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I wanted to make sure that people in emu are aware  that the EAP
applicability statement update for application authentication is in IETF
last call.

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The IESG has received a request from the Application Bridging for
Federated Access Beyond web WG (abfab) to consider the following
document:
- 'Update to the EAP Applicability Statement for ABFAB'
  <draft-ietf-abfab-eapapplicability-03.txt> as Proposed Standard

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Abstract


   This document updates the Extensible Authentication Protocol (EAP)
   applicability statement from RFC3748 to reflect recent usage of the
   EAP protocol in the Application Bridging for Federated Access Beyond
   web (ABFAB) architecture.




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I've got no problem initiating an IETF LC on this document, but I do 
have some nits that need to be fixed before I'll add it to the IESG 
telechat.  Authors please let me know whether you'd like me to initiate 
the IETF LC now or whether you'd like to submit a revised ID.  I only do 
this because these are minor but will no doubt be called out by somebody 
on the IESG as a comment and I rather avoid that.

0) abstract: r/[RFC 3748]/RFC 3748

RFC editor would remove the references from the abstract so it's better 
to do it now or have it pointed out by the gen-art reviewer.

1) move keys words to section 1.1 or make a new section 2.

RFC editor will move it so it's better to do it now or else have it 
pointed out by the gen-art reviewer.

2) s1: r/The Extensible Authentication Protocol [RFC3748]
         /The Extensible Authentication Protocol (EAP) [RFC3748]

Need to re-expand EAP in s1.

3) s3.2.2: delete:Please view in a fixed-width font such as Courier.

4) s3.2.2: The formatting here seems a little off:

  An attacker can convert an inner authentication using an EAP method
  to a inner authentication that does not use EAP in some cases.  This
  may avoid cryptographic binding.

               Converting EAP Inner Authentication

  An attacker may contact another authentication resource to gain a
  challenge useful for an inner authentication.

               Non-EAP Sources of Inner Authentication

5) s3.2.2: r/. a tunnel t2/. A tunnel t2

6) s3.2.4: r/IntroducingEMSK-based Cryptographic Binding
             /Introducing EMSK-based Cryptographic Binding

7) s7: r/margaret/Margaret

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I'll send in a new draft.

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Folks on the EMU list may want to comment on this work as well. =20

Cheers,

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On 06/05/2013 07:22 AM, Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) wrote:

> Folks on the EMU list may want to comment on this work as well.

Really?  How about the dime WG, IEEE, 3GPP, 3Gpp2...?  It's hard to 
think of an SDO not effected by this rewrite.

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> Cheers,
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> Joe
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>> Subject: [radext] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-radext-nai-03
>> Date: June 3, 2013 9:42:45 PM PDT
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Glen Zorn wrote:
> On 06/05/2013 07:22 AM, Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) wrote:
> 
>> Folks on the EMU list may want to comment on this work as well.
> 
> Really?  How about the dime WG, IEEE, 3GPP, 3Gpp2...?  It's hard to
> think of an SDO not effected by this rewrite.

  As the document says in Section 1:

   ... This
   definition of the NAI has no requirements on protocol specifications,
   implementations, or deployments. ...

  The intention of the document is to fix egregious errors in RFC 4282.

  It defines the NAI as a *suggested* identifier.  SDOs are free to
ignore this standard, as they have done with other RADIUS standards in
the past.

  Alan DeKok.

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On 06/06/2013 09:00 PM, Alan DeKok wrote:

> Glen Zorn wrote:
>> On 06/05/2013 07:22 AM, Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) wrote:
>>
>>> Folks on the EMU list may want to comment on this work as well.
>>
>> Really?  How about the dime WG, IEEE, 3GPP, 3Gpp2...?  It's hard to
>> think of an SDO not effected by this rewrite.
>
>    As the document says in Section 1:
>
>     ... This
>     definition of the NAI has no requirements on protocol specifications,
>     implementations, or deployments. ...

Thanks, Alan: I guess that I better actually review this, if only to 
discover what other obvious nonsense it might contain.

>
>    The intention of the document is to fix egregious errors in RFC 4282.
>
>    It defines the NAI as a *suggested* identifier.  SDOs are free to
> ignore this standard, as they have done with other RADIUS standards in
> the past.

And yet, it's a Standards Track document; why is that, if it is just a 
useless suggestion?

>
>    Alan DeKok.
>

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Glen Zorn wrote:
> On 06/06/2013 09:00 PM, Alan DeKok wrote:
>>    The intention of the document is to fix egregious errors in RFC 4282.
>>
>>    It defines the NAI as a *suggested* identifier.  SDOs are free to
>> ignore this standard, as they have done with other RADIUS standards in
>> the past.
> 
> And yet, it's a Standards Track document; why is that, if it is just a
> useless suggestion?

