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[Edit: I asked a question below about what happens if you dereference a
block, and find the URL points to something other than what you expected.
On reflection, I should expand that  to ask how dereferencing errors
should be handled in general.] 

This draft was clearly lots of work; thanks for making it happen.
However, I have a number of comments:

The shepherd’s writeup indicates that no XML or media type reviews were
required—but this document contains a lot of XML (examples and schema),
 and a number of media type registrations. Is that an error in the
writeup, 
or have those reviews been skipped?

This draft implicitly assumes that the emergency calls are signaled with
SIP. I don't dispute that assumption, but I think it should it's worth a
paragraph stating it explicitly.

-- section 2, 2nd paragraph:
Are there any considerations for services provided with no "company" or
"service provider" behind them? For example, lets say an individual
hosts
some VoIP related services for her own use (e.g. a SIP registrar, maybe
a
stun/turn server,etc) Are those in scope? I'm guessing not, since they
would
be unlikely to be registered with NENA, but it would be worth saying
that
explicitly.

-- 3: 
Is there a critical need for the bit about "certain private-use
situations"? That seems like license for abuse, without more elaboration
about "prexisting relationship" and "privacy issues addressed".

-- 4, third paragraph from end: 
Can you elaborate on what you mean by "at
the same time"? Does that mean for the same call? Occurring in some
interval
of time ?

-- 4.1.4 
Is a provider limited to one type? If the same provider provides
services in multiple categories,  would they create multiple instances?

-- 4.1.5: 
Do you intend 24x7 support to be a prerequisite to be a data
provider?

-- 4.1.7, Description: "Although multiple <vcard> elements may be
contained
in a structure only one <vcard> element SHOULD be provided.  If more
than
one appears, the first SHOULD be used."
When might it be reasonable to violate either of these SHOULDs? If the
receiver should only look at the first entry why are multiple entries
allowed at all?

Also, it seems like there are vcard fields that are not useful to this
purpose and might still have privacy implications. Do we really need
people
to send everything?

-- 4.2.1, How Used..., last sentence: 
The term "wireless "needs more
precision if you're going to use it in a 2119 expression. With a Wi-Fi
handset connected to a wired Internet service count as wireless? How
about a
cordless phone?

-- Figure 5: 
-Can the list of wireless types change over time? 
-I don't understand the full definition of "temp". Are these terms
defined somewhere?
-Do you really want "POTS" vs "PSTN"? 
-Is VoIP intentionally limited to OTT services?

-- 4.3.3: 
What if the device model designation is not a number?

-- 5, list item 1: "The "purpose" parameter also indicates the kind of
data
(by its MIME subtype) that is available at the URI" 
What happens if the URL points to something other than the indicated
thing?

- list item 2, last sentence: 
I gathered this section was an overview, since
you have detailed procedures later. Please consider moving 2119 language
to
that section.

-- Section 5, last paragraph: "only blocks in the registry are permitted
to
be sent using the mechanisms specified in this document"
Are implementations supposed to check the registry at run time? (Also,
that
language sounds like it should be normative.)

-- 5.1, last paragraph: "More than one Call-Info header field with a
purpose
value starting with ’EmergencyCallData’ can be expected, but at least
one
MUST be provided.  The device MUST provide one if it knows no service
provider is in the path of the call."
What's the scope of the first MUST? Emergency calls? Is it possible the
device doesn't know whether there is a service provider in the path?
Should
this say it MUST insert unless it knows there is a service provider in
tHe
path?

-- 8:
It might be worth discussing the potential harm done by a malicious
proxy
modifying a data element, or a compromised data source return incorrect
information when dereferencing a URL.

The first paragraph REQUIRES verification of requester credentials, but
does
specify the form of those credentials. Subsequent text talks about
client-certs and PKI verification. Are other forms of credentials
allows?
(HTTP-digest, application level logins, etc). If client-certs are
required,
please say that explicitly.

- "PSAPs and responder agencies SHOULD deploy a PKI " 
When might they not? What if they don't?

- "emergency services authorities could obtain a credential from the DNS
entry of the domain" 
Can you elaborate on that or cite something?

- paragraph starting with "Much of the information supplied by service
providers and devices is private and confidential":
Seems like that should go in the privacy considerations. (And probably
also
the intro.)

-- section 10: 
Many of the registry policies require experts to access
whether an organization might be "legitimate" or "relevant". Are these
reasonable expectations on the DEs? (I don't know the answer.)

Nits and Editorial Comments:

-- 4.2.1, Description: Currently, the only valid entries are...
Current as of when?  I suggest "The initially valid entries are..."

-- 4.2.1, How Used... : "... service provider does not know ..." 
Does not know...what?  (That's part of a long, convoluted sentence.
Please consider
breaking it into simpler sentences.)

"... it is known to be valuable." 
Known by whom?

-- 4.3.1, Description: "It is possible to receive two Additional Data
Associated with a Call data structures,..." (Occurs in several places.) 
The naming is confusing. It's easy to read "additional data associated
with..."
as it's plain English meaning, rather than as a name. I suggest doing
something more distinctive than capital letters. Perhaps quotes, or even
an
abbreviation.

-- 4.3.7: That seems odd for this to be a subsection of the device
information function.

-- section 5: 
It seems awkard to use a numbered list for elements that are
close to a page long each. This forces each to be a single, overlong
paragraph. Please consider subsections.

-- section 5, list item 2: "circumstances about the provision of the
location"
 I'm not sure I understand the meaning of "provision" in this
context. 
- Sentence starting with: "When the access network provider" 
This sentence provides context information that would have been useful to
have at
the start of the section.

-- 5.4, 2nd paragraph: 
I think people are going to be confused and look for
"by-reference" in 3204 or 3459. It might be worth re-citing 5621.

--10:

Some sections reference tables from other sections, and some include the
tables directly. It would be nice to be consistent, one way or the other.



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Hi Ben,

Thanks for your comments. One note below.

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On 1 Sep 2015, at 12:01, Alissa Cooper wrote:

> Hi Ben,
>
> Thanks for your comments. One note below.
>
>> On Sep 1, 2015, at 7:42 AM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
>>
>> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Yes
>>
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>>
>> [Edit: I asked a question below about what happens if you dereference 
>> a
>> block, and find the URL points to something other than what you 
>> expected.
>> On reflection, I should expand that  to ask how dereferencing errors
>> should be handled in general.]
>>
>> This draft was clearly lots of work; thanks for making it happen.
>> However, I have a number of comments:
>>
>> The shepherd’s writeup indicates that no XML or media type reviews 
>> were
>> required—but this document contains a lot of XML (examples and 
>> schema),
>> and a number of media type registrations. Is that an error in the
>> writeup,
>> or have those reviews been skipped?
>
> I asked about this in my AD review and I believe Marc did these after 
> submitting the write-up and the write-up did not then get updated. 
> Marc is on vacation this week so he may not be able to confirm until 
> he gets back.
>

On digging through old email, I see evidence that he did that for the 
XML parts. Do you know if there was a MIME media type review? I guess 
IANA will kick off a final review before registration?

> Alissa


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> On digging through old email, I see evidence that he did that for the XML
> parts. Do you know if there was a MIME media type review? I guess IANA will
> kick off a final review before registration?

No, they won't.  Media types in IETF Standards Track documents no
longer need expert review.  I've been reviewing this document today
(will post my comments soon), and find the media type registrations to
be mostly OK (I have to check on character encoding things).  If I had
questions, I'd ask someone to post to the media-types list for review
there... which is recommended, but not required.  I don't have
questions, so I'm not going to push for that.

Barry


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On 1 Sep 2015, at 15:49, Barry Leiba wrote:

>> On digging through old email, I see evidence that he did that for the 
>> XML
>> parts. Do you know if there was a MIME media type review? I guess 
>> IANA will
>> kick off a final review before registration?
>
> No, they won't.  Media types in IETF Standards Track documents no
> longer need expert review.  I've been reviewing this document today
> (will post my comments soon), and find the media type registrations to
> be mostly OK (I have to check on character encoding things).  If I had
> questions, I'd ask someone to post to the media-types list for review
> there... which is recommended, but not required.  I don't have
> questions, so I'm not going to push for that.
>

Okay, I didn't realize we had changed that requirement. For the record, 
I didn't find anything in the media-type registrations that raised 
questions.

Ben.


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I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to
have the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG 
already did that.)

(1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not
sure that's a good option.  I think the data
minimisation recommendations argued for in RFC6973 and
RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For example,
saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in
any non-emergency call without explicit user
permission on a per-call basis or something similar?
I have to admit I'm nervous that defining all of these
may mean that some UA somewhere starts sending some of
them in other calls without asking. A restriction
along those lines would also be more in line with
webrtc too perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in
the WG, having considered those privacy issues - was
it? Either way, would adding such a "MUST NOT except
if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of the
kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.

(2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the
registries here should require more than expert
review. Extensibility in dealing with what will
inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data structures
that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to
perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime.
The document itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding
new kinds of data here can be counter productive for
emergency call handling, so being more conservative in
what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd like to
suggest we require standards track for extensions.
The following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some
related arguments (but of course has no standing in
the IETF so is just offered as a way to avoid
repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to
authority.)

   [1]
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00


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- abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
in the abstract

- intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not
contact lists? proximity of friends? That (or
inferring as much) seems to me to be going too far, if
applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that this
could be extended in future by other standards-track
specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)

- intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not
relevant to a PSAP. 

- figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest 
deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station 
and many other kinds of building? There may be some 
country specific issue or technical here, but labelling 
that with "prison" seems inappropriate to me. 

- 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can
you try explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was
possible to tempt an implementation, so the language
there could be improved for sure:-)

- section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think
provisioning the PKI for such a thing is easily done
these days and is rightly not optional. It might be
useful to say that TLS here needs to follow BCP195.  I
agree with the earlier comment that you should be
clear as to when mutually authenticated TLS is
required. The secdir review [2] also raised similar
issues and it'd be good to see responses to that too.
(Yes, that review only arrived today so it's entirely
reasonable to not have responded so far.)

   [2]
https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html

- section 8: the sizes of the various additional data
items here could be characteristic and leak value
information regardless of TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add
a warning that these may enable relatively simple
traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if someone
had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability?
This is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon
image size was usable to identify 30+% of contacts in
one social network even over TLS, but before the
provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes. 

- Thanks for section 9. Good job.



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One comment-comment:

On 1 Sep 2015, at 18:47, Stephen Farrell wrote:

> - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest
> deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station
> and many other kinds of building? There may be some
> country specific issue or technical here, but labelling
> that with "prison" seems inappropriate to me.

Hopefully the authors have more specifics, but my understanding is, at 
least in the US, prison inmate phone systems get very special handling. 
I can't speak for other countries.


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Hiya,

On 02/09/15 02:09, Ben Campbell wrote:
> 
> Hopefully the authors have more specifics, but my understanding is, at
> least in the US, prison inmate phone systems get very special handling.
> I can't speak for other countries.

Sure. And many other countries have many other oddities no doubt.
I'd not be surprised if emergency call from mobiles in pubs late
in the evening were treated a bit differently for example in many
places.

So I guess I'm suggesting to isolate the technical aspects of that
handling and put one or more descriptors for those into the table.

Assigning very country specific meanings to generic terms is
probably not a great plan.

S.


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Two things are incorrect and need fixing:

---- In Section 4, you have "tel" and "TYPE", and "property" and
"parameter" reversed in the explanation about the "main" parameter value.
 The sentence is also confusingly worded.  Try this (and see also my
comments on this bit, below):

NEW
   This document adds a new parameter value called "main" to the
   "TYPE" parameter of the "tel" property.
END

---- In Section 6, there are problems in the MIME structure in the
examples (figures 16 and 17).

1. The XML content should be indented at least as much as the SIP
headers, so you should either make sure that all XML lines are indented
at least 6 characters, or you should make the SIP headers be indented
only by 3.

2. There should not be a blank line between the Content-Type and
Content-Length headers.

3. There should not be a blank line after each boundary line; the part
headers should start immediately, as the first blank line ends the
headers.

4. There should be a blank line between the Content-Disposition header
and the XML content; that blank line ends the part headers and signals
the start of the part body.

5. The intermediate boundary lines should not have the trailing "--";
that's reserved for the ending boundary.  The intermediates should all be
"--boundary1".

6. Figure 17 is missing the ending boundary, "--boundary1--", at the very
end of the figure.


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Throughout the document:
The current term is "media type", not "MIME type".  It would be good if
you can change that throughout the document.

-- Section 3 --
A tiny, tiny point: I don't think the MAY in the last sentence is really
a 2119 key word, and suggest making it lower case.

-- Section 4 --

   In an xCard there is no way to
   specify a "main" telephone number.  These numbers are useful to
   emergency responders who are called to a large enterprise.  This
   document adds a new property value to the "tel" property of the TYPE
   parameter called "main".

This doesn't explain sufficiently what you're after.  I initially
wondered why the PREF parameter didn't give you what you need (PREF=1,
this is my main phone number).  It was only when I read the registration
in Section 10 that I understood.  I'd suggest a value other than "main",
but I can't think of one right away.  At the least, please add more text
here to explain what you mean by "main".

I'll also note that none of the examples include the new "main" parameter
value.  Given that you're creating the value, it might be good to show it
in use.

-- Section 4.1.5 --

      The Data
      Provider Contact URI SHOULD be a TEL URI [RFC3966] in E.164 format
      fully specified with country code.  If a TEL URI is not available,
      it MAY be a generic SIP URI.

2119 key word problem @1: "you SHOULD do X, but you MAY do Y instead." 
MAY contradicts the SHOULD.  It's not so bad here because your "if"
restricts the MAY (Section 5.3 isn't that way; see below), but I'd prefer
it if you'd change it to something like "If a TEL URI is not available, a
generic SIP URI is acceptable."  Or perhaps "A generic SIP URI is
acceptable only if a TEL URI is not available," which is a little
stronger.

-- Section 4.4.2 --

      If more than one <tel> property is provided, a parameter from the
      vCard Property Value registry MUST be specified on each <tel>.

Do you really want that MUST, rather than a SHOULD?  Are you really
saying that if there are multiple phone numbers but I don't know their
TYPE values, it's better to pick one and send only that one than it is to
send you all of them just in case?

-- Section 5.1 --

   The data may also be supplied by value in any SIP request or response
   method that is permitted to contain a body (i.e., not a BYE request).

Is BYE the only SIP request that can't contain a body?  Or should that be
"e.g."?  (I'm asking; I don't know the answer.)

-- Section 5.3 --

   It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
   this document by reference, but they MAY provide the data by value.

Here's the SHOULD/MAY problem without an "if" to mitigate it.  In this
case, I suggest explaining:

NEW
   It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
   this document by reference.  While it's permissible to provide the
   data by value, this can expose private information [and/or whatever
   other explanation].
END

-- Section 10.1 --
Thanks for providing guidance to the expert reviewers; that's really
helpful.

-- Section 11 --
Is the comma in "Christian, Militeau" spurious?

-- Appendix A --
You appear to have turned the RELAX NG schema from RFC 6351 into an XML
schema and put it here, but then labelled it as informational -- a hedge,
I guess, in case there's a mistake in this version.  Why does it need to
be included here?  And how much review has it actually had, to make sure
that there weren't any mistakes in the conversion?



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On 02/09/15 15:52, Rosen, Brian wrote:
> I’m okay with the MUST NOT except, and I can imagine other uses for
> these that will work fine if we write a document that explains them.

Cool, should be relatively easy to work out words if everyone
agrees on that.

> 
> I’m strongly against standards track for extensions.  There are a
> number of organizations who have expertise that need to be able to
> define the data.  We can’t be experts in all things.  An example is
> that we’re going to extend for medical data useful to a first
> responder.  Clearly has major privacy issues, but we’re not the
> experts in that, and those that are don’t write RFCs.  NENA, the
> 9-1-1 organization in North America is working on extensions for
> location related data, and also knows 10X more about location data
> for emergency response than IETF does.  We need to let the experts do
> their jobs.

Fair point. If we had a way to say "IETF standards-track or a standard
from an emergency services SDO" I'd be fine with that. I don't think we
do have a way to say that though, other than by writing guidance in
the IANA considerations section to that effect. Maybe someone who is
better at IANA minutiae can figure out a way to get that effect?

Cheers,
S.



> 
> Brian
> 
>> On Sep 1, 2015, at 4:47 PM, Stephen Farrell
>> <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
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DISCUSS:
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>> 
I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>> here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to have
>> the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG already did
>> that.)
>> 
>> (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not sure that's a
>> good option.  I think the data minimisation recommendations argued
>> for in RFC6973 and RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For
>> example, saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in any
>> non-emergency call without explicit user permission on a per-call
>> basis or something similar? I have to admit I'm nervous that
>> defining all of these may mean that some UA somewhere starts
>> sending some of them in other calls without asking. A restriction 
>> along those lines would also be more in line with webrtc too
>> perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in the WG, having considered
>> those privacy issues - was it? Either way, would adding such a
>> "MUST NOT except if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of
>> the kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.
>> 
>> (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the registries here
>> should require more than expert review. Extensibility in dealing
>> with what will inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data
>> structures that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to 
>> perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime. The document
>> itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding new kinds of data here
>> can be counter productive for emergency call handling, so being
>> more conservative in what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd
>> like to suggest we require standards track for extensions. The
>> following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some related arguments
>> (but of course has no standing in the IETF so is just offered as a
>> way to avoid repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to 
>> authority.)
>> 
>> [1] 
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00
>>
>>
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>> 
- abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>> in the abstract
>> 
>> - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not contact lists?
>> proximity of friends? That (or inferring as much) seems to me to be
>> going too far, if applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that
>> this could be extended in future by other standards-track 
>> specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)
>> 
>> - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not relevant to a PSAP.
>> 
>> 
>> - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest deleting
>> it. If not, why not add hospital, power station and many other
>> kinds of building? There may be some country specific issue or
>> technical here, but labelling that with "prison" seems
>> inappropriate to me.
>> 
>> - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can you try
>> explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was possible to tempt an
>> implementation, so the language there could be improved for
>> sure:-)
>> 
>> - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think provisioning the
>> PKI for such a thing is easily done these days and is rightly not
>> optional. It might be useful to say that TLS here needs to follow
>> BCP195.  I agree with the earlier comment that you should be clear
>> as to when mutually authenticated TLS is required. The secdir
>> review [2] also raised similar issues and it'd be good to see
>> responses to that too. (Yes, that review only arrived today so it's
>> entirely reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>> 
>> [2] 
>> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html
>> 
>> - section 8: the sizes of the various additional data items here
>> could be characteristic and leak value information regardless of
>> TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add a warning that these may enable
>> relatively simple traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if
>> someone had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability? This
>> is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon image size was usable
>> to identify 30+% of contacts in one social network even over TLS,
>> but before the provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.
>> 
>> - Thanks for section 9. Good job.
>> 
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On 02/09/15 16:09, Rosen, Brian wrote:
> “Document Required” and “Expert Review” with guidance to the expert?

Yeah that might be best I guess, if the guidance says something
the equivalent of "standards-track or a specification from a
<recognized?> emergency services SDO"

Do I recall right that this draft already sets up one registry that
essentially lists that kind of emergency services SDO? If so, then
an option might be to require that the specification be from one
of those and to require IESG approval for getting added to that
registry. We have a similar sort of setup for SDOs that do some
media type stuff, so this isn't that innovative, if the list of
relevant SDOs is likely smallish and stable.

Cheers,
S.


