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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,
"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3083&eid=4048

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>

Section: 4

Original Text
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start(1)

Corrected Text
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start(1),

Notes
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errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the inserted line 'start(1)'

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RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)
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Title               : Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems
Publication Date    : March 2001
Author(s)           : R. Woundy
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG


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What a blast from the past.  

This is "not an error" , at least as reported.  Three are two places this error might have been reported from - the definition of  docsBpiCmAuthState and  the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState.  The former -  I believe correctly -does not include "start (1)" as one of its states.  The latter has "start (1),"  - e.g. including the comma.  So I'm not sure where he's actually seeing the error.

The  MIB  was verified at submission.  I would be surprised if there are any obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.

If I remember correctly, the reason the "start" state was excluded from the docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the state machine doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at least todEstablished - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later than "start" so any query about baseline privacy will not necessarily give you valid information prior to todEstablished.

Mike



At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:
>The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,
>"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".
>
>--------------------------------------
>You may review the report below and at:
>http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3083&eid=4048
>
>--------------------------------------
>Type: Technical
>Reported by: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>
>
>Section: 4
>
>Original Text
>-------------
>start(1)
>
>Corrected Text
>--------------
>start(1),
>
>Notes
>-----
>errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the inserted line 'start(1)'
>
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>
>--------------------------------------
>RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)
>--------------------------------------
>Title               : Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems
>Publication Date    : March 2001
>Author(s)           : R. Woundy
>Category            : INFORMATIONAL
>Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
>Area                : Operations and Management
>Stream              : IETF
>Verifying Party     : IESG
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Hi Guys,

Thanks for your reply.

My submission is in regard to the docsBpiCmAuthState object.  If you look
at the technical errata submitted here:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3083  then you will see the
comma is clearly omitted from the 'fixed' text:

It should say:
>
>    docsBpiCmAuthState      OBJECT-TYPE
>    SYNTAX                  INTEGER {
>
>                                    start(1)
>                                    authWait(2),
>                                    authorized(3),
>                                    reauthWait(4),
>                                    authRejectWait(5)
>


Maybe what you are saying is that the above fix is not required?  If so, it
is misleading...and either way, syntactically incorrect!

Regards,

Mark


On Fri, Jul 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM, Michael StJohns <mstjohns@comcast.net>
wrote:

> What a blast from the past.
>
> This is "not an error" , at least as reported.  Three are two places this
> error might have been reported from - the definition of  docsBpiCmAuthState
> and  the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState.  The former -  I believe
> correctly -does not include "start (1)" as one of its states.  The latter
> has "start (1),"  - e.g. including the comma.  So I'm not sure where he's
> actually seeing the error.
>
> The  MIB  was verified at submission.  I would be surprised if there are
> any obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.
>
> If I remember correctly, the reason the "start" state was excluded from
> the docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the state
> machine doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at least
> todEstablished - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later than "start"
> so any query about baseline privacy will not necessarily give you valid
> information prior to todEstablished.
>
> Mike
>
>
>
> At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:
> >The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,
> >"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS
> Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".
> >
> >--------------------------------------
> >You may review the report below and at:
> >http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3083&eid=4048
> >
> >--------------------------------------
> >Type: Technical
> >Reported by: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>
> >
> >Section: 4
> >
> >Original Text
> >-------------
> >start(1)
> >
> >Corrected Text
> >--------------
> >start(1),
> >
> >Notes
> >-----
> >errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the
> inserted line 'start(1)'
> >
> >Instructions:
> >-------------
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> >use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> >rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
> >can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> >
> >--------------------------------------
> >RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)
> >--------------------------------------
> >Title               : Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information
> Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems
> >Publication Date    : March 2001
> >Author(s)           : R. Woundy
> >Category            : INFORMATIONAL
> >Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
> >Area                : Operations and Management
> >Stream              : IETF
> >Verifying Party     : IESG
> >
> >_______________________________________________
> >IPCDN mailing list
> >IPCDN@ietf.org
> >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn
>
>
>

