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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Detecting Network Attachment Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Network Deployment Considerations
	Author(s)	: S. Narayanan, et al.
	Filename	: draft-ietf-dna-network-00.txt
	Pages		: 19
	Date		: 2006-6-6
	
Hosts experiencing rapid link-layer changes may require to do
configuration change detection procedures more frequently than
traditional fixed hosts.  This document describes practices available
to network deployers in order to support such hosts in Detecting
Network Attachment in IPv6 networks.


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Hi, 

Please note that draft-ietf-dna-network is the replacement
for draft-ietf-dna-routers whose name was changed due
to feedback that the document didn't modify routers.

Greg



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Hi, 

Here is a review of FRD.  I will be travelling for 
the next two weeks, so my response will be limited.

Greg


This document has expired in the repository, please submit a new version.


Abstract


Please do not make any abbreviations in the abstract.  Abbreviations
should be introduced on their first use in the text.

It's not clear what the optimized result is...

The Suggested abstract is as follows:

   For efficient detection of network Attachment, a host should quickly
   receive a Router Advertisement upon a new link-layer connection.
   This draft presents a quick advertisement acquisition scheme with
   the support of a link-layer Point of Attachment.

   Upon a new network attachment, the Point of Attachment may either
   trigger an Access Router to immediately send a unicast advertisement
   "RA Triggering" or send such an advertisement itself "RA Proxying".
   Such functions may be placed on a Point of Attachment to deliver
   Router Advertisements rapidly without changes to IPv6 Neighbor
   Discovery




Introduction

DNA is used in paragraph 2 without being introduced.

Paragraph 2 and 3 overlap in coverage.  

Here is a suggested amalgamation:

   
   A host needs to receive a Router Advertisement (RA) when it has moved
   to a different link in order to Detect Network Attachment (DNA).
   Router advertisements contain IP prefix information which identify
   the composition of a link, and the available prefixes to configure
   upon link change.  This document focusses on Rapid delivery of RA
   messages without describing their content <xref target="RFC4135"/>.
   Those interested in RA contents are referred to
   <xref target="I-D.ietf-dna-protocol"/>.
   

In Paragraph 4, please change sentence beginning "Second, ..." 
as follows:

   Second, a host should randomly delay before initial transmission
   of a Router Solicitation (RS) message.

Please note that this restriction has been relaxed in RFC2461bis.


Paragraph 5:

s/broadcast/multicast/

s/For DNA purpose/For DNA purposes/

Paragraph 6:

s/PoA (Point of Attachment) is the link endpoint fo the link, such as/
A PoA is a link-layer connection point through which a wired or wireless
host
interfaces to an access network, such as/


s/, PoA,/, the PoA/

s/delivered to the host in unicast/unicast to the host/

Paragraph 7:

s/the PoA may either trigger an AR (Access Router) to immediately send a
suitable RA or/
the PoA may trigger an AR to either sen


Protocol Overview:

Paragraph 1:

I suggest replacing the text with:

   Using the procedures outlined in this document, when a host establishes a
   link-layer connection a PoA, can detect the host's new attachment and get
   the necessary information to deliver an unicast L2 frame to it. For 
   example, this link-layer information may be a 802.11 MAC address or
802.16
   CID (Connection Identifier) [19].

Paragraph 2:

s/forward the information/forward the link-layer information/


Paragraph 3:

s/Or the PoA/Alternatively, the PoA/


3.1 RA triggering:

Paragraph 1:

s/to IP layer/to the IP layer/


Paragraph2:

s/deliver the AR the Link Up event notification/
deliver a Link Up event notification to the AR/

Paragraph 3:
s/TSLLAO/Tentative Option/




3.2 RA proxying:

Paragraph 2


s/We may manually/An administrator may manually/

s/use the scanning scheme/use an RA scanning scheme/



s/Or PoA and AR may use a special information service/
Alternatively, a PoA and AR may use an information service/

s/porxy/proxy/

Paragraph 3

s/, PoA may/, the PoA may/


4. RA Triggering

Suggest replacement of paragraph 1 with:

   In case the PoA and AR are in the same node, when a new host is attached
   link-layer events may be delivered locally.  The arriving host's
link-layer
   address can be passed from the PoA (Link-Layer) to the AR (IP Layer) in
   the same stack.  Subsequently, the AR can immediately send a suitable
   RA in a unicast L2 frame with the new host's MAC address.  


Paragraph 2:

s/, we may use/, they may communicate using/


Paragraph 4:

Add to the end:

Further deatils of these operations are provided in section 5.1.3.



5. RA proxying:

paragraph 1:

s/we recomment to use RA triggering instead/
it is RECOMMENDED that RA triggering is used instead/


5.1 RA Caching:

Replace with:

Three different methods for storing RAs in a PoA are presented.


5.1.1 Manual Configuration:

please replace with:


   In the simplest way, an administraotr can manually configure a 
   suitable RA in the PoA.   Such an RA may contain a link-identifier
   or be a Complete RA <xref target="I-D.ietf-dna-protocol"/>.  This
   may be applicable where the AR and PoA are under the same administrative
   control, and the RA message contents don't change often.



5.1.2 Scanning


Note that there is no description of a suitable RA.


paragraph 1

s/L2 frame /L2 frames /


Paragraph 2:

s/scans L2 frame/scans the L2 frame/

s/sends that frame down the link and scans a next L2 frame/
ignores that frame for caching purposes/

s/If incoming/If an incoming/

Paragraph 3:

Please replace the paragraph with:

   A PoA can scan continuously, updating an old RA with a new RA. 
   Alternatively, if it costs too much for the PoA to scan every
   incoming L2 frame, it may control the scanning rate.  For example,
   it can set a timer and execute scanning every T seconds, Or the PoA
   itself can send a Router Solicitation (RS) message periodically.
   It is noted that the PoA doesn't need to have an IP address since
   it can use the unspecified address as its RS source address.


Paragraph 4:

Please replace with:

   It assists RA caching if routers advertised changed parameters
   rapidly as described in section 6.2.6 of IPv6 Neighbour Discovery
   <xref target="RFC2461"/>.



5.1.3 MICS (Media Indepenent Comment (sic) Service)

Globally:

s/Comment Service/Command Service/


Paragraph2:
s/Remote MIH Command, "MIH Network Address Information"/
Remote MIH Command Primitive: "MIH Network Address Information"/

Paragraph3:
it greatly concerns me that this paragraph suggests standardization
by someone "we"! that a new 802.21 Command service primitive is defined
for this role.
As described in 7.4.11 of 802.21 D01.00, Network Address Information 
request can be used to gather addressing and routing information on the PoA.

There are still uncertainties there regarding the content of messages,
and any recommendations seem highly conjectural for a document aiming
to be an RFC.  

Perhaps such suggestions should be placed in the appendix.



5.2 RA Delivery

s/attachement/attachment/

s/describes/described/


5.2.1 802.11

No mention of how this works with 802.11i RSN is made.

This needs to be fixed.

5.2.2 802.16

Paragraph 3 and Paragraph 7 
Both seem to indicate that 802.16 procedures are not
well enough developed to normatively describe.

This section should be removed or moved to an appendix.

My concern here is that it's implicitly putting requirements
on 802.16 for the channel establishment operations.

7. Security Considerations

DoS Attacks seem to be ignored here.

parrticularly:

Paragraph 3:

It's wrong to say there's no FRD specific problem, as 
false or spurious Associations (caused by a sequence of
L2 messages) can be used to trigger an additional RA 
on the PoA.   This is a potential amplification attack
in some scenarios, and consumes wireless medium bandwidth.

s/through secure port/through a secure port/

Paragraph 4:

It is wrong to say there is no additional security vulnrebility
if there's not a secured path between PoA and AR.

An on-link attacker can potentially forge MICS events which
can force the Router to place configuration information on
the PoA.

An attacker can also fill the PoA's cache with false router advertisements,
which can make change undetectable for nodes transiting from an 
adjacent link.  This will significantly slow change detection.




Paragraphs 6-9

Ownership proof is best not hidden in the Security considerations
section. It's clearly the crux of how to cache securely.

You need to ensure that the Solicited RA (from the RS with the OP
option) contains a valid Timestamp option though, and that the
solicited timestamp is within range.

Please state this (and that an OP on the subsequent RA cannot
be used as proof instead).


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  Miscellaneous warnings:
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    RFC 2119 paragraph 2 text:
    "The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
    "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
    document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119."


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    '   [16]  Nordmark, E., "MIPv6: from hindsight to foresight?",'

  - Unused Reference: [17] is defined on line 529, but not referenced
    '   [17]  Kempf, J., Khalil, M., and B. Pentland, "IPv6 Fast Router'

  - Unused Reference: [18] is defined on line 533, but not referenced
    '   [18]  Daley, G. and J. Choi, "Movement Detection Optimization in'

  - Unused Reference: [20] is defined on line 541, but not referenced
    '   [20]  IEEE 802.16 TGe Working Document (Draft Standard), "Amendment'


    No nits found.



