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Hi Hannes, all

Thanks for your review. We have updated the draft to address your 
comments as follows:

The changes (05-->06) are shown in
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?difftype=--hwdiff&url2=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-kappler-nsis-qosmodel-controlledload-06.txt

Hannes Tschofenig wrote:
> I went through <draft-kappler-nsis-qosmodel-controlledload-05.txt>.
> 
> This document is in good shape.
> 
> Still, I have a few comments:
> 
> * Section 5.: Requirements for QOSM specification is not inline with the 
> text in Section 4.1 of draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-17.txt
Updated.
> 
> * Section 5.2.2.  QSPEC Objects
> 
> There are two TMOD parameters in draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-17.txt. You only 
> talk about TMOD as there would be only one.

Changed notation TMOD into TMOD1

> 
> * <QoS Available> is required for receiver-initiated reservations, and
>   MAY be used in sender-initiated reservations.
> 
> Section 5.3.2 of draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-17.txt does not indicate that QoS 
> Available is optional for receiver-initiated reservations.
> 
New version clarified use of <QoS Available> and <Minimum QoS>

> * Among them, <QoS Desired> and <QoS Reserved> MUST be supported by all
>   QOSM implementations, as defined in [3].
> I thought that all need to be implemented and understood by a QoS aware 
> node.
> 
> * <Minimum QoS> is optional.
> 
> optional to implement or optional to use?
> 
> * I am not sure I understand your text in Section 6.1.
> It seems that you compute the admission control decision as a comparison 
> between TMOD parameters rather than the TMOD parameter received with the 
> RESERVE message against the available resources.
> 
We changed admission control decision to comparison of TMOD parameter in 
received RESERVE message against the available resources.

> * Section 7: Preemption
> 
> Isn't the problem to determine which reservation to terminate rather 
> than the actual act of terminating a reservation.
Clarified.
> 
> * Section 9: "This Internet Draft raises no new security issues."
> I would write. "This document does not raise additional security issues 
> beyond those described in [QoS-NSLP]."
Ok, changed.
> 
> Ciao
> Hannes

Many thanks again for your helpful review.

Additional comments and suggestions from the WG are welcome.
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IETF-70, Vancouver, BC, CA

**Draft Agenda for NSIS WG**


MONDAY, December 3, 2007
1300-1500 Afternoon Session I

WG Chair(s):
John Loughney <john.loughney@nokia.com>
Martin Stiemerling <stiemerling@netlab.nec.de>

Send any change request to nsis-chairs@tools.ietf.org


* Agenda Bashing   (20 minutes)
   NOTE WELL
   Document Status and Accomplishments
   - GIST update
   https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp/
   - QoS NSLP and QSPEC
   https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-qos-nslp/
   https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-qspec/
   Milestones Review

* NAT/FW NSLP - Hannes Tschofenig (5 minutes)
https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw/

* Mobility Applicability Statement - Takako Sanda (10 minutes)
https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-applicability- 
mobility-signaling/

* GIST over SCTP - Xiaoming Fu (10 minutes)
https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-sctp/

* RMD-QOSM - Martin Stiemerling (5 minutes)
https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-rmd/

* NSIS Extensibility Model (5 minutes)
https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-nsis-ext/

* Y.1541 QOSM - Al Morton (5 minutes)
https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm/

* Authorization for NSLP protocols, Jukka Manner (10 minutes)
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-manner-nsis-nslp-auth-03

* DCCP transport for GIST, Jukka Manner (5 minutes)
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-manner-nsis-gist-dccp-00

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Hi Hannes,

Thanks for the comments and sorry for the tardy response as it has been
buried deep in the list messages. Please see responses in line.
On Aug 9, 2007 6:18 AM, Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net> wrote:

> I have read through draft-ietf-nsis-tunnel-02.txt and here are a few
> comments:
>
> * I don't know why you need the "Tunnel Signaling Capability Discovery"
>

This is for the Tunnel entry or exit point to learn whether the tunnel
traversal mechanism defined in the document is supported, in other words,
whether the box complies to this spec.


>
> * The document should not contain RFC 2119 language since the base
> functionality is already in GIST and in the NSLPs.
>

I should clean those out if they are already in GIST and NSLPs, except
probably for things specific to the tunnel traversal mechanism itself.


>
> * In many sections I got the impression that there is no real conclusion
> or suggestion since there cannot be one. The right answer to many of the
> issues is "It depends on the deployment and some policy decisions".
> Hence, I wasn't quite sure how much value a lot of text will be for the
> reader at the end.
>
>
I agree there are many alternatives to many aspects of the problem, some of
which I have moved from the main body to the appendix. There may still be
more possibilities than one expected to be. But I personally think the
problem calls for a solution and that having things listed out is still
better than everyone just applying a propritary approach without
discussion. Ideally things may be further narrowed down and converge on a
smaller set of basic scenarios. I would very much appreciate specific
comments on that.

thanks.

Charles

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<div>Hi Hannes, </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Thanks for the comments and sorry for the tardy response as it has been buried deep in the list messages. Please see responses in line.<br></div>
<div class="gmail_quote">On Aug 9, 2007 6:18 AM, Hannes Tschofenig &lt;<a href="mailto:Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net">Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net</a>&gt; wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="PADDING-LEFT: 1ex; MARGIN: 0px 0px 0px 0.8ex; BORDER-LEFT: #ccc 1px solid">I have read through draft-ietf-nsis-tunnel-02.txt and here are a few<br>comments:<br><br>* I don&#39;t know why you need the &quot;Tunnel Signaling Capability Discovery&quot;
<br></blockquote>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>This is for the Tunnel entry or exit point to&nbsp;learn whether the tunnel traversal mechanism defined in the document is supported, in other words, whether the box complies to this spec. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="PADDING-LEFT: 1ex; MARGIN: 0px 0px 0px 0.8ex; BORDER-LEFT: #ccc 1px solid"><span id=""></span><br>* The document should not contain RFC 2119 language since the base<br>functionality is already in GIST and in the NSLPs.
<br></blockquote>
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<div>I should clean those out if they are already in GIST and NSLPs, except probably for things specific to the tunnel traversal mechanism itself. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="PADDING-LEFT: 1ex; MARGIN: 0px 0px 0px 0.8ex; BORDER-LEFT: #ccc 1px solid"><span id=""></span><br>* In many sections I got the impression that there is no real conclusion<br>or suggestion since there cannot be one. The right answer to many of the
<br>issues is &quot;It depends on the deployment and some policy decisions&quot;.<br>Hence, I wasn&#39;t quite sure how much value a lot of text will be for the<br>reader at the end.<br><br></blockquote>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>I&nbsp;agree there are many alternatives to&nbsp;many aspects of the problem, some&nbsp;of which I have moved from the main body to the appendix. There may still be more possibilities than one expected to be. But I personally think the problem calls for a solution and that having things listed out&nbsp;is still better than everyone just applying&nbsp;a propritary approach without discussion.&nbsp;Ideally&nbsp;things&nbsp;may be further narrowed down and&nbsp;converge on a smaller set of basic scenarios. I would very much appreciate specific comments on that. 
</div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>thanks.</div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Charles</div>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="PADDING-LEFT: 1ex; MARGIN: 0px 0px 0px 0.8ex; BORDER-LEFT: #ccc 1px solid"><span id=""></span><br>Ciao<br>Hannes<br><br><br><br><br><br>_______________________________________________
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Hello,

The Issue:
=======
Three different documents (dime-qos-parameters, nsis-qos-nslp, tsvwg- 
emergency-rsvp) need to convey an overlapping set of QoS parameters  
(specifically RPH-Priority and Admission Priority) and currently do  
that in an inconsistent manner. This has been brought up and  
partially discussed on the WG mailing lists.

The Proposed Resolution
===================
Co-authors of the three I-Ds as well as WG chairs of the  
corresponding WGs converged on the following proposed resolution.  
Please let us know if you have an issue/concern with this.

o Regarding RPH-Priority:
	* tsvwg-emergency-rsvp will go ahead with its requests to IANA to  
provide numerical registry for RPH priority (via extending existing  
RPH registry). See IANA Considerations section of tsvwg-emergency-rsvp.
	* nsis-qspec (in section 6.2.10) will point to this registry instead  
of defining its own values
	* dime-qos-parameters (in section 4.11) will point to this registry  
instead of defining its own values
	* tsvwg-emergency-rsvp (in section 3.2) will keep pointing to this  
registry.

o Regarding Admission Priority:
	* every protocol spec will only indicate that "higher value means  
higher priority".
	* there is no attempt to define what specific values should be used  
for what. this is left outside the scope of the protocol specs.
	* each protocol spec will add a statement clarifying that a given  
Admission Priority is to be encoded with the same value in each of  
the three protocol spec. For example, in tsvwg-emergency-rsvp, under  
section 3.1.  we will add:
"      A given Admission Priority is encoded in this information element
	using the same value as when encoded in the Admission Priority
	parameter defined in section 6.2.9 of [nsis-qspec], or in the Admission
	 Priority parameter defined in section 4.10 of [dime-qos-parameters].
	In other words, a given value in any of the [emergency-rsvp] Admission
	Priority information element, the [nsis-qspec] Admission Priority  
parameter
	or the [dime-qos-parameters] Admission Priority parameter, refers to
	the same Admission Priority.
"
	* the mirror statement will be added in nsis-qspec (section 6.2.9)  
and dime-qos-parameters (section 4.10)

Francois



>>
>> For example in "tsvwg-emergency-rsvp"  under section 3.1., after :
>> "   Adm. Priority (Admission Priority): 8 bits (unsigned)
>>         The admission control priority of the flow, in terms of  
>> access
>>         to network bandwidth in order to provide higher  
>> probability of
>>         call completion to selected flows. Higher values represent
>>         higher Priority.
>> "
>> we could add something like this:
>> "      A given Admission Priority is encoded in this
>> information element
>> 	using the same value as when encoded in the Admission Priority
>> 	parameter defined in section 6.2.9 of [nsis-qspec], or
>> in the Admission
>> 	 Priority parameter defined in section 4.10 of
>> [dime-qos-parameters].
>> 	In other words, a given value in any of the
>> [emergency-rsvp] Admission
>> 	Priority information element, the [nsis-qspec]
>> Admission Priority parameter
>> 	or the [dime-qos-parameters] Admission Priority
>> parameter, refers to
>> 	the same Admission Priority.
>> "
>>
>> Francois
>>
>>
>>> That way, when these protocols are used in combination, you
>> can't get
>>> into priority inversion problems and can resist the
>> temptation to try
>>> to map using a local function.
>>>
>>> DaveO.
>>>
>>>> As a practical example of an issue I see in B, consider the recent
>>>> comment from An Nguyen as part of the WGLC on dime-qos-parameters.
>>>> He explained that ITU-T changed the "recommendation" where they
>>>> define Admission Priority semantic and therefore dime-qos-
>> parameters
>>>> needs to point to that new ITU-T document instead. So what happens
>>>> when ITU change their spec again in 2 years if we go for B.  What
>>>> happens if some other SDO decides to make use of admission
>> priorities
>>>> and define different value sets?
>>>> Approach A completely isolates IETF from any of these
>> external events
>>>> (that should indeed be completely transparent to IETF).
>>>>
>>>> If we can close that one by email, no need to meet face to face in
>>>> Vancouver.
>>>>
>>>> Francois
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> From: "Nguyen, An P" <An.P.Nguyen@dhs.gov>
>>>> Date: 16 October 2007 15:20:35 GMT+02:00
>>>> To: "Hannes Tschofenig" <Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net>,
>> <dime@ietf.org>,
>>>> "radext mailing list" <radiusext@ops.ietf.org>, <nsis@ietf.org>,
>>>> "tsvwg IETF list" <tsvwg@ietf.org>
>>>> Subject: [NSIS] RE: [Tsvwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dime-qos-
>>>> parameters-01
>>>>
>>>> Hannes,
>>>>
>>>> Just a comment on a reference in Sect 4.10 - Admission Priority
>>>> Parameter:
>>>>
>>>> Change the Y.1571 to Y.2171. The ITU SG-13 changed Y.1571 to Y.
>>>> 2171 ( Admission Control Priority Levels in Next Generation
>> Networks,
>>>> Sept 2006) to reflect the NGN work.
>>>>
>>>> I think you should add Y.2171 to Sect 9.2 - Informative
>> References as
>>>> well.
>>>>
>>>> Regards,
>>>>
>>>> An
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 26 Nov 2007, at 20:49, Francois Le Faucheur IMAP wrote:
>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 26 Nov 2007, at 20:23, <john.loughney@nokia.com> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> So, all three documents are about at the same state.  I think it
>>>>>> makess sense if the tsvwg draft creates the registry, and all of
>>>>>> the other drafts reference it.
>>>>>
>>>>> very well.
>>>>>
>>>>> Since we seem to have agreement across TSWG/NSIS/DIME about the
>>>>> first point (ie use a shared registry for RPH priorities)
>> then let's
>>>>> move to the second point ie. the actual format of that
>>>>> registry:
>>>>> draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-rsvp-04.txt proposes to
>> instantiate that
>>>>> registry by extending the existing IANA registry that was created
>>>>> based on RFC4412. See "IANA Considerations" section of
>>>>> draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-rsvp-04.txt.
>>>>> Please let us know if you see issues with this proposal.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks
>>>>>
>>>>> Francois
>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> John
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>> From: ext Hannes Tschofenig [mailto:Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net]
>>>>>>> Sent: 26 November, 2007 11:22
>>>>>>> To: Loughney John (Nokia-NRC/PaloAlto)
>>>>>>> Cc: carlberg@g11.org.uk; magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com;
>>>>>>> flefauch@cisco.com; jmpolk@cisco.com; cornelia.kappler@nsn.com;
>>>>>>> oran@cisco.com; attila.bader@ericsson.com;
>>>>>>> jouni.korhonen@teliasonera.com; jmanner@cs.Helsinki.FI;
>>>>>>> tsvwg-chairs@tools.ietf.org; nsis-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
>>>>>>> dime-chairs@tools.ietf.org
>>>>>>> Subject: Re: QoS Parameters in dime-qos-parameters,
>> nsis-qos-nlsp,
>>>>>>> tsvwg-emeregncy-rsvp
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hi John,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> First off, what is the status of the drafts?  I am
>> going to do a
>>>>>>>> WG Chair write-up on the NSIS QSPEC document.  DiME QoS
>>>>>>> parameters might
>>>>>>>> take a bit longer.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The DIME QoS parameter document has finished WGLC already. The
>>>>>>> only technical issue that has been raised for this document is
>>>>>>> related to the registry.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Ciao
>>>>>>> Hannes
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>


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	Title           : An Explicit Signaling Target Message Routing Method (EST-MRM) for the General Internet Signaling Transport (GIST) Protocol
	Author(s)       : R. Bless
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	Pages           : 11
	Date            : 2007-12-03

The standard operation of the General Internet Signaling Transport
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Hi all,

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Hi all presenters of today's NSIS session,

I have received slides for NATFW NSLP, GIST over SCTP, RMD-QOSM, and  
Y.1541.