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=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=
=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=
=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 reauthWait(4),<br>=C2=
=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=
=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=
=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 authRejectWait(5)<br>
</blockquote><br><br></div>Maybe what you are saying is that the above fix =
is not required?=C2=A0 If so, it is misleading...and either way, syntactica=
lly incorrect!<br><br></div>Regards,<br><br>Mark<br><div class=3D"gmail_ext=
ra">
<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Fri, Jul 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM, Michael=
 StJohns <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mstjohns@comcast.net" targ=
et=3D"_blank">mstjohns@comcast.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote cla=
ss=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;pa=
dding-left:1ex">
What a blast from the past.<br>
<br>
This is &quot;not an error&quot; , at least as reported. =C2=A0Three are tw=
o places this error might have been reported from - the definition of =C2=
=A0docsBpiCmAuthState and =C2=A0the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState. =C2=A0=
The former - =C2=A0I believe correctly -does not include &quot;start (1)&qu=
ot; as one of its states. =C2=A0The latter has &quot;start (1),&quot; =C2=
=A0- e.g. including the comma. =C2=A0So I&#39;m not sure where he&#39;s act=
ually seeing the error.<br>

<br>
The =C2=A0MIB =C2=A0was verified at submission. =C2=A0I would be surprised =
if there are any obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.=
<br>
<br>
If I remember correctly, the reason the &quot;start&quot; state was exclude=
d from the docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the=
 state machine doesn&#39;t actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at l=
east todEstablished - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later than &q=
uot;start&quot; so any query about baseline privacy will not necessarily gi=
ve you valid information prior to todEstablished.<br>

<br>
Mike<br>
<div><div class=3D"h5"><br>
<br>
<br>
At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:<br>
&gt;The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,<br>
&gt;&quot;Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS=
 Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems&quot;.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;You may review the report below and at:<br>
&gt;<a href=3D"http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083&amp;e=
id=3D4048" target=3D"_blank">http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rf=
c=3D3083&amp;eid=3D4048</a><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;Type: Technical<br>
&gt;Reported by: Mark Ellison &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ellison@ieee.org">ellis=
on@ieee.org</a>&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Section: 4<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Original Text<br>
&gt;-------------<br>
&gt;start(1)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Corrected Text<br>
&gt;--------------<br>
&gt;start(1),<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Notes<br>
&gt;-----<br>
&gt;errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the in=
serted line &#39;start(1)&#39;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Instructions:<br>
&gt;-------------<br>
&gt;This errata is currently posted as &quot;Reported&quot;. If necessary, =
please<br>
&gt;use &quot;Reply All&quot; to discuss whether it should be verified or<b=
r>
&gt;rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)<br>
&gt;can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;Title =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 : Baseline Priva=
cy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems =
and Cable Modem Termination Systems<br>
&gt;Publication Date =C2=A0 =C2=A0: March 2001<br>
&gt;Author(s) =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 : R. Woundy<br>
&gt;Category =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0: INFORMATIONAL<br>
&gt;Source =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0: IP over Cable =
Data Network<br>
&gt;Area =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0: Operation=
s and Management<br>
&gt;Stream =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0: IETF<br>
&gt;Verifying Party =C2=A0 =C2=A0 : IESG<br>
&gt;<br>
</div></div>&gt;_______________________________________________<br>
&gt;IPCDN mailing list<br>
&gt;<a href=3D"mailto:IPCDN@ietf.org">IPCDN@ietf.org</a><br>
&gt;<a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn" target=3D"_blan=
k">https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn</a><br>
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Ok.  That makes sense.  I didn't realize Rich had posted an errata.  The "st=
art" is extraneous but harmless, but does need the comma if present.  Mike