> 
> Brian
> 
>> On Sep 2, 2015, at 7:57 AM, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
>>
>>
>>
>> On 02/09/15 15:52, Rosen, Brian wrote:
>>> I’m okay with the MUST NOT except, and I can imagine other uses for
>>> these that will work fine if we write a document that explains them.
>>
>> Cool, should be relatively easy to work out words if everyone
>> agrees on that.
>>
>>>
>>> I’m strongly against standards track for extensions.  There are a
>>> number of organizations who have expertise that need to be able to
>>> define the data.  We can’t be experts in all things.  An example is
>>> that we’re going to extend for medical data useful to a first
>>> responder.  Clearly has major privacy issues, but we’re not the
>>> experts in that, and those that are don’t write RFCs.  NENA, the
>>> 9-1-1 organization in North America is working on extensions for
>>> location related data, and also knows 10X more about location data
>>> for emergency response than IETF does.  We need to let the experts do
>>> their jobs.
>>
>> Fair point. If we had a way to say "IETF standards-track or a standard
>> from an emergency services SDO" I'd be fine with that. I don't think we
>> do have a way to say that though, other than by writing guidance in
>> the IANA considerations section to that effect. Maybe someone who is
>> better at IANA minutiae can figure out a way to get that effect?
>>
>> Cheers,
>> S.
>>
>>
>>
>>>
>>> Brian
>>>
>>>> On Sep 1, 2015, at 4:47 PM, Stephen Farrell
>>>> <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for 
>>>> draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Discuss
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>> DISCUSS:
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>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>> I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>>>> here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to have
>>>> the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG already did
>>>> that.)
>>>>
>>>> (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not sure that's a
>>>> good option.  I think the data minimisation recommendations argued
>>>> for in RFC6973 and RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For
>>>> example, saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in any
>>>> non-emergency call without explicit user permission on a per-call
>>>> basis or something similar? I have to admit I'm nervous that
>>>> defining all of these may mean that some UA somewhere starts
>>>> sending some of them in other calls without asking. A restriction 
>>>> along those lines would also be more in line with webrtc too
>>>> perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in the WG, having considered
>>>> those privacy issues - was it? Either way, would adding such a
>>>> "MUST NOT except if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of
>>>> the kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.
>>>>
>>>> (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the registries here
>>>> should require more than expert review. Extensibility in dealing
>>>> with what will inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data
>>>> structures that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to 
>>>> perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime. The document
>>>> itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding new kinds of data here
>>>> can be counter productive for emergency call handling, so being
>>>> more conservative in what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd
>>>> like to suggest we require standards track for extensions. The
>>>> following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some related arguments
>>>> (but of course has no standing in the IETF so is just offered as a
>>>> way to avoid repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to 
>>>> authority.)
>>>>
>>>> [1] 
>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>> COMMENT: 
>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>> - abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>>>> in the abstract
>>>>
>>>> - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not contact lists?
>>>> proximity of friends? That (or inferring as much) seems to me to be
>>>> going too far, if applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that
>>>> this could be extended in future by other standards-track 
>>>> specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)
>>>>
>>>> - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not relevant to a PSAP.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest deleting
>>>> it. If not, why not add hospital, power station and many other
>>>> kinds of building? There may be some country specific issue or
>>>> technical here, but labelling that with "prison" seems
>>>> inappropriate to me.
>>>>
>>>> - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can you try
>>>> explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was possible to tempt an
>>>> implementation, so the language there could be improved for
>>>> sure:-)
>>>>
>>>> - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think provisioning the
>>>> PKI for such a thing is easily done these days and is rightly not
>>>> optional. It might be useful to say that TLS here needs to follow
>>>> BCP195.  I agree with the earlier comment that you should be clear
>>>> as to when mutually authenticated TLS is required. The secdir
>>>> review [2] also raised similar issues and it'd be good to see
>>>> responses to that too. (Yes, that review only arrived today so it's
>>>> entirely reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>>>>
>>>> [2] 
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html
>>>>
>>>> - section 8: the sizes of the various additional data items here
>>>> could be characteristic and leak value information regardless of
>>>> TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add a warning that these may enable
>>>> relatively simple traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if
>>>> someone had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability? This
>>>> is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon image size was usable
>>>> to identify 30+% of contacts in one social network even over TLS,
>>>> but before the provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.
>>>>
>>>> - Thanks for section 9. Good job.
>>>>
>>>>
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On 02/09/15 16:38, Rosen, Brian wrote:
> No, there is no such list.  There is a registry of identifiers
> assigned by other authorities, which is what I think you are thinking
> about.  But that list is not a list of entities who produce
> standards.  It happens that NENA has an ID series, and does
> standards, but there are plenty of examples of standards
> organizations who don’t have identifier series and others that have
> identifiers series but don’t produce standards.  I’m confident an
> expert can distinguish when a document comes from an appropriate
> organization.

Fair enough. I'd clear the discuss on that basis anyway.

Cheers,
S.

> 
> Brian
>> On Sep 2, 2015, at 8:14 AM, Stephen Farrell
>> <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On 02/09/15 16:09, Rosen, Brian wrote:
>>> “Document Required” and “Expert Review” with guidance to the
>>> expert?
>> 
>> Yeah that might be best I guess, if the guidance says something the
>> equivalent of "standards-track or a specification from a 
>> <recognized?> emergency services SDO"
>> 
>> Do I recall right that this draft already sets up one registry
>> that essentially lists that kind of emergency services SDO? If so,
>> then an option might be to require that the specification be from
>> one of those and to require IESG approval for getting added to
>> that registry. We have a similar sort of setup for SDOs that do
>> some media type stuff, so this isn't that innovative, if the list
>> of relevant SDOs is likely smallish and stable.
>> 
>> Cheers, S.
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> Brian
>>> 
>>>> On Sep 2, 2015, at 7:57 AM, Stephen Farrell
>>>> <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> On 02/09/15 15:52, Rosen, Brian wrote:
>>>>> I’m okay with the MUST NOT except, and I can imagine other
>>>>> uses for these that will work fine if we write a document
>>>>> that explains them.
>>>> 
>>>> Cool, should be relatively easy to work out words if everyone 
>>>> agrees on that.
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> I’m strongly against standards track for extensions.  There
>>>>> are a number of organizations who have expertise that need to
>>>>> be able to define the data.  We can’t be experts in all
>>>>> things.  An example is that we’re going to extend for medical
>>>>> data useful to a first responder.  Clearly has major privacy
>>>>> issues, but we’re not the experts in that, and those that are
>>>>> don’t write RFCs.  NENA, the 9-1-1 organization in North
>>>>> America is working on extensions for location related data,
>>>>> and also knows 10X more about location data for emergency
>>>>> response than IETF does.  We need to let the experts do their
>>>>> jobs.
>>>> 
>>>> Fair point. If we had a way to say "IETF standards-track or a
>>>> standard from an emergency services SDO" I'd be fine with that.
>>>> I don't think we do have a way to say that though, other than
>>>> by writing guidance in the IANA considerations section to that
>>>> effect. Maybe someone who is better at IANA minutiae can figure
>>>> out a way to get that effect?
>>>> 
>>>> Cheers, S.
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Brian
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Sep 1, 2015, at 4:47 PM, Stephen Farrell 
>>>>>> <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position
>>>>>> for draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Discuss
>>>>>> 
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>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please refer to 
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>>>>>> positions.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be
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>>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data/
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 
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>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>> DISCUSS:
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>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>> 
I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>>>>>> here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to
>>>>>> have the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG
>>>>>> already did that.)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not sure
>>>>>> that's a good option.  I think the data minimisation
>>>>>> recommendations argued for in RFC6973 and RFC7258 would
>>>>>> argue to add a MUST NOT. For example, saying that these
>>>>>> additional data MUST NOT be sent in any non-emergency call
>>>>>> without explicit user permission on a per-call basis or
>>>>>> something similar? I have to admit I'm nervous that 
>>>>>> defining all of these may mean that some UA somewhere
>>>>>> starts sending some of them in other calls without asking.
>>>>>> A restriction along those lines would also be more in line
>>>>>> with webrtc too perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in
>>>>>> the WG, having considered those privacy issues - was it?
>>>>>> Either way, would adding such a "MUST NOT except if..." be
>>>>>> a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of the kind of thing
>>>>>> I'd not want easily emitted in a call.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the registries
>>>>>> here should require more than expert review. Extensibility
>>>>>> in dealing with what will inevitably be highly privacy
>>>>>> sensitive data structures that are vulnerable to misuse
>>>>>> once registered seems to perhaps call for a more stringent
>>>>>> registration regime. The document itself also argues (in
>>>>>> 4.3.7) that adding new kinds of data here can be counter
>>>>>> productive for emergency call handling, so being more
>>>>>> conservative in what we add seems unusually correct here.
>>>>>> I'd like to suggest we require standards track for
>>>>>> extensions. The following very recent -00 draft [1] makes
>>>>>> some related arguments (but of course has no standing in
>>>>>> the IETF so is just offered as a way to avoid repeating
>>>>>> some arguments, not as an appeal to authority.)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> [1] 
>>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>> 
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>>>>>> COMMENT: 
>>>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>> 
- abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>>>>>> in the abstract
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not contact
>>>>>> lists? proximity of friends? That (or inferring as much)
>>>>>> seems to me to be going too far, if applied to all calls.
>>>>>> I'd say just saying that this could be extended in future
>>>>>> by other standards-track specifications is enough. (See
>>>>>> also discuss points above)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not relevant to
>>>>>> a PSAP.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest
>>>>>> deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station
>>>>>> and many other kinds of building? There may be some country
>>>>>> specific issue or technical here, but labelling that with
>>>>>> "prison" seems inappropriate to me.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can you
>>>>>> try explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was possible to
>>>>>> tempt an implementation, so the language there could be
>>>>>> improved for sure:-)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think
>>>>>> provisioning the PKI for such a thing is easily done these
>>>>>> days and is rightly not optional. It might be useful to say
>>>>>> that TLS here needs to follow BCP195.  I agree with the
>>>>>> earlier comment that you should be clear as to when
>>>>>> mutually authenticated TLS is required. The secdir review
>>>>>> [2] also raised similar issues and it'd be good to see 
>>>>>> responses to that too. (Yes, that review only arrived today
>>>>>> so it's entirely reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> [2] 
>>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 
- section 8: the sizes of the various additional data items here
>>>>>> could be characteristic and leak value information
>>>>>> regardless of TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add a warning that
>>>>>> these may enable relatively simple traffic analysis. And
>>>>>> wouldn't it be nice if someone had done the analysis of
>>>>>> this potential vulnerability? This is btw a real issue -
>>>>>> recall that avatar icon image size was usable to identify
>>>>>> 30+% of contacts in one social network even over TLS, but
>>>>>> before the provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> - Thanks for section 9. Good job.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> _______________________________________________ Ecrit
>>>>>> mailing list Ecrit@ietf.org
>>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ecrit
>>>>> 
>>> 
> 


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I have no objections to the publication of this document.

- I find text like "Optional for blocks supplied by the originating
device, mandatory otherwise" in multiple places in this specification. 
Is there a reason for not saying "originating devices MAY supply this
information, all other entities MUST supply this information" or some
such?

- I look forward to the resolution of Stephen's DISCUSS points.



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I=E2=80=99m going to let other authors comment on the MIME stuff.=20

 I=E2=80=99ve had a conversation with Simon Perrault who is the Expert =
on vCard things, and convinced him that =E2=80=9CMain=E2=80=9D was a =
reasonable addition.  I=E2=80=99ll give you the use case we discussed:
An employee at an enterprise places an emergency call to report a fire.  =
The PBX is configured to put the callers vCard on the call.  The =
responder needs to contact the front desk, rather than the caller.  The =
main number is the right way to do that.  It=E2=80=99s not, in any way, =
a =E2=80=9Cpreference=E2=80=9D value.  I can=E2=80=99t think of a better =
name that =E2=80=9Cmain=E2=80=9D.  I don=E2=80=99t have a problem adding =
more motivating text.

On the schema, we are trapped in the problem that we really need an XML =
schema to match what else is going on in the call data, but the vCard is =
Relax NG.  We provided the schema as informational for just the reason =
you suggest - in case of an error, it=E2=80=99s the Relax NG schema that =
is correct.  It originated with the vCard guys, we copied it, and =
we=E2=80=99ve looked at it to see that it is up to date. =20

Brian

> On Sep 1, 2015, at 10:00 PM, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> =
wrote:
>=20
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> draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Discuss
>=20
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>=20
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>=20
>=20
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>=20
>=20
>=20
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> DISCUSS:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>=20
> Two things are incorrect and need fixing:
>=20
> ---- In Section 4, you have "tel" and "TYPE", and "property" and
> "parameter" reversed in the explanation about the "main" parameter =
value.
> The sentence is also confusingly worded.  Try this (and see also my
> comments on this bit, below):
>=20
> NEW
>   This document adds a new parameter value called "main" to the
>   "TYPE" parameter of the "tel" property.
> END
>=20
> ---- In Section 6, there are problems in the MIME structure in the
> examples (figures 16 and 17).
>=20
> 1. The XML content should be indented at least as much as the SIP
> headers, so you should either make sure that all XML lines are =
indented
> at least 6 characters, or you should make the SIP headers be indented
> only by 3.
>=20
> 2. There should not be a blank line between the Content-Type and
> Content-Length headers.
>=20
> 3. There should not be a blank line after each boundary line; the part
> headers should start immediately, as the first blank line ends the
> headers.
>=20
> 4. There should be a blank line between the Content-Disposition header
> and the XML content; that blank line ends the part headers and signals
> the start of the part body.
>=20
> 5. The intermediate boundary lines should not have the trailing "--";
> that's reserved for the ending boundary.  The intermediates should all =
be
> "--boundary1".
>=20
> 6. Figure 17 is missing the ending boundary, "--boundary1--", at the =
very
> end of the figure.
>=20
>=20
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>=20
> Throughout the document:
> The current term is "media type", not "MIME type".  It would be good =
if
> you can change that throughout the document.
>=20
> -- Section 3 --
> A tiny, tiny point: I don't think the MAY in the last sentence is =
really
> a 2119 key word, and suggest making it lower case.
>=20
> -- Section 4 --
>=20
>   In an xCard there is no way to
>   specify a "main" telephone number.  These numbers are useful to
>   emergency responders who are called to a large enterprise.  This
>   document adds a new property value to the "tel" property of the TYPE
>   parameter called "main".
>=20
> This doesn't explain sufficiently what you're after.  I initially
> wondered why the PREF parameter didn't give you what you need (PREF=3D1,=

> this is my main phone number).  It was only when I read the =
registration
> in Section 10 that I understood.  I'd suggest a value other than =
"main",
> but I can't think of one right away.  At the least, please add more =
text
> here to explain what you mean by "main".
>=20
> I'll also note that none of the examples include the new "main" =
parameter
> value.  Given that you're creating the value, it might be good to show =
it
> in use.
>=20
> -- Section 4.1.5 --
>=20
>      The Data
>      Provider Contact URI SHOULD be a TEL URI [RFC3966] in E.164 =
format
>      fully specified with country code.  If a TEL URI is not =
available,
>      it MAY be a generic SIP URI.
>=20
> 2119 key word problem @1: "you SHOULD do X, but you MAY do Y instead."=20=

> MAY contradicts the SHOULD.  It's not so bad here because your "if"
> restricts the MAY (Section 5.3 isn't that way; see below), but I'd =
prefer
> it if you'd change it to something like "If a TEL URI is not =
available, a
> generic SIP URI is acceptable."  Or perhaps "A generic SIP URI is
> acceptable only if a TEL URI is not available," which is a little
> stronger.
>=20
> -- Section 4.4.2 --
>=20
>      If more than one <tel> property is provided, a parameter from the
>      vCard Property Value registry MUST be specified on each <tel>.
>=20
> Do you really want that MUST, rather than a SHOULD?  Are you really
> saying that if there are multiple phone numbers but I don't know their
> TYPE values, it's better to pick one and send only that one than it is =
to
> send you all of them just in case?
>=20
> -- Section 5.1 --
>=20
>   The data may also be supplied by value in any SIP request or =
response
>   method that is permitted to contain a body (i.e., not a BYE =
request).
>=20
> Is BYE the only SIP request that can't contain a body?  Or should that =
be
> "e.g."?  (I'm asking; I don't know the answer.)
>=20
> -- Section 5.3 --
>=20
>   It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
>   this document by reference, but they MAY provide the data by value.
>=20
> Here's the SHOULD/MAY problem without an "if" to mitigate it.  In this
> case, I suggest explaining:
>=20
> NEW
>   It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
>   this document by reference.  While it's permissible to provide the
>   data by value, this can expose private information [and/or whatever
>   other explanation].
> END
>=20
> -- Section 10.1 --
> Thanks for providing guidance to the expert reviewers; that's really
> helpful.
>=20
> -- Section 11 --
> Is the comma in "Christian, Militeau" spurious?
>=20
> -- Appendix A --
> You appear to have turned the RELAX NG schema from RFC 6351 into an =
XML
> schema and put it here, but then labelled it as informational -- a =
hedge,
> I guess, in case there's a mistake in this version.  Why does it need =
to
> be included here?  And how much review has it actually had, to make =
sure
> that there weren't any mistakes in the conversion?
>=20
>=20


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> An employee at an enterprise places an emergency call to report a fire.
> The PBX is configured to put the callers vCard on the call.  The responde=
r
> needs to contact the front desk, rather than the caller.  The main number
> is the right way to do that.

Yes, I understood that after reading the text in the IANA registration
section, but not after reading the text in Section 4.  That's why I
asked for more text in Section 4 explaining it.

> It=E2=80=99s not, in any way, a =E2=80=9Cpreference=E2=80=9D value.  I ca=
n=E2=80=99t think of a better name
> that =E2=80=9Cmain=E2=80=9D.  I don=E2=80=99t have a problem adding more =
motivating text.

I've asked a few other people to look at it, and they, too, didn't get
"main", but they, too, had trouble coming up with a better name.
Maybe we shouldn't try to hard to make a very short name, and use a
longer one such as "main-office", or "front-desk", or some such.  That
plus more explanation in that paragraph in Section 4 should make it
all better.

(But note, too, that this isn't a blocking comment.  I think it should
be explained better, and I'd like you to do that, but I'm not going to
hold up the document for it if you'd rather not change the name of the
parameter value.)

> On the schema, we are trapped in the problem that we really need an
> XML schema to match what else is going on in the call data, but the
> vCard is Relax NG.  We provided the schema as informational for just
> the reason you suggest - in case of an error, it=E2=80=99s the Relax NG s=
chema
> that is correct.  It originated with the vCard guys, we copied it, and
> we=E2=80=99ve looked at it to see that it is up to date.

Ack.  That's a good enough explanation for me, and thanks.

Barry


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I note that Stephen hasn't cleared his Discuss yet, so I'll let that play
out (and thanks to all who are busily Discussing it), but just for the
record, I'm also confused between 

   The intent
   is that every emergency call carry the information described here
   using the mechanisms described here.

and (paraphrasing)

"we aren't the experts on extending this mechanism, and we can't say who
is, but there's more than one set of experts"

This tussle sounds like a fork waiting to happen.

Is that going to be a problem? One answer could be "if it is, we aren't
the ones who are going to have to solve it", but I thought I'd ask.



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Hi, Brian,

On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM, Rosen, Brian <Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz>
wrote:

> Not every call has every block.  There is only one block that is required=
,
> which is =E2=80=9Cwho sent the data=E2=80=9D.  That block includes contac=
t info.  We want
> every entity to handles the call to supply at least that block.  If you
> have more info, please send it, but at least tell me how to contact you.
> This corresponds to the current mechanisms in North America and elsewhere=
:
> mobile networks only supply the identity of the network operator handling
> the call, wireline networks supply that and also a subscriber name/addres=
s.
>
> The extension is additional blocks of data, and we have to allow others t=
o
> define blocks.  Many of those blocks wouldn=E2=80=99t make sense for, as =
an
> example, a carrier to provide.  Others might not make sense for anyone
> except, say, an enterprise to supply.


