Subject: [Modern] Comments on draft-peterson-modern-teri-03

From: "McGarry, Tom" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 18 Jul 2017 09:42:25 +0000

Jon, there are a few places where you need more text, e.g., 4.2.1.1, 4.2.1.1.1, 4.2.1.6, and 4.2.2.  I'll work with you on that.

Tom McGarry