General:

please remove references to:

draft-ietf-dna-soln-frame-00              (deprecated)
draft-ietf-dna-cpl-01  (unless referenced from paragraph 2 of introduction).
draft-jinchoi-dna-protocol2-01            (linkid related)
draft-mkhalil-ipv6-fastra-05              (?, is it going to be referenced?)
draft-nordmark-mobileip-mipv6-hindsight   (linkid related)

Please update references to:
draft-ietf-send-ndopt-06 --> RFC 3971 
draft-ietf-dhc-dnav4-16  --> RFC 4436
draft-daley-ipv6-tsllao-02 --> draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
draft-pentland-sna-protocol-01 --> draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
draft-ietf-dna-link-information-02 --> draft-ietf-dna-link-information-03

IEEE 802.21 draft D00.01   --> D01




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Hi,


On 26 mai 06, at 04:02, Bernard Aboba wrote:

> I didn't realize this document was trying to take 802.21 into account.

I just have a question here: which document are you talking about  
when you say "take into account 802.21"?

Tx,

Nicolas

>   I had assumed that it was targeting a relatively short-term  
> completion date, so that it was not feasible to wait until 802.11r  
> completed sponsor ballot later this year. But given that the gears  
> of the IETF grind slowly indeed, perhaps there is little reason not  
> to add new text.
>
>> From: David Hunter <hunter@timefactor.com>
>> To: Bernard Aboba  
>> <bernard_aboba@hotmail.com>,alper.yegin@yegin.org,  
>> jari.arkko@piuha.net
>> CC: Greg.Daley@eng.monash.edu.au,Suresh.Krishnan@ericsson.com,  
>> gregdaley@ieee.org,dna@eng.monash.edu.au,hunter@timefactor.com
>> Subject: RE: [DNA] RE: draft-ietf-dna-link-information-03
>> Date: Thu, 25 May 2006 15:58:17 -0700
>>
>> Agree with Bernard on the antecedents, but not on the  
>> conclusions.  Bad news:  to work with 802.11, 802.21 is going to  
>> have to accommodate 802.11r (just a fact of the market).   Good  
>> news:  802.11r is much further along than 802.21.  *If* no major  
>> glitches happen, 802.11r will be complete and passed through as a  
>> standard by the time 802.21 hits sponsor ballot.  So it's pretty  
>> safe to include 802.11r accommodations in a document that is also  
>> trying to take 802.21 into account.
>>
>> Hunter
>>
>> At 11:14 PM 5/24/2006, Bernard Aboba wrote:
>>>> Does the document provide any guidance on what the link up/down
>>>> events should be for preauthentication or fast handoff (802.11r)
>>>> situations? Or is it too early to specify these?
>>>
>>> EAP pre-authentication can only occur if the host is already  
>>> connected (e.g. link is in the "up" state), so this is not  
>>> relevant to DNA.  IEEE 802.11r is a somewhat complicated because  
>>> initial authentication uses the 802.11i model (e.g. no IP  
>>> connectivity prior to post-EAP handshake completion), but  
>>> handoffs are more like the original 802.11 model ("link up" on  
>>> completion of authenticated re-association).  Given that 11r  
>>> isn't done yet, it is probably best not to try to cover it in  
>>> this document.
>>
>>
>




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Jari,

> >>>4.  Security Considerations
> >>>
> >>>   A faked link-layer event notification can be used to launch a
> >>>   denial-of service attack on the node and the associated network.
> >>>   Secure generation and delivery of these notifications MUST be
> >>>   ensured.  This is a subject for link-layer and network stack designs
> >>>   and therefore it is outside the scope of this document.
...

> >As for the "MUST", I understand that there are currently deployed systems
> >that do not deploy appropriate security to handle this threat. That fact
> >should not take anything away from what a secure system MUST be doing. I
> >think that fact just makes them insecure in this sense, hence vulnerable
> to
> >spoofed link ups and downs. For that, I'm inclined to keep the MUST in
> >there.
> >
> >
> What you said was "Secure generation and delivery of these
> notifications MUST be ensured." What I'm complaining about
> is that there's no way to fully protect the notifications
> against all threats, particularly if you include DoS. 
> 

Reading your response I realized the current text is open to interpretation.


All I wanted to say was, if my L3 receives a link-up notification, this
notification should be integrity protected, replay protected, and source
authenticated -- in some form. If these are not achieved, it can be
"leveraged" for DoS attacks. I didn't mean to require DoS prevention for any
DoS attacks. 

This level of security is very practical. In most (if not all) cases where
the L2 and L3 reside on the same physical box, we rely on physical security.
Only in cases where L2 and L3 reside on separate boxes, and they
notifications go over a link, then we may need to rely on additional
measures, like L2 or L3 security (IPsec). In fact, physical security may be
used there too.


Having said that, let me look at your text below...




> As
> a result, it seems that we are making a MUST that no one
> can implement. You also do not specify what the implementor
> needs to do to satisfy the MUST, so it would hard for
> anyone to determine whether they are compliant with
> the spec.
> 
> What would perhaps be more useful is to avoid any
> requirements, or say something that is a bit
> more specific, such as "It is RECOMMENDED that
> security at the link layer be used".
> 
> Here's some strawman text:
> 
> Attackers may spoof various indications at the link layer, or
> manipulate the physical medium directly in an effort to confuse the
> host about the state of the link layer. For instance, attackers may
> spoof error messages or disturb the wireless medium to cause the host
> to move its connection elsewhere or to even disconnect. Attackers may
> also spoof information to make the host believe it has a connection
> when, in reality, it does not.
> 
> These attacks may cause use of non-preferred networks or even
> denial-of-service.
> 
> This specification does not provide any protection of its own for the
> the indications from the lower layers. But the vulnerabilities
> can be mitigated through the use of techniques in other
> parts of the protocol stack. 

So far so good.

> In particular, it is RECOMMENDED
> that link layer security is used.

What we need is L2 security that can specifically secure link-layer
connection management related signaling. As you know, not all L2 security
solutions do that. 

Also, we need to capture the other aspect: secure relaying of the event
notification from L2 to the L3. 

> However, these techniques are typically unable to
> protect against all threats, particularly those related to
> denial-of-service.

I'd not even mention DoSs. I didn't mean to get into general DoS. Just
wanted to mention unsecured L2 events can lead up to DoS attacks.

> It should also be noted that upper layer mechanisms may provide
> partial protection against situations where incorrect event
> notifications are generated. For instance, where Secure NEighbor
> Discovery (SEND) [RFC 3971] is used, the host can ensure that it is
> ultimately connected to an authorized router.

I'm not sure if we really want to say that. Because it opens up a lot of
questions and the solution is not straight forward.

Let me know what you think about my points above. We can take your text as
baseline.

Alper





> 
> --Jari
> 






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> Review of draft-ietf-dna-link-information-03.txt
> 
> Overall, I think this document has some issues:
> 
> a. The document appears to apply to both IPv4 and IPv6, but it makes a
> number of statements that do not reflect the operation of DNAv4 as defined
> in RFC 4436.  For example, DNAv4 does not utilize "link down" events or
> make
> use of link layer "hints".

The document aims to be useful to both DNAv4 and DNAv6. While it defines the
L2 events and their associated notifications, it does not aim defining how
they shall be used. This is the job of DNA specifications.

I guess there is some residual text that falls beyond this scope. You found
some. We'll clean that up.

> 
> b. A terminology section is needed, and terminology
> consistency needs to be improved.  For example the terms
> "event notifications" and "link layer events" are used. It
> is not clear to me if these are synonymous with terms such
> as "triggers" or "link indications" used in other documents.

Oh, we had banned the use of "triggers" in this community a while ago :-)

I've looked at the definition of "Link indications" in your
draft-iab-link-indications-04.txt document. Based on that, an event
notification is a type of indication. Of course, there are other types of
indications as well. For example, a non-event-notification type indication:
L3 can read certain L2 attributes to use them as indications of various
things (e.g., lack of security, lack of bandwidth, etc. etc.)

Do we need to do anything to harmonize the two documents? Shall we state
that "A link-layer event notification is a type of link indication [ref]"?

Btw, your I-D makes statements like "Link Up event should not be sent"... It
is the "event notification" that is sent, not the "event" itself. Event
takes place in the L2.

> Similarly, the term "link layer connection" is
> used, which may or may not correspond to the term
> "link up" used in this and other documents.

   "Link up" is an event provided by the link-layer that signifies a
   state change associated with the interface becoming capable of
   communicating data packets.  This event is associated with a link-
   layer connection between the node and an attachment point.