Thanks for the quick feedback.

I see the problem - I should be reading

   The intent
   is that every emergency call carry the information described here
   using the mechanisms described here.

as

   The intent
   is that every emergency call *that carries* the information described
here
   *uses* the mechanisms described here.

and doesn't go off the reservation and send it some other way.

Am I getting that right?

Thanks,

Spencer


> Brian
>
> > On Sep 2, 2015, at 11:22 PM, Spencer Dawkins <
> spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
> > draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: No Objection
> >
> > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
> > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
> > introductory paragraph, however.)
> >
> >
> > Please refer to
> https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
> >
> >
> > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data/
> >
> >
> >
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> > I note that Stephen hasn't cleared his Discuss yet, so I'll let that pl=
ay
> > out (and thanks to all who are busily Discussing it), but just for the
> > record, I'm also confused between
> >
> >   The intent
> >   is that every emergency call carry the information described here
> >   using the mechanisms described here.
> >
> > and (paraphrasing)
> >
> > "we aren't the experts on extending this mechanism, and we can't say wh=
o
> > is, but there's more than one set of experts"
> >
> > This tussle sounds like a fork waiting to happen.
> >
> > Is that going to be a problem? One answer could be "if it is, we aren't
> > the ones who are going to have to solve it", but I thought I'd ask.
> >
> >
> > _______________________________________________
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Hi, Brian,<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gma=
il_quote">On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM, Rosen, Brian <span dir=3D"ltr">&l=
t;<a href=3D"mailto:Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz" target=3D"_blank">Brian.Rosen@=
neustar.biz</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" styl=
e=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(2=
04,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">Not every call has ev=
ery block.=C2=A0 There is only one block that is required, which is =E2=80=
=9Cwho sent the data=E2=80=9D.=C2=A0 That block includes contact info.=C2=
=A0 We want every entity to handles the call to supply at least that block.=
=C2=A0 If you have more info, please send it, but at least tell me how to c=
ontact you.=C2=A0 This corresponds to the current mechanisms in North Ameri=
ca and elsewhere: mobile networks only supply the identity of the network o=
perator handling the call, wireline networks supply that and also a subscri=
ber name/address.<br>
<br>
The extension is additional blocks of data, and we have to allow others to =
define blocks.=C2=A0 Many of those blocks wouldn=E2=80=99t make sense for, =
as an example, a carrier to provide.=C2=A0 Others might not make sense for =
anyone except, say, an enterprise to supply.</blockquote><div><br></div><di=
v>Thanks for the quick feedback.</div><div><br></div><div>I see the problem=
 - I should be reading=C2=A0</div><div><br></div><div><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0The intent</span><br style=3D"font-siz=
e:12.8000001907349px"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =
=C2=A0is that every emergency call carry the information described here</sp=
an><br style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8=
000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0using the mechanisms described here.</span><br=
></div><div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br></span></div><=
div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">as=C2=A0</span></div><div>=
<span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br></span></div><div><span st=
yle=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0The intent</span><br styl=
e=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><span style=3D"font-size:12.800000190734=
9px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0is that every emergency call *that carries* the informati=
on described here</span><br style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><span st=
yle=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0*uses* the mechanisms des=
cribed here.</span><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br></span>=
</div><div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br></span></div><d=
iv><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">and doesn&#39;t go off the =
reservation and send it some other way.=C2=A0</span></div><div><span style=
=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br></span></div><div><span style=3D"font=
-size:12.8000001907349px">Am I getting that right?</span></div><div><span s=
tyle=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br></span></div><div><span style=3D"=
font-size:12.8000001907349px">Thanks,</span></div><div><span style=3D"font-=
size:12.8000001907349px"><br></span></div><div><span style=3D"font-size:12.=
8000001907349px">Spencer</span></div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"=
gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border=
-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">Bria=
n<br>
<div><div class=3D"h5"><br>
&gt; On Sep 2, 2015, at 11:22 PM, Spencer Dawkins &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:spe=
ncerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com">spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br=
>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for<br>
&gt; draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: No Objection<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<=
br>
&gt; email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut thi=
s<br>
&gt; introductory paragraph, however.)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Please refer to <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss=
-criteria.html" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/i=
esg/statement/discuss-criteria.html</a><br>
&gt; for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br=
>
&gt; <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additiona=
l-data/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/=
doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data/</a><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt; COMMENT:<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; I note that Stephen hasn&#39;t cleared his Discuss yet, so I&#39;ll le=
t that play<br>
&gt; out (and thanks to all who are busily Discussing it), but just for the=
<br>
&gt; record, I&#39;m also confused between<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0The intent<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0is that every emergency call carry the information describ=
ed here<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0using the mechanisms described here.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; and (paraphrasing)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; &quot;we aren&#39;t the experts on extending this mechanism, and we ca=
n&#39;t say who<br>
&gt; is, but there&#39;s more than one set of experts&quot;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; This tussle sounds like a fork waiting to happen.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Is that going to be a problem? One answer could be &quot;if it is, we =
aren&#39;t<br>
&gt; the ones who are going to have to solve it&quot;, but I thought I&#39;=
d ask.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
</div></div>&gt; _______________________________________________<br>
&gt; Ecrit mailing list<br>
&gt; <a href=3D"mailto:Ecrit@ietf.org">Ecrit@ietf.org</a><br>
&gt; <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ecrit" rel=3D"norefer=
rer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ecrit</a><br>
<br>
</blockquote></div><br></div></div>

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Hi, Brian,

On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 9:30 AM, Rosen, Brian <Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz>
wrote:

> Well, sort of.  We really do want every emergency call to at least have
> that identity block.
>
> We=E2=80=99ll need to edit the text to say more clearly what we mean.  I =
see two
> ways to edit:
> =E2=80=A6every emergency call carry at least some of the information=E2=
=80=A6.
>
> or
> ..every provider in the path of the call provide at least some of the
> information =E2=80=A6
>

At this point, it sounds like you're poised to Do The Right Thing. Thanks!


>
> Brian
>
>
>
> On Sep 3, 2015, at 9:37 AM, Spencer Dawkins at IETF <
> spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi, Brian,
>
> On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM, Rosen, Brian <Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz>
> wrote:
>
>> Not every call has every block.  There is only one block that is
>> required, which is =E2=80=9Cwho sent the data=E2=80=9D.  That block incl=
udes contact info.
>> We want every entity to handles the call to supply at least that block. =
 If
>> you have more info, please send it, but at least tell me how to contact
>> you.  This corresponds to the current mechanisms in North America and
>> elsewhere: mobile networks only supply the identity of the network opera=
tor
>> handling the call, wireline networks supply that and also a subscriber
>> name/address.
>>
>> The extension is additional blocks of data, and we have to allow others
>> to define blocks.  Many of those blocks wouldn=E2=80=99t make sense for,=
 as an
>> example, a carrier to provide.  Others might not make sense for anyone
>> except, say, an enterprise to supply.
>
>
> Thanks for the quick feedback.
>
> I see the problem - I should be reading
>
>    The intent
>    is that every emergency call carry the information described here
>    using the mechanisms described here.
>
> as
>
>    The intent
>    is that every emergency call *that carries* the information described
> here
>    *uses* the mechanisms described here.
>
> and doesn't go off the reservation and send it some other way.
>
> Am I getting that right?
>
> Thanks,
>
> Spencer
>
>
>> Brian
>>
>> > On Sep 2, 2015, at 11:22 PM, Spencer Dawkins <
>> spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >
>> > Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
>> > draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: No Objection
>> >
>> > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
>> > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut thi=
s
>> > introductory paragraph, however.)
>> >
>> >
>> > Please refer to
>> https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
>> > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>> >
>> >
>> > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data/
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> > COMMENT:
>> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> >
>> > I note that Stephen hasn't cleared his Discuss yet, so I'll let that
>> play
>> > out (and thanks to all who are busily Discussing it), but just for the
>> > record, I'm also confused between
>> >
>> >   The intent
>> >   is that every emergency call carry the information described here
>> >   using the mechanisms described here.
>> >
>> > and (paraphrasing)
>> >
>> > "we aren't the experts on extending this mechanism, and we can't say w=
ho
>> > is, but there's more than one set of experts"
>> >
>> > This tussle sounds like a fork waiting to happen.
>> >
>> > Is that going to be a problem? One answer could be "if it is, we aren'=
t
>> > the ones who are going to have to solve it", but I thought I'd ask.
>> >
>> >
>> > _______________________________________________
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Hi, Brian,<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gma=
il_quote">On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 9:30 AM, Rosen, Brian <span dir=3D"ltr">&l=
t;<a href=3D"mailto:Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz" target=3D"_blank">Brian.Rosen@=
neustar.biz</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" styl=
e=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">



<div style=3D"word-wrap:break-word">
Well, sort of.=C2=A0 We really do want every emergency call to at least hav=
e that identity block.
<div><br>
</div>
<div>We=E2=80=99ll need to edit the text to say more clearly what we mean.=
=C2=A0 I see two ways to edit:</div>
<div>=E2=80=A6every emergency call carry at least some of the information=
=E2=80=A6.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>or=C2=A0</div>
<div>..every provider in the path of the call provide at least some of the =
information =E2=80=A6</div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>At this p=
oint, it sounds like you&#39;re poised to Do The Right Thing. Thanks!</div>=
<div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8=
ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"word-wrap:bre=
ak-word"><span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"#888888">
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Brian</div></font></span><div><div class=3D"h5">
<div><br>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
<div>
<blockquote type=3D"cite">
<div>On Sep 3, 2015, at 9:37 AM, Spencer Dawkins at IETF &lt;<a href=3D"mai=
lto:spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">spencerdawkins.ietf@gm=
ail.com</a>&gt; wrote:</div>
<br>
<div>
<div dir=3D"ltr">Hi, Brian,
<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br>
<div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM, Rosen, Brian <sp=
an dir=3D"ltr">
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz" target=3D"_blank">Brian.Rose=
n@neustar.biz</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex">
Not every call has every block.=C2=A0 There is only one block that is requi=
red, which is =E2=80=9Cwho sent the data=E2=80=9D.=C2=A0 That block include=
s contact info.=C2=A0 We want every entity to handles the call to supply at=
 least that block.=C2=A0 If you have more info, please send it, but
 at least tell me how to contact you.=C2=A0 This corresponds to the current=
 mechanisms in North America and elsewhere: mobile networks only supply the=
 identity of the network operator handling the call, wireline networks supp=
ly that and also a subscriber name/address.<br>
<br>
The extension is additional blocks of data, and we have to allow others to =
define blocks.=C2=A0 Many of those blocks wouldn=E2=80=99t make sense for, =
as an example, a carrier to provide.=C2=A0 Others might not make sense for =
anyone except, say, an enterprise to supply.</blockquote>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Thanks for the quick feedback.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>I see the problem - I should be reading=C2=A0</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0The intent</=
span><br style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">
<span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0is that every eme=
rgency call carry the information described here</span><br style=3D"font-si=
ze:12.8000001907349px">
<span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0using the mechani=
sms described here.</span><br>
</div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">as=C2=A0</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0The intent</=
span><br style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">
<span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0is that every eme=
rgency call *that carries* the information described here</span><br style=
=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">
<span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">=C2=A0 =C2=A0*uses* the mechan=
isms described here.</span><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br=
>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">and doesn&#39;t go off th=
e reservation and send it some other way.=C2=A0</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">Am I getting that right?<=
/span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">Thanks,</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8000001907349px">Spencer</span></div>
<div>=C2=A0</div>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex">
Brian<br>
<div>
<div><br>
&gt; On Sep 2, 2015, at 11:22 PM, Spencer Dawkins &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:spe=
ncerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com=
</a>&gt; wrote:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for<br>
&gt; draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: No Objection<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<=
br>
&gt; email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut thi=
s<br>
&gt; introductory paragraph, however.)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Please refer to <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss=
-criteria.html" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">
https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html</a><br>
&gt; for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br=
>
&gt; <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additiona=
l-data/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data/</a><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt; COMMENT:<br>
&gt; ----------------------------------------------------------------------=
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; I note that Stephen hasn&#39;t cleared his Discuss yet, so I&#39;ll le=
t that play<br>
&gt; out (and thanks to all who are busily Discussing it), but just for the=
<br>
&gt; record, I&#39;m also confused between<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0The intent<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0is that every emergency call carry the information describ=
ed here<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0using the mechanisms described here.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; and (paraphrasing)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; &quot;we aren&#39;t the experts on extending this mechanism, and we ca=
n&#39;t say who<br>
&gt; is, but there&#39;s more than one set of experts&quot;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; This tussle sounds like a fork waiting to happen.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Is that going to be a problem? One answer could be &quot;if it is, we =
aren&#39;t<br>
&gt; the ones who are going to have to solve it&quot;, but I thought I&#39;=
d ask.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
</div>
</div>
&gt; _______________________________________________<br>
&gt; Ecrit mailing list<br>
&gt; <a href=3D"mailto:Ecrit@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">Ecrit@ietf.org</a>=
<br>
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https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ecrit</a><br>
<br>
</blockquote>
</div>
<br>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</blockquote>
</div>
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</div>
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Alissa asked me to send to the list a summary of what I sent earlier to the=
 authors, AD and chairs regarding draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall and the liaison se=
nt to 3GPP in June. I have looked into the current status of the liaison an=
d the NG eCall work in 3GPP and provide you my feedback on this. Note that =
although I am the 3GPP-IETF coordination team lead I am providing this in a=
n unofficial personal capacity as these are my personal opinions and have n=
ot been discussed or endorsed by 3GPP.

The current situation regarding the NG eCall work in 3GPP is that a work it=
em description (this performs a somewhat similar role to an IETF WG charter=
 and WG milestones in scoping and authorizing work) on "Evolution to an Int=
ernetworking with eCall in IMS" (EIEI) (http://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_=
SA/TSGS_68/Docs/SP-150275.zip) and 3 Change Requests to TS 22.101 were appr=
oved (http://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/TSGS_68/Docs/SP-150276.zip of w=
hich CR0498R2 is probably the most interesting) in June 2015. This work ite=
m description currently only covers the requirements work which will be par=
t of 3GPP release 14. Modification to this work item description will be re=
quired to authorize 3GPP SA2 to do the architectural analysis and a new CT =
work item will be required for CT1 and other CT WGs to start on the stage 3=
 protocol work. Release 13 is the current release that 3GPP is trying to co=
mplete by the end of 2015 so this release 14 work will likely not have a ve=
ry high priority in 3GPP CT1 until the release 13 work is completed.

Since the draft contains a protocol solution, detailed feedback on that sol=
ution should come from 3GPP CT1. 3GPP CT1 had a meeting in August but witho=
ut SA2 making some decisions on this in terms of the architectural impacts =
based on the agreed requirements it is problematic for CT1 to provide any f=
ormal detailed feedback. The liaison was presented at the CT1 but was only =
noted.  The next CT1 meeting is in October but the week before the next SA2=
 meeting and then SA2 and CT1 don't meet again until after the next IETF me=
eting in November. I believe the SA1 part of the work is mainly done based =
on the referenced change requests however since SA1 responsibility is only =
for requirements it would inappropriate for them to provide technical feedb=
ack on the contents of the solution.

I therefore think it is quite unlikely that any formal technical feedback o=
n the solution in the draft will be received by ECRIT from 3GPP before the =
end of 2015. You may get some polite acknowledgement and some similar infor=
mation to what I have provided informally here prior to that.

I hope this helps with understanding the status of the work in 3GPP and wor=
k planning for ECRIT.

Andrew


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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Alissa asked me to send to the list a summary of wha=
t I sent earlier to the authors, AD and chairs regarding
<span style=3D"color:black">draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall and the liaison sent to =
3GPP in June. I have looked into the current status of the liaison and the =
NG eCall work in 3GPP and provide you my feedback on this. Note that althou=
gh I am the 3GPP-IETF coordination
 team lead I am providing this in an unofficial personal capacity as these =
are my personal opinions and have not been discussed or endorsed by 3GPP.</=
span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">The current situation re=
garding the NG eCall work in 3GPP is that a work item description (this per=
forms a somewhat similar role to an IETF WG charter and WG milestones in sc=
oping and authorizing work) on &#8220;Evolution
 to an Internetworking with eCall in IMS&#8221; (EIEI) (<a href=3D"http://w=
ww.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/TSGS_68/Docs/SP-150275.zip">http://www.3gpp.o=
rg/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/TSGS_68/Docs/SP-150275.zip</a></span>)<span style=3D"c=
olor:black"> and 3 Change Requests to TS 22.101
 were approved (<a href=3D"http://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/TSGS_68/Do=
cs/SP-150276.zip">http://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/TSGS_68/Docs/SP-150=
276.zip</a></span>
<span style=3D"color:black">of which CR0498R2 is probably the most interest=
ing) in June 2015. This work item description currently only covers the req=
uirements work which will be part of 3GPP release 14. Modification to this =
work item description will be required
 to authorize 3GPP SA2 to do the architectural analysis and a new CT work i=
tem will be required for CT1 and other CT WGs to start on the stage 3 proto=
col work. Release 13 is the current release that 3GPP is trying to complete=
 by the end of 2015 so this release
 14 work will likely not have a very high priority in 3GPP CT1 until the re=
lease 13 work is completed.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">Since the draft contains=
 a protocol solution, detailed feedback on that solution should come from 3=
GPP CT1. 3GPP CT1 had a meeting in August but without SA2 making some decis=
ions on this in terms of the architectural
 impacts based on the agreed requirements it is problematic for CT1 to prov=
ide any formal detailed feedback. The liaison was presented at the CT1 but =
was only noted. &nbsp;The next CT1 meeting is in October but the week befor=
e the next SA2 meeting and then SA2 and
 CT1 don&#8217;t meet again until after the next IETF meeting in November. =
I believe the SA1 part of the work is mainly done based on the referenced c=
hange requests however since SA1 responsibility is only for requirements it=
 would inappropriate for them to provide
 technical feedback on the contents of the solution.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">I therefore think it is =
quite unlikely that any formal technical feedback on the solution in the dr=
aft will be received by ECRIT from 3GPP before the end of 2015. You may get=
 some polite acknowledgement and some
 similar information to what I have provided informally here prior to that.=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">I hope this helps with u=
nderstanding the status of the work in 3GPP and work planning for ECRIT.<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">Andrew<o:p></o:p></span>=
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Sorry for the delay, I am back at work and working through my email.

Thanks, Ben, for your detailed review and comments; I appreciate it. 
Please see in-line.

At 7:42 AM -0700 9/1/15, Ben Campbell wrote:

>  Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
>  draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Yes
>
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>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>  COMMENT:
>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>  [Edit: I asked a question below about what happens if you dereference a
>  block, and find the URL points to something other than what you expected.
>  On reflection, I should expand that  to ask how dereferencing errors
>  should be handled in general.]

In general, since this is an emergency call, we want the call to go 
through even if there are errors.  It's better that the call go 
through with some data blocks missing or unusable than for the call 
to fail.

>
>  This draft was clearly lots of work; thanks for making it happen.
>  However, I have a number of comments:
>
>  The shepherd's writeup indicates that no XML or media type reviews were
>  required-but this document contains a lot of XML (examples and schema),
>   and a number of media type registrations. Is that an error in the
>  writeup,
>  or have those reviews been skipped?

