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Subject: Re: [Dots] [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09
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Med,

I'm afraid you misunderstand my point. The YANG to dots-signal-channel =
protocol to YANG mapping information that I'm looking for is *not* in =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09#section-10. That section maps types and =
CBOR sid:s, which is great, but far from enough for a protocol =
specification.=20

If you look at the sections in the RESTCONF or NETCONF RFCs I pointed =
out, you might get a better understanding of what's still missing. The =
CoAP RFC provides zero operation semantics, there is no discussion about =
error handling, etc.

> The good news is that with both the current approach in RFC8782 and an =
updated one that strictly follows RFC 8791, we will have the same =
JSON/CBOR mappings that are authoritative for our spec (Section 6 of =
RFC8782).=20
>=20
> Given that we don't have interoperability issues, would it be OK with =
you if we update draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to add a reference to inform =
the reader about RFC8791 and that we are not using it here because we =
are augmenting a module not using sx:structure?=20
>=20
> If there is any RFC8782bis in the future, making changes to follow =
RFC8791 will be part of the things to be considered.  =20

On the contrary, I believe there are very significant interoperability =
issues with the proposed model. In my opinion RFC 8782 needs to be =
reworked to be implementable. In its current form, it's unlikely that =
independent server and client implementations of RFC 8782 would =
interoperate.

Best Regards,
/jan


> On 1 Jul 2020, at 08:41, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
>=20
> Hi Jan, Martin,=20
>=20
> Thank you for the review.=20
>=20
> Please see inline.=20
>=20
> Cheers,
> Med
>=20
>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : Martin Bj=C3=B6rklund [mailto:mbj+ietf@4668.se =
<mailto:mbj+ietf@4668.se>]
>> Envoy=C3=A9 : mardi 30 juin 2020 20:18
>> =C3=80 : janl@tail-f.com <mailto:janl@tail-f.com>; noreply@ietf.org =
<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>
>> Cc : yang-doctors@ietf.org <mailto:yang-doctors@ietf.org>; =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org =
<mailto:draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org>;
>> dots@ietf.org <mailto:dots@ietf.org>
>> Objet : Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of =
draft-ietf-dots-
>> telemetry-09
>>=20
>> Hi,
>>=20
>> Jan Lindblad via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>>> Reviewer: Jan Lindblad
>>> Review result: Not Ready
>>>=20
>>> This is the YD early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry as =
requested by
>> the
>>> DOTS WG.
>>>=20
>>> The ietf-dots-telemetry YANG module is not like other YANG modules. =
It
>>> specifically states that it does not pertain to NETCONF/RESTCONF
>> management,
>>> but is only meant to be mapped to a specific CoAP based protocol
>>> "dots-signal-channel" created by the DOTS WG. The draft-ietf-dots-
>> telemetry
>>> says in section 4.7:
>>>=20
>>>   The DOTS telemetry module (Section 9.1) is not intended to be used
>>>   via NETCONF/RESTCONF for DOTS server management purposes.  It =
serves
>>>   only to provide a data model and encoding, but not a management =
data
>>>   model.  DOTS servers are allowed to update the non-configurable =
'ro'
>>>   entities in the responses of DOTS telemetry messages.
>>>=20
>=20
> [Med] I confirm. We are using YANG for structuring the data that will =
be exchanged between the client and the server. We may think about this =
as some sort of service model as per RFC8309.
>=20
>>> While this approach is highly uncommon, after giving it some =
thought, I
>> believe
>>> this approach could be useful to client and server implementors. =
However,
>> I
>>> find two fundamental problems in the particular way this has been =
done in
>> this
>>> case. I believe the problems are fixable, but may involve updating
>> existing
>>> DOTS RFCs.
>>>=20
>>> #1) YANG data declarations used as message bodies
>>>=20
>>> You can define your own message types with whatever content you =
desire in
>> YANG.
>>> Just use rpc/action and notification statements.
>>=20
>> You may also want to look at RFC 8791, which defines a new YANG
>> extension statement "sx:structure".  This statement can be used to
>> define messages that are not intended to be generic rpcs or
>> notifications.
>>=20
>>=20
>=20
> [Med] Thanks for the pointer, Martin. =20
>=20
> Importing ietf-yang-structure-ext + s/container =
dots-signal/sx:structure in ietf-dots-signal-channel (RFC8782) would be =
sufficient to define the structure as per RFC8791 but we will lose the =
"tagging" of parts of the structure/schema that applies only in the =
server to client direction.
>=20
> We used rw/ro so that we can have a compact module/structure that can =
be used in both directions of the DOTS communication, rather than =
defining two structures. =20
>=20
> The good news is that with both the current approach in RFC8782 and an =
updated one that strictly follows RFC 8791, we will have the same =
JSON/CBOR mappings that are authoritative for our spec (Section 6 of =
RFC8782).=20
>=20
> Given that we don't have interoperability issues, would it be OK with =
you if we update draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to add a reference to inform =
the reader about RFC8791 and that we are not using it here because we =
are augmenting a module not using sx:structure?=20
>=20
> If there is any RFC8782bis in the future, making changes to follow =
RFC8791 will be part of the things to be considered.  =20
>=20
>>=20
>>> This draft does not do that,
>>> but instead defines message bodies as if they were top level YANG =
config
>>> elements. This obviously violates the aras of YANG that speak about =
data
>>> stores, accessible data trees, and what not. Apart from confusing
>> experienced
>>> YANG users, the meaning of statements like "config false" is =
suddenly
>> most
>>> unclear when the foundations of YANG are disregarded.
>>>=20
>>> In my opinion the top level of the module needs to be rewritten to =
use
>> proper
>>> YANG rpc/action and notification statements. The existing message =
bodies,
>> and
>>> the way they are augmented, could all work very well. It's just the
>> framework
>>> around them that isn't sound.
>>>=20
>>> Unfortunately the problematic top level structures of =
draft-ietf-dots-
>> telemetry
>>> are based on structures imported from ietf-dots-signal-channel.yang,
>> which is
>>> already published in DOTS RFC 8782. I have not been able to find any =
YD
>> review
>>> of this module, so I would suspect none were ever performed. To make =
the
>> DOTS
>>> signal-channel framework usable, I would suggest obsoleting RFC8782 =
and
>> write a
>>> bis with an improved YANG action/notification based foundation. The
>> number of
>>> changed lines in the YANG can probably be kept rather small.
>>>=20
>>> #2) Missing pieces in YANG to dots-signal-channel protocol mapping
>>>=20
>=20
> [Med] What is key for the mapping is listed in =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09#section-10. All the foundations are already =
specified in RFC8782. Section 3 of that RFC describes the rationale.=20
>=20
>>> The draft-ietf-dots-telemetry references CoAP RFC 7959, which =
defines a
>> number
>>> of basic management operations (GET, PUT, POST, ...), and CBOR RFC =
7049
>> content
>>> encoding, with the draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12 addendum for how =
YANG
>> data is
>>> to be encoded in CBOR. Unfortunately, a protocol specification that
>> consists of
>>> these three references is not quite complete. Since this is an early
>> review, it
>>> may be that the draft authors are already planning to pull the =
protocol
>>> specification up a notch, or I may have missed some piece(s) of the
>> puzzle. In
>>> any case, a protocol specification on par with what is available for
>> RESTCONF
>>> or NETCONF would be required.
>>>=20
>>> The dots-signal-channel specification in RFC 8782 makes an =
Informative
>>> Reference to draft specification for a protocol called CoMI
>>> (draft-ietf-core-comi-09), which attempts to take on the YANG to =
CoAP
>> mapping.
>>> One way of filling in the blanks for dots-signal-channel might be to
>> leverage
>>> the CoMI work. Fixing #1 would be required to leverage CoMI.
>>>=20
>>> Currently, dots-signal-channel protocol specification (taken as the =
sum
>> of
>>> CoAP, CBOR and draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12) is missing information =
about
>>> operation semantics, operation encoding, error handling, for =
example.
>=20
> [Med] Such details are discussed in the base CoAP spec, RFC8782, and =
error handling specifics are included in this draft.   =20
>=20
> RFC
>> 8040
>>> sections 5, 6, 7 or RFC 6241 sections 4, 7, 8 contain the sort of
>> information
>>> I'm looking for.
>>>=20
>>> #3) Other than that, probably good
>>>=20
>>> Other than issues #1 and #2 above, the module seems to be in pretty =
good
>> shape.
>>> Some content is hard to judge since the intended meaning of config
>> true/false
>=20
> [Med] "config false" is used to tag nodes that must not appear in =
messages sent from the client to the server.
>=20
>>> for example is unclear, so a new review will be required after the
>> fundamentals
>>> have been resolved. The module is both easy to read and conforms =
with
>> IETF
>>> standards except as noted above, staying on the clean and simple =
side.
>>>=20
>=20
> [Med] Thanks. FWIW, we fixed some issues in the examples. The latest =
version of the spec is available at: =
https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry =
<https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry>.
>=20
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<html><head><meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; =
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-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" =
class=3D"">Med,<div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">I'm =
afraid you misunderstand my point. The YANG to dots-signal-channel =
protocol to YANG mapping information that I'm looking for is *not* =
in&nbsp;draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09#section-10. That section maps types =
and CBOR sid:s, which is great, but far from enough for a protocol =
specification.&nbsp;</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D"">If you look at the sections in the RESTCONF or NETCONF RFCs I =
pointed out, you might get a better understanding of what's still =
missing. The CoAP RFC provides zero operation semantics, there is no =
discussion about error handling, etc.</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D""><span class=3D"" style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
float: none; display: inline !important;">The good news is that with =
both the current approach in RFC8782 and an updated one that strictly =
follows RFC 8791, we will have the same JSON/CBOR mappings that are =
authoritative for our spec (Section 6 of RFC8782).&nbsp;</span><br =
class=3D"" style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT;"><br class=3D"" =
style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT;"><span class=3D"" =
style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; float: none; display: inline =
!important;">Given that we don't have interoperability issues, would it =
be OK with you if we update draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to add a reference =
to inform the reader about RFC8791 and that we are not using it here =
because we are augmenting a module not using =
sx:structure?&nbsp;</span><br class=3D"" style=3D"font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT;"><br class=3D"" style=3D"font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT;"><span class=3D"" style=3D"font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; float: none; display: inline !important;">If there is =
any RFC8782bis in the future, making changes to follow RFC8791 will be =
part of the things to be considered. &nbsp;&nbsp;</span></blockquote><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">On the contrary, I believe there are =
very significant interoperability issues with the proposed model. In my =
opinion RFC 8782 needs to be reworked to be implementable. In its =
current form, it's unlikely that independent server and client =
implementations of RFC 8782 would interoperate.</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Best Regards,</div><div =
class=3D"">/jan</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">=

<div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">On 1 Jul 2020, at 08:41, <a =
href=3D"mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com" =
class=3D"">mohamed.boucadair@orange.com</a> wrote:</div><br =
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none; float: none; display: inline !important;" class=3D"">Hi Jan, =
Martin,<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><br =
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text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">Thank you for the review.<span =
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class=3D"">Cheers,</span><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); =
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class=3D"">Med</span><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); =
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0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
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normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
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normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
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0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D"">-----Message d'origine-----<br =
class=3D"">De : Martin Bj=C3=B6rklund [<a href=3D"mailto:mbj+ietf@4668.se"=
 class=3D"">mailto:mbj+ietf@4668.se</a>]<br class=3D"">Envoy=C3=A9 : =
mardi 30 juin 2020 20:18<br class=3D"">=C3=80 :<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:janl@tail-f.com" class=3D"">janl@tail-f.com</a>;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org" class=3D"">noreply@ietf.org</a><br =
class=3D"">Cc :<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:yang-doctors@ietf.org" =
class=3D"">yang-doctors@ietf.org</a>;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org" =
class=3D"">draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org</a>;<br class=3D""><a =
href=3D"mailto:dots@ietf.org" class=3D"">dots@ietf.org</a><br =
class=3D"">Objet : Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of =
draft-ietf-dots-<br class=3D"">telemetry-09<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">Hi,<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Jan Lindblad via Datatracker =
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org" =
class=3D"">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">Reviewer: Jan Lindblad<br class=3D"">Review =
result: Not Ready<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">This is the YD early =
review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry as requested by<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>the<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">DOTS WG.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">The ietf-dots-telemetry =
YANG module is not like other YANG modules. It<br class=3D"">specifically =
states that it does not pertain to NETCONF/RESTCONF<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>management,<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">but is only meant to be mapped to a specific =
CoAP based protocol<br class=3D"">"dots-signal-channel" created by the =
DOTS WG. The draft-ietf-dots-<br class=3D""></blockquote>telemetry<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">says in section 4.7:<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;The DOTS telemetry module (Section =
9.1) is not intended to be used<br class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;via =
NETCONF/RESTCONF for DOTS server management purposes. &nbsp;It serves<br =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;only to provide a data model and encoding, but =
not a management data<br class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;model. &nbsp;DOTS =
servers are allowed to update the non-configurable 'ro'<br =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;entities in the responses of DOTS telemetry =
messages.<br class=3D""><br class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">[Med] I confirm. We are using YANG for structuring the data =
that will be exchanged between the client and the server. We may think =
about this as some sort of service model as per RFC8309.</span><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">While this approach is highly uncommon, after giving it some =
thought, I<br class=3D""></blockquote>believe<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">this approach could be useful to client and =
server implementors. However,<br class=3D""></blockquote>I<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">find two fundamental =
problems in the particular way this has been done in<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>this<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">case. I believe the problems are fixable, but may involve =
updating<br class=3D""></blockquote>existing<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">DOTS RFCs.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">#1) =
YANG data declarations used as message bodies<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">You can define your own message types with whatever content =
you desire in<br class=3D""></blockquote>YANG.<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">Just use rpc/action and notification =
statements.<br class=3D""></blockquote><br class=3D"">You may also want =
to look at RFC 8791, which defines a new YANG<br class=3D"">extension =
statement "sx:structure". &nbsp;This statement can be used to<br =
class=3D"">define messages that are not intended to be generic rpcs =
or<br class=3D"">notifications.<br class=3D""><br class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></blockquote><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); =
font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">[Med] Thanks for the pointer, Martin. &nbsp;</span><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">Importing ietf-yang-structure-ext + s/container =
dots-signal/sx:structure in ietf-dots-signal-channel (RFC8782) would be =
sufficient to define the structure as per RFC8791 but we will lose the =
"tagging" of parts of the structure/schema that applies only in the =
server to client direction.</span><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">We used rw/ro so that we can have a compact module/structure =
that can be used in both directions of the DOTS communication, rather =
than defining two structures. &nbsp;</span><br style=3D"caret-color: =
rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; =
font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; =
letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">The good news is that with both the current approach in =
RFC8782 and an updated one that strictly follows RFC 8791, we will have =
the same JSON/CBOR mappings that are authoritative for our spec (Section =
6 of RFC8782).<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">Given that we don't have interoperability issues, would it be =
OK with you if we update draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to add a reference to =
inform the reader about RFC8791 and that we are not using it here =
because we are augmenting a module not using sx:structure?<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">If there is any RFC8782bis in the future, making changes to =
follow RFC8791 will be part of the things to be considered. =
&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">This draft does not do that,<br class=3D"">but =
instead defines message bodies as if they were top level YANG config<br =
class=3D"">elements. This obviously violates the aras of YANG that speak =
about data<br class=3D"">stores, accessible data trees, and what not. =
Apart from confusing<br class=3D""></blockquote>experienced<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">YANG users, the meaning =
of statements like "config false" is suddenly<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>most<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">unclear when the foundations of YANG are disregarded.<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">In my opinion the top level of the module =
needs to be rewritten to use<br class=3D""></blockquote>proper<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">YANG rpc/action and =
notification statements. The existing message bodies,<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>and<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">the way they are augmented, could all work very well. It's =
just the<br class=3D""></blockquote>framework<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">around them that isn't sound.<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">Unfortunately the problematic top level structures of =
draft-ietf-dots-<br class=3D""></blockquote>telemetry<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">are based on structures =
imported from ietf-dots-signal-channel.yang,<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>which is<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">already published in DOTS RFC 8782. I have not been able to =
find any YD<br class=3D""></blockquote>review<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">of this module, so I would suspect none were =
ever performed. To make the<br class=3D""></blockquote>DOTS<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">signal-channel framework =
usable, I would suggest obsoleting RFC8782 and<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>write a<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">bis with an improved YANG action/notification based =
foundation. The<br class=3D""></blockquote>number of<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">changed lines in the =
YANG can probably be kept rather small.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">#2) =
Missing pieces in YANG to dots-signal-channel protocol mapping<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">[Med] What is key for the mapping is listed in =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09#section-10. All the foundations are already =
specified in RFC8782. Section 3 of that RFC describes the =
rationale.<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">The draft-ietf-dots-telemetry references CoAP RFC 7959, which =
defines a<br class=3D""></blockquote>number<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">of basic management operations (GET, PUT, POST, =
...), and CBOR RFC 7049<br class=3D""></blockquote>content<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">encoding, with the =
draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12 addendum for how YANG<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>data is<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">to be encoded in CBOR. Unfortunately, a protocol =
specification that<br class=3D""></blockquote>consists of<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">these three references =
is not quite complete. Since this is an early<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>review, it<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite"=
 class=3D"">may be that the draft authors are already planning to pull =
the protocol<br class=3D"">specification up a notch, or I may have =
missed some piece(s) of the<br class=3D""></blockquote>puzzle. In<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">any case, a protocol =
specification on par with what is available for<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>RESTCONF<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">or NETCONF would be required.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">The =
dots-signal-channel specification in RFC 8782 makes an Informative<br =
class=3D"">Reference to draft specification for a protocol called =
CoMI<br class=3D"">(draft-ietf-core-comi-09), which attempts to take on =
the YANG to CoAP<br class=3D""></blockquote>mapping.<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">One way of filling in =
the blanks for dots-signal-channel might be to<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>leverage<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">the CoMI work. Fixing #1 would be required to leverage =
CoMI.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Currently, dots-signal-channel =
protocol specification (taken as the sum<br class=3D""></blockquote>of<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">CoAP, CBOR and =
draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12) is missing information about<br =
class=3D"">operation semantics, operation encoding, error handling, for =
example.<br class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote><br style=3D"caret-color:=
 rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; =
font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; =
letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none; float: none; display: inline !important;" class=3D"">[Med] Such =
details are discussed in the base CoAP spec, RFC8782, and error handling =
specifics are included in this draft. &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
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none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, =
0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
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normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">RFC</span><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); =
font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D"">8040<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D"">sections 5, 6, 7 or RFC 6241 sections 4, 7, 8 =
contain the sort of<br class=3D""></blockquote>information<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">I'm looking for.<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">#3) Other than that, probably good<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">Other than issues #1 and #2 above, the module =
seems to be in pretty good<br class=3D""></blockquote>shape.<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">Some content is hard to =
judge since the intended meaning of config<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>true/false<br class=3D""></blockquote><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">[Med] "config false" is used to tag nodes that must not =
appear in messages sent from the client to the server.</span><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><br style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
style=3D"font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none;" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">for example is unclear, so a new review will be required =
after the<br class=3D""></blockquote>fundamentals<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">have been resolved. The =
module is both easy to read and conforms with<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>IETF<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">standards except as noted above, staying on the clean and =
simple side.<br class=3D""><br class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote><br =
style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: TimesNewRomanPSMT; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: =
none;" class=3D""><span style=3D"caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: =
TimesNewRomanPSMT; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; =
text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" =
class=3D"">[Med] Thanks. FWIW, we fixed some issues in the examples. The =
latest version of the spec is available at:<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><a =
href=3D"https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry" =
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0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D"">https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry</a><span =
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> Envoy=E9=A0: mercredi 1 juillet 2020 11:03
> =C0=A0: BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN
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> telemetry.all@ietf.org; dots@ietf.org
> Objet=A0: Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-dots-
> telemetry-09
>=20
> > >
> > > You may also want to look at RFC 8791, which defines a new YANG
> > > extension statement "sx:structure".  This statement can be used to
> > > define messages that are not intended to be generic rpcs or
> > > notifications.
> > >
> > >
> >
> > [Med] Thanks for the pointer, Martin.
> >
> > Importing ietf-yang-structure-ext + s/container
> > dots-signal/sx:structure in ietf-dots-signal-channel (RFC8782) would
> > be sufficient to define the structure as per RFC8791 but we will lose
> > the "tagging" of parts of the structure/schema that applies only in
> > the server to client direction.
> >
> > We used rw/ro so that we can have a compact module/structure that can
> > be used in both directions of the DOTS communication, rather than
> > defining two structures.
> >
> > The good news is that with both the current approach in RFC8782 and an
> > updated one that strictly follows RFC 8791, we will have the same
> > JSON/CBOR mappings that are authoritative for our spec (Section 6 of
> > RFC8782).
> >
> > Given that we don't have interoperability issues, would it be OK with
> > you if we update draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to add a reference to
> > inform the reader about RFC8791 and that we are not using it here
> > because we are augmenting a module not using sx:structure?
> >
> > If there is any RFC8782bis in the future, making changes to follow
> > RFC8791 will be part of the things to be considered.
>=20
> It seems that the YANG modules in RFC8782 were never reviewed by the
> YANG doctors.  Please correct me if this was not the case.
>=20

