Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02

From: Lou Berger <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2017 18:39:12 -0400

Thanks for the comments, these should be resolved in the next rev.

Lou

On 5/8/2017 2:11 AM, Ravi Singh wrote:
>
> Hi
>
> I had been designated as the RTG-DIR reviewer for this draft.
>
> I’ve reviewed the same.
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>  
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> This draft does a decent job of defining the logical-network-element
> module.
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>  
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> Some minor comments that should be addressed:
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> a.       Section 1.1: refers to expired drafts.
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> b.      Some TBDs need to be populated:
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>                                        i.            Security
> considerations section
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>                                      ii.            An error-code in
> section 6
>
>  
>
> Regards
>
> Ravi
>
>  
>
>
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