> c. Normative language is used relating to events without
> a tie to the DNA spec.  For example, the document requires
> that "link down" events be generated prior to a "link up" without
> indicating why such events would be helpful.  In fact, in DNAv4 these
> events will be ignored, and generating such events would actually be
> harmful to operating systems or applications that tear down connections on
> receipt of "link down" events.

Irrespective of the "consumer of such event notifications", events do take
place. And they should be marked that way in the L2 (a).

Whether the "event notifications" shall be generated and sent up to the L3
is another story (b). And how they are used is a totally different story
(c).


For (b), I'll scan the document and make sure we don't overstep the scope
and make statements about the event notifications being always sent up or
anything. It's really upto the L3 and the specific consumer if it wants to
hear certain types of notifications (b), and how they want to use it (c).


> 
> Abstract:
> 
> "  Certain network access technologies are capable of providing various
>     link-layer status information to IP.  Link-layer event notifications
>     can help IP expeditiously detect configuration changes.  This
>     document provides a non-exhaustive catalogue of information available
>     from well-known access technologies."
> 
> This abstract does not clearly indicate the purpose of the document.  It
> would be helpful to state that the primary purpose is to address
> events relating to DNAv6 (since the document does not appear to apply to
> DNAv4).

DNAv2 and DNAv6 are the main focus. But.... this document should also be
useful to other protocols, anything that talks about link up and link down
at IETF.



> 
> Section 1
> 
> "  Detecting the subnet change can usually use
>     network-layer indications such as a change in the advertised prefixes
>     (i.e., appearance and disappearance of prefixes)."
> 
> Is this document solely focussed on DNAv6? If IPv4 is in scope, then since
> router advertisement is not widely implemented, it should be made clear
> that prefixes are just an example. For example, you can change the text
> to:
> 
> "  Detecting the subnet change can usually use
>     network-layer indications (such as a change in the advertised
>     prefixes for IPv6)."

Good idea.

> 
>    "Establishment and
>     tear down of a link-layer connection are two basic events types.
>     Additional information can be conveyed in addition to the event type,
>     such as the identifier of the network attachment point (e.g., IEEE
>     802.11 BSSID and SSID), or network-layer configuration parameters
>     obtained via the link-layer attachment process if available.  It is
>     envisaged that such event notifications can in certain circumstances
>     be used to expedite the inter-subnet movement detection and
>     reconfiguration process.  For example, the notification indicating
>     that the node has established a new link-layer connection MAY be used
>     for immediately probing the network for a possible configuration
>     change.  In the absence of such a notification from the link-layer,
>     IP has to wait for indications that are not immediately available,
>     such as receipt of next scheduled router advertisement,
>     unreachability of the default gateway, etc."
> 
> The term "link layer connection" is used here, but is not defined.
> I am not sure whether this only relates to connection-oriented
> link layers, or whether this is synonymous with "link up".

Is there a better term to indicate both connection-oriented and
connectionless link-layers are covered?

> What are "network layer configuration parameters obtained via the
> link-layer attachment process"?  Perhaps an example would help (e.g. PPP
> IPCP)

OK.

> 
> "   Two basic link-layer events are considered potentially useful to DNA
>     process: link up and link down."
> 
> This contradicts RFC 4436, Section 1.3:
> "DNAv4 does not utilize "Link Down" indications."

We shall remove that text. But I'm not suggesting we remove the "link down"
as described in the document. Even if DNA methods don't use it, link down is
the counter part to link up. It may very well be used by other
specifications. People should have to write a separate document just for
defining link-down.


>    "Each time the interface changes its point of attachment, a
>     link down event with the previous attachment point MUST be followed
>     by a link up event with the new one.  Finally, when the network
>     interface is disabled, this MUST generate a link down event.  Each
>     one of these events MUST generate a notification in the order they
>     occur."
> 
> I don't understand the use of normative language here.  Given that
> link down is not used by DNAv4, why is it relevant to require that
> link down events be generated on handoff?  Existing operating systems
> do not necessarily generate these events because they can be disruptive
> to applications.

I think the events MUST take place (i.e., there must be some state variable
in the L2 that indicates the event took place). But I agree it's none of
this I-D's business to state that the event notifications MUST be generated.
Instead, "The link-layer MUST be capable of generating the matching event
notifications. Whether the link-layer delivers a given type of event
notification depends on the local configuration." And this says nothing
about what the network-layer would do if it received any such notifications.

  
>     "While
>     merely knowing that a new link-layer connection is established may
>     prompt DNA process to immediately seek other clues for detecting
>     network configuration change, auxiliary information may constitute
>     further clues (and even the final answers sometimes)."
> 
> DNAv4 does not utilize link-layer information this way.   Rather than
> utilizing link-layer "hints", in DNAv4, all the active configurations
> are probed via ARP.
> 
> Section 2.3
> 
>    "A station (STA) MUST establish
>     a IEEE 802.11 link with an AP in order to send and receive IP
>     packets."
> 
> I'm not clear why the term "link" is used here (I think this refers to
> Association) or why it is normative (presumably the ability to send
> data frames is determined by the 802.11 specification, not this document).

Will fix.

> 
> "  BSSID and SSID MUST be provided as auxiliary information
>     along with the link up notification.  Unfortunately this information
>     does not provide a deterministic indication of whether the IP-layer
>     configuration MUST be changed upon movement."
> 
> Given the limitations of the BSSID and SSID, why the
> normative language?  DNAv4 implementations will not use this
> information.

BSSID/SSID info is always available to L2, therefore I don't see a problem
in making them available to the L3. Reducing MUST to a SHOULD or MAY does
not really buy us anything, but makes the L2 implementations less
predictable. 

>    "If authentication is performed, a link up indication can be
>     generated upon authentication, and a link down indication can be
>     generated upon deauthentication."
> 
> What if authentication is not performed?  How are "link up"
> and "link down" determined?

I'll let Nicolas answer that (IEEE 802.11).

> 
> Section 2.4.2
> 
> "   Ethernet networks commonly consist of LANs joined together by
>     transparent bridges (usually implemented as switches).  Transparent
>     bridges require the active topology to be loop free.  The Spanning
>     Tree Protocol (STP) achieves this by the exchange of Bridge Protocol
>     Data Unit (BPDU), as defined in [IEEE-802.1D], which leads to, where
>     required, the blocking of ports (i.e., not forwarding)."
> 
> I think you need to mention RSTP here as well.
> 
> "   Most hosts today do not listen to BPDU frames.  For these hosts,
>     connectivity to the a port which is potentially bridged (any Ethernet
>     port) carries the potential of frame loss if transmissions occur
>     before any bridges' ForwardDelay timers have expired twice."
> 
> "to the a port" - "to the port"
> 
> "   If no bridge configuration messages are received within the
>     Bridge_Max_Age interval (default 20s), then it is likely that there
>     is no visible bridge whose port is enabled for bridging (S8.4.5 of
>     [IEEE-802.1D]), since at least two BPDU hello messages would have
>     been lost.  Upon this timeout, a link up notification MUST be
>     generated.
> 
>     It is not easy for a non-STP host to distinguish between Disabled
>     bridge ports and non-bridge ports with no IP nodes on them, as
>     Disabled ports will have no traffic on them, and incur 100% sender
>     loss.
> 
>     Upon this Bridge_Max_Age timeout, a link up notification must be
>     generated.  If an earlier link up was generated with the R-flag set,
>     this new one MUST set the A-flag showing that packets sent within the
>     prior interval were likely to have traversed the forwarding path
>     (unless the port is disabled)."
> 
> The next section talks about when to enable the delay, but I think you
> could be more clear about this here as well.  For example, are you
> recommending that hosts listen for STP/RSTP messages, or use 802.1AB
> in order to decide on the appropriate delay?  Delaying for 20 seconds
> by default probably isn't a good idea now that RSTP is becoming more
> common.
> 
> "  Due to the protocol's newness and lack of deployment, it is unclear
>     how this protocol will eventually affect DNA in IPv4 or IPv6
>     networks."
> 
> DNAv4 does not utilize 802.1AB "hints", so this could be clarified.
> 
> Section 2.4.4
> 
> "   Link-Layer indications in Ethernet-like networks are complicated by
>     additional unadvertised delays due to Spanning Tree calculations.
>     This may cause re-indication (link up with A-flag) or retraction
>     (link up with B-flag) of indications previously sent to upper layer
>     protocols."
> 
> What are the A and B flags?  Is this an artifact of a previous revision?
> 

I'll let Greg answer these (Ethernet).

Alper





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Jari, all:

Please see below for the revised text for the security considerations
section.

Especially the last paragraph. I personally find it useful. But if you
believe it is not useful, or harmful, etc., I don't mind deleting it.  

Suggest deletion/modification/etc as you see appropriate.

