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JS >Please do review the documents and post your comments on this list
until November 14, 2009.  Please also post to the list if you
JS >have read the documents and you are fine with them.  It is very
useful to know how many people have read the documents.

I read the (d)tls transport model document and here is the full summary
of my comments:
(The first 3 items were posted to the list previously)=20

1.  tlstmServerAuthFailure notification.
Will it be helpful for network administrators to know the current count
of how many times the presented server certificate is invalid in each
tlstmServerAuthFailure notification?  If so, it may be useful to have
tlstmSessionInvalidServerCertificates as an additional binding,
especially if this object is the trigger.

2.  Standard authentication failure notification.
There may have been some previous discussions about possibly using the
standard authenticationFailure trap for tlstm (client) authentication
failures.  Will this be used or mentioned in the document?

3. tlstmServerCertNotFound
Will it be feasible to have a scalar object that serves as a counter for
this event?=20
If implemented, it can be added to this notification.

4.  Section 6.4 Configuration Tables
There is double verb, (is are), in the 2nd sentence.

5. Section 6.4.1 Notifications
This section mentions a notification (tlstmServerAuthFailure) that
alerts management stations when the server's presented certificate does
not meet the expected value but does not appear to have a statement that
directly refers to the tlstmServerCertNotFound notification.

-Andy Donati


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Some random comments scribbled on printout during my flight earlier
today (or yesterday, depending on your point of view :-):

- How the notification originator authenticates the other end (TLS
server) when fingerprints are not used is very unclear (the
fingerprint case is clear). Section 5.3, step 3b, suggests we could
use path validation, but it doesn't e.g. say what the "reference
identity" (in draft-saintandre-tls-server-id-check terminology) would
be. Perhaps the MIB should allow specifying that reference identity.
(MIB, tlstmAddrTable, is relevant here.)

(I guess this applies to command generators, too, to some degree
at least -- they also act as TLS clients, and have to authenticate
the server somehow.)

- While TLS supports several different authentication mechanism (X.509
certs, OpenPGP certs, pre-shared keys, Kerberos, SRP, ...), TLSTM
supports only one of them (X.509 certs). This should be mentioned
in e.g. Section 1 and Section 4.1.

- Section 1.1, 2nd to last paragraph, and Section 3.1.3: These parts
should probably explicitly say that the concept of "session" here is
totally unrelated to TLS sessions in RFC 5246 (which are TLS-internal
optimization detail not visible to TLSTM). But the name "tlsSessionID"
is very poorly chosen, since it's very different from the TLS
SessionID in RFC 5246.

- Section 5.3 (last para) and Section 8.2: (D)TLS does have the
"server_name" extension that does allow doing this.

- MIB, Snmp*Address TCs: do we need four pages worth of new TCs
to just describe (IPv4 address/IPv6 address/hostname)+port?=20
Surely many existing MIBs use address+port, too, and we could
import from somewhere?

- MIB, Fingerprint TC, last paragraph: this is not really consistent
with how certificate fingerprints are used in many other protocols --
usually we compare just the fingerprint (not the whole certificate),
and assume it's produced by a good hash function.

- MIB, tlstmCertToSNSANType: is SecurityName case sensitive?  If it
is, you need to specify the case for IPv6 address, and probably
normalize the dNSName and domain part of rfc822name (e.g., convert to
lower case).

- MIB, tlstmCertToSNSANType: how would othername be converted to
SnmpAdminString? (which is UTF-8, so "take the raw DER" does not work
-- and it would be very administator-unfriendly, too)

- Sections 3.3 and others: the document has snmpTLSDomain,
snmpDTLSUDPDomain and snmpDTLSSCTPDomain. Probably for consistency,
the first should be snmpTLSTCPDomain, since SCTP would also normally
use TLS, not DTLS (there's a draft proposing how to run DTLS over
SCTP, but it's just work in progress, not something that can be done
today).

