Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] a38e49: Be clearer about protections

From: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 04 Aug 2020 16:00:25 -0700

Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: a38e49b3e25977f9dea8f0bc099e542f04004d5a
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/a38e49b3e25977f9dea8f0bc099e542f04004d5a
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-14 (Tue, 14 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Be clearer about protections

This breaks down some of the packet protection text in favour of more
specific language about the protections provided.  By preference,
this talks about integrity protection and confidentiality protection as
it relates to those packets that are protected using keys derived from
TLS.  For Initial packets this means avoid use of "packet protection" as
much as possible (I'm sure that I have missed some of these).  The same
for Retry.

This required some additional framing, but it wasn't too intrusive.
Most of the changes are cosmetic.

Closes #3887.

  Commit: 25264d07790fcb63f08d3400a9bb61aa6a4785c2
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/25264d07790fcb63f08d3400a9bb61aa6a4785c2
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-14 (Tue, 14 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md

  Log Message:
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  First initial

  Commit: 83e840eb0fdef5f972306477b8b9cc62fe355bb4
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/83e840eb0fdef5f972306477b8b9cc62fe355bb4
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-15 (Wed, 15 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md

  Log Message:
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  first Initial

Co-authored-by: Mike Bishop <[email-masked]>

  Commit: 5782bf9aead14fee58252a587376e56bf62abf91
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/5782bf9aead14fee58252a587376e56bf62abf91
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-16 (Thu, 16 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-http.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge branch 'master' into less-protection

  Commit: c78921e5d3ff5d5ea37a398eccd8afd74872e71b
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/c78921e5d3ff5d5ea37a398eccd8afd74872e71b
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-16 (Thu, 16 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md

  Log Message:
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  Use text from master for this paragraph

  Commit: 1db24ca405c391ad6044260aeb196626b1c716d3
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/1db24ca405c391ad6044260aeb196626b1c716d3
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-16 (Thu, 16 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md

  Log Message:
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  Trailing whitespace, gah

  Commit: 05cb8f2eb7027a63f4697fccec69a18f194a405b
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/05cb8f2eb7027a63f4697fccec69a18f194a405b
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-20 (Mon, 20 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Lots of review comments

These will need to be wrapped

Co-authored-by: ianswett <[email-masked]>
Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <[email-masked]>
Co-authored-by: Kazuho Oku <[email-masked]>

  Commit: bca2743083bca2e8a7b85abb392b85675798c8fe
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/bca2743083bca2e8a7b85abb392b85675798c8fe
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-20 (Mon, 20 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  wrap

  Commit: 92d1701ac1e5b1554dc1df4abf0c7af3a5b0d403
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/92d1701ac1e5b1554dc1df4abf0c7af3a5b0d403
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-21 (Tue, 21 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Moor sugestions

Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <[email-masked]>

  Commit: 00d90fccb3fb8dfb3e831198629a63b0399052ad
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/00d90fccb3fb8dfb3e831198629a63b0399052ad
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-21 (Tue, 21 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Some more rearrangement

  Commit: 645d6f8be9824db6909f2a02131c21a690a30809
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/645d6f8be9824db6909f2a02131c21a690a30809
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-21 (Tue, 21 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Cleaner

  Commit: 7f190d7ec7885c46bc0a4e40a3535870af006b6d
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7f190d7ec7885c46bc0a4e40a3535870af006b6d
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-07-21 (Tue, 21 Jul 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Split sentence; reword

  Commit: b4f08d1c60e31d359ace41b5f477009deaeb9e45
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/b4f08d1c60e31d359ace41b5f477009deaeb9e45
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2020-08-05 (Wed, 05 Aug 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #3900 from quicwg/less-protection

Be clearer about protections

Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/5d255962f65a...b4f08d1c60e3