From nobody Mon Dec 4 19:19:54 2017 Return-Path: X-Original-To: l3sm@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: l3sm@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 33F66126DD9 for ; Mon, 4 Dec 2017 19:19:53 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.219 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.219 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=-0.01, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=-0.01, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 3PokxOcIglQd for ; Mon, 4 Dec 2017 19:19:47 -0800 (PST) Received: from huawei.com (lhrrgout.huawei.com [194.213.3.17]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7B4C3124207 for ; Mon, 4 Dec 2017 19:19:41 -0800 (PST) Received: from lhreml701-cah.china.huawei.com (unknown [172.18.7.107]) by Forcepoint Email with ESMTP id 0B2925249629C for ; Tue, 5 Dec 2017 03:19:37 +0000 (GMT) Received: from NKGEML412-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.98.56.73) by lhreml701-cah.china.huawei.com (10.201.108.42) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.361.1; Tue, 5 Dec 2017 03:19:37 +0000 Received: from NKGEML513-MBS.china.huawei.com ([169.254.2.231]) by nkgeml412-hub.china.huawei.com ([10.98.56.73]) with mapi id 14.03.0361.001; Tue, 5 Dec 2017 11:19:33 +0800 From: Qin Wu To: l3sm CC: Stephane Litkowski , "adrian@olddog.co.uk" , Benoit Claise Thread-Topic: Proposed changes to draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis Thread-Index: AdNtd952QtTfFTirQ9C/fpMMFnDnpw== Date: Tue, 5 Dec 2017 03:19:32 +0000 Message-ID: Accept-Language: zh-CN, en-US Content-Language: zh-CN X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [10.136.79.67] Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_B8F9A780D330094D99AF023C5877DABA9AD047FDnkgeml513mbschi_" MIME-Version: 1.0 X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected Archived-At: Subject: [L3sm] Proposed changes to draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis X-BeenThere: l3sm@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: L3VPN Service YANG Model discussion group List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 05 Dec 2017 03:19:53 -0000 --_000_B8F9A780D330094D99AF023C5877DABA9AD047FDnkgeml513mbschi_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi, All: Two revisions to address IESG second telechat's comments: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-10 https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-11 The changes include: 1. A few Editorial changes to Section 1, second paragraph and Section= 9. 2. Add two new subsection in section 1.4 to clarify Implementation Is= sues with RFC 8049 And also assess impact. -Qin --_000_B8F9A780D330094D99AF023C5877DABA9AD047FDnkgeml513mbschi_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Hi, All:

Two revisions to address IES= G second telechat’s comments:

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff= ?url2=3Ddraft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-10

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdif= f?url2=3Ddraft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-11

The changes include:=

1= .   &= nbsp;   A few Editorial changes= to Section 1, second paragraph and Section 9.

2= .   &= nbsp;   Add two new subsection = in section 1.4 to clarify Implementation Issues with RFC 8049

= And also assess impact.

 

-Qin

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