- Section 2.1: if the CG/NO is always the (D)TLS client, and it MUST
be authenticated (2nd bullet), then why is authenticating the client
only SHOULD? (1st bullet)

- The openSession ASI in Section 4.4.1 looks very different
from the SSHTM ASI -- is this intentional?

- Section 4.4.1: "this restriction is not needed for TLS or DTLS over
SCTP": this restriction is present in TLS-over-TCP/SCTP, too, but
TCP/SCTP take care of ensuring that <src IP, src port, dst IP, dst port>
is unique.

- Section 4.4.2 and 4.4.3: I think these sections should be just
deleted -- these are TLS internal details. Furthermore, for normal TLS
(or DTLS, when a single datagram contains multiple DTLS records),
TLSTM cannot even determine "wholeTlsMsgLength", since that would
require parsing the TLS messages (which would be a layering
violation).

Section 5.1.1 is also a bit questionable; it also seems to suggest
parsing DTLS records by TLSTM. And the details aren't quite right: the
same demultiplexing (mapping incoming UDP packet, based on <src IP,src
port,dst IP, dst port> tuple, to the right DTLS connection/context)
has to happen for DTLS handshake messages, too, not just DTLS
application data messages.

- Section 8.1, 1st paragraph: the last sentence of this paragraph
is very confusing, since the sessions this document talks about
are totally unrelated to TLS sessions (and TLS session resumption).
Besides, all TLS implementations support session resumption, so
this SHOULD is not really needed in this document.

- Section 8.1, 2nd paragraph: Separate ports might be a reasonable
idea, but I don't understand what the rest of the paragraph is saying...

- Section 10: SSHTM uses ports >1023 -- should be good enough for
TLSTM, too (the criteria for allocating ports <1023 is much stricter).

- In normal SNMP-over-UDP, if e.g. the notification receiver restarts,
that's not a problem: at least if the notification generator didn't
send anything exactly when the restart was ongoing, everything will
continue just fine after the restart.

But when using DTLS-over-UDP, if the notification receiver restarts,
the notification generator has to know that it needs to start a new
DTLS "connection" (because otherwise the receiver will just silently
drop all the packets it gets). The same problem has been discussed for
syslog-over-DTLS recently, and draft-seggelmann-tls-dtls-heartbeat
proposes one possible solution.

In SNMP most requests result in a response, so if no response is seen,
*some* component will know there's something wrong. But since TLSTM
isn't supposed to know about PDU types, it might be architecturally
slightly tricky how opening a new DTLS "connection" should be triggered
here. But the document should probably say something about this issue.

- Should the document say something about MTU/avoiding fragmentation
for DTLS-over-UDP?

- DTLS allows multiple DTLS records in a single datagram -- should
the document say something about this?

- Should the document say something about SCTP Partial Reliability,
or use of SCTP streams?

Minor editorial comments:

- The document title should have the acronym "TLS" in it.

- Section 4.1.1: While the actual details of how self-signed
certificates can be used in TLSTM (in the rest of the spec) look
mostly OK, I would recommend against using the term "trust anchor" to
refer to self-signed end-entity certificates.

- Section 3.1.1, item 4, 2nd paragraph: this is quite unclear, and goes
into details that are IMHO not relevant for TLSTM. Perhaps something
like "Most TLS cipher suites do encryption" ?

- Section 3.1.1, item 5,: the sentence about "amplification" is quite
unclear; the main purpose of DTLS cookie exchange is to limit
server-side resource consumption, not amplification (and "detecting"
amplification could be tricky).

- Section 3.1.2: This text should probably mention that TLS=20
does not have any NULL integrity cipher suites.

- MIB, tlstmParamsEntry: should "usable" be "unusable"?

- Section 9, "DTLS is more vulnerable to denial of service attacks".
Well, a hypothetical version of DTLS that didn't include the cookie
exchange might be more vulnerable, but since we don't have such
a version, this isn't really true.

- Global: s/US-US-ASCII/US-ASCII/;

- The reference [x509] looks wrong.

