Subject: draft-ietf-netconf-soap-02.txt

From: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 8 Aug 2004 21:22:31 +0200

While reading this for prep of IETF, I found these nits:

- title expand acronyms
- s/IPSec/IPsec/
- are all normative refs indeed normative?
  I doubt it. For example Radius ??
- missing IANA considerations

So hopefully  they can be addressed when you do next rev
Thanks,
Bert 

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