[Med] RFC8782 is a complex doc that manipulates many pieces from various ar=
eas. We had to pay attention to many things. I don't remember we received a=
 yangdoctors review as part of the IETF LC, though.=20

> So RFC 8782 seems to have the same fundamental problem as this draft.
>=20

[Med] We can't use RFC8791 in draft-ietf-dots-telemetry because : "since a =
YANG compiler or other tool is not required to understand the "structure" e=
xtension.".=20

This is why I made the proposal to record this in the draft so that this ca=
n be scheduled for future bis work of 8782. Fundamentally, we will come up =
with close structure (less compact with 8791).=20

Given the conventions set in the RFC and that we are clearly saying that th=
e module is not intended for NETCONF/RESTCONF use, is there any interoperab=
ility issue that you foresee?


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Hi,

Thank you for the review. These were helpful to us. I believe that all
comments have been addressed in the version we just published.
Please find more response regarding the comment inlined.

Yours,
Daniel

On Wed, Jun 10, 2020 at 12:02 PM Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2020-06-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> Ready wih some minor nits.
>
> Major issues:
> None
>
> Minor issues:
> None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> s1, para 1: Just a thought:  might be worth adding to the end of this para:
> "and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed is often
> of
> the essence".
>
 <mglt>
 I understand that the additional time is part of the reasons that degrade
the efficacy but this is not the only reason. I propose to indicate that
efficacity highly depends on an timely reaction as below:

OLD
This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,
can degrade the efficacy of mitigations.
NEW
This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,
can degrade the efficacy of mitigations - which highly depends on  a timely
reaction.
</mglt>

>
> s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc which
> is
> referred to in s2: OLD:
>    This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
>    design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
> NEW
>    This document provides sample use cases that motivated the requirements
>    for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for the design of
>    those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
> ENDS
>
<mglt>
I would consider the requirement as part of the process for the design of
the protocol, but it is correct that requirements coudl be included. I
propose the following change:
OLD:
This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the design
of
the DOTS protocols {{RFC8782}}{{RFC8783}}.
NEW:
This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
requirements {{?RFC8612}} and design of
the DOTS protocols {{!RFC8782}}{{!RFC8783}}.
</mglt>

>
> s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation
> Service
> Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.
>
>  <mglt> fixed. </mglt>

> s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:
> OLD:
>       Service subscriptions usually
>       involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met.
> NEW:
>       Each service subscription usually
>       involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to be met.
> ENDS
>
> <mglt> fixed.</mglt>


> s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you
> shouldn't
> have a redefinition here.
>
> <mglt> fixed. </mglt>

> s3.1, para 7: s/thought different/though different/
>
<mglt>fixed</mglt>

>
> s3.1, 2nd set of bullets, that are below Fig 1: This woud be more elegant
> using
> (a), (b), etc as the bullet labels.
>
> <mglt>
I could not find how to do list as a) b) using kramdow but I used an
ordered list 1. 2. instead so a native list format is rendered.
</mglt>


> s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text
> indicates
> that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.  Is this
> always
> the case or could the client request or the server provide a proportional
> response rather than an all or nothing response?
>
> <mglt>
My understanding is that when the decision to mitigate is requested the ITP
mitigates the traffic. As far as I know it is not currently envisioned to
use DOTS for a kind of collaboration between the ITP and the local side,
that is the local site performs 20 % of the attack while the ITP takes in
charge the remaining 80 %. One reason is that it remains hard to express
the capabilities involved to mitigate the attack. Note also that the
capacity of the ITP may be capped by contract.  Overall the DOTS is more
about delegating the mitigation as opposed to collaborative mitigation.
</mglt>


> s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/
>
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>

> s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/
>
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>

> s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor
> various
> aspects of the network traffic/.
>
> <mglt> fixed</mglt>

> s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it's/it is/
>
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>

> s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is overly
> specific.  Suggest adding 'for example'in at least one case or changing it
> to
> 'user interface'.
>
>  <mgl> I added the for example which seems closer to the most probable
implementation.</mglt>

s3.3, first para on page 11:
> OLD:
> to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.
> NEW:
> to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.
> ENDS
>
> <mglt>fixed</mglt>


> s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to
> change
> from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.  Please make it clear
> whether there is one or many.  If only one, then s/The orchestrator DOTS
> servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server returns
> this
> information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.
>
>  <mglt>good catch. There is only one server. we address this.</mglt>

s3.3, last para s/like  requesting/such as requesting/
>
> <mglt>fixed.</mglt>


> s7:  This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have normative
> references.  Please combine all references into one refererences section.
>
>
> <mglt> I usually like standard document to be normative, but this is
correct that for use cases, none of these document are necessary to be read
to understand the document, so I will put all reference as
informational</mglt>


>
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r the review. These were helpful to us. I believe that all comments=C2=A0ha=
ve been addressed in the version we just published.=C2=A0=C2=A0</div><div>P=
lease find more response regarding the comment inlined.=C2=A0</div><div><br=
></div><div>Yours,=C2=A0<br>Daniel=C2=A0</div></div><br><div class=3D"gmail=
_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Wed, Jun 10, 2020 at 12:02=
 PM Elwyn Davies via Datatracker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org">no=
reply@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" st=
yle=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padd=
ing-left:1ex">Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br>
Review result: Ready with Nits<br>
<br>
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area<br>
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed<br>
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.=C2=A0 Please treat these comments just<br>
like any other last call comments.<br>
<br>
For more information, please see the FAQ at<br>
<br>
&lt;<a href=3D"https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq" rel=3D"norefe=
rrer" target=3D"_blank">https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq</a>&g=
t;.<br>
<br>
Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23<br>
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br>
Review Date: 2020-06-10<br>
IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11<br>
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat<br>
<br>
Summary:<br>
Ready wih some minor nits.<br>
<br>
Major issues:<br>
None<br>
<br>
Minor issues:<br>
None<br>
<br>
Nits/editorial comments:<br>
s1, para 1: Just a thought:=C2=A0 might be worth adding to the end of this =
para:<br>
&quot;and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed is of=
ten of<br>
the essence&quot;.<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0=
I understand that the additional time is part of the reasons that degrade t=
he efficacy but this is not the only reason. I propose to indicate that eff=
icacity highly depends on an timely reaction as below:</div><div><br></div>=
<div>OLD<br>This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,<b=
r>can degrade the efficacy of mitigations.<br></div><div>NEW</div><div>This=
 greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,<br>can degrade th=
e efficacy of mitigations - which highly depends on=C2=A0 a timely reaction=
.=C2=A0</div><div>&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" styl=
e=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);paddin=
g-left:1ex">
<br>
s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc which i=
s<br>
referred to in s2: OLD:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This document provides sample use cases that provided input fo=
r the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br>
NEW<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This document provides sample use cases that motivated the req=
uirements<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for the de=
sign of<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br>
ENDS<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>I would consider the requi=
rement as part of the process for the design of the protocol, but it is cor=
rect that requirements coudl be included. I propose the following change:</=
div><div>OLD:</div><div>This document provides sample use cases that provid=
ed input for the design of<br>the DOTS protocols {{RFC8782}}{{RFC8783}}.<br=
></div><div>NEW:</div><div>This document provides sample use cases that pro=
vided input for the requirements {{?RFC8612}} and design of</div>the DOTS p=
rotocols {{!RFC8782}}{{!RFC8783}}.<div>&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rg=
b(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation Servi=
ce<br>
Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt; fixed. &lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockqu=
ote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px=
 solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:<br>
OLD:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Service subscriptions usually<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be =
met.<br>
NEW:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Each service subscription usually<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to b=
e met.<br>
ENDS<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</di=
v><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;borde=
r-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you shouldn&=
#39;t<br>
have a redefinition here.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; fixed. &lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockqu=
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s3.1, para 7: s/thought different/though different/<br></blockquote><div>&l=
t;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" s=
tyle=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);pad=
ding-left:1ex">
<br>
s3.1, 2nd set of bullets, that are below Fig 1: This woud be more elegant u=
sing<br>
(a), (b), etc as the bullet labels.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>I could not find how to do lis=
t as a) b) using kramdow=C2=A0but I used an ordered list=C2=A01. 2. instead=
 so a native list format is rendered.=C2=A0</div><div>&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</=
div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px =
0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text indica=
tes<br>
that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.=C2=A0 Is this=
 always<br>
the case or could the client request or the server provide a proportional<b=
r>
response rather than an all or nothing response?<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>My understanding is that when =
the decision to mitigate is requested the ITP mitigates the traffic. As far=
 as I know it is not currently=C2=A0envisioned to use DOTS for a kind of co=
llaboration between the ITP and the local side, that is the local site perf=
orms 20 % of the attack while the ITP takes in charge the remaining 80 %. O=
ne reason is that it remains hard to express the capabilities involved to=
=C2=A0mitigate the attack. Note also that the capacity of the ITP may be ca=
pped by contract.=C2=A0 Overall the DOTS is more about delegating the mitig=
ation as opposed to collaborative mitigation.</div><div>&lt;/mglt&gt;</div>=
<div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px =
0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px so=
lid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px so=
lid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor variou=
s<br>
aspects of the network traffic/.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote clas=
s=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid r=
gb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it&#39;s/it is/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px so=
lid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is overly<b=
r>
specific.=C2=A0 Suggest adding &#39;for example&#39;in at least one case or=
 changing it to<br>
&#39;user interface&#39;.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mgl&gt; I added the for example which seems=
 closer to the most probable implementation.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div><br></d=
iv><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;bord=
er-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, first para on page 11:<br>
OLD:<br>
to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.<br>
NEW:<br>
to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.<br>
ENDS<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</div>=
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to chan=
ge<br>
from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.=C2=A0 Please make it cle=
ar<br>
whether there is one or many.=C2=A0 If only one, then s/The orchestrator DO=
TS<br>
servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server returns =
this<br>
information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;good catch. There is only one serve=
r. we address=C2=A0this.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div><br></div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rg=
b(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, last para s/like=C2=A0 requesting/such as requesting/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</div=
><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border=
-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s7:=C2=A0 This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have norma=
tive <br>
references.=C2=A0 Please combine all references into one refererences secti=
on.<br>
<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; I usually like standard document to be n=
ormative, but this is correct that for use cases, none of these document ar=
e necessary to be read to understand the document, so I will put all refere=
nce as informational&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rg=
b(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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Thanks med for the feed back. All documents are now referenced as
informative. If the RFC editor expresses concerns we will update that.