- Appendix A and B: I would suggest deleting these.=20

- Appendix C: "blueberry" is not a valid rfc822Name
("blueberry@example.com" would be)

Best regards,
Pasi


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>>>>> On Fri, 6 Nov 2009 12:15:14 +0100, <Pasi.Eronen@nokia.com> said:

PE> Some random comments scribbled on printout during my flight earlier
PE> today (or yesterday, depending on your point of view :-):

Thanks for the comments Pasi.  I'll responding to them in greater detail
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I wanted to remind folks that our meeting at IETF76 will begin in about
half day.  Juergen has posted the agenda as well as the slide sets
that we currently have so please take a look.  The material is available
in the ISMS section at:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/76/materials.html

I'd also like to remind folks that cannot attend the meeting in person
that remote participation is possible and encouraged.  Jabber and audio
is available by clicking on the 'right' icons on the isms line on the
following page:

http://tools.ietf.org/agenda/76/#2009-11-09_1500

(Warning - Requests comes next :-)

I would like to have volunteers identified before the meeting begins to
do jabber scribe duty and minute taker duty.  These are both very
important things that we as a WG need to do to meet our Charter
deliverables. It's also a chance for people to make an important
contribution to the WG that doesn't require a long-term time commitment.

If you can volunteer for either of these, please send mail to the list
(or if you prefer, directly to me).


Hope to see & hear from many of you later today.


Russ

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Hi,

I like to remind WG members that we need more reviews of the DTLS
transport model to move it along. So far, I have seen three reviews:

- Andrew Donati <adonati@motorola.com>
- Pasi Eronen <pasi.eronen@nokia.com>
- Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>

More reviews are need to move this document forward. If you have read
the document and you do not have comments, please let the chairs know.
Without sufficient WG review, the document is not going to move to the
IESG.

Thanks,

/js

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>>>>> On Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:00:16 +0100, Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> said:

JS> More reviews are need to move this document forward.

It should be worth noting that the list is missing people that have
already reviewed the draft and provide comments before the last call.
Are you requesting past participants to re-read the document?  If so,
you should make that explicitly clear.
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On Mon, Nov 16, 2009 at 10:16:51PM +0100, Wes Hardaker wrote:
> >>>>> On Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:00:16 +0100, Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> said:
> 
> JS> More reviews are need to move this document forward.
> 
> It should be worth noting that the list is missing people that have
> already reviewed the draft and provide comments before the last call.
> Are you requesting past participants to re-read the document?  If so,
> you should make that explicitly clear.

I prefer that WG members review and comment on the latest version. If
participants have reviewed earlier versions, it should not be too much
effort to check the deltas using the tools pages:

http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isms-dtls-tm-01

/js

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Hi Juergen,

I intend to review the document, but I will probably not get to it until
later next week. =20

Cheers,

Joe
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Great.

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Hi,

Randy Presuhn has agreed to take the pen for the RADIUS/VACM document
so that we can move this work item forward. Randy has been one of the
editors of the VACM document (RFC3415) adn this should help with
getting the SNMP side align well with VACM.

The current plan is to get a -00 version of a WG document out soon
based on David Nelson's / Kaushik Narayan's individual draft, which
likely contains a number of open issues that we then try to resolve
here on the mailing list.

/js

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> Randy Presuhn has agreed to take the pen for the RADIUS/VACM document
> so that we can move this work item forward.

Thanks to Randy for offering his assistance.

> Randy has been one of the editors of the VACM document (RFC3415)
> adn this should help with getting the SNMP side align well with VACM.

Indeed.  Kaushik and I were a bit stuck waiting for some expert  
consultation on the "SNMP side", as you say.

> The current plan is to get a -00 version of a WG document out soon
> based on David Nelson's / Kaushik Narayan's individual draft, which
> likely contains a number of open issues that we then try to resolve
> here on the mailing list.

I will shortly publish a -01 of the individual draft, representing the  
state of the document as it was presented to Randy, to create a  
snapshot of the work.  The WG should not be confused that is is  
intended to be the version that gets WG review and comment.  It's  
primarily for short-term archival purposes.



