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I agree with Barry's editorial suggestions.

What does the "*)" in the table in Section 3.3 mean?

>From Section 10:

   [...]  if the Diameter client or server is
   compromised, an attacker could launch DoS attacks by terminating a
   large number of sessions with a limited set of commands using the
   session group management concept.

Is it worth mentioning that an attacker could also mess with the set of
sessions associated with a group, possibly causing disruptions other than bulk
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Thank you for the work put into this document. Like Barry and other ADs, I
found this document difficult to read: long and complex sentences do not help
the reader (but I am not a native English speaker). Therefore, I trust the
responsible AD for the correctness of all the details in the specification.
E.g., FSM or time line diagrams would have been helpful.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated), and some nits.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

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== COMMENTS ==

Any reason why the authors affiliation is not shown ?

The shepherd write-up is dated back in 2018... Is it still applicable ?

-- Section 7.2 --
About the flag bits, I wonder why the values are not 0x01 and 0x02 rather than
0x01 and 0x10. Isn't this a waste of bits ? Should the IANA sub-registry for
those flags be mentioned?




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I agree with the other commenters that an editorial pass over the
document before it is sent to the RFC Editor is probably in order; I
only noted the more eggregious nits that have obvious fixes but skipped
the ones where I did not have a resolution ready at hand to suggest.
Barry's remarks about restrictive vs non-restrictive clauses are
particularly important.

I also have several high-level issues that don't quite rise to
discuss-level but seem worth getting resolution on; they mostly involve
edge cases where the current text either leaves me unclear on what is
supposed to happen or seems to present conflicting guidance:

- what's the error handling in cases of partial success?
  * For operations adding/removing sessions to/from groups, it seems that
    the general principle is that the new changes introduced with any
    group-relevant CCF exchange are to be treated atomically: either all
    group additions/removals succeed or all fail (and when it fails the
    session is forced into a single-session fallback mode).  But for
    server-initiated modifications this is enforced by "if the client
    can't do it, the client MUST tear down the affected session(s)", and
    I'm not sure if there's a case where the client can send a new
    request that includes some modifications and the server also tries
    to make some modifications in its response; such a scenario might in
    effect allow partial success and might also be hard to correctly
    interpret.
  * For operations acting on groups, we do allow partial success
    (DIAMETER_LIMITED_SUCCESS) and attempt to mandate fallback to
    single-session operation for affected sessions, but the specifics of
    how the Failed-AVP effectuates this are not clear to me (see my
    comment on Section 4.4.3).

- we require that group identifiers are globally unique, which can be
  done with the diameter-node namespace prefix.  But for the portion
  after that prefix, we seem to suggest reusing the construction from
  Section 8.8 of RFC 6733, which is just (in essence) a 64-bit global
  counter.  In the vein of draft-gont-numeric-ids-sec-considerations,
  that seems overly constrained, in that it reveals sequencing across
  group creation and rate of per-node group creation to the remote peer.
  It seems that a construction akin to a keyed hash of a counter would
  preserve the guaranteed uniqueness property but avoid leaking such
  information to the network.

- the permissions model is a bit unorthodox, with groups "owned" by
  their creator but the binding of a session to a group "owned" by the
  node that performed the binding.  It seems like there is some risk of
  deadlock situations or conflict, e.g., where a client has added a
  session to a group G but the server wants to remove the session from
  G, or where a session is part of a group but the owner of the group
  wants to delete the group.  For the latter case, my understanding is
  that group deletion "trumps" ownership of the session/group binding,
  such that deletion can proceed even while sessions are in the group,
  but I'm less sure what should happen in the former case (or others).

- Is it possible to have a group with no member sessions?  Section 3.3
  suggests that if the last session is removed the group should be
  deleted, but AFAICT this would still require the node performing the
  removal to unset SESSION_GROUP_STATUS_IND, and I didn't see a
  requirement to do that spelled out.  I do see how it is impossible to
  create a group directly in a state with no member sessions.