--

4.  Security Considerations

Attackers may spoof various indications at the link-layer, or
manipulate the physical medium directly in an effort to confuse the
host about the state of the link-layer. For instance, attackers may
spoof error messages or disturb the wireless medium to cause the host
to move its connection elsewhere or to even disconnect. Attackers may
also spoof information to make the host believe it has a connection
when, in reality, it does not.

These attacks may cause use of non-preferred networks or even
denial-of-service.

This specification does not provide any protection of its own for the
the indications from the lower layers. But the vulnerabilities
can be mitigated through the use of techniques in other
parts of the protocol stack. In particular, it is RECOMMENDED
that authentication, replay and integrity protection of link-layer
management messages is enabled when available. Additionally, protocol stack
may also use some upper layer mechanisms to achieve partial protection
against situations where incorrect event notifications are generated (e.g.,
upper-layer confirmation of the link-layer event).

When the link-layer and the network-layer reside on separate nodes as in a
distributed stack implementation, the event notifications MUST be
authenticated, replay and integrity protected as they are delivered. The
specific mechanisms to achieve the security of notifications are outside the
scope of this document.



Alper



> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.arkko@piuha.net]
> Sent: Wednesday, June 14, 2006 3:26 AM
> To: Alper Yegin
> Cc: dna@eng.monash.edu.au
> Subject: Re: [DNA] RE: draft-ietf-dna-link-information-03
> 
> Hi Alper,
> 
> Some further discussion inline:
> 
> >
> >
> >>In particular, it is RECOMMENDED
> >>that link layer security is used.
> >>
> >>
> >
> >What we need is L2 security that can specifically secure link-layer
> >connection management related signaling. As you know, not all L2 security
> >solutions do that.
> >
> >Also, we need to capture the other aspect: secure relaying of the event
> >notification from L2 to the L3.
> >
> >
> This is stack internal unless you have a distributed implementation.
> My advice would be to not start a discussion of how the distributed
> implementation can secure its communication between L2 and L3.
> 
> >>However, these techniques are typically unable to
> >>protect against all threats, particularly those related to
> >>denial-of-service.
> >>
> >>
> >
> >I'd not even mention DoSs. I didn't mean to get into general DoS. Just
> >wanted to mention unsecured L2 events can lead up to DoS attacks.
> >
> >
> Yes. Perhaps we could use a sentence that mentions the specific L2 event
> DoS threat, and not my general DoS issue above.
> 
> >
> >
> >>It should also be noted that upper layer mechanisms may provide
> >>partial protection against situations where incorrect event
> >>notifications are generated. For instance, where Secure NEighbor
> >>Discovery (SEND) [RFC 3971] is used, the host can ensure that it is
> >>ultimately connected to an authorized router.
> >>
> >>
> >
> >I'm not sure if we really want to say that. Because it opens up a lot of
> >questions and the solution is not straight forward.
> >
> >
> Its only an example. We could remove the example part or use another
> example if you want.
> 
> --Jari





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Hi Folks,
    At the last meeting in Dallas lot of concerns were raised about the
number of documents being produced by the WG. The Consensus was to
reduce the number of documents to keep related information together.
    The chairs have identified two possible merger scenarios and would
like to know the opinion of the working group regarding these two.


Option A:
=========
Combine
1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6)
and
2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 Neighbour Discovery
(draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)

into one document.

Merge
3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current Practices for hosts
and
4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
(draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)

into another document.

Option B:
=========

Merge all the above mentioned documents

* draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
* draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
* draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
* draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02

into a single document.

This consensus call will last for two weeks and will end on the 29th of
June 2006. Please respond to the list whether you

* Prefer Option A
* Prefer Option B

If you do not have a preference and you are ok with either option,
please respond with "Don't care ". If we have consensus on the Don't
cares the chairs will make the decision.

Thanks
Suresh and Greg



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>Additionally, protocol stack
>may also use some upper layer mechanisms to achieve partial protection
>against situations where incorrect event notifications are generated (e.g.,
>upper-layer confirmation of the link-layer event).

Are you referring to DNA itself here?  (e.g. use of SEND)

>When the link-layer and the network-layer reside on separate nodes as in a
>distributed stack implementation, the event notifications MUST be
>authenticated, replay and integrity protected as they are delivered. The 
>specific mechanisms to achieve the security of notifications are outside 
>the
>scope of this document.

It seems odd to be making strong normative statements at the same time it is 
stated that the mechanisms to achieve the mandates are out of scope.

Overall, I think there is still a missing piece here relating to damping.  
It is one thing for an attacker to be able to execute a DoS attack on one 
node;  it is another to be able to leverage that node's DNA implementation 
to DoS others on the same network, or across the Internet.





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> >Additionally, protocol stack
> >may also use some upper layer mechanisms to achieve partial protection
> >against situations where incorrect event notifications are generated
> (e.g.,
> >upper-layer confirmation of the link-layer event).
> 
> Are you referring to DNA itself here?  (e.g. use of SEND)

I know the above text is vague. If we try to make it more concrete by giving
examples, I'm afraid we need to further expand on it as it is not straight
forward how one can use SEND, etc. to achieve that added protection. 

If we cannot capture a solid solution (even as an example) without
generating more questions than we answer, I'm inclined to delete the above
paragraph as it may not help in this form.

Thoughts?

> >When the link-layer and the network-layer reside on separate nodes as in
> a
> >distributed stack implementation, the event notifications MUST be
> >authenticated, replay and integrity protected as they are delivered. The
> >specific mechanisms to achieve the security of notifications are outside
> >the
> >scope of this document.
> 
> It seems odd to be making strong normative statements at the same time it
> is
> stated that the mechanisms to achieve the mandates are out of scope.

I didn't think of shying away from a must-do just because we are not
providing the solution in this document. Think of it as a requirement for
the implementations of event notifications. 

Please let us know if you have a suggested text replacement.

> Overall, I think there is still a missing piece here relating to damping.
> It is one thing for an attacker to be able to execute a DoS attack on one
> node;  it is another to be able to leverage that node's DNA implementation
> to DoS others on the same network, or across the Internet.

This sounds reasonable. Can you please propose some text to capture what you
are saying?

Alper






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Dear Greg

Thanks for your kind and detailed feedback. Kindly find my inline comments.

> This document has expired in the repository, please submit a new version.

ok.

> Please do not make any abbreviations in the abstract.  Abbreviations
> should be introduced on their first use in the text.
>
> It's not clear what the optimized result is...
>
> The Suggested abstract is as follows:
>
>   For efficient detection of network Attachment, a host should quickly
>   receive a Router Advertisement upon a new link-layer connection.
>   This draft presents a quick advertisement acquisition scheme with
>   the support of a link-layer Point of Attachment.
>
>   Upon a new network attachment, the Point of Attachment may either
>   trigger an Access Router to immediately send a unicast advertisement
>   "RA Triggering" or send such an advertisement itself "RA Proxying".
>   Such functions may be placed on a Point of Attachment to deliver
>   Router Advertisements rapidly without changes to IPv6 Neighbor
>   Discovery

I checked a few RFCs, such as SeND (RFC 3971), and found out they also
uses abbreviation in the abstract. Also DNA Goals (RFC 4135), which we
co-authored, includes abbreviations in the abstract. Also when we
wrote DNA Goals, Jim Bound explicitly objected 'abstract' to be
separated into two parts as above.

> Introduction
>
> DNA is used in paragraph 2 without being introduced.

I added a text. 

> Paragraph 2 and 3 overlap in coverage.
>
> Here is a suggested amalgamation:
>
>
>   A host needs to receive a Router Advertisement (RA) when it has moved
>   to a different link in order to Detect Network Attachment (DNA).
>   Router advertisements contain IP prefix information which identify
>   the composition of a link, and the available prefixes to configure
>   upon link change.  This document focusses on Rapid delivery of RA
>   messages without describing their content <xref target="RFC4135"/>.
>   Those interested in RA contents are referred to
>   <xref target="I-D.ietf-dna-protocol"/>.

I modified the phrases including the definition of 'a suitable RA'.

> In Paragraph 4, please change sentence beginning "Second, ..."
> as follows:
>
>   Second, a host should randomly delay before initial transmission
>   of a Router Solicitation (RS) message.
>
> Please note that this restriction has been relaxed in RFC2461bis.

ok, but I prefer 'delay random amount of time'.

> Paragraph 5:
>
> s/broadcast/multicast/

because there is 'over wireless link', I prefer 'broadcast'.

> s/For DNA purpose/For DNA purposes/

ok.

> Paragraph 6:
>
> s/PoA (Point of Attachment) is the link endpoint fo the link, such as/
> A PoA is a link-layer connection point through which a wired or wireless
> host
> interfaces to an access network, such as/

This is how PoA is defined in Bernard Aboba's DNAv4 (RFC4436). When he
wrote the draft, we had a discussion about the terminology to synchronize 
DNAv4 and DNAv6. I guess we'd better be in sync with the existing definition
unless that's unacceptable. 

