
2008
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Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2008 08:12:21 +0800 <donglg@mail.zjgsu.edu.cn>
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2008
Message-Id: <MON.25.FEB.2008.224925.0100.>
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2008 22:49:25 +0100
From: Avri Doria <avri@psg.com>
Subject: Re: [Fwd: I-D Action:draft-ietf-forces-model-11.txt]
Comments: To: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
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On 25 Feb 2008, at 22:07, Joel M. Halpern wrote:

> Once the Protocol document is also ready, I would ask the chairs to
> deliver both documents to the AD for IETF last call.

i know of no outstanding issue on the Protocol draft.  have i missed
something?

a.


2008
Message-Id: <MON.25.FEB.2008.215437.0200.>
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2008 21:54:37 +0200
From: Evangelos Haleplidis <ehalep@gmail.com>
Subject: Config Response typo
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Greetings to the list,

I believe there is a typo in the Protocol ver13 draft:

Page 44 for Config Response:

   |    Config    |   LFBselect  |   (SET-RESPONSE |   | Section 7.6.2 |
   |   Response   |              | SET-PROP-RESPONSE | |               |
   |              |              |    DEL-RESPONSE |   |               |
   |              |              |  COMMIT-RESPONSE)+  |               |

It should be:

   |    Config    | (LFBselect)+ |   (SET-RESPONSE |   | Section 7.6.2 |
   |   Response   |              | SET-PROP-RESPONSE | |               |
   |              |              |    DEL-RESPONSE |   |               |
   |              |              |  COMMIT-RESPONSE)+  |               |

I was wondering

As it is written in the Config Response:

It indicates whether the Config was successful or not on the FE and also
gives a detailed response regarding the configuration result of each
component.

Regards,
Evangelos Haleplidis.


2008
Message-Id: <MON.25.FEB.2008.172814.0500.>
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2008 17:28:14 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
Subject: Re: [Fwd: I-D Action:draft-ietf-forces-model-11.txt]
Comments: To: Avri Doria <avri@psg.com>
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Sorry.  I have not tracked carefully the state of the reviews of the
protocol document.
If it is done, the the chairs should send both documents to the ADs.  Now.

Yours,
Joel

Avri Doria wrote:
>
> On 25 Feb 2008, at 22:07, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
>
>> Once the Protocol document is also ready, I would ask the chairs to
>> deliver both documents to the AD for IETF last call.
>
> i know of no outstanding issue on the Protocol draft.  have i missed
> something?
>
> a.
>
>
>


2008
Message-Id: <MON.25.FEB.2008.160710.0500.>
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2008 16:07:10 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
Subject: [Fwd: I-D Action:draft-ietf-forces-model-11.txt]
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Here is the revision to the ForCES model draft.  It addresses all
received comments to the best of my ability.
Once the Protocol document is also ready, I would ask the chairs to
deliver both documents to the AD for IETF last call.

Yours,
Joel

PS: Did folks see the Juniper JCS 1200 announcement?

-------- Original Message --------
Subject: I-D Action:draft-ietf-forces-model-11.txt
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2008 12:15:01 -0800 (PST)
From: Internet-Drafts@ietf.org
To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
CC: forces@peach.ease.lsoft.com

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Forwarding and Control Element
Separation Working Group of the IETF.


	Title           : ForCES Forwarding Element Model
	Author(s)       : J. Halpern, et al.
	Filename        : draft-ietf-forces-model-11.txt
	Pages           : 129
	Date            : 2008-02-25

This document defines the forwarding element (FE) model used in the
Forwarding and Control Element Separation (ForCES) protocol [2].  The
model represents the capabilities, state and configuration of
forwarding elements within the context of the ForCES protocol, so
that control elements (CEs) can control the FEs accordingly.  More
specifically, the model describes the logical functions that are
present in an FE, what capabilities these functions support, and how
these functions are or can be interconnected.  This FE model is
intended to satisfy the model requirements specified in the ForCES
requirements document, RFC3654 [4].