Please send me the missing slides before the session, so that I can  
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Hancock, Robert skrev:
> magnus,
> 
> finally following up your comment (1): 
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Magnus Westerlund [mailto:magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com] 
>> Sent: 26 November 2007 16:10
>> To: draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp@tools.ietf.org; NSIS
>> Subject: AD comments on draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-14
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I am sorry for the long time this AD review has taken. I 
>> really liked to read the document from first to last word 
>> before progressing it. I have now done this and thinks the 
>> document is in pretty good shape. I would appreciate an 
>> updated version as soon as we have resolved the questions.
>>
>>
>> 1. Page 29:
>> "   2.  The signalling application does not wish to set up 
>> state with the
>>        Querying node and become its peer.  This includes the 
>> case where
>>        a node wishes to avoid taking part in the signalling 
>> for overload
>>        protection reasons.  GIST MUST propagate the Query, similar to
>>        the case described in Section 4.3.4.  No message is 
>> sent back to
>>        the Querying node.  The application MAY provide an updated NSLP
>>        payload for the same NSLPID, which will be used in the Query
>>        forwarded by GIST.  Note that if the node which 
>> finally processes
>>        the Query returns an Error message, this will be sent directly
>>        back to the originating node, bypassing any forwarders.  For
>>        these diagnostics to be meaningful, any GIST node forwarding a
>>        Query MUST NOT modify it except in the NSLP payload 
>> and GIST hop
>>        count; in particular, it MUST NOT modify any other 
>> GIST payloads
>>        or their order.  An implementation MAY choose to 
>> achieve this by
>>        retaining the original message, rather than reconstructing it
>>        from some parsed internal representation."
>>
>> I can't quite understand "For
>>        these diagnostics to be meaningful, any GIST node forwarding a
>>        Query MUST NOT modify it except in the NSLP payload 
>> and GIST hop
>>        count; in particular, it MUST NOT modify any other 
>> GIST payloads
>>        or their order."
>>
>> Why does a forwarding node may modify the NSLP payload? Can 
>> you please explain this? GIST hop is clearly
> 
> The question ends in "mid-air", but I can comment on the NSLP payload
> aspects. Basically, when a Query message is forwarded along a path,
> NSLPs are allowed to inspect and modify the payload. The end result
> is that there is a single GIST peering relationship, but where the 
> NSLP nodes at each end have gathered some additional data about the
> signalling application state at nodes between the peers.
> 
> Note that GIST doesn't make any reliability or integrity promises 
> about the transmission of this payload - it's just NSLP data being 
> piggybacked on the handshake, so there are no constraints (imposed 
> by GIST) on what can be done to it. However, GIST itself doesn't 
> allow changes in the GIST payloads at these intermediate points, 
> because then error reporting wouldn't work.
> 
> The canonical example is RMD operating edge-to-edge across a
> domain. The ingress sends a GIST query to the egress and these
> then peer with each other (statefully, creating a messaging
> association, including storing reverse path state and so on). 
> As the peering is set up (and when routing state is refreshed)
> the Query also gathers RMD state information from the interior
> nodes, which however don't store any RMD or GIST per-flow state.
> 

Hi,

I think I realize what the issue is with the text. It is the usage of
the word "forwarding". To me it imply that you wouldn't change the
payload. Either you are NSLP aware and then you would process a request,
or you are not aware and you simple forward it. But it might be the
issue what is considered to be the NSLP payload. Because I do understand
that a forwarding node will need to explicit mark that it has done this.
But that doesn't seem to be a NSLP function, rather a GIST level object.

Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

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Hi,

I have reviewed that draft. I don't have any major objections to the 
document, just some miscellaneous comments and clarification requests.

Here goes:

- p.6, bullet 1: at this point in the document, it is not clear to the 
  reader what the NSIS initiator/receiver are. Propose to use simpler 
  terminology at this early phase in the intro.

- p.6, end of page: propose to clearly say wo sends which message, e.g.:

"CREATE message: send by the data sender for..."

"EXTERNAL message: used by data receiver to ..."

Related comment: why abbreviate EXTERNAL to "EXT"? 
	* None of the other message are abbreviated
	* EXTERNAL is as long a word as "RESPONSE" (both abbreviated?)

Suggest to drop the EXT-term

Related to the above the document presents over and over again that 
EXTERNAL is EXT ("EXTERNAL (EXT)") and is a bit inconsistent in when to 
use EXTERNAL and when just EXT (both used here and there).

- p.7.: s/body of the document, covers/body of the document cover/

- p.23: s/inSection/in Section/

- p.27: "if the node runs _it_ garbage collection cycle."? 

- p.27: "appropriate error of class 'Protocol error' (0x1)": 0x1 is 
  Informational, ox3 is protocol error.

- p.32: "is thus managed NSLP hop-by-hop"?

- p.41: "session created by REA."?

- p.41: "using CREATE Section 3.7.1" > "(see Section 3.7.1)"?

- p.43: "if the like to aggregate"?

- p.46, whole Section 3.7.6.1: should NR be actually DR? Including Figure 
  18?

- P.46-47, Section 3.7.6.1: I don't really get this operation at all. 
  Sounds a bit complex to have the EXT-session trigger a CREATE-session. 
  Maybe some more discussion/description is needed to open up the 
  scenario. Also, the NATFW_NONCE sounds a bit wierd, somehow. In the QoS 
  NSLP, we have the same functionality, but it is called "session binding" 
  and uses a similar object where the content is the SID of the primary 
  flow. Achieves the same thing, and you can be sure there are no 
  collisions with nonces. Does the value need to be a random value? Or 
  could you perhaps re-use the QoS NSLP object since we have common object 
  repository anyway? The concept in the QoS NSLP session binding is that 
  the secondary session is valid as long as the primary session is.

- Related to the above, p.48 (middle): if you have the "internal" 
  CREATE+NONCE session and also get the e2e CREATE session, do you run 
  both simultaneously? Or do you kill one of them? I guess you can't kill 
  the EXT-session, since you need the forwarding at the NAT? Perhaps this 
  needs some more description.

- p.49: "back to NI according [to] the situation"

- p.49: "NSLP node and the of the policy rule."?

- p.51: Do the route changes really work as you describe? This may need 
  some thinking, and probably add text to the mobility draft.

- p.51: s/and sends it/and send it/

- Whole Section 4: the text talks about error cases and mandating "MUST" 
  to send various error messages? If you must always send error messages, 
  isn't this a use case for DoS attacks? I guess some words about when to 
  send error messages would be needed (rate limiting, etc.).

- p.57 (top of page): "Further version of this memo may allow other values 
  for the 'sub_ports' field." I think suggestions like this should not be 
  in a draft going to WGLC.

- p.58-60: there are a lot of error codes. Should somewhere be written how 
  and when these are used? Some of these are quite clear, but e.g.  I 
  don't understand Permanent failures 0x03, 0x05 and 0x06. Where would 
  these be used?

- p.61, Section 4.2.7: where is this object used actually? text says 
  "possibly needed", sounds a bit wierd for a draft in WGLC. Is it needed, 
  and where/when/why? Should this be also available for IPv6?

- p.62, 3rd line: "according [to] these rules:"

- p.64, Sections 4.3.1 and 4.3.2: what are these "(O)" and "(M)"? Optional 
  and mandatory? Say it clearly.

- p.64, Section 4.3.2: point c) as use case for EXT: you lost me here? Was 
  this presented earlier? Actually, in general about EXT, should it always 
  have the proxy bit P=1? What happens if I send an EXT message towards 
  the DS with P=0? Does the EXT reach the DS? What happens then?

- p.67: "In Section 5.1 we describe [how] the ..."

- p.73: s/located to the/located at the/



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I will also review the NAT/FW NSLP draft asap.

Regards,
Niklas

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Hi Jukka,

Thanks a lot for your review! I will go through the comments today  
and come back if I need more information.

Thanks,

   Martin

Am 04.12.2007 um 23:06 schrieb Jukka MJ Manner:

>
> Hi,
>
> I have reviewed that draft. I don't have any major objections to the
> document, just some miscellaneous comments and clarification requests.
>
> Here goes:
>
> - p.6, bullet 1: at this point in the document, it is not clear to the
>   reader what the NSIS initiator/receiver are. Propose to use simpler
>   terminology at this early phase in the intro.
>
> - p.6, end of page: propose to clearly say wo sends which message,  
> e.g.:
>
> "CREATE message: send by the data sender for..."
>
> "EXTERNAL message: used by data receiver to ..."
>
> Related comment: why abbreviate EXTERNAL to "EXT"?
> 	* None of the other message are abbreviated
> 	* EXTERNAL is as long a word as "RESPONSE" (both abbreviated?)
>
> Suggest to drop the EXT-term
>
> Related to the above the document presents over and over again that
> EXTERNAL is EXT ("EXTERNAL (EXT)") and is a bit inconsistent in  
> when to
> use EXTERNAL and when just EXT (both used here and there).
>
> - p.7.: s/body of the document, covers/body of the document cover/
>
> - p.23: s/inSection/in Section/
>
> - p.27: "if the node runs _it_ garbage collection cycle."?
>
> - p.27: "appropriate error of class 'Protocol error' (0x1)": 0x1 is
>   Informational, ox3 is protocol error.
>
> - p.32: "is thus managed NSLP hop-by-hop"?
>
> - p.41: "session created by REA."?
>
> - p.41: "using CREATE Section 3.7.1" > "(see Section 3.7.1)"?
>
> - p.43: "if the like to aggregate"?
>
> - p.46, whole Section 3.7.6.1: should NR be actually DR? Including  
> Figure
>   18?
>
> - P.46-47, Section 3.7.6.1: I don't really get this operation at all.
>   Sounds a bit complex to have the EXT-session trigger a CREATE- 
> session.
>   Maybe some more discussion/description is needed to open up the
>   scenario. Also, the NATFW_NONCE sounds a bit wierd, somehow. In  
> the QoS
>   NSLP, we have the same functionality, but it is called "session  
> binding"
>   and uses a similar object where the content is the SID of the  
> primary
>   flow. Achieves the same thing, and you can be sure there are no
>   collisions with nonces. Does the value need to be a random value? Or
>   could you perhaps re-use the QoS NSLP object since we have common  
> object
>   repository anyway? The concept in the QoS NSLP session binding is  
> that
>   the secondary session is valid as long as the primary session is.
>
> - Related to the above, p.48 (middle): if you have the "internal"
>   CREATE+NONCE session and also get the e2e CREATE session, do you run
>   both simultaneously? Or do you kill one of them? I guess you  
> can't kill
>   the EXT-session, since you need the forwarding at the NAT?  
> Perhaps this
>   needs some more description.
>
> - p.49: "back to NI according [to] the situation"
>
> - p.49: "NSLP node and the of the policy rule."?
>
> - p.51: Do the route changes really work as you describe? This may  
> need
>   some thinking, and probably add text to the mobility draft.
>
> - p.51: s/and sends it/and send it/
>
> - Whole Section 4: the text talks about error cases and mandating  
> "MUST"
>   to send various error messages? If you must always send error  
> messages,
>   isn't this a use case for DoS attacks? I guess some words about  
> when to
>   send error messages would be needed (rate limiting, etc.).
>
> - p.57 (top of page): "Further version of this memo may allow other  
> values
>   for the 'sub_ports' field." I think suggestions like this should  
> not be
>   in a draft going to WGLC.
>
> - p.58-60: there are a lot of error codes. Should somewhere be  
> written how
>   and when these are used? Some of these are quite clear, but e.g.  I
>   don't understand Permanent failures 0x03, 0x05 and 0x06. Where would
>   these be used?
>
> - p.61, Section 4.2.7: where is this object used actually? text says
>   "possibly needed", sounds a bit wierd for a draft in WGLC. Is it  
> needed,
>   and where/when/why? Should this be also available for IPv6?
>
> - p.62, 3rd line: "according [to] these rules:"
>
> - p.64, Sections 4.3.1 and 4.3.2: what are these "(O)" and "(M)"?  
> Optional
>   and mandatory? Say it clearly.
>
> - p.64, Section 4.3.2: point c) as use case for EXT: you lost me  
> here? Was
>   this presented earlier? Actually, in general about EXT, should it  
> always
>   have the proxy bit P=1? What happens if I send an EXT message  
> towards
>   the DS with P=0? Does the EXT reach the DS? What happens then?
>
> - p.67: "In Section 5.1 we describe [how] the ..."
>
> - p.73: s/located to the/located at the/
>
>
>
> Jukka

