&gt; “congestion loss protection”
                                    where possible (may need to be
                                    abbreviated in the Figure) .</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal"> </span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">This
                                    change would make it clearer that
                                    the primary focus is protection from
                                    losses caused by congestion as
                                    opposed to protection from all
                                    congestion.  DetNet should be able
                                    to tolerate some modest congestion
                                    (e.g., in nodes that don’t have
                                    reserved DetNet resources) as long
                                    as delivery is reliable and timely.</span></p>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal"> </span></p>
                                <div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal">Thanks,
                                      --David</span></p>
                                </div>
                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:teal"> </span></p>
                                <div
                                  style="border:none;border-left:solid
                                  blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt">
                                  <div>
                                    <div
                                      style="border:none;border-top:solid
                                      #e1e1e1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in
                                      0in 0in">
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                          Janos Farkas [<a
                                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                            target="_blank"
                                            rel="noreferrer">mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>]
                                          <br>
                                          <b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July
                                          18, 2018 11:45 AM<br>
                                          <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                          <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                          <b>Subject:</b> RE: [Detnet]
                                          WG Last Call:
                                          draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                    </div>
                                  </div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Hi
                                      David,</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">This
                                      implies updating the definition of
                                      the DetNet service layer, e.g.,
                                      to:</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                    style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                      style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">DetNet
                                      service layer</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                    style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                      style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">The
                                      layer at which A DetNet Service,
                                      e.g., service protection is
                                      provided.</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">The
                                      definition of the DetNet transport
                                      layer remains the same:</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                    style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                      style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">DetNet
                                      transport layer</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                    style="text-autospace:none"><span
                                      style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">The
                                      layer that optionally provides
                                      congestion protection for</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                      style="font-family:Courier;color:windowtext">DetNet
                                      flows over paths provided by the
                                      underlying network.</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Regards,</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">Janos</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext"> </span></p>
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                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                          Black, David &lt;<a
                                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:David.Black@dell.com"
                                            target="_blank"
                                            rel="noreferrer">David.Black@dell.com</a>&gt;
                                          <br>
                                          <b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16,
                                          2018 3:21 PM<br>
                                          <b>To:</b> Janos Farkas &lt;<a
                                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com"
                                            target="_blank"
                                            rel="noreferrer">Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com</a>&gt;<br>
                                          <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG &lt;<a
                                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:detnet@ietf.org"
                                            target="_blank"
                                            rel="noreferrer">detnet@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
                                          <b>Subject:</b> RE: [Detnet]
                                          WG Last Call:
                                          draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                    </div>
                                  </div>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:olive">Don’t
                                      use “congestion protection” in the
                                      definitions for both levels.</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:olive"> </span></p>
                                  <div>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:olive">Thanks,
                                        --David</span></p>
                                  </div>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
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                                            János Farkas [<a
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                                              target="_blank"
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                                            <br>
                                            <b>Sent:</b> Sunday, July
                                            15, 2018 10:43 PM<br>
                                            <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                            <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                            <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Detnet]
                                            WG Last Call:
                                            draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                      </div>
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                                    <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
                                      style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Thank
                                      you David!<br>
                                      <br>
                                      I think we are set. :-)<br>
                                      <br>
                                      You got a point, we should update<br>
                                      "DetNet service layer is the layer
                                      at which A DetNet Service, such as
                                      congestion or service protection
                                      is provided."<br>
                                      to<br>
                                      "DetNet service layer is the layer
                                      at which A DetNet Service, such as
                                      congestion protection and/or
                                      service protection is provided."<br>
                                      in the definitions as well to make
                                      it clear.<br>
                                      <br>
                                      Thanks,<br>
                                      Janos</p>
                                    <div>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal">On 7/16/2018
                                        3:03 AM, Black, David wrote:</p>
                                    </div>
                                    <blockquote
                                      style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Moving
                                          the only two open items to the
                                          top …</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300"> </span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">--
                                          Section 4</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
                                          style="color:#006600">&gt; We
                                          could add some introductory
                                          text to 4.1 or 4.1.1, for
                                          instance:</span><br>
                                        &gt; The functionality needed
                                        for DetNet (Section 3) are
                                        implemented in the DetNet layer
                                        which comprises the DetNet
                                        service layer and the DetNet
                                        transport layer.</p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in">&gt;
                                        The DetNet service layer
                                        functions rely on flow
                                        identification and sequencing.
                                        The DetNet transport layer
                                        function may rely on flow
                                        identification.<br>
                                        &gt;<br>
                                        <span style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                          What do you think?</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
                                          style="color:#006600"> </span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">I
                                          prefer functional (what it
                                          does) characterization to
                                          mechanistic (how it works)
                                          characterization in an
                                          overview, e.g., excerpting
                                          from what I originally wrote:</span></p>
                                      <p
                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoListParagraph"
                                        style="margin-left:1.0in"><span
                                          style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span
                                          style="font-size:7.0pt">        
                                        </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                          DetNet Service layer provides
                                          timely reliable in-order
                                          DetNet flow delivery to
                                          applications that use DetNet.</span></p>
                                      <p
                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoListParagraph"
                                        style="margin-left:1.0in"><span
                                          style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span
                                          style="font-size:7.0pt">        
                                        </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                          DetNet Transport layer
                                          insulates DetNet flows from
                                          interference by network
                                          mechanisms, primarily queuing
                                          and routing</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in">I
                                        understand the principle.<br>
                                        <br>
                                        What about just copying the two
                                        definitions here:<br>
                                        DetNet service layer is the
                                        layer at which A DetNet Service,
                                        such as congestion or service
                                        protection is provided.<br>
                                        DetNet transport layer
                                        optionally provides congestion
                                        protection for DetNet flows over
                                        paths provided by the underlying
                                        network.</p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">David&gt;
                                          Yes, that works, although I
                                          don’t think “congestion” was
                                          meant to be included in the
                                          first definition …</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300"> </span></p>
                                      <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">   Many real-time networks rely on physical rings or chains of two-port</span></pre>
                                      <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">   devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">How
                                          does a “ring control protocol”
                                          control “chains”?  Suggest:
                                          “ring control protocol” -&gt;
                                          “control protocol”</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Also,
                                          are paired chains between
                                          common endpoints intended, or
                                          a more general notion of
                                          chains?</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
                                          style="color:#006600">This
                                          text refers to typical factory
                                          deployment, which is chain or
                                          ring..<br>
                                          It seems better to keep “ring
                                          control protocol” because they
                                          are often very different from
                                          generic control protocols
                                          applicable to mesh networks.<br>
                                          <br>
                                          Would flipping chain and ring
                                          resolve your concern?</span></p>
                                      <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">   Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or rings of two-port</span></pre>
                                      <pre style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:black">   devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in"><b><i><span
                                              style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                            </span></i></b><span
                                          style="color:#993366">It feels
                                          like “ring control protocol”
                                          is an important phrase to
                                          retain.   In the original
                                          text, would it be reasonable
                                          to add “(applies to both rings
                                          and chains)” to the end of the
                                          sentence?</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"
                                        style="margin-left:.5in">Well, I
                                        guess the point is that there
                                        are many specific ring
                                        protocols, but we are looking
                                        for a generic solution.<br>
                                        What about deleting "chains"
                                        from the sentence?</p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">David&gt;
                                          Yes, if the sentence is all
                                          about rings, it’s clear.</span></p>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300"> </span></p>
                                      <div>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300">Thanks,
                                            --David</span></p>
                                      </div>
                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#003300"> </span></p>
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                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                                János Farkas [<a
                                                  moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com</a>]
                                                <br>
                                                <b>Sent:</b> Sunday,
                                                July 15, 2018 7:25 PM<br>
                                                <b>To:</b> Black, David<br>
                                                <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                                <b>Subject:</b> Re:
                                                [Detnet] WG Last Call:
                                                draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                          </div>
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                                        <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Hi
                                          David,<br>
                                          <br>
                                          Please see in-line.<br>
                                          <br>
                                          Thank you!<br>
                                          Janos</p>
                                        <div>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal">On
                                            7/6/2018 11:50 PM, Black,
                                            David wrote:</p>
                                        </div>
                                        <blockquote
                                          style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">--
                                              Bridged path definition</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600"> </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                               Or should we do something
                                              else?</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                              There is only one
                                              occurrence of "bridged
                                              path" in the text in
                                              brackets.</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">That
                                              sounds like a better
                                              suggestion – change that
                                              occurrence and remove the
                                              definition of “bridged
                                              path” from the draft. 
                                              That occurrence is in
                                              Section 4.1.1:</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">  
                                              Congestion protection</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                              The DetNet transport layer
                                              provides congestion
                                              protection.</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                              See Section 4.5.  The
                                              actual queuing and shaping
                                              mechanisms</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                              are typically provided by
                                              underlying subnet layers,
                                              these can</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                              be closely associated with
                                              the means of providing
                                              paths for</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          DetNet
                                              flows (e.g., MPLS LSPs or
                                              bridged paths), the path
                                              and</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="text-autospace:none"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                              the congestion protection
                                              are conflated in this
                                              figure.</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Perhaps:
                                              (e.g., MPLS LSPs or
                                              bridged paths) -&gt; (MPLS
                                              LSPs or other network
                                              paths)</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">or
                                              just delete the entire
                                              parenthetical example.</span></p>
                                        </blockquote>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">OK.
                                          Let's just delete the entire
                                          parenthetical example.</p>
                                        <blockquote
                                          style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">--
                                              Section 4</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                              We could add some
                                              introductory text to 4.1
                                              or 4.1.1, for instance:</span><br>
                                            &gt; The functionality
                                            needed for DetNet (Section
                                            3) are implemented in the
                                            DetNet layer which comprises
                                            the DetNet service layer and
                                            the DetNet transport layer.</p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal">&gt; The
                                            DetNet service layer
                                            functions rely on flow
                                            identification and
                                            sequencing. The DetNet
                                            transport layer function may
                                            rely on flow identification.<br>
                                            &gt;<br>
                                            <span style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                              What do you think?</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                              style="color:#006600"> </span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">I
                                              prefer functional (what it
                                              does) characterization to
                                              mechanistic (how it works)
                                              characterization in an
                                              overview, e.g., excerpting
                                              from what I originally
                                              wrote:</span></p>
                                          <ul style="margin-top:0in"
                                            type="disc">
                                            <li class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                DetNet Service layer
                                                provides timely reliable
                                                in-order DetNet flow
                                                delivery to applications
                                                that use DetNet.</span></li>
                                            <li class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                DetNet Transport layer
                                                insulates DetNet flows
                                                from interference by
                                                network mechanisms,
                                                primarily queuing and
                                                routing</span></li>
                                          </ul>
                                        </blockquote>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">I
                                          understand the principle.<br>
                                          <br>
                                          What about just copying the
                                          two definitions here:<br>
                                          DetNet service layer is the
                                          layer at which A DetNet
                                          Service, such as congestion or
                                          service protection is
                                          provided.<br>
                                          DetNet transport layer
                                          optionally provides congestion
                                          protection for DetNet flows
                                          over paths provided by the
                                          underlying network.</p>
                                        <blockquote
                                          style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><br>
                                            <span style="color:#006600">&gt;
                                              Should we also rearrange,
                                              e.g., indent the text
                                              after Figure 2 such that <br>
                                              &gt; Packet sequencing,
                                              Duplicate elimination,
                                              Flow replication, Flow
                                              merging, Packet encoding,
                                              and Packet decoding get
                                              under Service layer<br>
                                              &gt; and<br>
                                              &gt; Congestion protection
                                              and Explicit routes get
                                              under Transport layer?</span></p>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                          <div>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">No,
                                                I don’t think that’s
                                                necessary – Figure 2
                                                provides sufficient
                                                structure.</span></p>
                                          </div>
                                        </blockquote>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">OK.</p>
                                        <blockquote
                                          style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                          <div>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Plus
                                                a few more minor
                                                comments inline …</span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366">Thanks,
                                                --David</span></p>
                                          </div>
                                          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#993366"> </span></p>
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                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:windowtext">
                                                    János Farkas [<a
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href="mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com</a>]
                                                    <br>
                                                    <b>Sent:</b>
                                                    Wednesday, July 4,
                                                    2018 2:15 PM<br>
                                                    <b>To:</b> Black,
                                                    David<br>
                                                    <b>Cc:</b> DetNet WG<br>
                                                    <b>Subject:</b> Re:
                                                    [Detnet] WG Last
                                                    Call:
draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
                                              </div>
                                            </div>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">Hi
                                                David,<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Thank you very much for
                                                your review and
                                                comments!<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Please see in-line.</span></p>
                                            <div>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal">On
                                                6/29/2018 4:10 PM,
                                                Black, David wrote:</p>
                                            </div>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                  -06 version of this
                                                  draft is much improved
                                                  over the -05 version –
                                                  lots of diligent work
                                                  by the authors is
                                                  evident and
                                                  appreciated.</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I
                                                  have two minor content