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Hello,


I have reviewed  draft-ietf-isms-dtls-tm-01.txt; my comments are included
below.  My apology for my late review of this document.

My overall comment is that the document is in generally good shape, could 
be advanced, and that my company is interested in it advancing.  My thanks 
to the author and reviewers; their hard work shows!   I reviewed a much 
earlier draft, and appreciate the additional technical completeness and 
clarification in this latest version.  I especially appreciate the 
"implementation hints" and the well-thought-out and thorough specification 
of mapping X.509 certficates to SNMP security names.  The engineering 
effort shows.


Most of what I noted were minor typograpical errors and possible wording
changes.  There are a places where more clarification might be helpful.
I suggest changes to the MIB that are NOT ESSENTIAL to the correct opera-
tion or implementability of SNMP over (D)TLS, but the presence or absence
of the suggested changes may affect the utility of othe MIB objects.

My company has not implemented SNMP over (D)TLS, but we are interested in
doing so.  We have customer demand for SNMP over (D)TLS.


The specific suggestions are listed in the order in which they appear in
the draft.  I've catagorized the changes below as "typo", "wording", 
"formatting", "clarification", or "content error" changes.



Section 1:  Page 6, only sentence:  (wording)
---------------------------------------------

Suggest changing  "equally as legitimate."  to  "equally valid."



Section 2.1 Page 8, first bulleted item:  (clarification)
---------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:  

    The TLS Transport Model SHOULD always use authentication of both 
     the server and the client.

An explanation of why this is true would be helpful for implementors
who do not understand security as thoroughly as those on the ISMS WG.



Section 2.1 Page 8:  (formatting/typo)
-------------------------------------- 

There is a straggling item number 3 that appears to be the heading
"How the TLSTM fits into the Transport Subsystem".  Suggest fixing
this.



Section 2.1 Page 9:  (formatting)
---------------------------------

If possible, fixing the page breaks so that the diagram appears
on a single page.  This applies to other diagrams as well.



Section 3.1.1 Page 10, item number 1:  (wording)
------------------------------------------------

The text reads:  

   1.  Modification of Information - The modification threat is the
       danger that some unauthorized entity may alter in-transit SNMP
                    ^^^^

Suggest change:  

   1.  Modification of Information - The modification threat is the
       danger that an unauthorized entity may alter in-transit SNMP
                    ^^



Section 3.1.1 Page 12, item number 5, second to last paragraph:  (typo)
-----------------------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   Implementations are not required to perform the stateless cookie
   exchange for every DTLS handshakes but in environments where
                                    ^
Suggest removing the "s" from "handshakes".



Section 4.1.1 Page 15, second bulleted text, fourth paragraph:  (typo)
----------------------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   o  Identifies a certificate issuer's fingerprint and allows a child
      certificate's subjectAltName or CommonName to be mapped to the
      tmSecurityNome."
                 ^

Suggest changing  "tmSecurityNome."  to  "tmSecurityName."



Section 4.3.1 Page 17, first paragraph, last sentence:  (wording)
-----------------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   This document specifies three TLS and DTLS based Transport Domains for 
   use: the snmpTLSDomain, the snmpDTLSUDPDomain and the snmpDTLSSCTPDomain.

Suggested text change:

   This document specifies the snmpTLSDomain, the snmpDTLSUDPDomain and 
   the snmpDTLSSCTPDomain" transport domains.

There are a few other places in the document where this suggested change
could be made.



Section 4.3.1 Page 17, second paragraph:  (wording)
---------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   destTransportAddress:  The transport address of the destination TLS
      Transport Model in a format specified by the SnmpTLSAddress, the
      SnmpDTLSUDPAddress or the SnmpDTLSSCTPAddress TEXTUAL-CONVENTIONs.

Question:  Does the format into the API really matter?  Would omitting
the format clause be better, or suggesting the intended format?