Hannes extracted the XML schemas and examples and validated them.  As 
a result, a number of fixes were made a few months back.  The draft 
was updated to add Appendix B ("XML Validation") to mention a few 
issues that may commonly arise when extracting XML examples or 
schema, and to note that extracted schemas are available temporarily 
at a URL, to be replaced with IANA's repository after publication.

>  This draft implicitly assumes that the emergency calls are signaled with
>  SIP. I don't dispute that assumption, but I think it should it's worth a
>  paragraph stating it explicitly.

The Introduction says:

    This document extends the basic set of data communicated with an IP-
    based emergency call, as described in [RFC6443] and [RFC6881]

Both those RFCs are explicitly SIP-based.  However, I'd be happy to 
change the text from "IP-based" to "SIP-based" if people feel it 
would add clarity.  E.g., to:

    This document extends the basic set of data communicated with a SIP-
    based emergency call, as described in [RFC6443] and [RFC6881]

Or perhaps to:

    This document extends the basic set of data communicated with a
    Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) based emergency call, as
    described in [RFC6443] and [RFC6881]

Let me know if you feel this change would be helpful.


>  -- section 2, 2nd paragraph:
>  Are there any considerations for services provided with no "company" or
>  "service provider" behind them? For example, lets say an individual
>  hosts
>  some VoIP related services for her own use (e.g. a SIP registrar, maybe
>  a
>  stun/turn server,etc) Are those in scope? I'm guessing not, since they
>  would
>  be unlikely to be registered with NENA, but it would be worth saying
>  that
>  explicitly.

Such calls are possible and would be supported and can be done in 
compliance with the document.  The originating device adds a device 
info and provider info block (the latter with device owner 
information, as per the document).  Since there would be no further 
service providers, no additional blocks would be added.

The document even explicitly mentions this case in Section 5 bullet 2:

    The device MUST provide one if it knows no service
    provider is in the path of the call.  The device MAY insert one if it
    uses a service provider.

>  -- 3:
>  Is there a critical need for the bit about "certain private-use
>  situations"? That seems like license for abuse, without more elaboration
>  about "prexisting relationship" and "privacy issues addressed".

The reason for that text is to permit re-use of the mechanisms within 
private telematics calls between a vehicle and a telematics service 
center (which in turn simplifies the use of the mechanisms when such 
calls are emergency calls from the telematics service center to a 
PSAP).  The text appears as an exception to a ban on using the 
mechanisms outside of an emergency call, so without it, such use 
would be violating the RFC.  I thought the text was pretty 
restrictive, since it says:

    certain private-use situations where the endpoints
    have a preexisting relationship and privacy issues are addressed
    within the relationship or do not apply because of it

If you still feel this text is a "license for abuse" I'd be open to 
tightening it, but it seems pretty limited to me.

>  -- 4, third paragraph from end:
>  Can you elaborate on what you mean by "at
>  the same time"? Does that mean for the same call? Occurring in some
>  interval
>  of time ?

This is a good question and I can see a use for some clarification 
here.  What this is trying to say is that when a service provider 
processes a call it adds various blocks, all of which are linked by 
having the same <DataProviderReference> value.  There may be 
situations where the same provider processes a call more than once 
(possibly in different roles), and in those cases, each time it 
processes the call, it would add a set of bocks with a new 
<DataProviderReference> value.

I've added the following text for clarification:

    (In certain situations, the same provider might process a call more
    than once, likely in different roles, and in such cases, each time it
    processes the call, it adds a new set of bocks with a new
    <DataProviderReference> value.)

>  -- 4.1.4
>  Is a provider limited to one type? If the same provider provides
>  services in multiple categories,  would they create multiple instances?

A provider is limited to identifying itself as one type, but if it 
processes a call more than once (e.g., in different roles), it adds a 
set of blocks each time, and so would likely use a different value 
each time.  But in most cases, each provider touches a call just 
once, with one value.  It would pick the most appropriate value.


>  -- 4.1.5:
>  Do you intend 24x7 support to be a prerequisite to be a data
>  provider?

It's not within scope of the IETF to make this requirement, but the 
expectation is that calls will be processed by mainstream providers 
who have 24/7 support for PSAPs.

>  -- 4.1.7, Description: "Although multiple <vcard> elements may be
>  contained
>  in a structure only one <vcard> element SHOULD be provided.  If more
>  than
>  one appears, the first SHOULD be used."
>  When might it be reasonable to violate either of these SHOULDs? If the
>  receiver should only look at the first entry why are multiple entries
>  allowed at all?

I think these are SHOULD rather than MUST because it won't break 
anything if they are violated, and there might be weird edge cases we 
aren't thinking about.

>  Also, it seems like there are vcard fields that are not useful to this
>  purpose and might still have privacy implications. Do we really need
>  people
>  to send everything?

The text does not mandate which fields to send.  It encourages 
sending all fields because there are some unusual circumstances where 
a seemingly irrelevant field might be useful to a call-taker (e.g., 
anniversary might conceivably be useful with a suicidal caller) and 
suggests a minimum set.

>  -- 4.2.1, How Used..., last sentence:
>  The term "wireless "needs more
>  precision if you're going to use it in a 2119 expression. With a Wi-Fi
>  handset connected to a wired Internet service count as wireless? How
>  about a
>  cordless phone?

Good point.  I changed the text to be more clear:

       Because the usefulness is unknown (and less clear)
       for cellular, this element is OPTIONAL for commercial mobile radio
       services (e.g., cellular) and REQUIRED otherwise.

>  -- Figure 5:
>  -Can the list of wireless types change over time?

The range of services included in "wireless" will expand over time, 
e.g., when 5G is deployed it will count.

>  -I don't understand the full definition of "temp". Are these terms
>  defined somewhere?

These are common industry terms, although in many cases these are 
specific to wireline service, so "temp" will become less common.   In 
high-turnover situations such as college dorms, wireline providers 
often put service into this state when one person moves out.  It 
allows a new person to move in, plug in a phone, and establish 
service in an automated way via the phone.  Similarly, if a wireline 
provider suspends service due to non-payment, they may leave the 
service in this state.

>  -Do you really want "POTS" vs "PSTN"?
>  -Is VoIP intentionally limited to OTT services?

I think we do want POTS but I changed VOIP to OTT to be more clear, 
and added "digital" for non-POTS, non-OTT wireline service.


>  -- 4.3.3:
>  What if the device model designation is not a number?

It's fine if it contains non-digit characters (which is fairly common 
for model numbers of all sorts of devices).  The XML schema defines 
it as a string.

>  -- 5, list item 1: "The "purpose" parameter also indicates the kind of
>  data
>  (by its MIME subtype) that is available at the URI"
>  What happens if the URL points to something other than the indicated
>  thing?

Then the PSAP doesn't get what it expects, and likely will ignore the 
retrieved data, and the call will be processed as if the block wasn't 
provided at all.  The PSAP will likely file a discrepancy report with 
the provider, which is done out of band.  If the information in the 
block is potentially urgent for handling the call, the call-taker or 
a supervisor might contact the provider's PSAP support line.

>  - list item 2, last sentence:
>  I gathered this section was an overview, since
>  you have detailed procedures later. Please consider moving 2119 language
>  to
>  that section.

To do that, I'd have to add it to both 5.2 ("Transmitting Blocks by 
Reference using the <provided-by> Element") and 5.3 ("	Transmitting 
Blocks by Value using the <provided-by> Element"), which seems 
awkward.  I think it's better to have the normative language in one 
common place.

>  -- Section 5, last paragraph: "only blocks in the registry are permitted
>  to
>  be sent using the mechanisms specified in this document"
>  Are implementations supposed to check the registry at run time? (Also,
>  that
>  language sounds like it should be normative.)

There's no requirement or expectation for run-time checks of the 
registry, because applications will only access those blocks they are 
interested in.  It's likely that software updates for PSAP and 
responder equipment will add support for any blocks defined since the 
previous release, and as matter of local configuration (e.g., policy 
establishment), individual PSAPs and responders will select those 
supported blocks that they are interested in.

>  -- 5.1, last paragraph: "More than one Call-Info header field with a
>  purpose
>  value starting with 'EmergencyCallData' can be expected, but at least
>  one
>  MUST be provided.  The device MUST provide one if it knows no service
>  provider is in the path of the call."
>  What's the scope of the first MUST? Emergency calls? Is it possible the
>  device doesn't know whether there is a service provider in the path?
>  Should
>  this say it MUST insert unless it knows there is a service provider in
>  tHe
>  path?


The scope of the document is explicitly restricted to emergency calls 
in section 3 ("Document Scope").

The device may not know, in which case it needs to include one.  I've 
reworded the text to be:

    The device MUST provide one unless it knows that a service
    provider is in the path of the call.  The device MAY insert one if it
    uses a service provider.  Each service provider in the path of an
    emergency call MUST insert its own.

>  -- 8:
>  It might be worth discussing the potential harm done by a malicious
>  proxy
>  modifying a data element, or a compromised data source return incorrect
>  information when dereferencing a URL.

If an element in the call path is compromised and under the control 
of an attacker, it can wreak havoc, but this is generally true for 
any system that isn't using end-to-end protection, and even then is 
true if an endpoint is compromised.  I'm not sure what would be 
helpful to say about this in the Security Considerations section.

>  The first paragraph REQUIRES verification of requester credentials, but
>  does
>  specify the form of those credentials. Subsequent text talks about
>  client-certs and PKI verification. Are other forms of credentials
>  allows?
>  (HTTP-digest, application level logins, etc). If client-certs are
>  required,
>  please say that explicitly.

The intent is to require that HTTPS with a client-side certificate be 
used.  I've added text to say so.

>  - "PSAPs and responder agencies SHOULD deploy a PKI "
>  When might they not? What if they don't?

I think the problem is simply that the IETF lacks scope to dictate to 
PSAPs and responder agencies outside the use of the mechanisms 
defined here, so I reworded this from "SHOULD" to "are strongly 
advised to".

The new text is:

    When information is provided by reference, HTTPS is REQUIRED for
    dereferencing, the requestor MUST use a client certificate to
    authenticate the HTTP request, and the provider of the information is
    REQUIRED to validate the credentials provided by the requester.
    While the creation of a public key infrastructure (PKI) that has
    global scope may be difficult, the alternatives to creating devices
    and services that can provide critical information securely are more
    daunting.  The provider of the information MAY enforce any policy it
    wishes to use, but PSAPs and responder agencies are strongly advised
    to deploy a PKI so that providers of additional data can check the
    certificate of the client (the requester) and decide the appropriate
    policy to enforce based on that certificate.


>
>  - "emergency services authorities could obtain a credential from the DNS
>  entry of the domain"
>  Can you elaborate on that or cite something?

Good catch; I added a reference to DANE (RFC 6698).


>  - paragraph starting with "Much of the information supplied by service
>  providers and devices is private and confidential":
>  Seems like that should go in the privacy considerations. (And probably
>  also
>  the intro.)

This exact paragraph is already in the Introduction, and the Privacy 
Considerations section has words to the same effect but in somewhat 
more detail.  So, I just deleted the paragraph from the Security 
Considerations section.

>  -- section 10:
>  Many of the registry policies require experts to access
>  whether an organization might be "legitimate" or "relevant". Are these
>  reasonable expectations on the DEs? (I don't know the answer.)

I think so, because I think the designated expert will only reject a 
registration in very clear cases.


>  Nits and Editorial Comments:
>
>  -- 4.2.1, Description: Currently, the only valid entries are...
>  Current as of when?  I suggest "The initially valid entries are..."

This was changed recently (maybe in -33 or -34) to say "Currently, 
the only valid entries are...."  Is that OK?

>
>  -- 4.2.1, How Used... : "... service provider does not know ..."
>  Does not know...what?  (That's part of a long, convoluted sentence.
>  Please consider
>  breaking it into simpler sentences.)
>
>  "... it is known to be valuable."
>  Known by whom?

I've reworded the text to:

       This is non-authoritative:
       There are situations where the service provider does not know the
       type of service (e.g., anonymous pre-paid service).  The type of
       service does not necessarily reflect the nature of the premises
       (e.g., a business line installed in a residence, or cellular
       service).  The registry does not contain all possible values for
       all situations.  Hence, this is at best advisory information, but
       since it mimics a similar capability in some current emergency
       calling systems (e.g., a field in the Automatic Location
       Information (ALI) information used with legacy North American
       wireline systems), it is known to be valuable to PSAPs.


>  -- 4.3.1, Description: "It is possible to receive two Additional Data
>  Associated with a Call data structures,..." (Occurs in several places.)
>  The naming is confusing. It's easy to read "additional data associated
>  with..."
>  as it's plain English meaning, rather than as a name. I suggest doing
>  something more distinctive than capital letters. Perhaps quotes, or even
>  an
>  abbreviation.

Good point.  I reworded the text to be simpler:

       It is possible to
       receive two Device Information blocks, one provided by the device
       and one from the service provider.


>  -- 4.3.7: That seems odd for this to be a subsection of the device
>  information function.

On reflection, I agree.  I moved section 4.3.6 to be new top-level 
section 5, and section 4.3.7 to be new subsection 5.1, and added a 
reference in new section 5 to section 4.3.5.


>  -- section 5:
>  It seems awkard to use a numbered list for elements that are
>  close to a page long each. This forces each to be a single, overlong
>  paragraph. Please consider subsections.

I share your frustration, but unfortunately, if I switch to 
subsections the text that follows the section will be orphaned, since 
XML2RFC doesn't permit top-level text following a subsection.


>  -- section 5, list item 2: "circumstances about the provision of the
>  location"
>   I'm not sure I understand the meaning of "provision" in this
>  context.

It just means providing the location (who provided it, etc.)

>  - Sentence starting with: "When the access network provider"
>  This sentence provides context information that would have been useful to
>  have at
>  the start of the section.

OK, I moved this to be the third sentence in the section.


>  -- 5.4, 2nd paragraph:
>  I think people are going to be confused and look for
>  "by-reference" in 3204 or 3459. It might be worth re-citing 5621.

Good idea.  Added.

>  --10:
>
>  Some sections reference tables from other sections, and some include the
>  tables directly. It would be nice to be consistent, one way or the other.

I cleaned this up in -33 or -34 to move them all to be in the 
discussion sections, with the IANA section referencing them.

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At 8:03 AM -0700 9/1/15, Alvaro Retana wrote:

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>  Given that the intent of the document "is that every emergency call carry
>  the information described here using the mechanisms described here", and
>  that additional information is being introduced as 'Required', shouldn't
>  it update RFC6443 and/or at least RFC6881?

Hi Alvaro,

Thanks for the comment.  This sounds reasonable to me, so I added 
both RFCs to the "Updates" section.

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Hi Roger et al,

It has now been nearly two weeks since you sent this to the list and the =
update was published during the last IETF meeting.
This seems like plenty of time for Keith to have replied with further =
comments. Can we please forward with this document?

Cheers
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Keith is active on 3GPP mailing lists, so I think we would have heard from
him if he would have objections to how his comment were addressed. I think
we can move forward with the draft now.

Thank you
Laura

2015-09-14 8:13 GMT+02:00 James Winterbottom <a.james.winterbottom@gmail.co=
m
>:

> Hi Roger et al,
>
> It has now been nearly two weeks since you sent this to the list and the
> update was published during the last IETF meeting.
> This seems like plenty of time for Keith to have replied with further
> comments. Can we please forward with this document?
>
> Cheers
> James
>
>
> > On 1 Sep 2015, at 9:18 am, Roger Marshall <RMarshall@telecomsys.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > Keith, do the changes that James offered satisfy your issues?
> >
> > -roger.
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of James
> Winterbottom
> > Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 2:00 AM
> > To: ecrit_ietf.org
> > Subject: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-held-routing
> >
> > Hi All,
> >
> > The only comments received during the WGLC were from Keith Drage and I
> believe that I addressed all of these in a rev of the draft but I haven=
=E2=80=99t
> heard anything back.
> >
> > Keith, can you please confirm that your issues have all been addressed
> by the new text and if they have then can we please move the draft forwar=
d?
> >
> > Cheers
> > James
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div><div>Keith is active on 3GPP mailing lists, so I thin=
k we would have heard from him if he would have objections to how his comme=
nt were addressed. I think we can move forward with the draft now.<br><br><=
/div>Thank you<br></div>Laura <br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div=
 class=3D"gmail_quote">2015-09-14 8:13 GMT+02:00 James Winterbottom <span d=
ir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:a.james.winterbottom@gmail.com" target=3D"=
_blank">a.james.winterbottom@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span>:<br><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padd=
ing-left:1ex">Hi Roger et al,<br>
<br>
It has now been nearly two weeks since you sent this to the list and the up=
date was published during the last IETF meeting.<br>
This seems like plenty of time for Keith to have replied with further comme=
nts. Can we please forward with this document?<br>
<br>
Cheers<br>
<span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"#888888">James<br>
</font></span><div class=3D"HOEnZb"><div class=3D"h5"><br>
<br>
&gt; On 1 Sep 2015, at 9:18 am, Roger Marshall &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:RMarsh=
all@telecomsys.com">RMarshall@telecomsys.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Keith, do the changes that James offered satisfy your issues?<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; -roger.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; -----Original Message-----<br>
&gt; From: Ecrit [mailto:<a href=3D"mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org">ecrit-bo=
unces@ietf.org</a>] On Behalf Of James Winterbottom<br>
&gt; Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 2:00 AM<br>
&gt; To: <a href=3D"http://ecrit_ietf.org" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_bl=
ank">ecrit_ietf.org</a><br>
&gt; Subject: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-held-routing<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Hi All,<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; The only comments received during the WGLC were from Keith Drage and I=
 believe that I addressed all of these in a rev of the draft but I haven=E2=
=80=99t heard anything back.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Keith, can you please confirm that your issues have all been addressed=
 by the new text and if they have then can we please move the draft forward=
?<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Cheers<br>
&gt; James<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; _______________________________________________<br>
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At 4:51 PM -0700 9/13/15, Randall Gellens wrote:

>>   -- section 5:
>>   It seems awkard to use a numbered list for elements that are
>>   close to a page long each. This forces each to be a single, overlong
>>   paragraph. Please consider subsections.
>
>  I share your frustration, but unfortunately, if I switch to 
> subsections the text that follows the section will be orphaned, 
> since XML2RFC doesn't permit top-level text following a subsection.

It occurred to me after I replied that I can make pseudo paragraph 
breaks by using <vspace/>.  I've updated this text to do so and hence 
is easier to read.

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On 9/14/15 12:26 PM, Randall Gellens wrote:
> At 4:51 PM -0700 9/13/15, Randall Gellens wrote:
>
>>>   -- section 5:
>>>   It seems awkard to use a numbered list for elements that are
>>>   close to a page long each. This forces each to be a single, overlong
>>>   paragraph. Please consider subsections.
>>
>>  I share your frustration, but unfortunately, if I switch to
>> subsections the text that follows the section will be orphaned, since
>> XML2RFC doesn't permit top-level text following a subsection.
>
> It occurred to me after I replied that I can make pseudo paragraph
> breaks by using <vspace/>.  I've updated this text to do so and hence is
> easier to read.

IIUC, the two list elements correspond 1:1 with the subsections 5.1 and 5.2.

Why can't you trim the list elements down to their first sentence. Then 
move the rest of the text into the corresponding subsection? Some minor 
rewording should make that work.

	Thanks,
	Paul


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At 1:01 PM -0400 9/14/15, Paul Kyzivat wrote:

>  On 9/14/15 12:26 PM, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>  At 4:51 PM -0700 9/13/15, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>
>>>>    -- section 5:
>>>>    It seems awkard to use a numbered list for elements that are
>>>>    close to a page long each. This forces each to be a single, overlong
>>>>    paragraph. Please consider subsections.
>>>
>>>   I share your frustration, but unfortunately, if I switch to
>>>  subsections the text that follows the section will be orphaned, since
>>>  XML2RFC doesn't permit top-level text following a subsection.
>>
>>  It occurred to me after I replied that I can make pseudo paragraph
>>  breaks by using <vspace/>.  I've updated this text to do so and hence is
>>  easier to read.
>
>  IIUC, the two list elements correspond 1:1 with the subsections 5.1 and 5.2.
>
>  Why can't you trim the list elements down to their first sentence. 
> Then move the rest of the text into the corresponding subsection? 
> Some minor rewording should make that work.