A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-forces-model-11.txt



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2008
Message-Id: <SAT.23.FEB.2008.231334.0800.>
Date: Sat, 23 Feb 2008 23:13:34 +0800
From: "Wang,Weiming" <wmwang2001@hotmail.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - Property
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2008
Message-Id: <SAT.23.FEB.2008.171355.0500.>
Date: Sat, 23 Feb 2008 17:13:55 -0500
From: Jamal Hadi Salim <hadi@znyx.com>
Organization: ZNYX Networks
Subject: Philadelphia meeting: Soliciting agenda items
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Folks,

If you want to present at the upcoming ForCES meeting, please send
Patrick and myself email.
Now that we have the MIB, Protocol and Model out of the way,
presentation on newer work (within the charter) is being solicited.

cheers,
jamal


2008
Message-Id: <TUE.19.FEB.2008.151619.0100.>
Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2008 15:16:19 +0100
From: Patrick Droz <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
Organization: IBM Research Division
Subject: Re: Model Draft - Property
Comments: To: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
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Hi Joel,

from my side I would suggest to wait until the end of this week to give
people a bit more time to react. After the changes from Tom are in the
document I suggest to forward it to the IESG.

Regards,
Patrick

Joel M. Halpern wrote:
> Has anyone in the working group other than Tom even read the latest
> version?  (It's up to the chairs, but I hope that we will get the go
> ahead to send to the IESG even if folks haven't read it.  But it would
> be MUCH better if other folks had looked at it!)
>
> Yours,
> Joel
>
>
>
>

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Message-Id: <THU.14.FEB.2008.180257.0100.>
Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2008 18:02:57 +0100
From: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - Property
Comments: To: Patrick Droz <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
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One other thought, unrelated to my other two posts.  I suggest adding 'Property'
to the 'Definitions'.  The word is given a specific technical meaning here,
somewhat distinct from common usage, so you might consider adding:

Property -- components have properties associated with them, readability,
writability, length of string, event threshold and such like.  Some of these
properties may in turn be writable by the CE.  Properties are discussed in more
detail in section 4.8

Tom Petch


----- Original Message -----
From: "Patrick Droz" <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
Sent: Tuesday, February 05, 2008 2:48 PM
Subject: Re: Model Draft


> Dear WG members,
>
> I would like to initiate WG LC on the model draft. The LC will end on
> February 15th well enough to make the cut for the forthcoming IETF.
> Please to take the chance for last comments.
>
> Thanks,
> Patrick
>
> Joel M. Halpern wrote:
> > Well, since no one seems to object ...
> >
> > Chairs, this is a formal request for a last call to complete work on the
> > Forces Model draft,
> > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-forces-model-10.txt
> >
> > Thank you,
> > Joel M. Halpern
> >
> >
> >
> >
>
> --
>    Dr. Patrick Droz                  | dro@zurich.ibm.com
>    IBM Zurich Research Laboratory    | http://www.zurich.ibm.com/~dro
>    Saumerstrasse 4                   | Tel. +41-44-724-85-25
>    CH-8803 Rueschlikon/Switzerland   | Fax. +41-44-724-85-78
>
>


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Message-Id: <THU.14.FEB.2008.160153.0500.>
Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2008 16:01:53 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - Property
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Has anyone in the working group other than Tom even read the latest
version?  (It's up to the chairs, but I hope that we will get the go
ahead to send to the IESG even if folks haven't read it.  But it would
be MUCH better if other folks had looked at it!)