Section 4.3.2 Page 17:  (content error)
---------------------------------------

The text reads:

      statusInformation =
      receiveMessage(
      IN   transportDomain               -- origin transport domain
      IN   transportAddress              -- origin transport address
      IN   incomingMessage               -- the message received
      IN   incomingMessageLength         -- its length
      IN   tmStateReference              -- reference to transport state
       )

I _think_ the ASI arguments all specify items that are returned to the
ASI caller, so I _think_ it should be:

      statusInformation =
      receiveMessage(
      OUT   transportDomain               -- origin transport domain
      OUT   transportAddress              -- origin transport address
      OUT   incomingMessage               -- the message received
      OUT   incomingMessageLength         -- its length
      OUT   tmStateReference              -- reference to transport state
       )

Now, in a programming language, one would pass pointers into an API, which
would then be populated by the API, then returned to the caller.  Thus, if
receiveMessage() specified an _API_ (not an _ASI_), then the original 
_might_ be correct.  But the original obscures the fact that the informa-
tion items specified by the arguments are _returned_ by the ASI.  Thus, the 
original seems to obscure the information flow.

I note that this diagram comes from RFC 5590, section 6.3, on page 25,
which I _think_ is incorrect also.

Am I missing something here?



Section 4.3.2 Page 18, first paragraph:  (wording)
--------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   transportAddress:  The transport address of the source of the
      received message in a format specified by the SnmpTLSAddress, the
      SnmpDTLSUDPAddress or the SnmpDTLSSCTPAddress TEXTUAL-CONVENTION.

Question:  Does the format into the API really matter?  Would omitting
the format clause be better, or suggesting the intended format?



Section 4.4 Page 18, first paragraph:  (typo/content error)
-----------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   This section describes the services provided by the (D)TLS Transport
   Model with their inputs and outputs."               ^^^

Suggested change:

   This section describes the services provided by the TLS Transport
   Model with their inputs and outputs.



Section 4.4 Page 18, first paragraph:  (clarification)
------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

  The following sections describe services for establishing and closing 
  a session and for passing messages between the (D)TLS transport

Suggested change:

  The following sections describe services for establishing and closing 
  a (D)TLS session and for passing messages between the (D)TLS transport
    ^^^^^^



Section 4.4.1 Page 19, sixth paragraph:  (clarification/wording)
----------------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   Neither DTLS or UDP provides a session de-multiplexing mechanism and
   it is possible that implementations will only be able to identify a
   unique session based on a unique combination of source address,
   destination address, source UDP port number and destination UDP port
   number.  Because of this, when establishing a new sessions
   implementations MUST use a different UDP source port number for each
   connection to a given remote destination IP-address/port-number
   combination to ensure the remote entity can properly disambiguate
   between multiple sessions from a host to the same port on a server.
   TLS and DTLS over SCTP provide session de-multiplexing so this
   restriction is not needed for TLS or DTLS over SCTP implementations.

Suggested changes:

   Neither DTLS or UDP provides a session de-multiplexing mechanism and
   it is possible that implementations will only be able to identify a
   unique DTLS session based on a unique combination of source address,
          ^^^^
   destination address, source UDP port number and destination UDP port
   number.  Because of this, when establishing a new sessions with
   different security parameters,                             ^^^^
   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   implementations MUST use a different UDP source port number for each
   connection to a given remote destination IP-address/port-number
   combination to ensure the remote entity can properly differentiate
                                                        ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   between multiple sessions from a host to the same port on a server.
   TLS and DTLS over SCTP provide session de-multiplexing so this
   restriction is not needed for TLS or DTLS over SCTP implementations.


I _think_ "disambiguate" is jargon, not a real word.



Section 4.4.1 Page 19, last paragraph, second line:  (typo)
-----------------------------------------------------------

Add a comma after the clause "if the process was successful".



