Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 9719e0: Second set of editorial nits

From: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 18 Jun 2020 21:00:46 -0700

Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: 9719e067e90469dad09c0bf3d6e86bc1e10c37cb
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/9719e067e90469dad09c0bf3d6e86bc1e10c37cb
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-06-17 (Wed, 17 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Second set of editorial nits

@gorryfair had some useful feedback in #3735.

This doesn't address the following items as numbered in the issue:

(2) Because the fix to (1) seems adequate by my reckoning.  That
addresses the question of considering the impact on other network users.

(6) This doesn't appear to be a problem.  It might be a formatting
issue, with the URL not appearing.

(7) This is addressed in the recent draft by adding [Section
10.2.2](https://quicwg.org/base-drafts/draft-ietf-quic-transport.html#name-deferring-idle-timeout)

(9) and (11) I can't find the rendering glitch mentioned.

The rest of these are good.

Closes #3735.

  Commit: 8f453ff92b9ba3439c654c5b2681c3ddc7d5a399
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/8f453ff92b9ba3439c654c5b2681c3ddc7d5a399
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-06-18 (Thu, 18 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Capacity

  Commit: 1ec60fab50a84aa0f50c68fce3de8e700587d038
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/1ec60fab50a84aa0f50c68fce3de8e700587d038
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-06-19 (Fri, 19 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  These need wrapping :|

Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <[email-masked]>

  Commit: 5270a60a884891607a2d8012bcd7bc6ee4f5f3c4
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/5270a60a884891607a2d8012bcd7bc6ee4f5f3c4
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-06-19 (Fri, 19 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Wrap

  Commit: 72b0f3722299aec92f18dea121f8d960ccd19682
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/72b0f3722299aec92f18dea121f8d960ccd19682
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-06-19 (Fri, 19 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #3770 from quicwg/gorry-nits-2

Second set of editorial nits

Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/10fccc87bb52...72b0f3722299