Yours,
Joel


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Message-Id: <THU.14.FEB.2008.155939.0500.>
Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2008 15:59:39 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - Property
Comments: To: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
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Will do.
Joel

tom.petch wrote:
> One other thought, unrelated to my other two posts.  I suggest adding 'Property'
> to the 'Definitions'.  The word is given a specific technical meaning here,
> somewhat distinct from common usage, so you might consider adding:
>
> Property -- components have properties associated with them, readability,
> writability, length of string, event threshold and such like.  Some of these
> properties may in turn be writable by the CE.  Properties are discussed in more
> detail in section 4.8
>
> Tom Petch


2008
Message-Id: <THU.14.FEB.2008.155843.0500.>
Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2008 15:58:43 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - miscellaneous - IANA
Comments: To: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
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Thanks Tom.  I will do that.
Joel

tom.petch wrote:
> Joel
>
> Picking up just the point about IANA, I suggest, plagiarising shamelessly from
> other I-Ds,
... specific useful and clear text deleted here, to be used in the draft.


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Message-Id: <THU.14.FEB.2008.154546.0100.>
Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2008 15:45:46 +0100
From: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - miscellaneous - IANA
Comments: To: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
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Joel

Picking up just the point about IANA, I suggest, plagiarising shamelessly from
other I-Ds,

9.1.  URN Namespace Registration

   IANA is requested to register a new XML namespace, as per the
   guidelines in RFC 3688 [RFC3688].

   URI:  The URI for this namespace is
     urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:forces:lfbmodel:1.0

   Registrant Contact:  IESG {or else could be ForCES working group}

   XML: none, this is an XML namespace

9.2 LFB Class Names and LFB Class Identifiers

 IANA is requested to created a register of ForCES LFB Class Names and LFB Class
Identifiers. ....

with the existing s.9 slightly modified to follow on from the above and adding
[RFC3688] as a normative reference.

I always like to give IANA a clear simple request to act; they may be ForCES
experts, they may never have heard of it, the simpler the request is, the more
likely it is to be followed accurately.  Thus I specify 'ForCES LFB Class Names'
just in case there is another LFB (Linked Forward Bidirectionality ?) that we
have never heard of.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
To: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
Sent: Tuesday, February 12, 2008 8:50 PM
Subject: Re: Model Draft - miscellaneous


> Thank you Tom.  Except for the few questions below, all of your comments
> (in both messages) make sense to me and seem non-controversial, so I
> will act on them as part of closing the WG last call, before IESG
> submission.
> Items I have questions about, or think should be highlighted to the
> working group:
>
> tom.petch wrote:
> > Some miscellaneous editorial suggestions
> ...
> > 4 Each of the library documents will conform to the schema presented ...
> > /will/MUST/ ??
> It is really hard to mandate what happens in another RFC.  Even if we
> said MUST, they could do something different.  On the other hand "will"
> is odd language, so MUST is probably better.
>
> ..
> > 7 why isn't there a State declaration in response to a State query?
> Because this whole section is idiosyncratic to match other documents.
> (I wouldn't even have it if it weren't mandated by earlier group
> decisions in the framework / requirements work.)
>
> ...
> > 9 assignment by IETF RFCs.
> > I see this terminology as deprecated in favour of a more explicit Standards
> > Track RFC or just RFC; RFC can be IETF or Individual Submission, either can
be
> > Standards Track or not.  I think that this should be Standards Track,
whether it
> > comes from an IETF WG or as an Individual Submission, eg from a vendor.
> I can live with standards track.  Given that there is a first-come,
> first-served section, standards track is probably quite reasonable for
> the controlled section.
> As a minor note, there is no such thing as an Individual Submission for
> standards track.
>
> ...
> > 9 I observe the lack of a request to IANA to allocate the XML namespace:-)
> I am not sure what needs to be said to "allocate" the namespace beyond
> the statement to the IANA about what namespace we are using.  If there
> is another sentence I can / should add, let me know.
>


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Message-Id: <TUE.12.FEB.2008.155612.0100.>
Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2008 15:56:12 +0100
From: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - miscellaneous
Comments: To: Patrick Droz <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
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Some miscellaneous editorial suggestions

1 suggest that the reference to Terminology be made normative

3 Each LFB Class instance is identified by a 32 bit identities which are...
suggest 'identitier which is'

3.2 A namespace is used to associate a unique name or ID ...
suggest 'name and ID'

4 Each of the library documents will conform to the schema presented ...
/will/MUST/ ??

5.1 <name>FEState</name>
      <synopsis>model of this FE</synopsis>
suggest 'state of this FE'

5.2.1 LFBs supported clause ...
suggest 'SupportedLFBs element'

7 why isn't there a State declaration in response to a State query?