                                                  concerns and some
                                                  smaller editorial
                                                  items.</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">**
                                                  Content</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                  Section 2.2</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                  definition of “bridged
                                                  path” looks like a
                                                  definition of “bridged
                                                  forwarding” – the
                                                  definition needs to
                                                  encompass the notion
                                                  of a path that
                                                  involves more than one
                                                  bridge.</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   bridged path</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">           A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the destination MAC</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">           address to select the outbound port hence the path for a</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">           frame.</span></pre>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">You
                                                are right, it looks like
                                                the emphasis is on
                                                bridge forwarding rather
                                                than path.<br>
                                                However, the
                                                superposition of the
                                                outbound ports provides
                                                a path, which was tried
                                                to be captured by "hence
                                                the path".<br>
                                                The idea was to keep it
                                                simple not dive into the
                                                details, which are not
                                                necessary in this
                                                document.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Would it be good to
                                                update to:</span></p>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">   bridged path</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">           A VLAN bridge uses the VLAN ID and the destination MAC</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">           address to select the outbound port. The superposition</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">           of the outbound ports is the path for a frame.</span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">?<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Or should we do
                                                something else? <br>
                                                There is only one
                                                occurrence of "bridged
                                                path" in the text in
                                                brackets.</span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                  Section 4</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Figure
                                                  2 in Section 4.1.1
                                                  introduces the Detnet
                                                  service and transport
                                                  layers.   The
                                                  associated text
                                                  quickly dives into
                                                  explaining the
                                                  functionality in those
                                                  layers, but it would
                                                  be helpful to start
                                                  with an initial high
                                                  level description of
                                                  each of those layers
                                                  that helps motivate
                                                  their separation.  It
                                                  appears that:</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">-
                                                  The DetNet Service
                                                  layer provides timely
                                                  reliable in-order
                                                  DetNet flow delivery
                                                  to applications that
                                                  use DetNet.   A DetNet
                                                  flow at the top of the
                                                  DetNet Service layer
                                                  may or may not be a
                                                  compound flow at the
                                                  bottom of that layer.</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">-
                                                  The DetNet Transport
                                                  layer insulates DetNet
                                                  flows (at the bottom
                                                  of the DetNet Service
                                                  layer) from
                                                  interference by
                                                  network mechanisms,
                                                  primarily queuing and
                                                  routing, where
                                                  congestion is an
                                                  indication of queueing
                                                  interference.  A
                                                  DetNet flow at the top
                                                  of the DetNet
                                                  Transport layer may or
                                                  may not be a member
                                                  flow that is part of a
                                                  compound flow,
                                                  depending on what is
                                                  done in the DetNet
                                                  Service layer.</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                              <span
                                                style="color:#006600">You
                                                are right, section 4
                                                jumps into the details
                                                without much of an
                                                introduction. I guess we
                                                had a kind of chicken
                                                and egg problem here.
                                                Figure 4 provides a
                                                higher level view than
                                                Figure 2. However,
                                                Figure 4 captures
                                                different aspects, dives
                                                into the details of data
                                                plane options. So, it
                                                seems better to keep the
                                                order.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                We could add some
                                                introductory text to 4.1
                                                or 4.1.1, for instance:</span><br>
                                              The functionality needed
                                              for DetNet (Section 3) are
                                              implemented in the DetNet
                                              layer which comprises the
                                              DetNet service layer and
                                              the DetNet transport
                                              layer. The DetNet service
                                              layer functions rely on
                                              flow identification and
                                              sequencing. The DetNet
                                              transport layer function
                                              may rely on flow
                                              identification.<br>
                                              <br>
                                              <span
                                                style="color:#006600">What
                                                do you think?</span><br>
                                              <br>
                                              <span
                                                style="color:#006600">Should
                                                we also rearrange, e.g.,
                                                indent the text after
                                                Figure 2 such that <br>
                                                Packet sequencing,
                                                Duplicate elimination,
                                                Flow replication, Flow
                                                merging, Packet
                                                encoding, and Packet
                                                decoding get under
                                                Service layer<br>
                                                and<br>
                                                Congestion protection
                                                and Explicit routes get
                                                under Transport layer?</span><br>
                                              <br>
                                            </p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">There’s
                                                  a related paragraph of
                                                  text between Figures 3
                                                  and 4 in Section
                                                  4.1.2, but it doesn’t
                                                  provide useful
                                                  intuition about which
                                                  functionality belongs
                                                  in which layer.</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">**
                                                  Editorial</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                  Section 2.1</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">“expected”
                                                  seems off in the
                                                  definition of
                                                  reservation:</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">  
                                                  reservation</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                                  The set of resources
                                                  allocated between a
                                                  source and one or</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                                  more destinations
                                                  through transit nodes
                                                  and subnets</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                                  associated with a
                                                  DetNet flow, to
                                                  provide the expected
                                                  DetNet</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">          
                                                  Service.</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Suggest
                                                  either “to provide the
                                                  provisioned DetNet
                                                  Service to that flow”
                                                </span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">I
                                                like this one, will
                                                update to this one.</span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">or
                                                  “to provide the
                                                  specified DetNet
                                                  Service to that flow.”</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                  Section 3.1</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   o  An upper bound on out-of-order packet delivery.  It is worth</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">      noting that some DetNet applications are unable to tolerate any</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">      out-of-order delivery.</span></pre>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Is
                                                  that a sequence bound
                                                  or a time bound or
                                                  both?   I suspect that
                                                  a sequence bound
                                                  (maximum degree of
                                                  reordering in a flow,
                                                  independent of flow
                                                  rate) was intended. 
                                                  An analogous
                                                  clarification would be
                                                  helpful in section
                                                  3.2.2.1 .</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">It
                                                is intentionally kept
                                                high level in the
                                                architecture draft.
                                                Details are to be
                                                provided by the flow
                                                information model draft.
                                                Please see my previous
                                                mail: <a
                                                  moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/detnet/AWG2eemg_AWsvF2FwtREyd_xtC8"
                                                  target="_blank"
                                                  rel="noreferrer">
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/detnet/AWG2eemg_AWsvF2FwtREyd_xtC8</a>.</span><br>
                                              <br>
                                              <b><i><span
                                                    style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                                  </span></i></b><span
                                                style="color:#993366">OK.</span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                  Section 3.2.3</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I
                                                  don’t understand
                                                  “defined” in:</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   Even the use of</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   redundant paths through a network defined, e.g., by [RFC6372] do not</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   eliminate the chances of packet loss. </span></pre>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Was
                                                  “e.g., as defined by
                                                  [RFC6372],” intended?</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">Yes,
                                                this was the intention,
                                                will update to this one.</span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   Many real-time networks rely on physical rings or chains of two-port</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">How
                                                  does a “ring control
                                                  protocol” control
                                                  “chains”?  Suggest:
                                                  “ring control
                                                  protocol” -&gt;
                                                  “control protocol”</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">Also,
                                                  are paired chains
                                                  between common
                                                  endpoints intended, or
                                                  a more general notion
                                                  of chains?</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">This
                                                text refers to typical
                                                factory deployment,
                                                which is chain or ring.<br>
                                                It seems better to keep
                                                “ring control protocol”
                                                because they are often
                                                very different from
                                                generic control
                                                protocols applicable to
                                                mesh networks.<br>
                                                <br>
                                                Would flipping chain and
                                                ring resolve your
                                                concern?</span></p>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">   Many real-time networks rely on physical chains or rings of two-port</span></pre>
                                            <pre><span style="color:black">   devices, with a relatively simple ring control protocol. </span></pre>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span
style="color:#993366">[David&gt;] </span></i></b><span
                                                  style="color:#993366">It
                                                  feels like “ring
                                                  control protocol” is
                                                  an important phrase to
                                                  retain.   In the
                                                  original text, would
                                                  it be reasonable to
                                                  add “(applies to both
                                                  rings and chains)” to
                                                  the end of the
                                                  sentence?</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                          </div>
                                        </blockquote>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Well,
                                          I guess the point is that
                                          there are many specific ring
                                          protocols, but we are looking
                                          for a generic solution.<br>
                                          What about deleting "chains"
                                          from the sentence?</p>
                                        <blockquote
                                          style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                          <div
                                            style="border:none;border-left:solid
                                            blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in
                                            0in 4.0pt">
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   Explicit routes can be established various ways,</span></pre>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">established
                                                  various -&gt;
                                                  established in various</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">OK.</span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   This is</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   irrespective of the distribution method used, also applies to service</span></pre>
                                              <pre><span style="color:black">   protection over explicit routes. </span></pre>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">used,
                                                  also -&gt; used, and
                                                  also</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"
                                              style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">OK.</span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                  Figure 5 (Section
                                                  4.1.3)</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">The
                                                  UNI acronym is
                                                  introduced without
                                                  expansion or
                                                  definition – please
                                                  correct that, e.g., by
                                                  defining UNI in
                                                  Section 2.1.</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="color:#006600">DetNet-UNI
                                                is there among the
                                                definitions. It seems
                                                enough to me.</span><br>
                                              <br>
                                              <b><i><span
                                                    style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                                  </span></i></b><span
                                                style="color:#993366">That’s
                                                fine – I overlooked that
                                                definition, sorry.</span></p>
                                            <blockquote
                                              style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">--
                                                  Figure 9 (Section
                                                  4.7.2)</span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d"> </span></p>
                                              <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1f497d">I
                                                  think I understand
                                                  what’s going on, but
                                                  the use of
                                                  “add/remove” in the
                                                  figure should be
                                                  explained in
                                                  associated text.</span></p>
                                            </blockquote>
                                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                                style="color:#009900">What
                                                about updating the
                                                sentence above Figure 9
                                                to:</span><br>
                                              A packet with
                                              corresponding Flow-IDs is
                                              illustrated in Figure 9,
                                              which also indicates where
                                              Flow-ID can be added or
                                              removed.<br>
                                              <br>
                                              <b><i><span
                                                    style="color:#993366">[David&gt;]
                                                  </span></i></b><span
                                                style="color:#993366">Sure,
                                                with one minor edit:
                                                “where Flow-ID” -&gt;
                                                “where each Flow-ID”</span></p>
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                                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
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                                                    --David</span></p>
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                                                Thank you!<br>
                                                Janos</span><br>
                                              <br>
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                                                        detnet [<a
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                                                        <b>On Behalf Of
                                                        </b>János Farkas<br>
                                                        <b>Sent:</b>
                                                        Thursday, June
                                                        28, 2018 9:09 PM<br>
                                                        <b>To:</b> Lou
                                                        Berger; Stewart
                                                        Bryant; <a
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                                                        &gt;&gt; DetNet
                                                        WG<br>
                                                        <b>Subject:</b>
                                                        Re: [Detnet] WG
                                                        Last Call:
                                                        draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-05</span></p>
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                                                <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Dear
                                                  all,<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Off-line discussions
                                                  among Lou, Stewart,
                                                  and authors followed
                                                  the discussions to
                                                  properly address the
                                                  WGLC comments,
                                                  including the detailed
                                                  comments.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  A new revision of the
                                                  draft has been
                                                  uploaded:
draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-06.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  In addition to the
                                                  changes already
                                                  described in this
                                                  thread, the following
                                                  bigger changes have
                                                  been made to the
                                                  draft:<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <b>Section 2.1 Terms
                                                    used in this
                                                    document</b><br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Some definitions
                                                  refined as suggested
                                                  by the detailed
                                                  comments<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  New definitions have
                                                  been added:<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                     "allocation<br>
                                                             Resources
                                                  are dedicated to
                                                  support a DetNet
                                                  flow.  Depending<br>
                                                             on an
                                                  implementation, the
                                                  resource may be reused
                                                  by non-<br>
                                                             DetNet
                                                  flows when it is not
                                                  used by the DetNet
                                                  flow.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                     PEF     A Packet
                                                  Elimination Function
                                                  (PEF) eliminates
                                                  duplicate<br>
                                                             copies of
                                                  packets to prevent
                                                  excess packets
                                                  flooding the<br>
                                                             network or
                                                  duplicate packets
                                                  being sent out of the
                                                  DetNet<br>
                                                             domain. 
                                                  PEF can be implemented
                                                  by an edge node, a
                                                  relay<br>
                                                             node, or an
                                                  end system.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                    PRF     A Packet
                                                  Replication Function
                                                  (PRF) replicates
                                                  DetNet flow<br>
                                                             packets and
                                                  forwards them to one
                                                  or more next hops in
                                                  the<br>
                                                             DetNet
                                                  domain.  The number of
                                                  packet copies sent to
                                                  each next<br>
                                                             hop is a
                                                  DetNet flow specific
                                                  parameter at the node
                                                  doing the<br>
                                                            
