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	Title		: Extensible Markup Language Evidence Record Syntax
	Author(s)	: A. Blazic, S. Saljic, T. Gondrom
	Filename	: draft-ietf-ltans-xmlers-05.txt
	Pages		: 50
	Date		: 2010-5-8
	
In many scenarios, users must be able to demonstrate the (time) 
   existence, integrity and validity of data including signed data for 
   long or undetermined period of time. This document specifies XML 
   syntax and processing rules for creating evidence for long-term non-
   repudiation of existence of data. ERS-XML incorporates alternative 
   syntax and processing rules to ASN.1 ERS syntax by using XML 
   language.

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Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Long-Term Archive and Notary Services Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title		: Extensible Markup Language Evidence Record Syntax
> 	Author(s)	: A. Blazic, S. Saljic, T. Gondrom
> 	Filename	: draft-ietf-ltans-xmlers-05.txt
> 	Pages		: 50
> 	Date		: 2010-5-8
> 	
> In many scenarios, users must be able to demonstrate the (time) 
>    existence, integrity and validity of data including signed data for 
>    long or undetermined period of time. This document specifies XML 
>    syntax and processing rules for creating evidence for long-term non-
>    repudiation of existence of data. ERS-XML incorporates alternative 
>    syntax and processing rules to ASN.1 ERS syntax by using XML 
>    language.
> 
> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ltans-xmlers-05.txt

I have a couple of comments on the format of the document:

#1) The reference section has no normative references but also lists 
about 10 references that aren't categorized as either normative or 
informative.

#2) According to ID-nits, there are a bunch of references listed that 
aren't used:

== Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-ltans-ltap' is defined on line 1470, 
but no explicit reference was found in the text

== Unused Reference: 'RFC5280' is defined on line 1494, but no 
explicit reference was found in the text

== Unused Reference: 'RFC5652' is defined on line 1499, but no 
explicit reference was found in the text

== Unused Reference: 'MIME' is defined on line 1516, but no explicit 
reference was found in the text

== Unused Reference: 'RFC3470' is defined on line 1520, but no 
explicit reference was found in the text

#2) The section numbers is a bit odd.  It goes Section 7, Appendix A, 
Section 8.  I think Appendix A needs to be moved to the back of the 
document.

spt

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Greetings,

After a lengthy hibernation period for the working group, last call for
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Just a reminder, the last call for XMLERS ends next Friday - June 4th.

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