7.4 Capability attributes (components)will typically be read-only arguments, but
in certain cases they may be configurable. ...

but in 4.7.5 it states that capabilities are read-only so when configurable, do
they not become operational components?

7.6   assigned identifiers with the scope of  ..
probably ok but I did have to read this several times - perhaps 'within the
scope of' or 'with the naming scope of'

8 <specialValue value="1"> <name>Enabled</name>
8.1.1 still has 'enable' rather than 'enabled'

8.1 These two values are used by the LFB /too/to/ look up ...

9 assignment by IETF RFCs.
I see this terminology as deprecated in favour of a more explicit Standards
Track RFC or just RFC; RFC can be IETF or Individual Submission, either can be
Standards Track or not.  I think that this should be Standards Track, whether it
comes from an IETF WG or as an Individual Submission, eg from a vendor.

9 If IANA extract the table and put it on the web site, it will not make much
sense:-(

Suggest putting in RFCxxxx and RFCyyyy with
----  note to the RFC Editor please replace RFC xxxx with the value assigned to
this I-D and RFC yyyy with the value assigned to draft-ietf-forces-protocol

9 I observe the lack of a request to IANA to allocate the XML namespace:-)

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Patrick Droz" <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
Sent: Tuesday, February 05, 2008 2:48 PM
Subject: Re: Model Draft


> Dear WG members,
>
> I would like to initiate WG LC on the model draft. The LC will end on
> February 15th well enough to make the cut for the forthcoming IETF.
> Please to take the chance for last comments.
>
> Thanks,
> Patrick
>
> Joel M. Halpern wrote:
> > Well, since no one seems to object ...
> >
> > Chairs, this is a formal request for a last call to complete work on the
> > Forces Model draft,
> > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-forces-model-10.txt
> >
> > Thank you,
> > Joel M. Halpern
> >
> >
> >
> >
>
> --
>    Dr. Patrick Droz                  | dro@zurich.ibm.com
>    IBM Zurich Research Laboratory    | http://www.zurich.ibm.com/~dro
>    Saumerstrasse 4                   | Tel. +41-44-724-85-25
>    CH-8803 Rueschlikon/Switzerland   | Fax. +41-44-724-85-78
>
>


2008
Message-Id: <TUE.12.FEB.2008.155505.0100.>
Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2008 15:55:05 +0100
From: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - attributes
Comments: To: Patrick Droz <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
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My apologies - this is a belated response to the Draft Minutes that I had hoped
to post before the I-D was reissued.

I think that there are still many uses of 'attribute' that need changing, mostly
to 'component', particularly in s.6 and s.7, to whit:

2.1 The possible configurable parameters (i.e., attributes)

3.2.1 The actual number of output instances in a group is an attribute of the
LFB instance

4.5 These built-in data types can be readily used to define metadata or
   LFB attributes

4.5.3 The latter should be handled by capability attributes

4.7.4 The following example defines two attributes for an LFB:

4.7.4 CEs may attempt to reference non-existent or non-permitted attributes

4.7.5 The capability components are always  read-only attributes,
(suggest eliding the word entirely)

4.7.5 The following example lists two capability attributes:

4.8.1 The possible values of attribute access permission]
(note the trailing ]

4.8.1 The attribute may be written,

4.8.1 The attribute may be read or written

6 (all nine uses)

7 (all 13 uses)

