Subject: [ippm] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11

From: Robert Sparks <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 25 Jul 2017 14:06:36 -0700

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2017-07-25
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-14
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-03

Summary: Ready with nits

Thanks for addressing the comments in my review of -10.
In the revision (as a side-effect of removing the dependency on 2119, I
suspect) you removed the classification of normative vs informative references.
I think you mean that all of these references are Informative. (The document
would have a References section, with one "Informative References" subsection).