  So... the entire "Standards Track" process is useless, because some
SDOs ignore the documents?

  What a curious position to hold.

  Alan DeKok.

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>>>>> "Sean" == Sean Turner <turners@ieca.com> writes:

    Sean> 1) move keys words to section 1.1 or make a new section 2.

    Sean> RFC editor will move it so it's better to do it now or else
    Sean> have it pointed out by the gen-art reviewer.

I thought this was why the note element was introduced into the xml2rfc
DTD.  I'm kind of tempted to let the RFC editor and xml2rfc authors
fight about style and leave as-is.
I'm fairly sure I've seen note elements make their way into RFCs.
    Sean> 4) s3.2.2: The formatting here seems a little off:

    Sean>  An attacker can convert an inner authentication using an EAP
    Sean> method to a inner authentication that does not use EAP in some
    Sean> cases.  This may avoid cryptographic binding.

    Sean>               Converting EAP Inner Authentication

    Sean>  An attacker may contact another authentication resource to
    Sean> gain a challenge useful for an inner authentication.

    Sean>               Non-EAP Sources of Inner Authentication

This is kind of amusing.  Apparently, there are two figures that we
never produced artwork for, and you're seeing formatting lossage from
that.

So, does someone want to volunteer to produce artwork for these figures
or shall I remove them and let the text stand on its own?

I propose giving the WG a week for someone to step forward.

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On 6/23/13 2:50 PM, Sam Hartman wrote:
>>>>>> "Sean" == Sean Turner <turners@ieca.com> writes:
>
>      Sean> 1) move keys words to section 1.1 or make a new section 2.
>
>      Sean> RFC editor will move it so it's better to do it now or else
>      Sean> have it pointed out by the gen-art reviewer.
>
> I thought this was why the note element was introduced into the xml2rfc
> DTD.  I'm kind of tempted to let the RFC editor and xml2rfc authors
> fight about style and leave as-is.
> I'm fairly sure I've seen note elements make their way into RFCs.

Ah so this is an xml2rfc thing.  Then I'd leave it alone.

>      Sean> 4) s3.2.2: The formatting here seems a little off:
>
>      Sean>  An attacker can convert an inner authentication using an EAP
>      Sean> method to a inner authentication that does not use EAP in some
>      Sean> cases.  This may avoid cryptographic binding.
>
>      Sean>               Converting EAP Inner Authentication
>
>      Sean>  An attacker may contact another authentication resource to
>      Sean> gain a challenge useful for an inner authentication.
>
>      Sean>               Non-EAP Sources of Inner Authentication
>
> This is kind of amusing.  Apparently, there are two figures that we
> never produced artwork for, and you're seeing formatting lossage from
> that.
>
> So, does someone want to volunteer to produce artwork for these figures
> or shall I remove them and let the text stand on its own?
>
> I propose giving the WG a week for someone to step forward.

ack

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Here's my first pass (sitting at SFO killing time).  I'd like to like to 
discuss a couple of things before issuing the IETF LC:

0) s1.2: Is section 1.2 still required?  Didn't we publish a 
requirements draft with all of this information in it?

1) s2: Does phase one include:

       Authenticating Peer     Authenticator
        -------------------     -------------
+-                              <- EAP-Request/
|                               Identity
|this?  EAP-Response/
|       Identity (MyID1) ->
+-

or does it start here:
                                <- EAP-Request/
                                EAP-Type=TEAP, V=1
                           (TEAP Start, S bit set, Authority-ID)

Id it's the latter, then maybe:

OLD:

   TEAP authentication occurs in two phases.

NEW:

   TEAP authentication occurs in two phases after the initial EAP
   request/response exchange.

Not sure that my suggestion is right maybe it's between initial eap 
request and

2) s2.2: I find the figure kind of confusing.  Is this same thing:

+----------------------------------------------------------+
|    +----------------------------------------------------+|
|    |     +------+----+---------------------------------+||
|    |     |      |    |     +--------------------------+|||
|    |     |      |    |     |      +------------------+||||
| CP | EAP | code | id | len | type | type data = TEAP |||||
|    |     |      |    |     |      +------------------+||||
|    |     |      |    |     +--------------------------+|||
|    |     +------+----+---------------------------------+||
|    +----------------------------------------------------+|
+----------------------------------------------------------+

Where CP is Carrier Protocol, c = EAP code, i = EAP id, l = EAP length, 
t = EAP type (and it = TEAP), td = EAP type data

and then TEAP is in s4.1?