                                                  replication.  PRF can
                                                  be implemented by an
                                                  edge node, a relay<br>
                                                             node, or an
                                                  end system.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                     PREOF   Collective
                                                  name for Packet
                                                  Replication,
                                                  Elimination, and<br>
                                                             Ordering
                                                  Functions.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                     POF     A Packet
                                                  Ordering Function
                                                  (POF) re-orders
                                                  packets within a<br>
                                                             DetNet flow
                                                  that are received out
                                                  of order.  This
                                                  function<br>
                                                             can be
                                                  implemented by an edge
                                                  node, a relay node, or
                                                  an end<br>
                                                             system.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                    DetNet service proxy<br>
                                                             Maps
                                                  between App-flows and
                                                  DetNet flows.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                     bridged path<br>
                                                             A VLAN
                                                  bridge uses the VLAN
                                                  ID and the destination
                                                  MAC<br>
                                                             address to
                                                  select the outbound
                                                  port hence the path
                                                  for a<br>
                                                             frame."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <b>Section 3.1 Primary
                                                    goals defining the
                                                    DetNet QoS</b><br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  A new QoS aspect has
                                                  been added:<br>
                                                     "o  An upper bound
                                                  on out-of-order packet
                                                  delivery.  It is worth<br>
                                                        noting that some
                                                  DetNet applications
                                                  are unable to tolerate
                                                  any<br>
                                                        out-of-order
                                                  delivery."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  The 3rd paragraph on
                                                  loss on page 8 after
                                                  the bullet list has
                                                  been extended to:<br>
                                                     "After congestion,
                                                  the most important
                                                  contributions to
                                                  packet loss are<br>
                                                     typically from
                                                  random media errors
                                                  and equipment
                                                  failures.  Service<br>
                                                     protection is the
                                                  name for the
                                                  mechanisms used by
                                                  DetNet to address<br>
                                                     these losses.  The
                                                  mechanisms employed
                                                  are constrained by the<br>
                                                     requirement to meet
                                                  the users' latency
                                                  requirements.  Packet<br>
                                                     replication and
                                                  elimination (Section
                                                  3.2.2) and packet
                                                  encoding<br>
                                                     (Section 3.2.2.3)
                                                  are described in this
                                                  document to provide
                                                  service<br>
                                                     protection; others
                                                  may be found.  For
                                                  instance, packet
                                                  encoding can<br>
                                                     be used to provide
                                                  service protection
                                                  against random media
                                                  errors,<br>
                                                     packet replication
                                                  and elimination can be
                                                  used to provide
                                                  service<br>
                                                     protection against
                                                  equipment failures. 
                                                  This mechanism
                                                  distributes<br>
                                                     the contents of
                                                  DetNet flows over
                                                  multiple paths in time
                                                  and/or<br>
                                                     space, so that the
                                                  loss of some of the
                                                  paths does need not
                                                  cause the<br>
                                                     loss of any
                                                  packets."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <b>3.2.2.  Service
                                                    Protection</b><br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Service protection is
                                                  used as a more generic
                                                  term. Introductory
                                                  text added:<br>
                                                     "Service protection
                                                  aims to mitigate or
                                                  eliminate packet loss
                                                  due to<br>
                                                     equipment failures,
                                                  random media and/or
                                                  memory faults.  These
                                                  types<br>
                                                     of packet loss can
                                                  be greatly reduced by
                                                  spreading the data
                                                  over<br>
                                                     multiple disjoint
                                                  forwarding paths. 
                                                  Various service
                                                  protection<br>
                                                     methods are
                                                  described in
                                                  [RFC6372], e.g., 1+1
                                                  linear protection.<br>
                                                     This section
                                                  describes the
                                                  functional details of
                                                  an additional method<br>
                                                     in Section 3.2.2.2,
                                                  which can be
                                                  implemented as
                                                  described in<br>
                                                     Section 3.2.2.3 or
                                                  as specified in
                                                  [I-D.ietf-detnet-dp-sol-mpls]
                                                  in<br>
                                                     order to provide
                                                  1+n hitless
                                                  protection.  The
                                                  appropriate service<br>
                                                     protection
                                                  mechanism depends on
                                                  the scenario and the
                                                  requirements."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  New sub-section added:<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  "3.2.2.1.  In-Order
                                                  Delivery<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                     Out-of-order packet
                                                  delivery can be a side
                                                  effect of service<br>
                                                     protection. 
                                                  Packets delivered
                                                  out-of-order impact
                                                  the amount of<br>
                                                     buffering needed at
                                                  the destination to
                                                  properly process the
                                                  received<br>
                                                     data.  Such packets
                                                  also influence the
                                                  jitter of a flow.  The
                                                  DetNet<br>
                                                     service includes
                                                  maximum allowed
                                                  misordering as a
                                                  constraint.  Zero<br>
                                                     misordering would
                                                  be a valid service
                                                  constraint to reflect
                                                  that the<br>
                                                     end system(s) of
                                                  the flow cannot
                                                  tolerate any
                                                  out-of-order delivery.<br>
                                                     Service protection
                                                  may provide a
                                                  mechanism to support
                                                  in-order<br>
                                                     delivery."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <b>3.2.2.2. Packet
                                                    Replication and
                                                    Elimination</b><br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  New bullet added as
                                                  the last one:<br>
                                                     "o  The Packet
                                                  Ordering Function
                                                  (POF) uses the
                                                  sequencing information<br>
                                                        to re-order a
                                                  DetNet flow's packets
                                                  that are received out
                                                  of<br>
                                                        order."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  New sentence added
                                                  after the bullet list:
                                                  <br>
                                                  "The order in which a
                                                  node applies the PEF
                                                  and the PRF to a
                                                  DetNet<br>
                                                  flow is implementation
                                                  specific."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  2nd paragraph after
                                                  the bullet list has
                                                  been updated to:<br>
                                                  "Some service
                                                  protection mechanisms
                                                  rely on switching from
                                                  one flow to<br>
                                                     another when a
                                                  failure of a flow is
                                                  detected.  Contrarily,
                                                  packet<br>
                                                     replication and
                                                  elimination combines
                                                  the DetNet member
                                                  flows sent<br>
                                                     along multiple
                                                  different paths, and
                                                  performs a
                                                  packet-by-packet<br>
                                                     selection of which
                                                  to discard, e.g.,
                                                  based on sequencing
                                                  information."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <b>3.2.3.  Explicit
                                                    routes</b><br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Out-of-order aspect
                                                  added to the first
                                                  paragraph, which is
                                                  about distributed
                                                  routing:<br>
                                                  "Furthermore,
                                                  out-of-order<br>
                                                  packet delivery can be
                                                  a side effect of route
                                                  changes."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  New sentence added to
                                                  the 3rd paragraph:<br>
                                                  "Explicit routes can
                                                  be established various<br>
                                                  ways, e.g., with
                                                  RSVP-TE [RFC3209],
                                                  with Segment Routing
                                                  (SR)<br>
[I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing], via a Software Defined Networking<br>
                                                  approach [RFC7426],
                                                  with IS-IS [RFC7813],
                                                  etc."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  New paragraph added:<br>
                                                     "Out-of-order
                                                  packet delivery can be
                                                  a side effect of
                                                  distributing a<br>
                                                     single flow over
                                                  multiple paths
                                                  especially when there
                                                  is a change<br>
                                                     from one path to
                                                  another when combining
                                                  the flow.  This is<br>
                                                     irrespective of the
                                                  distribution method
                                                  used, also applies to
                                                  service<br>
                                                     protection over
                                                  explicit routes.  As
                                                  described in Section
                                                  3.2.2.1,<br>
                                                     out-of-order
                                                  packets influence the
                                                  jitter of a flow and
                                                  impact the<br>
                                                     amount of buffering
                                                  needed to process the
                                                  data; therefore,
                                                  DetNet<br>
                                                     service includes
                                                  maximum allowed
                                                  misordering as a
                                                  constraint.  The<br>
                                                     use of explicit
                                                  routes helps to
                                                  provide in-order
                                                  delivery because<br>
                                                     there is no
                                                  immediate route change
                                                  with the network
                                                  topology, but the<br>
                                                     changes are
                                                  plannable as they are
                                                  between the different
                                                  explicit<br>
                                                     routes."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <b><br>
                                                    4.1.1.
                                                    Representative
                                                    Protocol Stack Model</b><br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  "Explicit routes" have
                                                  been added to Figure 2
                                                  with the corresponding
                                                  explanation:<br>
                                                   "Explicit routes<br>
                                                             The DetNet
                                                  transport layer
                                                  provides mechanisms to
                                                  ensure that<br>
                                                             fixed paths
                                                  are provided for
                                                  DetNet flows.  These
                                                  explicit<br>
                                                             paths avoid
                                                  the impact of network
                                                  convergence."<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Section 4.11 Connected
                                                  islands vs. networks
                                                  of v05 has been
                                                  deleted because it was
                                                  just a leftover from
                                                  early drafts on what
                                                  DetNet WG should do;
                                                  which are covered by
                                                  the charter anyways.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  References have been
                                                  cleaned up and brought
                                                  up-to-date.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Refinements have been
                                                  implemented in the
                                                  draft according to
                                                  Lou's detailed
                                                  comments. They are not
                                                  listed here because
                                                  they are minor
                                                  changes.<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  Best regards,<br>
                                                  Janos</p>
                                                <div>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal">On
                                                    6/12/2018 2:48 PM,
                                                    Lou Berger wrote:</p>
                                                </div>
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                                                    Balázs, <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    Thanks for the
                                                    response -- please
                                                    see below. <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    ---------- <br>
                                                    On June 12, 2018
                                                    4:07:35 AM Balázs
                                                    Varga A <a
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                                                    <br>
                                                  </p>
                                                  <blockquote
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Hi Lou, Thanks for the comments. See
                                                      reactions inline.
                                                      Document update in
                                                      progress. Cheers
                                                      Bala'zs <br>
                                                      <br>
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                                                      Message----- <br>
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                                                      On Behalf Of Lou
                                                      Berger <br>
                                                      Sent: 2018. június
                                                      1. 22:42 <br>
                                                      To: DetNet WG <a
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                                                        rel="noreferrer">&lt;detnet@ietf.org&gt;</a>;
                                                      <a
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                                                      <br>
                                                      Subject: [Detnet]
                                                      Promised comments
                                                      on
draft-ietf-detnet-architecture <br>
                                                      <br>
                                                      Hi, <br>
                                                      <br>
                                                           I have a
                                                      number of high
                                                      level comments on
                                                      the document that
                                                      I'd like to  raise
                                                      below.  I also
                                                      have a number of
                                                      more
                                                      editorial/specific
                                                      comments that  I'd
                                                      like to review
                                                      directly with the
                                                      authors and then
                                                      have them report
                                                      back  on changes
                                                      -- if any turn out
                                                      to be more
                                                      substantive
                                                      discussions from
                                                      the  author's
                                                      perspective, I'll
                                                      raise these on the
                                                      list separately. </p>
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                                                  </p>
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style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                      - WRT Section
                                                      4.4.3, I think the
                                                      inclusion of a
                                                      distributed
                                                      control plane in
                                                      the "Network
                                                      Plane" is
                                                      inconsistent with
                                                      other functional
                                                      definitions and
                                                      conflates where a
                                                      function resides
                                                      from the actual
                                                      function and that
                                                      whether control is
                                                      implemented in a
                                                      fully centralized,
                                                      fully distributed
                                                      or some hybrid
                                                      form doesn't
                                                      fundamentally
                                                      change  the
                                                      control function's
                                                      role -- therefore
                                                      I think the
                                                      sections 4..4.2
                                                      and .3 should be
                                                      revised
                                                      accordingly <br>
                                                      [Balázs Varga A]
                                                      Agree in
                                                      principal. Let's
                                                      discuss the
                                                      details. </p>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Okay
                                                    - I'll work with you
                                                    off line and we can
                                                    report back the
                                                    results/proposed
                                                    changes. <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                  </p>
                                                  <blockquote
                                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                    <p class="MsoNormal"
style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">- In several places it's not clear that
                                                      DetNet service is
                                                      always a L3
                                                      service which is
                                                      controlled using
                                                      L3 identifiers,
                                                      i.e., IP addresses
                                                      -- this is true
                                                      even in the MPLS
                                                      service case and
                                                      the TSN over MPLS
                                                      case. I think this
                                                      is an important
                                                      point to be clear
                                                      on in the
                                                      document. <br>
                                                      [Balázs Varga A] I
                                                      am not sure.
                                                      DetNet service is
                                                      always provided
                                                      over a L3 network
                                                      (IP or MPLS), that
                                                      is fine. However
                                                      the service itself
                                                      can be L2 or L3.
                                                      In case of TSN
                                                      Ethernet frames
                                                      are transported,
                                                      so it is a L2
                                                      service. In case
                                                      of IP end systems
                                                      IP packets are
                                                      transported so it
                                                      is a L3 service. </p>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                    Humm - While I agree