Sent from my iPad

> On Jul 12, 2014, at 7:55, Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org> wrote:
>=20
> Hi Guys,
>=20
> Thanks for your reply.
>=20
> My submission is in regard to the docsBpiCmAuthState object.  If you look a=
t the technical errata submitted here: http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_sear=
ch.php?rfc=3D3083  then you will see the comma is clearly omitted from the '=
fixed' text:
>=20
>> It should say:
>>=20
>>    docsBpiCmAuthState      OBJECT-TYPE
>>    SYNTAX                  INTEGER {
>>=20
>>                                    start(1)
>>                                    authWait(2),
>>                                    authorized(3),
>>                                    reauthWait(4),
>>                                    authRejectWait(5)
>=20
>=20
> Maybe what you are saying is that the above fix is not required?  If so, i=
t is misleading...and either way, syntactically incorrect!
>=20
> Regards,
>=20
> Mark
>=20
>=20
>> On Fri, Jul 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM, Michael StJohns <mstjohns@comcast.net> w=
rote:
>> What a blast from the past.
>>=20
>> This is "not an error" , at least as reported.  Three are two places this=
 error might have been reported from - the definition of  docsBpiCmAuthState=
 and  the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState.  The former -  I believe correctl=
y -does not include "start (1)" as one of its states.  The latter has "start=
 (1),"  - e.g. including the comma.  So I'm not sure where he's actually see=
ing the error.
>>=20
>> The  MIB  was verified at submission.  I would be surprised if there are a=
ny obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.
>>=20
>> If I remember correctly, the reason the "start" state was excluded from t=
he docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the state ma=
chine doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at least todEstabl=
ished - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later than "start" so any qu=
ery about baseline privacy will not necessarily give you valid information p=
rior to todEstablished.
>>=20
>> Mike
>>=20
>>=20
>>=20
>> At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:
>> >The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,
>> >"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compl=
iant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".
>> >
>> >--------------------------------------
>> >You may review the report below and at:
>> >http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083&eid=3D4048
>> >
>> >--------------------------------------
>> >Type: Technical
>> >Reported by: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>
>> >
>> >Section: 4
>> >
>> >Original Text
>> >-------------
>> >start(1)
>> >
>> >Corrected Text
>> >--------------
>> >start(1),
>> >
>> >Notes
>> >-----
>> >errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the ins=
erted line 'start(1)'
>> >
>> >Instructions:
>> >-------------
>> >This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>> >use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>> >rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>> >can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>> >
>> >--------------------------------------
>> >RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)
>> >--------------------------------------
>> >Title               : Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information B=
ase for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems
>> >Publication Date    : March 2001
>> >Author(s)           : R. Woundy
>> >Category            : INFORMATIONAL
>> >Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
>> >Area                : Operations and Management
>> >Stream              : IETF
>> >Verifying Party     : IESG
>> >
>> >_______________________________________________
>> >IPCDN mailing list
>> >IPCDN@ietf.org
>> >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn
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>=20
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<html><head><meta http-equiv=3D"content-type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3D=
utf-8"></head><body dir=3D"auto"><div>Ok. &nbsp;That makes sense. &nbsp;I di=
dn't realize Rich had posted an errata. &nbsp;The "start" is extraneous but h=
armless, but does need the comma if present. &nbsp;Mike<br><br>Sent from my i=
Pad</div><div><br>On Jul 12, 2014, at 7:55, Mark Ellison &lt;<a href=3D"mail=
to:ellison@ieee.org">ellison@ieee.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br><br></div><blockquot=
e type=3D"cite"><div><div dir=3D"ltr"><div><div><div>Hi Guys,<br><br></div>T=
hanks for your reply.<br><br>My submission is in regard to the docsBpiCmAuth=
State object.&nbsp; If you look at the technical errata submitted here: <a h=
ref=3D"http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083">http://www.rf=
c-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083</a>&nbsp; then you will see the co=
mma is clearly omitted from the 'fixed' text:<br>
<br><blockquote style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(=
204,204,204);padding-left:1ex" class=3D"gmail_quote">It should say:<br><br>&=
nbsp;&nbsp; docsBpiCmAuthState&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; OBJECT-TYPE<br>=
&nbsp;&nbsp; SYNTAX&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; INTEGER {<br>
<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; start(1)<br>&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; authWait(2),<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; authorized(3),<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; reauthWait(4),<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; authRejectWait(5)<br>
</blockquote><br><br></div>Maybe what you are saying is that the above fix i=
s not required?&nbsp; If so, it is misleading...and either way, syntacticall=
y incorrect!<br><br></div>Regards,<br><br>Mark<br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"=
>
<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Fri, Jul 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM, Michael S=
tJohns <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mstjohns@comcast.net" target=3D=
"_blank">mstjohns@comcast.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"=
gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-l=
eft:1ex">
What a blast from the past.<br>
<br>
This is "not an error" , at least as reported. &nbsp;Three are two places th=
is error might have been reported from - the definition of &nbsp;docsBpiCmAu=
thState and &nbsp;the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState. &nbsp;The former - &n=
bsp;I believe correctly -does not include "start (1)" as one of its states. &=
nbsp;The latter has "start (1)," &nbsp;- e.g. including the comma. &nbsp;So I=
'm not sure where he's actually seeing the error.<br>