> s/, PoA,/, the PoA/

ok.

> s/delivered to the host in unicast/unicast to the host/
>
> Paragraph 7:
>
> s/the PoA may either trigger an AR (Access Router) to immediately send a
> suitable RA or/
> the PoA may trigger an AR to either sen

Please elaborate more. The current ones seem better to me.

> Protocol Overview:
>
> Paragraph 1:
>
> I suggest replacing the text with:
>
>   Using the procedures outlined in this document, when a host establishes a
>   link-layer connection a PoA, can detect the host's new attachment and get
>   the necessary information to deliver an unicast L2 frame to it. For
>   example, this link-layer information may be a 802.11 MAC address or
> 802.16
>   CID (Connection Identifier) [19].

I can't see the benefit of a change. Please elaborate more. The
document doesn't intend to outline the procedures for a PoA to detect
the host's new attachment and get the necessary information to deliver
an unicast L2 frame to it. Those are given and out of scope and
described only when necessary for explaining FRD process.

> Paragraph 2:
>
> s/forward the information/forward the link-layer information/
>
> Paragraph 3:
>
> s/Or the PoA/Alternatively, the PoA/
>
> 3.1 RA triggering:
>
> Paragraph 1:
>
> s/to IP layer/to the IP layer/
>
>
> Paragraph2:
>
> s/deliver the AR the Link Up event notification/
> deliver a Link Up event notification to the AR/
>
> Paragraph 3:
> s/TSLLAO/Tentative Option/
>
> 3.2 RA proxying:
>
> Paragraph 2
>
>
> s/We may manually/An administrator may manually/
>
> s/use the scanning scheme/use an RA scanning scheme/
>
> s/Or PoA and AR may use a special information service/
> Alternatively, a PoA and AR may use an information service/
>
> s/porxy/proxy/
>
> Paragraph 3
>
> s/, PoA may/, the PoA may/

ok.

> 4. RA Triggering
>
> Suggest replacement of paragraph 1 with:
>
>   In case the PoA and AR are in the same node, when a new host is attached
>   link-layer events may be delivered locally.  The arriving host's
> link-layer
>   address can be passed from the PoA (Link-Layer) to the AR (IP Layer) in
>   the same stack.  Subsequently, the AR can immediately send a suitable
>   RA in a unicast L2 frame with the new host's MAC address.
>
> Paragraph 2:
>
> s/, we may use/, they may communicate using/
>
> Paragraph 4:
>
> Add to the end:
>
> Further deatils of these operations are provided in section 5.1.3.

I prefer the current ones. For example 5.1.3 is not about further
details of 4. Please elaborate whey changes are needed.

> 5. RA proxying:
>
> paragraph 1:
>
> s/we recomment to use RA triggering instead/
> it is RECOMMENDED that RA triggering is used instead/
>
> 5.1 RA Caching:
>
> Replace with:
>
> Three different methods for storing RAs in a PoA are presented.

I prefer the current ones. For example, this is intended as an
Informational and why should we RECOMMEND? Please elaborate whey
changes are needed.

> 5.1.1 Manual Configuration:
>
> please replace with:
>
>   In the simplest way, an administraotr can manually configure a
>   suitable RA in the PoA.   Such an RA may contain a link-identifier
>   or be a Complete RA <xref target="I-D.ietf-dna-protocol"/>.  This
>   may be applicable where the AR and PoA are under the same administrative
>   control, and the RA message contents don't change often.

I modified the text with the term 'a suitable RA'.

> 5.1.2 Scanning
>
> Note that there is no description of a suitable RA.

I added it in Introduction.

> paragraph 1
>
> s/L2 frame /L2 frames /
>
> Paragraph 2:
>
> s/scans L2 frame/scans the L2 frame/
>
> s/sends that frame down the link and scans a next L2 frame/
> ignores that frame for caching purposes/
>
> s/If incoming/If an incoming/

ok.

> Paragraph 3:
>
> Please replace the paragraph with:
>
>   A PoA can scan continuously, updating an old RA with a new RA.
>   Alternatively, if it costs too much for the PoA to scan every
>   incoming L2 frame, it may control the scanning rate.  For example,
>   it can set a timer and execute scanning every T seconds, Or the PoA
>   itself can send a Router Solicitation (RS) message periodically.
>   It is noted that the PoA doesn't need to have an IP address since
>   it can use the unspecified address as its RS source address.
>
> Paragraph 4:
>
> Please replace with:
>
>   It assists RA caching if routers advertised changed parameters
>   rapidly as described in section 6.2.6 of IPv6 Neighbour Discovery
>   <xref target="RFC2461"/>.

I don't see much difference from the current one. Please elaborate
whey changes are needed.

> 5.1.3 MICS (Media Indepenent Comment (sic) Service)
>
> Globally:
>
> s/Comment Service/Command Service/
>
>
> Paragraph2:
> s/Remote MIH Command, "MIH Network Address Information"/
> Remote MIH Command Primitive: "MIH Network Address Information"/

I checked with Xiaoyu, 802.21 secretary, and he recommended the
current one. 'Primitive' is used inside local stack.

> Paragraph3:
> it greatly concerns me that this paragraph suggests standardization
> by someone "we"! that a new 802.21 Command service primitive is defined
> for this role.
> As described in 7.4.11 of 802.21 D01.00, Network Address Information
> request can be used to gather addressing and routing information on the PoA.
>
> There are still uncertainties there regarding the content of messages,
> and any recommendations seem highly conjectural for a document aiming
> to be an RFC.
>
> Perhaps such suggestions should be placed in the appendix.

I see your point. I made a comment at the end accordingly. Also, if
needed, we can move it to Appendix.

> 5.2 RA Delivery
>
> s/attachement/attachment/
>
> s/describes/described/
>
> 5.2.1 802.11
>
> No mention of how this works with 802.11i RSN is made.
>
> This needs to be fixed.

ok.

> 5.2.2 802.16
>
> Paragraph 3 and Paragraph 7
> Both seem to indicate that 802.16 procedures are not
> well enough developed to normatively describe.
>
> This section should be removed or moved to an appendix.
>
> My concern here is that it's implicitly putting requirements
> on 802.16 for the channel establishment operations.

The main concern was that the connection to be used for ND 
is not decided but now it become more clear. ND messages
can be carried in a separate transport connection, ISF (Initial
Service Flow). I reflected that into the text.

> 7. Security Considerations
>
> DoS Attacks seem to be ignored here.

I mentioned about excessive signaling.

> parrticularly:
>
> Paragraph 3:
>
> It's wrong to say there's no FRD specific problem, as
> false or spurious Associations (caused by a sequence of
> L2 messages) can be used to trigger an additional RA
> on the PoA.   This is a potential amplification attack
> in some scenarios, and consumes wireless medium bandwidth.

I mentioned that in relationship with excessive signaling.

> s/through secure port/through a secure port/

ok.

> Paragraph 4:
>
> It is wrong to say there is no additional security vulnrebility
> if there's not a secured path between PoA and AR.
>
> An on-link attacker can potentially forge MICS events which
> can force the Router to place configuration information on
> the PoA.
>
> An attacker can also fill the PoA's cache with false router advertisements,
> which can make change undetectable for nodes transiting from an
> adjacent link.  This will significantly slow change detection.

I modified the text. But take notice, even without FRD, an attacker
can send a bogus RA for itself to mislead the DNA decision.

> Paragraphs 6-9
>
> Ownership proof is best not hidden in the Security considerations
> section. It's clearly the crux of how to cache securely.
>
> You need to ensure that the Solicited RA (from the RS with the OP
> option) contains a valid Timestamp option though, and that the
> solicited timestamp is within range.
>
> Please state this (and that an OP on the subsequent RA cannot
> be used as proof instead).

OP part is intended to sketch a scheme. So I guess general overview is
ok and wonder it's necessary to delve into details.