The two list elements provide an overview, with details in 5.1, 5.2, 
and 5.3, so it's not 1:1.  I think with the <vspace/> it looks much 
better.  have a look at -35 when it's uploaded and see if you still 
think the material needs to be reworded.

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Hi Stephen and everyone,

Thanks for your comments.  Please see in-line.

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>  I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>  here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to
>  have the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG
>  already did that.)
>
>  (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not
>  sure that's a good option.  I think the data
>  minimisation recommendations argued for in RFC6973 and
>  RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For example,
>  saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in
>  any non-emergency call without explicit user
>  permission on a per-call basis or something similar?
>  I have to admit I'm nervous that defining all of these
>  may mean that some UA somewhere starts sending some of
>  them in other calls without asking. A restriction
>  along those lines would also be more in line with
>  webrtc too perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in
>  the WG, having considered those privacy issues - was
>  it? Either way, would adding such a "MUST NOT except
>  if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of the
>  kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.

There are two subissues here: the non-use of normative language, and 
the recognition that there are limited non-emergency cases where this 
can be used.  The document originally had normative language here, 
but there was some small discussion in ECRIT meetings and email based 
on (if I recall correctly), an objection from Keith Drage that the 
document couldn't impose these blanket mandates; Keith wanted the 
document to say only that use outside of an emergency call was 
undefined, but I wanted something stronger, so added text that it was 
not appropriate.  I don't mind if we want to go back to being 
normative, but I wanted to point out that it was changed based on 
Keith's objection.  The permission for certain private-use cases is 
to permit telematics service providers to use the same mechanisms on 
both legs of a call: between the vehicle and the telematics service 
center, and between the telematics service center and the PSAP; 
further, it makes sense to use the same mechanisms between the 
vehicle and telematics service center in all calls, since the service 
center call handler determines if a call is an emergency or not (as 
opposed to the vehicle in the direct case).  This is a very limited 
case, and it matches how things work in circuit-switched calls.


>  (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the
>  registries here should require more than expert
>  review. Extensibility in dealing with what will
>  inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data structures
>  that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to
>  perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime.
>  The document itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding
>  new kinds of data here can be counter productive for
>  emergency call handling, so being more conservative in
>  what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd like to
>  suggest we require standards track for extensions.
>  The following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some
>  related arguments (but of course has no standing in
>  the IETF so is just offered as a way to avoid
>  repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to
>  authority.)
>
>     [1]
>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00

We've had some discussion on this point alone.  I changed all 
instances where the text said:

    The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new value 
is relevant for this service element

To add an example that the entity is a recognized emergency-related SDO:

    The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new value 
is relevant for this service element (e.g., a recognized emergency 
services related SDO)


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>
>  - abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>  in the abstract

I don't think it's duplicative, since the first time says that this 
document does it both ways, and the second time says that previous 
mechanisms also did it both ways.

>  - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not
>  contact lists? proximity of friends? That (or
>  inferring as much) seems to me to be going too far, if
>  applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that this
>  could be extended in future by other standards-track
>  specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)

This text is informative and explanatory, it helps the reader 
understand what is meant by information about a location, and 
mentions specific types of data that NENA is in fact working on. 
Both proximity of friends and contact lists seem like data associated 
with a caller, which NENA has also worked on and defined a separate, 
out-of-band mechanism for (the data is held by a third party, a 
registry of third parties is available to the PSAP, who queries them).

>  - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not
>  relevant to a PSAP.

The text in question mentions it only as an example of personal data 
that might seem to indicate that vcard should be categorized as data 
about the caller rather than data about the call.  The draft does not 
require that anniversary date be sent (and in fact doesn't mandate 
which vcard fields are to be sent), although it's conceivable that a 
wedding anniversary might be useful to a PSAP call taker in some 
circumstances (such as when a caller might be suicidal).

>  - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest
>  deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station
>  and many other kinds of building? There may be some
>  country specific issue or technical here, but labelling
>  that with "prison" seems inappropriate to me.

We've discussed this in other email, but the short answer is that 
this matches capabilities provided in legacy emergency services 
systems, and we don't want to lose functionality.  It's quite common 
for calls from prisons to be treated very differently than other 
calls, and this isn't the case for power stations, hospitals, etc.

>  - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can
>  you try explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was
>  possible to tempt an implementation, so the language
>  there could be improved for sure:-)

I've reworded the text in question so it should be much clearer now:

    Privacy:  Information sent as a device/service-specific additional
       data URL in the DeviceInfo block is by reference (not by value),
       which inherently provides some additional privacy protection
       (since the requester needs to supply a certificate which is
       verified by the supplier).


>  - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think
>  provisioning the PKI for such a thing is easily done
>  these days and is rightly not optional. It might be
>  useful to say that TLS here needs to follow BCP195.  I
>  agree with the earlier comment that you should be
>  clear as to when mutually authenticated TLS is
>  required. The secdir review [2] also raised similar
>  issues and it'd be good to see responses to that too.
>  (Yes, that review only arrived today so it's entirely
>  reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>
>     [2]
>  https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html

I'm working through my email and the comments on this document, so 
I'll respond to that message on its own.  In response to other 
comments, I've clarified that when dereferencing blocks passed by 
reference, the requester supplies a client-side certificate which the 
supplier checks to uphold its policy (e.g., that the requester is an 
emergency services entity possessing a certificate issued by an 
emergency services CA).


>  - section 8: the sizes of the various additional data
>  items here could be characteristic and leak value
>  information regardless of TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add
>  a warning that these may enable relatively simple
>  traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if someone
>  had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability?
>  This is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon
>  image size was usable to identify 30+% of contacts in
>  one social network even over TLS, but before the
>  provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.

Given the restricted scope (emergency calls only), I'm not sure what 
would be useful to say here.  It's not expected that the same device 
issues a large number of emergency calls.

>  - Thanks for section 9. Good job.

Thank you.

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Given that the intent of the document “is that every emergency call carry
the information described here using the mechanisms described here”, and
that additional information is being introduced as ‘Required’, shouldn’t
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At 10:21 PM -0400 9/2/15, Barry Leiba wrote:

>  I've asked a few other people to look at it, and they, too, didn't get
>  "main", but they, too, had trouble coming up with a better name.
>  Maybe we shouldn't try to hard to make a very short name, and use a
>  longer one such as "main-office", or "front-desk", or some such.  That
>  plus more explanation in that paragraph in Section 4 should make it
>  all better.

I'd be happy to change the term "main" to something else, provided we 
can agree on something.  Perhaps "reception" or "main number" or 
"attendant"?  I'm kind of leaning toward "attendant" but would like 
to hear from others.

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At 10:00 PM -0700 9/1/15, Barry Leiba wrote:

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>  Two things are incorrect and need fixing:
>
>  ---- In Section 4, you have "tel" and "TYPE", and "property" and
>  "parameter" reversed in the explanation about the "main" parameter value.
>   The sentence is also confusingly worded.  Try this (and see also my
>  comments on this bit, below):
>
>  NEW
>     This document adds a new parameter value called "main" to the
>     "TYPE" parameter of the "tel" property.
>  END

Thanks for catching the error and suggesting improved wording.  I've 
changed the text accordingly.


>  ---- In Section 6, there are problems in the MIME structure in the
>  examples (figures 16 and 17).
>
>  1. The XML content should be indented at least as much as the SIP
>  headers, so you should either make sure that all XML lines are indented
>  at least 6 characters, or you should make the SIP headers be indented
>  only by 3.

Yes, the indenting in the examples was messed up.  Thanks for 
pointing it out.  I've fixed it up (also, many of the continuation 
lines were weirdly indented, and much of the XML examples were 
inconsistently indented).


>  2. There should not be a blank line between the Content-Type and
>  Content-Length headers.

No, there shouldn't.  Thanks for pointing it out.

>  3. There should not be a blank line after each boundary line; the part
>  headers should start immediately, as the first blank line ends the
>  headers.

Indeed.  Thanks for catching this.


>  4. There should be a blank line between the Content-Disposition header
>  and the XML content; that blank line ends the part headers and signals
>  the start of the part body.

Indeed so, thank you.


>  5. The intermediate boundary lines should not have the trailing "--";
>  that's reserved for the ending boundary.  The intermediates should all be
>  "--boundary1".

Yes, these were sloppy errors.  Thanks for catching them.

>  6. Figure 17 is missing the ending boundary, "--boundary1--", at the very
>  end of the figure.

Fixed, thanks.


>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>  COMMENT:
>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>  Throughout the document:
>  The current term is "media type", not "MIME type".  It would be good if
>  you can change that throughout the document.

Good point.  I also fixed "MIME subtype."


>  -- Section 3 --
>  A tiny, tiny point: I don't think the MAY in the last sentence is really
>  a 2119 key word, and suggest making it lower case.

Correct, either the section is normative or it isn't.  I also took 
the opportunity to clarify what is meant by "private-use".


>  -- Section 4 --
>
>     In an xCard there is no way to
>     specify a "main" telephone number.  These numbers are useful to
>     emergency responders who are called to a large enterprise.  This
>     document adds a new property value to the "tel" property of the TYPE
>     parameter called "main".
>
>  This doesn't explain sufficiently what you're after.  I initially
>  wondered why the PREF parameter didn't give you what you need (PREF=1,
>  this is my main phone number).  It was only when I read the registration
>  in Section 10 that I understood.  I'd suggest a value other than "main",
>  but I can't think of one right away.  At the least, please add more text
>  here to explain what you mean by "main".

I've added text in Section 4 to help explain this: "(that is, a 
primary contact number, typically of an enterprise, as opposed to a 
direct dial number of an individual employee)".

>  I'll also note that none of the examples include the new "main" parameter
>  value.  Given that you're creating the value, it might be good to show it
>  in use.

Good point.  I've fixed that.


>  -- Section 4.1.5 --
>
>        The Data
>        Provider Contact URI SHOULD be a TEL URI [RFC3966] in E.164 format
>        fully specified with country code.  If a TEL URI is not available,
>        it MAY be a generic SIP URI.
>
>  2119 key word problem @1: "you SHOULD do X, but you MAY do Y instead."
>  MAY contradicts the SHOULD.  It's not so bad here because your "if"
>  restricts the MAY (Section 5.3 isn't that way; see below), but I'd prefer
>  it if you'd change it to something like "If a TEL URI is not available, a
>  generic SIP URI is acceptable."  Or perhaps "A generic SIP URI is
>  acceptable only if a TEL URI is not available," which is a little
>  stronger.

I didn't see a problem here because "SHOULD" means "do it this way 
unless there's a really good reason why you can't, and you fully 
understand the implications", while the "if ... MAY" lists one such 
really good reason.  But, I don't really care, and because you think 
it's confusing, I'm happy to change the "MAY" to "is acceptable."


>  -- Section 4.4.2 --
>
>        If more than one <tel> property is provided, a parameter from the
>        vCard Property Value registry MUST be specified on each <tel>.
>
>  Do you really want that MUST, rather than a SHOULD?  Are you really
>  saying that if there are multiple phone numbers but I don't know their
>  TYPE values, it's better to pick one and send only that one than it is to
>  send you all of them just in case?

Good point.  I'll switch it to a MAY.


>  -- Section 5.1 --
>
>     The data may also be supplied by value in any SIP request or response
>     method that is permitted to contain a body (i.e., not a BYE request).
>
>  Is BYE the only SIP request that can't contain a body?  Or should that be
>  "e.g."?  (I'm asking; I don't know the answer.)

Per RFC 2543:

    Requests MAY contain message bodies unless otherwise noted. Within
    this specification, the BYE request MUST NOT contain a message body.
    ...
    All
    responses MAY include a body.

So, I suppose some other RFC could define a new request that isn't 
permitted to carry a body.  I'm not sure it's worth worrying about. 
If I change it to "e.g.," that would imply that there are such 
requests now.


>  -- Section 5.3 --
>
>     It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
>     this document by reference, but they MAY provide the data by value.
>
>  Here's the SHOULD/MAY problem without an "if" to mitigate it.  In this
>  case, I suggest explaining:
>
>  NEW
>     It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
>     this document by reference.  While it's permissible to provide the
>     data by value, this can expose private information [and/or whatever
>     other explanation].
>  END

Good point.  I reworded it to be:

    It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
    this document by reference, because PIDF-LOs can be fetched by a
    client or other entity and stored locally, so providing the data by
    value risks exposing private information to a larger audience.

>  -- Section 10.1 --
>  Thanks for providing guidance to the expert reviewers; that's really
>  helpful.

Thanks.

>  -- Section 11 --
>  Is the comma in "Christian, Militeau" spurious?

Indeed so.  Thanks for catching that!


>  -- Appendix A --
>  You appear to have turned the RELAX NG schema from RFC 6351 into an XML
>  schema and put it here, but then labelled it as informational -- a hedge,
>  I guess, in case there's a mistake in this version.  Why does it need to
>  be included here?  And how much review has it actually had, to make sure
>  that there weren't any mistakes in the conversion?

This was discussed and resolved in separate email.

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At 1:20 PM -0700 9/2/15, Brian Haberman wrote:

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>  I have no objections to the publication of this document.
>
>  - I find text like "Optional for blocks supplied by the originating
>  device, mandatory otherwise" in multiple places in this specification.
>  Is there a reason for not saying "originating devices MAY supply this
>  information, all other entities MUST supply this information" or some
>  such?

The reason is simply that this text is in the "Use:" field of a block 
definition, where the usual values are "required", "conditional", and 
"optional".

>  - I look forward to the resolution of Stephen's DISCUSS points.

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Hi, Randy... thanks for resolving all this, and I think there's
nothing more that needs to be said about any of it.  Just to confirm
on a couple of them:

> I've added text in Section 4 to help explain this: "(that is, a primary
> contact number, typically of an enterprise, as opposed to a direct dial
> number of an individual employee)".

That looks great, and should be enough to explain it; thanks.

>>  Is BYE the only SIP request that can't contain a body?  Or should that be
>>  "e.g."?  (I'm asking; I don't know the answer.)
...
> So, I suppose some other RFC could define a new request that isn't permitted
> to carry a body.  I'm not sure it's worth worrying about. If I change it to
> "e.g.," that would imply that there are such requests now.

But there are none other than BYE *now*, right?  So that's fine, then:
leave it as it is, and thanks for the answer.

> Good point.  I reworded it to be:
>
>    It is RECOMMENDED that access networks supply the data specified in
>    this document by reference, because PIDF-LOs can be fetched by a
>    client or other entity and stored locally, so providing the data by
>    value risks exposing private information to a larger audience.

Nice.

Discuss will clear when I can check the update, and, again, thanks for
sorting it all out.

Barry


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>>  I've asked a few other people to look at it, and they, too, didn't get
>>  "main", but they, too, had trouble coming up with a better name.
>>  Maybe we shouldn't try to hard to make a very short name, and use a
>>  longer one such as "main-office", or "front-desk", or some such.  That
>>  plus more explanation in that paragraph in Section 4 should make it
>>  all better.
>
> I'd be happy to change the term "main" to something else, provided we can
> agree on something.  Perhaps "reception" or "main number" or "attendant"?
> I'm kind of leaning toward "attendant" but would like to hear from others.

"Attendant" doesn't sound great to me, but I don't object to it.  Yes,
other ideas would help, if anyone has them.

Note that this is *not* part of my DISCUSS, as you've put in
clarifying text.  So let's try to find a better term, but let's not
get *too* wrapped up in it.

Barry


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I would prefer =E2=80=9CMain=E2=80=9D.  These days, it may not answer at =
a reception area, and may or may not have someone called =
=E2=80=9Cattendant=E2=80=9D.

Brian

> On Sep 15, 2015, at 9:21 PM, Randall Gellens <randy@qti.qualcomm.com> =
wrote:
>=20
> At 8:40 PM -0400 9/15/15, Barry Leiba wrote:
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>>  >>  I've asked a few other people to look at it, and they, too, =
didn't get
>>>>  "main", but they, too, had trouble coming up with a better name.
>>>>  Maybe we shouldn't try to hard to make a very short name, and use =
a
>>>>  longer one such as "main-office", or "front-desk", or some such.  =
That
>>>>  plus more explanation in that paragraph in Section 4 should make =
it
>>>>  all better.
>>>=20
>>> I'd be happy to change the term "main" to something else, provided =
we can
>>  > agree on something.  Perhaps "reception" or "main number" or =
"attendant"?
>>> I'm kind of leaning toward "attendant" but would like to hear from =
others.
>>=20
>> "Attendant" doesn't sound great to me, but I don't object to it.  =
Yes,
>> other ideas would help, if anyone has them.
>>=20
>> Note that this is *not* part of my DISCUSS, as you've put in
>> clarifying text.  So let's try to find a better term, but let's not
>> get *too* wrapped up in it.
>=20
> I'm fine with any of the ones: "reception" or "main number" or =
"attendant" or another one if someone comes up with it. Otherwise it'll =
stay "main".
>=20
>=20
> --=20
> Randall Gellens
> Opinions are personal;    facts are suspect;    I speak for myself =
only
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> The "press conference" is a politician's way of being informative
> without saying anything. Should he accidentally say something, he
> has at his side a "press officer" who immediately explains it away
> by "clarifying" it.                               -- Emery Kellen


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An alternative more generic name for TYPE could be "preferred" or "primary"=
 or something to describe that this is the first number they should try to =
call from amongst other contact info provided in the xCARD.

This may better convey what we are trying to distinguish, and work for a br=
oader set of non-office environments, so long as folks feel it is not too r=
edundant with "PREF" (I'm not sure how well implemented PREF is, so we may =
not be able to count on it being used extensively)

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At 10:21 PM -0400 9/2/15, Barry Leiba wrote:

>  I've asked a few other people to look at it, and they, too, didn't=20
> get  "main", but they, too, had trouble coming up with a better name.
>  Maybe we shouldn't try to hard to make a very short name, and use a =20
> longer one such as "main-office", or "front-desk", or some such.  That =20
> plus more explanation in that paragraph in Section 4 should make it =20
> all better.

I'd be happy to change the term "main" to something else, provided we can a=
gree on something.  Perhaps "reception" or "main number" or "attendant"?  I=
'm kind of leaning toward "attendant" but would like to hear from others.

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I'm fine with "main-number"

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 draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)")

My concern is that "preferred" is too generic and doesn't convey the sense =
of a main number for an organization.  I realize there are often automated =
attendants, but still think "attendant" would cover most cases.  However, h=
ow about using "main-number"?