<br>
The &nbsp;MIB &nbsp;was verified at submission. &nbsp;I would be surprised i=
f there are any obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.<b=
r>
<br>
If I remember correctly, the reason the "start" state was excluded from the d=
ocsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the state machin=
e doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at least todEstablishe=
d - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later than "start" so any query a=
bout baseline privacy will not necessarily give you valid information prior t=
o todEstablished.<br>

<br>
Mike<br>
<div><div class=3D"h5"><br>
<br>
<br>
At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:<br>
&gt;The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,<br>
&gt;"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compl=
iant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;You may review the report below and at:<br>
&gt;<a href=3D"http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083&amp;ei=
d=3D4048" target=3D"_blank">http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D=
3083&amp;eid=3D4048</a><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;Type: Technical<br>
&gt;Reported by: Mark Ellison &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ellison@ieee.org">elliso=
n@ieee.org</a>&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Section: 4<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Original Text<br>
&gt;-------------<br>
&gt;start(1)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Corrected Text<br>
&gt;--------------<br>
&gt;start(1),<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Notes<br>
&gt;-----<br>
&gt;errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the ins=
erted line 'start(1)'<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Instructions:<br>
&gt;-------------<br>
&gt;This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please<br>
&gt;use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or<br>
&gt;rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)<br>
&gt;can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;Title &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; : Baseline Privac=
y Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems an=
d Cable Modem Termination Systems<br>
&gt;Publication Date &nbsp; &nbsp;: March 2001<br>
&gt;Author(s) &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; : R. Woundy<br>
&gt;Category &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;: INFORMATIONAL<br>
&gt;Source &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;: IP over Cable D=
ata Network<br>
&gt;Area &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;: Operations=
 and Management<br>
&gt;Stream &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;: IETF<br>
&gt;Verifying Party &nbsp; &nbsp; : IESG<br>
&gt;<br>
</div></div>&gt;_______________________________________________<br>
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Wow. I don't even remember why I submitted that errata, 13 years ago. And I=
 left Cisco (rwoundy@cisco.com<mailto:rwoundy@cisco.com>) 12 years ago.

In any case, I agree with this submission.

-- Rich

On Jul 12, 2014, at 9:29 AM, "Michael StJohns" <mstjohns@comcast.net<mailto=
:mstjohns@comcast.net>> wrote:

Ok.  That makes sense.  I didn't realize Rich had posted an errata.  The "s=
tart" is extraneous but harmless, but does need the comma if present.  Mike

Sent from my iPad

On Jul 12, 2014, at 7:55, Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org<mailto:ellison@iee=
e.org>> wrote:

Hi Guys,

Thanks for your reply.

My submission is in regard to the docsBpiCmAuthState object.  If you look a=
t the technical errata submitted here: http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_sea=
rch.php?rfc=3D3083  then you will see the comma is clearly omitted from the=
 'fixed' text:

It should say:

   docsBpiCmAuthState      OBJECT-TYPE
   SYNTAX                  INTEGER {

                                   start(1)
                                   authWait(2),
                                   authorized(3),
                                   reauthWait(4),
                                   authRejectWait(5)


Maybe what you are saying is that the above fix is not required?  If so, it=
 is misleading...and either way, syntactically incorrect!

Regards,

Mark


On Fri, Jul 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM, Michael StJohns <mstjohns@comcast.net<mail=
to:mstjohns@comcast.net>> wrote:
What a blast from the past.

This is "not an error" , at least as reported.  Three are two places this e=
rror might have been reported from - the definition of  docsBpiCmAuthState =
and  the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState.  The former -  I believe correctl=
y -does not include "start (1)" as one of its states.  The latter has "star=
t (1),"  - e.g. including the comma.  So I'm not sure where he's actually s=
eeing the error.

The  MIB  was verified at submission.  I would be surprised if there are an=
y obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.

If I remember correctly, the reason the "start" state was excluded from the=
 docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the state mac=
hine doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at least todEstabl=
ished - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later than "start" so any q=
uery about baseline privacy will not necessarily give you valid information=
 prior to todEstablished.