If it's just layers:

+------+
| TLS  |
+------+
| TEAP |
+------+
| EAP  |
+------+
| CP   |
+------+

mixing the EAP/TEAP wrappers in looks odd to me.  I'm not hard over on 
making this change I'm just trying to understand it.

3) s3.1: I haven't yet found if this is else where in the draft, but if 
this this check fails then what?:

  The receiver of the Crypto-Binding TLV MUST verify
  that the version received in the Crypto-Binding TLV matches the
  version sent by the receiver in the TEAP version negotiation.

Section 3.6.1?

4) s3.2: Okay so any chance we could at least SHOULD a cipher suite with 
SHA-256?

5) s3.2: This confused me a bit:

  TEAP implementations MUST support peer authentication during tunnel
  establishment using the TLS ciphersuites specified in Section 3.2.
  The EAP peer does not need to authenticate as part of the TLS
  exchange, but can alternatively be authenticated through additional
  exchanges carried out in Phase 2.

Is this about the TEAP clients supporting TLS server side 
authentication?  I read that and took it mean that both sides had to 
support certificate-based authentication and if that's the case:

  TEAP implementations MUST support mutual peer authentication
  during tunnel establishment using the TLS ciphersuites specified
  in Section 3.2.

if it's just server side:

  TEAP client's MUST support server-side certificate authentication
  during tunnel establishment using the TLS ciphersuites specified
  in Section 3.2.

In the next sentence it's the EAP peer is that supposed to be the TEAP peer?

6) s3.2: This section introduces the concept that other TLS extensions 
can be used.  Should this section also include MUST support statements 
for TLS session tickets and TLS unique?

7) s3.2.2: Paque opaque MUST NOT????  What about the other MUSTs in this 
section?

8) s3.8.2: Couple of questions:

8.1) How is the pkcs7/10 encoded; is it encapsulated in an media-type 
(i.e., does it include the content-type, etc headers)?  The PKCS#10 is 
covered in 4.2.17, but what about the PKCS#7.

8.2) Need a reference to where the challenge-password attribute is 
defined (EST authors did this as well): request challenge-password field 
([RFC2985], Section 5.4.1).

8.3) that attribute has a length limit and there's a small chance the 
tls-unique might be longer.  How about adding the same kind of text the 
EST authors did:

  The
  challenge-password field is limited to 255 bytes.  If the TLS cipher
  suite in use produces a longer verify_data than that, then an
  associated hash algorithm will have to be selected to reduce the
  verify_data to fit within the challenge password length limit.
  (Section 7.4.9 of [RFC5246] indicates that no existing cipher suite
  pose such an issue.)

8.4) What do you think about the following:

  If tls-unique information is not embedded
  within the certification request the challenge-password field MUST be
  empty to indicate that the client did not include the optional
  channel-binding information (any value submitted is verified by the
  server as tls-unique information).

8.5) Need some text about verifying the returned certificate back to an 
authorized TA.  Don't want the client to willy-nilly accept the returned 
  certificate.

8.6) Are the CRLs for the issuing CA returned as part of the certs-only 
message or will the client use the CRLs from the TLS handshake?  Should 
we have some kind of guidance about if the client is going to do this 
that it SHOULD pull the CRLs/OCSP responses for the CA?

9) s4.2.*: Should the M bits be "OPTiONAL" and "REQUIRED" as opposed to 
"Optional" and "Mandatory" in order to use RFC 2119 language?

10) s4.2.2: Mandatory is == 1 right?
     r/Reserved, set to zero (0)
      /Reserved MUST be set to 1

NITS:

0) abstract: by using the Transport Layer Security (TLS)
              by using the Transport Layer Security (TLS) protocol

1) replace reference to RFC 2560 with RFC 6960.  An updated OCSP RFC was 
published.

2) s1: this is a little close to marketing:

  Since the introduction of EAP-FAST [RFC4851] a few years ago, it has
  been widely adopted in variety of devices and platforms due to its
  strong security, flexibility and ease of deployment.

How about this:

  Since the introduction of EAP-FAST [RFC4851] a few years ago, it has
  been widely adopted in variety of devices and platforms.

3) s1.3: r/... may distributed using RFC
           /... may be distributed using RFC

4) s2: r/TEAP makes use of the TLS enhancements in Ticket Extension
          [RFC5077] to enable an optimized TLS tunnel session resume
          while minimizing server state.
         /TEAP makes use of the TLS SessionTicket Extension [RFC5077],
          which supports TLS session resumption without requiring
          session-specific state at the TLS.

5) s2: r/The ticket is referred to as the Protected Access
          Credential opaque data (or PAC-Opaque).
         /In this document, the SessionTicket is referred to as the
          Protected Access Credential opaque data (or PAC-Opaque).

