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Hi all,

Luigi submitted this draft which is basically revised version of Erik's
earlier draft.
Please read it and post your comments on the list.

Regards,

Dirk & Behcet

On Fri, Jan 24, 2020 at 2:34 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A new version of I-D, draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Luigi Iannone and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name:           draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy
> Revision:       00
> Title:          Privacy issues in Identifier/Locator Separation Systems
> Document date:  2020-01-23
> Group:          Individual Submission
> Pages:          11
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy/
> Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00
> Htmlized:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy
>
>
> Abstract:
>    There exist several protocols and proposals that leverage on the
>    Identifier/Locator split paradigm, having some form of control plane
>    by which participating nodes can share their current Identifier-to-
>    Location information with their peers.  This document explores some
>    of the privacy considerations for such a type of system.
>
>
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Hi all,<div><br></div><div>Luigi submitted this draft whic=
h is basically revised version of Erik&#39;s earlier draft.</div><div>Pleas=
e read it and post your comments on the list.</div><div><br></div><div>Rega=
rds,</div><div><br></div><div>Dirk &amp; Behcet</div></div><br><div class=
=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Fri, Jan 24, 2020=
 at 2:34 AM &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org">internet-drafts=
@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=
=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;=
border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><br>
A new version of I-D, draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt<br>
has been successfully submitted by Luigi Iannone and posted to the<br>
IETF repository.<br>
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or Separation Systems<br>
Document date:=C2=A0 2020-01-23<br>
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k">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy/</a><br>
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<br>
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Abstract:<br>
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Thanks Joel for your comments. I am cc'ing it to the list.

We will work on it and hopefully come back with our replies/revised draft.

Regards,
Behcet

On Tue, Jan 28, 2020 at 2:23 PM Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:

> Reading through the draft, some observations occurred to me.  I hope
> they are helpful to you.
>
> Section 3.2.1 reads very strangely.  it seems to mix the need to secure
> access to IoT entities with the need to maintain privacy of something
> (the ID? the Locator?) of those devices.  When it says "there are very
> strong reasons..." I am left going "there are?" as this seems unmotivated.
>
> (I will admit at this point that I wonder if section 3 is actually
> useful.  It is not describing use ases for I/L separation.  It seems to
> be describing some sets of clients who might use I/L separation systems.
>   On the one hand, that set ought to be everything, in a "desired"
> state.  In another sense, most of the use cases that LISP is used for
> are not there. )
>
> The second sentence of 3.2.2 is not a sentence.  It appears to be a
> subject phrase.  And then I am left confused as to what challenge it is
> that needs to be solved for the use of end-to-end I/L separation in 5G.
> Other than industry desire to do so.
>
> Section 5.1 on Location privacy should probably have two caveats.  It
> should note that this assumes that identifiers are stable rather than
> mutating.  Second, it should probably repeat the note that there are
> other means of correlation which are very important for this use case.
> (Google and Facebook can correlate your location because you log in to
> them, and they get your locator.  No matter what you do with identifiers
> at the network layer.)  We need to be realistic about what we are trying
> to improve.
>
> I think sections 6 and 7 need to recognize the distinction between
> entities who need to be reached by arbitrary peers (servers) and
> entities that choose who they talk to (clients, UE, ...)  It may also
> want to talk about the concommitant need to share ones locator /
> identifier with communication peers.
>
> Yours,
> Joel
>
>
> On 1/28/2020 12:36 PM, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:
> > Hi Joel,
> >
> > We published this draft last week, being a recognized expert in the
> > area, I would like to ask  your comments please.
> > It seems like you are not on pidloc mailing list so you may not have
> > received this email below however you may send your comments to the list
> > we will approve your post.
> >
> > Regards,
> > Behcet & Dirk
> >
> > ---------- Forwarded message ---------
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> > Date: Fri, Jan 24, 2020 at 2:34 AM
> > Subject: New Version Notification for draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt
> > To: Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net <mailto:ggx@gigix.net>>, Behcet
> > Sarikaya <sarikaya@ieee.org <mailto:sarikaya@ieee.org>>, Erik Nordmark
> > <nordmark@sonic.net <mailto:nordmark@sonic.net>>, Dirk von Hugo
> > <dirk.von-hugo@telekom.de <mailto:dirk.von-hugo@telekom.de>>
> >
> >
> >
> > A new version of I-D, draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt
> > has been successfully submitted by Luigi Iannone and posted to the
> > IETF repository.
> >
> > Name:           draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy
> > Revision:       00
> > Title:          Privacy issues in Identifier/Locator Separation Systems
> > Document date:  2020-01-23
> > Group:          Individual Submission
> > Pages:          11
> > URL:
> > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt
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> >
> > Abstract:
> >     There exist several protocols and proposals that leverage on the
> >     Identifier/Locator split paradigm, having some form of control plane
> >     by which participating nodes can share their current Identifier-to-
> >     Location information with their peers.  This document explores some
> >     of the privacy considerations for such a type of system.
> >
> >
> >
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div dir=3D"ltr">Thanks Joel for your comments. I am cc&#3=
9;ing it to the list.<div><br></div><div>We will work on it and hopefully c=
ome back with our replies/revised draft.</div><div><br></div><div>Regards,<=
/div><div>Behcet</div></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr"=
 class=3D"gmail_attr">On Tue, Jan 28, 2020 at 2:23 PM Joel M. Halpern &lt;<=
a href=3D"mailto:jmh@joelhalpern.com">jmh@joelhalpern.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br=
></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;=
border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204=
,204);padding-left:1ex">Reading through the draft, some observations occurr=
ed to me.=C2=A0 I hope <br>
they are helpful to you.<br>
<br>
Section 3.2.1 reads very strangely.=C2=A0 it seems to mix the need to secur=
e <br>
access to IoT entities with the need to maintain privacy of something <br>
(the ID? the Locator?) of those devices.=C2=A0 When it says &quot;there are=
 very <br>
strong reasons...&quot; I am left going &quot;there are?&quot; as this seem=
s unmotivated.<br>
<br>
(I will admit at this point that I wonder if section 3 is actually <br>
useful.=C2=A0 It is not describing use ases for I/L separation.=C2=A0 It se=
ems to <br>
be describing some sets of clients who might use I/L separation systems. <b=
r>
=C2=A0 On the one hand, that set ought to be everything, in a &quot;desired=
&quot; <br>
state.=C2=A0 In another sense, most of the use cases that LISP is used for =
<br>
are not there. )<br>
<br>
The second sentence of 3.2.2 is not a sentence.=C2=A0 It appears to be a <b=
r>
subject phrase.=C2=A0 And then I am left confused as to what challenge it i=
s <br>
that needs to be solved for the use of end-to-end I/L separation in 5G. <br=
>
Other than industry desire to do so.<br>
<br>
Section 5.1 on Location privacy should probably have two caveats.=C2=A0 It =
<br>
should note that this assumes that identifiers are stable rather than <br>
mutating.=C2=A0 Second, it should probably repeat the note that there are <=
br>
other means of correlation which are very important for this use case. <br>
(Google and Facebook can correlate your location because you log in to <br>
them, and they get your locator.=C2=A0 No matter what you do with identifie=
rs <br>
at the network layer.)=C2=A0 We need to be realistic about what we are tryi=
ng <br>
to improve.<br>
<br>
I think sections 6 and 7 need to recognize the distinction between <br>
entities who need to be reached by arbitrary peers (servers) and <br>
entities that choose who they talk to (clients, UE, ...)=C2=A0 It may also =
<br>
want to talk about the concommitant need to share ones locator / <br>
identifier with communication peers.<br>
<br>
Yours,<br>
Joel<br>
<br>
<br>
On 1/28/2020 12:36 PM, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:<br>
&gt; Hi Joel,<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; We published this draft last week, being a recognized expert in the <b=
r>
&gt; area, I would like to ask =C2=A0your comments please.<br>
&gt; It seems like you are not on pidloc mailing list so you may not have <=
br>
&gt; received this email below however you may send your comments to the li=
st <br>
&gt; we will approve your post.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Regards,<br>
&gt; Behcet &amp; Dirk<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; ---------- Forwarded message ---------<br>
&gt; From: &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank=
">internet-drafts@ietf.org</a> &lt;mailto:<a href=3D"mailto:internet-drafts=
@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">internet-drafts@ietf.org</a>&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt; Date: Fri, Jan 24, 2020 at 2:34 AM<br>
&gt; Subject: New Version Notification for draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.=
txt<br>
&gt; To: Luigi Iannone &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ggx@gigix.net" target=3D"_blan=
k">ggx@gigix.net</a> &lt;mailto:<a href=3D"mailto:ggx@gigix.net" target=3D"=
_blank">ggx@gigix.net</a>&gt;&gt;, Behcet <br>
&gt; Sarikaya &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:sarikaya@ieee.org" target=3D"_blank">sa=
rikaya@ieee.org</a> &lt;mailto:<a href=3D"mailto:sarikaya@ieee.org" target=
=3D"_blank">sarikaya@ieee.org</a>&gt;&gt;, Erik Nordmark <br>
&gt; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:nordmark@sonic.net" target=3D"_blank">nordmark@s=
onic.net</a> &lt;mailto:<a href=3D"mailto:nordmark@sonic.net" target=3D"_bl=
ank">nordmark@sonic.net</a>&gt;&gt;, Dirk von Hugo <br>
&gt; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:dirk.von-hugo@telekom.de" target=3D"_blank">dirk=
.von-hugo@telekom.de</a> &lt;mailto:<a href=3D"mailto:dirk.von-hugo@telekom=
.de" target=3D"_blank">dirk.von-hugo@telekom.de</a>&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; A new version of I-D, draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt<br>
&gt; has been successfully submitted by Luigi Iannone and posted to the<br>
&gt; IETF repository.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Name:=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0draft-iannone-pidloc-pri=
vacy<br>
&gt; Revision:=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A000<br>
&gt; Title:=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Privacy issues in Identifier/=
Locator Separation Systems<br>
&gt; Document date:=C2=A0 2020-01-23<br>
&gt; Group:=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Individual Submission<br>
&gt; Pages:=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 11<br>
&gt; URL: <br>
&gt; <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-iannone-pidloc-p=
rivacy-00.txt" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/in=
ternet-drafts/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00.txt</a><br>
&gt; Status: <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-iannone-pidl=
oc-privacy/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.=
org/doc/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy/</a><br>
&gt; Htmlized: <a href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-iannone-pidloc-=
privacy-00" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://tools.ietf.org/htm=
l/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy-00</a><br>
&gt; Htmlized: <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ianno=
ne-pidloc-privacy" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker=
.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-iannone-pidloc-privacy</a><br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Abstract:<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0There exist several protocols and proposals that le=
verage on the<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Identifier/Locator split paradigm, having some form=
 of control plane<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0by which participating nodes can share their curren=
t Identifier-to-<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Location information with their peers.=C2=A0 This d=
ocument explores some<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0of the privacy considerations for such a type of sy=
stem.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of subm=
ission<br>
&gt; until the htmlized version and diff are available at <a href=3D"http:/=
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r>
&gt; &lt;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_bl=
ank">http://tools.ietf.org</a>&gt;.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; The IETF Secretariat<br>
&gt; <br>
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