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Hi Jukka,<div><br class=3D"webkit-block-placeholder"></div><div>Thanks a =
lot for your review! I will go through the comments today and come back =
if I need more information.</div><div><br =
class=3D"webkit-block-placeholder"></div><div>Thanks,</div><div><br =
class=3D"webkit-block-placeholder"></div><div>=A0=A0Martin</div><div><br><=
div><div>Am 04.12.2007 um 23:06 schrieb Jukka MJ Manner:</div><br =
class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type=3D"cite"><div =
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">Hi,</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">I have reviewed that draft. I don't have any major =
objections to the<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><di=
v style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">document, just some miscellaneous comments and =
clarification requests.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: =
14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">Here goes:</div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.6, =
bullet 1: at this point in the document, it is not clear to the<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>reader what the NSIS =
initiator/receiver are. Propose to use simpler<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>terminology at this early =
phase in the intro.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: =
0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; =
"><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.6, end of page: propose to =
clearly say wo sends which message, e.g.:</div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; =
min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">"CREATE =
message: send by the data sender for..."</div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; =
min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">"EXTERNAL =
message: used by data receiver to ..."</div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; =
min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">Related =
comment: why abbreviate EXTERNAL to "EXT"?<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre">	</span>* None of =
the other message are abbreviated</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre">	</span>* =
EXTERNAL is as long a word as "RESPONSE" (both abbreviated?)</div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">Suggest =
to drop the EXT-term</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: =
0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; =
"><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">Related to the above the =
document presents over and over again that<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">EXTERNAL =
is EXT ("EXTERNAL (EXT)") and is a bit inconsistent in when to<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">use =
EXTERNAL and when just EXT (both used here and there).</div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.7.: =
s/body of the document, covers/body of the document cover/</div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.23: =
s/inSection/in Section/</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: =
14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.27: "if the node runs _it_ =
garbage collection cycle."?<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; =
min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.27: =
"appropriate error of class 'Protocol error' (0x1)": 0x1 is<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>Informational, ox3 is =
protocol error.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">- p.32: "is thus managed NSLP hop-by-hop"?</div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.41: =
"session created by REA."?</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: =
14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.41: "using CREATE Section =
3.7.1" &gt; "(see Section 3.7.1)"?</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: =
14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.43: "if the like to =
aggregate"?</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">- p.46, whole Section 3.7.6.1: should NR be actually =
DR? Including Figure<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>18?</div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- =
P.46-47, Section 3.7.6.1: I don't really get this operation at all.<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>Sounds a bit complex to have =
the EXT-session trigger a CREATE-session.<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>Maybe some more =
discussion/description is needed to open up the<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>scenario. Also, the =
NATFW_NONCE sounds a bit wierd, somehow. In the QoS<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>NSLP, we have the same =
functionality, but it is called "session binding"<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>and uses a similar object =
where the content is the SID of the primary<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>flow. Achieves the same =
thing, and you can be sure there are no<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>collisions with nonces. Does =
the value need to be a random value? Or<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>could you perhaps re-use the =
QoS NSLP object since we have common object<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>repository anyway? The =
concept in the QoS NSLP session binding is that<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>the secondary session is =
valid as long as the primary session is.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; =
min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- Related to =
the above, p.48 (middle): if you have the "internal"<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>CREATE+NONCE session and also =
get the e2e CREATE session, do you run<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>both simultaneously? Or do =
you kill one of them? I guess you can't kill<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>the EXT-session, since you =
need the forwarding at the NAT? Perhaps this<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>needs some more =
description.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">- p.49: "back to NI according [to] the =
situation"</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">- p.49: "NSLP node and the of the policy =
rule."?</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">- p.51: Do the route changes really work as you =
describe? This may need<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>some thinking, and probably =
add text to the mobility draft.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: =
14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.51: s/and sends it/and send =
it/</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">- Whole Section 4: the text talks about error cases =
and mandating "MUST"<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>to send various error =
messages? If you must always send error messages,<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>isn't this a use case for DoS =
attacks? I guess some words about when to<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>send error messages would be =
needed (rate limiting, etc.).</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: =
14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.57 (top of page): "Further =
version of this memo may allow other values<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>for the 'sub_ports' field." I =
think suggestions like this should not be<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>in a draft going to =
WGLC.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; "><br></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; ">- p.58-60: there are a lot of error codes. Should =
somewhere be written how<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>and when these are used? Some =
of these are quite clear, but e.g.<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0=
 </span>I<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; "><span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 =
</span>don't understand Permanent failures 0x03, 0x05 and 0x06. Where =
would<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div =
style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; =
margin-left: 0px; "><span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 =
</span>these be used?</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: =
0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; =
"><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.61, Section 4.2.7: where is =
this object used actually? text says<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>"possibly needed", sounds a =
bit wierd for a draft in WGLC. Is it needed,<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>and where/when/why? Should =
this be also available for IPv6?</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; =
margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: =
14px; "><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.62, 3rd line: "according =
[to] these rules:"</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: =
0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; min-height: 14px; =
"><br></div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; ">- p.64, Sections 4.3.1 and =
4.3.2: what are these "(O)" and "(M)"? Optional<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0</span></div><div style=3D"margin-top: =
0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">=A0 </span>and mandatory? Say it =
clearly.</div><div style=3D"margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; =
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Hi Roland,

I'm finally trying to figure this thread. :)

See one comment below.

Jukka

On Thu, 15 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:

> Hi Jukka,
> 
> [I'm taking this to the list now...]
> 
> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> > I think we are talking about the same thing. The main point is that if IP 
> > addresses change, the MRI is invalidated, and the QNI must then, in one 
> > way or another be notified. There must be (otherwise nothing works) some 
> > mobility signaling where the QNI gets to know the new IP of the MN, and 
> > can then reissue a RESERVE with a new MRI.
> 
> Ok, however, I believe that your proposed solution doesn't work:
> you proposed to send a NOTIFY towards the CN. This will require usage
> of the new flow's MRI and the resulting GIST Query must be sent in
> _upstream_ direction, i.e., PC-MRI(CN->MN-newCoA, D-Flag=1) - upstream.
> Now there is the problem of choosing the correct encapsulation for the
> Query: only _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation would be an option, but this
> is not appropriate to use in this case due to its limited applicability
> to certain environments. Even if the MN could send the NOTIFY to its
> new access router (QNE4 below), there is no routing state installed yet
> in upstream direction in QNE4, i.e., it doesn't know any next peer
> in upstream direction, so only upstream Q-mode could be used, but that
> is not really applicable in this case. So only the last paragraph of
> section 4.3.3 applies:
>    o  If no routing state exists, GIST can attempt to use Q-mode as in
>       the Query case: either sending a Data message with the Q-mode
>       encapsulation, or using the event as a trigger for routing state
>       setup (see Section 4.4).  If this is not possible, e.g. because
>       the encapsulation for the MRM is only defined for one message
>       direction, then this is an error condition which is reported back
>       to the local signalling application.
> 
> So an error will be reported back to the application.
> As a conclusion: sending a NOTIFY in upstream direction does not
> work along paths that have no routing state yet.


[JM]: If the CN requests reliable or secure transport, GIST will send an 
empty Query to the next, set up routing state, and only then send the 
NOTIFY. This will hit QNE4. Now QNE4 does not know about the SID in 
question, so should it send an error back, or forward the message in the 
same way towards the CN? 


[JM]: Yet, also with unreliable/unsecure transport, what would happen, if 
QNE4 would actually decide not to peer? It sees a NOTIFY for a SID it 
doesn't know about, so it could as well forward the message further, 
right? The message will eventually hit a QNE (or eventually the CN), who 
then knows about the SID.

> 
> > The asymmetric paths is a real problem, especially if the MN switches e.g. 
> > interface technologies, goes from WLAN to WiMAX, and changes operators at 
> > the same time. In that case the QUERY will hit some node, the QNI at the 
> > latest, which can then send the RESERVE towards the new location of the 
> > MN.
> 
> We will come back later with more detailed comments about the mobility
> scenarios.
> 
> Regards,
>  Roland & Martin (Roehricht)
> 
> > 
> > Jukka
> > 
> > On Fri, 9 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
> > 
> >> Hi Jukka,
> >>
> >> see comments below.
> >>
> >> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> >>>> <snip>
> >>>>> [MN]   [QNE1] --- [QNE2] ---\
> >>>>>  |                           \
> >>>>>  |                           [QNE3] --- [QNE6] --- [QNE7] ---
> >>>>>  |                           /
> >>>>>  V                          /
> >>>>> [MN]   [QNE4] --- [QNE5]---/
> >>>>>
> >>>> <snip>
> >>>>> - MN moves, gets a hint from GIST that routing has changed
> >>>>> - MN sends a NOTIFY towards QNI saying "Route Change" 0x02
> >>>>> - QNE4 will receive it, and forward it, same with QNE5
> >>>>> - The NOTIFY will hit QNE3, which notes that the message for a known 
> >>>>>  session comes from a new SII-Handle.
> >>>>> - QNE3 should then send a full RESERVE with a new RSN and an RII to 
> >>>>>  QNE5
> >>>>> - QNE4 will receive the RESERVE, make the reservation, and forward it
> >>>>> to the MN
> >>>>> - The MN gets the RESERVE and replies with a RESPONSE
> >>>> - In order to send NSIS message hop by hop for upstream direction (MN->
> >>>> QNE4->...->QNE7... in the figure below), GIST state need to be
> >>>> established in advance, and this GIST state is established for
> >>>> downstream direction (e.g., QNE3 aware of route change and perform route
> >>>> change process towards MN in the new location). But if this is possible,
> >>>> I guess "make it faster" operation (operation above) does not make sense,
> >>>> because QNE3 (CRN) will able to do new reservation and teardown without
> >>>> receiving NOTIFY from MN.
> >>>> - How MRI update can be done in this case?
> >>>
> >>> In order for the MN to send the NOTIFY, each GIST hop will need to set up 
> >>> state upstream. This state establishment will result in a QUERY hitting 
> >>> QNE3, which will decide to peer. The SID is known, thus, the QNE3 will 
> >>> consider this a re-routing event, and perform the signaling as above. This 
> >>> should work? QNE3 will not know about the re-routing until QNE1 figures 
> >>> out the MN has disappeared, and QNE1 starts tearing down the reservation.
> >> Sorry, but I don't get the point here and I doubt that its working
> >> correctly. what is the exact scenario?
> >>
> >> - MN is QNR and data receiver?
> >> - Reservation is sender-initiated?
> >> - MN uses Mobile IP?
> >>
> >> I see the different cases now:
> >> a) MN gets a new IP address and default route
> >> b) MN performs mobility management signaling (Bindung Update)
> >>
> >> Is it that GIST will already detect a route change by a)
> >> or will the route be changed by b)?
> >>
> >> With the current proposal I have the following issues:
> >> * In case of a) it may be the case that QNE3 is not even hit by a Query
> >>   sent upstream due to asymmetric paths.
> >> * The MRI must get updated along the whole path, especially for
> >>   profile update in the first hop router at the QNI.
> >> * QNE3 tries to automatically reserve resources as they were before the
> >>   handover. This is especially inappropriate in case of vertical
> >>   handovers when the QSPEC should be changed. Therefore it would be good
> >>   that the QNI is involved in re-issuing a RESERVE.
> 


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Hi Roland, Hong, Takako,

What you are discussing is the case of MIP, and sure, here the binding 
update helps as the upstream trigger. But if we do not employ MIP? What 
about mobility within a local domain without MIP. In such a case, the MN 
IP will not change, but we need the upstream trigger to set up the 
signaling path efficiently. In that case, the upstream NOTIFY is our only 
help, I'd say.