6) s2: r/NewSessionTicket message is being used to
         /NewSessionTicket message is used to

7) s2.2: r/requires a carrier protocol for transport
           /requires a transport protocol

8) s2.2: Question: Is there any other way to do this?

  All conversations in the TEAP protected tunnel MUST be
  encapsulated in a TLV layer.

If it's always going to be encapsulated and that's the only way to do it:

  All conversations in the TEAP protected tunnel are
  encapsulated in a TLV layer.

9) s3/s2: The intro in s3 is the same s2 maybe just shorten s3 intro to:

  The operation of the protocol, including
  Phase 1 and Phase 2, is the topic of this section.  The format of
  TEAP messages is given in Section 4 and the cryptographic
  calculations are given in Section 5.

10) s3.1: Again if this is how it is don't need the MUST:

  If the EAP peer supports this version of the protocol, it
  responds with an EAP-Response of EAP type=TEAP, and the version
  number proposed by the TEAP server.

11) s3.2: r/TEAP is based on the TLS handshake
            /TEAP relies on the TLS handshake

12) s3.2: Are there any other TLS cipher suites that shouldn't be used? 
  NULL?

13) s3.2: How about also pointing to RFC 6961 for the multi-ocsp 
extension too:

  For instance, Certificate
  Status Request extension [RFC6066] and multiple certificate
  status request extension [RFC6961] can be used to leverage a
  certificate-status protocol such as OCSP [RFC6960] to check the
  status of server certificates.

14) s3.2: Could we say this instead to not confuse it with the TLS 
record protocol:

OLD:

  This message
  encapsulates one or more TLS records containing the TLS handshake
  messages.

NEW:

  This message
  encapsulates one or more TLS handshake
  messages.

15) s3.2: r/TLS ciphersuites specified in Section 3.2.
            /TLS ciphersuites specified in this section.

16) s3.2.2:r/from a previous handshake in its ClientHello message
             /from a previous TLS handshake in its ClientHello message

17) s3.2.3: r/peer can request for a new PAC to be provisioned after
              /peer can request that a new PAC be provisioned after
             r/for a new PAC to be provisioned
              /that a new PAC be provisioned

18) s3.3/3.3.3: Can you add a couple of words about why the two MUST 
NOTs?  It's obvious to me but it might not be to another AD ;)

19) s3.3.2: Should "not recommended" be NOT RECOMMENDED?

20) s3.4.4:

OLD:

   The subject field identifies the entity associated with the public
   key stored in the subject public key field.  The subject name MAY
   be carried in the subject field and/or the subjectAltName
   extension....  If subject naming information is present only in
   the subjectAltName extension (e.g., a key bound only to an email
   address or URI), then the subject name MUST be an empty sequence
   and the subjectAltName extension MUST be critical.

NEW:

   The subject field identifies the entity associated with the public
   key stored in the subject public key field.  The subject name MAY
   be carried in the subject field and/or the subjectAltName
   extension.

   If subject naming information is present only in
   the subjectAltName extension (e.g., a key bound only to an email
   address or URI), then the subject name MUST be an empty sequence
   and the subjectAltName extension MUST be critical.

21) s3.5: Need to say || means concatenation

22) s3.6.2: SHOULD here?

  If the TEAP peer detects an error at any point in the TLS layer, the
  TEAP peer should send a a TEAP response encapsulating a TLS record
  containing the appropriate TLS alert message.

23) s3.7: You've never seen the 100Mbyte CRLs ;)  Note that I know the 
TSV ADs will probably key on the fragmentation section so I gave them a 
heads ups so they won't be surprised later.

24) s3.7: Assume this throws off an error?  Is there some kind of catch 
all sentence someplace that I missed that says all MUST NOTs result in 
an error being thrown?

25) s3.8: Mutual authentication is when both parties are authenticated 
to each other.  I guess the point in the following is that the 
server-side certificate authentication has already occurred?

   Mutual authentication results if the peer trusts the provided server
   certificate belongs to the server; typically this involves both
   validating the certificate to a trust anchor and confirming the
   entity named by the certificate is the intended server.

26) s3.8: Is "mutually" the right word shouldn't it just be previously 
authenticate?

  Mutual
  authentication also results when the procedures of Section 3.3 are
  used to resume a session in which the server was previously mutually
  authenticated.

  or should it be:

   ... a previous session in which the peer and server were mutually
  authenticated.