Thanks!
Yours,
Daniel

On Wed, Jun 10, 2020 at 12:21 PM <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:

> Dear Elwyn,
>
> One quick comment about:
>
> > s7:  This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have
> > normative
> > references.  Please combine all references into one refererences
> > section.
>
> If we refer to the IESG statement available at:
> https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-refer=
ences/,
> we can read the following:
>
> "Note 3: The normative/informative distinction is relevant in any documen=
t
> that amounts to a technical specification, even if its intended status is
> Experimental or Informational."
>
> So, that's fine to have a normative ref section (if justified) for this
> document.
>
> That's said, I do personally think that at least [RFC8782][RFC8783] have
> to be moved as Informative... but not for the reasons mentioned in the
> review..
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Elwyn Davies
> > via Datatracker
> > Envoy=C3=A9 : mercredi 10 juin 2020 18:00
> > =C3=80 : gen-art@ietf.org
> > Cc : last-call@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org;
> > dots@ietf.org
> > Objet : [Dots] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23
> >
> > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> > Review result: Ready with Nits
> >
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> > by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> > like any other last call comments.
> >
> > For more information, please see the FAQ at
> >
> > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >
> > Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23
> > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> > Review Date: 2020-06-10
> > IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11
> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >
> > Summary:
> > Ready wih some minor nits.
> >
> > Major issues:
> > None
> >
> > Minor issues:
> > None
> >
> > Nits/editorial comments:
> > s1, para 1: Just a thought:  might be worth adding to the end of this
> > para:
> > "and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed is
> > often of
> > the essence".
> >
> > s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc
> > which is
> > referred to in s2: OLD:
> >    This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
> >    design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
> > NEW
> >    This document provides sample use cases that motivated the
> > requirements
> >    for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for the design
> > of
> >    those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
> > ENDS
> >
> > s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation
> > Service
> > Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.
> >
> > s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:
> > OLD:
> >       Service subscriptions usually
> >       involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met.
> > NEW:
> >       Each service subscription usually
> >       involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to be met.
> > ENDS
> >
> > s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you
> > shouldn't
> > have a redefinition here.
> >
> > s3.1, para 7: s/thought different/though different/
> >
> > s3.1, 2nd set of bullets, that are below Fig 1: This woud be more
> > elegant using
> > (a), (b), etc as the bullet labels.
> >
> > s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text
> > indicates
> > that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.  Is this
> > always
> > the case or could the client request or the server provide a
> > proportional
> > response rather than an all or nothing response?
> >
> > s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/
> >
> > s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/
> >
> > s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor
> > various
> > aspects of the network traffic/.
> >
> > s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it's/it is/
> >
> > s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is
> > overly
> > specific.  Suggest adding 'for example'in at least one case or
> > changing it to
> > 'user interface'.
> >
> > s3.3, first para on page 11:
> > OLD:
> > to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.
> > NEW:
> > to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.
> > ENDS
> >
> > s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to
> > change
> > from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.  Please make it
> > clear
> > whether there is one or many.  If only one, then s/The orchestrator
> > DOTS
> > servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server
> > returns this
> > information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.
> >
> > s3.3, last para s/like  requesting/such as requesting/
> >
> > s7:  This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have
> > normative
> > references.  Please combine all references into one refererences
> > section.
> >
> >
> >
> > _______________________________________________
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Thanks med for the=C2=A0feed back. All documents are now r=
eferenced as informative. If the RFC editor expresses concerns we will upda=
te that.=C2=A0<div><br></div><div>Thanks!</div><div>Yours,=C2=A0<br>Daniel<=
/div></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_a=
ttr">On Wed, Jun 10, 2020 at 12:21 PM &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mohamed.boucada=
ir@orange.com">mohamed.boucadair@orange.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockq=
uote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1p=
x solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Dear Elwyn, <br>
<br>
One quick comment about:<br>
<br>
&gt; s7:=C2=A0 This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have<=
br>
&gt; normative<br>
&gt; references.=C2=A0 Please combine all references into one refererences<=
br>
&gt; section.<br>
<br>
If we refer to the IESG statement available at: <a href=3D"https://ietf.org=
/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/" rel=3D"nor=
eferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/no=
rmative-informative-references/</a>, we can read the following:<br>
<br>
&quot;Note 3: The normative/informative distinction is relevant in any docu=
ment that amounts to a technical specification, even if its intended status=
 is Experimental or Informational.&quot;<br>
<br>
So, that&#39;s fine to have a normative ref section (if justified) for this=
 document.<br>
<br>
That&#39;s said, I do personally think that at least [RFC8782][RFC8783] hav=
e to be moved as Informative... but not for the reasons mentioned in the re=
view.. <br>
<br>
Cheers,<br>
Med<br>
<br>
&gt; -----Message d&#39;origine-----<br>
&gt; De=C2=A0: Dots [mailto:<a href=3D"mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org" target=
=3D"_blank">dots-bounces@ietf.org</a>] De la part de Elwyn Davies<br>
&gt; via Datatracker<br>
&gt; Envoy=C3=A9=C2=A0: mercredi 10 juin 2020 18:00<br>
&gt; =C3=80=C2=A0: <a href=3D"mailto:gen-art@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">ge=
n-art@ietf.org</a><br>
&gt; Cc=C2=A0: <a href=3D"mailto:last-call@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">last=
-call@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.or=
g" target=3D"_blank">draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org</a>;<br>
&gt; <a href=3D"mailto:dots@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">dots@ietf.org</a><b=
r>
&gt; Objet=C2=A0: [Dots] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cas=
es-23<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br>
&gt; Review result: Ready with Nits<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area<br=
>
&gt; Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed<br>
&gt; by the IESG for the IETF Chair.=C2=A0 Please treat these comments just=
<br>
&gt; like any other last call comments.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; For more information, please see the FAQ at<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; &lt;<a href=3D"https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq" rel=3D"n=
oreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq<=
/a>&gt;.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23<br>
&gt; Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br>
&gt; Review Date: 2020-06-10<br>
&gt; IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11<br>
&gt; IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Summary:<br>
&gt; Ready wih some minor nits.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Major issues:<br>
&gt; None<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Minor issues:<br>
&gt; None<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Nits/editorial comments:<br>
&gt; s1, para 1: Just a thought:=C2=A0 might be worth adding to the end of =
this<br>
&gt; para:<br>
&gt; &quot;and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed =
is<br>
&gt; often of<br>
&gt; the essence&quot;.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc<br=
>
&gt; which is<br>
&gt; referred to in s2: OLD:<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This document provides sample use cases that provided inp=
ut for the<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br>
&gt; NEW<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This document provides sample use cases that motivated th=
e<br>
&gt; requirements<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for t=
he design<br>
&gt; of<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br>
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&gt; s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation<=
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&gt; Service<br>
&gt; Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.<br>
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&gt; s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:<br>
&gt; OLD:<br>
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&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that h=
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&gt; NEW:<br>
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&gt; ENDS<br>
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&gt; s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you<br>
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&gt; have a redefinition here.<br>
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&gt; <br>
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&gt; s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text<b=
r>
&gt; indicates<br>
&gt; that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.=C2=A0 Is=
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&gt; the case or could the client request or the server provide a<br>
&gt; proportional<br>
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&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/<=
br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor<b=
r>
&gt; various<br>
&gt; aspects of the network traffic/.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it&#39;s/it is/<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is<br>
&gt; overly<br>
&gt; specific.=C2=A0 Suggest adding &#39;for example&#39;in at least one ca=
se or<br>
&gt; changing it to<br>
&gt; &#39;user interface&#39;.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.3, first para on page 11:<br>
&gt; OLD:<br>
&gt; to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.<br>
&gt; NEW:<br>
&gt; to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.<br=
>
&gt; ENDS<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to=
<br>
&gt; change<br>
&gt; from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.=C2=A0 Please make i=
t<br>
&gt; clear<br>
&gt; whether there is one or many.=C2=A0 If only one, then s/The orchestrat=
or<br>
&gt; DOTS<br>
&gt; servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server<br>
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&gt; information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s3.3, last para s/like=C2=A0 requesting/such as requesting/<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; s7:=C2=A0 This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have<=
br>
&gt; normative<br>
&gt; references.=C2=A0 Please combine all references into one refererences<=
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Use cases for DDoS Open Threat Signaling
        Authors         : Roland Dobbins
                          Daniel Migault
                          Robert Moskowitz
                          Nik Teague
                          Liang Xia
                          Kaname Nishizuka
	Filename        : draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-24.txt
	Pages           : 15
	Date            : 2020-07-02

Abstract:
   The DDoS Open Threat Signaling (DOTS) effort is intended to provide
   protocols to facilitate interoperability across disparate DDoS
   mitigation solutions.  This document presents sample use cases which
   describe the interactions expected between the DOTS components as
   well as DOTS messaging exchanges.  These use cases are meant to
   identify the interacting DOTS components, how they collaborate, and
   what are the typical information to be exchanged.


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   The DDoS Open Threat Signaling (DOTS) effort is intended to provide
   protocols to facilitate interoperability across disparate DDoS
   mitigation solutions.  This document presents sample use cases which
   describe the interactions expected between the DOTS components as
   well as DOTS messaging exchanges.  These use cases are meant to
   identify the interacting DOTS components, how they collaborate, and
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Revision:&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 24<br>
Title:&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Use cases for =
DDoS Open Threat Signaling<br>
Document date:&nbsp; 2020-07-02<br>
Group:&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; dots<br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp; The DDoS Open Threat Signaling (DOTS) effort is intended to pr=
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Hi Daniel,

Thanks for posting the update; the changes seem fine to me.

I did create the IESG ballot a little earlier today, to give the
secretariat time to put it on the agenda for next week's telechat before
they go home for the week, so I'm happy to see that the revised I-D landed
quickly thereafter :)

Thanks again,

Ben

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> 
> Please find the latest version of the use case document that addresses the comments we received from GenART review. Please let us know if you have any additional comments/concerns.
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> Daniel
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> Name:           draft-ietf-dots-use-cases
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>    mitigation solutions.  This document presents sample use cases which
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I'll insert my usual whining here about six authors when our preferred limit is five.

And now, a few nits:

Section 2:

* "... may be composed by a cluster of hardware  ..." -- s/by a/of a/ ?

OLD:
      Each service subscription
      usually involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met.
NEW:
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NEW 2:
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      usually involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to be met.

Section 3.1:

* "... considers two kind of DDoS Mitigation ..." -- s/kind/kinds/

* "... decreased to the certain level ..." -- s/to the/to a/ ?




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> I'll insert my usual whining here about six authors when our preferred limit is five.

I did confirm with the authors before the IETF LC that all contributed
significantly, but failed to put that in the ballot text.  Sorry for
missing that.

-Ben


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Hi,

Thank you for the feed backs. I fixed the comments on my local copy and
will soon publish the updated version. Thank you very much for your time
and I hope you are safe as well.

Yours,
Daniel


On Fri, Jul 3, 2020 at 1:17 PM elwynd <elwynd@folly.org.uk> wrote:

> Hi, Daniel.
>
> Thanks for your response.
>
> The changes look good to me.  A couple of minor language improvements if I
> may suggest:
>
> s1, para 1: s/mitigations - which highly depends on a timely
> reaction/mitigations that are generally highly dependent on a timely
> reaction by the system./
>
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>

> s2, DDoS Mitigation Service: s/usually involve Service Level Agreement
> (SLA) that have to be met/usually involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA)
> that has to be met/
>
> <mglt>fixed</mglt>

> Paragraph just after Figure 4: s/various aspect/various aspects/
>
<mglt>fixed</mglt>

>
> End of 4th paragraph after Figure 4: s/appropriated/appropriate/
>
> Otherwise this is all done.
>
> Hope you are keeping safe and well.
>
> Cheers,
> Elwyn
>
> Sent from Samsung tablet.
>
>
> -------- Original message --------
> From: Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
> Date: 02/07/2020 22:28 (GMT+00:00)
> To: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>
> Cc: last-call@ietf.org, "gen-art >> General area reviewing team" <
> gen-art@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org, dots <
> dots@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Dots] Genart last call review of
> draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23
>
> Hi,
>
> Thank you for the review. These were helpful to us. I believe that all
> comments have been addressed in the version we just published.
> Please find more response regarding the comment inlined.
>
> Yours,
> Daniel
>
> On Wed, Jun 10, 2020 at 12:02 PM Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>>
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>>
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23
>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>> Review Date: 2020-06-10
>> IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>>
>> Summary:
>> Ready wih some minor nits.
>>
>> Major issues:
>> None
>>
>> Minor issues:
>> None
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> s1, para 1: Just a thought:  might be worth adding to the end of this
>> para:
>> "and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed is often
>> of
>> the essence".
>>
>  <mglt>
>  I understand that the additional time is part of the reasons that degrade
> the efficacy but this is not the only reason. I propose to indicate that
> efficacity highly depends on an timely reaction as below:
>
> OLD
> This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,
> can degrade the efficacy of mitigations.
> NEW
> This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,
> can degrade the efficacy of mitigations - which highly depends on  a
> timely reaction..
> </mglt>
>
>>
>> s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc which
>> is
>> referred to in s2: OLD:
>>    This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
>>    design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
>> NEW
>>    This document provides sample use cases that motivated the requirements
>>    for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for the design of
>>    those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
>> ENDS
>>
> <mglt>
> I would consider the requirement as part of the process for the design of
> the protocol, but it is correct that requirements coudl be included. I
> propose the following change:
> OLD:
> This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the design
> of
> the DOTS protocols {{RFC8782}}{{RFC8783}}.
> NEW:
> This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
> requirements {{?RFC8612}} and design of
> the DOTS protocols {{!RFC8782}}{{!RFC8783}}.
> </mglt>
>
>>
>> s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation
>> Service
>> Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.
>>
>>  <mglt> fixed. </mglt>
>
>> s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:
>> OLD:
>>       Service subscriptions usually
>>       involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met.
>> NEW:
>>       Each service subscription usually
>>       involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to be met.
>> ENDS
>>
>> <mglt> fixed.</mglt>
>
>
>> s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you
>> shouldn't
>> have a redefinition here.
>>
>> <mglt> fixed. </mglt>
>
>> s3.1, para 7: s/thought different/though different/
>>
> <mglt>fixed</mglt>
>
>>
>> s3.1, 2nd set of bullets, that are below Fig 1: This woud be more elegant
>> using
>> (a), (b), etc as the bullet labels.
>>
>> <mglt>
> I could not find how to do list as a) b) using kramdow but I used an
> ordered list 1. 2. instead so a native list format is rendered.
> </mglt>
>
>
>> s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text
>> indicates
>> that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.  Is this
>> always
>> the case or could the client request or the server provide a proportional
>> response rather than an all or nothing response?
>>
>> <mglt>
> My understanding is that when the decision to mitigate is requested the
> ITP mitigates the traffic. As far as I know it is not currently envisioned
> to use DOTS for a kind of collaboration between the ITP and the local side,
> that is the local site performs 20 % of the attack while the ITP takes in
> charge the remaining 80 %. One reason is that it remains hard to express
> the capabilities involved to mitigate the attack. Note also that the
> capacity of the ITP may be capped by contract.  Overall the DOTS is more
> about delegating the mitigation as opposed to collaborative mitigation.
> </mglt>
>
>
>> s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/
>>
>>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>
>
>> s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/
>>
>>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>
>
>> s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor
>> various
>> aspects of the network traffic/.
>>
>> <mglt> fixed</mglt>
>
>> s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it's/it is/
>>
>>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>
>
>> s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is overly
>> specific.  Suggest adding 'for example'in at least one case or changing
>> it to
>> 'user interface'.
>>
>>  <mgl> I added the for example which seems closer to the most probable
> implementation.</mglt>
>
> s3.3, first para on page 11:
>> OLD:
>> to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.
>> NEW:
>> to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.
>> ENDS
>>
>> <mglt>fixed</mglt>
>
>
>> s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to
>> change
>> from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.  Please make it clear
>> whether there is one or many.  If only one, then s/The orchestrator DOTS
>> servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server
>> returns this
>> information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.
>>
>>  <mglt>good catch. There is only one server. we address this.</mglt>
>
> s3.3, last para s/like  requesting/such as requesting/
>>
>> <mglt>fixed.</mglt>
>
>
>> s7:  This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have
>> normative
>> references.  Please combine all references into one refererences section.
>>
>>
>> <mglt> I usually like standard document to be normative, but this is
> correct that for use cases, none of these document are necessary to be read
> to understand the document, so I will put all reference as
> informational</mglt>
>
>
>>
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Hi,=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div>Thank you for the =
feed backs. I fixed the comments on my local copy and will soon publish the=
 updated version. Thank you very much for your time and I hope you are safe=
 as well.</div><div><br></div><div>Yours,=C2=A0<br>Daniel</div><div><br></d=
iv><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On =
Fri, Jul 3, 2020 at 1:17 PM elwynd &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:elwynd@folly.org.u=
k">elwynd@folly.org.uk</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_q=
uote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,2=
04);padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"auto"><div dir=3D"auto">Hi, Daniel.</div>=
<div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">Thanks for your response.=C2=
=A0</div><div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">The changes look goo=
d to me.=C2=A0 A couple of minor language improvements if I may suggest:</d=
iv><div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">s1, para 1: s/mitigations =
- which highly depends on a timely reaction/mitigations that are generally =
highly dependent on a timely reaction by the system./</div><div dir=3D"auto=
"><br></div></div></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</d=
iv><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;bord=
er-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"auto"><div=
 dir=3D"auto"></div><div dir=3D"auto">s2, DDoS Mitigation Service: s/usuall=
y involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met/usually involve=
s a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to be met/</div><div dir=3D"auto=
"><br></div></div></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</d=
iv><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;bord=
er-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"auto"><div=
 dir=3D"auto"></div><div dir=3D"auto">Paragraph just after Figure 4: s/vari=
ous aspect/various aspects/</div></div></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&=
lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0=
px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><=
div dir=3D"auto"><div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">End of 4th p=
aragraph after Figure 4: s/appropriated/appropriate/</div><div dir=3D"auto"=
><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">Otherwise this is all done.</div><div dir=3D"a=
uto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">Hope you are keeping safe and well.</div><=
div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">Cheers,</div><div dir=3D"auto"=
>Elwyn</div><div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div id=3D"gmail-m_-727488077319628=
2741composer_signature" dir=3D"auto"><div style=3D"font-size:85%;color:rgb(=
87,87,87)" dir=3D"auto">Sent from Samsung tablet.</div></div><div dir=3D"au=
to"><br></div><div><br></div><div style=3D"font-size:100%;color:rgb(0,0,0)"=
 dir=3D"auto"><div>-------- Original message --------</div><div>From: Danie=
l Migault &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mglt.ietf@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">mglt=
.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt; </div><div>Date: 02/07/2020  22:28  (GMT+00:00) </d=
iv><div>To: Elwyn Davies &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:elwynd@dial.pipex.com" targe=
t=3D"_blank">elwynd@dial.pipex.com</a>&gt; </div><div>Cc: <a href=3D"mailto=
:last-call@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">last-call@ietf.org</a>, &quot;gen-ar=
t &gt;&gt; General area reviewing team&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:gen-art@=
ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">gen-art@ietf.org</a>&gt;, <a href=3D"mailto:dra=
ft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">draft-ietf-dots-use-=
cases.all@ietf.org</a>, dots &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:dots@ietf.org" target=3D=
"_blank">dots@ietf.org</a>&gt; </div><div>Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Dots] Gen=
art last call review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23 </div><div><br></div><=
/div><div dir=3D"ltr"><div dir=3D"ltr">Hi,=C2=A0<div><br></div><div>Thank y=
ou for the review. These were helpful to us. I believe that all comments=C2=
=A0have been addressed in the version we just published.=C2=A0=C2=A0</div><=
div>Please find more response regarding the comment inlined.=C2=A0</div><di=
v><br></div><div>Yours,=C2=A0<br>Daniel=C2=A0</div></div><br><div class=3D"=
gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Wed, Jun 10, 2020 at =
12:02 PM Elwyn Davies via Datatracker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.or=
g" target=3D"_blank">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote c=
lass=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px soli=
d rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br>
Review result: Ready with Nits<br>
<br>
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area<br>
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed<br>
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.=C2=A0 Please treat these comments just<br>
like any other last call comments.<br>
<br>
For more information, please see the FAQ at<br>
<br>
&lt;<a href=3D"https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq" rel=3D"norefe=
rrer" target=3D"_blank">https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq</a>&g=
t;.<br>
<br>
Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23<br>
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br>
Review Date: 2020-06-10<br>
IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11<br>
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat<br>
<br>
Summary:<br>
Ready wih some minor nits.<br>
<br>
Major issues:<br>
None<br>
<br>
Minor issues:<br>
None<br>
<br>
Nits/editorial comments:<br>
s1, para 1: Just a thought:=C2=A0 might be worth adding to the end of this =
para:<br>
&quot;and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed is of=
ten of<br>
the essence&quot;.<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0=
I understand that the additional time is part of the reasons that degrade t=
he efficacy but this is not the only reason. I propose to indicate that eff=
icacity highly depends on an timely reaction as below:</div><div><br></div>=
<div>OLD<br>This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,<b=
r>can degrade the efficacy of mitigations.<br></div><div>NEW</div><div>This=
 greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,<br>can degrade th=
e efficacy of mitigations - which highly depends on=C2=A0 a timely reaction=
..=C2=A0</div><div>&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" sty=
le=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);paddi=
ng-left:1ex">
<br>
s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc which i=
s<br>
referred to in s2: OLD:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This document provides sample use cases that provided input fo=
r the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br>
NEW<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This document provides sample use cases that motivated the req=
uirements<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for the de=
sign of<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br>
ENDS<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>I would consider the requi=
rement as part of the process for the design of the protocol, but it is cor=
rect that requirements coudl be included. I propose the following change:</=
div><div>OLD:</div><div>This document provides sample use cases that provid=
ed input for the design of<br>the DOTS protocols {{RFC8782}}{{RFC8783}}.<br=
></div><div>NEW:</div><div>This document provides sample use cases that pro=
vided input for the requirements {{?RFC8612}} and design of</div>the DOTS p=
rotocols {{!RFC8782}}{{!RFC8783}}.<div>&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rg=
b(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation Servi=
ce<br>
Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt; fixed. &lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockqu=
ote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px=
 solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:<br>
OLD:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Service subscriptions usually<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be =
met.<br>
NEW:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Each service subscription usually<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to b=
e met.<br>
ENDS<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</di=
v><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;borde=
r-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you shouldn&=
#39;t<br>
have a redefinition here.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; fixed. &lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockqu=
ote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px=
 solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1, para 7: s/thought different/though different/<br></blockquote><div>&l=
t;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" s=
tyle=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);pad=
ding-left:1ex">
<br>
s3.1, 2nd set of bullets, that are below Fig 1: This woud be more elegant u=
sing<br>
(a), (b), etc as the bullet labels.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>I could not find how to do lis=
t as a) b) using kramdow=C2=A0but I used an ordered list=C2=A01. 2. instead=
 so a native list format is rendered.=C2=A0</div><div>&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</=
div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px =
0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text indica=
tes<br>
that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.=C2=A0 Is this=
 always<br>
the case or could the client request or the server provide a proportional<b=
r>
response rather than an all or nothing response?<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div>My understanding is that when =
the decision to mitigate is requested the ITP mitigates the traffic. As far=
 as I know it is not currently=C2=A0envisioned to use DOTS for a kind of co=
llaboration between the ITP and the local side, that is the local site perf=
orms 20 % of the attack while the ITP takes in charge the remaining 80 %. O=
ne reason is that it remains hard to express the capabilities involved to=
=C2=A0mitigate the attack. Note also that the capacity of the ITP may be ca=
pped by contract.=C2=A0 Overall the DOTS is more about delegating the mitig=
ation as opposed to collaborative mitigation.</div><div>&lt;/mglt&gt;</div>=
<div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px =
0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px so=
lid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px so=
lid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor variou=
s<br>
aspects of the network traffic/.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote clas=
s=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid r=
gb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it&#39;s/it is/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px so=
lid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is overly<b=
r>
specific.=C2=A0 Suggest adding &#39;for example&#39;in at least one case or=
 changing it to<br>
&#39;user interface&#39;.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mgl&gt; I added the for example which seems=
 closer to the most probable implementation.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div><br></d=
iv><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;bord=
er-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, first para on page 11:<br>
OLD:<br>
to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.<br>
NEW:<br>
to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.<br>
ENDS<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</div>=
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to chan=
ge<br>
from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.=C2=A0 Please make it cle=
ar<br>
whether there is one or many.=C2=A0 If only one, then s/The orchestrator DO=
TS<br>
servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server returns =
this<br>
information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>=C2=A0&lt;mglt&gt;good catch. There is only one serve=
r. we address=C2=A0this.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div><br></div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rg=
b(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, last para s/like=C2=A0 requesting/such as requesting/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</div=
><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border=
-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s7:=C2=A0 This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have norma=
tive <br>
references.=C2=A0 Please combine all references into one refererences secti=
on.<br>
<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt; I usually like standard document to be n=
ormative, but this is correct that for use cases, none of these document ar=
e necessary to be read to understand the document, so I will put all refere=
nce as informational&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rg=
b(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
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</blockquote></div><br clear=3D"all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div dir=3D"ltr"=
><div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Daniel Migault<br></div><div>Ericsson</div></div></d=
iv></div>
</div></blockquote></div><br clear=3D"all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div dir=
=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_signature"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Daniel Migault<br>=
</div><div>Ericsson</div></div></div></div>