At 3:31 PM +0000 9/16/15, Matt Serra wrote:

>  An alternative more generic name for TYPE could be "preferred" or=20
> "primary" or something to describe that this is the first number they=20
> should try to call from amongst other contact info provided in the=20
> xCARD.
>
>  This may better convey what we are trying to distinguish, and work=20
> for a broader set of non-office environments, so long as folks feel it=20
> is not too redundant with "PREF" (I'm not sure how well implemented=20
> PREF is, so we may not be able to count on it being used extensively)
>
>  -----Original Message-----
>  From: Randall Gellens [mailto:randy@qti.qualcomm.com]
>  Sent: Tuesday, September 15, 2015 7:11 PM
>  To: Barry Leiba; Brian Rosen
>  Cc: draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data@ietf.org; ecrit@ietf.org;=20
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>  Subject: [Ecrit] New term for "main" (was "Re: Barry Leiba's Discuss=20
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>
>  At 10:21 PM -0400 9/2/15, Barry Leiba wrote:
>
>>   I've asked a few other people to look at it, and they, too, didn't =20
>> get  "main", but they, too, had trouble coming up with a better name.
>>   Maybe we shouldn't try to hard to make a very short name, and use a =20
>> longer one such as "main-office", or "front-desk", or some such. =20
>> That  plus more explanation in that paragraph in Section 4 should=20
>> make it  all better.
>
>  I'd be happy to change the term "main" to something else, provided we=20
> can agree on something.  Perhaps "reception" or "main number" or=20
> "attendant"?  I'm kind of leaning toward "attendant" but would like to=20
> hear from others.
>
>  --
>  Randall Gellens
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For consideration: "main establishment" or "main establishment number"  as =
we're discussing how to reach (call back) an establishment (business, dorm,=
 hotel, etc.); not an individual's contact number.  By the way, if you goog=
le main phone or main phone number, hundreds of businesses come up with the=
ir main/switchboard number.  So main or main number is probably good enough=
.

Jerry

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Subject: Re: [Ecrit] New term for "main" (was "Re: Barry Leiba's Discuss on=
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I'm fine with "main-number"

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Subject: RE: [Ecrit] New term for "main" (was "Re: Barry Leiba's Discuss on=
 draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)")

My concern is that "preferred" is too generic and doesn't convey the sense =
of a main number for an organization.  I realize there are often automated =
attendants, but still think "attendant" would cover most cases.  However, h=
ow about using "main-number"?

At 3:31 PM +0000 9/16/15, Matt Serra wrote:

>  An alternative more generic name for TYPE could be "preferred" or=20
> "primary" or something to describe that this is the first number they=20
> should try to call from amongst other contact info provided in the=20
> xCARD.
>
>  This may better convey what we are trying to distinguish, and work=20
> for a broader set of non-office environments, so long as folks feel it=20
> is not too redundant with "PREF" (I'm not sure how well implemented=20
> PREF is, so we may not be able to count on it being used extensively)
>
>  -----Original Message-----
>  From: Randall Gellens [mailto:randy@qti.qualcomm.com]
>  Sent: Tuesday, September 15, 2015 7:11 PM
>  To: Barry Leiba; Brian Rosen
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>  Subject: [Ecrit] New term for "main" (was "Re: Barry Leiba's Discuss=20
> on draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: (with DISCUSS and
> COMMENT)")
>
>  At 10:21 PM -0400 9/2/15, Barry Leiba wrote:
>
>>   I've asked a few other people to look at it, and they, too, didn't=20
>> get  "main", but they, too, had trouble coming up with a better name.
>>   Maybe we shouldn't try to hard to make a very short name, and use a=20
>> longer one such as "main-office", or "front-desk", or some such.
>> That  plus more explanation in that paragraph in Section 4 should=20
>> make it  all better.
>
>  I'd be happy to change the term "main" to something else, provided we=20
> can agree on something.  Perhaps "reception" or "main number" or=20
> "attendant"?  I'm kind of leaning toward "attendant" but would like to=20
> hear from others.
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Subject: Re: [Ecrit] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: (with COMMENT)
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<div>Either &quot;at least some&quot; or &quot;as much ... as
possible&quot;?</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>So,</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>OLD:</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; The intent is that every emergency call carry
the</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; information described here using the mechanisms
described here.</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>NEW:</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; The intent is that every emergency call carry at
least some of<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp; the information described here using the mechanisms
described<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp; here.</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>OR:</div>
<div><br></div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; The intent is that every emergency call carry as
much as possible<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp; of the information described here using the mechanisms
described<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp; here.</div>
<div><br></div>
<div><br></div>
<div><br></div>
<div>At 2:30 PM +0000 9/3/15, Brian Rosen wrote:</div>
<div><br></div>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>Well, sort of. &nbsp;We really do want
every emergency call to at least have that identity
block.</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>We'll need to edit the text to say more
clearly what we mean. &nbsp;I see two ways to edit:</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>=8Aevery emergency call carry at least
some of the information=8A.</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>or</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>..every provider in the path of the call
provide at least some of the information =8A</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>Brian</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>On Sep 3, 2015, at 9:37 AM, Spencer
Dawkins at IETF &lt;<a
href=3D"mailto:spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com"
>spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt; wrote:</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>Hi, Brian,</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM, Rosen,
Brian &lt;<a
href=3D"mailto:Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz">Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz</a>&gt;
wrote:<br>
<blockquote>Not every call has every block.&nbsp; There is only one
block that is required, which is "who sent the data".&nbsp; That
block includes contact info.&nbsp; We want every entity to handles the
call to supply at least that block.&nbsp; If you have more info,
please send it, but at least tell me how to contact you.&nbsp; This
corresponds to the current mechanisms in North America and elsewhere:
mobile networks only supply the identity of the network operator
handling the call, wireline networks supply that and also a subscriber
name/address.<br>
<br>
The extension is additional blocks of data, and we have to allow
others to define blocks.&nbsp; Many of those blocks wouldn't make
sense for, as an example, a carrier to provide.&nbsp; Others might not
make sense for anyone except, say, an enterprise to supply.<br>
</blockquote>
</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>Thanks for the quick
feedback.</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>I see the problem - I should be
reading</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>&nbsp; &nbsp;The intent<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;is that every emergency call carry the information
described here<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;using the mechanisms described here.<br>
</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>as</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>&nbsp; &nbsp;The intent<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;is that every emergency call *that carries* the
information described here<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;*uses* the mechanisms described here.<br>
</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>and doesn't go off the reservation and
send it some other way.</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>Am I getting that right?</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>Thanks,</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite><br></blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>Spencer</blockquote>
<blockquote type=3D"cite" cite>&nbsp;<br>
<blockquote>Brian<br>
</blockquote>
<blockquote><br>
&gt; On Sep 2, 2015, at 11:22 PM, Spencer Dawkins &lt;<a
href=3D"mailto:spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com"
>spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for<br>
&gt; draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: No Objection<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to
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&gt;<br>
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&gt; Please refer to <a
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https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html</a><br>
&gt; for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT
positions.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found
here:<br>
&gt; <a
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data/</a><br
>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;
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>
&gt; COMMENT:<br>
&gt;
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>
&gt;<br>
&gt; I note that Stephen hasn't cleared his Discuss yet, so I'll let
that play</blockquote>
<blockquote>&gt; out (and thanks to all who are busily Discussing it),
but just for the<br>
&gt; record, I'm also confused between<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&nbsp; &nbsp;The intent<br>
&gt;&nbsp; &nbsp;is that every emergency call carry the information
described here<br>
&gt;&nbsp; &nbsp;using the mechanisms described here.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; and (paraphrasing)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; &quot;we aren't the experts on extending this mechanism, and we
can't say who<br>
&gt; is, but there's more than one set of experts&quot;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; This tussle sounds like a fork waiting to happen.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Is that going to be a problem? One answer could be &quot;if it
is, we aren't<br>
&gt; the ones who are going to have to solve it&quot;, but I thought
I'd ask.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
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At 12:49 PM -0700 9/16/15, Jerry Schlesinger wrote:

>  For consideration: "main establishment" or "main establishment 
> number"  as we're discussing how to reach (call back) an 
> establishment (business, dorm, hotel, etc.); not an individual's 
> contact number.  By the way, if you google main phone or main phone 
> number, hundreds of businesses come up with their main/switchboard 
> number.  So main or main number is probably good enough

I'm going to go with "main-number" unless there are objections.

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
 This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies Working Group of the IETF.

        Title           : Additional Data Related to an Emergency Call
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Brian Rosen
                          Hannes Tschofenig
                          Roger Marshall
                          James Winterbottom
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-35.txt
	Pages           : 112
	Date            : 2015-09-16

Abstract:
   When an emergency call is sent to a Public Safety Answering Point
   (PSAP), the originating device, the access network provider to which
   the device is connected, and all service providers in the path of the
   call have information about the call, the caller or the location
   which is helpful for the PSAP to have in handling the emergency.
   This document describes data structures and mechanisms to convey such
   data to the PSAP.  The intent is that every emergency call carry as
   much as possible of the information described here using the
   mechanisms described here.

   The mechanisms permit the data to be conveyed by reference (as an
   external resource) or by value (within the body of a SIP message or a
   location object).  This follows the tradition of prior emergency
   services standardization work where data can be conveyed by value
   within the call signaling (i.e., in the body of the SIP message) or
   by reference.


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Thanks so much for addressing all my comments -- version -35 looks really
good.

A minor thing that the RFC Editor will correct anyway, but if you happen
to do another round of changes: You have "mime" in lower case in three
places (in Sections 4.2, 4.3, and 4.5), and they should be upper-cased.



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Hiya,

On 15/09/15 02:56, Randall Gellens wrote:
> Hi Stephen and everyone,
> 
> Thanks for your comments.  Please see in-line.
> 
> At 4:47 PM -0700 9/1/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:
> 
>>  Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for
>>  draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Discuss
>>
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>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>  DISCUSS:
>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>
>>  I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>>  here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to
>>  have the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG
>>  already did that.)
>>
>>  (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not
>>  sure that's a good option.  I think the data
>>  minimisation recommendations argued for in RFC6973 and
>>  RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For example,
>>  saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in
>>  any non-emergency call without explicit user
>>  permission on a per-call basis or something similar?
>>  I have to admit I'm nervous that defining all of these
>>  may mean that some UA somewhere starts sending some of
>>  them in other calls without asking. A restriction
>>  along those lines would also be more in line with
>>  webrtc too perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in
>>  the WG, having considered those privacy issues - was
>>  it? Either way, would adding such a "MUST NOT except
>>  if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of the
>>  kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.
> 
> There are two subissues here: the non-use of normative language, and the
> recognition that there are limited non-emergency cases where this can be
> used.  The document originally had normative language here, but there
> was some small discussion in ECRIT meetings and email based on (if I
> recall correctly), an objection from Keith Drage that the document
> couldn't impose these blanket mandates; Keith wanted the document to say
> only that use outside of an emergency call was undefined, but I wanted
> something stronger, so added text that it was not appropriate.  I don't
> mind if we want to go back to being normative, but I wanted to point out
> that it was changed based on Keith's objection.  The permission for
> certain private-use cases is to permit telematics service providers to
> use the same mechanisms on both legs of a call: between the vehicle and
> the telematics service center, and between the telematics service center
> and the PSAP; further, it makes sense to use the same mechanisms between
> the vehicle and telematics service center in all calls, since the
> service center call handler determines if a call is an emergency or not
> (as opposed to the vehicle in the direct case).  This is a very limited
> case, and it matches how things work in circuit-switched calls.

Hmm... in earlier emails with Brian Rosen, I thought we were heading
towards a "MUST NOT except" direction? The changes in -35 don't seem
to me to going there at all. Was there discussion between authors or
the WG on this or do we just have diverging author opinions?

On the current text change in section 3, I don't know what a
"telematics" service provider is (really, it was maybe a meaningful
term here in the early 1990's but is no longer) and the "or other"
clause waters any restriction down to nothing at all since any
relevant entity here is some kind of service provider.

How about saying: "This data MUST NOT be sent for calls that are
not clearly emergency calls. Generic implementations (e.g. of a
SIP UA) MUST only send this data for an emergency call.
Specialised user agents that need to send this data in a possibly
non-emergency call ought be described in specialised RFCs that
justify the need for that data."

I would suggest deleting the text added here between -34 and -35.

I would prefer a 2119 normative statement in this case, as I think
(some of) the customers for UAs here are the sort who do pay
attention to that kind of thing.

> 
> 
>>  (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the
>>  registries here should require more than expert
>>  review. Extensibility in dealing with what will
>>  inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data structures
>>  that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to
>>  perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime.
>>  The document itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding
>>  new kinds of data here can be counter productive for
>>  emergency call handling, so being more conservative in
>>  what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd like to
>>  suggest we require standards track for extensions.
>>  The following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some
>>  related arguments (but of course has no standing in
>>  the IETF so is just offered as a way to avoid
>>  repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to
>>  authority.)
>>
>>     [1]
>>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00
>>
> 
> We've had some discussion on this point alone.  I changed all instances
> where the text said:
> 
>    The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new value is
> relevant for this service element
> 
> To add an example that the entity is a recognized emergency-related SDO:
> 
>    The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new value is
> relevant for this service element (e.g., a recognized emergency services
> related SDO)

That's a good change and I've cleared that part of the discuss.
As a non-blocking comment, I'd suggest explaining the issue
at the start of section 11 as well as in the subsections and
I wondered if that phrasing might also apply to other 11.1.x
subsections, but I'm ok that the expert once alerted to this
will probably do the right thing.

The other stuff below is fine.

Cheers,
S.

> 
> 
>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>  COMMENT:
>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>>
>>  - abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>>  in the abstract
> 
> I don't think it's duplicative, since the first time says that this
> document does it both ways, and the second time says that previous
> mechanisms also did it both ways.
> 
>>  - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not
>>  contact lists? proximity of friends? That (or
>>  inferring as much) seems to me to be going too far, if
>>  applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that this
>>  could be extended in future by other standards-track
>>  specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)
> 
> This text is informative and explanatory, it helps the reader understand
> what is meant by information about a location, and mentions specific
> types of data that NENA is in fact working on. Both proximity of friends
> and contact lists seem like data associated with a caller, which NENA
> has also worked on and defined a separate, out-of-band mechanism for
> (the data is held by a third party, a registry of third parties is
> available to the PSAP, who queries them).
> 
>>  - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not
>>  relevant to a PSAP.
> 
> The text in question mentions it only as an example of personal data
> that might seem to indicate that vcard should be categorized as data
> about the caller rather than data about the call.  The draft does not
> require that anniversary date be sent (and in fact doesn't mandate which
> vcard fields are to be sent), although it's conceivable that a wedding
> anniversary might be useful to a PSAP call taker in some circumstances
> (such as when a caller might be suicidal).
> 
>>  - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest
>>  deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station
>>  and many other kinds of building? There may be some
>>  country specific issue or technical here, but labelling
>>  that with "prison" seems inappropriate to me.
> 
> We've discussed this in other email, but the short answer is that this
> matches capabilities provided in legacy emergency services systems, and
> we don't want to lose functionality.  It's quite common for calls from
> prisons to be treated very differently than other calls, and this isn't
> the case for power stations, hospitals, etc.
> 
>>  - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can
>>  you try explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was
>>  possible to tempt an implementation, so the language
>>  there could be improved for sure:-)
> 
> I've reworded the text in question so it should be much clearer now:
> 
>    Privacy:  Information sent as a device/service-specific additional
>       data URL in the DeviceInfo block is by reference (not by value),
>       which inherently provides some additional privacy protection
>       (since the requester needs to supply a certificate which is
>       verified by the supplier).
> 
> 
>>  - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think
>>  provisioning the PKI for such a thing is easily done
>>  these days and is rightly not optional. It might be
>>  useful to say that TLS here needs to follow BCP195.  I
>>  agree with the earlier comment that you should be
>>  clear as to when mutually authenticated TLS is
>>  required. The secdir review [2] also raised similar
>>  issues and it'd be good to see responses to that too.
>>  (Yes, that review only arrived today so it's entirely
>>  reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>>
>>     [2]
>>  https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html
> 
> I'm working through my email and the comments on this document, so I'll
> respond to that message on its own.  In response to other comments, I've
> clarified that when dereferencing blocks passed by reference, the
> requester supplies a client-side certificate which the supplier checks
> to uphold its policy (e.g., that the requester is an emergency services
> entity possessing a certificate issued by an emergency services CA).
> 
> 
>>  - section 8: the sizes of the various additional data
>>  items here could be characteristic and leak value
>>  information regardless of TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add
>>  a warning that these may enable relatively simple
>>  traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if someone
>>  had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability?
>>  This is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon
>>  image size was usable to identify 30+% of contacts in
>>  one social network even over TLS, but before the
>>  provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.
> 
> Given the restricted scope (emergency calls only), I'm not sure what
> would be useful to say here.  It's not expected that the same device
> issues a large number of emergency calls.
> 
>>  - Thanks for section 9. Good job.
> 
> Thank you.
> 


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Hi Stephen,

At 5:13 PM +0100 9/18/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:

>  Hiya,
>
>  On 15/09/15 02:56, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>  Hi Stephen and everyone,
>>
>>  Thanks for your comments.  Please see in-line.
>>
>>  At 4:47 PM -0700 9/1/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:
>>
>>>   Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for
>>>   draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Discuss
>>>
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>>>
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>>>
>>>
>>>   ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>   DISCUSS:
>>>   ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>>
>>>   I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>>>   here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to
>>>   have the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG
>>>   already did that.)
>>>
>>>   (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not
>>>   sure that's a good option.  I think the data
>>>   minimisation recommendations argued for in RFC6973 and
>>>   RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For example,
>>>   saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in
>>>   any non-emergency call without explicit user
>>>   permission on a per-call basis or something similar?
>>>   I have to admit I'm nervous that defining all of these
>>>   may mean that some UA somewhere starts sending some of
>>>   them in other calls without asking. A restriction
>>>   along those lines would also be more in line with
>>>   webrtc too perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in
>>>   the WG, having considered those privacy issues - was
>>>   it? Either way, would adding such a "MUST NOT except
>>>   if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of the
>>>   kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.
>>
>>  There are two subissues here: the non-use of normative language, and the
>>  recognition that there are limited non-emergency cases where this can be
>>  used.  The document originally had normative language here, but there
>>  was some small discussion in ECRIT meetings and email based on (if I
>>  recall correctly), an objection from Keith Drage that the document
>>  couldn't impose these blanket mandates; Keith wanted the document to say
>>  only that use outside of an emergency call was undefined, but I wanted
>>  something stronger, so added text that it was not appropriate.  I don't
>>  mind if we want to go back to being normative, but I wanted to point out
>>  that it was changed based on Keith's objection.  The permission for
>>  certain private-use cases is to permit telematics service providers to
>>  use the same mechanisms on both legs of a call: between the vehicle and
>>  the telematics service center, and between the telematics service center
>>  and the PSAP; further, it makes sense to use the same mechanisms between
>>  the vehicle and telematics service center in all calls, since the
>>  service center call handler determines if a call is an emergency or not
>>  (as opposed to the vehicle in the direct case).  This is a very limited
>>  case, and it matches how things work in circuit-switched calls.
>
>  Hmm... in earlier emails with Brian Rosen, I thought we were heading
>  towards a "MUST NOT except" direction? The changes in -35 don't seem
>  to me to going there at all. Was there discussion between authors or
>  the WG on this or do we just have diverging author opinions?

I think Brian had forgotten that the switch in the text from 
normative to descriptive language was based on Keith's objection, 
which was discussed in an ECRIT session and then referred to in 
others during document status updates.


>  On the current text change in section 3, I don't know what a
>  "telematics" service provider is (really, it was maybe a meaningful
>  term here in the early 1990's but is no longer) and the "or other"
>  clause waters any restriction down to nothing at all since any
>  relevant entity here is some kind of service provider.

I think the term "telematics service provider" is pretty clear, much 
more so now than in the '90s, since all major vehicle manufacturers 
now have telematics systems with emergency capabilities, and those 
that don't currently have them will be deploying them within a couple 
of years.  Back in the '90s there were only a few, such as OnStar. 
Brian and I have talked to various vehicle and solution vendors who 
have expressed a desire to use the same mechanism on both legs of a 
call.  Further, in a system such as OnStar, vehicle-initiated 
emergency calls go to the service center and likely will be placed as 
normal, not emergency calls (which in cellular systems generally 
follow a specific set of steps, including an emergency registration 
followed by an emergency session establishment, which has 
difficulties when the call is placed to a third-party and not a PSAP).