27) s3.8: r/EMSK compound MAC present
            /EMSK compound MAC is present

28) s4.1: r/Reserved (MUST be zero)
            /Reserved (MUST be zero and ignored upon receipt)

30) s4.2.3/7: r/(Optional)/(OPTIONAL)

31) s4.2.12: r/
              0 - Non-mandatory TLV
              1 - Mandatory TLV
              /0 or 1
     matches earlier section or to change s4.2.8

32) s4.2.14: r/optional/OPTIONAL

33) s4.2.15: Need reference for UTF-8: RFC 3629

34) s4.2.16: r/The PKCS#7 TLV is always marked as optional
               /The PKCS#7 TLV is always marked as OPTIONAL

35) s7.3: Add NOT RECOMMENDED to s1.1.

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Sean:

Thanks for the detailed review. Please see my comments inline below.

On 6/24/13 10:56 AM, "Sean Turner" <turners@ieca.com> wrote:

>Here's my first pass (sitting at SFO killing time).  I'd like to like to
>discuss a couple of things before issuing the IETF LC:
>
>0) s1.2: Is section 1.2 still required?  Didn't we publish a
>requirements draft with all of this information in it?
[HZ], We will remove it.
>
>1) s2: Does phase one include:
>
>       Authenticating Peer     Authenticator
>        -------------------     -------------
>+-                              <- EAP-Request/
>|                               Identity
>|this?  EAP-Response/
>|       Identity (MyID1) ->
>+-
>
>or does it start here:
>                                <- EAP-Request/
>                                EAP-Type=3DTEAP, V=3D1
>                           (TEAP Start, S bit set, Authority-ID)
>
>Id it's the latter, then maybe:
>
>OLD:
>
>   TEAP authentication occurs in two phases.
>
>NEW:
>
>   TEAP authentication occurs in two phases after the initial EAP
>   request/response exchange.
[HZ] Your suggestion seems to be fine.
>
>Not sure that my suggestion is right maybe it's between initial eap
>request and
>
>2) s2.2: I find the figure kind of confusing.  Is this same thing:
>
>+----------------------------------------------------------+
>|    +----------------------------------------------------+|
>|    |     +------+----+---------------------------------+||
>|    |     |      |    |     +--------------------------+|||
>|    |     |      |    |     |      +------------------+||||
>| CP | EAP | code | id | len | type | type data =3D TEAP |||||
>|    |     |      |    |     |      +------------------+||||
>|    |     |      |    |     +--------------------------+|||
>|    |     +------+----+---------------------------------+||
>|    +----------------------------------------------------+|
>+----------------------------------------------------------+
>
>Where CP is Carrier Protocol, c =3D EAP code, i =3D EAP id, l =3D EAP leng=
th,
>t =3D EAP type (and it =3D TEAP), td =3D EAP type data
>
>and then TEAP is in s4.1?
>
>If it's just layers:
>
>+------+
>| TLS  |
>+------+
>| TEAP |
>+------+
>| EAP  |
>+------+
>| CP   |
>+------+
>
>mixing the EAP/TEAP wrappers in looks odd to me.  I'm not hard over on
>making this change I'm just trying to understand it.
[HZ] Your interpretation is correct and we are using the same layering
format as in PEAP and TTLS RFC.
>
>3) s3.1: I haven't yet found if this is else where in the draft, but if
>this this check fails then what?:
>
>  The receiver of the Crypto-Binding TLV MUST verify
>  that the version received in the Crypto-Binding TLV matches the
>  version sent by the receiver in the TEAP version negotiation.
>
>Section 3.6.1?
[HZ] Good catch. How about we add a sentence in the end:
"If the Crypto-Binding TLV fails to be validated, then it is a fatal error
and is handled as
   described in Section 3.6.3."?

>
>4) s3.2: Okay so any chance we could at least SHOULD a cipher suite with
>SHA-256?
[HZ] Ok, Will add a SHOULD for CipherSuite TLS_RSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA

>
>5) s3.2: This confused me a bit:
>
>  TEAP implementations MUST support peer authentication during tunnel
>  establishment using the TLS ciphersuites specified in Section 3.2.
>  The EAP peer does not need to authenticate as part of the TLS
>  exchange, but can alternatively be authenticated through additional
>  exchanges carried out in Phase 2.
>
>Is this about the TEAP clients supporting TLS server side
>authentication?  I read that and took it mean that both sides had to
>support certificate-based authentication and if that's the case:
>
>  TEAP implementations MUST support mutual peer authentication
>  during tunnel establishment using the TLS ciphersuites specified
>  in Section 3.2.
[HZ] That's what we mean. Will change to that.
>
>if it's just server side:
>
>  TEAP client's MUST support server-side certificate authentication
>  during tunnel establishment using the TLS ciphersuites specified
>  in Section 3.2.
>
>In the next sentence it's the EAP peer is that supposed to be the TEAP
>peer?
[HZ] Will be changed to TEAP Peer.
>
>6) s3.2: This section introduces the concept that other TLS extensions
>can be used.  Should this section also include MUST support statements
>for TLS session tickets and TLS unique?
[HZ] Sure. We mentioned in Section 2 already about the mandatory support
for TicketExtension. Will add.
>
>7) s3.2.2: Paque opaque MUST NOT????  What about the other MUSTs in this
>section?
[HZ] Not quite understand what you mean. Please explain.