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Use cases for DDoS Open Threat Signaling
        Authors         : Roland Dobbins
                          Daniel Migault
                          Robert Moskowitz
                          Nik Teague
                          Liang Xia
                          Kaname Nishizuka
	Filename        : draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-25.txt
	Pages           : 15
	Date            : 2020-07-05

Abstract:
   The DDoS Open Threat Signaling (DOTS) effort is intended to provide
   protocols to facilitate interoperability across disparate DDoS
   mitigation solutions.  This document presents sample use cases which
   describe the interactions expected between the DOTS components as
   well as DOTS messaging exchanges.  These use cases are meant to
   identify the interacting DOTS components, how they collaborate, and
   what are the typical information to be exchanged.


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Hi,

Thanks for the feed backs. I have just taken then into account in the
version just published. Thank you for your time.
Note that the initial number of co-author for the draft was 7 and brought
down to 6.

Yours,
Daniel

On Sat, Jul 4, 2020 at 8:18 PM Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <
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> I'll insert my usual whining here about six authors when our preferred
> limit is five.
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> And now, a few nits:
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> Section 2:
>
> * "... may be composed by a cluster of hardware  ..." -- s/by a/of a/ ?
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> <mglt>fixed</mglt>

> OLD:
>       Each service subscription
>       usually involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met.
> NEW:
>       Each service subscription
>       usually involves one or more Service Level Agreements (SLAs) that
> have to be met.
> NEW 2:
>       Each service subscription
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>
<mglt>this is the one we picked.</mglt>

>
> Section 3.1:
>
> * "... considers two kind of DDoS Mitigation ..." -- s/kind/kinds/
>
> <mglt>fixed.</mglt>

> * "... decreased to the certain level ..." -- s/to the/to a/ ?
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> <mglt>fixed.</mglt>

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div dir=3D"ltr">Hi,=C2=A0<div><br></div><div>Thanks for t=
he feed backs. I have just taken then into account=C2=A0in the version just=
 published. Thank you for your time.=C2=A0</div><div>Note that the initial =
number of co-author for the draft was 7 and brought down to 6.</div><div><b=
r></div><div>Yours,=C2=A0<br>Daniel</div></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quot=
e"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Sat, Jul 4, 2020 at 8:18 PM Mur=
ray Kucherawy via Datatracker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org">norep=
ly@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=
=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding=
-left:1ex">Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for<b=
r>
draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-24: No Objection<br>
<br>
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<br>
email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this<br>
introductory paragraph, however.)<br>
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tatement/discuss-criteria.html</a><br>
for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br>
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<br>
The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br>
<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dots-use-cases/" rel=
=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ie=
tf-dots-use-cases/</a><br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
----------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
COMMENT:<br>
----------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
<br>
I&#39;ll insert my usual whining here about six authors when our preferred =
limit is five.<br>
<br>
And now, a few nits:<br>
<br>
Section 2:<br>
<br>
* &quot;... may be composed by a cluster of hardware=C2=A0 ...&quot; -- s/b=
y a/of a/ ?<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px so=
lid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
OLD:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Each service subscription<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 usually involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that hav=
e to be met.<br>
NEW:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Each service subscription<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 usually involves one or more Service Level Agreements =
(SLAs) that have to be met.<br>
NEW 2:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Each service subscription<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 usually involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that =
has to be met.<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;this is the one we picked.&=
lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0=
px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
Section 3.1:<br>
<br>
* &quot;... considers two kind of DDoS Mitigation ...&quot; -- s/kind/kinds=
/<br>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockquot=
e class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px s=
olid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
* &quot;... decreased to the certain level ...&quot; -- s/to the/to a/ ?<br=
>
<br></blockquote><div>&lt;mglt&gt;fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;=C2=A0</div><blockquot=
e class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px s=
olid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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Med,

> Staring with #1 and #3.=20
>=20
> I made changes to draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to comply with RFC8791. =
There are few changes as it can be seen in this diff:
> =
https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/blob/master/diff-module-=
8791.pdf=20

[Janl] Very good, I think this approach will work well.

> The changes to the tree structure can be seen at: =
https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/blob/master/diff-tree-87=
91.pdf=20
>=20
> Please note that these changes are made with the assumption that the =
YANG module in RFC8782 is updated also to use sx:structure. We are =
working on an update which can be seen at =
(https://github.com/boucadair/rfc8782-yang-update)
>=20
> Can you please let me know if these changes are in the good direction? =
Any other comment on the updated draft-ietf-dots-telemetry module is =
appreciated. =20

[Janl] Yes, this is definitely going a long way in the right direction. =
Well done.

=46rom a protocol definition pov, there are still undefined areas that =
need to be filled in (#2), e.g. around operation semantics and error =
handling.

Best Regards,
/jan



>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : Jan Lindblad via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
>> Envoy=C3=A9 : mardi 30 juin 2020 17:43
>> =C3=80 : yang-doctors@ietf.org
>> Cc : dots@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org
>> Objet : Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09
>>=20
>> Reviewer: Jan Lindblad
>> Review result: Not Ready
>>=20
>> This is the YD early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry as requested =
by
>> the
>> DOTS WG.
>>=20
>> The ietf-dots-telemetry YANG module is not like other YANG modules. =
It
>> specifically states that it does not pertain to NETCONF/RESTCONF
>> management,
>> but is only meant to be mapped to a specific CoAP based protocol
>> "dots-signal-channel" created by the DOTS WG. The =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry
>> says in section 4.7:
>>=20
>>   The DOTS telemetry module (Section 9.1) is not intended to be used
>>   via NETCONF/RESTCONF for DOTS server management purposes.  It =
serves
>>   only to provide a data model and encoding, but not a management =
data
>>   model.  DOTS servers are allowed to update the non-configurable =
'ro'
>>   entities in the responses of DOTS telemetry messages.
>>=20
>> While this approach is highly uncommon, after giving it some thought, =
I
>> believe
>> this approach could be useful to client and server implementors. =
However, I
>> find two fundamental problems in the particular way this has been =
done in
>> this
>> case. I believe the problems are fixable, but may involve updating =
existing
>> DOTS RFCs.
>>=20
>> #1) YANG data declarations used as message bodies
>>=20
>> You can define your own message types with whatever content you =
desire in
>> YANG.
>> Just use rpc/action and notification statements. This draft does not =
do
>> that,
>> but instead defines message bodies as if they were top level YANG =
config
>> elements. This obviously violates the aras of YANG that speak about =
data
>> stores, accessible data trees, and what not. Apart from confusing
>> experienced
>> YANG users, the meaning of statements like "config false" is suddenly =
most
>> unclear when the foundations of YANG are disregarded.
>>=20
>> In my opinion the top level of the module needs to be rewritten to =
use
>> proper
>> YANG rpc/action and notification statements. The existing message =
bodies,
>> and
>> the way they are augmented, could all work very well. It's just the
>> framework
>> around them that isn't sound.
>>=20
>> Unfortunately the problematic top level structures of =
draft-ietf-dots-
>> telemetry
>> are based on structures imported from ietf-dots-signal-channel.yang, =
which
>> is
>> already published in DOTS RFC 8782. I have not been able to find any =
YD
>> review
>> of this module, so I would suspect none were ever performed. To make =
the
>> DOTS
>> signal-channel framework usable, I would suggest obsoleting RFC8782 =
and
>> write a
>> bis with an improved YANG action/notification based foundation. The =
number
>> of
>> changed lines in the YANG can probably be kept rather small.
>>=20
>> #2) Missing pieces in YANG to dots-signal-channel protocol mapping
>>=20
>> The draft-ietf-dots-telemetry references CoAP RFC 7959, which defines =
a
>> number
>> of basic management operations (GET, PUT, POST, ...), and CBOR RFC =
7049
>> content
>> encoding, with the draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12 addendum for how YANG =
data
>> is
>> to be encoded in CBOR. Unfortunately, a protocol specification that
>> consists of
>> these three references is not quite complete. Since this is an early
>> review, it
>> may be that the draft authors are already planning to pull the =
protocol
>> specification up a notch, or I may have missed some piece(s) of the =
puzzle.
>> In
>> any case, a protocol specification on par with what is available for
>> RESTCONF
>> or NETCONF would be required.
>>=20
>> The dots-signal-channel specification in RFC 8782 makes an =
Informative
>> Reference to draft specification for a protocol called CoMI
>> (draft-ietf-core-comi-09), which attempts to take on the YANG to CoAP
>> mapping.
>> One way of filling in the blanks for dots-signal-channel might be to
>> leverage
>> the CoMI work. Fixing #1 would be required to leverage CoMI.
>>=20
>> Currently, dots-signal-channel protocol specification (taken as the =
sum of
>> CoAP, CBOR and draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12) is missing information =
about
>> operation semantics, operation encoding, error handling, for example. =
RFC
>> 8040
>> sections 5, 6, 7 or RFC 6241 sections 4, 7, 8 contain the sort of
>> information
>> I'm looking for.
>>=20
>> #3) Other than that, probably good
>>=20
>> Other than issues #1 and #2 above, the module seems to be in pretty =
good
>> shape.
>> Some content is hard to judge since the intended meaning of config
>> true/false
>> for example is unclear, so a new review will be required after the
>> fundamentals
>> have been resolved. The module is both easy to read and conforms with =
IETF
>> standards except as noted above, staying on the clean and simple =
side.
>>=20
>>=20
>=20
>=20
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Hi all,

The conclusion for this one is that no change is required.

Please speak up if you disagree. Thank you.

Cheers,
Med

De : Jon Shallow [mailto:supjps-ietf@jpshallow.com]
Envoy=E9 : vendredi 26 juin 2020 16:25
=C0 : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kaname nishizuk=
a; dots@ietf.org
Objet : RE: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3

Hi Med et al,

Please see inline Jon1>

Regards

Jon

From: Dots [mailto: dots-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of mohamed.boucadair@o=
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Sent: 26 June 2020 12:33
To: Jon Shallow; Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kaname nishizuka; dots@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3

Hi Jon,

Please see inline.