> -----------------------------------------
>
> idnits 1.101
>
> tmp/draft-ietf-dna-frd-00.txt:
>
>
>  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
>
>    Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate...
>
>    the boilerplate looks good.
>
>    No nits found.
>
>  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
>    Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of
>    1id-guidelines.txt yet).
>
>  Miscellaneous warnings:
>  - The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if
>    it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords.
>
>    RFC 2119 paragraph 2 text:
>    "The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
>    "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
>    document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119."
>
>
>  Experimental warnings:
>  - Unused Reference: [2] is defined on line 474, but not referenced
>    '   [2]  Thomson, S. and T. Narten, "IPv6 Stateless Address'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [3] is defined on line 477, but not referenced
>    '   [3]  Hinden, R. and S. Deering, "Internet Protocol Version 6 (IPv6)'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [6] is defined on line 488, but not referenced
>    '   [6]   Nordmark, E. and J. Choi, "DNA with unmodified routers:
> Prefix'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [8] is defined on line 496, but not referenced
>    '   [8]   Johnson, D., Perkins, C., and J. Arkko, "Mobility Support in'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [11] is defined on line 506, but not referenced
>    '   [11]  Pentland, B., "An Overview of Approaches to Detecting Network'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [15] is defined on line 522, but not referenced
>    '   [15]  Aboba, B., "Detecting Network Attachment (DNA) in IPv4",'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [16] is defined on line 525, but not referenced
>    '   [16]  Nordmark, E., "MIPv6: from hindsight to foresight?",'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [17] is defined on line 529, but not referenced
>    '   [17]  Kempf, J., Khalil, M., and B. Pentland, "IPv6 Fast Router'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [18] is defined on line 533, but not referenced
>    '   [18]  Daley, G. and J. Choi, "Movement Detection Optimization in'
>
>  - Unused Reference: [20] is defined on line 541, but not referenced
>    '   [20]  IEEE 802.16 TGe Working Document (Draft Standard), "Amendment'
>
>
>    No nits found.
>
> General:
>
> please remove references to:
>
> draft-ietf-dna-soln-frame-00              (deprecated)
> draft-ietf-dna-cpl-01  (unless referenced from paragraph 2 of introduction).
> draft-jinchoi-dna-protocol2-01            (linkid related)
> draft-mkhalil-ipv6-fastra-05              (?, is it going to be referenced?)
> draft-nordmark-mobileip-mipv6-hindsight   (linkid related)
>
> Please update references to:
> draft-ietf-send-ndopt-06 --> RFC 3971
> draft-ietf-dhc-dnav4-16  --> RFC 4436
> draft-daley-ipv6-tsllao-02 --> draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
> draft-pentland-sna-protocol-01 --> draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
> draft-ietf-dna-link-information-02 --> draft-ietf-dna-link-information-03
>
> IEEE 802.21 draft D00.01   --> D01

I changed the draft number but prefer remove the ref at the last
moment. (It's easier to remove than add.)

Thanks for your kind consideration.

Best Regards

JinHyeock



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Dear WG

We have updated the FRD draft. It's not in the repository yet 
but available in

http://www.diffeo.com/drafts/draft-ietf-dna-frd-01.txt

Mainly we reflected the changes which happened since the 00-version
such as DNA solution progress & 802.16 ISF (Initial Service Flow)
definition. Also we incorporated feedback from WG, special thanks to
Greg for detailed comments. Additional new text was introduced in last
2 paragraphs of section 4 and last 2 paragraphs of the security
considerations. Please give your opinion on the addition.

Kindly see that everything is ok. We wish to LC the draft in near
future, so your feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks for your kind consideration.

Authors



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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Detecting Network Attachment Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: Fast Router Discovery with L2 support
	Author(s)	: J. Choi, et al.
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	Date		: 2006-6-22
	
For efficient Detecting Network Attachment (DNA), a host should
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I prefer option A.

As I mentioned earlier, I think option A is the more practical option.

thanks,
Sathya

Suresh Krishnan wrote:

> Hi Folks,
>    At the last meeting in Dallas lot of concerns were raised about the
> number of documents being produced by the WG. The Consensus was to
> reduce the number of documents to keep related information together.
>    The chairs have identified two possible merger scenarios and would
> like to know the opinion of the working group regarding these two.
>
>
> Option A:
> =========
> Combine
> 1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6)
> and
> 2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 Neighbour Discovery
> (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
>
> into one document.
>
> Merge
> 3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current Practices for
> hosts
> and
> 4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
> (draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)
>
> into another document.
>
> Option B:
> =========
>
> Merge all the above mentioned documents
>
> * draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
> * draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
> * draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
> * draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
>
> into a single document.
>
> This consensus call will last for two weeks and will end on the 29th of
> June 2006. Please respond to the list whether you
>
> * Prefer Option A
> * Prefer Option B
>
> If you do not have a preference and you are ok with either option,
> please respond with "Don't care ". If we have consensus on the Don't
> cares the chairs will make the decision.
>
> Thanks
> Suresh and Greg





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Though it's more work, I think option B will make it easier for 
developers to find what they need.

Brett.

Suresh Krishnan wrote:
> Hi Folks,
>    At the last meeting in Dallas lot of concerns were raised about the
> number of documents being produced by the WG. The Consensus was to
> reduce the number of documents to keep related information together.
>    The chairs have identified two possible merger scenarios and would
> like to know the opinion of the working group regarding these two.
> 
> 
> Option A:
> =========
> Combine
> 1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6)
> and
> 2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 Neighbour Discovery
> (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
> 
> into one document.
> 
> Merge
> 3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current Practices for hosts
> and
> 4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
> (draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)
> 
> into another document.
> 
> Option B:
> =========
> 
> Merge all the above mentioned documents
> 
> * draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
> * draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
> * draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
> * draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
> 
> into a single document.
> 
> This consensus call will last for two weeks and will end on the 29th of
> June 2006. Please respond to the list whether you
> 
> * Prefer Option A
> * Prefer Option B
> 
> If you do not have a preference and you are ok with either option,
> please respond with "Don't care ". If we have consensus on the Don't
> cares the chairs will make the decision.
> 
> Thanks
> Suresh and Greg



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I also agree that option B is preferrable.

>Though it's more work, I think option B will make it easier for developers 
>to find what they need.
>
>Brett.





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> As I mentioned earlier, I think option A is the more practical
> option.

Can you clarify? Does more practical   mean "less work for the current
authors", or does it mean something else?

Personally, I think we should go the route that makes the most sense
for implementors who will be implementing from the RFCs, long after
this WG goes away. Even if this is somewhat more work for the WG. 

> > Option A:
> > =========
> > Combine
> > 1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6)
> > and
> > 2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 Neighbour Discovery
> > (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
> >
> > into one document.
> >
> > Merge
> > 3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current Practices for
> > hosts
> > and
> > 4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
> > (draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)

IMO, there should be one single document that tells implementors what
to implement. I don't think it is helpful to have 2 different
documents giving guidanace on this point. 

> > Option B:
> > =========
> >
> > Merge all the above mentioned documents
> >
> > * draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
> > * draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
> > * draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
> > * draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
> >
> > into a single document.

That would be my preference.

Thomasu



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> > As I mentioned earlier, I think option A is the more practical
> > option.
> 
> Can you clarify? Does more practical   mean "less work for the current authors", or does it mean something else?

Yes - it means "less work for the current authors ang the group". But, my intention is not to reduce work alone, I am just concerned that more work may lead to the work not getting done in a timely manner.

> Personally, I think we should go the route that makes the most sense
> for implementors who will be implementing from the RFCs, long after this WG goes away. Even if this is somewhat more work for the WG. 

I agree that we should do what makes the most sense for implementors. I am just not sure "option B" is that much more sensible compared to "option A", hence my  preference for "option A".

- Sathya

> 
> > > Option A:
> > > =========
> > > Combine
> > > 1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6)
> > > and
> > > 2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 
> Neighbour Discovery
> > > (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
> > >
> > > into one document.
> > >
> > > Merge
> > > 3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current 
> Practices for
> > > hosts
> > > and
> > > 4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
> > > (draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)
> 
> IMO, there should be one single document that tells implementors what
> to implement. I don't think it is helpful to have 2 different
> documents giving guidanace on this point. 
> 
> > > Option B:
> > > =========
> > >
> > > Merge all the above mentioned documents
> > >
> > > * draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
> > > * draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
> > > * draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
> > > * draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
> > >
> > > into a single document.
> 
> That would be my preference.
> 
> Thomasu
> 




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> Yes - it means "less work for the current authors ang the
> group".

OK

> But, my intention is not to reduce work alone, I am just concerned
> that more work may lead to the work not getting done in a timely
> manner.

Personally, I'm already concerned about the progress this WG is
making. IMO, not a lot has happened in the last 6+ months or so. In
terms of what needs to be done (technology wise), I think that is
pretty well understood. But we have too many documents, they overlap
in confusing/contradictory ways, but we aren't actually seeing much
progress in getting those documents cleaned up. IMO, anyway. As one
crude example, how many times have the various IDs been revved in the
last 2-3 IETF cycles? if the answer is one revision per IETF cycle,
that's not fast enough and indicates slow progress.

I would encourage the chairs to take stock of the situation and put
together a plan covering the next 3-6 months (with concrete milestones
and commitments from document editors) that show us getting done and
shipping documents to the IESG.