>
>8) s3.8.2: Couple of questions:
>
>8.1) How is the pkcs7/10 encoded; is it encapsulated in an media-type
>(i.e., does it include the content-type, etc headers)?  The PKCS#10 is
>covered in 4.2.17, but what about the PKCS#7.
[HZ] We will look into this and get back you.
>
>8.2) Need a reference to where the challenge-password attribute is
>defined (EST authors did this as well): request challenge-password field
>([RFC2985], Section 5.4.1).
[HZ] Will add that.

>
>8.3) that attribute has a length limit and there's a small chance the
>tls-unique might be longer.  How about adding the same kind of text the
>EST authors did:
>
>  The
>  challenge-password field is limited to 255 bytes.  If the TLS cipher
>  suite in use produces a longer verify_data than that, then an
>  associated hash algorithm will have to be selected to reduce the
>  verify_data to fit within the challenge password length limit.
>  (Section 7.4.9 of [RFC5246] indicates that no existing cipher suite
>  pose such an issue.)
[HZ] Sounds good. Thanks for the text.
>
>8.4) What do you think about the following:
>
>  If tls-unique information is not embedded
>  within the certification request the challenge-password field MUST be
>  empty to indicate that the client did not include the optional
>  channel-binding information (any value submitted is verified by the
>  server as tls-unique information).
[HZ] Sounds good.
>
>8.5) Need some text about verifying the returned certificate back to an
>authorized TA.  Don't want the client to willy-nilly accept the returned
>  certificate.
[HZ] Good suggestion. Do you have any text to suggest or from EST?
>
>8.6) Are the CRLs for the issuing CA returned as part of the certs-only
>message or will the client use the CRLs from the TLS handshake?  Should
>we have some kind of guidance about if the client is going to do this
>that it SHOULD pull the CRLs/OCSP responses for the CA?
[HZ] We are looking into and will get back to you.

>
>9) s4.2.*: Should the M bits be "OPTiONAL" and "REQUIRED" as opposed to
>"Optional" and "Mandatory" in order to use RFC 2119 language?
[HZ] The mandatory and optional but in TEAP are bit different than the
OPTIONAL and REQUIRED in RFC2119. If the mandatory bit is set, the other
peer receiving it MUST understand and handle it, not necessary required to
be present in every packet exchange. That's why we keep them in lower
case.=20
>
>10) s4.2.2: Mandatory is =3D=3D 1 right?
[HZ] Yes. There is a typo, should be set to (1).