Cheers,
Med

De : Jon Shallow [mailto:supjps-ietf@jpshallow.com]
Envoy=E9 : vendredi 26 juin 2020 12:41
=C0 : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kaname nishizuk=
a; dots@ietf.org
Objet : RE: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3

Hi All,

See inline

Regards

Jon.


From: Dots [mailto: dots-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of mohamed.boucadair@o=
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Sent: 26 June 2020 08:52
To: Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kaname nishizuka
Cc: dots@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3

Re-,

I do agree that having a latest-update leaf in the mapping table is useful =
(easily detect mismatches). This is something we can add to the data channe=
l extension.

Jon> In the attack mapping over the dots data channel I would like to see "=
vendor-name" and "vendor-mapping-last-updated".
[Med] Works for me as well

I'm not sure it is useful to send that new attribute in the signal channel =
as the attack details won' be useful in the lack of the attack description.

Jon> If a new attack-id has been created and the new attack vector is occur=
ring, but mappings have not been refreshed, then I think that the attack-id=
 should be used over the signal channel.  If the receiving DOTS agent is a =
DOTS client, it can then try to initiate the transfer of a new mapping over=
 the data channel.
[Med] ... which will fail.
Jon1> Yes - if we are into pipe losses and data channel fails to work.  How=
ever, the likelihood is that the lossy pipe is inbound, so then the client =
will never see the packet containing the new attack-id.  I still think that=
 if the DOTS client sees an unrecognized attack-id it should try to get the=
 latest mappings.

If the receiving DOTS agent is a server, then I can think of no server trig=
gered mechanism that can be used to request the client to send a new mappin=
g table..  However, the client should know it has a new attack-id - hence n=
ew mapping - and should initiate the sending of a new mapping.
[Med] which it needs to do anyway before an attack happens.
Jon1> It is possible that an attack is under way, someone does some analysi=
s and either comes up with a new attack-id to describe what is going on or =
does a code update and then sends the new mapping - the attack has not ceas=
ed....

[Med] We do already have the following:

   The DOTS client uses the PUT request to modify its vendor attack
   mapping details maintained by the DOTS server (e.g., add a new
   mapping).
Jon1> Agreed.  As a side note, we do not give a PUT example which has vendo=
r-id=3D in the URL.

Jon> Worst case is an out of band conversation to determine what this new a=
ttack-id really is.

I do think that the current wording in the draft is appropriate: (1) agents=
 should ensure they are in sync as much as possible, (2) avoid including th=
e attack details in the signal channel with one exception when an agent det=
ects a synch issue.

=3D=3D
   When conveying attack details in DOTS telemetry messages (Sections
   7.2, 7.3, and 8), DOTS agents MUST NOT include 'attack-name'
   attribute except if the corresponding attack mapping details were not
   shared with the peer DOTS agent.
=3D=3D

If there is a message size issue, a dots agent can send the telemetry in se=
parate messages, use the new bloc options, etc.

Jon> I am moving in the direction of attack-name/attack-description should =
never be used over  the signal channel.  Makes things a lot simpler.
[Med] Going that direction has many implications:

=B7         Mandate the data channel, which is against what we set in the a=
rch spec:

   "As illustrated in Figure 2, there are two interfaces between a DOTS
   server and a DOTS client; a signal channel and (optionally) a data
                                              ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   channel."


=B7         Change the following to a MUST

   In order to optimize the size of telemetry data conveyed over the
   DOTS signal channel, DOTS agents MAY use the DOTS data channel
   [RFC8783] to exchange vendor-specific attack mapping details (that
   is, {vendor identifier, attack identifier} =3D=3D> attack description).

Jon1> I had forgotten that the data channel was optional.  Sending the vend=
or mapping over the signal channel could be done - most likely has to be in=
 peace time unless we can use the new block options.  My vendor mapping tak=
es about 10k bytes.
~Jon1

And so on.

The current approach in the draft accommodates all these concerns.

~Jon




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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black">Hi all, <o:p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black">The conclusion for this one is that no change is required.<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black">Please speak up if you disagree. Thank you.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black">Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:black">Med<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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olor:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"FR" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">De&nbsp;:</span></b><span=
 lang=3D"FR" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot=
;sans-serif&quot;"> Jon Shallow [mailto:supjps-ietf@jpshallow.com]
<br>
<b>Envoy=E9&nbsp;:</b> vendredi 26 juin 2020 16:25<br>
<b>=C0&nbsp;:</b> BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kan=
ame nishizuka; dots@ietf.org<br>
<b>Objet&nbsp;:</b> RE: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Hi Med =
et al,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Please =
see inline Jon1&gt;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Regards=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Dots [ma=
ilto: dots-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 26 June 2020 12:33<br>
<b>To:</b> Jon Shallow; Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kaname nishizuka; dots@i=
etf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">Hi Jon,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">Please see inline.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">Med<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"FR" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">De&nbsp;:</span></b><span=
 lang=3D"FR" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot=
;sans-serif&quot;"> Jon Shallow [mailto:supjps-ietf@jpshallow.com]
<br>
<b>Envoy=E9&nbsp;:</b> vendredi 26 juin 2020 12:41<br>
<b>=C0&nbsp;:</b> BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kan=
ame nishizuka; dots@ietf.org<br>
<b>Objet&nbsp;:</b> RE: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Hi All,=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">See inl=
ine<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Regards=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon.<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Dots [ma=
ilto: dots-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 26 June 2020 08:52<br>
<b>To:</b> Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy; kaname nishizuka<br>
<b>Cc:</b> dots@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Dots] DOTS Telemetry: Interop Clarification #3<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">Re-,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">I do agree that having a latest-update leaf in the mapping ta=
ble is useful (easily detect mismatches). This is something we can add to t=
he data channel extension.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon&gt; </span><span l=
ang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">In the attack mapping over the dots d=
ata channel I would like to see &#8220;vendor-name&#8221; and &#8220;vendor=
-mapping-last-updated&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-family:&quo=
t;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">[Med] Works for me as well
</span></i></b><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">I&#8217;m not sure it is useful to send that new attribute in=
 the signal channel as the attack details won&#8217; be useful in the lack =
of the attack description.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon&gt; </span><span l=
ang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">If a new attack-id has been created a=
nd the new attack vector is occurring, but mappings have not been refreshed=
, then I think that the attack-id should be
 used over the signal channel.&nbsp; If the receiving DOTS agent is a DOTS =
client, it can then try to initiate the transfer of a new mapping over the =
data channel.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-family:&quo=
t;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">[Med] &#8230; which will fail.
<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon1=
&gt;</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"> Yes &#8211; if=
 we are into pipe losses and data channel fails to work.&nbsp; However, the=
 likelihood is that the lossy pipe is inbound, so then the
 client will never see the packet containing the new attack-id.&nbsp; I sti=
ll think that if the DOTS client sees an unrecognized attack-id it should t=
ry to get the latest mappings.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-family:&quo=
t;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">If the =
receiving DOTS agent is a server, then I can think of no server triggered m=
echanism that can be used to request the client to send a new mapping table=
..&nbsp; However, the client should know it
 has a new attack-id &#8211; hence new mapping &#8211; and should initiate =
the sending of a new mapping.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-family:&quo=
t;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">[Med] which it needs to do anyway before=
 an attack happens.<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon1=
&gt;</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"> It is possible=
 that an attack is under way, someone does some analysis and either comes u=
p with a new attack-id to describe what is going
 on or does a code update and then sends the new mapping &#8211; the attack=
 has not ceased&#8230;.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><=
o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-family:&quo=
t;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">[Med] We do already have the following:
<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-family:&quo=
t;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; The DOTS client uses the PUT request to modif=
y its vendor attack<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; mapping details maintained by the DOTS server=
 (e.g., add a new<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; mapping).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon1=
&gt;</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"> Agreed.&nbsp; =
As a side note, we do not give a PUT example which has vendor-id=3D in the =
URL.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon&gt;=
 Worst case is an out of band conversation to determine what this new attac=
k-id really is.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">I do think that the current wording in the draft is appropria=
te: (1) agents should ensure they are in sync as much as possible, (2) avoi=
d including the attack details in the signal channel
 with one exception when an agent detects a synch issue. <o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">=3D=3D<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; When conveying attack details in DOTS telemet=
ry messages (Sections<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; 7.2, 7.3, and 8), DOTS agents MUST NOT includ=
e 'attack-name'<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; attribute except if the corresponding attack =
mapping details were not<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; shared with the peer DOTS agent.<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">=3D=3D<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">If there is a message size issue, a dots agent can send the t=
elemetry in separate messages, use the new bloc options, etc. &nbsp;<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon&gt; I am moving in=
 the direction of attack-name/attack-description should never be used over&=
nbsp; the signal channel.&nbsp; Makes things a lot simpler.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&q=
uot;;color:#1F497D">[Med] Going that direction has many implications:
<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-family:Symbol;color:#1F49=
7D"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=B7<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Time=
s New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><b><i><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Couri=
er New&quot;;color:#1F497D">Mandate the data channel, which is against what=
 we set in the arch spec:
<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&q=
uot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220;As illustrated in Figure 2, there are =
two interfaces between a DOTS<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; server and a DOTS client; a signal channel an=
d (optionally) a data<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; ^^^^^^^^^^^^=
^^^^<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; channel.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&q=
uot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-family:Symbol;color:#1F49=
7D"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=B7<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Time=
s New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><b><i><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Couri=
er New&quot;;color:#1F497D">Change the following to a MUST<o:p></o:p></span=
></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&q=
uot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:9.2pt"><b><i><span style=3D"fon=
t-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp; In order to op=
timize the size of telemetry data conveyed over the<o:p></o:p></span></i></=
b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:9.2pt"><b><i><span style=3D"fon=
t-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp; DOTS signal ch=
annel, DOTS agents MAY use the DOTS data channel<o:p></o:p></span></i></b><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:9.2pt"><b><i><span style=3D"fon=
t-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp; [RFC8783] to e=
xchange vendor-specific attack mapping details (that<o:p></o:p></span></i><=
/b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><i><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&q=
uot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp; is, {vendor identifier, attack identifier}=
 =3D=3D&gt; attack description).<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Jon1&gt;</span></b>=
<span style=3D"color:#1F497D"> I had forgotten that the data channel was op=
tional.&nbsp; Sending the vendor mapping over the signal channel could be d=
one &#8211; most likely has to be in peace time unless
 we can use the new block options.&nbsp; My vendor mapping takes about 10k =
bytes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">~Jon1<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">And so on.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D">The current approach in the draft accommodates all these conc=
erns.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">~Jon<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;c=
olor:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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Med,

> Great. Thanks.
>=20
> Focusing now on #2.

[Janl] Very good.

> We are adhering to the base spec defined in RFC7252 with specifics =
defined in the DOTS documents.=20
>=20
> If we consider error handling for example, the general rule is:
>=20
>   DOTS agents MUST support GET, PUT, and DELETE CoAP methods.  The
>   payload included in CoAP responses with 2.xx Response Codes MUST be
>   of content type "application/dots+cbor".  CoAP responses with 4.xx
>   and 5.xx error Response Codes MUST include a diagnostic payload
>   (Section 5.5.2 of [RFC7252]).  The diagnostic payload may contain
>   additional information to aid troubleshooting.

[Janl] This is good, but 7252 says nothing about operation semantics or =
how YANG comes into the picture. Let me exemplify what I mean by a few =
questions. I'll abbreviate the DOTS-signal-protocol "DSP" for now.

+ So the POST operation in CoAP is not used in DSP?
+ In a PUT message, what is the mapping between YANG paths and the =
target resource URI? CoAP does not define this, but the CoMI draft has =
some suggestions. Is that what you are planning to use?
+ Is a GET on the root resource a valid operation? If it is, will that =
return the entire data tree? If so, can that returned data tree be sent =
back in a PUT operation later?
+ Would such a that PUT operation (which contains a configuration that =
was valid at an earlier point) always succeed, or are there any =
situations in which the server would return an error when doing so? What =
errors?
+ Is there any way to only GET the configuration data?
+ Will a DELETE operation on a valid resource always succeed, or are =
there any conditions under which a deletion may be invalid?
+ If the target URI is already deleted (not present), is that considered =
an error, and if so what error code should be used?=20
+ If a server has started sending back a response to a client request, =
but then hits an internal error, and is unable to filfil the request, =
what should it do? Is closing the connection a reasonable response?
+ YANG rpc, action, and notification statements have no mapping to DSP?

> We do have specific things such as the following in the telemetry =
draft:
>=20
> =3D=3D
>   The DOTS server indicates the result of processing the PUT request
>   using the following response codes:
>=20
>   o  If the request is missing a mandatory attribute, does not include
>      'cuid' or 'tsid' Uri-Path parameters, or contains one or more
>      invalid or unknown parameters, 4.00 (Bad Request) MUST be =
returned
>      in the response.
>=20
>   o  If the DOTS server does not find the 'tsid' parameter value
>      conveyed in the PUT request in its configuration data and if the
>      DOTS server has accepted the configuration parameters, then a
>      response code 2.01 (Created) MUST be returned in the response.
>=20
>   o  If the DOTS server finds the 'tsid' parameter value conveyed in
>      the PUT request in its configuration data and if the DOTS server
>      has accepted the updated configuration parameters, 2.04 (Changed)
>      MUST be returned in the response.
>=20
>   o  If any of the enclosed configurable attribute values are not
>      acceptable to the DOTS server (Section 6.1.1), 4.22 =
(Unprocessable
>      Entity) MUST be returned in the response.
>=20
>      The DOTS client may re-try and send the PUT request with updated
>      attribute values acceptable to the DOTS server.
> =3D=3D
>=20
> Isn't this part of error handling? Or you are thinking about something =
else?=20

[Janl] Yes, these bullets are certainly part of the answer. In a =
protocol specification, I would have expected a section specifically =
about error handling, which defines among other things how error =
responses would be formatted. Have a look at RFC 8040 section 7 as an =
example.

Specifying a protocol is never easy There are many aspects to consider. =
Even if the DSP protocol is somewhat limited in scope when compared to =
e.g. RESTCONF or CoMI, I'd suggest glancing at them for ideas about what =
aspects to include here.

