Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] ec591d: Update draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

From: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 09 Jun 2020 00:20:23 -0700

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-25 (Mon, 25 May 2020)

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This set of changes seeks to:
* Complete the transfer of DPLPMTUD text from the DPLPMTUD-RFC-to-be to this ID.
* Separate PMTUD from DPLPMTUD where they differ.
* Seek consistent language for packet sizes within these sections.

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
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That would be good, the change was unintended.

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
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I like that:-)

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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This looks good

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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This looks good

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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This looks good

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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This looks good

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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That would be OK. DPLPMTUD only handles PTB messages.

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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Typo fixed.

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  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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Fix for /application data/

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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Seems correct

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  Author: Gorry Fairhurst <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-26 (Tue, 26 May 2020)

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Typo fix

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  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-05-27 (Wed, 27 May 2020)

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  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
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  Move section back where it belongs

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  PING AND PADDING are not it

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  Add a number for clarity

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  Use long header packets generically and explain why

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Understood, and corrected.

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Changes to resolve description of probe packets and need to explain the maximum size.

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  Date:   2020-05-28 (Thu, 28 May 2020)

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  Merge branch 'patch-2' of https://github.com/gorryfair/base-drafts into dplpmtud-merge

Integrate latest changes from the source

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  IP packet size is 1280

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  Remove duplicate text

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  Remove has 1-RTT key clause as redundant

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  Editorial comments based on Gorry's feedback

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  Remove probing clause

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  Add suggested text

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  Add a term, use it

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  Many more changes based on review

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  Editorial tweaks

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  Use maximum packet size rather than message size

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  Merge pull request #3702 from quicwg/dplpmtud-merge

DPLPMTU merge tweaks

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