Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92)

From: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 18 Dec 2016 20:12:29 -0800

The abstract was just a repetition of the introduction, which isn't really appropriate.  An abstract doesn't need rationale and all the padding, it should just explain the purpose of the document.  QUIC is conceptually very simple, let's capitalize on that.

I wanted to fix the first sentence of the intro to avoid duplication, but it really is a concise, well-constructed intro.  It could benefit from being split into smaller pieces though.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/92

-- Commit Summary --

  * Shorten the abstract
  * Small digestible chunks

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (31)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/92.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/92.diff

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