The current wording seems more restrictive to me than you seem to 
think.  The current wording says "communications between a ... 
service provider and dedicated equipment ... where the endpoints have 
a preexisting relationship and privacy issues are addressed within 
the relationship" which seems to me to rule out casual use.  There 
needs to be a service provider who has dedicated equipment and there 
needs to be a preexisting relationship that addresses privacy issues. 
General softphone implementations are not going to transmit the data 
except in an emergency call.  Only software on dedicated devices will 
send the data on other classes of calls.

>  How about saying: "This data MUST NOT be sent for calls that are
>  not clearly emergency calls. Generic implementations (e.g. of a
>  SIP UA) MUST only send this data for an emergency call.
>  Specialised user agents that need to send this data in a possibly
>  non-emergency call ought be described in specialised RFCs that
>  justify the need for that data."

I think we already make the point that general-purpose 
implementations won't send the data except in an emergency call 
(although maybe we could call this out to make it even more clear), 
but expecting telematics service providers to publish RFCs seems way 
too high a burden, and for no benefit, since such specialized 
implementations are the only ones that would send the data on other 
call types.

>  I would suggest deleting the text added here between -34 and -35.
>
>  I would prefer a 2119 normative statement in this case, as I think
>  (some of) the customers for UAs here are the sort who do pay
>  attention to that kind of thing.

This was originally 2119 normative language but was changed after 
Keith's objection.


>   >>  (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the
>>>   registries here should require more than expert
>>>   review. Extensibility in dealing with what will
>>>   inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data structures
>>>   that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to
>>>   perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime.
>>>   The document itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding
>>>   new kinds of data here can be counter productive for
>>>   emergency call handling, so being more conservative in
>>>   what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd like to
>>>   suggest we require standards track for extensions.
>>>   The following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some
>>>   related arguments (but of course has no standing in
>>>   the IETF so is just offered as a way to avoid
>>>   repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to
>   >>  authority.)
>>>
>>>      [1]
>>>   https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00
>>>
>>
>>  We've had some discussion on this point alone.  I changed all instances
>>  where the text said:
>>
>>     The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new value is
>>  relevant for this service element
>>
>>  To add an example that the entity is a recognized emergency-related SDO:
>>
>>     The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new value is
>   > relevant for this service element (e.g., a recognized emergency services
>   > related SDO)
>
>  That's a good change and I've cleared that part of the discuss.
>  As a non-blocking comment, I'd suggest explaining the issue
>  at the start of section 11 as well as in the subsections and
>  I wondered if that phrasing might also apply to other 11.1.x
>  subsections, but I'm ok that the expert once alerted to this
>  will probably do the right thing.

I've added the following new paragraph to Section 11:

    For several of the sub-registries, "Expert Review" is the criteria
    for adding new entries.  As discussed in Section 5, it can be
    counterproductive to register new types of data, and as discussed in
    Section 10, data sent as part of an emergency call can be very
    privacy-sensitive.  In some cases, it is anticipated that various
    standards bodies dealing with emergency services might need to
    register new values, and in those cases text below advises the
    designed expert to verify that the entity requesting the registration
    is relevant (e.g., a recognized emergency services related SDO).  In
    other cases, especially those where the trade-off between the
    potential benefit versus danger of new registrations is more
    conservative (such as Section 11.1.9), "Specification Required" is
    the criteria, which is a higher hurdle and also implicitly includes
    an expert review.



>
>  The other stuff below is fine.
>
>  Cheers,
>  S.
>
>>
>>
>>>   ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>   COMMENT:
>>>   ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>
>>>
>>>   - abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>>>   in the abstract
>>
>>  I don't think it's duplicative, since the first time says that this
>>  document does it both ways, and the second time says that previous
>>  mechanisms also did it both ways.
>>
>>>   - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not
>>>   contact lists? proximity of friends? That (or
>>>   inferring as much) seems to me to be going too far, if
>>>   applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that this
>>>   could be extended in future by other standards-track
>>>   specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)
>>
>>  This text is informative and explanatory, it helps the reader understand
>>  what is meant by information about a location, and mentions specific
>>  types of data that NENA is in fact working on. Both proximity of friends
>>  and contact lists seem like data associated with a caller, which NENA
>>  has also worked on and defined a separate, out-of-band mechanism for
>>  (the data is held by a third party, a registry of third parties is
>>  available to the PSAP, who queries them).
>>
>>>   - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not
>>>   relevant to a PSAP.
>>
>>  The text in question mentions it only as an example of personal data
>>  that might seem to indicate that vcard should be categorized as data
>>  about the caller rather than data about the call.  The draft does not
>>  require that anniversary date be sent (and in fact doesn't mandate which
>>  vcard fields are to be sent), although it's conceivable that a wedding
>>  anniversary might be useful to a PSAP call taker in some circumstances
>>  (such as when a caller might be suicidal).
>>
>>>   - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest
>>>   deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station
>>>   and many other kinds of building? There may be some
>>>   country specific issue or technical here, but labelling
>>>   that with "prison" seems inappropriate to me.
>>
>>  We've discussed this in other email, but the short answer is that this
>>  matches capabilities provided in legacy emergency services systems, and
>   > we don't want to lose functionality.  It's quite common for calls from
>>  prisons to be treated very differently than other calls, and this isn't
>>  the case for power stations, hospitals, etc.
>>
>>>   - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can
>>>   you try explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was
>>>   possible to tempt an implementation, so the language
>>>   there could be improved for sure:-)
>>
>>  I've reworded the text in question so it should be much clearer now:
>>
>>     Privacy:  Information sent as a device/service-specific additional
>>        data URL in the DeviceInfo block is by reference (not by value),
>>        which inherently provides some additional privacy protection
>>        (since the requester needs to supply a certificate which is
>>        verified by the supplier).
>>
>>
>>>   - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think
>>>   provisioning the PKI for such a thing is easily done
>>>   these days and is rightly not optional. It might be
>>>   useful to say that TLS here needs to follow BCP195.  I
>>>   agree with the earlier comment that you should be
>>>   clear as to when mutually authenticated TLS is
>>>   required. The secdir review [2] also raised similar
>>>   issues and it'd be good to see responses to that too.
>>>   (Yes, that review only arrived today so it's entirely
>>>   reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>>>
>>>      [2]
>>>   https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html
>>
>>  I'm working through my email and the comments on this document, so I'll
>>  respond to that message on its own.  In response to other comments, I've
>>  clarified that when dereferencing blocks passed by reference, the
>>  requester supplies a client-side certificate which the supplier checks
>>  to uphold its policy (e.g., that the requester is an emergency services
>>  entity possessing a certificate issued by an emergency services CA).
>>
>>
>>>   - section 8: the sizes of the various additional data
>>>   items here could be characteristic and leak value
>>>   information regardless of TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add
>>>   a warning that these may enable relatively simple
>>>   traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if someone
>>>   had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability?
>>>   This is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon
>>>   image size was usable to identify 30+% of contacts in
>>>   one social network even over TLS, but before the
>>>   provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.
>>
>>  Given the restricted scope (emergency calls only), I'm not sure what
>>  would be useful to say here.  It's not expected that the same device
>>  issues a large number of emergency calls.
>>
>>>   - Thanks for section 9. Good job.
>>
>>  Thank you.
>>



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Hi Barry,

At 12:33 AM -0700 9/18/15, Barry Leiba wrote:

>  Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
>  draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-35: No Objection
>
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>
>  Thanks so much for addressing all my comments -- version -35 looks really
>  good.
>
>  A minor thing that the RFC Editor will correct anyway, but if you happen
>  to do another round of changes: You have "mime" in lower case in three
>  places (in Sections 4.2, 4.3, and 4.5), and they should be upper-cased.

I did make some changes in response to Stephen's email, and included 
the case correction on "MIME".  Thanks for catching it.

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On 18/09/15 19:04, Randall Gellens wrote:
> Hi Stephen,
> 
> At 5:13 PM +0100 9/18/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:
> 
>>  Hiya,
>>
>>  On 15/09/15 02:56, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>>  Hi Stephen and everyone,
>>>
>>>  Thanks for your comments.  Please see in-line.
>>>
>>>  At 4:47 PM -0700 9/1/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:
>>>
>>>>   Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for
>>>>   draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Discuss
>>>>
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>>>>  
>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>   DISCUSS:
>>>>  
>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>   I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>>>>   here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to
>>>>   have the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG
>>>>   already did that.)
>>>>
>>>>   (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not
>>>>   sure that's a good option.  I think the data
>>>>   minimisation recommendations argued for in RFC6973 and
>>>>   RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For example,
>>>>   saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in
>>>>   any non-emergency call without explicit user
>>>>   permission on a per-call basis or something similar?
>>>>   I have to admit I'm nervous that defining all of these
>>>>   may mean that some UA somewhere starts sending some of
>>>>   them in other calls without asking. A restriction
>>>>   along those lines would also be more in line with
>>>>   webrtc too perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in
>>>>   the WG, having considered those privacy issues - was
>>>>   it? Either way, would adding such a "MUST NOT except
>>>>   if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of the
>>>>   kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.
>>>
>>>  There are two subissues here: the non-use of normative language, and
>>> the
>>>  recognition that there are limited non-emergency cases where this
>>> can be
>>>  used.  The document originally had normative language here, but there
>>>  was some small discussion in ECRIT meetings and email based on (if I
>>>  recall correctly), an objection from Keith Drage that the document
>>>  couldn't impose these blanket mandates; Keith wanted the document to
>>> say
>>>  only that use outside of an emergency call was undefined, but I wanted
>>>  something stronger, so added text that it was not appropriate.  I don't
>>>  mind if we want to go back to being normative, but I wanted to point
>>> out
>>>  that it was changed based on Keith's objection.  The permission for
>>>  certain private-use cases is to permit telematics service providers to
>>>  use the same mechanisms on both legs of a call: between the vehicle and
>>>  the telematics service center, and between the telematics service
>>> center
>>>  and the PSAP; further, it makes sense to use the same mechanisms
>>> between
>>>  the vehicle and telematics service center in all calls, since the
>>>  service center call handler determines if a call is an emergency or not
>>>  (as opposed to the vehicle in the direct case).  This is a very limited
>>>  case, and it matches how things work in circuit-switched calls.
>>
>>  Hmm... in earlier emails with Brian Rosen, I thought we were heading
>>  towards a "MUST NOT except" direction? The changes in -35 don't seem
>>  to me to going there at all. Was there discussion between authors or
>>  the WG on this or do we just have diverging author opinions?
> 
> I think Brian had forgotten that the switch in the text from normative
> to descriptive language was based on Keith's objection, which was
> discussed in an ECRIT session and then referred to in others during
> document status updates.

Hmm again;-) I'm not so pushed about the use or lack of normative
language (though I do prefer it in this case) as with what is
said. And there seems to me to be quite a divergence between what
Brian was saying and what you're saying. (Which is entirely fine
and could be meaningful to you folks too, or just something I'm
mixed up about.)

> 
> 
>>  On the current text change in section 3, I don't know what a
>>  "telematics" service provider is (really, it was maybe a meaningful
>>  term here in the early 1990's but is no longer) and the "or other"
>>  clause waters any restriction down to nothing at all since any
>>  relevant entity here is some kind of service provider.
> 
> I think the term "telematics service provider" is pretty clear, much
> more so now than in the '90s,

I may be an outlier here, but I do think the opposite. The set of
things at [1] better match my understanding of the term. Or maybe
it's more of a US-centric usage? Or it could just have changed over
time I guess.

    [1]
https://scholar.google.com/scholar?q=telematics&hl=en&as_sdt=0%2C5&as_ylo=&as_yhi=1993

If you do keep that term, maybe add a reference. Or say "vehicle
tracking services" or something that'll still work even if the
terminology wanders again.

> since all major vehicle manufacturers now
> have telematics systems with emergency capabilities, and those that
> don't currently have them will be deploying them within a couple of
> years.  Back in the '90s there were only a few, such as OnStar. Brian
> and I have talked to various vehicle and solution vendors who have
> expressed a desire to use the same mechanism on both legs of a call. 
> Further, in a system such as OnStar, vehicle-initiated emergency calls
> go to the service center and likely will be placed as normal, not
> emergency calls (which in cellular systems generally follow a specific
> set of steps, including an emergency registration followed by an
> emergency session establishment, which has difficulties when the call is
> placed to a third-party and not a PSAP).
> 
> The current wording seems more restrictive to me than you seem to
> think.  

Right, I think we're seeing different meanings in the text. And
that's probably a signal that a bit more work's needed. But I'm
out of time right now, I'll look at it again over the weekend and
maybe get inspired. Or maybe someone else will be.

Cheers,
S.

> The current wording says "communications between a ... service
> provider and dedicated equipment ... where the endpoints have a
> preexisting relationship and privacy issues are addressed within the
> relationship" which seems to me to rule out casual use.  There needs to
> be a service provider who has dedicated equipment and there needs to be
> a preexisting relationship that addresses privacy issues. General
> softphone implementations are not going to transmit the data except in
> an emergency call.  Only software on dedicated devices will send the
> data on other classes of calls.
> 
>>  How about saying: "This data MUST NOT be sent for calls that are
>>  not clearly emergency calls. Generic implementations (e.g. of a
>>  SIP UA) MUST only send this data for an emergency call.
>>  Specialised user agents that need to send this data in a possibly
>>  non-emergency call ought be described in specialised RFCs that
>>  justify the need for that data."
> 
> I think we already make the point that general-purpose implementations
> won't send the data except in an emergency call (although maybe we could
> call this out to make it even more clear), but expecting telematics
> service providers to publish RFCs seems way too high a burden, and for
> no benefit, since such specialized implementations are the only ones
> that would send the data on other call types.
> 
>>  I would suggest deleting the text added here between -34 and -35.
>>
>>  I would prefer a 2119 normative statement in this case, as I think
>>  (some of) the customers for UAs here are the sort who do pay
>>  attention to that kind of thing.
> 
> This was originally 2119 normative language but was changed after
> Keith's objection.
> 
> 
>>   >>  (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the
>>>>   registries here should require more than expert
>>>>   review. Extensibility in dealing with what will
>>>>   inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data structures
>>>>   that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to
>>>>   perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime.
>>>>   The document itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding
>>>>   new kinds of data here can be counter productive for
>>>>   emergency call handling, so being more conservative in
>>>>   what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd like to
>>>>   suggest we require standards track for extensions.
>>>>   The following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some
>>>>   related arguments (but of course has no standing in
>>>>   the IETF so is just offered as a way to avoid
>>>>   repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to
>>   >>  authority.)
>>>>
>>>>      [1]
>>>>  
>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>>  We've had some discussion on this point alone.  I changed all instances
>>>  where the text said:
>>>
>>>     The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new
>>> value is
>>>  relevant for this service element
>>>
>>>  To add an example that the entity is a recognized emergency-related
>>> SDO:
>>>
>>>     The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new
>>> value is
>>   > relevant for this service element (e.g., a recognized emergency
>> services
>>   > related SDO)
>>
>>  That's a good change and I've cleared that part of the discuss.
>>  As a non-blocking comment, I'd suggest explaining the issue
>>  at the start of section 11 as well as in the subsections and
>>  I wondered if that phrasing might also apply to other 11.1.x
>>  subsections, but I'm ok that the expert once alerted to this
>>  will probably do the right thing.
> 
> I've added the following new paragraph to Section 11:
> 
>    For several of the sub-registries, "Expert Review" is the criteria
>    for adding new entries.  As discussed in Section 5, it can be
>    counterproductive to register new types of data, and as discussed in
>    Section 10, data sent as part of an emergency call can be very
>    privacy-sensitive.  In some cases, it is anticipated that various
>    standards bodies dealing with emergency services might need to
>    register new values, and in those cases text below advises the
>    designed expert to verify that the entity requesting the registration
>    is relevant (e.g., a recognized emergency services related SDO).  In
>    other cases, especially those where the trade-off between the
>    potential benefit versus danger of new registrations is more
>    conservative (such as Section 11.1.9), "Specification Required" is
>    the criteria, which is a higher hurdle and also implicitly includes
>    an expert review.
> 
> 
> 
>>
>>  The other stuff below is fine.
>>
>>  Cheers,
>>  S.
>>
>>>
>>>
>>>>  
>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>   COMMENT:
>>>>  
>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>   - abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>>>>   in the abstract
>>>
>>>  I don't think it's duplicative, since the first time says that this
>>>  document does it both ways, and the second time says that previous
>>>  mechanisms also did it both ways.
>>>
>>>>   - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not
>>>>   contact lists? proximity of friends? That (or
>>>>   inferring as much) seems to me to be going too far, if
>>>>   applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that this
>>>>   could be extended in future by other standards-track
>>>>   specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)
>>>
>>>  This text is informative and explanatory, it helps the reader
>>> understand
>>>  what is meant by information about a location, and mentions specific
>>>  types of data that NENA is in fact working on. Both proximity of
>>> friends
>>>  and contact lists seem like data associated with a caller, which NENA
>>>  has also worked on and defined a separate, out-of-band mechanism for
>>>  (the data is held by a third party, a registry of third parties is
>>>  available to the PSAP, who queries them).
>>>
>>>>   - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not
>>>>   relevant to a PSAP.
>>>
>>>  The text in question mentions it only as an example of personal data
>>>  that might seem to indicate that vcard should be categorized as data
>>>  about the caller rather than data about the call.  The draft does not
>>>  require that anniversary date be sent (and in fact doesn't mandate
>>> which
>>>  vcard fields are to be sent), although it's conceivable that a wedding
>>>  anniversary might be useful to a PSAP call taker in some circumstances
>>>  (such as when a caller might be suicidal).
>>>
>>>>   - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest
>>>>   deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station
>>>>   and many other kinds of building? There may be some
>>>>   country specific issue or technical here, but labelling
>>>>   that with "prison" seems inappropriate to me.
>>>
>>>  We've discussed this in other email, but the short answer is that this
>>>  matches capabilities provided in legacy emergency services systems, and
>>   > we don't want to lose functionality.  It's quite common for calls
>> from
>>>  prisons to be treated very differently than other calls, and this isn't
>>>  the case for power stations, hospitals, etc.
>>>
>>>>   - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can
>>>>   you try explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was
>>>>   possible to tempt an implementation, so the language
>>>>   there could be improved for sure:-)
>>>
>>>  I've reworded the text in question so it should be much clearer now:
>>>
>>>     Privacy:  Information sent as a device/service-specific additional
>>>        data URL in the DeviceInfo block is by reference (not by value),
>>>        which inherently provides some additional privacy protection
>>>        (since the requester needs to supply a certificate which is
>>>        verified by the supplier).
>>>
>>>
>>>>   - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think
>>>>   provisioning the PKI for such a thing is easily done
>>>>   these days and is rightly not optional. It might be
>>>>   useful to say that TLS here needs to follow BCP195.  I
>>>>   agree with the earlier comment that you should be
>>>>   clear as to when mutually authenticated TLS is
>>>>   required. The secdir review [2] also raised similar
>>>>   issues and it'd be good to see responses to that too.
>>>>   (Yes, that review only arrived today so it's entirely
>>>>   reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>>>>
>>>>      [2]
>>>>   https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html
>>>
>>>  I'm working through my email and the comments on this document, so I'll
>>>  respond to that message on its own.  In response to other comments,
>>> I've
>>>  clarified that when dereferencing blocks passed by reference, the
>>>  requester supplies a client-side certificate which the supplier checks
>>>  to uphold its policy (e.g., that the requester is an emergency services
>>>  entity possessing a certificate issued by an emergency services CA).
>>>
>>>
>>>>   - section 8: the sizes of the various additional data
>>>>   items here could be characteristic and leak value
>>>>   information regardless of TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add
>>>>   a warning that these may enable relatively simple
>>>>   traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if someone
>>>>   had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability?
>>>>   This is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon
>>>>   image size was usable to identify 30+% of contacts in
>>>>   one social network even over TLS, but before the
>>>>   provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.
>>>
>>>  Given the restricted scope (emergency calls only), I'm not sure what
>>>  would be useful to say here.  It's not expected that the same device
>>>  issues a large number of emergency calls.
>>>
>>>>   - Thanks for section 9. Good job.
>>>
>>>  Thank you.
>>>
> 
> 
> 