- Is there a requirement to always send the current state of group
  membership when acting on a session?  I could (perhaps naively)
  imagine a case where due to previous interactions a session belongs to
  groups G1, G2, and G3, but in some subsequent request the client only
  mentions G1.  Does the membership in G2 and G3 get implicitly retained
  in the absence of an explicit unset SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION or
  are there some other constraints that make such a scenario impossible?

- Is there supposed to be a strong distinction between "including" an
  AVP and "appending" one?  I see that 6733 does make some fairly clear
  distinction between the terms, but it seems that (e.g.) in Section
  4.2.1 we use both phrasings to discuss Session-Group-Info.

Now for some section-by-section (mostly editorial or nit-level) notes.

Abstract, Introduction

   a million concurrent Diameter sessions.  Recent use cases have
   revealed the need for Diameter nodes to apply the same operation to a
   large group of Diameter sessions concurrently.  The Diameter base

I note that the -00 is from 2012; are these use cases still "recent"?

Section 3

As an editorial note, the way the current text jumps in to say that
sessions can be assigned to groups leaves the reader uncertain whether
this is describing preexisting functionality or the new mechanisms added
by this document.  A top-level intro paragraph for Section 3 that says
roughly "to accomodate bulk operations on Diameter sessions, the concept
of session groups is introduced; once sessions are added to a group, a
command acting on the group will affect all the member sessions" might
help.

Section 3.3

If I understand correctly, the lines in the table for "remove a session
from an owned Session Group"/"remove a session from a non-owned Session
Group" mean only that this operation can be done sometimes, not that it
can always be done (per the lines about "created the assignment".  Would
it be helpful to indicate this, perhaps by using a different symbol for
those lines and adding a footnote?

Section 4

While I understand the desire to keep the document structure as it is,
with the actual AVPs specified in Section 7, it would have been very
helpful to have a toplevel introductory paragraph here that mentions or
references that there is a containing Session-Group-Info grouped AVP
that contains the Session-Group-Control-Vector with information about
the action and group, and zero or one(?) Session-Group-Id AVP to
identify the group when a specific group is being identified.  This
would also allow clarifying whether the Session-Group-Id AVP is
currently only defined to appear within the Session-Group-Info.

Section 4.1.1

                                           Such applications provide
   intrinsic discovery for the support of session grouping capability
   using the assigned Application Id advertised during the capability
   exchange phase two Diameter peers establish a transport connection
   (see Section 5.3 of [RFC6733]).

nit: I think there's a missing word here, perhaps "where" after "phase"?

Section 4.2.1

   The client may also indicate in the request that the server is
   responsible for the assignment of the session in one or multiple
   sessions owned by the server.  [...]

nit(?): is this supposed to be "assignment of the session into one or
multiple session *groups* owned by the server"?  I'm having a hard time
understanding it as written.

   If the assignment of the session to one or some of the multiple
   identified session groups fails, the session group assignment is
   treated as failure.  In such case the session is treated as single
   session without assignment to any session group by the Diameter
   nodes.  The server sends the response to the client and MAY include
   those Session-Group-Info AVPs for which the group assignment failed.
   The SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION flag of included Session-Group-
   Info AVPs MUST be cleared.

I guess I understand the part where the entire set of group-assignment
operations has to succeed or fail as an atomic unit, but this text
perhaps implies some semantics that the server is supposed to only
explicitly include in the response the subset of group assignments that
were unable to be processed, omitting the ones that could have been
processed (but were not processed since a failure on one means that none
of the operations get applied).  If that's the intent, I'd suggest being
a bit more explicit about what is and isn't sent.

   A Diameter client, which sent a request for session initiation to a
   Diameter server and appended a single or multiple Session-Group-Id
   AVPs but cannot find any Session-Group-Info AVP in the associated

(editorial) the phrase "cannot find" makes me wonder how hard it's
expected to be looking; more definitive statements about "not present"
seem more typical for RFC style.