Best Regards,
/jan



>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : Jan Lindblad [mailto:janl@tail-f.com]
>> Envoy=C3=A9 : lundi 6 juillet 2020 09:46
>> =C3=80 : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN
>> Cc : yang-doctors@ietf.org; dots@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dots-
>> telemetry.all@ietf.org
>> Objet : Re: Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09
>>=20
>> Med,
>>=20
>>> Staring with #1 and #3.
>>>=20
>>> I made changes to draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to comply with RFC8791. =
There
>> are few changes as it can be seen in this diff:
>>> https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/blob/master/diff-
>> module-8791.pdf
>>=20
>> [Janl] Very good, I think this approach will work well.
>>=20
>>> The changes to the tree structure can be seen at:
>> =
https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/blob/master/diff-tree-
>> 8791.pdf
>>>=20
>>> Please note that these changes are made with the assumption that the =
YANG
>> module in RFC8782 is updated also to use sx:structure. We are working =
on an
>> update which can be seen at =
(https://github.com/boucadair/rfc8782-yang-
>> update)
>>>=20
>>> Can you please let me know if these changes are in the good =
direction?
>> Any other comment on the updated draft-ietf-dots-telemetry module is
>> appreciated.
>>=20
>> [Janl] Yes, this is definitely going a long way in the right =
direction.
>> Well done.
>>=20
>> =46rom a protocol definition pov, there are still undefined areas =
that need
>> to be filled in (#2), e.g. around operation semantics and error =
handling.
>>=20
>> Best Regards,
>> /jan
>>=20
>>=20
>>=20
>>>> -----Message d'origine-----
>>>> De : Jan Lindblad via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
>>>> Envoy=C3=A9 : mardi 30 juin 2020 17:43
>>>> =C3=80 : yang-doctors@ietf.org
>>>> Cc : dots@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org
>>>> Objet : Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09
>>>>=20
>>>> Reviewer: Jan Lindblad
>>>> Review result: Not Ready
>>>>=20
>>>> This is the YD early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry as =
requested by
>>>> the
>>>> DOTS WG.
>>>>=20
>>>> The ietf-dots-telemetry YANG module is not like other YANG modules. =
It
>>>> specifically states that it does not pertain to NETCONF/RESTCONF
>>>> management,
>>>> but is only meant to be mapped to a specific CoAP based protocol
>>>> "dots-signal-channel" created by the DOTS WG. The draft-ietf-dots-
>> telemetry
>>>> says in section 4.7:
>>>>=20
>>>>  The DOTS telemetry module (Section 9.1) is not intended to be used
>>>>  via NETCONF/RESTCONF for DOTS server management purposes.  It =
serves
>>>>  only to provide a data model and encoding, but not a management =
data
>>>>  model.  DOTS servers are allowed to update the non-configurable =
'ro'
>>>>  entities in the responses of DOTS telemetry messages.
>>>>=20
>>>> While this approach is highly uncommon, after giving it some =
thought, I
>>>> believe
>>>> this approach could be useful to client and server implementors.
>> However, I
>>>> find two fundamental problems in the particular way this has been =
done
>> in
>>>> this
>>>> case. I believe the problems are fixable, but may involve updating
>> existing
>>>> DOTS RFCs.
>>>>=20
>>>> #1) YANG data declarations used as message bodies
>>>>=20
>>>> You can define your own message types with whatever content you =
desire
>> in
>>>> YANG.
>>>> Just use rpc/action and notification statements. This draft does =
not do
>>>> that,
>>>> but instead defines message bodies as if they were top level YANG =
config
>>>> elements. This obviously violates the aras of YANG that speak about =
data
>>>> stores, accessible data trees, and what not. Apart from confusing
>>>> experienced
>>>> YANG users, the meaning of statements like "config false" is =
suddenly
>> most
>>>> unclear when the foundations of YANG are disregarded.
>>>>=20
>>>> In my opinion the top level of the module needs to be rewritten to =
use
>>>> proper
>>>> YANG rpc/action and notification statements. The existing message
>> bodies,
>>>> and
>>>> the way they are augmented, could all work very well. It's just the
>>>> framework
>>>> around them that isn't sound.
>>>>=20
>>>> Unfortunately the problematic top level structures of =
draft-ietf-dots-
>>>> telemetry
>>>> are based on structures imported from =
ietf-dots-signal-channel.yang,
>> which
>>>> is
>>>> already published in DOTS RFC 8782. I have not been able to find =
any YD
>>>> review
>>>> of this module, so I would suspect none were ever performed. To =
make the
>>>> DOTS
>>>> signal-channel framework usable, I would suggest obsoleting RFC8782 =
and
>>>> write a
>>>> bis with an improved YANG action/notification based foundation. The
>> number
>>>> of
>>>> changed lines in the YANG can probably be kept rather small.
>>>>=20
>>>> #2) Missing pieces in YANG to dots-signal-channel protocol mapping
>>>>=20
>>>> The draft-ietf-dots-telemetry references CoAP RFC 7959, which =
defines a
>>>> number
>>>> of basic management operations (GET, PUT, POST, ...), and CBOR RFC =
7049
>>>> content
>>>> encoding, with the draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12 addendum for how =
YANG
>> data
>>>> is
>>>> to be encoded in CBOR. Unfortunately, a protocol specification that
>>>> consists of
>>>> these three references is not quite complete. Since this is an =
early
>>>> review, it
>>>> may be that the draft authors are already planning to pull the =
protocol
>>>> specification up a notch, or I may have missed some piece(s) of the
>> puzzle.
>>>> In
>>>> any case, a protocol specification on par with what is available =
for
>>>> RESTCONF
>>>> or NETCONF would be required.
>>>>=20
>>>> The dots-signal-channel specification in RFC 8782 makes an =
Informative
>>>> Reference to draft specification for a protocol called CoMI
>>>> (draft-ietf-core-comi-09), which attempts to take on the YANG to =
CoAP
>>>> mapping.
>>>> One way of filling in the blanks for dots-signal-channel might be =
to
>>>> leverage
>>>> the CoMI work. Fixing #1 would be required to leverage CoMI.
>>>>=20
>>>> Currently, dots-signal-channel protocol specification (taken as the =
sum
>> of
>>>> CoAP, CBOR and draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12) is missing information
>> about
>>>> operation semantics, operation encoding, error handling, for =
example.
>> RFC
>>>> 8040
>>>> sections 5, 6, 7 or RFC 6241 sections 4, 7, 8 contain the sort of
>>>> information
>>>> I'm looking for.
>>>>=20
>>>> #3) Other than that, probably good
>>>>=20
>>>> Other than issues #1 and #2 above, the module seems to be in pretty =
good
>>>> shape.
>>>> Some content is hard to judge since the intended meaning of config
>>>> true/false
>>>> for example is unclear, so a new review will be required after the
>>>> fundamentals
>>>> have been resolved. The module is both easy to read and conforms =
with
>> IETF
>>>> standards except as noted above, staying on the clean and simple =
side.
>>>>=20
>=20
>=20
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class=3D"">Med,<div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D""><div><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">Great. Thanks.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Focusing now on =
#2. </div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div><div>[Janl] Very =
good.</div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><div class=3D"">We are adhering to the base spec defined in =
RFC7252 with specifics defined in the DOTS documents. <br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">If we consider error handling for example, the general rule =
is:<br class=3D""><br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;DOTS agents MUST support =
GET, PUT, and DELETE CoAP methods. &nbsp;The<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;payload included in CoAP responses with 2.xx Response Codes =
MUST be<br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;of content type =
"application/dots+cbor". &nbsp;CoAP responses with 4.xx<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;and 5.xx error Response Codes MUST include a diagnostic =
payload<br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;(Section 5.5.2 of [RFC7252]). =
&nbsp;The diagnostic payload may contain<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;additional information to aid troubleshooting.<br =
class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div><div>[Janl] =
This is good, but 7252 says nothing about operation semantics or how =
YANG comes into the picture. Let me exemplify what I mean by a few =
questions. I'll abbreviate the DOTS-signal-protocol "DSP" for =
now.</div><div><br class=3D""></div><div>+ So the POST operation in CoAP =
is not used in DSP?</div><div>+ In a PUT message, what is the mapping =
between YANG paths and the target resource URI? CoAP does not define =
this, but the CoMI draft has some suggestions. Is that what you are =
planning to use?</div><div>+ Is a GET on the root resource a valid =
operation? If it is, will that return the entire data tree? If so, can =
that returned data tree be sent back in a PUT operation =
later?</div><div>+ Would such a that PUT operation (which contains a =
configuration that was valid at an earlier point) always succeed, or are =
there any situations in which the server would return an error when =
doing so? What errors?</div><div>+ Is there any way to only GET the =
configuration data?</div><div>+ Will a DELETE operation on a valid =
resource always succeed, or are there any conditions under which a =
deletion may be invalid?</div><div>+ If the target URI is already =
deleted (not present), is that considered an error, and if so what error =
code should be used?&nbsp;</div><div>+ If a server has started sending =
back a response to a client request, but then hits an internal error, =
and is unable to filfil the request, what should it do? Is closing the =
connection a reasonable response?</div><div>+ YANG rpc, action, and =
notification statements have no mapping to DSP?</div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div=
 class=3D"">We do have specific things such as the following in the =
telemetry draft:<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">=3D=3D<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;The DOTS server indicates the result of processing the PUT =
request<br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;using the following response =
codes:<br class=3D""><br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;o &nbsp;If the request =
is missing a mandatory attribute, does not include<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;'cuid' or 'tsid' Uri-Path parameters, or =
contains one or more<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;invalid or unknown parameters, 4.00 (Bad =
Request) MUST be returned<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;in the response.<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;o &nbsp;If the DOTS server does not find the =
'tsid' parameter value<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;conveyed in the PUT request in its =
configuration data and if the<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;DOTS server has accepted the configuration =
parameters, then a<br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;response =
code 2.01 (Created) MUST be returned in the response.<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;o &nbsp;If the DOTS server finds the 'tsid' =
parameter value conveyed in<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;the PUT request in its configuration data =
and if the DOTS server<br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;has =
accepted the updated configuration parameters, 2.04 (Changed)<br =
class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;MUST be returned in the =
response.<br class=3D""><br class=3D""> &nbsp;&nbsp;o &nbsp;If any of =
the enclosed configurable attribute values are not<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;acceptable to the DOTS server (Section =
6.1.1), 4.22 (Unprocessable<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Entity) MUST be returned in the =
response.<br class=3D""><br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The DOTS client may re-try and send the =
PUT request with updated<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;attribute values acceptable to the DOTS =
server.<br class=3D"">=3D=3D<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Isn't this =
part of error handling? Or you are thinking about something else? <br =
class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div><div>[Janl] =
Yes, these bullets are certainly part of the answer. In a protocol =
specification, I would have expected a section specifically about error =
handling, which defines among other things how error responses would be =
formatted. Have a look at RFC 8040 section 7 as an =
example.</div><div><br class=3D""></div><div>Specifying a protocol is =
never easy There are many aspects to consider. Even if the DSP protocol =
is somewhat limited in scope when compared to e.g. RESTCONF or CoMI, I'd =
suggest glancing at them for ideas about what aspects to include =
here.</div><div><br class=3D""></div><div>Best =
Regards,</div><div>/jan</div><div><br class=3D""></div><div =
style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px;"><br =
class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: =
12px;"><br class=3D""></div><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><div class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">-----Message d'origine-----<br class=3D"">De&nbsp;: Jan =
Lindblad [<a href=3D"mailto:janl@tail-f.com" =
class=3D"">mailto:janl@tail-f.com</a>]<br class=3D"">Envoy=C3=A9&nbsp;: =
lundi 6 juillet 2020 09:46<br class=3D"">=C3=80&nbsp;: BOUCADAIR Mohamed =
TGI/OLN<br class=3D"">Cc&nbsp;: <a href=3D"mailto:yang-doctors@ietf.org" =
class=3D"">yang-doctors@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:dots@ietf.org" =
class=3D"">dots@ietf.org</a>; draft-ietf-dots-<br class=3D""><a =
href=3D"mailto:telemetry.all@ietf.org" =
class=3D"">telemetry.all@ietf.org</a><br class=3D"">Objet&nbsp;: Re: =
Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09<br class=3D""><br=
 class=3D"">Med,<br class=3D""><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">Staring with #1 and #3.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">I made =
changes to draft-ietf-dots-telemetry to comply with RFC8791. There<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>are few changes as it can be seen in this =
diff:<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/blob/master/d=
iff-<br class=3D""></blockquote>module-8791.pdf<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">[Janl] Very good, I think this approach will work well.<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">The =
changes to the tree structure can be seen at:<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/=
blob/master/diff-tree-<br class=3D"">8791.pdf<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><br class=3D"">Please note that these changes =
are made with the assumption that the YANG<br =
class=3D""></blockquote>module in RFC8782 is updated also to use =
sx:structure. We are working on an<br class=3D"">update which can be =
seen at (https://github.com/boucadair/rfc8782-yang-<br =
class=3D"">update)<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">Can you please let me know if these changes are in the good =
direction?<br class=3D""></blockquote>Any other comment on the updated =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry module is<br class=3D"">appreciated.<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">[Janl] Yes, this is definitely going a long =
way in the right direction.<br class=3D"">Well done.<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">=46rom a protocol definition pov, there are still undefined =
areas that need<br class=3D"">to be filled in (#2), e.g. around =
operation semantics and error handling.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Best =
Regards,<br class=3D"">/jan<br class=3D""><br class=3D""><br =
class=3D""><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote=
 type=3D"cite" class=3D"">-----Message d'origine-----<br class=3D"">De : =
Jan Lindblad via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]<br =
class=3D"">Envoy=C3=A9 : mardi 30 juin 2020 17:43<br class=3D"">=C3=80 : =
yang-doctors@ietf.org<br class=3D"">Cc : dots@ietf.org; =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org<br class=3D"">Objet : Yangdoctors =
early review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">Reviewer: Jan Lindblad<br class=3D"">Review result: Not =
Ready<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">This is the YD early review of =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry as requested by<br class=3D"">the<br =
class=3D"">DOTS WG.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">The ietf-dots-telemetry =
YANG module is not like other YANG modules. It<br class=3D"">specifically =
states that it does not pertain to NETCONF/RESTCONF<br =
class=3D"">management,<br class=3D"">but is only meant to be mapped to a =
specific CoAP based protocol<br class=3D"">"dots-signal-channel" created =
by the DOTS WG. The draft-ietf-dots-<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>telemetry<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">says in =
section 4.7:<br class=3D""><br class=3D""> &nbsp;The DOTS telemetry =
module (Section 9.1) is not intended to be used<br class=3D""> &nbsp;via =
NETCONF/RESTCONF for DOTS server management purposes. &nbsp;It serves<br =
class=3D""> &nbsp;only to provide a data model and encoding, but not a =
management data<br class=3D""> &nbsp;model. &nbsp;DOTS servers are =
allowed to update the non-configurable 'ro'<br class=3D""> =
&nbsp;entities in the responses of DOTS telemetry messages.<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">While this approach is highly uncommon, after =
giving it some thought, I<br class=3D"">believe<br class=3D"">this =
approach could be useful to client and server implementors.<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>However, I<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">find two =
fundamental problems in the particular way this has been done<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>in<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">this<br =
class=3D"">case. I believe the problems are fixable, but may involve =
updating<br class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>existing<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">DOTS RFCs.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">#1) YANG data =
declarations used as message bodies<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">You can =
define your own message types with whatever content you desire<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>in<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">YANG.<br =
class=3D"">Just use rpc/action and notification statements. This draft =
does not do<br class=3D"">that,<br class=3D"">but instead defines =
message bodies as if they were top level YANG config<br =
class=3D"">elements. This obviously violates the aras of YANG that speak =
about data<br class=3D"">stores, accessible data trees, and what not. =
Apart from confusing<br class=3D"">experienced<br class=3D"">YANG users, =
the meaning of statements like "config false" is suddenly<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>most<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">unclear =
when the foundations of YANG are disregarded.<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">In my opinion the top level of the module needs to be =
rewritten to use<br class=3D"">proper<br class=3D"">YANG rpc/action and =
notification statements. The existing message<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>bodies,<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">and<br =
class=3D"">the way they are augmented, could all work very well. It's =
just the<br class=3D"">framework<br class=3D"">around them that isn't =
sound.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Unfortunately the problematic top =
level structures of draft-ietf-dots-<br class=3D"">telemetry<br =
class=3D"">are based on structures imported from =
ietf-dots-signal-channel.yang,<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>which<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">is<br =
class=3D"">already published in DOTS RFC 8782. I have not been able to =
find any YD<br class=3D"">review<br class=3D"">of this module, so I =
would suspect none were ever performed. To make the<br class=3D"">DOTS<br =
class=3D"">signal-channel framework usable, I would suggest obsoleting =
RFC8782 and<br class=3D"">write a<br class=3D"">bis with an improved =
YANG action/notification based foundation. The<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>number<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">of<br =
class=3D"">changed lines in the YANG can probably be kept rather =
small.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">#2) Missing pieces in YANG to =
dots-signal-channel protocol mapping<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">The =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry references CoAP RFC 7959, which defines a<br =
class=3D"">number<br class=3D"">of basic management operations (GET, =
PUT, POST, ...), and CBOR RFC 7049<br class=3D"">content<br =
class=3D"">encoding, with the draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12 addendum for =
how YANG<br class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>data<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">is<br class=3D"">to be encoded in CBOR. Unfortunately, a =
protocol specification that<br class=3D"">consists of<br class=3D"">these =
three references is not quite complete. Since this is an early<br =
class=3D"">review, it<br class=3D"">may be that the draft authors are =
already planning to pull the protocol<br class=3D"">specification up a =
notch, or I may have missed some piece(s) of the<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>puzzle.<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">In<br =
class=3D"">any case, a protocol specification on par with what is =
available for<br class=3D"">RESTCONF<br class=3D"">or NETCONF would be =
required.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">The dots-signal-channel =
specification in RFC 8782 makes an Informative<br class=3D"">Reference =
to draft specification for a protocol called CoMI<br =
class=3D"">(draft-ietf-core-comi-09), which attempts to take on the YANG =
to CoAP<br class=3D"">mapping.<br class=3D"">One way of filling in the =
blanks for dots-signal-channel might be to<br class=3D"">leverage<br =
class=3D"">the CoMI work. Fixing #1 would be required to leverage =
CoMI.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Currently, dots-signal-channel =
protocol specification (taken as the sum<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>of<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">CoAP, CBOR =
and draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12) is missing information<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>about<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">operation =
semantics, operation encoding, error handling, for example.<br =
class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>RFC<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D"">8040<br =
class=3D"">sections 5, 6, 7 or RFC 6241 sections 4, 7, 8 contain the =
sort of<br class=3D"">information<br class=3D"">I'm looking for.<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">#3) Other than that, probably good<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">Other than issues #1 and #2 above, the module =
seems to be in pretty good<br class=3D"">shape.<br class=3D"">Some =
content is hard to judge since the intended meaning of config<br =
class=3D"">true/false<br class=3D"">for example is unclear, so a new =
review will be required after the<br class=3D"">fundamentals<br =
class=3D"">have been resolved. The module is both easy to read and =
conforms with<br class=3D""></blockquote></blockquote>IETF<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D"">standards except as noted above, staying on the clean and =
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Hi,

I found this document to be well written and easy to follow.

One minor nit:

3.3.  DDoS Orchestration

   Then the orchestrator can take
   further actions such as requesting forwarding nodes such as routers
   to filter the traffic.

Perhaps reword this sentence to avoid "such as" twice in the same sentence.