                                                    that DetNet is
                                                    providing an
                                                    (enhanced) L2VPN
                                                    service, it is not
                                                    itself providing
                                                    control or service
                                                    of L2 devices --
                                                    this is TSN's job. 
                                                    The fact that DetNet
                                                    is all about
                                                    behavior of L3 nodes
                                                    (i.e., IP and
                                                    PW/MPLS) and not L2
                                                    nodes (i.e., TSN
                                                    bridges) is
                                                    something the
                                                    architecture should
                                                    make unambiguous. <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    Thanks, <br>
                                                    Lou <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                  </p>
                                                  <blockquote
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                                                    <p class="MsoNormal">Please
                                                      let me know what
                                                      you think. <br>
                                                      <br>
                                                      Cheers, <br>
                                                      <br>
                                                      Lou <br>
                                                      <br>
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href="mailto:detnet@ietf.org" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">detnet@ietf.org</a>
                                                      <br>
                                                      <a
                                                        moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/detnet" target="_blank"
                                                        rel="noreferrer">https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/detnet</a>
                                                    </p>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                                </blockquote>
                                                <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                  style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                  <br>
                                                </p>
                                                <div>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal">On
                                                    6/12/2018 6:27 PM,
                                                    Stewart Bryant
                                                    wrote:</p>
                                                </div>
                                                <blockquote
                                                  style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                  <p><span
                                                      style="color:black">Dear
                                                      Bala'zs</span></p>
                                                  <p><span
                                                      style="color:black">Thank
                                                      you your for your
                                                      consideration of
                                                      these points. I
                                                      will just pick up
                                                      a few that need
                                                      some further
                                                      thought:</span></p>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"> </p>
                                                  <blockquote
                                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                    <div>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">   
                                                        DetNet transit
                                                        node</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">          
                                                        A node operating
                                                        at the DetNet
                                                        transport layer,
                                                        that utilizes</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">          
                                                        link layer
                                                        and/or network
                                                        layer switching
                                                        across multiple</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">          
                                                        links and/or
                                                        sub-networks to
                                                        provide paths
                                                        for DetNet
                                                        service</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">          
                                                        layer
                                                        functions. 
                                                        Optionally
                                                        provides
                                                        congestion
                                                        protection</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">          
                                                        over those
                                                        paths.  An MPLS
                                                        LSR is an
                                                        example of a
                                                        DetNet</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">          
                                                        transit node.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        In that example
                                                        it would have to
                                                        be a DetNet
                                                        enable/aware
                                                        LSR. An </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        ordinary LSR
                                                        would not know
                                                        anything about
                                                        DetNet.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[Balázs
                                                        Varga A] No, A
                                                        DetNet aware LSR
                                                        would be a relay
                                                        node (S-PE).</p>
                                                    </div>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                    I think the
                                                    confusion is what
                                                    "DetNet Transport
                                                    Layer" means. This <br>
                                                    technology touches
                                                    on Transport Layer
                                                    in  the L4 sense,
                                                    and the<br>
                                                    Transport Network
                                                    Layer as in the
                                                    packet network that
                                                    carries<br>
                                                    L3 packets. <br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    So I think that we
                                                    need to clarify
                                                    whether a DetNet
                                                    transit node<br>
                                                    is an S-PE (i.e. a a
                                                    transit node in the
                                                    DetNet layer), or a
                                                    P node<br>
                                                    (i.e. a transit node
                                                    that is carrying
                                                    DetNet packets but
                                                    could be<br>
                                                    carrying any sort of
                                                    MPLS packet)<br>
                                                    <br>
                                                  </p>
                                                  <blockquote
                                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                    <div>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">============</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        These three
                                                        techniques can
                                                        be applied
                                                        independently,
                                                        giving eight</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        possible
                                                        combinations,
                                                        including none
                                                        (no DetNet),
                                                        although some</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        combinations are
                                                        of wider utility
                                                        than others. 
                                                        This separation
                                                        keeps</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        the protocol
                                                        stack coherent
                                                        and maximizes
                                                        interoperability
                                                        with</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        existing and
                                                        developing
                                                        standards in
                                                        this (IETF) and
                                                        other Standards</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        Development
                                                        Organizations. 
                                                        Some examples of
                                                        typical expected</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        combinations:</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        o  Explicit
                                                        routes plus
                                                        service
                                                        protection are
                                                        exactly the
                                                        techniques</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        employed by
                                                        [HSR-PRP]. 
                                                        Explicit routes
                                                        are achieved by
                                                        limiting</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        the physical
                                                        topology of the
                                                        network, and the
sequentialization,</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        replication, and
                                                        duplicate
                                                        elimination are
                                                        facilitated by
                                                        packet</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        tags added at
                                                        the front or the
                                                        end of Ethernet
                                                        frames.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        ER can be done
                                                        virtually as
                                                        well as
                                                        physically. RSVP
                                                        is a type of </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        ER, as is
                                                        Adj-SID based
                                                        SR, and we can
                                                        design other
                                                        types.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[Balázs
                                                        Varga A] Agree,
                                                        but these are
                                                        examples.
                                                        Statement is for
                                                        HSR-PRP.</p>
                                                    </div>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">So
                                                    the question is
                                                    whether we should
                                                    expand the set of
                                                    examples,
                                                    particularly<br>
                                                    to more accessible
                                                    ones.<br>
                                                    <br>
                                                    ============</p>
                                                  <blockquote
                                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                    <div>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">                   
                                                        Packet
                                                        replication and
                                                        elimination</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">               
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                        relay &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">              
                                                        &gt;
                                                        /------------+ R
                                                        node E
                                                        +------------\
                                                        &gt;</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        &gt;
                                                        /                 
                                                        v +
                                                        ^              
                                                        \ &gt;</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        end    R
                                                        +                  
                                                        v |
                                                        ^               
                                                        + E end</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        system  
                                                        +                  
                                                        v |
                                                        ^               
                                                        +   system</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        &gt;
                                                        \                 
                                                        v +
                                                        ^              
                                                        / &gt;</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">              
                                                        &gt;
                                                        \------------+ R
                                                        relay E
                                                        +-----------/
                                                        &gt;</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">               
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt; 
                                                        node &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;
                                                        &gt; &gt; &gt;</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">                                
                                                        Figure 1</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        Packet
                                                        replication and
                                                        elimination does
                                                        not react to and
                                                        correct</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        failures; it is
                                                        entirely
                                                        passive.  Thus,
                                                        intermittent
                                                        failures,</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        I think it copes
                                                        with
                                                        intermittent
                                                        failures OK.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[Balázs
                                                        Varga A] Yes,
                                                        PRF and PEF can
                                                        eliminate the
                                                        effect of such
                                                        failures. But
                                                        text </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">intends
                                                        to say that it
                                                        is passive. It
                                                        is not reacting
                                                        to such
                                                        failures. No
                                                        change in text.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                    </div>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                    You say that PREF
                                                    does not correct
                                                    failures. I would
                                                    contend that is
                                                    exactly<br>
                                                    what it does. Sure
                                                    it does not react
                                                    but it does correct,
                                                    and it does<br>
                                                    address intermittent
                                                    failures.</p>
                                                  <blockquote
                                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                    <div>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">===========</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        transported
                                                        between the peer
                                                        end systems. 
                                                        Therefore, the
                                                        following</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        possible types /
                                                        formats of a
                                                        DetNet flow are
                                                        distinguished in
                                                        this</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        document:</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        o  App-flow:
                                                        native format of
                                                        a DetNet flow. 
                                                        It does not
                                                        contain any</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        DetNet related
                                                        attributes.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        o 
                                                        DetNet-t-flow:
                                                        specific format
                                                        of a DetNet
                                                        flow.  Only
                                                        requires</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        the congestion /
                                                        latency features
                                                        provided by the
                                                        Detnet transport</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        layer.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        o 
                                                        DetNet-s-flow:
                                                        specific format
                                                        of a DetNet
                                                        flow.  Only
                                                        requires</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        the
                                                        replication/elimination
                                                        feature ensured
                                                        by the DetNet
                                                        service</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        layer.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        o 
                                                        DetNet-st-flow:
                                                        specific format
                                                        of a DetNet
                                                        flow.  It
                                                        requires</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        both DetNet
                                                        service layer
                                                        and DetNet
                                                        transport layer
                                                        functions</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">     
                                                        during
                                                        forwarding.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        I find the
                                                        relisting of
                                                        these types
                                                        confusing.
                                                        Wheren't they
                                                        defined </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        in the section
                                                        above?</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">[Balázs
                                                        Varga A] This is
                                                        inline with the
                                                        previous section
                                                        " Grouping of
                                                        end systems ".</p>
                                                    </div>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Surely
                                                    if we have defined
                                                    them we never need
                                                    to do anything but
                                                    name them in<br>
                                                    later sections.
                                                    Redefinition is
                                                    never a good idea
                                                    because it often
                                                    leads to <br>
                                                    conflicting
                                                    definitions.<br>
                                                    <br>
                                                  </p>
                                                  <blockquote
                                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                    <div>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">============</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        [HSR-PRP]  IEC,
                                                        "High
                                                        availability
                                                        seamless
                                                        redundancy (HSR)
                                                        is a</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        further
                                                        development of
                                                        the PRP
                                                        approach,
                                                        although HSR</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        functions
                                                        primarily as a
                                                        protocol for
                                                        creating media</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        redundancy while
                                                        PRP, as
                                                        described in the
                                                        previous</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        section, creates
                                                        network
                                                        redundancy.  PRP
                                                        and HSR are both</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        described in the
                                                        IEC 62439 3
                                                        standard.",</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        &lt;<a
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://webstore.iec.ch/webstore/webstore.nsf/" target="_blank"
                                                          rel="noreferrer">http://webstore.iec.ch/webstore/webstore.nsf/</a></p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
artnum/046615!opendocument&gt;.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        Not available at
                                                        the time of this
                                                        review, but my
                                                        recollection is
                                                      </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        that this is not
                                                        readily
                                                        available
                                                        without paying a
                                                        large fee.</p>
                                                    </div>
                                                  </blockquote>
                                                  <p class="MsoNormal"
                                                    style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
                                                    If we decide that
                                                    this is essential as
                                                    a key reference,
                                                    there needs to be<br>
                                                    some suitable text,
                                                    as this will get
                                                    raised a number of
                                                    times between<br>
                                                    here an publication
                                                    as first the
                                                    directorates and
                                                    then the ADs run<br>
                                                    into this.<br>
                                                    <br>
                                                  </p>
                                                  <blockquote
                                                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                                                    <div>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">===========</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">  
                                                        [ISA95]   
                                                        ANSI/ISA,
                                                        "Enterprise-Control
                                                        System
                                                        Integration Part
                                                        1:</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        Models and
                                                        Terminology",
                                                        2000,</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">             
                                                        &lt;<a
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.isa.org/isa95/" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer"><span
style="color:windowtext;text-decoration:none">https://www.isa.org/isa95/</span></a>&gt;.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText"> </p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
                                                        Should that be
                                                        2000, or 2010.</p>
                                                      <p
                                                        class="m_-571608442216698499MsoPlainText">SB&gt;
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Hi Siwar,

