Subject: [Dime] draft-ietf-dime-qos-attributes: DISCUSS/Comments addressed in rev 13

From: Mark Jones <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 21 Oct 2009 16:16:20 -0400

I'm working on the next rev of the DIME QoS Attributes draft and just noticed that I neglected to send the description of the changes made for the previous revision (-13). 

Assuming better late than never, here is the summary of the IESG DISCUSS and comments addressed in rev 13 published on July 13th:

+ Amanda Babar (IANA), Tue.June 16th
	- TCP-Flag-Type: Fixed in rev 13.
	- Questions answered and actions confirmed on Wed. June 17th

+ Lothar Reith, Sun. June 21st
	- Issue1: QoS-Resources description. Fixed in rev 13.
	- Issue 2: Not an issue. Replied Tue, June 30th.
	- Issue 3: Charging granularity. Fixed in rev 13.
	- Issue 4: Not an issue. Replied Tue, June 30th.
	- Issue 5: Improve QoS-Semantic desc. Replied Tue, June 30th. Fix needed.
		. Replied with text on Mon, Aug 10th. To be fixed in rev 14
	- Issue 6: Rework DCCA example. Replied Tue, June 30th. Fix needed.
		. Replied Mon, Aug 10th. To be fixed in rev 14
	- Issue 7: DCCA Typo. Replied Tue, June 30th. 
		. Obsolete with DCCA example reworking.
	- Issue 8: Rework DCCA example. Replied Tue, June 30th. Fix needed.
		. Replied Mon, Aug 10th. To be fixed in rev 14

+ Gonzalo Camarille, Wed. June 24th
	- Expand AVP and ABNF acronyms in Abstract.
		. To be fixed in rev 14.
	- Remove reference to RFC4005 from Abstract
		. To be fixed in rev 14.

+ Ralph Droms, Mon Jun 29th
	- Typos fixed in rev 13. Replied on Tue, June 30th.

+ Lars Eggert, Wed Jul 1st
	- DISCUSS-DISCUSS: Why TCP Options? Avi replied on Aug 7th.
	- DISCUSS: Firewall functionality. Fixed in rev 13.
	- Comment: Ports context within transport protocol.  Fixed in rev 13.
	
* Adrian Farrel, Wed Jul 1st
	- Comment: Figure 1 and 5 alignment issues. Fixed in rev 13.
	- Comment: Section 5 action wording. Fixed in rev 13.
	- Comment: Identify IANA registries. Fixed in rev 13.
	
* Magnus Westerlund, Thu July 2nd
		. Replied on Mon July 13th
	- Discuss: Normative ref to formal language (notation). Fixed in rev 13.
	- Discuss: 4.1.7.2 Missing ref to imported definitions. Fixed in rev 13.
	- Discuss: 5.1 Missing info necessary for actions. Not an issue.
	- Discuss: 10.1 Missing registries. Fixed in rev 13.
	- Discuss: 10.2/10.3 Clarify new registry. Fixed in rev 13.

Stay tuned for rev 14. Coming soon. ;)

Regards
Mark