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Hi Jan,

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Further to what Med has said as a clarification for errors server side =
when sending back a response assuming it is not a server crash.

=20

if the mitigation was accepted (all sanity checks must have passed at =
this point) by the DOTS server, but then the passing over to the DOTS =
mitigator choked for whatever reason and could not handle it, the =
following sequence happens.

=20

The server would initially have sent back an =
=E2=80=9Cattack-mitigation-in-progress=E2=80=9D in response to the =
mitigation request, but never moves on to updating the status to =
=E2=80=9Cattack-successfully-mitigated=E2=80=9D which happens when the =
mitigator puts the DDoS mitigation into action and indicates this back =
to the  DOTS server.  See  RFC8782 : Figure 15: Notifications of Attack =
Mitigation Status.  The DOTS server would then go on to setting the =
status to =E2=80=9Cattack-mitigation-withdrawn=E2=80=9D (RFC8782 : Table =
3: Values of 'status' Parameter).

=20

Regards

=20

Jon

=20

From: Dots [mailto: dots-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of =
mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
Sent: 08 July 2020 10:19
To: Jan Lindblad
Cc: yang-doctors@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org; =
dots@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Dots] Yangdoctors early review of =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09

=20

Jan,=20

=20

Some clarifications about this one:=20

=20

+ If a server has started sending back a response to a client request, =
but then hits an internal error, and is unable to filfil the request, =
what should it do? Is closing the connection a reasonable response?

[Med] We don=E2=80=99t have text as this is implementation-specific. =
That=E2=80=99s said I expect implementations to maintain the session =
alive as we are dealing with DDoS attack mitigation.=20

=20

I thought that you were asking for a case where the server has accepted =
for example a (mitigation) request but then encounters an error. That =
case is implementation-specific.=20

=20

FWIW, we do have the following:=20

=20

=C2=B7         If the server crashes, the connection will be closed. =
This will be detected by the client thanks to the use of heartbeats. The =
client will then re-establish the signal session.

=C2=B7         For errors on the server side we do have the following:=20

=20

   =E2=80=9CThe error Response Code 5.03 (Service Unavailable) is

   returned if the DOTS server has erred or is incapable of performing

   the mitigation.  As specified in [ =
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7252> RFC7252], 5.03 uses Max-Age Option

   to indicate the number of seconds after which to retry."

=20

Implementations can send 5.00, but how the client will react to the =
error code is implementation-specific. =20

=20

Cheers,

Med

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D'>Hi Jan,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
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D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
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D'>Further to what Med has said as a clarification for errors server =
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crash.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>if the mitigation was accepted (all sanity checks must have passed at =
this point) by the DOTS server, but then the passing over to the DOTS =
mitigator choked for whatever reason and could not handle it, the =
following sequence happens.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>The server would initially have sent back an =
=E2=80=9Cattack-mitigation-in-progress=E2=80=9D in response to the =
mitigation request, but never moves on to updating the status to =
=E2=80=9Cattack-successfully-mitigated=E2=80=9D which happens when the =
mitigator puts the DDoS mitigation into action and indicates this back =
to the =C2=A0DOTS server.=C2=A0 See =C2=A0RFC8782 : Figure 15: =
Notifications of Attack Mitigation Status.=C2=A0 The DOTS server would =
then go on to setting the status to =
=E2=80=9Cattack-mitigation-withdrawn=E2=80=9D (RFC8782 : Table 3: Values =
of 'status' Parameter).<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
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style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
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D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Jon</span><span =
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D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
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lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span>=
</b><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Dots =
[mailto: dots-bounces@ietf.org] <b>On Behalf Of =
</b>mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<br><b>Sent:</b> 08 July 2020 =
10:19<br><b>To:</b> Jan Lindblad<br><b>Cc:</b> yang-doctors@ietf.org; =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org; dots@ietf.org<br><b>Subject:</b> =
Re: [Dots] Yangdoctors early review of =
draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-09<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
lang=3DFR style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Jan, =
<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DFR =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>=
<p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Some clarifications about =
this one: <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>=
<p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US>+ If a server has started =
sending back a response to a client request, but then hits an internal =
error, and is unable to filfil the request, what should it do? Is =
closing the connection a reasonable response?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><b><i><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'>[Med] =
We don=E2=80=99t have text as this is implementation-specific. =
That=E2=80=99s said I expect implementations to maintain the session =
alive as we are dealing with DDoS attack mitigation. =
<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>I thought that you were =
asking for a case where the server has accepted for example a =
(mitigation) request but then encounters an error. That case is =
implementation-specific. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>=
<p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>FWIW, we do have the =
following: <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>=
<p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'text-indent:-18.0pt'><span =
lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:black;mso-fareast-lang=
uage:EN-US'>=C2=B7</span><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:7.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>If the server crashes, the =
connection will be closed. This will be detected by the client thanks to =
the use of heartbeats. The client will then re-establish the signal =
session.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph =
style=3D'text-indent:-18.0pt'><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:black;mso-fareast-lang=
uage:EN-US'>=C2=B7</span><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:7.0pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>For errors on the server =
side we do have the following: <o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>=
<pre><span lang=3DEN-US>&nbsp;&nbsp; =E2=80=9CThe error Response Code =
5.03 (Service Unavailable) is<o:p></o:p></span></pre><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
returned if the DOTS server has erred or is incapable of =
performing<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>&nbsp;&nbsp; the =
mitigation.&nbsp; As specified in [</span><span lang=3DFR =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a =
href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7252" title=3D"&quot;The =
Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP)&quot;"><span =
lang=3DEN-US>RFC7252</span></a></span><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>], 5.03 uses =
Max-Age Option<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New"'>&nbsp;&nbsp; to indicate the number of seconds after which to =
retry.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>=
<p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Implementations can send =
5.00, but how the client will react to the error code is =
implementation-specific. &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>=
<p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p=
><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Med<o:p></o:p></span></p><pr=
e><span =
lang=3DFR>_______________________________________________________________=
__________________________________________________________<o:p></o:p></sp=
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Hi all,=20

The change is now made to the github version: https://github.com/boucadair/=
draft-dots-telemetry.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De=A0: Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de
> mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
> Envoy=E9=A0: vendredi 26 juin 2020 14:48
> =C0=A0: dots@ietf.org
> Objet=A0: [Dots] 128-255 key value range for telemetry attributes
> (was RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-01.txt
>=20
> Hi all,
>=20
> We discussed yesterday the proposal to use 128-255 as
> comprehension-optional range for telemetry attributes.  The issue
> was initially discussed below.
>=20
> If we hear no objection, we will update the draft to implement
> this proposal. If implemented, the telemetry draft will be
> updating RFC8782, which is fine.
>=20
> We do have new 117 attributes in the telemetry spec, but we are
> considering reducing that list in compliance with RFC7951 rules.
>=20
> Cheers,
> Med
>=20
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De=A0: Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de
> > mohamed.boucadair@orange.com Envoy=E9=A0: lundi 3 f=E9vrier 2020 10:37
> =C0=A0:
> > Jon Shallow (supjps-ietf@jpshallow.com); dots@ietf.org Objet=A0:
> Re:
> > [Dots] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-01.txt
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > FYI, a review from Jon is available at:
> > https://github.com/boucadair/draft-
> > dots-telemetry/raw/master/DOTS%20Telemetry%2001-rev%20Jon-
> res%20Med.do
> > cx
> >
> > -02 will integrate almost all comments from  Jon. Please find
> below
> > some points we would like to hear more from the working group:
> >
> > (1) key value range for telemetry: Jon raised this point "These
> keys
> > requires 3 bytes - and telemetry information is going to be
> difficult
> > to fit into a packet.  I appreciate that comprehension-required
> Is for
> > numbers less than 0x8000 - perhaps the comprehension-required
> range is
> > reduced and also has a section higher up so the total of 0x8000
> still
> > stands so less bytes can be used here."
> >
> >    +----------------------+-------+-------+------------+--------
> -------+
> >    | Parameter Name       | CBOR  | CBOR  | Change     |
> Specification |
> >    |                      | Key   | Major | Controller |
> Document(s)   |
> >    |                      | Value | Type  |            |
> |
> >    +----------------------+-------+-------+------------+--------
> -------+
> >    | ietf-dots-signal-cha | 32776 |   5   |    IESG    |
> [RFCXXXX]   |
> >    | nnel:telemetry       |       |       |            |
> |
> >
> > Med: This is a major one. We need to assess the gain, but it is
> > possible in theory to update our assignment policies and
> reassign,
> > e.g., 128-255 range to be comprehension-optional (specific for
> > telemetry). This would mean that the telemetry spec will be
> tagged as updating the base signal channel spec.
> > We need more discussion.
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Elwyn, thanks for your review. All, thanks for your responses. I entered =
a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Jul 5, 2020, at 9:07 PM, Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> =
wrote:
>=20
> Hi,=20
>=20
> Thank you for the feed backs. I fixed the comments on my local copy =
and will soon publish the updated version. Thank you very much for your =
time and I hope you are safe as well.
>=20
> Yours,=20
> Daniel
>=20
>=20
> On Fri, Jul 3, 2020 at 1:17 PM elwynd <elwynd@folly.org.uk =
<mailto:elwynd@folly.org.uk>> wrote:
> Hi, Daniel.
>=20
> Thanks for your response.=20
>=20
> The changes look good to me.  A couple of minor language improvements =
if I may suggest:
>=20
> s1, para 1: s/mitigations - which highly depends on a timely =
reaction/mitigations that are generally highly dependent on a timely =
reaction by the system./
>=20
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>
> s2, DDoS Mitigation Service: s/usually involve Service Level Agreement =
(SLA) that have to be met/usually involves a Service Level Agreement =
(SLA) that has to be met/
>=20
> <mglt>fixed</mglt>=20
> Paragraph just after Figure 4: s/various aspect/various aspects/
> <mglt>fixed</mglt>=20
>=20
> End of 4th paragraph after Figure 4: s/appropriated/appropriate/
>=20
> Otherwise this is all done.
>=20
> Hope you are keeping safe and well.
>=20
> Cheers,
> Elwyn
>=20
> Sent from Samsung tablet.
>=20
>=20
> -------- Original message --------
> From: Daniel Migault <mglt..ietf@gmail.com =
<mailto:mglt.ietf@gmail.com>>
> Date: 02/07/2020 22:28 (GMT+00:00)
> To: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com =
<mailto:elwynd@dial.pipex.com>>
> Cc: last-call@ietf.org <mailto:last-call@ietf.org>, "gen-art >> =
General area reviewing team" <gen-art@ietf.org =
<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>>, draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org =
<mailto:draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org>, dots <dots@ietf.org =
<mailto:dots@ietf.org>>
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Dots] Genart last call review of =
draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23
>=20
> Hi,=20
>=20
> Thank you for the review. These were helpful to us. I believe that all =
comments have been addressed in the version we just published. =20
> Please find more response regarding the comment inlined.=20
>=20
> Yours,=20
> Daniel=20
>=20
> On Wed, Jun 10, 2020 at 12:02 PM Elwyn Davies via Datatracker =
<noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>=20
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>=20
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>=20
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq =
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.
>=20
> Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2020-06-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>=20
> Summary:
> Ready wih some minor nits.
>=20
> Major issues:
> None
>=20
> Minor issues:
> None
>=20
> Nits/editorial comments:
> s1, para 1: Just a thought:  might be worth adding to the end of this =
para:
> "and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed is =
often of
> the essence".
>  <mglt>
>  I understand that the additional time is part of the reasons that =
degrade the efficacy but this is not the only reason. I propose to =
indicate that efficacity highly depends on an timely reaction as below:
>=20
> OLD
> This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,
> can degrade the efficacy of mitigations.
> NEW
> This greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,
> can degrade the efficacy of mitigations - which highly depends on  a =
timely reaction...=20
> </mglt>
>=20
> s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc =
which is
> referred to in s2: OLD:
>    This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
>    design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
> NEW
>    This document provides sample use cases that motivated the =
requirements
>    for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for the design =
of
>    those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].
> ENDS
> <mglt>
> I would consider the requirement as part of the process for the design =
of the protocol, but it is correct that requirements coudl be included. =
I propose the following change:
> OLD:
> This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the =
design of
> the DOTS protocols {{RFC8782}}{{RFC8783}}.
> NEW:
> This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the =
requirements {{?RFC8612}} and design of
> the DOTS protocols {{!RFC8782}}{{!RFC8783}}.
> </mglt>
>=20
> s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation =
Service
> Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.
>=20
>  <mglt> fixed. </mglt>
> s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:
> OLD:
>       Service subscriptions usually
>       involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met.
> NEW:
>       Each service subscription usually
>       involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to be met.
> ENDS
>=20
> <mglt> fixed.</mglt>
> =20
> s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you =
shouldn't
> have a redefinition here.
>=20
> <mglt> fixed. </mglt>=20
> s3.1, para 7: s/thought different/though different/
> <mglt>fixed</mglt>=20
>=20
> s3.1, 2nd set of bullets, that are below Fig 1: This woud be more =
elegant using
> (a), (b), etc as the bullet labels.
>=20
> <mglt>
> I could not find how to do list as a) b) using kramdow but I used an =
ordered list 1. 2. instead so a native list format is rendered.=20
> </mglt>=20
> =20
> s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text =
indicates
> that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.  Is this =
always
> the case or could the client request or the server provide a =
proportional
> response rather than an all or nothing response?
>=20
> <mglt>
> My understanding is that when the decision to mitigate is requested =
the ITP mitigates the traffic. As far as I know it is not currently =
envisioned to use DOTS for a kind of collaboration between the ITP and =
the local side, that is the local site performs 20 % of the attack while =
the ITP takes in charge the remaining 80 %. One reason is that it =
remains hard to express the capabilities involved to mitigate the =
attack. Note also that the capacity of the ITP may be capped by =
contract.  Overall the DOTS is more about delegating the mitigation as =
opposed to collaborative mitigation.
> </mglt>
> =20
> s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/
>=20
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>
> s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/
>=20
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>
> s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor =
various
> aspects of the network traffic/.
>=20
> <mglt> fixed</mglt>
> s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it's/it is/
>=20
>  <mglt>fixed</mglt>
> s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is =
overly
> specific.  Suggest adding 'for example'in at least one case or =
changing it to
> 'user interface'.
>=20
>  <mgl> I added the for example which seems closer to the most probable =
implementation.</mglt>
>=20
> s3.3, first para on page 11:
> OLD:
> to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.
> NEW:
> to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.
> ENDS
>=20
> <mglt>fixed</mglt>
> =20
> s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to =
change
> from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.  Please make it =
clear
> whether there is one or many.  If only one, then s/The orchestrator =
DOTS
> servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server =
returns this
> information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.
>=20
>  <mglt>good catch. There is only one server. we address this.</mglt>
>=20
> s3.3, last para s/like  requesting/such as requesting/
>=20
> <mglt>fixed.</mglt>
> =20
> s7:  This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have =
normative=20
> references.  Please combine all references into one refererences =
section.
>=20
>=20
> <mglt> I usually like standard document to be normative, but this is =
correct that for use cases, none of these document are necessary to be =
read to understand the document, so I will put all reference as =
informational</mglt>
> =20
>=20
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-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" =
class=3D"">Elwyn, thanks for your review. All, thanks for your =
responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.<div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Alissa</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""><div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">On Jul 5, 2020, at 9:07 PM, Daniel Migault &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:mglt.ietf@gmail.com" class=3D"">mglt.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt;=
 wrote:</div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D"">Hi,&nbsp;</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Thank you for the feed backs. I fixed =
the comments on my local copy and will soon publish the updated version. =
Thank you very much for your time and I hope you are safe as =
well.</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D"">Yours,&nbsp;<br class=3D"">Daniel</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><br class=3D""><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Fri, Jul 3, 2020 at 1:17 PM elwynd =
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:elwynd@folly.org.uk" =
class=3D"">elwynd@folly.org.uk</a>&gt; wrote:<br =
class=3D""></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px =
0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">Hi, Daniel.</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">Thanks for your =
response.&nbsp;</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">The changes look good to =
me.&nbsp; A couple of minor language improvements if I may =
suggest:</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">s1, para 1: s/mitigations - which highly depends =
on a timely reaction/mitigations that are generally highly dependent on =
a timely reaction by the system./</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><div=
 dir=3D"auto" class=3D""></div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">s2, DDoS =
Mitigation Service: s/usually involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that =
have to be met/usually involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has =
to be met/</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;&nbsp;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><div=
 dir=3D"auto" class=3D""></div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">Paragraph =
just after Figure 4: s/various aspect/various =
aspects/</div></div></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;&nbsp;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><div=
 dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div dir=3D"auto" =
class=3D"">End of 4th paragraph after Figure 4: =
s/appropriated/appropriate/</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">Otherwise this is all =
done.</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">Hope you are keeping safe and well.</div><div =
dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div dir=3D"auto" =
class=3D"">Cheers,</div><div dir=3D"auto" class=3D"">Elwyn</div><div =
dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
id=3D"gmail-m_-7274880773196282741composer_signature" dir=3D"auto" =
class=3D""><div style=3D"font-size:85%;color:rgb(87,87,87)" dir=3D"auto" =
class=3D"">Sent from Samsung tablet.</div></div><div dir=3D"auto" =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
style=3D"font-size: 100%;" dir=3D"auto" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">-------- Original message --------</div><div class=3D"">From: =
Daniel Migault &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mglt.ietf@gmail.com" =
target=3D"_blank" class=3D"">mglt..ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt; </div><div =
class=3D"">Date: 02/07/2020  22:28  (GMT+00:00) </div><div class=3D"">To: =
Elwyn Davies &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:elwynd@dial.pipex.com" =
target=3D"_blank" class=3D"">elwynd@dial.pipex.com</a>&gt; </div><div =
class=3D"">Cc: <a href=3D"mailto:last-call@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank" =
class=3D"">last-call@ietf.org</a>, "gen-art &gt;&gt; General area =
reviewing team" &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:gen-art@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank" =
class=3D"">gen-art@ietf.org</a>&gt;, <a =
href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank" =
class=3D"">draft-ietf-dots-use-cases.all@ietf.org</a>, dots &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:dots@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank" =
class=3D"">dots@ietf.org</a>&gt; </div><div class=3D"">Subject: Re: =
[Gen-art] [Dots] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23 =
</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div></div><div dir=3D"ltr" =
class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"">Hi,&nbsp;<div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Thank you for the review. These were =
helpful to us. I believe that all comments&nbsp;have been addressed in =
the version we just published.&nbsp;&nbsp;</div><div class=3D"">Please =
find more response regarding the comment inlined.&nbsp;</div><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Yours,&nbsp;<br =
class=3D"">Daniel&nbsp;</div></div><br class=3D""><div =
class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Wed, Jun =
10, 2020 at 12:02 PM Elwyn Davies via Datatracker &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank" =
class=3D"">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br class=3D""></div><blockquote=
 class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br =
class=3D"">
Review result: Ready with Nits<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area<br =
class=3D"">
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed<br =
class=3D"">
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.&nbsp; Please treat these comments =
just<br class=3D"">
like any other last call comments.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
For more information, please see the FAQ at<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
&lt;<a href=3D"https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq" =
rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank" =
class=3D"">https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq</a>&gt;.<br =
class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
Document: draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-23<br class=3D"">
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies<br class=3D"">
Review Date: 2020-06-10<br class=3D"">
IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-11<br class=3D"">
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
Summary:<br class=3D"">
Ready wih some minor nits.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
Major issues:<br class=3D"">
None<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
Minor issues:<br class=3D"">
None<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
Nits/editorial comments:<br class=3D"">
s1, para 1: Just a thought:&nbsp; might be worth adding to the end of =
this para:<br class=3D"">
"and increase the time for deployment in a situation where speed is =
often of<br class=3D"">
the essence".<br class=3D""></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div class=3D"">&nbsp;I understand =
that the additional time is part of the reasons that degrade the =
efficacy but this is not the only reason. I propose to indicate that =
efficacity highly depends on an timely reaction as below:</div><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">OLD<br class=3D"">This =
greatly increases operational complexity which, in turn,<br class=3D"">can=
 degrade the efficacy of mitigations.<br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D"">NEW</div><div class=3D"">This greatly increases operational =
complexity which, in turn,<br class=3D"">can degrade the efficacy of =
mitigations - which highly depends on&nbsp; a timely =
reaction...&nbsp;</div><div class=3D"">&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br class=3D"">
s1, last para: Suggest adding in reference to DOTS requirements doc =
which is<br class=3D"">
referred to in s2: OLD:<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp;This document provides sample use cases that provided input =
for the<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp;design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br =
class=3D"">
NEW<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp;This document provides sample use cases that motivated the =
requirements<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp;for the DOTS protocols [RFC8612] and provided input for the =
design of<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp;those protocols [RFC8782][RFC8783].<br class=3D"">
ENDS<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div =
class=3D"">I would consider the requirement as part of the process for =
the design of the protocol, but it is correct that requirements coudl be =
included. I propose the following change:</div><div =
class=3D"">OLD:</div><div class=3D"">This document provides sample use =
cases that provided input for the design of<br class=3D"">the DOTS =
protocols {{RFC8782}}{{RFC8783}}.<br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D"">NEW:</div><div class=3D"">This document provides sample use =
cases that provided input for the requirements {{?RFC8612}} and design =
of</div>the DOTS protocols {{!RFC8782}}{{!RFC8783}}.<div =
class=3D"">&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br class=3D"">
s2: For more logical ordering, move the definition of DDos Mitigation =
Service<br class=3D"">
Provider after definition of DDoS Mitigation Service.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mglt&gt; fixed. =
&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px =
0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s2, DDoS Mitigation Service:<br class=3D"">
OLD:<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Service subscriptions usually<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to =
be met.<br class=3D"">
NEW:<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Each service subscription usually<br class=3D"">
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has =
to be met.<br class=3D"">
ENDS<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt; =
fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div class=3D"">&nbsp;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1, para 1: The abbreviation ITP has already been defined so you =
shouldn't<br class=3D"">
have a redefinition here.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt; fixed. =
&lt;/mglt&gt;&nbsp;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1, para 7: s/thought different/though different/<br =
class=3D""></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;&nbsp;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br class=3D"">
s3.1, 2nd set of bullets, that are below Fig 1: This woud be more =
elegant using<br class=3D"">
(a), (b), etc as the bullet labels.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div =
class=3D"">I could not find how to do list as a) b) using =
kramdow&nbsp;but I used an ordered list&nbsp;1. 2. instead so a native =
list format is rendered.&nbsp;</div><div =
class=3D"">&lt;/mglt&gt;&nbsp;</div><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.1: Comment (not being familiar with the DOTS proposals): The text =
indicates<br class=3D"">
that the ITP mitigation effort is an all or nothing buisness.&nbsp; Is =
this always<br class=3D"">
the case or could the client request or the server provide a =
proportional<br class=3D"">
response rather than an all or nothing response?<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;</div><div =
class=3D"">My understanding is that when the decision to mitigate is =
requested the ITP mitigates the traffic. As far as I know it is not =
currently&nbsp;envisioned to use DOTS for a kind of collaboration =
between the ITP and the local side, that is the local site performs 20 % =
of the attack while the ITP takes in charge the remaining 80 %. One =
reason is that it remains hard to express the capabilities involved =
to&nbsp;mitigate the attack. Note also that the capacity of the ITP may =
be capped by contract.&nbsp; Overall the DOTS is more about delegating =
the mitigation as opposed to collaborative mitigation.</div><div =
class=3D"">&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div class=3D"">&nbsp;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.2, last sentence of 2nd para after Fig 2: s/These exact/The exact/<br =
class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, para 2: s/various information/various sets of information/<br =
class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, para after Figure 4: s/monitor various network traffic/monitor =
various<br class=3D"">
aspects of the network traffic/.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt; =
fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, 2nd para after Figure 4: s/it's/it is/<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, last five paras: Calling out a web interface specifically is =
overly<br class=3D"">
specific.&nbsp; Suggest adding 'for example'in at least one case or =
changing it to<br class=3D"">
'user interface'.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mgl&gt; I added =
the for example which seems closer to the most probable =
implementation.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px =
0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, first para on page 11:<br class=3D"">
OLD:<br class=3D"">
to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate.<br class=3D"">
NEW:<br class=3D"">
to infer, elaborate and coordinate the appropriate DDoS Mitigation.<br =
class=3D"">
ENDS<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;fixed&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, 3rd and subsequent paras on page 11: The orchestrator appears to =
change<br class=3D"">
from one DOTS server to a plurality at this point.&nbsp; Please make it =
clear<br class=3D"">
whether there is one or many.&nbsp; If only one, then s/The orchestrator =
DOTS<br class=3D"">
servers returns this information back/The orchestrator DOTS server =
returns this<br class=3D"">
information/ and s/servers/server/ subsequently.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&nbsp;&lt;mglt&gt;good =
catch. There is only one server. we =
address&nbsp;this.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px =
0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s3.3, last para s/like&nbsp; requesting/such as requesting/<br class=3D"">=