I second Rodney.
Thank you very much for your efforts on working with IEEE 802.1AS YANG!
IEEE 802.1AS belongs to IEEE 802.1 ( http://ieee802.org/1 ). IEEE 
802.1AS YANG will be done in IEEE 802.1. It would be great if you could 
contribute to IEEE 802.1.

Best regards,
JÃ¡nos


On 4/9/2018 9:13 PM, Rodney Cummings wrote:
> Hello Siwar,
>
> It is good to hear that you see a need for YANG for IEEE 802.1AS. I agree.
>
> The fundamental issue is that IEEE 802 working groups have assumed the
> responsibility for developing YANG modules for IEEE 802 standards,
> including 802.1AS. For example, this site is being used for 802
> coordination on YANG:
> 	https://1.ieee802.org/yangsters/
>
> Therefore, your proposal is best targeted as a proposal
> to the IEEE 802.1 working group, and not an IETF working group.
>
> I notice that your YANG is supporting the published IEEE Std 802.1AS-2011.
> Although I don't speak for the 802.1 working group, I think the assumption
> there was that YANG would be more desired for the upcoming revision of
> 802.1AS. Since the revision of 802.1AS is still a work in progress, that
> is one of the reasons why 802.1 currently has no YANG project for 802.1AS.
>
> If you need YANG for 802.1AS-2011, you could certainly bring that as a
> request to the 802.1 working group. If we move forward with a project
> for that, I would recommend doing it as an augment to:
> 	https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang/
> That 1588-2008 project is getting closer to IESG Last Call (I hope),
> so I doubt that using it as the basis for a new 802.1AS-2011 project
> would be a problem.
>
> Rodney
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: detnet [mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of BEN HADJ SAID
>> Siwar
>> Sent: Thursday, March 29, 2018 11:38 AM
>> To: detnet@ietf.org
>> Cc: BOC Michael <michael.boc@cea.fr>; siwar.benhadjsaid@gmail.com
>> Subject: [Detnet] TR: New Version Notification for draft-benhadjsaid-
>> detnet-gptp-yang-00.txt
>>
>> Hi detnet WG,
>>
>>
>>
>> This mail is to announce that we have just uploaded this 802.1AS YANG
>> model.
>>
>>
>>
>> We know that there is a big effort In IEEE 802.1 TSN to have IEEE 802.1AS-
>> rev published with its YANG model. However, for our own internal projects
>> we were in need for 802.1AS YANG model so that our SDN controller can
>> manage the time synchronization configuration. This allows us to manage
>> all TSN mechanisms via the same approach ( using YANG models).
>>
>>
>>
>> We are open to your comments.
>>
>>
>>
>> Siwar
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> -----Message d'origine-----
>>
>> De : internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>>
>> EnvoyÃ© : jeudi 29 mars 2018 18:21
>>
>> Ã€ : BEN HADJ SAID Siwar <SIWAR.BenHadjSaid@cea.fr>; BOC Michael
>> <michael.boc@cea.fr>; BEN HADJ SAID Siwar <SIWAR.BenHadjSaid@cea.fr>; BOC
>> Michael <michael.boc@cea.fr>
>>
>> Objet : New Version Notification for draft-benhadjsaid-detnet-gptp-yang-
>> 00.txt
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-benhadjsaid-detnet-gptp-yang-00.txt
>>
>> has been successfully submitted by Siwar Ben Hadj Said and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>>
>>
>> Name:		draft-benhadjsaid-detnet-gptp-yang
>>
>> Revision:	00
>>
>> Title:		YANG Model of IEEE 802.1AS
>>
>> Document date:	2018-03-29
>>
>> Group:		Individual Submission
>>
>> Pages:		43
>>
>> URL:            https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-
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>> Abstract:
>>
>>     This document describes a YANG data model for the management of IEEE
>>
>>     802.1AS module in network devices.  This data model includes
>>
>>     configuration data and state data (status information and counters
>>
>>     for the collection of statistics).
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Hi Janos,

The concept defined in this draft goes outside the scope of 802.1Q.=20
Taking a subset of the OpenFlow 1.0 spec and defining corresponding=20
node-side YANG model with transactional flow table (/flows) and=C2=A0=20
optional support for controller introducing single RPC (transmit-packet)=20
and notification (packet-received) corresponding to OFPT_PACKET_OUT and=20
OFPT_PACKET_IN messages seemed like a natural evolution of the SDN=20
concept for the specification of alternative to OpenFlow southbound=20
protocol (e.g. over NETCONF). With OpenFlow-derived flow model=20
addressing 1. forwarding (switching) and adding a=C2=A0 2. flexible sched=
uler=20
model referencing the flows a complete bridge model is presented. It can=20
be implemented seamlessly on all OpenFlow 1.0 and above supporting=20
hardware and more importantly extensions (to flow forwarding or=20
scheduling) to the OpenFlow spec can be specified in YANG.

A device implementing this model can implement the 802.1Q family of=20
models with proper controller software (STP, LLDP etc. which is readily=20
available) but it is not limited to that.

We have been following closely the models developed by the IEEE TSN and=20
we have both reused terminology and ensured all of those standard=20
solutions can be represented with the generic scheduler model part of=20
this draft. The IEEE YANG model is great reference but is not suitable=20
for all applications especially when more flexibility is required and=20
being able to augment a module to document our vendor specific=20
extensions. The 802.1Q are limited in certain ways to 802.1Q (for=20
example fixed to 8 traffic classes either priority or time slots).

Attempts to make 802.1Q configuration more generic and a subset to a=20
more generic forwarding configuration mechanism are not unprecedented=C2=A0=
=20
(see=20
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model/=20
). Here virtual interfaces instead of flows are introduced.

IMO a standard flows model is needed starting from something with=20
running software and trying to find consensus. I see this goal is=20
already part of the detnet focus=20
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model and=20
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-geng-detnet-conf-yang

Requesting comments on the ietf netmod list seemed like a good place to=20
start to allow for open discussion and if we manage to identify anything=20
that falls into the scope of IEEE 802.1Q except the name "bridge" I=20
would be glad to contribute there. Same goes for the detnet WG.

Vladimir


On 08/03/2018 05:59 PM, J=C3=A1nos Farkas wrote:
> Hi Vladimir,
>
> Bridging including bridge management belong to IEEE 802.1:=20
> https://1.ieee802.org/. You may consider contributing to IEEE 802.1.=20
> The next Interim is hosed by your company in Oslo:=20
> https://1.ieee802.org/meetings.
>
> IEEE 802.1Qcp is the basic bridge management specification, which is=20
> an approved draft standard to be published soon:=20
> http://standards.ieee.org/findstds/standard/802.1Qcp-2018.html. (The=20
> archived web page of the finished project:=20
> https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcp.)
>
> The pages of the ongoing projects are available via the TSN page:=20
> https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/#Ongoing_TSN_Projects, including P802.1Qcw=20
> (https://1.ieee802.org/tsn/802-1qcw/), which specifies YANG for=20
> various bridge scheduling mechanisms.
>
> Best regards,
> Janos
>
>
> On 7/17/2018 4:26 PM, Vladimir Vassilev wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have submitted a draft=20
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/=
=20
>> that proposes a model for network bridge management based on the=20
>> concept of flows. The model has 2 components 1. Forwarding based on=20
>> flows. 2. Scheduling/QoS based on gate controller topologies that=20
>> provide a new and very generic way of modeling and managing the=20
>> actual scheduler design and map the flows to scheduler topology inputs=
.
>>
>> There is similar work on the flow based forwarding in detnet however=20
>> I am not sure detnet is the right workgroup to be defining the flow=20
>> model.=C2=A0 I think the flow concept is important and general. It is =
as=20
>> significant as the concept of interfaces and is not only relevant to=20
>> detnet. Let me know what is your opinion of the draft and the=20
>> proposed network bridge concept.
>>
>> Vladimir
>>
>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>> Subject:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 New Version Notification for=20
>> draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt
>> Date:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 Sat, 14 Jul 2018 22:04:06 -0700
>> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
>> To:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 Vladimir Vassilev <vladimir@transpacket.co=
m>
>>
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Vladimir Vassilev and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 draft-vassilev-netmod-=
network-bridge
>> Revision:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 00
>> Title:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 A YANG Data Model for=
 Network Bridge Management
>> Document date:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 2018-07-14
>> Group:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 Individual Submission
>> Pages:=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 44
>> URL:=20
>> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bri=
dge-00.txt
>> Status:=20
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge/
>> Htmlized:=20
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-bridge-00
>> Htmlized:=20
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-vassilev-netmod-network-br=
idge
>>
>>
>> Abstract:
>> =C2=A0=C2=A0 This document introduces new YANG model of a network brid=
ge.
>>
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of=20
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> The IETF Secretariat
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A new meeting session request has just been submitted by Lou Berger, a Chair of the detnet working group.


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Working Group Name: Deterministic Networking
Area Name: Routing Area
Session Requester: Lou Berger

Number of Sessions: 1
Length of Session(s):  2 Hours
Number of Attendees: 100
Conflicts to Avoid: 
 First Priority: pce teas ccamp netmod mpls
 Second Priority: rtgwg   pals bess lsr tsvwg
 Third Priority: nvo3


People who must be present:
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Title: Further Information About IETF Work Relevant to Network Slicing
Submission Date: 2018-08-14
URL of the IETF Web page: https://datatracker.ietf.org/liaison/1595/

From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Technical Contacts: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>,Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>
Purpose: In response

Referenced liaison: Reply LS on IETF work related to the management and orchestration of network slicing (https://datatracker.ietf.org/liaison/1588/)

Body: Thank you for your liaison statement "Reply LS on IETF work related to the 
management and orchestration of network slicing" from 3GPP-TSG-SA-WG5 dated
7/23/18. This has been passed to the chairs of the IETF's L2SM working group to
coordinate a response. 

Our understanding of the 3GPP's definition of a "Transport Network" is that it 
covers any network that underlies and provides connectivity for 3GPP networks or 
services. There are, of course, many other definitions of "Transport Network" so 
it is important that we are clear on this. 