Section 4.4.2 Page 19, first paragraph:  (clarification)
--------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   When the TLS Transport Model invokes the (D)TLS record layer to
   verify proper security for the incoming message, it must use the
   following ASI:

Suggested change:

   The TLS Transport Model invokes the tlsRead ASI to verify proper
   security for the incoming message:
                                                 


Section 4.4.2 Page 20, third paragraph:  (attaboy)
--------------------------------------------------

Thanks for the implementation hint in the paragraph about the "tlsSessionID"!


                                                 
Section 5.1.1 Page 22, second paragraph:  (typo)
------------------------------------------------

Add a hyphen between "implementation dependent" in the fourth line.


                                                 
Section 5.1.1 Page 22, second paragraph:  (wording)
---------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   accomplish this, although any implementation dependent method should
   be suitable as long as the results are consistently deterministic.

Suggested change:

   accomplish this, although any implementation dependent method should
   be suitable as long as the results are consistent.

The phrase "consistently deterministic" is redundant.



Section 5.1.1 Page 23, item 5:  (typo)
--------------------------------------

Change "tlsWholeMsg" to "wholeTlsMsg".



Section 5.1.2 Page 23, heading:  (clarification)
------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

    5.1.2.  Transport Processing for Incoming Messages

Should it read:

    5.1.2.  Transport Processing for Incoming SNMP Messages

There are a few other places in the text of this section where adding a
clue about whether the message is SNMP might clarify the text.



Section 5.1.2 Page 24, third paragraph:  (wording)
--------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   tmTransportAddress  = The address the message originated from,
      determined in an implementation dependent way.

Suggested change:

   tmTransportAddress  = The address the message originated from.

Does the phrase "determined in an implementation dependent way" matter?



Section 5.2 Page 25, heading:  (clarification)
----------------------------------------------

The text reads:

    5.2.  Procedures for an Outgoing Message

Should it read:

    5.2.  Procedures for an Outgoing SNMP Message

There are a few other places in the text of this section where adding a
clue about the message is SNMP might clarify the text.



Section 5.2 Page 25, bulleted item 4b:  (typo)
----------------------------------------------

The text reads:

            same cache entry.  If an error is returned from
            OpenSession(), then discard the message, increment the
            ^

Suggested change:

            same cache entry.  If an error is returned from
            openSession(), then discard the message, increment the
            ^

I _think_ this refers to the "openSession() ASI.
                                                            


Section 5.3 Page 27, bulleted item 3:  (wording)
------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   3)  Once a (D)TLS secured session is established and both sides have 
       performed any appropriate certificate authentication verification 

Suggested change: 

   3)  Once a (D)TLS secured session is established and both sides have 
       verified the authenticity of the peer's certificate

The original phrase "certificate authentication verification" sounds confusing.
                                                            


Section 5.4 Page 28, bulleted item 2:  (wording)
------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   2)  If there is no session open associated with the tmStateReference,
                      ^^^^^^^^^^^^
       then closeSession processing is completed.

Suggested change:

   2)  If there is no open session associated with the tmStateReference,
                      ^^^^^^^^^^^^
       then closeSession processing is completed.
                                                            


Section 6.3 Page 29:  (typo)
----------------------------

Change "statical" to "statistical".

                                                            

Section 6.3 Page 29:  (wording)
-------------------------------

Change "feedback" to "information".



Section 7 Page 34 sixth paragraph under "SnmpTLSAddress":  (typo)
-----------------------------------------------------------------

Change the case of "snmpTLSAddress" to "SnmpTLSAddress".



Section 7 Page 36 sixth paragraph under "SnmpDTLSUDPAddress":  (typo)
---------------------------------------------------------------------

Change the case of "snmpDTLSUDPAddress" to "SnmpDTLSUDPAddress".



Section 7 Page 37 sixth paragraph under "SnmpDTLSSCTPAddress":  (typo)
----------------------------------------------------------------------

Change the case of "snmpDTLSSCTPAddress" to "SnmpDTLSSCTPAddress".