<br class=3D""></blockquote><div =
class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt;fixed.&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div =
class=3D"">&nbsp;</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s7:&nbsp; This is an informational document and, as such, cannot have =
normative <br class=3D"">
references.&nbsp; Please combine all references into one refererences =
section.<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D"">
<br class=3D""></blockquote><div class=3D"">&lt;mglt&gt; I usually like =
standard document to be normative, but this is correct that for use =
cases, none of these document are necessary to be read to understand the =
document, so I will put all reference as =
informational&lt;/mglt&gt;</div><div class=3D"">&nbsp;</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br class=3D"">
_______________________________________________<br class=3D"">
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</blockquote></div><br clear=3D"all" class=3D""><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div>-- <br class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div =
dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div class=3D"">Daniel Migault<br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Ericsson</div></div></div></div>
</div></blockquote></div><br clear=3D"all" class=3D""><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div>-- <br class=3D""><div dir=3D"ltr" =
class=3D"gmail_signature"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D""><div =
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Distributed Denial-of-Service Open Threat Signaling (DOTS) Telemetry
        Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
                          Tirumaleswar Reddy
                          Ehud Doron
                          Meiling Chen
                          Jon Shallow
	Filename        : draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-10.txt
	Pages           : 109
	Date            : 2020-07-10

Abstract:
   This document aims to enrich DOTS signal channel protocol with
   various telemetry attributes allowing optimal Distributed Denial-of-
   Service attack mitigation.  It specifies the normal traffic baseline
   and attack traffic telemetry attributes a DOTS client can convey to
   its DOTS server in the mitigation request, the mitigation status
   telemetry attributes a DOTS server can communicate to a DOTS client,
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   the mitigator to choose the DDoS mitigation techniques and perform
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Hi all,=20

This version integrates the inputs received in the interim and the three is=
sues raised in the interop and then discussed on the list. Note that the do=
cument updates 8782 as we are changing some of the IANA assignment policies=
: 128-255 range for comprehension-optional attribute.=20

Also, this version addresses the yangdoctors review. That is mainly use "sx=
:structure" rather than containers. The internal structure of the telemetry=
 message is not modified. The new design requires a ** normative dependency=
 ** on the 8782-yang-update draft. That issue is currently worked out with =
the chairs/Ben.=20

We also added a NEW section called 'Error Handling" which is basically summ=
arizing what we do already have in the specs. This section is meant to prov=
ide more visibility on error handling.=20

Some other edits are made to enhance the readability of the document and fi=
x nits.=20

This version is ready for the WGLC.

Cheers,
Med

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> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of
> the IETF.
>=20
>         Title           : Distributed Denial-of-Service Open
> Threat Signaling (DOTS) Telemetry
>         Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
>                           Tirumaleswar Reddy
>                           Ehud Doron
>                           Meiling Chen
>                           Jon Shallow
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-10.txt
> 	Pages           : 109
> 	Date            : 2020-07-10
>=20
> Abstract:
>    This document aims to enrich DOTS signal channel protocol with
>    various telemetry attributes allowing optimal Distributed
> Denial-of-
>    Service attack mitigation.  It specifies the normal traffic
> baseline
>    and attack traffic telemetry attributes a DOTS client can
> convey to
>    its DOTS server in the mitigation request, the mitigation
> status
>    telemetry attributes a DOTS server can communicate to a DOTS
> client,
>    and the mitigation efficacy telemetry attributes a DOTS client
> can
>    communicate to a DOTS server.  The telemetry attributes can
> assist
>    the mitigator to choose the DDoS mitigation techniques and
> perform
>    optimal DDoS attack mitigation.
>=20
>=20
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dots-telemetry/
>=20
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-10
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The IESG has approved the following document:
- 'Use cases for DDoS Open Threat Signaling'
  (draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-25.txt) as Informational RFC

This document is the product of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling Working Group.

The IESG contact persons are Benjamin Kaduk and Roman Danyliw.

A URL of this Internet Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dots-use-cases/




Technical Summary

This document specifies current use cases in DDoS mitigation that
the DOTS WG protocols intend to addresses.  These use cases describe
the interactions expected between the DOTS components as well as
DOTS messaging exchanges

Working Group Summary

The WG has reached consensus to publish this protocol specification as
an Informational document  (the thread discussing this decision can be
found here:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dots/l0phQdpmSc4j6XhfxUyx-lrrDzk)
It has been subjected to substantial review from the community of interest.
Publication of this draft has been intentionally delayed to ensure that the
described behavior is consistent with the final signal and data channel
specifications (RFCs 8782/8783).

Document Quality

This draft has seen extensive review from the WG and there is a
belief that it is ready for publication, and that the use cases chosen
to be reflected are important and representative.

Personnel

The document shepherd is Valery Smyslov.
The responsible Area Director is Benjamin Kaduk.


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Reviewer: Nagendra Nainar
Review result: Has Nits

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts per guidelines in RFC5706.

Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Overall Summary:

This draft is a standard track proposing telemetry attributes for DOTS signal
channel (RFC8782) that can be exchanged between DOTS client and server. The
draft clarifies that these attributes are not mandatory. As these telemetry
attributes are extensions of the existing DOTS signal channel and it already
clarifies that they are not mandatory, this draft does not introduce any
backward compatibility issues.

The draft also proposes high level error handling mechanism for the telemetry
attributes defined in this document.

Overall this is a well written document. Some ambiguity observed that needs
attention are listed below:

--> The below reference seems to be wrong. RFC7252 is COAP and not CBOR. I
think it should be RFC7049.

"Telemetry messages exchanged between DOTS agents are serialized using
   Concise Binary Object Representation (CBOR) [RFC7252]"

--> An early reference to RFC7950 may be useful in Section 4.5.

--> tsid seems to be a terminology introduced in this draft. It will be good to
add this in the terminology section. Same for tmid.

--> Section 6.1.2 states that a PUT request with link capacity set to 0 to
delete a link when the other link is active. What happens if a PUT request is
sent with all the links set to a capacity of 0?. Will it be treated as error or
as "DELETE"?.

--> The DMS mentioned below can be expanded or included in the terminology
section. I cant find it in RFC8287 as well.

The 'total-attack-traffic' attribute (Figure 27) conveys the total
   attack traffic identified by the DOTS client domain's DMS (or DDoS

--> I understand that Pre-or-Ongoing-Mitigation attribute can be signaled by
DOTS client or Server. Can this be used to report an ongoing attack to the
server?. If so, what should be the value set in the end-time field?.

--> I am skipping the YANG module as I noticed that YANGDOCTOR review is
already done.

Few nits:

s/If no target clause in included in the request/If no target clause is
included in the request




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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Distributed Denial-of-Service Open Threat Signaling (DOTS) Telemetry
        Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
                          Tirumaleswar Reddy
                          Ehud Doron
                          Meiling Chen
                          Jon Shallow
	Filename        : draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-11.txt
	Pages           : 108
	Date            : 2020-07-27

Abstract:
   This document aims to enrich DOTS signal channel protocol with
   various telemetry attributes allowing optimal Distributed Denial-of-
   Service attack mitigation.  It specifies the normal traffic baseline
   and attack traffic telemetry attributes a DOTS client can convey to
   its DOTS server in the mitigation request, the mitigation status
   telemetry attributes a DOTS server can communicate to a DOTS client,
   and the mitigation efficacy telemetry attributes a DOTS client can
   communicate to a DOTS server.  The telemetry attributes can assist
   the mitigator to choose the DDoS mitigation techniques and perform
   optimal DDoS attack mitigation.


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Hi all,=20

The main change in this version is to point to RFC8782bis instead of 8782.=
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Also, this version addresses the opsdir review: add some terms in the termi=
nology section and a call out the behavior when all links in a PUT request =
are set to 0.

Now that the yangdoctors and opsdir reviews are addressed, we are ready for=
 the WGLC.=20=20

Cheers,
Med

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> Objet=A0: [Dots] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-11.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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> This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of the
> IETF.
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>         Title           : Distributed Denial-of-Service Open Threat
> Signaling (DOTS) Telemetry
>         Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
>                           Tirumaleswar Reddy
>                           Ehud Doron
>                           Meiling Chen
>                           Jon Shallow
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-11.txt
> 	Pages           : 108
> 	Date            : 2020-07-27
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> Abstract:
>    This document aims to enrich DOTS signal channel protocol with
>    various telemetry attributes allowing optimal Distributed Denial-
> of-
>    Service attack mitigation.  It specifies the normal traffic
> baseline
>    and attack traffic telemetry attributes a DOTS client can convey to
>    its DOTS server in the mitigation request, the mitigation status
>    telemetry attributes a DOTS server can communicate to a DOTS
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I will be presenting DOTS overview in SAAG WG meeting today https://www.iet=
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