Subject: [lmap] WGLC comments for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lmap-information-model/

From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 28 Jul 2016 16:29:32 +0000

A few (mostly) editorial and clarification comments for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lmap-information-model/:

1.       Section 3, pag. 8: 'It should be clear that the top-level behavior of an MA is simply to execute Schedules.' - what does 'top-level behavior' exactly mean?

2.       Section 3.3.2, pag. 16, definition of ma-suppression-match - s/An optional and possibly empty unordered set of match pattern/ An optional and possibly empty unordered set of match patterns/

3.       Section 3.8.1, pag 34, definition of ma-channel-interface-name - 'If not present, the system will select a suitable interface.' - who is 'the system' here?'

4.       Section 3.9, pag. 36: 'A reporting task might also have a flag parameter'- capitalize Reporting Task for consistency

Regards,

Dan