>     r/Reserved, set to zero (0)
>      /Reserved MUST be set to 1
[HZ] Actually, The Reserved bit should be set to 0, not used.
>
>NITS:
>
>0) abstract: by using the Transport Layer Security (TLS)
>              by using the Transport Layer Security (TLS) protocol
[HZ] Will do.
>
>1) replace reference to RFC 2560 with RFC 6960.  An updated OCSP RFC was
>published.
[HZ] Will do
>
>2) s1: this is a little close to marketing:
>
>  Since the introduction of EAP-FAST [RFC4851] a few years ago, it has
>  been widely adopted in variety of devices and platforms due to its
>  strong security, flexibility and ease of deployment.
>
>How about this:
>
>  Since the introduction of EAP-FAST [RFC4851] a few years ago, it has
>  been widely adopted in variety of devices and platforms.
[HZ] Ok.
>
>3) s1.3: r/... may distributed using RFC
>           /... may be distributed using RFC
[HZ] Ok.
>
>4) s2: r/TEAP makes use of the TLS enhancements in Ticket Extension
>          [RFC5077] to enable an optimized TLS tunnel session resume
>          while minimizing server state.
>         /TEAP makes use of the TLS SessionTicket Extension [RFC5077],
>          which supports TLS session resumption without requiring
>          session-specific state at the TLS.
[HZ] Ok.
>
>5) s2: r/The ticket is referred to as the Protected Access
>          Credential opaque data (or PAC-Opaque).
>         /In this document, the SessionTicket is referred to as the
>          Protected Access Credential opaque data (or PAC-Opaque).
[HZ] Ok.
>
>6) s2: r/NewSessionTicket message is being used to
>         /NewSessionTicket message is used to
[HZ] Ok.
>
>7) s2.2: r/requires a carrier protocol for transport
>           /requires a transport protocol
[HZ] Ok.
>
>8) s2.2: Question: Is there any other way to do this?
[HZ] No.
>
>  All conversations in the TEAP protected tunnel MUST be
>  encapsulated in a TLV layer.
>
>If it's always going to be encapsulated and that's the only way to do it:
>
>  All conversations in the TEAP protected tunnel are
>  encapsulated in a TLV layer.
[HZ] Will do.
>
>9) s3/s2: The intro in s3 is the same s2 maybe just shorten s3 intro to:
>
>  The operation of the protocol, including
>  Phase 1 and Phase 2, is the topic of this section.  The format of
>  TEAP messages is given in Section 4 and the cryptographic
>  calculations are given in Section 5.
[HZ] Ok.
>
>10) s3.1: Again if this is how it is don't need the MUST:
>
>  If the EAP peer supports this version of the protocol, it
>  responds with an EAP-Response of EAP type=3DTEAP, and the version
>  number proposed by the TEAP server.
[HZ] Ok.
>
>11) s3.2: r/TEAP is based on the TLS handshake
>            /TEAP relies on the TLS handshake
[HZ] Ok.
>
>12) s3.2: Are there any other TLS cipher suites that shouldn't be used?
>  NULL?
[HZ] Ok, Will add.
>
>13) s3.2: How about also pointing to RFC 6961 for the multi-ocsp
>extension too:
>
>  For instance, Certificate
>  Status Request extension [RFC6066] and multiple certificate
>  status request extension [RFC6961] can be used to leverage a
>  certificate-status protocol such as OCSP [RFC6960] to check the
>  status of server certificates.
[HZ} Ok.
>
>14) s3.2: Could we say this instead to not confuse it with the TLS
>record protocol:
>
>OLD:
>
>  This message
>  encapsulates one or more TLS records containing the TLS handshake
>  messages.
>
>NEW:
>
>  This message
>  encapsulates one or more TLS handshake
>  messages.
[HZ] ok.
>
>15) s3.2: r/TLS ciphersuites specified in Section 3.2.
>            /TLS ciphersuites specified in this section.
[HZ] Ok.
>
>16) s3.2.2:r/from a previous handshake in its ClientHello message
>             /from a previous TLS handshake in its ClientHello message
[HZ] Ok.
>
>17) s3.2.3: r/peer can request for a new PAC to be provisioned after
>              /peer can request that a new PAC be provisioned after
>             r/for a new PAC to be provisioned
>              /that a new PAC be provisioned
[HZ] Ok.
>
>18) s3.3/3.3.3: Can you add a couple of words about why the two MUST
>NOTs?  It's obvious to me but it might not be to another AD ;)
[HZ] Will do.

>
>19) s3.3.2: Should "not recommended" be NOT RECOMMENDED?
[HZ] Yes.
>
>20) s3.4.4:
>
>OLD:
>
>   The subject field identifies the entity associated with the public
>   key stored in the subject public key field.  The subject name MAY
>   be carried in the subject field and/or the subjectAltName
>   extension....  If subject naming information is present only in
>   the subjectAltName extension (e.g., a key bound only to an email
>   address or URI), then the subject name MUST be an empty sequence
>   and the subjectAltName extension MUST be critical.
>
>NEW:
>
>   The subject field identifies the entity associated with the public
>   key stored in the subject public key field.  The subject name MAY
>   be carried in the subject field and/or the subjectAltName
>   extension.
>
>   If subject naming information is present only in
>   the subjectAltName extension (e.g., a key bound only to an email
>   address or URI), then the subject name MUST be an empty sequence
>   and the subjectAltName extension MUST be critical.
[HZ] Ok.
>
>21) s3.5: Need to say || means concatenation
[HZ] Ok.
>
>22) s3.6.2: SHOULD here?
>
>  If the TEAP peer detects an error at any point in the TLS layer, the
>  TEAP peer should send a a TEAP response encapsulating a TLS record
>  containing the appropriate TLS alert message.
[HZ] Yes.
>
>23) s3.7: You've never seen the 100Mbyte CRLs ;)  Note that I know the
>TSV ADs will probably key on the fragmentation section so I gave them a
>heads ups so they won't be surprised later.
>
>24) s3.7: Assume this throws off an error?  Is there some kind of catch
>all sentence someplace that I missed that says all MUST NOTs result in
>an error being thrown?
[HZ] What is "this?"
>
>25) s3.8: Mutual authentication is when both parties are authenticated
>to each other.  I guess the point in the following is that the
>server-side certificate authentication has already occurred?
>
>   Mutual authentication results if the peer trusts the provided server
>   certificate belongs to the server; typically this involves both
>   validating the certificate to a trust anchor and confirming the
>   entity named by the certificate is the intended server.
[HZ] I guess so. It is contributed text. I think it is talking about
making sure server side authentication is happened.
>
>26) s3.8: Is "mutually" the right word shouldn't it just be previously
>authenticate?
>
>  Mutual
>  authentication also results when the procedures of Section 3.3 are
>  used to resume a session in which the server was previously mutually
>  authenticated.
>
>  or should it be:
>
>   ... a previous session in which the peer and server were mutually
>  authenticated.