(In this scenario, the IP address could actually change, too, and we use 
e.g. SIP to re-bind the session and data streams. This comes back to the 
MIP case, though - some e2e signaling exists to provide a new IP address 
of the MN, and this would be coupled somehow with the NSIS protos.)

rgs,
Jukka

On Fri, 16 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:

> Hi Hong, Takako and all,
> 
> we were writing up another e-mail, but I guess your analysis is
> mostly correct. I'll try to summarize our (Martin and I) comments
> as follows:
> 
> We (Martin an I) have some major comments about the draft and are
> willing to contribute to it.
> First, we find that we basically should distinguish four cases:
> 1.) MN is sender, sender-initiated reservation
> 2.) MN is sender, receiver-initiated reservation
> 3.) MN is receiver, sender-initiated reservation
> 4.) MN is receiver, receiver-initiated reservation
> 
> It seems that only case 1.) is currently discussed in section 4
> and we think it would be good to systematically discuss
> the other cases, too.
> 
> In case that MobileIPv6 is used it boils down to
> the following cases as Hong described already. We assume
> that the MN changes its address and the we distinguish
> two flows:
> cases 1.)+2.) (MN-Sender)   f_o: old-CoA -> CN, f_n: new-CoA -> CN
> cases 3.)+4.) (MN-Receiver) f_o: CN -> old-CoA, f_n: CN -> new-CoA
> 
> Case
> 1.)
> - MN changes its IP address, obtains new-CoA
> - QoS NSLP must become aware of the handover, so that the
> - MN simply initiates a new RESERVE for the new flow f_n
> 
> 2.)
> - MN changes its IP address, obtains new-CoA
> - QoS NSLP must become aware of the handover, so that the
> - MN initiates a new QUERY(RESERVE-INIT) for the new flow f_n
> 
> 3.)
> - MN changes its IP address, obtains new-CoA
> - MN performs mobility management signaling, i.e. binding update
>   to the CN.
> - CN becomes aware of the handover (this is the important part)
>   so that the NSLP can initiate a new RESERVE.
> 4.)
> - MN changes its IP address, obtains new-CoA
> - MN performs mobility management signaling, i.e. binding update
>   to the CN.
> - CN gets aware of the handover, NSLP sends a new
>   QUERY
> 
> The important part for all four cases is that
> the QoS NSLP becomes aware of the handover. There
> are several possibilities for the trigger, but I
> think we should use a new GIST API primitive for
> the notification (but probably as mobility extension
> of GIST not within the current proposed draft).
> You wrote that GIST will trigger the NSLP,
> but I don't think that there is currently such
> a possibility:
> new binding update actually changes an existing flow
> f_o into the new f_n. So the only existing primitive
> would be to indicate
> NetworkNotification(QoS-NSLP, MRI(f_o), Routing-Status-Change=Bad)
> for the old flow. But we need to get the new MRI
> in order to send the NSLP message. One problem is that
> GIST doesn't have any state for the new flow f_n.
> So I would propose to have a new NetworkNotificationType,
> like MRI change:
> NetworkNotification(QoS-NSLP, MRI(f_o), MRI(f_n))
> The problem is, however, that an updated IP address
> (due to mobility management) may affect several GIST
> flows.
> 
> An alternative would be a trigger caused by the
> application itself, e.g., due to application level
> signaling. It would be similar to the fact that
> we need such a trigger anyway for receiver-initiated
> reservations in order to let the sender issue an initial
> Query. I guess we need to support both possibilities
> for cross layer info.
> 
> Concerning your mentioned option of directly sending
> a NOTIFY to the other end: that's also an alternative
> that I discussed with Martin. Our proposed EST-MRM
> would probably enable a node to do so, i.e., a NOTIFY
> indicating a handover event could be sent directly
> to the other end.
> 
> Now for some further comments to the draft:
> 
> Further comments on section 4.2:
> I propose to change the name of "State Update"
> at least to "Localized State Update", because
> my intuitive understanding of State Update is
> that is denotes the process to update the flow's state
> along the whole path.
> 
> With respect to section 4.2.1 we want to remark that
> usually the main difference between mobility/handover
> scenarios and re-routing as describe in appendix A is:
> in the basic mobility scenario the MRI changes: the
> MN gets a new care-of-address and thus we have a new flow
> (we denote this as f_n). In contrast to this, a re-routing
> by route changes will usually not lead to a change of
> the MRI. So normally only the CRN can determine at
> NSLP level that a handover happened by detecting two
> different MRIs (f_o=old flow and f_n=new flow) belonging
> to the same SID. GIST does not really care about the SID,
> so this relation must be handled at the NSLP
> level.
> 
> Furthermore, I would propose to rephrase the last
> paragraph of section 4.2.3 as QoS NSLP does not allow
> to sent RESERVEs towards the QNI. Thus, there is no
> option to do it differently.
> 
> Best regards,
>  Roland and Martin
> 
> Hong Cheng wrote:
> > Hi Roland and Jukka,
> > 
> > This seems like some interesting discussion that should be used to
> > update the MIP operation part in the draft.
> > 
> > Based on the description, I don't think a NOTIFY from MN is necessary
> > when the other end (CN or HA) is a QNE.
> > 
> > When MN is the Data Sender, it should work this way:
> > - MN changes its IP addr, e.g. obtain a new-CoA;
> > - MN sends a QUERY(RESERVE-INIT)towards the CN/HA with the new MRI (if
> > it's QNR); or
> > - MN sends a RESERVE towards the CN with the new MRI (if it's QNI)
> > 
> > When MN is the Data Receiver, and the CN/HA is a QNE, it should work
> > this way:
> > - MN changes its IP addr, e.g. obtain a new-CoA;
> > - MN does Mobility Management signaling to inform CN/HA of new-CoA
> > (otherwise data path would not change, remember CN/HA is the data sender);
> > - CN/HA is triggered by GIST to send QUERY towards MN using new MRI;
> > - MN sends RESPONSE (if it's QNR) or RESERVE (if it's QNI); and
> > - CN/HA sends RESERVE if it is QNI.
> > In the above step 3, CN/HA sends QUERY instead of RESERVE directly(if
> > CN/HA is QNI) because the path condition may change as MN changes
> > location (as indicated in your earlier email, WiFi and WiMAX may
> > provides different throughput). However, if time is a concern, CN/HA can
> > always use back the old QSPEC for a direct RESERVE first.
> > 
> > The situation will become a bit more interesting when the CN/HA is not
> > QNE. In this case, how the MN does the update worth some discussion.
> > 
> > If MN is the Data Sender, same operation as above should be able to work.
> > 
> > If MN is the Data Receiver, there are problems in signaling as indicated
> > in Roland's email, especially when we assume the routing is asymmetric.
> > There are two possible ways:
> > - If MN knows the QNI/QNR addr, it can send a NOTIFY/QUERY directly to
> > it. However, in the current QoS NSLP spec, there is no way for the MN to
> > know that info. Should we fix this, e.g. as a special mobility/proxy
> > INFO-Element?
> > - Get some help from the CN/HA (the data sender). Possibly to
> > encapsulate the NOTIFY to CN/HA, and get them to send it via Data Path.
> > This is like sending a special PING to the CN/HA.
> > 
> > What do you think?
> > 
> > 
> > Roland Bless wrote:
> >> Hi Jukka,
> >>
> >> [I'm taking this to the list now...]
> >>
> >> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> >>> I think we are talking about the same thing. The main point is that if IP 
> >>> addresses change, the MRI is invalidated, and the QNI must then, in one 
> >>> way or another be notified. There must be (otherwise nothing works) some 
> >>> mobility signaling where the QNI gets to know the new IP of the MN, and 
> >>> can then reissue a RESERVE with a new MRI.
> >> Ok, however, I believe that your proposed solution doesn't work:
> >> you proposed to send a NOTIFY towards the CN. This will require usage
> >> of the new flow's MRI and the resulting GIST Query must be sent in
> >> _upstream_ direction, i.e., PC-MRI(CN->MN-newCoA, D-Flag=1) - upstream.
> >> Now there is the problem of choosing the correct encapsulation for the
> >> Query: only _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation would be an option, but this
> >> is not appropriate to use in this case due to its limited applicability
> >> to certain environments. Even if the MN could send the NOTIFY to its
> >> new access router (QNE4 below), there is no routing state installed yet
> >> in upstream direction in QNE4, i.e., it doesn't know any next peer
> >> in upstream direction, so only upstream Q-mode could be used, but that
> >> is not really applicable in this case. So only the last paragraph of
> >> section 4.3.3 applies:
> >>    o  If no routing state exists, GIST can attempt to use Q-mode as in
> >>       the Query case: either sending a Data message with the Q-mode
> >>       encapsulation, or using the event as a trigger for routing state
> >>       setup (see Section 4.4).  If this is not possible, e.g. because
> >>       the encapsulation for the MRM is only defined for one message
> >>       direction, then this is an error condition which is reported back
> >>       to the local signalling application.
> >>
> >> So an error will be reported back to the application.
> >> As a conclusion: sending a NOTIFY in upstream direction does not
> >> work along paths that have no routing state yet.
> >>
> >>> The asymmetric paths is a real problem, especially if the MN switches e.g. 
> >>> interface technologies, goes from WLAN to WiMAX, and changes operators at 
> >>> the same time. In that case the QUERY will hit some node, the QNI at the 
> >>> latest, which can then send the RESERVE towards the new location of the 
> >>> MN.
> >> We will come back later with more detailed comments about the mobility
> >> scenarios.
> >>
> >> Regards,
> >>  Roland & Martin (Roehricht)
> >>
> >>> Jukka
> >>>
> >>> On Fri, 9 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
> >>>
> >>>> Hi Jukka,
> >>>>
> >>>> see comments below.
> >>>>
> >>>> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> >>>>>> <snip>
> >>>>>>> [MN]   [QNE1] --- [QNE2] ---\
> >>>>>>>  |                           \
> >>>>>>>  |                           [QNE3] --- [QNE6] --- [QNE7] ---
> >>>>>>>  |                           /
> >>>>>>>  V                          /
> >>>>>>> [MN]   [QNE4] --- [QNE5]---/
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>> <snip>
> >>>>>>> - MN moves, gets a hint from GIST that routing has changed
> >>>>>>> - MN sends a NOTIFY towards QNI saying "Route Change" 0x02
> >>>>>>> - QNE4 will receive it, and forward it, same with QNE5
> >>>>>>> - The NOTIFY will hit QNE3, which notes that the message for a known 
> >>>>>>>  session comes from a new SII-Handle.
> >>>>>>> - QNE3 should then send a full RESERVE with a new RSN and an RII to 
> >>>>>>>  QNE5
> >>>>>>> - QNE4 will receive the RESERVE, make the reservation, and forward it
> >>>>>>> to the MN
> >>>>>>> - The MN gets the RESERVE and replies with a RESPONSE
> >>>>>> - In order to send NSIS message hop by hop for upstream direction (MN->
> >>>>>> QNE4->...->QNE7... in the figure below), GIST state need to be
> >>>>>> established in advance, and this GIST state is established for
> >>>>>> downstream direction (e.g., QNE3 aware of route change and perform route
> >>>>>> change process towards MN in the new location). But if this is possible,
> >>>>>> I guess "make it faster" operation (operation above) does not make sense,
> >>>>>> because QNE3 (CRN) will able to do new reservation and teardown without
> >>>>>> receiving NOTIFY from MN.
> >>>>>> - How MRI update can be done in this case?
> >>>>> In order for the MN to send the NOTIFY, each GIST hop will need to set up 
> >>>>> state upstream. This state establishment will result in a QUERY hitting 
> >>>>> QNE3, which will decide to peer. The SID is known, thus, the QNE3 will 
> >>>>> consider this a re-routing event, and perform the signaling as above. This 
> >>>>> should work? QNE3 will not know about the re-routing until QNE1 figures 
> >>>>> out the MN has disappeared, and QNE1 starts tearing down the reservation.
> >>>> Sorry, but I don't get the point here and I doubt that its working
> >>>> correctly. what is the exact scenario?
> >>>>
> >>>> - MN is QNR and data receiver?
> >>>> - Reservation is sender-initiated?
> >>>> - MN uses Mobile IP?
> >>>>
> >>>> I see the different cases now:
> >>>> a) MN gets a new IP address and default route
> >>>> b) MN performs mobility management signaling (Bindung Update)
> >>>>
> >>>> Is it that GIST will already detect a route change by a)
> >>>> or will the route be changed by b)?
> >>>>
> >>>> With the current proposal I have the following issues:
> >>>> * In case of a) it may be the case that QNE3 is not even hit by a Query
> >>>>   sent upstream due to asymmetric paths.
> >>>> * The MRI must get updated along the whole path, especially for
> >>>>   profile update in the first hop router at the QNI.
> >>>> * QNE3 tries to automatically reserve resources as they were before the
> >>>>   handover. This is especially inappropriate in case of vertical
> >>>>   handovers when the QSPEC should be changed. Therefore it would be good
> >>>>   that the QNI is involved in re-issuing a RESERVE.
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Hi Jukka,

see comment inline.

Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> On Thu, 15 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
> 
>> Hi Jukka,
>>
>> [I'm taking this to the list now...]
>>
>> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
>>> I think we are talking about the same thing. The main point is that if IP 
>>> addresses change, the MRI is invalidated, and the QNI must then, in one 
>>> way or another be notified. There must be (otherwise nothing works) some 
>>> mobility signaling where the QNI gets to know the new IP of the MN, and 
>>> can then reissue a RESERVE with a new MRI.
>> Ok, however, I believe that your proposed solution doesn't work:
>> you proposed to send a NOTIFY towards the CN. This will require usage
>> of the new flow's MRI and the resulting GIST Query must be sent in
>> _upstream_ direction, i.e., PC-MRI(CN->MN-newCoA, D-Flag=1) - upstream.
>> Now there is the problem of choosing the correct encapsulation for the
>> Query: only _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation would be an option, but this
>> is not appropriate to use in this case due to its limited applicability
>> to certain environments. Even if the MN could send the NOTIFY to its
>> new access router (QNE4 below), there is no routing state installed yet
>> in upstream direction in QNE4, i.e., it doesn't know any next peer
>> in upstream direction, so only upstream Q-mode could be used, but that
>> is not really applicable in this case. So only the last paragraph of
>> section 4.3.3 applies:
>>    o  If no routing state exists, GIST can attempt to use Q-mode as in
>>       the Query case: either sending a Data message with the Q-mode
>>       encapsulation, or using the event as a trigger for routing state
>>       setup (see Section 4.4).  If this is not possible, e.g. because
>>       the encapsulation for the MRM is only defined for one message
>>       direction, then this is an error condition which is reported back
>>       to the local signalling application.
>>
>> So an error will be reported back to the application.
>> As a conclusion: sending a NOTIFY in upstream direction does not
>> work along paths that have no routing state yet.
> 
> 
> [JM]: If the CN requests reliable or secure transport, GIST will send an 

I don't know what it has to do with reliable and secure transport?

> empty Query to the next, set up routing state, and only then send the 
> NOTIFY. This will hit QNE4. Now QNE4 does not know about the SID in 
> question, so should it send an error back, or forward the message in the 
> same way towards the CN? 

Please read the above text again. The problem lies in the fact that
you have to send a GIST-Query _upstream_ and no routing state exists
yet. So even if an MA exists, it cannot be used.
This could only be done with _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation, but this
is definitely not applicable in a general way.

> [JM]: Yet, also with unreliable/unsecure transport, what would happen, if 
> QNE4 would actually decide not to peer? It sees a NOTIFY for a SID it 
> doesn't know about, so it could as well forward the message further, 
> right? The message will eventually hit a QNE (or eventually the CN), who 
> then knows about the SID.

See above. The GIST Query has to find its way first. This is the real
problem.

Regards,
 Roland


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Hi all,

Regarding NAT traversal, NSIS Mobility Applicability draft also has two
open issues (as shown below). But I am not sure Mobility draft is proper
place to handle these issues. I would like to ask whether these two
issues can be discussed in NATFW draft.

Issue 1:
When MN moves, IP address and routing are changed.  In this case, new
NAT/FW pinhole need to be opened and old one should be torn. When and
how should NSIS tear old pinhole?

(For this issue, some comments were already made that the old pinhole
should be torn by time out, and this prefer to be mentioned in Mobility
draft.)

Issue 2: In mobility scenario, it is possible that MN attaches to
private network. But MN cannot know if the NAT is NSIS aware or not.
Therefore should it be mandatory that MN sets S-flag when it detect
attaching a private network?

cheers,
Takako





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> 
> Dear all,
> 
> The authors believe that the NATFW NSLP
> (draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-16.txt) is ready for WGLC.
> 
> The WGLC starts today and will run until December 14th.
> 
> Please review the draft, and comment if you feel that this draft
> is ready to be sent to the IESG.  A simple mail saying that the
> draft is ready for publication would be great.
> 
> Of course, if you read the draft and find open issues, then please
> send a summary of your issue with the current draft.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
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Hi Martin, all,

i have reviewed the NATFW NSLP draft. Overall i think the draft is in a 
good shape.

My three major comments:

    * p24: Redraw the picture! Add administrative domains or point out
      with node belongs to which network! Also rewrite the first
      paragraph! Use a easier example! This section indicates (at least
      to me) the usage of the proxy mode in a way which is not supported
      by NATFW!
    * p26/section 3.2.3: Why do you have this section within the draft?
      The listed states are not enough to implement the NATFW NSLP and
      may confuse reviewers/implementers. You could point to the
      statemachine draft! If you want to have this section inside the
      draft, you should update it. What is the "Dead" state good for?
      Such a session has to be deleted directly and not "... and the
      NATFW NSLP signaling session can be deleted."
    * regarding section 3.7.2: this section is a little bit confusing!
      Even with knowledge about the NATFW NSLP it is hard to follow.
      Maybe you should re-structure it a little bit, e.g. creating
      several sub-sections. You should also clearly point out that EXT
      can also be used to install pinholes in FWs (and not only deny
      rules as described later, if i don't understand this wrong (see
      below)).

Further comments:

    * p2/p4: If you introduce NAT, you should do the same for FW
    * p8/p10: you introduce the terminology "middlebox" twice, in
      section 1.2. and section 1.3
    * p11: meaning that there is a middlebox on the => meaning that
      there is _at least one_ middlebox on the
    * p22, first paragraph: (check local policies for authorization and
      authentication, possibly create policy rules) that is not right,
      the NF only notice the policy rules
    * p22, third paragraph: the NF installs the policy rule when
      receiving a success RESPONSE msg
    * p22, fourth paragraph: Ni => NI
    * p27: 'Protocol error' (0x1) => (0x3)
    * p29/p30: many recurrences here: Requested signaling session
      lifetime is too big, Requested signaling session lifetime is too
      small, with codes, the same on page 30
    * p32: section 3.7:  ... how to create NATFW NSLP signaling
      sessions, maintain them, and how to reserve addresses. => and delete
    * p34: NSLP forwarder: what happened if the NF can not install the
      pinhole? e.g. it is already installed
      looks like you forgot this case, there is also node error code for
      this case on page 58.
    * p40:  ... an error RESPONSE of class 'Protocol error' (0x3) ... =>
      of class signaling session failure (0x6)
    * p40: "The policy rule is remembered, but not activated, if the
      action in the NATFW_EFI object is set to 'allow'." Why? In
      general, i don't understand the "Firewall" paragraph.
    * p41: "Reservations with action 'allow' made with EXT MUST be
      enabled by a subsequent CREATE message." What happens if the
      pinhole isn't use for reservation of an external address or a
      NAT-binding? In this case no CREATE msg will follow.
          o or is this in general not allow within the NATFW NSLP? The
            next sentence indicates that:
          o "The only function of EXT is to ensure that subsequent
            CREATE messages traveling towards the NR will be forwarded
            across the public-private boundary towards the DR."
          o One earlier version of the NATFW NSLP supports this with the
            use of U-CREATE. Or is this completely remove?
    * p41: ...created by REA. => ... created by EXT.
    * p42: "The lifetime extension of a NATFW NSLP signaling session is
      calculated as current local time plus proposed lifetime value",
      really local time _*plus *_proposed? This would increase the
      lifetime step by step as the local lifetime is always >0!
    * p44: "'NATFW node is going down soon' (0x03) The NI and other NFs
      should be prepared for a service interruption at any time."
      What is this good for????
    * p48/49, section 3.7.6.2: you should make clear where are the
      differences to the EXT msg.
    * p52: ... of this memo => ...of this memo.
    * p56: ... of class 'Signaling session error' (0x6) with ... => ...
      of class 'Signaling session failure' (0x6) with ...
    * p58: you forgot 0x04 (see 3.7.5) 'NATFW signaling session lifetime
      expired'
    * p59(and whole doc) => signaling session failures => signaling
      session failure (as for the other classes).
    * p62: The fields MUST be interpreted according these rules: => The
      fields MUST be interpreted according _*to *_these rules:
    * p62: with response code 'Mandatory object missing' (0x02) MUST =>
      (0x04)
    * p76: Open issues. Should this be part of a WGLC document?


Regards,
Niklas


Martin Stiemerling schrieb:
> [writing as WG chair]
>
> Dear all,
>
> The authors believe that the NATFW NSLP
> (draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-16.txt) is ready for WGLC. 
>
> The WGLC starts today and will run until December 14th. 
>
> Please review the draft, and comment if you feel that this draft
> is ready to be sent to the IESG.  A simple mail saying that the
> draft is ready for publication would be great.
>
> Of course, if you read the draft and find open issues, then please
> send a summary of your issue with the current draft.
>
> Thanks, 
>
>   John and Martin
>
> stiemerling@netlab.nec.de <mailto:stiemerling@netlab.nec.de>
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Hi Martin, all,<br>
<br>
i have reviewed the NATFW NSLP draft. Overall i think the draft is in a
good shape.<br>
<br>
My three major comments:<br>
<ul>
  <li>p24: Redraw the picture! Add administrative domains or point out
with node belongs to which network! Also rewrite the first paragraph!
Use a easier example! This section indicates (at least to me) the usage
of the proxy mode in a way which is not supported by NATFW!</li>
  <li>p26/section 3.2.3: Why do you have this section within the draft?
The listed states are not enough to implement the NATFW NSLP and may
confuse reviewers/implementers. You could point to the statemachine
draft! If you want to have this section inside the draft, you should
update it. What is the "Dead" state good for? Such a session has to be
deleted directly and not "... and the NATFW NSLP signaling session can
be deleted."</li>
  <li>regarding section 3.7.2: this section is a little bit confusing!
Even with knowledge about the NATFW NSLP it is hard to follow. Maybe
you should re-structure it a little bit, e.g. creating several
sub-sections. You should also clearly point out that EXT can also be
used to install pinholes in FWs (and not only deny rules as described
later, if i don't understand this wrong (see below)).<br>
  </li>
</ul>
Further comments:<br>
<ul>
  <li>p2/p4: If you introduce NAT, you should do the same for FW</li>
  <li>p8/p10: you introduce the terminology "middlebox" twice, in
section 1.2. and section 1.3</li>
  <li>p11: meaning that there is a middlebox on the =&gt; meaning that
there is <u>at least one</u> middlebox on the</li>
  <li>p22, first paragraph: (check local policies for authorization and
authentication, possibly create policy rules) that is not right, the NF
only notice the policy rules</li>
  <li>p22, third paragraph: the NF installs the policy rule when
receiving a success RESPONSE msg</li>
  <li>p22, fourth paragraph: Ni =&gt; NI</li>
  <li>p27: 'Protocol error' (0x1) =&gt; (0x3)</li>
  <li>p29/p30: many recurrences here: Requested signaling session
lifetime is too big, Requested signaling session lifetime is too small,
with codes, the same on page 30</li>
  <li>p32: section 3.7:&nbsp; ... how to create NATFW NSLP signaling
sessions, maintain them, and how to reserve addresses. =&gt; and delete</li>
  <li>p34: NSLP forwarder: what happened if the NF can not install the
pinhole? e.g. it is already installed<br>
looks like you forgot this case, there is also node error code for this
case on page 58.</li>
  <li>p40:&nbsp; ... an error RESPONSE of class 'Protocol error' (0x3) ...
=&gt; of class signaling session failure (0x6)<br>
  </li>
  <li>p40: "The policy rule is remembered, but not activated, if the
action in the NATFW_EFI object is set to 'allow'." Why? In general, i
don't understand the "Firewall" paragraph.</li>
  <li>p41: "Reservations with action 'allow' made with EXT MUST be
enabled by a subsequent CREATE message." What happens if the pinhole
isn't use for reservation of an external address or a NAT-binding? In
this case no CREATE msg will follow.<br>
  </li>
  <ul>
    <li>or is this in general not allow within the NATFW NSLP? The next
sentence indicates that:<br>
    </li>
    <li>"The only function of EXT is to ensure that subsequent CREATE
messages traveling towards the NR will be forwarded across the
public-private boundary towards the DR."<br>
    </li>
  </ul>
  <ul>
    <li>One earlier version of the NATFW NSLP supports this with the
use of U-CREATE. Or is this completely remove?<br>
    </li>
  </ul>
  <li>p41: ...created by REA. =&gt; ... created by EXT.</li>
  <li>p42: "The lifetime extension of a NATFW NSLP signaling session is
calculated as current local time plus proposed lifetime value", really
local time <u><b>plus </b></u>proposed? This would increase the
lifetime step by step as the local lifetime is always &gt;0!</li>
  <li>p44: "'NATFW node is going down soon' (0x03) The NI and other NFs
should be prepared for a service interruption at any time."<br>
What is this good for????</li>
  <li>p48/49, section 3.7.6.2: you should make clear where are the
differences to the EXT msg.</li>
  <li>p52: ... of this memo =&gt; ...of this memo.</li>
  <li>p56: ... of class 'Signaling session error' (0x6) with ... =&gt;
... of class 'Signaling session failure' (0x6) with ...</li>
  <li>p58: you forgot 0x04 (see 3.7.5) 'NATFW signaling session
lifetime expired'<br>
  </li>
  <li>p59(and whole doc) =&gt; signaling session failures =&gt;
signaling session failure (as for the other classes).</li>
  <li>p62: The fields MUST be interpreted according these rules: =&gt;
The fields MUST be interpreted according <u><b>to </b></u>these rules:</li>
  <li>p62: with response code 'Mandatory object missing' (0x02) MUST
=&gt; (0x04)</li>
  <li>p76: Open issues. Should this be part of a WGLC document?<br>
  </li>
</ul>
<br>
Regards,<br>
Niklas<br>
<br>
<br>
Martin Stiemerling schrieb:
<blockquote
 cite="mid:57BCC14C-53FD-4B9C-8EEE-C2D5D78B0B1F@netlab.nec.de"
 type="cite">
  <div>[writing as WG chair]</div>
  <div><br class="webkit-block-placeholder">
  </div>
Dear all,
  <div><br class="webkit-block-placeholder">
  </div>
  <div>The authors believe that the NATFW NSLP</div>
  <div>(draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-16.txt) is ready for WGLC.&nbsp;</div>
  <div><br class="webkit-block-placeholder">
  </div>
  <div>The WGLC starts today and will run until December 14th.&nbsp;</div>
  <div><br class="webkit-block-placeholder">
  </div>
  <div>
  <div style="margin: 0px;">Please review the draft, and comment if you
feel that this draft</div>
  <div style="margin: 0px;">is ready to be sent to the IESG.&nbsp; A simple
mail saying that the</div>
  <div style="margin: 0px;">draft is ready for publication would be
great.</div>
  <div style="margin: 0px; min-height: 14px;"><br>
  </div>
  <div style="margin: 0px;">Of course, if you read the draft and find
open issues, then please</div>
  <div style="margin: 0px;">send a summary of your issue with the
current draft.</div>
  </div>
  <div><br class="webkit-block-placeholder">
  </div>
  <div>Thanks,&nbsp;</div>
  <div><br class="webkit-block-placeholder">
  </div>
  <div>&nbsp;&nbsp;John and Martin</div>
  <div><br>
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Hi,

we are currently pondering about how to best implement mobility aware=20
QoS-signaling.