Section 4.2.3

   When a Diameter server enforces an update to the assigned groups mid-

nit: this seems to be the only time we use the word "enforce" in this
sense in the document; previous discussion seems to just use "decides to
make an update" or similar.

   answer.  The client subsequently sends a service-specific re-
   authorization request containing one or multiple Session-Group-Info
   AVPs with the SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION flag set and the
   Session-Group-Id AVP identifying the session group to which the
   session had been previously assigned.  [...]

nit: I think this has to be "group or groups" to be consistent with the
rest of the doc.

Section 4.4.1

   Either Diameter node (client or server) can request the recipient of
   a request to process an associated command for all sessions assigned
   to one or multiple groups by identifying these groups in the request.
   The sender of the request appends for each group, to which the
   command applies, a Session-Group-Info AVP including the Session-
   Group-Id AVP to identify the associated session group.  Both, the
   SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION flag as well as the
   SESSION_GROUP_STATUS_IND flag MUST be set.

What's the error handling if one or both listed flags are not set --
just ignore the request?

   Action AVP to ALL_GROUPS (1) or PER_GROUP (2).  If the answer can be
   sent before the complete process of the request for all the sessions
   or if the request timeout timer is high enough, the sender MAY set
   the Group-Response-Action AVP to ALL_GROUPS (1) or PER_GROUP (2).

(side note) just the phrase "high enough" doesn't give much of an
indication of what the criteria are and what numerical values might be
appropriate.  That said, it's not entirely clear how much guidance we
can really give in this situation.

Section 4.4.2

   If the received request identifies multiple groups in multiple
   appended Session-Group-Id AVPs, the receiver SHOULD process the
   associated command for each of these groups.  If a session has been
   assigned to more than one of the identified groups, the receiver MUST
   process the associated command only once per session.

Why is this only a SHOULD for each group -- what other behaviors could
the receiver do?

Section 4.4.3

   In the case of limited success, the sessions, for which the
   processing of the group command failed, MUST be identified using a
   Failed-AVP AVP as per Section 7.5 of [RFC6733].  [...]

My reading of the referenced part of RFC 6733 is that there is a single
Failed-AVP pointing to a single AVP that could not be processed
properly.  Is there such a single failed AVP in the case where
processing failed for multiple sessions in the group(s)?  It seems that
the "largest containing AVP" that includes all failed groups might be so
large so as to not be useful in indicating the problem.

Section 7.2

   SESSION_GROUP_STATUS_IND (0x00000010)

If there's a mnemonic for the "IND" part of "SESSION_GROUP_STATUS_IND",
that would be helpful to expand.

Section 9.2

The Specification Required policy includes review by Designated Experts;
is there any guidance we should provide to the DEs?

Appendix A.1

      Discon    GASA received                  Cleanup      Idle

Spot-checking against RFC 6733's state machine, the non-group ASA
received case only makes this transition when there was a previous ASR
that was successfully sent.  Is that am important distinction?  (Also,
as an editorial nit, RFC 6733 spells "Clean up" as two words.)




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We're compiling v14 of the draft to implement comments from the IESG. =
Alissa's comment has been addressed and is fixed.

marco

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Thx, Alissa!

Your assumption is correct.

Regards,

Lionel

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> draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: New Version Notification -=20
> draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13.txt
>=20
> Hi all,
>=20
> I finally got to review these changes. Apologies for the delay. I have =

> just one question about this text in Section 3.3:
>=20
> "Either the client and the server can assign a session to a =
group.=E2=80=9D
>=20
> I=E2=80=99m assuming this is supposed to say =E2=80=9CEither the =
client or the server,=E2=80=9D correct?
>=20
> Thanks,
> Alissa
>=20
>=20
> > On Mar 9, 2020, at 6:23 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >
> >
> > A new version (-13) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dime-group-
> signaling:
> > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling
> > -
> 13.txt
> >
> > Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling/
> >
> > Diff from previous version:
> > =
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> > until the diff is available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> > IETF Secretariat.
> >
> >


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Thanks, Catherine, for the review.

marco

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Subject: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13

Reviewer: Catherine Meadows
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing 
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These 
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area 
directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just 
like any other  last call comments.