Mike



At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:
>The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,
>"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Complia=
nt Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".
>
>--------------------------------------
>You may review the report below and at:
>http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083&eid=3D4048
>
>--------------------------------------
>Type: Technical
>Reported by: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org<mailto:ellison@ieee.org>>
>
>Section: 4
>
>Original Text
>-------------
>start(1)
>
>Corrected Text
>--------------
>start(1),
>
>Notes
>-----
>errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the inser=
ted line 'start(1)'
>
>Instructions:
>-------------
>This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>
>--------------------------------------
>RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)
>--------------------------------------
>Title               : Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Ba=
se for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems
>Publication Date    : March 2001
>Author(s)           : R. Woundy
>Category            : INFORMATIONAL
>Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
>Area                : Operations and Management
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<div>Wow. I don't even remember why I submitted that errata, 13 years ago. =
And I left Cisco (<a href=3D"mailto:rwoundy@cisco.com">rwoundy@cisco.com</a=
>) 12 years ago.</div>
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</div>
<div>In any case, I agree with this submission.<br>
<br>
-- Rich</div>
<div><br>
On Jul 12, 2014, at 9:29 AM, &quot;Michael StJohns&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mai=
lto:mstjohns@comcast.net">mstjohns@comcast.net</a>&gt; wrote:<br>
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<blockquote type=3D"cite">
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<div>Ok. &nbsp;That makes sense. &nbsp;I didn't realize Rich had posted an =
errata. &nbsp;The &quot;start&quot; is extraneous but harmless, but does ne=
ed the comma if present. &nbsp;Mike<br>
<br>
Sent from my iPad</div>
<div><br>
On Jul 12, 2014, at 7:55, Mark Ellison &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ellison@ieee.o=
rg">ellison@ieee.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br>
<br>
</div>
<blockquote type=3D"cite">
<div>
<div dir=3D"ltr">
<div>
<div>
<div>Hi Guys,<br>
<br>
</div>
Thanks for your reply.<br>
<br>
My submission is in regard to the docsBpiCmAuthState object.&nbsp; If you l=
ook at the technical errata submitted here:
<a href=3D"http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083">http://w=
ww.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083</a>&nbsp; then you will see =
the comma is clearly omitted from the 'fixed' text:<br>
<br>
<blockquote style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204=
,204,204);padding-left:1ex" class=3D"gmail_quote">
It should say:<br>
<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp; docsBpiCmAuthState&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; OBJECT-TYPE<b=
r>
&nbsp;&nbsp; SYNTAX&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; INTEGER {<br>
<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; start(1)<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; authWait(2),<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; authorized(3),<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; reauthWait(4),<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; authRejectWait(5)<br=
>
</blockquote>
<br>
<br>
</div>
Maybe what you are saying is that the above fix is not required?&nbsp; If s=
o, it is misleading...and either way, syntactically incorrect!<br>
<br>
</div>
Regards,<br>
<br>
Mark<br>
<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br>
<br>
<div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Fri, Jul 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM, Michael StJohns=
 <span dir=3D"ltr">
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mstjohns@comcast.net" target=3D"_blank">mstjohns@comc=
ast.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
What a blast from the past.<br>
<br>
This is &quot;not an error&quot; , at least as reported. &nbsp;Three are tw=
o places this error might have been reported from - the definition of &nbsp=
;docsBpiCmAuthState and &nbsp;the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState. &nbsp;Th=
e former - &nbsp;I believe correctly -does not include &quot;start (1)&quot=
;
 as one of its states. &nbsp;The latter has &quot;start (1),&quot; &nbsp;- =
e.g. including the comma. &nbsp;So I'm not sure where he's actually seeing =
the error.<br>
<br>
The &nbsp;MIB &nbsp;was verified at submission. &nbsp;I would be surprised =
if there are any obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.=
<br>
<br>
If I remember correctly, the reason the &quot;start&quot; state was exclude=
d from the docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the=
 state machine doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at least=
 todEstablished - (RFC4546) and the state
 would always be later than &quot;start&quot; so any query about baseline p=
rivacy will not necessarily give you valid information prior to todEstablis=
hed.<br>
<br>
Mike<br>
<div>
<div class=3D"h5"><br>
<br>
<br>
At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:<br>
&gt;The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,<br>
&gt;&quot;Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS=
 Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems&quot;.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;You may review the report below and at:<br>
&gt;<a href=3D"http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083&amp;e=
id=3D4048" target=3D"_blank">http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rf=
c=3D3083&amp;eid=3D4048</a><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;Type: Technical<br>
&gt;Reported by: Mark Ellison &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ellison@ieee.org">ellis=
on@ieee.org</a>&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Section: 4<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Original Text<br>
&gt;-------------<br>
&gt;start(1)<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Corrected Text<br>
&gt;--------------<br>
&gt;start(1),<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Notes<br>
&gt;-----<br>
&gt;errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the in=
serted line 'start(1)'<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;Instructions:<br>
&gt;-------------<br>
&gt;This errata is currently posted as &quot;Reported&quot;. If necessary, =
please<br>
&gt;use &quot;Reply All&quot; to discuss whether it should be verified or<b=
r>
&gt;rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)<br>
&gt;can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)<br>
&gt;--------------------------------------<br>
&gt;Title &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; : Baseline Priva=
cy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems =
and Cable Modem Termination Systems<br>
&gt;Publication Date &nbsp; &nbsp;: March 2001<br>
&gt;Author(s) &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; : R. Woundy<br>
&gt;Category &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;: INFORMATIONAL<br>
&gt;Source &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;: IP over Cable =
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Greetings,