Section 7 Page 39 under tlstmSessionInvalidClientCertificates:  (wording)
-------------------------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

    DESCRIPTION
        "The number of times an incoming session was not established
        on an (D)TLS server because the presented client certificate was
        invalid.  Reasons for invalidation includes, but is not
                                                  ^      ^^
        limited to, cryptographic validation failures and lack of a
                                                      ^^^
        suitable mapping row in the tlstmCertToSNTable."

Suggested change:

    DESCRIPTION
        "The number of times an incoming session was not established
        on an (D)TLS server because the presented client certificate was
        invalid.  Reasons for invalidation include, but are not
                                                        ^^^
        limited to, cryptographic validation failures, or a lack of a
                                                     ^ ^^
        suitable mapping row in the tlstmCertToSNTable."



Section 7 Page 39 under tlstmSessionInvalidServerCertificates:  (wording)
-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Same change in the DESCRIPTION clause as described above for the
tlstmSessionInvalidClientCertificates DESCRIPTION clause.



Section 7 Page 40:  (technical)
-------------------------------

I suggest adding:

tlstmCertToSNTableLastChangedEngineBoots  OBJECT-TYPE
    SYNTAX       INTEGER (1..2147483647)
    MAX-ACCESS   read-only
    STATUS       current
    DESCRIPTION
        "The value of snmpEngineBoots.0 when the tlstmCertToSNTable
        was last modified through any means."

just above the "tlstmCertToSNTableLastChanged" object.  

Having an engine boots and "tlstmCertToSNTableLastChanged" values would 
simplify the reliable detection of changes to the tlstmCertToSNTable.
Without an engine boots value, one cannot reliably detect changes to
the tlstmCertToSNTable.

I also suggest adding analogous engine boots values before the
"tlstmParamsTableLastChanged" and "tlstmAddrTableLastChanged" objects.



Section 7 Page 42 under "tlstmCertToSNFingerprint":  (clarification)
--------------------------------------------------------------------

How is the actual Fingerprint of a certificate generated, and how is this
MIB object populated?  I _assume_ the Fingerprint is generated by reading 
in, then hashing, the certificate.  Or is the Fingerprint already _in_ the 
certificate and just needs to be extracted?

A similar clarification under "tlstmParamsClientFingerprint", and
"tlstmAddrServerFingerprint" would be nice.  Or just providing the
clarification under the "Fingerprint" TEXTUAL-CONVENTION might be
sufficient.



Section 8.1 Page 54 first paragraph:  (clarification)
------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   use separate ports for Notification sessions and for Command
   sessions.  If this implementation recommendation is followed, (D)TLS

Are these "listen" ports, or "connect" ports?



Section 8.1 Page 54 first paragraph:  (typo)
--------------------------------------------

Should REQUEST and RESPONSE be in lowercase?

Change "Request- Response" to "request-response"



Section 8.2 Page 54:  (attaboy)
-------------------------------

Thanks for the nice explanation!



Section 9.1 Page 56 second paragraph:  (clarification)
------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   The instructions found in the DESCRIPTION clause of the
   tlstmCertToSNTable object must be followed exactly.  It is also
   important that the rows of the table be searched in prioritized order
   starting with the row containing the lowest numbered tlstmCertToSNID
   value.

Why _must_ the procedure be followed exactly, and why is it important
that the rows of the table be searched in prioritized order?



Section 11 Page 59 second paragraph:  (typo)
--------------------------------------------

Add a second space after the colon after the phrase "(in alphabetical order):"



Section A.1 Page 62 third bulleted item:  (typo/clarification)
--------------------------------------------------------------

The text reads:

   o  Messages are protected against replay.  (D)TLS uses explicit
      sequence numbers and integrity checks.  DTLS uses a sliding window
      to protect against replay of messages within a session.

Are (D)TLS and DTLS used properly here?



Section B Page 63 first paragraph:  (typo)
------------------------------------------

Jettison the extra space between "challenge- response".