This draft presents the commands a Diameter node could use to communicate with 
multiple sessions of the Diameter simultaneously.  The Security Considerations 
section mentions two issues.  One is that the use of bulk commands introduces 
increases the ease of implementing certain types of DoS attacks  because a 
single command, e.g. to terminate a session, could affect multiple sessions 
instead of just one.  The other is that current  security mechanisms employed 
by Diameter do not enforce end-to-end security, and so make it difficult to 
trust information received from non-adjacent nodes.  Work is ongoing on 
end-to-end security for Diameter, so it is premature to address end-to-end 
security in this document, which instead relies on available security 
mechanisms.

I think this is a reasonable summary of the security considerations.  Since 
end-to-end security for Diameter is a work in progress, it would be premature 
to attempt to address it in this document.  I consider this document Ready.



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From: Marco Liebsch <Marco.Liebsch@neclab.eu>
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Thanks, Martin, for spotting this. You're absolutely right and it's already 
fixed.

marco

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Subject: Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13: 
(with COMMENT)

Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Sec 4.2.3

"The server responds with a  service-specific auth response and includes one 
or multiple Session- Group-Info AVP with the SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION 
flag set and
   the Session-Group-Id AVP identifying the session group, to which the
   identified session is to be assigned.  With the same response  message, the
   server may send one or multiple Session-Group-Info AVPs with the
   SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION flag cleared and the Session-Group-Id AVP
   identifying the session groups from which the identified session is to be
   removed."

s/may/MAY, to match similar text in 4.2.2. Much as in that section, it is a 
little subtle that the state can be totally inferred by the first requirement, 
and the second MAY requirement is purely advisory.




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Thank you, Erik. Fixed in the currently edited update.

marco

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Subject: Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13: 
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
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Thanks to Catherine Meadows for the SECDIR review.

** Section 3.3.  I had trouble reconciling the generic design principles
espoused here with the more detailed specification of the protocol documented
in Section 4.*.

The text here says:

This specification follows the most flexible model where both, a
   Diameter client and a Diameter server can create a new group and
   assign a new identifier to that session group.

And the table in this section says that the client could assign itself to a
server owned session group.

Assign a Session to a non-owned Session Group   |    X   |    X   |

However, in Section 4.2.1

  If the Diameter server receives a command request from a Diameter
   client and the command includes at least one Session-Group-Info AVP
   having the SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION flag in the Session-Group-
   Control-Vector AVP set, the server can accept or reject the request
   for group assignment.

It seems to me that this text in Section 4.2.1 is suggesting that the client
could ask to be put into a group but the server has the ability reject it,
which seems like an implicit permission model.

** Section 7.  In the table in this section the Session-Group-Id is of type
OctetString, but in Section 7.3 it is UTF8String.

** Section 10.  Given the flexible permission model suggested in Section 3.3,
is cautionary guidance needed to say that specific applications using this
capability need to consider the decisions they make based on group membership?




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Appreciate the thorough review, Barry. Comments inline below.

On 2021-01-31 2:57 p.m., Barry Leiba via Datatracker wrote:
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> I have to say that I found this to be challenging to read: much of it is very
> dense, with paragraphs giving sometimes-subtly-different conditions, and I
> would be reading it thinking, “Does this paragraph apply to my situation?  I
> don’t think so, but what about the next one?  Wait, maybe it was the other one
> after all.”  I just have to assume that someon actually implementing Diameter
> would have an easier time following it.
> 
> I have some editorial comments that won’t help with that aspect, but that I
> hope will help with clarity in general:
> 
> — Section 3.1 —
> 
>    A session group, which has sessions assigned, can be deleted, e.g.,
>    due to a change in multiple users' subscription profile so that the
>    group's assigned sessions do not share certain characteristics
> 
> It appears that “has sessions assigned” is restrictive (it’s a required
> description, not just extra information).  If so, it should say, “A session
> group that has sessions assigned can be deleted, e.g., due to...” without the
> internal commas.
> 
> Another way to put it might be, “A session group can be deleted even if it has
> sessions assigned, e.g., due to...”
> 

We intended to say that a session group can be deleted and provide an example.
The concept of "group" is clearly introduced in the paragraph just above and the
details are provided in the subsequent sections. We propose the following
rephrasing:

"It may be required to delete a session group, e.g. at the expiry of a
promotional period that applied to multiple subscriber profiles".


