Subject: [Dime] Consistency, redundancy and editorial check

From: Steve Donovan <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 22 Oct 2014 10:05:25 +0200

I've done a consistency, redundancy and editorial check, with resulting 
changes, for all sections but the AVP sections (which I had already 
taken a pass at), the Overload Report Handling section, the Security 
section and the Appendices.

I will work on the Overload Report Handling section next.

I have checked the changes in to github.

I have also attached the diff file.

Regards,

Steve