With AD approval, Errata ID 334 has been corrected as indicated:=20
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D334

Errata ID 4048 has been removed from the system because it was an =
erratum for an erratum. (In the future, please direct corrections to =
existing errata to rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org.)

Thank you.
RFC Editor/ar

On Jul 12, 2014, at 10:44 AM, Woundy, Richard =
<Richard_Woundy@cable.comcast.com> wrote:

> Wow. I don't even remember why I submitted that errata, 13 years ago. =
And I left Cisco (rwoundy@cisco.com) 12 years ago.
>=20
> In any case, I agree with this submission.
>=20
> -- Rich
>=20
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wrote:
>=20
>> Ok.  That makes sense.  I didn't realize Rich had posted an errata.  =
The "start" is extraneous but harmless, but does need the comma if =
present.  Mike
>>=20
>> Sent from my iPad
>>=20
>> On Jul 12, 2014, at 7:55, Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org> wrote:
>>=20
>>> Hi Guys,
>>>=20
>>> Thanks for your reply.
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>>> My submission is in regard to the docsBpiCmAuthState object.  If you =
look at the technical errata submitted here: =
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083  then you will =
see the comma is clearly omitted from the 'fixed' text:
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>>> It should say:
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>>>    docsBpiCmAuthState      OBJECT-TYPE
>>>    SYNTAX                  INTEGER {
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>>>                                    start(1)
>>>                                    authWait(2),
>>>                                    authorized(3),
>>>                                    reauthWait(4),
>>>                                    authRejectWait(5)
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>>> Maybe what you are saying is that the above fix is not required?  If =
so, it is misleading...and either way, syntactically incorrect!
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>>> On Fri, Jul 11, 2014 at 7:34 PM, Michael StJohns =
<mstjohns@comcast.net> wrote:
>>> What a blast from the past.
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>>> This is "not an error" , at least as reported.  Three are two places =
this error might have been reported from - the definition of  =
docsBpiCmAuthState and  the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState.  The former =
-  I believe correctly -does not include "start (1)" as one of its =
states.  The latter has "start (1),"  - e.g. including the comma.  So =
I'm not sure where he's actually seeing the error.
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>>> The  MIB  was verified at submission.  I would be surprised if there =
are any obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.
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>>> If I remember correctly, the reason the "start" state was excluded =
from the docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - =
the state machine doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at =
least todEstablished - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later =
than "start" so any query about baseline privacy will not necessarily =
give you valid information prior to todEstablished.
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>>> At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>> >The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,
>>> >"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS =
Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".
>>> >
>>> >--------------------------------------
>>> >You may review the report below and at:
>>> >http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3D3083&eid=3D4048
>>> >
>>> >--------------------------------------
>>> >Type: Technical
>>> >Reported by: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>
>>> >
>>> >Section: 4
>>> >
>>> >Original Text
>>> >-------------
>>> >start(1)
>>> >
>>> >Corrected Text
>>> >--------------
>>> >start(1),
>>> >
>>> >Notes
>>> >-----
>>> >errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of =
the inserted line 'start(1)'
>>> >
>>> >Instructions:
>>> >-------------
>>> >This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>> >use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>> >rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>> >can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>> >
>>> >--------------------------------------
>>> >RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)
>>> >--------------------------------------
>>> >Title               : Baseline Privacy Interface Management =
Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem =
Termination Systems
>>> >Publication Date    : March 2001
>>> >Author(s)           : R. Woundy
>>> >Category            : INFORMATIONAL
>>> >Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
>>> >Area                : Operations and Management
>>> >Stream              : IETF
>>> >Verifying Party     : IESG
>>> >
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>>> >IPCDN@ietf.org
>>> >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn
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