Section B Page 64 last two paragraphs:  (clarification)
-------------------------------------------------------

The very last paragraph discusses "decrypted information", but no explan-
ation of where the "encrypted information" originated.  I _believe_ I 
understand this, but persons new to PKIX might not.  The understanding of 
how/where the certificate hashes are encrypted and stored, then decrypted 
and compared, is critical to the understanding of PKIX.



Section C.1 Page 65 first paragraph:  (typo)
--------------------------------------------

Change "Notification Generator's" to "Notification Generators".



Section C.2 Page 66 second to the last paragraph:  (typo)
---------------------------------------------------------

Change "issuing certificate" to "issuing certificate".

Change "1 to 1" to "one-to-one".



Hope this review and comments are useful to the WG.

Regards,
--Alan

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AL> I have reviewed  draft-ietf-isms-dtls-tm-01.txt; my comments are included
AL> below.  My apology for my late review of this document.

Alan,

I greatly appreciate the review and will respond later at length about
your questions and concerned as I process through the list.

AL> My company has not implemented SNMP over (D)TLS, but we are
AL> interested in doing so.  We have customer demand for SNMP over
AL> (D)TLS.

I'm certainly glad to hear that!
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Cobham Analytic Solutions

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> I will shortly publish a -01 of the individual draft, representing the
> state of the document as it was presented to Randy, to create a
> snapshot of the work.  The WG should not be confused that is is
> intended to be the version that gets WG review and comment.  It's
> primarily for short-term archival purposes.

This revision has now been posted as:

http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-nelson-isms-extended-vacm-01.txt

The open issues in this (last) revision of the individual submission
document are as follows:

(1) Is this document an amendment or update to RFC 3514?  Or is it simply a
standalone document that describes how to provision certain MIB Objects
defined in RFC 3514, along with an extended set of augmenting table columns?

(2) Does this document need to make any reference to the Elements of
Procedure in RFC 3514, or does is simply need its own Elements of Procedure
for updating the group mapping table?

(3) Where should the MIB Module defined in this document be rooted?

(4) Dave Harrington had issued a summary email after IETF75 containing
apparently contradictory statements about whether the additional columns
should be in the *same* table that VACM uses or in another, separate table
that augments the VACM table.  Basically, we need some help in actually
structuring the new MIB Module.

(5) The Groups and Conformance sections of the new MIB Module are missing.

(6) Make sure that the new Elements of Procedure make sense and cover all
the corner cases correctly.

(7) Generally make the document look like an "SNMP document".  :-)


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Hi,

I have compiled the minutes of the IETF 76 WG meeting:

http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/09nov/minutes/isms.txt

Please let me know if anything needs fixing. Please check carefully
the resolution of open issues and speak up if you do not agree. Some
issues require concrete text proposals and subsequent review while a
few issues (in particular #9, #12) seem to need further discussion on
the mailing list.

/js

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The minutes match my general memory of the meeting.
 
dbh

> -----Original Message-----
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> Behalf Of Juergen Schoenwaelder
> Sent: Sunday, November 22, 2009 4:46 PM
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> Subject: [Isms] ietf76 meeting minutes
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I have compiled the minutes of the IETF 76 WG meeting:
> 
> http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/09nov/minutes/isms.txt
> 
> Please let me know if anything needs fixing. Please check carefully
> the resolution of open issues and speak up if you do not agree. Some
> issues require concrete text proposals and subsequent review while a
> few issues (in particular #9, #12) seem to need further discussion
on
> the mailing list.
> 
> /js
> 
> -- 
> Juergen Schoenwaelder           Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH
> Phone: +49 421 200 3587         Campus Ring 1, 28759 Bremen, Germany
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>>>>> On Sun, 22 Nov 2009 22:46:25 +0100, Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> said:

JS> Some issues require concrete text proposals and subsequent review
JS> while a few issues (in particular #9, #12) seem to need further
JS> discussion on the mailing list.

I'll be posting responses to all the outstanding last call comments at
the end of next week (12/4), if all goes according to plan.  I'll be
sure to include text changes as well.
-- 
Wes Hardaker
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