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At 10:38 PM +0100 9/18/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:

>  On 18/09/15 19:04, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>  Hi Stephen,
>>
>>  At 5:13 PM +0100 9/18/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:
>>
>>>   Hiya,
>>>
>>>   On 15/09/15 02:56, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>>>   Hi Stephen and everyone,
>>>>
>>>>   Thanks for your comments.  Please see in-line.
>>>>
>>>>   At 4:47 PM -0700 9/1/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:
>>>>
>>>>>    Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for
>>>>>    draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34: Discuss
>>>>>
>>>>>    When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
>>>>>    email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut
>>>>>  this
>>>>>    introductory paragraph, however.)
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>    Please refer to
>>>>>   https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
>>>>>    for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>    The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>>>>>    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data/
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> 
>>>>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>>    DISCUSS:
>>>>> 
>>>>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>    I've two things I'd like to chat about. (Note: I'm not trying
>>>>>    here to insist on my preferred outcome, but I would like to
>>>>>    have the discussion or else be pointed at where the WG
>>>>>    already did that.)
>>>>>
>>>>>    (1) section 3: You say these MAY be used.  I'm not
>>>>>    sure that's a good option.  I think the data
>>>>>    minimisation recommendations argued for in RFC6973 and
>>>>>    RFC7258 would argue to add a MUST NOT. For example,
>>>>>    saying that these additional data MUST NOT be sent in
>>>>>    any non-emergency call without explicit user
>>>>>    permission on a per-call basis or something similar?
>>>>>    I have to admit I'm nervous that defining all of these
>>>>>    may mean that some UA somewhere starts sending some of
>>>>>    them in other calls without asking. A restriction
>>>>>    along those lines would also be more in line with
>>>>>    webrtc too perhaps. But maybe this was discussed in
>>>>>    the WG, having considered those privacy issues - was
>>>>>    it? Either way, would adding such a "MUST NOT except
>>>>>    if..." be a good plan?  4.3.4 is a good example of the
>>>>>    kind of thing I'd not want easily emitted in a call.
>>>>
>>>>   There are two subissues here: the non-use of normative language, and
>>>>  the
>>>>   recognition that there are limited non-emergency cases where this
>>>>  can be
>>>>   used.  The document originally had normative language here, but there
>>>>   was some small discussion in ECRIT meetings and email based on (if I
>>>>   recall correctly), an objection from Keith Drage that the document
>>>>   couldn't impose these blanket mandates; Keith wanted the document to
>>>>  say
>>>>   only that use outside of an emergency call was undefined, but I wanted
>>>>   something stronger, so added text that it was not appropriate.  I don't
>>>>   mind if we want to go back to being normative, but I wanted to point
>>>>  out
>>>>   that it was changed based on Keith's objection.  The permission for
>>>>   certain private-use cases is to permit telematics service providers to
>>>>   use the same mechanisms on both legs of a call: between the vehicle and
>>>>   the telematics service center, and between the telematics service
>>>>  center
>>>>   and the PSAP; further, it makes sense to use the same mechanisms
>>>>  between
>>>>   the vehicle and telematics service center in all calls, since the
>>>>   service center call handler determines if a call is an emergency or not
>   >>>  (as opposed to the vehicle in the direct case).  This is a very limited
>>>>   case, and it matches how things work in circuit-switched calls.
>>>
>>>   Hmm... in earlier emails with Brian Rosen, I thought we were heading
>>>   towards a "MUST NOT except" direction? The changes in -35 don't seem
>>>   to me to going there at all. Was there discussion between authors or
>>>   the WG on this or do we just have diverging author opinions?
>>
>>  I think Brian had forgotten that the switch in the text from normative
>>  to descriptive language was based on Keith's objection, which was
>>  discussed in an ECRIT session and then referred to in others during
>>  document status updates.
>
>  Hmm again;-) I'm not so pushed about the use or lack of normative
>  language (though I do prefer it in this case) as with what is
>  said. And there seems to me to be quite a divergence between what
>  Brian was saying and what you're saying. (Which is entirely fine
>  and could be meaningful to you folks too, or just something I'm
>  mixed up about.)

Sorry, I am not seeing the difference.  The current text says "not 
appropriate...with non-emergency calls" and then adds the "however" 
which is the equivalent of the "except".  And that "however" is quite 
restrictive since it only applies to service providers with dedicated 
devices.


>   >>  On the current text change in section 3, I don't know what a
>>>   "telematics" service provider is (really, it was maybe a meaningful
>>>   term here in the early 1990's but is no longer) and the "or other"
>>>   clause waters any restriction down to nothing at all since any
>>>   relevant entity here is some kind of service provider.
>>
>>  I think the term "telematics service provider" is pretty clear, much
>>  more so now than in the '90s,
>
>  I may be an outlier here, but I do think the opposite. The set of
>  things at [1] better match my understanding of the term. Or maybe
>  it's more of a US-centric usage? Or it could just have changed over
>  time I guess.
>
>      [1]
> 
> https://scholar.google.com/scholar?q=telematics&hl=en&as_sdt=0%2C5&as_ylo=&as_yhi=1993
>
>  If you do keep that term, maybe add a reference. Or say "vehicle
>  tracking services" or something that'll still work even if the
>  terminology wanders again.

The link you gave is searching for the term "telematics," which I 
agree is very broad and covers many things.  The term we use is 
"telematics service provider", which is more specific and has a 
generally-accepted meaning.  See, e.g.,"

https://www.google.com/search?q=%22telematics+service+provider%22&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8


>   > since all major vehicle manufacturers now
>>  have telematics systems with emergency capabilities, and those that
>>  don't currently have them will be deploying them within a couple of
>>  years.  Back in the '90s there were only a few, such as OnStar. Brian
>>  and I have talked to various vehicle and solution vendors who have
>>  expressed a desire to use the same mechanism on both legs of a call.
>>  Further, in a system such as OnStar, vehicle-initiated emergency calls
>>  go to the service center and likely will be placed as normal, not
>>  emergency calls (which in cellular systems generally follow a specific
>>  set of steps, including an emergency registration followed by an
>>  emergency session establishment, which has difficulties when the call is
>>  placed to a third-party and not a PSAP).
>>
>>  The current wording seems more restrictive to me than you seem to
>>  think. 
>
>  Right, I think we're seeing different meanings in the text. And
>  that's probably a signal that a bit more work's needed. But I'm
>  out of time right now, I'll look at it again over the weekend and
>  maybe get inspired. Or maybe someone else will be.

Can you elaborate as to what your concern is?  I think the current 
text is clear that general-purpose implements won't send this data 
except in an emergency call.  Some dedicated devices that have a 
pre-existing relationship with a service provider in which privacy 
issues are addressed are permitted to do so.  What's the problem?

Also, you didn't reply to the text I added to satisfy your concern 
with the IANA considerations section.


>   > The current wording says "communications between a ... service
>   > provider and dedicated equipment ... where the endpoints have a
>>  preexisting relationship and privacy issues are addressed within the
>>  relationship" which seems to me to rule out casual use.  There needs to
>>  be a service provider who has dedicated equipment and there needs to be
>>  a preexisting relationship that addresses privacy issues. General
>>  softphone implementations are not going to transmit the data except in
>>  an emergency call.  Only software on dedicated devices will send the
>>  data on other classes of calls.
>>
>>>   How about saying: "This data MUST NOT be sent for calls that are
>>>   not clearly emergency calls. Generic implementations (e.g. of a
>>>   SIP UA) MUST only send this data for an emergency call.
>>>   Specialised user agents that need to send this data in a possibly
>>>   non-emergency call ought be described in specialised RFCs that
>>>   justify the need for that data."
>>
>>  I think we already make the point that general-purpose implementations
>>  won't send the data except in an emergency call (although maybe we could
>>  call this out to make it even more clear), but expecting telematics
>>  service providers to publish RFCs seems way too high a burden, and for
>>  no benefit, since such specialized implementations are the only ones
>>  that would send the data on other call types.
>>
>>>   I would suggest deleting the text added here between -34 and -35.
>>>
>>>   I would prefer a 2119 normative statement in this case, as I think
>>>   (some of) the customers for UAs here are the sort who do pay
>>>   attention to that kind of thing.
>>
>>  This was originally 2119 normative language but was changed after
>>  Keith's objection.
>>
>>
>>>    >>  (2) I'd like to (perhaps briefly) argue that the
>>>>>    registries here should require more than expert
>>>>>    review. Extensibility in dealing with what will
>>>>>    inevitably be highly privacy sensitive data structures
>>>>>    that are vulnerable to misuse once registered seems to
>>>>>    perhaps call for a more stringent registration regime.
>>>>>    The document itself also argues (in 4.3.7) that adding
>>>>>    new kinds of data here can be counter productive for
>>>>>    emergency call handling, so being more conservative in
>>>>>    what we add seems unusually correct here. I'd like to
>>>>>    suggest we require standards track for extensions.
>>>>>    The following very recent -00 draft [1] makes some
>>>>>    related arguments (but of course has no standing in
>>>>>    the IETF so is just offered as a way to avoid
>>>>>    repeating some arguments, not as an appeal to
>>>    >>  authority.)
>>>>>
>>>>>       [1]
>>>>> 
>>>>>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nottingham-transport-metadata-impact-00
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>   We've had some discussion on this point alone.  I changed all instances
>>>>   where the text said:
>>>>
>>>>      The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new
>>>>  value is
>>>>   relevant for this service element
>>>>
>>>>   To add an example that the entity is a recognized emergency-related
>>>>  SDO:
>>>>
>>>>      The expert should determine that the entity requesting a new
>>>>  value is
>>>    > relevant for this service element (e.g., a recognized emergency
>>>  services
>>>    > related SDO)
>>>
>>>   That's a good change and I've cleared that part of the discuss.
>>>   As a non-blocking comment, I'd suggest explaining the issue
>>>   at the start of section 11 as well as in the subsections and
>>>   I wondered if that phrasing might also apply to other 11.1.x
>>>   subsections, but I'm ok that the expert once alerted to this
>>>   will probably do the right thing.
>>
>>  I've added the following new paragraph to Section 11:
>>
>>     For several of the sub-registries, "Expert Review" is the criteria
>>     for adding new entries.  As discussed in Section 5, it can be
>>     counterproductive to register new types of data, and as discussed in
>>     Section 10, data sent as part of an emergency call can be very
>>     privacy-sensitive.  In some cases, it is anticipated that various
>>     standards bodies dealing with emergency services might need to
>>    register new values, and in those cases text below advises the
>   >    designed expert to verify that the entity requesting the registration
>>     is relevant (e.g., a recognized emergency services related SDO).  In
>>     other cases, especially those where the trade-off between the
>>     potential benefit versus danger of new registrations is more
>>     conservative (such as Section 11.1.9), "Specification Required" is
>>     the criteria, which is a higher hurdle and also implicitly includes
>>     an expert review.
>>
>>
>>
>>>
>>>   The other stuff below is fine.
>>>
>>>   Cheers,
>>>   S.
>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> 
>>>>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>>    COMMENT:
>>>>> 
>>>>>  ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>    - abstract: the "or by reference" point is made twice
>>>>>    in the abstract
>>>>
>>>>   I don't think it's duplicative, since the first time says that this
>>>>   document does it both ways, and the second time says that previous
>>>>   mechanisms also did it both ways.
>>>>
>>>>>    - intro: floor plans? HVAC status? really? Why not
>>>>>    contact lists? proximity of friends? That (or
>>>>>    inferring as much) seems to me to be going too far, if
>>>>>    applied to all calls. I'd say just saying that this
>>>>>    could be extended in future by other standards-track
>>>>>    specifications is enough. (See also discuss points above)
>>>>
>>>>   This text is informative and explanatory, it helps the reader
>>>>  understand
>>>>   what is meant by information about a location, and mentions specific
>>>>   types of data that NENA is in fact working on. Both proximity of
>>>>  friends
>>>>   and contact lists seem like data associated with a caller, which NENA
>>>>   has also worked on and defined a separate, out-of-band mechanism for
>>>>   (the data is held by a third party, a registry of third parties is
>>>>   available to the PSAP, who queries them).
>>>>
>>>>>    - intro: Wedding anniversary? That's surely not
>>>>>    relevant to a PSAP.
>>>>
>>>>   The text in question mentions it only as an example of personal data
>>>>   that might seem to indicate that vcard should be categorized as data
>>>>   about the caller rather than data about the call.  The draft does not
>>>>   require that anniversary date be sent (and in fact doesn't mandate
>>>>  which
>>>>   vcard fields are to be sent), although it's conceivable that a wedding
>>>>   anniversary might be useful to a PSAP call taker in some circumstances
>>>>   (such as when a caller might be suicidal).
>>>>
>>>>>    - figure 5: "prison" is out of context here, I'd suggest
>>>>>    deleting it. If not, why not add hospital, power station
>>>>>    and many other kinds of building? There may be some
>>>>>    country specific issue or technical here, but labelling
>>>>>    that with "prison" seems inappropriate to me.
>>>>
>>>>   We've discussed this in other email, but the short answer is that this
>>>>   matches capabilities provided in legacy emergency services systems, and
>>>    > we don't want to lose functionality.  It's quite common for calls
>>>  from
>>>>   prisons to be treated very differently than other calls, and this isn't
>>>>   the case for power stations, hospitals, etc.
>>>>
>>>>>    - 4.3.8: sorry I don't get the privacy argument, can
>>>>>    you try explain it to me?  (I didn't know it was
>>>>>    possible to tempt an implementation, so the language
>>>>>    there could be improved for sure:-)
>>>>
>>>>   I've reworded the text in question so it should be much clearer now:
>>>>
>>>>      Privacy:  Information sent as a device/service-specific additional
>>>>         data URL in the DeviceInfo block is by reference (not by value),
>>>>         which inherently provides some additional privacy protection
>>>>         (since the requester needs to supply a certificate which is
>>>>         verified by the supplier).
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>    - section 5: good that this is HTTPS only. I think
>>>>>    provisioning the PKI for such a thing is easily done
>>>>>    these days and is rightly not optional. It might be
>>>>>    useful to say that TLS here needs to follow BCP195.  I
>>>>>    agree with the earlier comment that you should be
>>>>>    clear as to when mutually authenticated TLS is
>   >>>>   required. The secdir review [2] also raised similar
>>>>>    issues and it'd be good to see responses to that too.
>>>>>    (Yes, that review only arrived today so it's entirely
>>>>>    reasonable to not have responded so far.)
>>>>>
>>>>>       [2]
>>>>>    https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05982.html
>>>>
>>>>   I'm working through my email and the comments on this document, so I'll
>>>>   respond to that message on its own.  In response to other comments,
>>>>  I've
>>>>   clarified that when dereferencing blocks passed by reference, the
>>>>   requester supplies a client-side certificate which the supplier checks
>>>>   to uphold its policy (e.g., that the requester is an emergency services
>>>>   entity possessing a certificate issued by an emergency services CA).
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>    - section 8: the sizes of the various additional data
>>>>>    items here could be characteristic and leak value
>>>>>    information regardless of TLS or not-TLS - perhaps add
>>>>>    a warning that these may enable relatively simple
>>>>>    traffic analysis. And wouldn't it be nice if someone
>>>>>    had done the analysis of this potential vulnerability?
>>>>>    This is btw a real issue - recall that avatar icon
>>>>>    image size was usable to identify 30+% of contacts in
>>>>>    one social network even over TLS, but before the
>>>>>    provider canonicalised the avatar image sizes.
>>>>
>>>>   Given the restricted scope (emergency calls only), I'm not sure what
>>>>   would be useful to say here.  It's not expected that the same device
>>>>   issues a large number of emergency calls.
>>>>
>>>>>    - Thanks for section 9. Good job.
>>>>
>>>>   Thank you.
>>>>
>>
>>
>>



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Hi Stephen,

I haven't seen a reply to my message from Friday 3:16 PM PDT 
regarding the scope language, nor my message from Friday 11:04 AM PDT 
which had proposed text for the IANA Considerations section.

All other DISCUSSes and comments have been resolved.  Perhaps we can 
chat on the phone for 20 minutes or so?  Let me know your 
availability today and the next couple of days.

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Hiya,

On 22/09/15 22:11, Randall Gellens wrote:
> Hi Stephen,
> 
> I haven't seen a reply to my message from Friday 3:16 PM PDT regarding
> the scope language, nor my message from Friday 11:04 AM PDT which had
> proposed text for the IANA Considerations section.
> 
> All other DISCUSSes and comments have been resolved.  Perhaps we can
> chat on the phone for 20 minutes or so?  Let me know your availability
> today and the next couple of days.

Not great, as I'll be at the Marnew workshop. [1] We could do a call
early next week though. How's Monday at 1600 UTC?

Cheers,
S.

[1] https://www.iab.org/activities/workshops/marnew/

> 


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Hi Stephen,

Would 17:30 UTC on Monday work?


At 10:24 PM +0100 9/22/15, Stephen Farrell wrote:

>  Hiya,
>
>  On 22/09/15 22:11, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>  Hi Stephen,
>>
>>  I haven't seen a reply to my message from Friday 3:16 PM PDT regarding
>>  the scope language, nor my message from Friday 11:04 AM PDT which had
>>  proposed text for the IANA Considerations section.
>>
>>  All other DISCUSSes and comments have been resolved.  Perhaps we can
>>  chat on the phone for 20 minutes or so?  Let me know your availability
>>  today and the next couple of days.
>
>  Not great, as I'll be at the Marnew workshop. [1] We could do a call
>  early next week though. How's Monday at 1600 UTC?
>
>  Cheers,
>  S.
>
>  [1] https://www.iab.org/activities/workshops/marnew/
>
>>



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> On 26 Sep 2015, at 5:18 am, Roger Marshall <RMarshall@telecomsys.com> wrot=
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> James:
> Yes.  We will submit an IESG request for this draft soon.
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: James Winterbottom [mailto:a.james.winterbottom@gmail.com]=20
> Sent: Sunday, September 13, 2015 11:14 PM
> To: Roger Marshall
> Cc: ecrit_ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-held-routing
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> Hi Roger et al,
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> It has now been nearly two weeks since you sent this to the list and the u=
pdate was published during the last IETF meeting.
> This seems like plenty of time for Keith to have replied with further comm=
ents. Can we please forward with this document?
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> Cheers
> James
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>> On 1 Sep 2015, at 9:18 am, Roger Marshall <RMarshall@telecomsys.com> wrot=
e:
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>> Keith, do the changes that James offered satisfy your issues? =20
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>> -roger.
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>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of James Winterbott=
om
>> Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 2:00 AM
>> To: ecrit_ietf.org
>> Subject: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-held-routing
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>> Hi All,
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>> The only comments received during the WGLC were from Keith Drage and I be=
lieve that I addressed all of these in a rev of the draft but I haven=E2=80=99=
t heard anything back.
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>> Keith, can you please confirm that your issues have all been addressed by=
 the new text and if they have then can we please move the draft forward?
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>> Cheers
>> James
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