Subject: Re: [lmap] draft-ietf-lmap-framework-08: AD review - part 1

From: "Scott Weeks" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 9 Nov 2014 13:28:58 -0800

Hello,

I was asked to send this to the list.

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OLD:

   Finally we introduce several components that are outside the scope of

   initial LMAP work and will be provided through existing protocols or

   applications.

NEW:

   Finally we introduce several components that are outside the scope of

   initial LMAP work (see in figure 1 "out of scope" and will be provided

   through existing protocols or applications.
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very small correction:

"...initial LMAP work (see in figure 1 "out of scope") and will be provided.."

scott

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