Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 8de902: editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me ...

From: Jana Iyengar <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 23 Jan 2020 14:25:06 -0800

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  Author: mirjak <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-01-22 (Wed, 22 Jan 2020)

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  editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me (recovery)

So here is an alternative proposal. However I also wonder why this paragraph is a MUST requirement while the previous statement (avoiding multiple samples of the same packet) is only a SHOULD? I would see it rather the other way around or both MUSTs.

  Commit: d3cc03174ba5f0a7d7bbcc451d08c920a0fdf9d1
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  Author: mirjak <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-01-22 (Wed, 22 Jan 2020)

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  English hard be...

  Commit: f8162becbde33a2e11f43f303b511c3dad949ade
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  Author: mirjak <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

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  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

Co-Authored-By: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>

  Commit: 81f10dc8a143f6da754daab8690256c0597a6d07
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/81f10dc8a143f6da754daab8690256c0597a6d07
  Author: mirjak <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

Co-Authored-By: Jana Iyengar <[email-masked]>

  Commit: 50db5c9fed482f532c38a59115fc22f3e9557850
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/50db5c9fed482f532c38a59115fc22f3e9557850
  Author: Jana Iyengar <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #3383 from mirjak/patch-8

editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me (recovery)

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