> — Section 3.3 —
> 
>    This specification follows the most flexible model where both, a
>    Diameter client and a Diameter server can create a new group and
> 
> Nit: no comma here
> 
>    Either the client and the server
>    can assign a session to a group.
> 
> Nit: “Either the client or the server can”, or “Both the client and the server
> can”.
> 

Suggested wording:
"This specification allows a permissive model where either Diameter client or
Diameter server can create a new group. The creator of the group becomes the
group owner and assigns a new identifier to the group according to the rules in
Section 7.3."


>    Details about
>    enforcing a more constraint permission model
> 
> I think the word you want is “constrained”.
> 

Agreed. Addressed in the next revision.

> — Section 4.2 —
> 
>    Diameter AAA
>    applications typically assign client and server roles to the Diameter
>    nodes, which are referred to as relevant Diameter nodes to utilize
>    session grouping and issue group commands.
> 
> I’m having trouble parsing this sentence and determining what you’re trying to
> tell me.  Can you please rephrase or repunctuate it to make it clearer?  What
> are referred to as “relevant Diameter nodes”?  What goes with “to utilize
> session grouping”?
> 

We agree that it needs rephrasing and propose:
"Although Diameter is a peer-to-peer protocol, Diameter AAA applications
typically assign the role of "Diameter client" to the Diameter node initiating
the Diameter session and the role of "Diameter server" to the Diameter
node authorizing the Diameter session. This specification does not restrict
group creation, assignment or deletion actions to a specific role. In the
following sections, Diameter node is used to refer to either role."


>    Diameter nodes, which are group-aware, MUST store and maintain an
>    entry about the group assignment together with a session's state.
> 
> Similar to earlier: is “are group aware” meant to be restrictive (there are
> Diameter nodes that are group aware and those that are not, and you’re talking
> about the former), or non-restrictive (all Diameter nodes are group aware, and
> you’re just pointing that fact out).  It is currently written as
> non-restrictive, but I think you mean it to be restrictive.  If that is
> correct, remove both commas and change “which” to “that”.
> 

We propose rephrasing to:
"Any Diameter node that has advertised support of session grouping and group
operations MUST store and maintain the group assignment as part of the session's
state."


>    A Diameter node MUST also keep a record about sessions, which
>    have been assigned to a session group by itself.
> 
> The comma shouldn’t be there, and “which” should be “that”.  But it’s a bit
> awkward anyway: may I suggest rephrasing in active voice as, “Each Diameter
> node MUST also keep a record about sessions that it has assigned to a session
> group.”
> 

Agree with suggested rephrasing. Will implement in the next revision.

> — Section 4.2.1 —
> 
>    If the
>    response from the server indicates success in the result code but
>    solely the assignment of the session to a session group has been
>    rejected by the server, the client treats the session as single
>    session without group assignment.
> 
> What does “solely” mean in this sentence?
> 

It should have been "only". However, we believe this sentence has been made
redundant by previous edits and can now be removed. The previous sentence
already states that the client MUST remove the session from the group if the
server rejects the proposed assignment. The session then proceeds as if it were
not assigned to the group.

>    A Diameter client, which sent a request for session initiation
> 
> Please remove the comma (and change “which” to “that”).
> 

We propose the following rephrasing:

"If a Diameter client sends a request for session initiation containing one or
more Session-Group-Info AVPs but the response from the Diameter server does not
contain a Session-Group-Info AVP, the Diameter client MUST proceed as if the
request was processed without group assignments."