The IETF works on IP and MPLS dataplane technologies as well as higher layer 
encapsulations such as UDP, TCP, and HTTP all of which may be applicable to your 
requirements. Additionally, the IETF works on control and management plane 
specifications applicable to all technology layers including IP and sub-IP 
transport networks. 

You may be interested in the work of the DetNet working group [1] which is 
collaborating with the IEEE802.1 TSN task group to develop mechanisms to provide 
deterministic data paths that operate over Layer 2 bridged and Layer 3 routed 
segments, where such paths can provide bounds on latency, loss, and packet delay 
variation (jitter), and high reliability. These features may prove to be 
particularly useful in supporting connectivity (or slices) for 5G services. The
DetNet Architecture is largely complete and is described in [2].  DetNet's use
of the IP [3] and MPLS [4] date planes is still being defined in the working
group.  You may also be interested in early work on configuration control in 
[5].

With regard to your specific enquiry about management interfaces there are 
several layers of interaction that you should consider: 

- The L2VPN and L3VPN service models ([6] and [7]) are intended to allow a 
  customer to request a VPN connectivity service from an operator. These
  models may be used as a 'paper procedure' allowing a common format for
  service requests, or may facilitate automation so that one software
  component may make requests to another component responsible for 
  orchestrating the underlying network. The services described by these
  two models would normally be provided by IP or MPLS networks, but the
  details of how the service is provided are deliberately out of scope. 
  Thus, direct control of transport resources do not fall within the 
  scope of these service models. What is in scope are the points of 
  attachment (connection end points), the type of attachment circuit, and
  the quality of connectivity that is required (such as bandwidth and 
  quality of service). The way that service models fit into the management
  of networks is described in RFC 8309 [8]. 

- VPN delivery models are being specified in the BESS working group [9]. 
  These models allow an operator to manage a network for the delivery of a
  VPN connectivity service, and would normally be provided by IP or MPLS
  networks. These models describe the details of how the service is 
  implemented within the network. Examples include the YANG Data Model for
  MPLS-based L2VPN [10], the YANG Data Model for BGP/MPLS L3 VPNs [11], and
  the YANG Data Model for EVPN [12]. 

- The TEAS working group [13] is developing a YANG model for the 
  configuration and management of Traffic Engineering (TE) interfaces,
  tunnels and Label Switched Paths (LSPs) [14]. While this is a service
  delivery model, it closely matches the corresponding service model for
  'connectivity as a service'. 

- The TEAS working group is also working on the Abstraction and Control of 
  Traffic Engineered Networks (ACTN) [15]. This approach allows a network 
  user to request and manipulate 'topology' in the form of a virtual 
  network and is accessed through YANG models such as [16] and [17]. This
  is applicable to all forms of traffic engineered network from MPLS
  through Ethernet, TDM, and OTN, to WDM. Virtual network creation and 
  operation may be similar to 'network slicing' that you describe: this is
  discussed in an individual contribution Internet-Draft [18], while a
  further individual document [19] describes an architecture for data
  model driven network management of virtual networks. 
          
Further dialogue is needed around the topic of traffic isolation in network 
slicing in particular with respect to its application to shared packet or frame 
networks. The IETF has developed techniques to protect against misdelivery of 
traffic and to secure customer traffic as it is transmitted over the network. 
Similarly, there are protocol mechanisms to reserve and dedicate network 
resources to specific traffic flows or to provide statistical accounting that, 
combined with traffic policing, ensure that network resources are not 
over-committed. Nevertheless, it has to be understood that packet and frame 
networks are essentially shared-media networks where separation or isolation of 
traffic is logical not physical. 

It is often hard to provide a firm roadmap for delivery of IETF specifications 
as the work only completes when it is technically sound and has sufficient 
consensus for publication: it is not tied to any formal schedule. However, we 
can suggest the following information: 

- [2] Still needs work: may be an RFC within 12 months 
- [3] Unknown timing 
- [4] Unknown timing 
- [5] Unknown timing 
- [6] Complete and in RFC Editor processing: likely to be an RFC within two 
      months 
- [7] Already an RFC 
- [8] Already an RFC 
- [10] Still needs work: may be an RFC within 12 months 
- [11] Still needs work: may be an RFC within 12 months 
- [12] Still needs work: may be an RFC within 12 months 
- [14] Still needs work: may be an RFC within 6 months 
- [15] Complete and in RFC Editor processing: likely to be an RFC within two 
       months 
- [16] Still needs work: may be an RFC within 6 months 
- [17] Still needs work: may be an RFC within 6 months 
- [18] Unknown timing 
- [19] Unknown timing 

Best regards, 
Adrian Farrel and Qin Wu (IETF L2SM Working Group chairs) 

[1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/about/ 
[2] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture
[3] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-dp-sol-ip
[4] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-dp-sol-mpls
[5] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-geng-detnet-conf-yang
[6] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10.txt 
[7] https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8299.txt 
[8] https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8309.txt 
[9] https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/bess/about/ 
[10] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bess-l2vpn-yang-08.txt 
[11] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bess-l3vpn-yang-03.txt 
[12] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-yang-05.txt 
[13] https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/teas/about/ 
[14] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-16.txt 
[15] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-15.txt 
[16] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-teas-actn-yang-01.txt 
[17] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-01.txt 
[18] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-king-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-03.txt 
[19] https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-wu-model-driven-management-virtualization-01.txt
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Hi

Where are we with registering for the joint session, i.e. just 
registering for the Sunday.

I have booked Sat/Sun on the IETF scheme to attend the meeting, I hope 
that IEEE are not going to require that we make split bookings to get a 
good rate (ideally free) at the joint session.

Thanks

Stewart.


On 06/08/2018 22:20, Janos Farkas wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Please note that hotel reservation for IETF 103 is possible: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/hotel/.
>
> My understanding of the cancellation policy for reservations at Bangkok Marriott Marquis Queen's Park is that cancellation is free up to 72 hours prior to arrival, however, it is not possible to change the reservation. I may be wrong. (This is what I saw after making a reservation.)
>
> Note that hotel room booking via IEEE 802 is needed in order to get a discount from the IEEE 802 Plenary registration fee. At least one night is needed. (As far as I recall, the discount is usually USD 300.)
>
> IEEE 802 hotel reservation is not yet available, but it will be soon: http://802world.org/plenary/ieee-802-group-hotel/
>
> Best regards,
> JÃ¡nos
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: JÃ¡nos Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com>
> Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2018 10:32 AM
> To: detnet@ietf.org; STDS-802-1-L@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
> Cc: detnet-chairs@ietf.org
> Subject: DetNet â€“ TSN joint session in Bangkok
>
> Hi,
>
> We will have a DetNet â€“ TSN joint session in Bangkok on November 11 Sunday, which is between IETF 103 and the IEEE 802 Plenary. The two meetings are back to back in the same hotel: Marriott Marquis Queenâ€™s Park, Bangkok, Thailand (https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/upcoming,
> http://802world.org/plenary/future-plenary-sessions).
> The joint session will be from 9am to 5pm with a lunch break.
> Meeting room is being arranged by IEEE 802.
> There will be a web page for registration. Registration will be required; work is ongoing to make it free.
>
> We propose the following topics for the joint session both for DetNet and TSN:
> - current status
> - ongoing work
> - future plans
> - related activities, e.g., TEAS, IoT for DetNet; IEC, IEEE for TSN
>
> Please send agenda requests to detnet-chairs@ietf.
>
> Agenda will be worked after August holidays.
>
> We will provide updates, e.g., on registration, agenda, etc., as they become available.
>
> The co-located meetings give the opportunity to participate the meeting of the other group, the group one usually not attends or havenâ€™t attended yet. We have collected some information to help navigation, making decision, e.g., agendas of the last meetings.
>
> IETF DetNet WG info:
> Web page: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/about/
> Documents: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/documents/
> DetNet WG at IETF 102:
>      - Agenda: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/documents/
>      - Presentations:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/session/detnet
>      - Minutes: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/minutes-102-detnet/
> IETF 102 overall agenda:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/agenda.html
> IETF 102 general information: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/102/
> IETF 103 registration: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/
>
> IEEE 802.1TSN TG info:
> Web page: http://ieee802.org/1/tsn
> Documents are available via the links provided at the TG page, e.g., via the project pages.
> TSN TG at the July 2018 IEEE 802 Plenary:
>      - Agenda:
> https://1.ieee802.org/july-2018-plenary-meeting-in-san-diego-ca-usa-tsn-tg-agenda/
>
>      - Presentations are linked from the agenda
>      - Minutes: https://1.ieee802.org/category/current-and-former-meetings/
> IEEE 802 Plenary overall schedule:
> http://schedule.802world.com/schedule/schedule/show#, July Plenary is saved at:
> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/admin-802-schedule-0718.pdf.)
> IEEE 802 Plenary general information: http://802world.org/plenary/ IEEE
> 802 Plenary registration:
> http://802world.org/plenary/registration-information/
> Note that the Plenary pages show the July Plenary at the moment; they will be updated to the November Plenary as we are getting closer.
>
> If you are new to TSN, then the IEC/IEEE 60802 Joint Project may be of
> interest:
> http://ieee802.org/1/tsn/iec-ieee-60802-tsn-profile-for-industrial-automation.
> The Joint Project has been formed to specify how to use TSN for industrial automation. The meetings of the joint project are listed on the web page. The joint project will meet November 12-14 in Bangkok.
>
> If you have questions, donâ€™t hesitate to ask us.
>
> Best regards,
> JÃ¡nos and Lou
>
> _______________________________________________
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Stewart,

I also made reservations at the IETF rate to check out on Monday. Let=E2=80=
=99s
hope that=E2=80=99s acceptable to the joint meeting hosts.