One of the first stumbling block I hit so far is that the mobility draft=20
suggests that all signaling for the route-optimized case should be done=20
using the CoA as the source/destination of the flow.  i.e. signaling is=20
done for the actual flow rather than for the logical one.  This certainly=20
makes sense, but any potential application that uses e.g. QoS-NSLP as a=20
service will ask for a reservation for the *logical* flow as it is=20
anaware of MobileIP (and should be).  So the questions becomes where=20
should the translation from logical to actual flow take place.

I believe that mobility management should be taken care of within the NTLP=
=20
layer as the NSLP should not have to be concerned with the actual message=20
routing.  Currently I have two possible sollutions to the problem which=20
I'd like to hear feedback about:

1) Extend the GIST-to-NSLP API with a type of NetworkNotification that is=20
able to convey Address-Binding-Information and let the NSLP figure out if=20
this information is relevant to any of it's sessions.

2) Use a similar approach as the MRITS described in [1].  This would take=20
place in the MN / CN respectively and translate the MRI according to the=20
BindingCache (and/or the routing header).

I feel that the second option might be easier to implement and could help=20
to reduce the amount of duplication. i.e. this way only the NTLP has to=20
interact with the mobility layer and the NSLP can be mostly oblivious of=20
the fact that it is in fact mobile.  The NTLP would obviously still have=20
to send some kind of trigger in case of a BindingUpdate, but that could=20
be a normal NetworkNotification for the HoA.

Any comments greatly appreciated.

P.S. How does the QoS-NSLP translate the packet classifier in a GaNAT=20
environment.  I'm not completely through the nattraversal-darf, yet and=20
would appreciate any pointers.

[1]http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-pashalidis-nsis-gimps-nattraversal-05#s=
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On Wednesday 12 December 2007, I wrote:
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> 2) Use a similar approach as the MRITS described in [1].  This would
> take place in the MN / CN respectively and translate the MRI according
> to the BindingCache (and/or the routing header).

Correction. =A0Obviously it won't use the routing header as the translation=
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On Fri, 23 Nov 2007, Martin Stiemerling wrote:
> The authors believe that the NATFW NSLP
> (draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-16.txt) is ready for WGLC.
> The WGLC starts today and will run until December 14th.

 Hi, 

 I have read the document, and I did not find any big issues, mainly 
just some editorial things. I did not repeat findings already 
provided by Jukka or Niklas.

 Some parts of the text, mainly Section 3 (Protocol Description), was 
such, that I can not be sure whether I understood it completely. The 
text itself was quite easy to read, but I think those who have 
implemented this protocol can say more accurately how well the protocol 
actually is described. 

 To make it short: I think the specification is in quite nice state, and 
needs just some editorial fixes.

Here are my comments on the draft:

 * At page 11, line 571: 'routeable' --> 'routable' (?)
 
 * Examples in Section 2 use mainly 'MB' in figures to represent NAT
   and/or FW nodes. However, I think the use is not always
   consistent. For example, in the figure 2 'FW' is used (and I think
   it is ok, because the text explicitly states that this example is
   about FW-only cases), but figure 9 in section 2.8 has 'MB's
   instead. If those middle boxes in scenario 2.8 may be also NATs, I
   think it would be nice to have it in text. If those middle boxes
   are always firewalls as I think the text states, then the figure
   should be changed.

   However, I think that the text is clear enough already, and the
   easy fix would be to change the 'FW' boxes to 'MB' boxes in the 
   figure 2 :)

 * Section 3.1 Policy Rules, first paragraph:

 "For firewalls the policy rule usually consists of a 5-tuple, source/
  destination addresses, transport protocol, and source/destination
  port numbers, plus an action, such as allow or deny."

  At least before reading the rest of the document, the word 'usually'
  seems a bit odd here. Do real alternative policy rules that do not
  contain the 5-tuple and action exist?

  I also think this sentence is not too clear, some kind of
  reformatting would be nice. For example, something like this (still
  having the word 'usually'):

 "For firewalls the policy rule usually consists of a 5-tuple and an
  action such as allow or deny. The information contained in the tuple
  includes source/destination addresses, transport protocol and
  source/destination port numbers."

 * In addition to comments Niklas already gave on figure 11 on page
   24, I want to add that the figure and its legend do not
   match. There is no MB2 in the figure, and NF is present in the
   legend only in the text. As Niklas, I also think that it would be
   good to point out which node belongs to which network.

 * Page 28, last bullet:
  "the lease time of the NI's IP address.  The chosen NATFW NSLP
   signaling session lifetime must be larger than the lease time,
   otherwise the IP address can be re-assigned to a different node.
   This node may receive unwanted traffic, although it never has
   requested a NAT/firewall configuration, which might be an issue in
   mobile environments.

   I just can not get the idea :) Should it be 'must be smaller than
   the lease time' ? If not, then I think some more text is needed.

 * Page 45, middle bullet:
   "and outbound messages MUST be forwarded further inbound." 
   ->
   "and outbound messages MUST be forwarded further outbound." ?

  * Table 1 on page 50, the last row, capitalization:
    left column: "IPsec SPI", right column: "ipsec-SPI"

 Best Regards,
 Lauri

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Hi,

Me and Nuutti Varis, our GIST expert, had a chat yesterday and we tried to 
figure out what could be a good option. I think the problem lies 
elsewhere, it is not a (QoS) NSLP problem.

When the IP address does not change (with MIP the e2e BU solves the 
problem), the point is that even if we would be able to send a message 
upstream, we still need the routing towards the MN to be in place. There 
must be some routing protocol in place that sets up e.g. a new host route 
to the MN when it has moved. This protocol must be coupled with GIST, 
i.e., GIST must be able to get a notification from a routing change. This 
would be a cross-over router having the MN state. Once the node gets a 
hint that the next peer for a MN has changed, it can reissue a RESERVE 
towards the new path.

Thus, I would say that we should not invent an NSLP solution to a mobility 
management protocol issue. We just need to note that GIST must be able to 
see when routes change, to set up the new route on the downstream.

rgs,
Jukka

On Fri, 7 Dec 2007, Roland Bless wrote:

> Hi Jukka,
> 
> see comment inline.
> 
> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> > On Thu, 15 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
> > 
> >> Hi Jukka,
> >>
> >> [I'm taking this to the list now...]
> >>
> >> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> >>> I think we are talking about the same thing. The main point is that if IP 
> >>> addresses change, the MRI is invalidated, and the QNI must then, in one 
> >>> way or another be notified. There must be (otherwise nothing works) some 
> >>> mobility signaling where the QNI gets to know the new IP of the MN, and 
> >>> can then reissue a RESERVE with a new MRI.
> >> Ok, however, I believe that your proposed solution doesn't work:
> >> you proposed to send a NOTIFY towards the CN. This will require usage
> >> of the new flow's MRI and the resulting GIST Query must be sent in
> >> _upstream_ direction, i.e., PC-MRI(CN->MN-newCoA, D-Flag=1) - upstream.
> >> Now there is the problem of choosing the correct encapsulation for the
> >> Query: only _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation would be an option, but this
> >> is not appropriate to use in this case due to its limited applicability
> >> to certain environments. Even if the MN could send the NOTIFY to its
> >> new access router (QNE4 below), there is no routing state installed yet
> >> in upstream direction in QNE4, i.e., it doesn't know any next peer
> >> in upstream direction, so only upstream Q-mode could be used, but that
> >> is not really applicable in this case. So only the last paragraph of
> >> section 4.3.3 applies:
> >>    o  If no routing state exists, GIST can attempt to use Q-mode as in
> >>       the Query case: either sending a Data message with the Q-mode
> >>       encapsulation, or using the event as a trigger for routing state
> >>       setup (see Section 4.4).  If this is not possible, e.g. because
> >>       the encapsulation for the MRM is only defined for one message
> >>       direction, then this is an error condition which is reported back
> >>       to the local signalling application.
> >>
> >> So an error will be reported back to the application.
> >> As a conclusion: sending a NOTIFY in upstream direction does not
> >> work along paths that have no routing state yet.
> > 
> > 
> > [JM]: If the CN requests reliable or secure transport, GIST will send an 
> 
> I don't know what it has to do with reliable and secure transport?
> 
> > empty Query to the next, set up routing state, and only then send the 
> > NOTIFY. This will hit QNE4. Now QNE4 does not know about the SID in 
> > question, so should it send an error back, or forward the message in the 
> > same way towards the CN? 
> 
> Please read the above text again. The problem lies in the fact that
> you have to send a GIST-Query _upstream_ and no routing state exists
> yet. So even if an MA exists, it cannot be used.
> This could only be done with _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation, but this
> is definitely not applicable in a general way.
> 
> > [JM]: Yet, also with unreliable/unsecure transport, what would happen, if 
> > QNE4 would actually decide not to peer? It sees a NOTIFY for a SID it 
> > doesn't know about, so it could as well forward the message further, 
> > right? The message will eventually hit a QNE (or eventually the CN), who 
> > then knows about the SID.
> 
> See above. The GIST Query has to find its way first. This is the real
> problem.
> 
> Regards,
>  Roland
> 


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Hi Jukka,

Generally, I would agree with you that the NSLP should not be used to
replace the mobility management protocol.

Regarding your analysis, I would like to clarify some points. Please see
 inline:

Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Me and Nuutti Varis, our GIST expert, had a chat yesterday and we tried to 
> figure out what could be a good option. I think the problem lies 
> elsewhere, it is not a (QoS) NSLP problem.
> 
> When the IP address does not change 

[Cheng] I think this is a different scenario than what we were
discussing earlier. The case seems more of a re-routing issue than a
mobility issue (which belongs to a different section). GIST should have
dealt with the normal re-routing case. In case there are other protocols
involved, different considerations would apply (see below).

> (with MIP the e2e BU solves the problem),

[Cheng] The MIP BU should solve the routing aspect of the problem.
Possible NSIS operation sequence has been detailed in several earlier
emails. However, as Roland pointed out, the description in the draft
might be insufficient about the NSIS mechanism, e.g. the GIST API to
inform NSLP of the new MRI after change of MIP Binding Cache, etc.

> the point is that even if we would be able to send a message 
> upstream, we still need the routing towards the MN to be in place. There
> must be some routing protocol in place that sets up e.g. a new host route 
> to the MN when it has moved. This protocol must be coupled with GIST, 
> i.e., GIST must be able to get a notification from a routing change. This 
> would be a cross-over router having the MN state. Once the node gets a 
> hint that the next peer for a MN has changed, it can reissue a RESERVE 
> towards the new path.

