Subject: RE: [Ips] IPS Paris minutes

From: [email-masked]
Date: Mon, 22 Aug 2005 19:54:01 -0400

Franco,
 
That "appears" was wrong - there is no outstanding issue,
and the RFC Editor has been asked to expedite publication
of iFCP, iSNS, and related drafts.
 
Thanks,
--David
p.s.  No I have to go fix the submitted minutes ...
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From: Franco Travostino [mailto:[email-masked]] 
Sent: Monday, August 22, 2005 11:12 AM
To: Black, David; [email-masked]
Subject: Re: [Ips] IPS Paris minutes

At 03:02 PM 8/20/2005, [email-masked] wrote:

        iFCP draft is in RFC Editor's queue, among others.  iFCP appears 
        to be waiting on authors to respond to RFC Editor question on 
        references. 

Hi, David,
we thought we had addressed the RFC Editor's issues on references (see
hereafter). We haven't heard from the RFC Editor ever since. Do you have
evidence of further issues?

-franco

From: Charles Monia <[email-masked]>
To: [email-masked]
Cc: Charles Monia <[email-masked]>, 
         "Travostino, Franco [BL60:470:EXCH]" <[email-masked]>, 
         [email-masked], [email-masked], 
         [email-masked], [email-masked]
Subject: draft-ietf-ips-ifcp-14.txt  suggested editorial changes
Date: Mon, 9 May 2005 16:31:23 -0400 
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Hi Folks:
 
The following addresses the discrepancies found by the RFC editor.
 
RFC Editorial comment 1:

   The following have been textually cited, but not referenced: 

      [FC-VI] 

      [FCS] 
Suggested editorial action::
 
1. Add the following to section 14, Non-normative References:
 
[FC-VI] ANSI/INCITS 357:2002, "Fibre Channel Virtual Interface Architecture
Mapping Protocol (FC-VI)", NCITS Project 1332-D, July 2000.

2. Change all occurrences of the erroneous [FCS] reference throughout the
document to [FC-FS]. (To my knowledge, the only such reference occurs in the
RES ACC response frame on on pp 70.
Comment 2:
 
   The following references do not have textual citations: 

      [RFC1305] Mills, D., "Network Time Protocol (Version 3) 
      Specification, Implementation", RFC 1305, March 1992. 

      [RFC2131] Droms, R., "Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol", RFC 
      2131, March 1997. 

      [RFC791]  Postel, J., "Internet Protocol", STD 5, RFC 791, 
      September 1981. 
Suggested editorial action:
 
The specified references should be deleted.
 
Other editorial changes:
 
The email address for the Rod Mullendor/Charles Monia entry in the author's
addresses of section 13   should be changed to
<mailto:[email-masked]> [email-masked] .

 Regards,
Charles Monia
-----Original Message-----
From: Franco Travostino [  <mailto:[email-masked]>
mailto:[email-masked]]
Sent: Tuesday, April 26, 2005 6:44 PM
To: [email-masked]'; [email-masked]';
[email-masked]'; [email-masked]'
Cc: [email-masked]'; [email-masked]'
Subject: Re: draft-ietf-ips-ifcp-14.txt

I will be working with the authors and get back to you as soon as possible. 

Thanks 
-franco 

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-----Original Message----- 
From: RFC Editor <[email-masked]> 
To: [email-masked] <[email-masked]>;
[email-masked] <[email-masked]>;
[email-masked] <[email-masked]>;
[email-masked] <[email-masked]>

CC: RFC Editor <[email-masked]>; Allison Mankin <[email-masked]>;
Jon Peterson <[email-masked]>; [email-masked]
<[email-masked]>; [email-masked] <[email-masked]>

Sent: Tue Apr 26 19:03:45 2005 
Subject: draft-ietf-ips-ifcp-14.txt 

Authors, 

While editing this document, we have come across the following 
reference/citation discrepancies: 

   The following have been textually cited, but not referenced: 

      [FC-VI] 

      [FCS] 

   Please provide us with the reference information for these 
   documents. 

   The following references do not have textual citations: 

      [RFC1305] Mills, D., "Network Time Protocol (Version 3) 
      Specification, Implementation", RFC 1305, March 1992. 

      [RFC2131] Droms, R., "Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol", RFC 
      2131, March 1997. 

      [RFC791]  Postel, J., "Internet Protocol", STD 5, RFC 791, 
      September 1981. 

   Please let us know where these references should be cited in the 
   text.  If they are not to be cited, they will be deleted.  

Please let us know if you have any updated contact information for Rod 
Mullendore, as there was no email address provided. 

Your document will not move forward in the publication process until 
these issues have been resolved. 

Thank you. 

RFC Editor 

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