Cheers,
Andy


On Tue, Aug 14, 2018 at 3:54 PM, Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi
>
> Where are we with registering for the joint session, i.e. just registerin=
g
> for the Sunday.
>
> I have booked Sat/Sun on the IETF scheme to attend the meeting, I hope
> that IEEE are not going to require that we make split bookings to get a
> good rate (ideally free) at the joint session.
>
> Thanks
>
> Stewart.
>
>
>
> On 06/08/2018 22:20, Janos Farkas wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> Please note that hotel reservation for IETF 103 is possible:
>> https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/hotel/.
>>
>> My understanding of the cancellation policy for reservations at Bangkok
>> Marriott Marquis Queen's Park is that cancellation is free up to 72 hour=
s
>> prior to arrival, however, it is not possible to change the reservation.=
 I
>> may be wrong. (This is what I saw after making a reservation.)
>>
>> Note that hotel room booking via IEEE 802 is needed in order to get a
>> discount from the IEEE 802 Plenary registration fee. At least one night =
is
>> needed. (As far as I recall, the discount is usually USD 300.)
>>
>> IEEE 802 hotel reservation is not yet available, but it will be soon:
>> http://802world.org/plenary/ieee-802-group-hotel/
>>
>> Best regards,
>> J=C3=A1nos
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: J=C3=A1nos Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com>
>> Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2018 10:32 AM
>> To: detnet@ietf.org; STDS-802-1-L@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
>> Cc: detnet-chairs@ietf.org
>> Subject: DetNet =E2=80=93 TSN joint session in Bangkok
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> We will have a DetNet =E2=80=93 TSN joint session in Bangkok on November=
 11
>> Sunday, which is between IETF 103 and the IEEE 802 Plenary. The two
>> meetings are back to back in the same hotel: Marriott Marquis Queen=E2=
=80=99s Park,
>> Bangkok, Thailand (https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/upcoming,
>> http://802world.org/plenary/future-plenary-sessions).
>> The joint session will be from 9am to 5pm with a lunch break.
>> Meeting room is being arranged by IEEE 802.
>> There will be a web page for registration. Registration will be required=
;
>> work is ongoing to make it free.
>>
>> We propose the following topics for the joint session both for DetNet an=
d
>> TSN:
>> - current status
>> - ongoing work
>> - future plans
>> - related activities, e.g., TEAS, IoT for DetNet; IEC, IEEE for TSN
>>
>> Please send agenda requests to detnet-chairs@ietf.
>>
>> Agenda will be worked after August holidays.
>>
>> We will provide updates, e.g., on registration, agenda, etc., as they
>> become available.
>>
>> The co-located meetings give the opportunity to participate the meeting
>> of the other group, the group one usually not attends or haven=E2=80=99t=
 attended
>> yet. We have collected some information to help navigation, making
>> decision, e.g., agendas of the last meetings.
>>
>> IETF DetNet WG info:
>> Web page: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/about/
>> Documents: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/documents/
>> DetNet WG at IETF 102:
>>      - Agenda: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/documents/
>>      - Presentations:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/session/detnet
>>      - Minutes: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/minutes-102-detnet/
>> IETF 102 overall agenda:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/agenda.html
>> IETF 102 general information: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/102/
>> IETF 103 registration: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/
>>
>> IEEE 802.1TSN TG info:
>> Web page: http://ieee802.org/1/tsn
>> Documents are available via the links provided at the TG page, e.g., via
>> the project pages.
>> TSN TG at the July 2018 IEEE 802 Plenary:
>>      - Agenda:
>> https://1.ieee802.org/july-2018-plenary-meeting-in-san-diego
>> -ca-usa-tsn-tg-agenda/
>>
>>      - Presentations are linked from the agenda
>>      - Minutes: https://1.ieee802.org/category
>> /current-and-former-meetings/
>> IEEE 802 Plenary overall schedule:
>> http://schedule.802world.com/schedule/schedule/show#, July Plenary is
>> saved at:
>> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/admin-802-
>> schedule-0718.pdf.)
>> IEEE 802 Plenary general information: http://802world.org/plenary/ IEEE
>> 802 Plenary registration:
>> http://802world.org/plenary/registration-information/
>> Note that the Plenary pages show the July Plenary at the moment; they
>> will be updated to the November Plenary as we are getting closer.
>>
>> If you are new to TSN, then the IEC/IEEE 60802 Joint Project may be of
>> interest:
>> http://ieee802.org/1/tsn/iec-ieee-60802-tsn-profile-for-indu
>> strial-automation.
>> The Joint Project has been formed to specify how to use TSN for
>> industrial automation. The meetings of the joint project are listed on t=
he
>> web page. The joint project will meet November 12-14 in Bangkok.
>>
>> If you have questions, don=E2=80=99t hesitate to ask us.
>>
>> Best regards,
>> J=C3=A1nos and Lou
>>
>> _______________________________________________
>> detnet mailing list
>> detnet@ietf.org
>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/detnet
>>
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Stewart,<div><br></div><div>I also made reservations at th=
e IETF rate to check out on Monday. Let=E2=80=99s hope that=E2=80=99s accep=
table to the joint meeting hosts.</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers,</div><di=
v>Andy</div><div><br></div></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=
=3D"gmail_quote">On Tue, Aug 14, 2018 at 3:54 PM, Stewart Bryant <span dir=
=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:stewart.bryant@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">=
stewart.bryant@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmai=
l_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left=
:1ex">Hi<br>
<br>
Where are we with registering for the joint session, i.e. just registering =
for the Sunday.<br>
<br>
I have booked Sat/Sun on the IETF scheme to attend the meeting, I hope that=
 IEEE are not going to require that we make split bookings to get a good ra=
te (ideally free) at the joint session.<br>
<br>
Thanks<span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"#888888"><br>
<br>
Stewart.</font></span><div class=3D"HOEnZb"><div class=3D"h5"><br>
<br>
<br>
On 06/08/2018 22:20, Janos Farkas wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
Hi,<br>
<br>
Please note that hotel reservation for IETF 103 is possible: <a href=3D"htt=
ps://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/hotel/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_bl=
ank">https://www.ietf.org/how/meeti<wbr>ngs/103/hotel/</a>.<br>
<br>
My understanding of the cancellation policy for reservations at Bangkok Mar=
riott Marquis Queen&#39;s Park is that cancellation is free up to 72 hours =
prior to arrival, however, it is not possible to change the reservation. I =
may be wrong. (This is what I saw after making a reservation.)<br>
<br>
Note that hotel room booking via IEEE 802 is needed in order to get a disco=
unt from the IEEE 802 Plenary registration fee. At least one night is neede=
d. (As far as I recall, the discount is usually USD 300.)<br>
<br>
IEEE 802 hotel reservation is not yet available, but it will be soon: <a hr=
ef=3D"http://802world.org/plenary/ieee-802-group-hotel/" rel=3D"noreferrer"=
 target=3D"_blank">http://802world.org/plenary/ie<wbr>ee-802-group-hotel/</=
a><br>
<br>
Best regards,<br>
J=C3=A1nos<br>
<br>
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From: J=C3=A1nos Farkas &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:janos.farkas@ericsson.com" ta=
rget=3D"_blank">janos.farkas@ericsson.com</a>&gt;<br>
Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2018 10:32 AM<br>
To: <a href=3D"mailto:detnet@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">detnet@ietf.org</a=
>; <a href=3D"mailto:STDS-802-1-L@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG" target=3D"_blank">STDS=
-802-1-L@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG</a><br>
Cc: <a href=3D"mailto:detnet-chairs@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">detnet-chai=
rs@ietf.org</a><br>
Subject: DetNet =E2=80=93 TSN joint session in Bangkok<br>
<br>
Hi,<br>
<br>
We will have a DetNet =E2=80=93 TSN joint session in Bangkok on November 11=
 Sunday, which is between IETF 103 and the IEEE 802 Plenary. The two meetin=
gs are back to back in the same hotel: Marriott Marquis Queen=E2=80=99s Par=
k, Bangkok, Thailand (<a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/upcoming=
" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/how/meet<wbr>in=
gs/upcoming</a>,<br>
<a href=3D"http://802world.org/plenary/future-plenary-sessions" rel=3D"nore=
ferrer" target=3D"_blank">http://802world.org/plenary/fu<wbr>ture-plenary-s=
essions</a>).<br>
The joint session will be from 9am to 5pm with a lunch break.<br>
Meeting room is being arranged by IEEE 802.<br>
There will be a web page for registration. Registration will be required; w=
ork is ongoing to make it free.<br>
<br>
We propose the following topics for the joint session both for DetNet and T=
SN:<br>
- current status<br>
- ongoing work<br>
- future plans<br>
- related activities, e.g., TEAS, IoT for DetNet; IEC, IEEE for TSN<br>
<br>
Please send agenda requests to detnet-chairs@ietf.<br>
<br>
Agenda will be worked after August holidays.<br>
<br>
We will provide updates, e.g., on registration, agenda, etc., as they becom=
e available.<br>
<br>
The co-located meetings give the opportunity to participate the meeting of =
the other group, the group one usually not attends or haven=E2=80=99t atten=
ded yet. We have collected some information to help navigation, making deci=
sion, e.g., agendas of the last meetings.<br>
<br>
IETF DetNet WG info:<br>
Web page: <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/about/" rel=3D"=
noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/w<wbr>g/detnet/a=
bout/</a><br>
Documents: <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/documents/" re=
l=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/w<wbr>g/det=
net/documents/</a><br>
DetNet WG at IETF 102:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0- Agenda: <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/de=
tnet/documents/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.i=
etf.org/w<wbr>g/detnet/documents/</a><br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0- Presentations:<br>
<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/session/detnet" rel=3D"=
noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/m<wbr>eeting/102=
/session/detnet</a><br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0- Minutes: <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/=
minutes-102-detnet/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatrack=
er.ietf.org/d<wbr>oc/minutes-102-detnet/</a><br>
IETF 102 overall agenda:<br>
<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/agenda.html" rel=3D"nor=
eferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/m<wbr>eeting/102/ag=
enda.html</a><br>
IETF 102 general information: <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/=
102/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/how/meeti<w=
br>ngs/102/</a><br>
IETF 103 registration: <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/" r=
el=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/how/meeti<wbr>ngs/=
103/</a><br>
<br>
IEEE 802.1TSN TG info:<br>
Web page: <a href=3D"http://ieee802.org/1/tsn" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D=
"_blank">http://ieee802.org/1/tsn</a><br>
Documents are available via the links provided at the TG page, e.g., via th=
e project pages.<br>
TSN TG at the July 2018 IEEE 802 Plenary:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0- Agenda:<br>
<a href=3D"https://1.ieee802.org/july-2018-plenary-meeting-in-san-diego-ca-=
usa-tsn-tg-agenda/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://1.ieee802.=
org/july-201<wbr>8-plenary-meeting-in-san-diego<wbr>-ca-usa-tsn-tg-agenda/<=
/a><br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0- Presentations are linked from the agenda<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0- Minutes: <a href=3D"https://1.ieee802.org/category/cu=
rrent-and-former-meetings/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://1.=
ieee802.org/category<wbr>/current-and-former-meetings/</a><br>
IEEE 802 Plenary overall schedule:<br>
<a href=3D"http://schedule.802world.com/schedule/schedule/show#" rel=3D"nor=
eferrer" target=3D"_blank">http://schedule.802world.com/s<wbr>chedule/sched=
ule/show#</a>, July Plenary is saved at:<br>
<a href=3D"http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/admin-802-schedul=
e-0718.pdf" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">http://www.ieee802.org/1/f=
iles<wbr>/public/docs2018/admin-802-<wbr>schedule-0718.pdf</a>.)<br>
IEEE 802 Plenary general information: <a href=3D"http://802world.org/plenar=
y/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">http://802world.org/plenary/</a> I=
EEE<br>
802 Plenary registration:<br>
<a href=3D"http://802world.org/plenary/registration-information/" rel=3D"no=
referrer" target=3D"_blank">http://802world.org/plenary/re<wbr>gistration-i=
nformation/</a><br>
Note that the Plenary pages show the July Plenary at the moment; they will =
be updated to the November Plenary as we are getting closer.<br>
<br>
If you are new to TSN, then the IEC/IEEE 60802 Joint Project may be of<br>
interest:<br>
<a href=3D"http://ieee802.org/1/tsn/iec-ieee-60802-tsn-profile-for-industri=
al-automation" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">http://ieee802.org/1/ts=
n/iec-i<wbr>eee-60802-tsn-profile-for-indu<wbr>strial-automation</a>.<br>
The Joint Project has been formed to specify how to use TSN for industrial =
automation. The meetings of the joint project are listed on the web page. T=
he joint project will meet November 12-14 in Bangkok.<br>
<br>
If you have questions, don=E2=80=99t hesitate to ask us.<br>
<br>
Best regards,<br>
J=C3=A1nos and Lou<br>
<br>
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Thank you