[Cheng] Can you share a bit more on what is the use case/scenario you
have in mind? (when MN moves but IP address does not change) Usually, to
achieve this, some sort of tunneling needs to be used, e.g. network
based local mobility management. If this is the case, the nodes involved
would be totally different, and the analysis should also be different.
It does not have to be the crossover router that issues the RESERVE. The
tunnel signaling interaction must be considered here as well.

cheers

Cheng Hong



> Thus, I would say that we should not invent an NSLP solution to a mobility 
> management protocol issue. We just need to note that GIST must be able to 
> see when routes change, to set up the new route on the downstream.
> 
> rgs,
> Jukka
> 
> On Fri, 7 Dec 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
> 
>> Hi Jukka,
>>
>> see comment inline.
>>
>> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
>>> On Thu, 15 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Jukka,
>>>>
>>>> [I'm taking this to the list now...]
>>>>
>>>> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
>>>>> I think we are talking about the same thing. The main point is that if IP 
>>>>> addresses change, the MRI is invalidated, and the QNI must then, in one 
>>>>> way or another be notified. There must be (otherwise nothing works) some 
>>>>> mobility signaling where the QNI gets to know the new IP of the MN, and 
>>>>> can then reissue a RESERVE with a new MRI.
>>>> Ok, however, I believe that your proposed solution doesn't work:
>>>> you proposed to send a NOTIFY towards the CN. This will require usage
>>>> of the new flow's MRI and the resulting GIST Query must be sent in
>>>> _upstream_ direction, i.e., PC-MRI(CN->MN-newCoA, D-Flag=1) - upstream.
>>>> Now there is the problem of choosing the correct encapsulation for the
>>>> Query: only _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation would be an option, but this
>>>> is not appropriate to use in this case due to its limited applicability
>>>> to certain environments. Even if the MN could send the NOTIFY to its
>>>> new access router (QNE4 below), there is no routing state installed yet
>>>> in upstream direction in QNE4, i.e., it doesn't know any next peer
>>>> in upstream direction, so only upstream Q-mode could be used, but that
>>>> is not really applicable in this case. So only the last paragraph of
>>>> section 4.3.3 applies:
>>>>    o  If no routing state exists, GIST can attempt to use Q-mode as in
>>>>       the Query case: either sending a Data message with the Q-mode
>>>>       encapsulation, or using the event as a trigger for routing state
>>>>       setup (see Section 4.4).  If this is not possible, e.g. because
>>>>       the encapsulation for the MRM is only defined for one message
>>>>       direction, then this is an error condition which is reported back
>>>>       to the local signalling application.
>>>>
>>>> So an error will be reported back to the application.
>>>> As a conclusion: sending a NOTIFY in upstream direction does not
>>>> work along paths that have no routing state yet.
>>>
>>> [JM]: If the CN requests reliable or secure transport, GIST will send an 
>> I don't know what it has to do with reliable and secure transport?
>>
>>> empty Query to the next, set up routing state, and only then send the 
>>> NOTIFY. This will hit QNE4. Now QNE4 does not know about the SID in 
>>> question, so should it send an error back, or forward the message in the 
>>> same way towards the CN? 
>> Please read the above text again. The problem lies in the fact that
>> you have to send a GIST-Query _upstream_ and no routing state exists
>> yet. So even if an MA exists, it cannot be used.
>> This could only be done with _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation, but this
>> is definitely not applicable in a general way.
>>
>>> [JM]: Yet, also with unreliable/unsecure transport, what would happen, if 
>>> QNE4 would actually decide not to peer? It sees a NOTIFY for a SID it 
>>> doesn't know about, so it could as well forward the message further, 
>>> right? The message will eventually hit a QNE (or eventually the CN), who 
>>> then knows about the SID.
>> See above. The GIST Query has to find its way first. This is the real
>> problem.
>>
>> Regards,
>>  Roland
>>
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Hi,
a few answers below.

Jukka

On Mon, 17 Dec 2007, Hong Cheng wrote:

> Hi Jukka,
> 
> Generally, I would agree with you that the NSLP should not be used to
> replace the mobility management protocol.
> 
> Regarding your analysis, I would like to clarify some points. Please see
>  inline:
> 
> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> > Hi,
> > 
> > Me and Nuutti Varis, our GIST expert, had a chat yesterday and we tried to 
> > figure out what could be a good option. I think the problem lies 
> > elsewhere, it is not a (QoS) NSLP problem.
> > 
> > When the IP address does not change 
> 
> [Cheng] I think this is a different scenario than what we were
> discussing earlier. The case seems more of a re-routing issue than a
> mobility issue (which belongs to a different section). GIST should have
> dealt with the normal re-routing case. In case there are other protocols
> involved, different considerations would apply (see below).
> 
> > (with MIP the e2e BU solves the problem),
> 
> [Cheng] The MIP BU should solve the routing aspect of the problem.
> Possible NSIS operation sequence has been detailed in several earlier
> emails. However, as Roland pointed out, the description in the draft
> might be insufficient about the NSIS mechanism, e.g. the GIST API to
> inform NSLP of the new MRI after change of MIP Binding Cache, etc.

[JM]: This may be so, I haven't thought about how the GIST API fits with 
MIP. I trust Roland that there is a problem.

> 
> > the point is that even if we would be able to send a message 
> > upstream, we still need the routing towards the MN to be in place. There
> > must be some routing protocol in place that sets up e.g. a new host route 
> > to the MN when it has moved. This protocol must be coupled with GIST, 
> > i.e., GIST must be able to get a notification from a routing change. This 
> > would be a cross-over router having the MN state. Once the node gets a 
> > hint that the next peer for a MN has changed, it can reissue a RESERVE 
> > towards the new path.
> 
> [Cheng] Can you share a bit more on what is the use case/scenario you
> have in mind? (when MN moves but IP address does not change) Usually, to
> achieve this, some sort of tunneling needs to be used, e.g. network
> based local mobility management. If this is the case, the nodes involved
> would be totally different, and the analysis should also be different.
> It does not have to be the crossover router that issues the RESERVE. The
> tunnel signaling interaction must be considered here as well.

[JM]: You could per-host forwarding within a local domain based on 
tunnels, or you could update just per-host routes in the domain routers. 
Both have their interactions with GIST. I don't think we should try to 
figure out all possible local (micro) mobility schemes and see how they 
would work. Just the general considerations are enough, IMO.


> 
> cheers
> 
> Cheng Hong
> 
> 
> 
> > Thus, I would say that we should not invent an NSLP solution to a mobility 
> > management protocol issue. We just need to note that GIST must be able to 
> > see when routes change, to set up the new route on the downstream.
> > 
> > rgs,
> > Jukka
> > 
> > On Fri, 7 Dec 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
> > 
> >> Hi Jukka,
> >>
> >> see comment inline.
> >>
> >> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> >>> On Thu, 15 Nov 2007, Roland Bless wrote:
> >>>
> >>>> Hi Jukka,
> >>>>
> >>>> [I'm taking this to the list now...]
> >>>>
> >>>> Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> >>>>> I think we are talking about the same thing. The main point is that if IP 
> >>>>> addresses change, the MRI is invalidated, and the QNI must then, in one 
> >>>>> way or another be notified. There must be (otherwise nothing works) some 
> >>>>> mobility signaling where the QNI gets to know the new IP of the MN, and 
> >>>>> can then reissue a RESERVE with a new MRI.
> >>>> Ok, however, I believe that your proposed solution doesn't work:
> >>>> you proposed to send a NOTIFY towards the CN. This will require usage
> >>>> of the new flow's MRI and the resulting GIST Query must be sent in
> >>>> _upstream_ direction, i.e., PC-MRI(CN->MN-newCoA, D-Flag=1) - upstream.
> >>>> Now there is the problem of choosing the correct encapsulation for the
> >>>> Query: only _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation would be an option, but this
> >>>> is not appropriate to use in this case due to its limited applicability
> >>>> to certain environments. Even if the MN could send the NOTIFY to its
> >>>> new access router (QNE4 below), there is no routing state installed yet
> >>>> in upstream direction in QNE4, i.e., it doesn't know any next peer
> >>>> in upstream direction, so only upstream Q-mode could be used, but that
> >>>> is not really applicable in this case. So only the last paragraph of
> >>>> section 4.3.3 applies:
> >>>>    o  If no routing state exists, GIST can attempt to use Q-mode as in
> >>>>       the Query case: either sending a Data message with the Q-mode
> >>>>       encapsulation, or using the event as a trigger for routing state
> >>>>       setup (see Section 4.4).  If this is not possible, e.g. because
> >>>>       the encapsulation for the MRM is only defined for one message
> >>>>       direction, then this is an error condition which is reported back
> >>>>       to the local signalling application.
> >>>>
> >>>> So an error will be reported back to the application.
> >>>> As a conclusion: sending a NOTIFY in upstream direction does not
> >>>> work along paths that have no routing state yet.
> >>>
> >>> [JM]: If the CN requests reliable or secure transport, GIST will send an 
> >> I don't know what it has to do with reliable and secure transport?
> >>
> >>> empty Query to the next, set up routing state, and only then send the 
> >>> NOTIFY. This will hit QNE4. Now QNE4 does not know about the SID in 
> >>> question, so should it send an error back, or forward the message in the 
> >>> same way towards the CN? 
> >> Please read the above text again. The problem lies in the fact that
> >> you have to send a GIST-Query _upstream_ and no routing state exists
> >> yet. So even if an MA exists, it cannot be used.
> >> This could only be done with _upstream_ Q-mode encapsulation, but this
> >> is definitely not applicable in a general way.
> >>
> >>> [JM]: Yet, also with unreliable/unsecure transport, what would happen, if 
> >>> QNE4 would actually decide not to peer? It sees a NOTIFY for a SID it 
> >>> doesn't know about, so it could as well forward the message further, 
> >>> right? The message will eventually hit a QNE (or eventually the CN), who 
> >>> then knows about the SID.
> >> See above. The GIST Query has to find its way first. This is the real
> >> problem.
> >>
> >> Regards,
> >>  Roland
> >>
> > 
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Hello

I have read the draft and I do not have any major objections. I think it
is very extensive and considers, in great detail,  all necessary aspects
of the protocol.

I am very sorry, that my comments are overdue. I hope they can still
be of some use for the working group. This was my first review of
the draft and it took much longer to read, than I had estimated.

I have divided my comments into two categories. One group of regular nits
and another of more insignificant details. I include the comments below.

Before nits I will just add my 2 cents to the 5-tuple/policy rule
discussion. As mentioned by Lauri, it is defined somewhat unclearly on
page 20. It is, however, in my opinion defined more clearly on page 10.
It is also worth to note, that the first definition uses "and", where the
second uses '/'.

-----
nits:

* page 6, paragraph 2:
"This message .... intercepts these messages," -> *this message*

* page 7: 
"If the data receiver resides in a private addressing realm or
firewall" --> *behind a* firewall ?

* page 8: 
the second sentence in the definition of "Firewall" is superfluous.

* page 9: 
In bullet about NATFW NSLP peer the term "NSIS adjacency" is vague.
I suggest "NSLP adjacency" (or GIST/NTLP adjacency, if that was intended). [2]
defines GIST adjacency and "adjacent peer"

* page 25, 3.2.1, 3rd bullet: 
What are "inbound NATFW peers"? Does "inbound"
here mean towards the NI?  (it became clear later, in section 3.7.5)

* page 30, 2nd paragraph: 
Error conditions are quite correctly defined for both
too low and too high session lifetimes, but the text states:

"The forwarders MUST accept the granted NATFW NSLP signaling session lifetime,
as long as this value is less than or equal to the acceptable value."

later "lower or equal" is mentioned.

Should these maybe be "if the lifetime value is within the acceptable range",
or something similar? If not, I have great trouble understanding this.

How are NFs on the path towards NR informed, if a node rejects the lifetime
suggested in the RESPONSE? A NOTIFY with the same error code?  Can NOTIFY be
sent towards NR? Page 66 says "The NOTIFY message is routed towards the NI..."

Im very sorry, if I have overlooked some central detail about this.

* page 33, 5th bullet, sub-bullet: 
"If no matching reservation can be found, i.e. no reservation has been made in
advance, the NSLP MUST return an error RESPONSE of class 'Signaling session
failure' (0x6) with response code 'No reservation found matching the MRI of the
CREATE request' (0x03) MUST be generated."  --> "MUST be generated" is
superfluous? (already "MUST return")

* page 39-40: 
processing of EXT on NI(page 39) says: "When the data sender's IP address is
not known, the NI+ MUST NOT include a NATFW_DTINFO object."

later, on page 40 it is stated:
"The edge-NAT or any other NAT MUST reject EXT messages not carrying a
NATFW_DTINFO object..."

Was the "LE-MRM, DS unknown etc" case DTINFO object added by somebody in the
middle? A NAT before the edge-NAT? But arent those included in "or any other
NAT"?

Also, NATFW_DTINFO is specified as mandatory, in 4.3.2 (page 64) Maybe I have
overlooked something here as well. The section, as Niklas mentioned, is not
very easy to read.

* page 46: 
"This proxy mode of operation must terminate the NATFW NSLP signaling as
topologically close to the terminal for which it is proxying and proxy all
messages."  --> *as possible* or something similar seems to be missing from
that sentence. (It only says "as close..." )

Also, what does this sentence mean? All proxy mode signaling is terminated at
the NI+/NI side edge-device, if I understood the section correctly.

------------------------
insignificant/uncertain:

* page 7:
"one or other" --> one or *the* other ?

* page 9: 
The "SDA" did not become clear to me until page 36( with dr, dr+ etc). Though
admittedly it is difficult to write a clear terminology section, if no
knowledge can be expected from the reader, i.e. me. :)

* page 11: 
"on the data path from... and the external network" "and" could be *to*?
(i.e. on the data path from ...to) or change "from" to *between*?

* page 22, bullet 4:
"Ni" -> *NI*
* page 31, 3rd paragraph:
  "NSLP MUST update its stored state accordingly, if permitted by all security
  checks (see Section 3.6), and stores"
  --> *store*?

* page 53:
"The NSLP header is carried in all NATFW NSLP message and objects... "
--> *messages*

* page 63:
  "Objects defined in this memo carry always the flag combination"
  --> *always carry* ?