[HZ] I like the later sentence.
>
>27) s3.8: r/EMSK compound MAC present
>            /EMSK compound MAC is present
[HZ] Ok.
>
>28) s4.1: r/Reserved (MUST be zero)
>            /Reserved (MUST be zero and ignored upon receipt)
[HZ] Ok.
>
>30) s4.2.3/7: r/(Optional)/(OPTIONAL)
[HZ] See Comment #10.
>
>31) s4.2.12: r/
>              0 - Non-mandatory TLV
>              1 - Mandatory TLV
>              /0 or 1
>     matches earlier section or to change s4.2.8
[HZ] Ok.
>
>32) s4.2.14: r/optional/OPTIONAL
[HZ] See Comment #10.
>
>33) s4.2.15: Need reference for UTF-8: RFC 3629
[HZ[ Ok.
>
>34) s4.2.16: r/The PKCS#7 TLV is always marked as optional
>               /The PKCS#7 TLV is always marked as OPTIONAL
[HZ] See Comment #10.
>
>35) s7.3: Add NOT RECOMMENDED to s1.1.
[HZ] ok.
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I trimmed this down to the ones that weren't resolved.  Let me know how 
those two items end getting resolved.

>> 7) s3.2.2: Paque opaque MUST NOT????  What about the other MUSTs in this
>> section?
> [HZ] Not quite understand what you mean. Please explain.

Yeah this one got sent out early ;)  Sorry about that.

What I meant to write was please add some text about why there are MUST 
NOTs.  If it's just a MUST NOT to make things easier then you'll get 
push back later but if there's a reason for the MUST NOTs and you 
include it now it'll smooth the way later.

>> 8) s3.8.2: Couple of questions:
>>
>> 8.1) How is the pkcs7/10 encoded; is it encapsulated in an media-type
>> (i.e., does it include the content-type, etc headers)?  The PKCS#10 is
>> covered in 4.2.17, but what about the PKCS#7.
> [HZ] We will look into this and get back you.

ack

>> 8.5) Need some text about verifying the returned certificate back to an
>> authorized TA.  Don't want the client to willy-nilly accept the returned
>>   certificate.
> [HZ] Good suggestion. Do you have any text to suggest or from EST?

I was thinking simply "The peer MUST verify the returned certificate to 
an authorized Trust Anchor."

>> 8.6) Are the CRLs for the issuing CA returned as part of the certs-only
>> message or will the client use the CRLs from the TLS handshake?  Should
>> we have some kind of guidance about if the client is going to do this
>> that it SHOULD pull the CRLs/OCSP responses for the CA?
> [HZ] We are looking into and will get back to you.

ack

>> 10) s4.2.2: Mandatory is == 1 right?
> [HZ] Yes. There is a typo, should be set to (1).

wfm

>>      r/Reserved, set to zero (0)
>>       /Reserved MUST be set to 1
> [HZ] Actually, The Reserved bit should be set to 0, not used.

yeah got that one wrong leave it as is


>> 24) s3.7: Assume this throws off an error?  Is there some kind of catch
>> all sentence someplace that I missed that says all MUST NOTs result in
>> an error being thrown?
> [HZ] What is "this?"

This bit:

  The L
  flag is set to indicate the presence of the four-octet TLS Message
  Length field, and MUST be set for the first fragment of a fragmented
  TLS message or set of messages.  It MUST NOT be present for any other
  message.

It's back to providing text about the reason for the MUST NOT.

>> 25) s3.8: Mutual authentication is when both parties are authenticated
>> to each other.  I guess the point in the following is that the
>> server-side certificate authentication has already occurred?
>>
>>    Mutual authentication results if the peer trusts the provided server
>>    certificate belongs to the server; typically this involves both
>>    validating the certificate to a trust anchor and confirming the
>>    entity named by the certificate is the intended server.
> [HZ] I guess so. It is contributed text. I think it is talking about
> making sure server side authentication is happened.

yeah okay this seems fine after another read.