Stewart


On 14/08/2018 22:05, Janos Farkas wrote:
> Hi Stewart,
>
> No update yet on any of the details.
> We are working on making the joint session free.
> As  far as I understand, IEEE hotel booking is required to get the discount if one registers for the IEEE 802 Plenary; the Sunday joint session is a different story.
>
> Regards,
> Janos
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
> Sent: Tuesday, August 14, 2018 9:55 PM
> To: Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas@ericsson.com>; detnet@ietf.org; STDS-802-1-L@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG; ieee-ietf-coord@ietf.org
> Cc: detnet-chairs@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Detnet] DetNet â€“ TSN joint session in Bangkok
>
> Hi
>
> Where are we with registering for the joint session, i.e. just registering for the Sunday.
>
> I have booked Sat/Sun on the IETF scheme to attend the meeting, I hope that IEEE are not going to require that we make split bookings to get a good rate (ideally free) at the joint session.
>
> Thanks
>
> Stewart.
>
>
> On 06/08/2018 22:20, Janos Farkas wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Please note that hotel reservation for IETF 103 is possible: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/hotel/.
>>
>> My understanding of the cancellation policy for reservations at
>> Bangkok Marriott Marquis Queen's Park is that cancellation is free up
>> to 72 hours prior to arrival, however, it is not possible to change
>> the reservation. I may be wrong. (This is what I saw after making a
>> reservation.)
>>
>> Note that hotel room booking via IEEE 802 is needed in order to get a
>> discount from the IEEE 802 Plenary registration fee. At least one
>> night is needed. (As far as I recall, the discount is usually USD
>> 300.)
>>
>> IEEE 802 hotel reservation is not yet available, but it will be soon:
>> http://802world.org/plenary/ieee-802-group-hotel/
>>
>> Best regards,
>> JÃ¡nos
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: JÃ¡nos Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com>
>> Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2018 10:32 AM
>> To: detnet@ietf.org; STDS-802-1-L@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
>> Cc: detnet-chairs@ietf.org
>> Subject: DetNet â€“ TSN joint session in Bangkok
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> We will have a DetNet â€“ TSN joint session in Bangkok on November 11
>> Sunday, which is between IETF 103 and the IEEE 802 Plenary. The two
>> meetings are back to back in the same hotel: Marriott Marquis Queenâ€™s
>> Park, Bangkok, Thailand (https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/upcoming,
>> http://802world.org/plenary/future-plenary-sessions).
>> The joint session will be from 9am to 5pm with a lunch break.
>> Meeting room is being arranged by IEEE 802.
>> There will be a web page for registration. Registration will be required; work is ongoing to make it free.
>>
>> We propose the following topics for the joint session both for DetNet and TSN:
>> - current status
>> - ongoing work
>> - future plans
>> - related activities, e.g., TEAS, IoT for DetNet; IEC, IEEE for TSN
>>
>> Please send agenda requests to detnet-chairs@ietf.
>>
>> Agenda will be worked after August holidays.
>>
>> We will provide updates, e.g., on registration, agenda, etc., as they become available.
>>
>> The co-located meetings give the opportunity to participate the meeting of the other group, the group one usually not attends or havenâ€™t attended yet. We have collected some information to help navigation, making decision, e.g., agendas of the last meetings.
>>
>> IETF DetNet WG info:
>> Web page: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/about/
>> Documents: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/documents/
>> DetNet WG at IETF 102:
>>       - Agenda: https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/detnet/documents/
>>       - Presentations:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/session/detnet
>>       - Minutes: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/minutes-102-detnet/
>> IETF 102 overall agenda:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/102/agenda.html
>> IETF 102 general information: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/102/
>> IETF 103 registration: https://www.ietf.org/how/meetings/103/
>>
>> IEEE 802.1TSN TG info:
>> Web page: http://ieee802.org/1/tsn
>> Documents are available via the links provided at the TG page, e.g., via the project pages.
>> TSN TG at the July 2018 IEEE 802 Plenary:
>>       - Agenda:
>> https://1.ieee802.org/july-2018-plenary-meeting-in-san-diego-ca-usa-ts
>> n-tg-agenda/
>>
>>       - Presentations are linked from the agenda
>>       - Minutes:
>> https://1.ieee802.org/category/current-and-former-meetings/
>> IEEE 802 Plenary overall schedule:
>> http://schedule.802world.com/schedule/schedule/show#, July Plenary is saved at:
>> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/admin-802-schedule-0718
>> .pdf.) IEEE 802 Plenary general information:
>> http://802world.org/plenary/ IEEE
>> 802 Plenary registration:
>> http://802world.org/plenary/registration-information/
>> Note that the Plenary pages show the July Plenary at the moment; they will be updated to the November Plenary as we are getting closer.
>>
>> If you are new to TSN, then the IEC/IEEE 60802 Joint Project may be of
>> interest:
>> http://ieee802.org/1/tsn/iec-ieee-60802-tsn-profile-for-industrial-automation.
>> The Joint Project has been formed to specify how to use TSN for industrial automation. The meetings of the joint project are listed on the web page. The joint project will meet November 12-14 in Bangkok.
>>
>> If you have questions, donâ€™t hesitate to ask us.
>>
>> Best regards,
>> JÃ¡nos and Lou
>>
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Hi All,
Recently it was pointed out that bandwidth occupied by OAM packets added to=
 a DetNet flow have to be accounted for in the bandwidth reservation for th=
at flow. This made me wonder whether there were any DetNet-specific securit=
y considerations associated with OAM traffic. As I understand it based on t=
he input I have received so far, there is nothing there that we have to con=
sider, except to say something like "We have considered the matter and foun=
d that there are no DetNet-specific security considerations related to OAM =
traffic". The rationale for this is that the OAM traffic is either:
1) Generated by the network itself, and is thus trusted, because if you can=
't trust the network you have much worse problems. The additional bandwidth=
 required for such packets is added by the network,  presumably transparent=
 to the customer.
Or
2) Generated by the customer, and is thus the customer's responsibility. Th=
at is, it is our job to deliver the customer's packets with the given servi=
ce level, and OAM packets are no different to us than any other data the cu=
stomer is reserving bandwidth for and transmitting.

I expect to put some text into the Security draft pretty much along those l=
ines. Can anyone think of anything I might have not taken into account? Als=
o any further statements of confirmation that this makes sense would be app=
reciated.
Thanks,
Ethan.


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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi All,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Recently it was pointed out that bandwidth occupied =
by OAM packets added to a DetNet flow have to be accounted for in the bandw=
idth reservation for that flow. This made me wonder whether there were any =
DetNet-specific security considerations
 associated with OAM traffic. As I understand it based on the input I have =
received so far, there is nothing there that we have to consider, except to=
 say something like &#8220;We have considered the matter and found that the=
re are no DetNet-specific security considerations
 related to OAM traffic&#8221;. The rationale for this is that the OAM traf=
fic is either:
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">1) Generated by the network itself, and is thus trus=
ted, because if you can&#8217;t trust the network you have much worse probl=
ems. The additional bandwidth required for such packets is added by the net=
work, &nbsp;presumably transparent to the customer.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Or <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">2) Generated by the customer, and is thus the custom=
er&#8217;s responsibility. That is, it is our job to deliver the customer&#=
8217;s packets with the given service level, and OAM packets are no differe=
nt to us than any other data the customer is reserving
 bandwidth for and transmitting. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I expect to put some text into the Security draft pr=
etty much along those lines. Can anyone think of anything I might have not =
taken into account? Also any further statements of confirmation that this m=
akes sense would be appreciated.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ethan. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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 Hi Ethan,
thank you for the thorough analysis of the OAM in DetNet domain specifics.
I think that the proposed text is very good. I have a few comments,
questions that you can find in-line under tag GIM>>.

Regards,
Greg

On Thu, Aug 23, 2018 at 11:42 AM, Grossman, Ethan A. <eagros@dolby.com>
wrote:

> Hi All,
>
> Recently it was pointed out that bandwidth occupied by OAM packets added
> to a DetNet flow have to be accounted for in the bandwidth reservation fo=
r
> that flow. This made me wonder whether there were any DetNet-specific
> security considerations associated with OAM traffic. As I understand it
> based on the input I have received so far, there is nothing there that we
> have to consider, except to say something like =E2=80=9CWe have considere=
d the
> matter and found that there are no DetNet-specific security consideration=
s
> related to OAM traffic=E2=80=9D. The rationale for this is that the OAM t=
raffic is
> either:
>
> 1) Generated by the network itself, and is thus trusted, because if you
> can=E2=80=99t trust the network you have much worse problems. The additio=
nal
> bandwidth required for such packets is added by the network,  presumably
> transparent to the customer.
>
GIM>> I think that assumtion that any network is a priori secure and thus
is trusted domain is not the one we use. Unless, of course, this is the
upfront requirement, i.e., the DetNet domain must be secure, protected.
Though for industrial applications it may be hard to comply with such
requirement because nodes may be easily accessible, perhaps taken over,
used to launch an attack.

> Or
>
> 2) Generated by the customer, and is thus the customer=E2=80=99s responsi=
bility.
> That is, it is our job to deliver the customer=E2=80=99s packets with the=
 given
> service level, and OAM packets are no different to us than any other data
> the customer is reserving bandwidth for and transmitting.
>
GIM>> We refer to DetNet Service OAM (to extend, do we differentiate DetNet
Transport OAM and Service OAM functionality? Perhaps separate thread to
discuss) or e2e Service OAM? In the former case, I believe, it is still the
DetNet OAM. If the latter, then for DetNEt service OAM packet are
indistinguishable from the data packets.

>
>
> I expect to put some text into the Security draft pretty much along those
> lines. Can anyone think of anything I might have not taken into account?
> Also any further statements of confirmation that this makes sense would b=
e
> appreciated.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Ethan.
>
>
>
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<div dir=3D"ltr">

<span style=3D"font-size:small;text-decoration-style:initial;text-decoratio=
n-color:initial;float:none;display:inline">Hi Ethan,</span><div style=3D"fo=
nt-size:small;text-decoration-style:initial;text-decoration-color:initial">=
thank you for the thorough analysis of the OAM in DetNet domain specifics. =
I think that the proposed text is very good. I have a few comments, questio=
ns that you can find in-line under tag GIM&gt;&gt;.</div><br class=3D"gmail=
-Apple-interchange-newline">

<div>Regards,</div><div>Greg</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=
=3D"gmail_quote">On Thu, Aug 23, 2018 at 11:42 AM, Grossman, Ethan A. <span=
 dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:eagros@dolby.com" target=3D"_blank">eagr=
os@dolby.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" sty=
le=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">





<div lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple">
<div class=3D"m_-3067765165314849557WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi All,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Recently it was pointed out that bandwidth occupied =
by OAM packets added to a DetNet flow have to be accounted for in the bandw=
idth reservation for that flow. This made me wonder whether there were any =
DetNet-specific security considerations
 associated with OAM traffic. As I understand it based on the input I have =
received so far, there is nothing there that we have to consider, except to=
 say something like =E2=80=9CWe have considered the matter and found that t=
here are no DetNet-specific security considerations
 related to OAM traffic=E2=80=9D. The rationale for this is that the OAM tr=
affic is either:
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">1) Generated by the network itself, and is thus trus=
ted, because if you can=E2=80=99t trust the network you have much worse pro=
blems. The additional bandwidth required for such packets is added by the n=
etwork, =C2=A0presumably transparent to the customer.</p></div></div></bloc=
kquote><div>

<span style=3D"font-size:small;background-color:rgb(255,255,255);text-decor=
ation-style:initial;text-decoration-color:initial;float:none;display:inline=
">GIM&gt;&gt; I think that assumtion that any network is a priori secure an=
d thus is trusted domain is not the one we use. Unless, of course, this is =
the upfront requirement, i.e., the DetNet domain must be secure, protected.=
 Though for industrial applications it may be hard to comply with such requ=
irement because nodes may be easily accessible, perhaps taken over, used to=
 launch an attack.</span>

=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;bo=
rder-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue=
" vlink=3D"purple"><div class=3D"m_-3067765165314849557WordSection1"><p cla=
ss=3D"MsoNormal">
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Or <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">2) Generated by the customer, and is thus the custom=
er=E2=80=99s responsibility. That is, it is our job to deliver the customer=
=E2=80=99s packets with the given service level, and OAM packets are no dif=
ferent to us than any other data the customer is reserving
 bandwidth for and transmitting.</p></div></div></blockquote><div>

<span style=3D"font-size:small;background-color:rgb(255,255,255);text-decor=
ation-style:initial;text-decoration-color:initial;float:none;display:inline=
">GIM&gt;&gt; We refer to DetNet Service OAM (to extend, do we differentiat=
e DetNet Transport OAM and Service OAM functionality? Perhaps separate thre=
ad to discuss) or e2e Service OAM? In the former case, I believe, it is sti=
ll the DetNet OAM. If the latter, then for DetNEt service OAM packet are in=
distinguishable from the data packets.</span>

=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;bo=
rder-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue=
" vlink=3D"purple"><div class=3D"m_-3067765165314849557WordSection1"><p cla=
ss=3D"MsoNormal"> <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I expect to put some text into the Security draft pr=
etty much along those lines. Can anyone think of anything I might have not =
taken into account? Also any further statements of confirmation that this m=
akes sense would be appreciated.
<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ethan. <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
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