* page 80:
  "The rest of this section is giving"
  --> *gives* ?

* page 80:
  "It necessary to differentiate" --> It *is*


best regards, 
Teemu Huovila

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Hi Jukka,

Jukka MJ Manner wrote:
> Me and Nuutti Varis, our GIST expert, had a chat yesterday and we tried to 
> figure out what could be a good option. I think the problem lies 
> elsewhere, it is not a (QoS) NSLP problem.

Yep. We (Martin Roehricht, Max Laier and me) also discussed mobility
scenarios a lot in the past days and came to the conclusion that it
would be good to solve mobility issues at GIST layer as much as possible
since it is the appropriate place for message routing issues.

> When the IP address does not change (with MIP the e2e BU solves the 
> problem), the point is that even if we would be able to send a message 
> upstream, we still need the routing towards the MN to be in place. There 
> must be some routing protocol in place that sets up e.g. a new host route 
> to the MN when it has moved. This protocol must be coupled with GIST, 
> i.e., GIST must be able to get a notification from a routing change. This 
> would be a cross-over router having the MN state. Once the node gets a 
> hint that the next peer for a MN has changed, it can reissue a RESERVE 
> towards the new path.
> 
> Thus, I would say that we should not invent an NSLP solution to a mobility 
> management protocol issue. We just need to note that GIST must be able to 
> see when routes change, to set up the new route on the downstream.

The problem is that we need some linkage between the data path
and the control path (QoS NSLP). Usually path-coupled signaling
tries to solve this, but if no signaling message for the new
flow is generated, path-coupled signaling would not help. I see the
following setups (assuming that both ends support QoS NSLP):

- Application is mobility-aware and tries to manage mobility itself
  (no use of MobileIP, but e.g., SIP mobility)
  => no problem then because, RESERVE and QUERY message can be generated
  as soon as the MN moves. The CN can be notified by some application
  level signaling protocol.

- MN and CN are using MobileIP and route optimization
  => mobility events should be reported to GIST which in turn should
  notify the affected NSLPs. They can initiate new RESERVE/QUERY
  messages upon such a NetworkNotification. This works for all four
  cases.

- MN uses MobileIP, CN is not using MobileIP or does not support RO.
  => Then the home agent must split the reservations and
  could act upon receiving binding updates by re-initiating
  reservations for the tunnel to the MN as in the previous
  case.

Regards,
 Roland


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Subject: [NSIS] CFP: IEEE Network Special Issue on Implications and Control
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... please find below a CFP which may be related to NSIS.
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                      Call for Papers

                   IEEE Network Magazine
                      Special Issue on
Implications and Control of Middleboxes in the Internet

Important Dates
===============
Manuscript Submission Due: March 1, 2008
Acceptance Notification: June 1, 2008
Final Manuscript Due: July 15, 2008
Special Issue Publication Date: September/October 2008

Call for Papers
===============
Network Address Translators (NAT) and IP firewalls have been introduced
to the Internet some time ago, and over the time become an integral part
of the Internet architecture. Moreover, there are also other types of
middleboxes, such as Virtual Private Network (VPN) gateways, Application
Layer Gateways (ALG), Performance Enhancing Proxies (PEP) and web
proxies. These intermediary boxes perform functions different from
normal IP packet treatment, which can even change the content of packets
or do rerouting of IP packets.

There have been diverse views on the value of middleboxes. Some believe
that middleboxes introduce problems for network applications as well as
challenges to the traditional end-to-end Internet architecture. These
issues range, for instance, but not limited to, from naming and
addressing of nodes behind NATs, directionality of communication
establishment, and performance impairments. On the other hand, many
administrators and operators see the middleboxes represent an important
part for their network operations. For example, firewalls are widely
deployed with the intention of securing enterprise, campus and home
networks, so as to block attacks to nodes or keep nodes from sending
malicious traffic.

The Internet community has acknowledged the emergence of the middleboxes
and developed middlebox control and coordination protocols that allow
end hosts (or application proxies) to learn about the presence of
middleboxes and communicate their needs (i.e. required packet treatment)
to those devices. A number of middlebox control protocols, such as UPnP,
MIDCOM and STUN, have been developed over the years and are partially
used in current deployments.

The papers in this special issue will focus on the state-of-the-art
research in various aspects of middleboxes and middlebox control
mechanisms, which help to understand their impact to the Internet
architecture and network operations, and how they can be further
integrated, or leveraged for different purposes, such as load balancing
and mobile network environments, among the others. Specifically, within
the aforementioned context in Internet middleboxes and their control
mechanisms, the special issue will present tutorials, surveys and
original research articles (written in a tutorial manner readable by
non-specialists) that cover the following subjects, but not limited to:

* Middlebox-supported network architectures vs. other Internet evolution
alternatives (e.g., IPv6)
* Design and/or performance evaluation of middlebox software architectures
* Control and coordination across middleboxes and their traversal mechanisms
* Security, including authentication, authorization and accounting
issues with middlebox control/traversal mechanisms
* Scalability and performance studies of middlebox control/traversal
mechanisms
* Deployment scenarios and case studies (corporate, ISP, content
providers, mobile environments etc.) based on middleboxes
* Interaction and implications with other network protocols and components
* Interaction and implications with end-to-end applications and services
* Related standardization efforts

Manuscript Submission
=====================

With regard to both the content and formatting style of the submissions,
prospective contributors must follow the IEEE Network guidelines for
authors that can be found at
http://www.comsoc.org/pubs/net/ntwrk/authors.html. Submitted papers must
be original and must not be under current consideration for publication
in other venues. Authors should submit a PDF format of their complete
papers via http://www.edas.info/newPaper.php?c=6198.


Guest Editors
=============
Prof. Xiaoming Fu
Institute for Computer Science
University of Goettingen
Goettingen
Germany
Email: fu@cs.uni-goettingen.de

Martin Stiemerling
NEC Europe Laboratories
Network Research Division
Heidelberg
Germany
Email: stiemerling@netlab.nec.de

Prof. Henning Schulzrinne
Department of Computer Science
Columbia University
New York, NY
USA
Email: hgs@cs.columbia.edu





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Dear Martin and NATFW NSLP co-authors,


I have read the draft and have only few comments:

- First, I think the draft needs some editorial polishing and needs to 
become a bit more reader-friendly where possible. As already mentioned 
in some emails before, some sections are difficult to understand even 
with background knowledge in NATFW NSLP. Some more cross references to 
different sections within the draft itself or to sections in other 
drafts considered as background knowledge, e.g. GIST, could be helpful 
to make life easier for the reader.

- The solution described for the scenario "2.6 Both End Hosts Behind 
Same NAT" is not efficient. I guess you know what I am talking about 
here. All the traffic will go through the external gateway. I remember 
we had some discussions with Cedric about 4 years ago about using 
something like ICE (at that time ICE was pretty new, I think) in order 
to discover whether the peer is within the same network in order to 
perform direct signaling and route the traffic directly between the peers.

- The text in "C.4.  NSLP Handling of Twice-NAT" is a bit confusing. 
e.g. "The dynamic configuration of twice-NATs requires application level
    support, as stated in Section 2.5.  The NATFW NSLP cannot be used for
    configuring twice-NATs if application level support is needed."

does this mean that the NATFW NSLP does not supports twice-NATs and it 
is left to application layer support?

or "The NSLP is probably able to traverse the twice-NAT" (I guess with 
"probably" here, you mean it depends on whether the twice-NAT is NATFW 
NSLP aware or not. This could be clarified better).

- The text about CMS in the security section is a bit confusing:

"Additionally, security protection of certain
    payloads may be required between non-neighboring signaling entities
    and the Cryptographic Message Syntax (CMS) [14] might be a potential
    solution.  Payload protection using CMS is not described in this
    document."

This sounds like: "you could use CMS, but we are not sure if it will 
solve your problems, or we don't know even how to use it here, and which 
message parts you will need to protect".

I am not sure here, but I think that if you use CMS, you will use it to 
protect the authorizations tokens, so the use of CMS could be moved the 
NSLP authorization draft. What do you think?

Otherwise, I hope that the effort of several years will be fruiful and 
that we will have a successful protocol! :-)

Cheers and Merry Christmas,
  Ali





Martin Stiemerling wrote:
> Hi Jukka,
> 
> Thanks a lot for your review! I will go through the comments today and 
> come back if I need more information.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
>   Martin
> 
> Am 04.12.2007 um 23:06 schrieb Jukka MJ Manner:
> 
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have reviewed that draft. I don't have any major objections to the 
>> document, just some miscellaneous comments and clarification requests.
>>
>> Here goes:
>>
>> - p.6, bullet 1: at this point in the document, it is not clear to the 
>>   reader what the NSIS initiator/receiver are. Propose to use simpler 
>>   terminology at this early phase in the intro.
>>
>> - p.6, end of page: propose to clearly say wo sends which message, e.g.:
>>
>> "CREATE message: send by the data sender for..."
>>
>> "EXTERNAL message: used by data receiver to ..."
>>
>> Related comment: why abbreviate EXTERNAL to "EXT"? 
>> * None of the other message are abbreviated
>> * EXTERNAL is as long a word as "RESPONSE" (both abbreviated?)
>>
>> Suggest to drop the EXT-term
>>
>> Related to the above the document presents over and over again that 
>> EXTERNAL is EXT ("EXTERNAL (EXT)") and is a bit inconsistent in when to 
>> use EXTERNAL and when just EXT (both used here and there).
>>
>> - p.7.: s/body of the document, covers/body of the document cover/
>>
>> - p.23: s/inSection/in Section/
>>
>> - p.27: "if the node runs _it_ garbage collection cycle."? 
>>
>> - p.27: "appropriate error of class 'Protocol error' (0x1)": 0x1 is 
>>   Informational, ox3 is protocol error.
>>
>> - p.32: "is thus managed NSLP hop-by-hop"?
>>
>> - p.41: "session created by REA."?
>>
>> - p.41: "using CREATE Section 3.7.1" > "(see Section 3.7.1)"?
>>
>> - p.43: "if the like to aggregate"?
>>
>> - p.46, whole Section 3.7.6.1: should NR be actually DR? Including Figure 
>>   18?
>>
>> - P.46-47, Section 3.7.6.1: I don't really get this operation at all. 
>>   Sounds a bit complex to have the EXT-session trigger a CREATE-session. 
>>   Maybe some more discussion/description is needed to open up the 
>>   scenario. Also, the NATFW_NONCE sounds a bit wierd, somehow. In the QoS 
>>   NSLP, we have the same functionality, but it is called "session 
>> binding" 
>>   and uses a similar object where the content is the SID of the primary 
>>   flow. Achieves the same thing, and you can be sure there are no 
>>   collisions with nonces. Does the value need to be a random value? Or 
>>   could you perhaps re-use the QoS NSLP object since we have common 
>> object 
>>   repository anyway? The concept in the QoS NSLP session binding is that 
>>   the secondary session is valid as long as the primary session is.
>>
>> - Related to the above, p.48 (middle): if you have the "internal" 
>>   CREATE+NONCE session and also get the e2e CREATE session, do you run 
>>   both simultaneously? Or do you kill one of them? I guess you can't kill 
>>   the EXT-session, since you need the forwarding at the NAT? Perhaps this 
>>   needs some more description.
>>
>> - p.49: "back to NI according [to] the situation"
>>
>> - p.49: "NSLP node and the of the policy rule."?
>>
>> - p.51: Do the route changes really work as you describe? This may need 
>>   some thinking, and probably add text to the mobility draft.
>>
>> - p.51: s/and sends it/and send it/
>>
>> - Whole Section 4: the text talks about error cases and mandating "MUST" 
>>   to send various error messages? If you must always send error messages, 
>>   isn't this a use case for DoS attacks? I guess some words about when to 
>>   send error messages would be needed (rate limiting, etc.).
>>
>> - p.57 (top of page): "Further version of this memo may allow other 
>> values 
>>   for the 'sub_ports' field." I think suggestions like this should not be 
>>   in a draft going to WGLC.
>>
>> - p.58-60: there are a lot of error codes. Should somewhere be written 
>> how 
>>   and when these are used? Some of these are quite clear, but e.g.  I 
>>   don't understand Permanent failures 0x03, 0x05 and 0x06. Where would 
>>   these be used?
>>
>> - p.61, Section 4.2.7: where is this object used actually? text says 
>>   "possibly needed", sounds a bit wierd for a draft in WGLC. Is it 
>> needed, 
>>   and where/when/why? Should this be also available for IPv6?
>>
>> - p.62, 3rd line: "according [to] these rules:"
>>
>> - p.64, Sections 4.3.1 and 4.3.2: what are these "(O)" and "(M)"? 
>> Optional 
>>   and mandatory? Say it clearly.
>>
>> - p.64, Section 4.3.2: point c) as use case for EXT: you lost me here? 
>> Was 
>>   this presented earlier? Actually, in general about EXT, should it 
>> always 
>>   have the proxy bit P=1? What happens if I send an EXT message towards 
>>   the DS with P=0? Does the EXT reach the DS? What happens then?
>>
>> - p.67: "In Section 5.1 we describe [how] the ..."
>>
>> - p.73: s/located to the/located at the/
>>
>>
>>
>> Jukka
> 
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