8.2 The other attribute

Tom Petch


----- Original Message -----
From: "Patrick Droz" <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
Sent: Tuesday, February 05, 2008 2:48 PM
Subject: Re: Model Draft


> Dear WG members,
>
> I would like to initiate WG LC on the model draft. The LC will end on
> February 15th well enough to make the cut for the forthcoming IETF.
> Please to take the chance for last comments.
>
> Thanks,
> Patrick
>
> Joel M. Halpern wrote:
> > Well, since no one seems to object ...
> >
> > Chairs, this is a formal request for a last call to complete work on the
> > Forces Model draft,
> > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-forces-model-10.txt
> >
> > Thank you,
> > Joel M. Halpern
> >
> >
> >
> >
>
> --
>    Dr. Patrick Droz                  | dro@zurich.ibm.com
>    IBM Zurich Research Laboratory    | http://www.zurich.ibm.com/~dro
>    Saumerstrasse 4                   | Tel. +41-44-724-85-25
>    CH-8803 Rueschlikon/Switzerland   | Fax. +41-44-724-85-78
>
>


2008
Message-Id: <TUE.12.FEB.2008.145019.0500.>
Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2008 14:50:19 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
Subject: Re: Model Draft - miscellaneous
Comments: To: "tom.petch" <cfinss@dial.pipex.com>
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Thank you Tom.  Except for the few questions below, all of your comments
(in both messages) make sense to me and seem non-controversial, so I
will act on them as part of closing the WG last call, before IESG
submission.
Items I have questions about, or think should be highlighted to the
working group:

tom.petch wrote:
> Some miscellaneous editorial suggestions
...
> 4 Each of the library documents will conform to the schema presented ...
> /will/MUST/ ??
It is really hard to mandate what happens in another RFC.  Even if we
said MUST, they could do something different.  On the other hand "will"
is odd language, so MUST is probably better.

..
> 7 why isn't there a State declaration in response to a State query?
Because this whole section is idiosyncratic to match other documents.
(I wouldn't even have it if it weren't mandated by earlier group
decisions in the framework / requirements work.)

...
> 9 assignment by IETF RFCs.
> I see this terminology as deprecated in favour of a more explicit Standards
> Track RFC or just RFC; RFC can be IETF or Individual Submission, either can be
> Standards Track or not.  I think that this should be Standards Track, whether it
> comes from an IETF WG or as an Individual Submission, eg from a vendor.
I can live with standards track.  Given that there is a first-come,
first-served section, standards track is probably quite reasonable for
the controlled section.
As a minor note, there is no such thing as an Individual Submission for
standards track.

...
> 9 I observe the lack of a request to IANA to allocate the XML namespace:-)
I am not sure what needs to be said to "allocate" the namespace beyond
the statement to the IANA about what namespace we are using.  If there
is another sentence I can / should add, let me know.


2008
Message-Id: <TUE.5.FEB.2008.144802.0100.>
Date: Tue, 5 Feb 2008 14:48:02 +0100
From: Patrick Droz <dro@zurich.ibm.com>
Organization: IBM Research Division
Subject: Re: Model Draft
Comments: To: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
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Dear WG members,

I would like to initiate WG LC on the model draft. The LC will end on
February 15th well enough to make the cut for the forthcoming IETF.
Please to take the chance for last comments.

Thanks,
Patrick

Joel M. Halpern wrote:
> Well, since no one seems to object ...
>
> Chairs, this is a formal request for a last call to complete work on the
> Forces Model draft,
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-forces-model-10.txt
>
> Thank you,
> Joel M. Halpern
>
>
>
>

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2008
Message-Id: <FRI.1.FEB.2008.161627.0500.>
Date: Fri, 1 Feb 2008 16:16:27 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <joel@stevecrocker.com>
Subject: Model Draft
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Well, since no one seems to object ...

Chairs, this is a formal request for a last call to complete work on the
Forces Model draft,
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-forces-model-10.txt

Thank you,
Joel M. Halpern