Thomas



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Hi all,

While we are deciding how drafts should be brought together, I have
posted an update to draft-ietf-dna-protocol.  While waiting for
it to show up in the archive, it can be found at:

http://www.ctie.monash.edu.au/dna-dt/draft-ietf-dna-protocol-01.txt

A diff from -00 can be seen at:

http://www.ctie.monash.edu.au/dna-dt/draft-ietf-dna-protocol-01-from-0.diff.html

The changes reflect the discussion that Sathya initiated on the
wording of the section on routers' processing of RSes, and also James'
text on Router Reachability Detection and Default Router Selection.

Regards,
Brett.



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Hi Thomas, 

The problem you highlighted with regard to the document 
proliferation has been one of the contributory factors
which has slowed advancement.

The progress had slowed before that though, as you pointed
out.  

I think everyone is at the stage where they would just like to
see the documents come out.  Suresh and I have talked to
Jari about realistic milestones, and will release them as soon
as we know what the result of the consensus call is.

The new milestones will require an increase in work rate, but
not in advance of anything reasonable for a group of this size.
Essentially though, the WG and chairs have to put in more
effort if we actually want to see the documents come out.

Thanks for your input on this.

Greg

----- Original Message -----
From: Thomas Narten <narten@us.ibm.com>
Date: Sunday, June 25, 2006 4:47 am
Subject: Re: [DNA] CONSENSUS CALL : Document merges
To: Sathya Narayanan <sathya@research.panasonic.com>
Cc: suresh.krishnan@ericsson.ca, Dna <dna@eng.monash.edu.au>, "Suresh
Krishnan (QB/EMC)" <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>, Greg Daley
<gregd@research.panasonic.com>, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>

> > Yes - it means "less work for the current authors ang the
> > group".
> 
> OK
> 
> > But, my intention is not to reduce work alone, I am just concerned
> > that more work may lead to the work not getting done in a timely
> > manner.
> 
> Personally, I'm already concerned about the progress this WG is
> making. IMO, not a lot has happened in the last 6+ months or so. In
> terms of what needs to be done (technology wise), I think that is
> pretty well understood. But we have too many documents, they overlap
> in confusing/contradictory ways, but we aren't actually seeing much
> progress in getting those documents cleaned up. IMO, anyway. As one
> crude example, how many times have the various IDs been revved in the
> last 2-3 IETF cycles? if the answer is one revision per IETF cycle,
> that's not fast enough and indicates slow progress.
> 
> I would encourage the chairs to take stock of the situation and put
> together a plan covering the next 3-6 months (with concrete milestones
> and commitments from document editors) that show us getting done and
> shipping documents to the IESG.
> 
> Thomas
> 



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Dear WG,

If you have not identified which of the proposals
for document mergers you prefer, please comment on-list.

The consensus call will run until end of Thursday 29 AOE.

The thread is available at:

http://webcamserver.eng.monash.edu.au/~warchive/dna/2006-06/msg00007.html

Greg



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I agree as well.

            jak

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>I also agree that option B is preferrable.
>
>>Though it's more work, I think option B will make it easier for developers 
>>to find what they need.
>>
>>Brett.
>
>
> 





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Greg already asked this question once before and i said
my preference is option A. 

-mohan
 

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>[mailto:owner-dna@ecselists.eng.monash.edu.au] On Behalf Of 
>ext Sathya Narayanan
>Sent: Friday, June 23, 2006 12:04 PM
>To: suresh.krishnan@ericsson.ca
>Cc: Dna; Suresh Krishnan (QB/EMC); Greg Daley; Jari Arkko
>Subject: Re: [DNA] CONSENSUS CALL : Document merges
>
>I prefer option A.
>
>As I mentioned earlier, I think option A is the more practical option.
>
>thanks,
>Sathya
>
>Suresh Krishnan wrote:
>
>> Hi Folks,
>>    At the last meeting in Dallas lot of concerns were raised 
>about the 
>> number of documents being produced by the WG. The Consensus was to 
>> reduce the number of documents to keep related information together.
>>    The chairs have identified two possible merger scenarios 
>and would 
>> like to know the opinion of the working group regarding these two.
>>
>>
>> Option A:
>> =========
>> Combine
>> 1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6) and
>> 2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 Neighbour 
>> Discovery (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
>>
>> into one document.
>>
>> Merge
>> 3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current Practices for 
>> hosts and
>> 4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
>> (draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)
>>
>> into another document.
>>
>> Option B:
>> =========
>>
>> Merge all the above mentioned documents
>>
>> * draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
>> * draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
>> * draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
>> * draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
>>
>> into a single document.
>>
>> This consensus call will last for two weeks and will end on the 29th 
>> of June 2006. Please respond to the list whether you
>>
>> * Prefer Option A
>> * Prefer Option B
>>
>> If you do not have a preference and you are ok with either option, 
>> please respond with "Don't care ". If we have consensus on the Don't 
>> cares the chairs will make the decision.
>>
>> Thanks
>> Suresh and Greg
>
>
>



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Option B.  I am persuaded that this will be simpler for the long-term users, if
not for the short-term producers of it..

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> Dear WG,
>
> If you have not identified which of the proposals
> for document mergers you prefer, please comment on-list.
>
> The consensus call will run until end of Thursday 29 AOE.
>
> The thread is available at:
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> http://webcamserver.eng.monash.edu.au/~warchive/dna/2006-06/msg00007.html
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> Greg




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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Detecting Network Attachment Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks
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	Author(s)	: J. Kempf, et al.
	Filename	: draft-ietf-dna-protocol-01.txt
	Pages		: 35
	Date		: 2006-6-27
	
Efficient detection of network attachment in IPv6 needs the following
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My personal preference is option B. (Just registering one
opinion; as an AD I'd be fine with other ways to merge the
documents too as long as the group agreed on one. Some
merging is indeed needed, however.)

--Jari




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Hi,

I prefer option B, I think it is easier for implementers and readers.

Nicolas

On Thu, 2006-06-15 at 18:36 -0400, Suresh Krishnan wrote:
> Hi Folks,
>     At the last meeting in Dallas lot of concerns were raised about the
> number of documents being produced by the WG. The Consensus was to
> reduce the number of documents to keep related information together.
>     The chairs have identified two possible merger scenarios and would
> like to know the opinion of the working group regarding these two.
> 
> 
> Option A:
> =========
> Combine
> 1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6)
> and
> 2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 Neighbour Discovery
> (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
> 
> into one document.
> 
> Merge
> 3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current Practices for hosts
> and
> 4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
> (draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)
> 
> into another document.
> 
> Option B:
> =========
> 
> Merge all the above mentioned documents
> 
> * draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
> * draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
> * draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
> * draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
> 
> into a single document.
> 
> This consensus call will last for two weeks and will end on the 29th of
> June 2006. Please respond to the list whether you
> 
> * Prefer Option A
> * Prefer Option B
> 
> If you do not have a preference and you are ok with either option,
> please respond with "Don't care ". If we have consensus on the Don't
> cares the chairs will make the decision.
> 
> Thanks
> Suresh and Greg




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I read these drafts quite sometime back, so can't answer
this question myself.

If i have to implement the DNA protocol (draft-ietf-dna-protocol),
should i need to read the "contents" of all the other three drafts ?
Assume the reader is familiar with RFC 2461 which is the basic
one without which none of this would make sense. It is still not
clear to me how merging will speed up the process ? It will sure
slow down the review process because folks are normally good at
reviewing smaller documents.

-mohan

>-----Original Message-----
>From: owner-dna@ecselists.eng.monash.edu.au 
>[mailto:owner-dna@ecselists.eng.monash.edu.au] On Behalf Of 
>ext Suresh Krishnan
>Sent: Thursday, June 15, 2006 3:36 PM
>To: Dna
>Cc: Suresh Krishnan (QB/EMC); Greg Daley; Jari Arkko
>Subject: [DNA] CONSENSUS CALL : Document merges
>Importance: High
>
>Hi Folks,
>    At the last meeting in Dallas lot of concerns were raised 
>about the number of documents being produced by the WG. The 
>Consensus was to reduce the number of documents to keep 
>related information together.
>    The chairs have identified two possible merger scenarios 
>and would like to know the opinion of the working group 
>regarding these two.
>
>
>Option A:
>=========
>Combine
>1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6) and
>2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 
>Neighbour Discovery (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + 
>draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
>
>into one document.
>
>Merge
>3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current 
>Practices for hosts and
>4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
>(draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)
>
>into another document.
>
>Option B:
>=========
>
>Merge all the above mentioned documents
>
>* draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
>* draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
>* draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
>* draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
>
>into a single document.
>
>This consensus call will last for two weeks and will end on 
>the 29th of June 2006. Please respond to the list whether you
>
>* Prefer Option A
>* Prefer Option B
>
>If you do not have a preference and you are ok with either 
>option, please respond with "Don't care ". If we have 
>consensus on the Don't cares the chairs will make the decision.
>
>Thanks
>Suresh and Greg
>



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Hi Mohan,


Just clarifying the current situation.  I don't want
to show any bias here, and it's at a fairly important
time of the consensus call, so please consider these
efforts as personal view only.