> — Section 4.2.2 —
> 
>    The session, which is to be removed from a group, is
> 
> Make it, “The session that is to be removed from the group is”
> 
>    When a Diameter client decides to remove a session from all session
>    groups, to which the session has been previously assigned,
> 
> Remove the comma after “groups”.
> 

Agreed. Fixed in next revision.


>    The session, which is to be removed from all groups, to
>    which the session has been previously assigned, is identified in the
>    Session-Id AVP of the command request.
> 
> Make it, “The session that is to be removed from all groups to which it had
> been previously assigned is identified in the Session-Id AVP of the command
> request.”
> 

We came up with the following rephrasing to improve the readability:
"The Session-Id AVP in the re-authorization request identifies the session that
is to be removed from all groups to which it had been previously assigned."

> — Section 7.3 —
> 
>    The
>    <DiameterIdentity> portion of the Session-Group-Id MUST identify the
>    Diameter node, which owns the session group.
> 
> Please remove the comma and change “which” to “that”.
> 

Agreed. Will be fixed in next revision.


./Mark


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Thanks a lot for your review and comments, Murray. Please see inline =
[ml] for our feedback.


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I agree with Barry's editorial suggestions.

What does the "*)" in the table in Section 3.3 mean?

[ml] Thanks for spotting this. It's actually a leftover from a removed =
remark (editor's note) that we had in past revisions. We'll remove the =
tag from the table in revision 14.  =20


>From Section 10:

   [...]  if the Diameter client or server is
   compromised, an attacker could launch DoS attacks by terminating a
   large number of sessions with a limited set of commands using the
   session group management concept.

Is it worth mentioning that an attacker could also mess with the set of =
sessions associated with a group, possibly causing disruptions other =
than bulk session terminations?

[ml] yes, it's a valid scenario during an attack, too. We propose the =
following extension to the existing text to cover your proposal:

=E2=80=9C..if the Diameter client or server is compromised, an attacker =
could launch DoS attacks by terminating or applying change operations=20
to a large number of sessions with a limited set of commands using the =
session group management concept.=E2=80=9D=20

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Thanks a lot for your comments, =C3=89ric. Please find our feedback =
inline [ml] below.


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=C3=89ric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document. Like Barry and other ADs, =
I found this document difficult to read: long and complex sentences do =
not help the reader (but I am not a native English speaker). Therefore, =
I trust the responsible AD for the correctness of all the details in the =
specification.
E.g., FSM or time line diagrams would have been helpful.

[ml] We address Barry's and other ADs' comments in separate eMails and =
also discussed between co-authors where and how to improve some =
description in revision 14.
=20

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be =
appreciated), and some nits.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

[ml] absolutely.

Regards,

-=C3=A9ric

=3D=3D DISCUSS =3D=3D

=3D=3D COMMENTS =3D=3D

Any reason why the authors affiliation is not shown ?

[ml] no particular reason, only a change of affiliation in one case. =
Missing information will be added to revision 14.


The shepherd write-up is dated back in 2018... Is it still applicable ?

[ml] yes, Jouni's comments have been addressed at that point in time and =
we built on that version to address Ben's comments. Despite some delay, =
the draft progresses according to the defined procedure.


-- Section 7.2 --
About the flag bits, I wonder why the values are not 0x01 and 0x02 =
rather than
0x01 and 0x10. Isn't this a waste of bits ? Should the IANA sub-registry =
for those flags be mentioned?

[ml] The AVP with type Unsigned32 is treated as bit mask. Two bits for =
the Session-Group-Control-Vector AVP are defined in the draft, one for =
the Session-Group-Capability-Vector AVP.=20
Combinations of bits in a mask can be set and make sense in some cases, =
whereas some other combinations don't. For example, clearing the
SESSION_GROUP_STATUS_IND bit while setting the =
SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION bit in an intance of a =
Session-Group-Control-Vector AVP
does not make sense. Since IANA also asked for clarification, we =
proposed updated text for the IANA considerations section, which will go =
into revision 14 of the draft.

marco



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