The host side of draft-ietf-dna-protocol directly relies
on CPL today, as required for backward compatibility with
unmodified routers.

Currently draft-ietf-dna-protocol also relies on
draft-ietf-dna-tentative, for interactions with routers
while a host is still optimistic.

draft-ietf-dna-cpl and draft-ietf-dna-hosts are tackling
different aspects of the same problem (host change detection
procedures, for unmodified networks).


It may be worth thinking about that Neighbour Discovery
itself contains both the host and router side information
in the same document.  This may inform peoples' opinions of
the benefits and drawbacks of such a scheme.


On the timeliness:

I agree that the document review will be longer.  In
our projected timelines, we have accounted for this,
to some extent (for either decision).

The point of choice in my guess is some expedition,
with a useful merger into two documents, or merger
into one document, which some people see as producing
a better document at the cost of potential time and
effort.


I hope this helps,

Greg


Mohan.Parthasarathy@nokia.com wrote:
>  
> I read these drafts quite sometime back, so can't answer
> this question myself.
> 
> If i have to implement the DNA protocol (draft-ietf-dna-protocol),
> should i need to read the "contents" of all the other three drafts ?
> Assume the reader is familiar with RFC 2461 which is the basic
> one without which none of this would make sense. It is still not
> clear to me how merging will speed up the process ? It will sure
> slow down the review process because folks are normally good at
> reviewing smaller documents.
> 
> -mohan
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: owner-dna@ecselists.eng.monash.edu.au 
>> [mailto:owner-dna@ecselists.eng.monash.edu.au] On Behalf Of 
>> ext Suresh Krishnan
>> Sent: Thursday, June 15, 2006 3:36 PM
>> To: Dna
>> Cc: Suresh Krishnan (QB/EMC); Greg Daley; Jari Arkko
>> Subject: [DNA] CONSENSUS CALL : Document merges
>> Importance: High
>>
>> Hi Folks,
>>    At the last meeting in Dallas lot of concerns were raised 
>> about the number of documents being produced by the WG. The 
>> Consensus was to reduce the number of documents to keep 
>> related information together.
>>    The chairs have identified two possible merger scenarios 
>> and would like to know the opinion of the working group 
>> regarding these two.
>>
>>
>> Option A:
>> =========
>> Combine
>> 1) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 Networks (DNAv6) and
>> 2) Tentative Options for Link-Layer Addresses in IPv6 
>> Neighbour Discovery (draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00 + 
>> draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00)
>>
>> into one document.
>>
>> Merge
>> 3) Detecting Network Attachment in IPv6 - Best Current 
>> Practices for hosts and
>> 4) DNA with unmodified routers: Prefix list based approach
>> (draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03 + draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02)
>>
>> into another document.
>>
>> Option B:
>> =========
>>
>> Merge all the above mentioned documents
>>
>> * draft-ietf-dna-protocol-00
>> * draft-ietf-dna-tentative-00
>> * draft-ietf-dna-hosts-03
>> * draft-ietf-dna-cpl-02
>>
>> into a single document.
>>
>> This consensus call will last for two weeks and will end on 
>> the 29th of June 2006. Please respond to the list whether you
>>
>> * Prefer Option A
>> * Prefer Option B
>>
>> If you do not have a preference and you are ok with either 
>> option, please respond with "Don't care ". If we have 
>> consensus on the Don't cares the chairs will make the decision.
>>
>> Thanks
>> Suresh and Greg
>>




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Dear WG,

The results of the consensus call are
that 8 people preferred Option B,
which called for combining all four
documents.

Three people called for Option A.


The chairs believe there is rough
consensus for Option B.

Thanks for your participation.

Greg





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Alper Yegin wrote:
[cut]
>> Section 2.4.2
>>
>> "   Ethernet networks commonly consist of LANs joined together by
>>     transparent bridges (usually implemented as switches).  Transparent
>>     bridges require the active topology to be loop free.  The Spanning
>>     Tree Protocol (STP) achieves this by the exchange of Bridge Protocol
>>     Data Unit (BPDU), as defined in [IEEE-802.1D], which leads to, where
>>     required, the blocking of ports (i.e., not forwarding)."
>>
>> I think you need to mention RSTP here as well.

How about this?

    "Ethernet networks commonly consist of LANs joined together by
    transparent bridges (usually implemented as switches).  Transparent
    bridges require the active topology to be loop free.  The Spanning
    Tree Protocol (STP) and Rapid Spanning Tree Protocol (RSTP) achieve
    this by the exchange of Bridge Protocol Data Unit (BPDU), as defined
    in [IEEE-802.1D], which leads to, where required, the blocking of
    ports (i.e., not forwarding)."



>> "   Most hosts today do not listen to BPDU frames.  For these hosts,
>>     connectivity to the a port which is potentially bridged (any Ethernet
>>     port) carries the potential of frame loss if transmissions occur
>>     before any bridges' ForwardDelay timers have expired twice."
>>
>> "to the a port" - "to the port"

Thanks.

>> "   If no bridge configuration messages are received within the
>>     Bridge_Max_Age interval (default 20s), then it is likely that there
>>     is no visible bridge whose port is enabled for bridging (S8.4.5 of
>>     [IEEE-802.1D]), since at least two BPDU hello messages would have
>>     been lost.  Upon this timeout, a link up notification MUST be
>>     generated.
>>
>>     It is not easy for a non-STP host to distinguish between Disabled
>>     bridge ports and non-bridge ports with no IP nodes on them, as
>>     Disabled ports will have no traffic on them, and incur 100% sender
>>     loss.
>>
>>     Upon this Bridge_Max_Age timeout, a link up notification must be
>>     generated.  If an earlier link up was generated with the R-flag set,
>>     this new one MUST set the A-flag showing that packets sent within the
>>     prior interval were likely to have traversed the forwarding path
>>     (unless the port is disabled)."
>>
>> The next section talks about when to enable the delay, but I think you
>> could be more clear about this here as well.  For example, are you
>> recommending that hosts listen for STP/RSTP messages, or use 802.1AB
>> in order to decide on the appropriate delay?  Delaying for 20 seconds
>> by default probably isn't a good idea now that RSTP is becoming more
>> common.

I think the problem here can mostly be rectified by modifying
prior paragraphs.

(paragraph 7)
    Where it is not known that forwarding operations are available, a
    host needs to assume that STP is being performed, and may indicate
    full connectivity only based on timeouts or reception of BPDUs.
X  The host may send link up indications as soon as the link is viable
X  for packet transfer, although all such all indications sent until
X  forwarding confirmation MUST contain the R-flag set to indicate risk
X  of loss.


And:

(Paragraph 12)
X  Where possible, hosts SHOULD monitor for Bridge PDUs, in order to
X  determine what type of spanning tree may be running on the network.
    If a BPDU is received, and the adjacent bridge is running the
    original Spanning Tree Protocol, then a host cannot successfully send
    packets until at least twice the ForwardDelay value in the received
    BPDU has elapsed.  After this time, a link up notification MUST be
    generated.  If the previous link up notification had the R-flag set,
    then the B-flag) MUST be set in this notification.  The B-flag
    signifies that the packets sent within the prior interval were lost.


>> "  Due to the protocol's newness and lack of deployment, it is unclear
>>     how this protocol will eventually affect DNA in IPv4 or IPv6
>>     networks."
>>
>> DNAv4 does not utilize 802.1AB "hints", so this could be clarified.

OK.  I don't see why it can't use those hints, but we can modify the
text to.

  Due to the protocol's newness and lack of deployment, it is unclear
  how this protocol will eventually affect DNA, particularly in IPv6
  networks.


>> Section 2.4.4
>>
>> "   Link-Layer indications in Ethernet-like networks are complicated by
>>     additional unadvertised delays due to Spanning Tree calculations.
>>     This may cause re-indication (link up with A-flag) or retraction
>>     (link up with B-flag) of indications previously sent to upper layer
>>     protocols."
>>
>> What are the A and B flags?  Is this an artifact of a previous revision?
>>

The A and B flags are described in section 2, first paragraph of page 6.

The A and B flags provide an ability to re-indicate after an event
with an (R:Risk) flag set.  These flags can identify to the
upper-layer if the prior related event was associated with an
incorrect link-up indication (B: Blocked) or successful indication
(A: Allowed).  These indications are sent when the uncertainty of
the prior indication has passed.

The B-Flag is necessary if the host wishes to take corrective action
after reacting to the prior indication, for example,  resetting Router
Solicitation transmission counts or replaying data.

The A flag in a second indication may be sent since the initial
indication with an R-Flag may be ignored by cautious upper-layer
protocols.


Do you think it would be worthwhile to include it, or is the
description in section 2 OK?

Greg



