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From: Gopakumar C <gopakumar.c@huawei.com>
To: Bharat Joshi <bharat_joshi@infosys.com>, "rtgwg@ietf.org" <rtgwg@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: A query on RIPv2
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Dear Bharat,

In the scenario that you mentioned RIP packet will have two RTEs after the =
RIP header, first one will be authentication RTE and second one will be FUL=
L table request RTE with address family identifier as 0. This may be follow=
ed by authentication trailer depending on the authentication scheme selecte=
d.

RFC section 3.9.1 first states the general format of RIP Version 2 request =
message. Even though authentication is present, there is only one RTE (full=
 table RTE) other than authentication as authentication RTE doesn't convey =
routing information.

Hope this helps.

Note: I think this is not correct forum to discuss this issue. I am not sur=
e where you can post it as RIP mailing list is not active anymore.

Regards,
-Gopakumar

-----Original Message-----
From: rtgwg-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:rtgwg-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of B=
harat Joshi
Sent: Tuesday, December 25, 2012 4:02 PM
To: rtgwg@ietf.org
Cc: Bharat Joshi
Subject: A query on RIPv2

Hi All,

     I came across some text in RFC 2453 (RIPv2) which has confused me. It =
would be great if someone can clarify this for me. I searched the net and l=
ooked through the errata but could not find any reference to this.

In section 3.9.1 of RFC 2453 (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2453#section-3.=
9.1), in second para, following text is available:

<quote>

   There is one special case.  If there is exactly
   one entry in the request, and it has an address family identifier of
   zero and a metric of infinity (i.e., 16), then this is a request to
   send the entire routing table.

<unquote>

In section 4.1 of same RFC (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2453#section-4.1)=
, in first para, following text is available:

<quote>

   If the Address Family Identifier of the first (and
   only the first) entry in the message is 0xFFFF, then the remainder of
   the entry contains the authentication.

<unquote>

    Now what has confused me is that if a router is configured to use authe=
ntication, how should its 'request' message for full routing table look? Sh=
ould it go without authentication information or with authentication inform=
ation?

    If it goes with authentication information then it is not conforming to=
 the statement of 3.9.1. If it goes without authentication information then=
 it is not conforming to the user configuration and also there may be secur=
ity issues.

Regards,
Bharat

PS: I am currently not subscribed to RTG working group mailing list, so ple=
ase reply all so that I can get your reply.


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To: Gopakumar C <gopakumar.c@huawei.com>, "rtgwg@ietf.org" <rtgwg@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: A query on RIPv2
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Dear Gopakumar,

       I understand what you are saying. In fact, I tested some vendor's be=
haviour to understand how other people have implemented it.

       When authentication is enabled, there should be 2 route entries for =
things to work but I still feel that the RFC is not clear enough on this. I=
n fact, in my search, I found that Quagga has issues with this.

Regards,
Bharat
________________________________________
From: Gopakumar C [gopakumar.c@huawei.com]
Sent: Wednesday, January 02, 2013 11:05 AM
To: Bharat Joshi; rtgwg@ietf.org
Subject: RE: A query on RIPv2

Dear Bharat,

In the scenario that you mentioned RIP packet will have two RTEs after the =
RIP header, first one will be authentication RTE and second one will be FUL=
L table request RTE with address family identifier as 0. This may be follow=
ed by authentication trailer depending on the authentication scheme selecte=
d.

RFC section 3.9.1 first states the general format of RIP Version 2 request =
message. Even though authentication is present, there is only one RTE (full=
 table RTE) other than authentication as authentication RTE doesn't convey =
routing information.

Hope this helps.

Note: I think this is not correct forum to discuss this issue. I am not sur=
e where you can post it as RIP mailing list is not active anymore.

Regards,
-Gopakumar

-----Original Message-----
From: rtgwg-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:rtgwg-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of B=
harat Joshi
Sent: Tuesday, December 25, 2012 4:02 PM
To: rtgwg@ietf.org
Cc: Bharat Joshi
Subject: A query on RIPv2

Hi All,

     I came across some text in RFC 2453 (RIPv2) which has confused me. It =
would be great if someone can clarify this for me. I searched the net and l=
ooked through the errata but could not find any reference to this.

In section 3.9.1 of RFC 2453 (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2453#section-3.=
9.1), in second para, following text is available:

<quote>

   There is one special case.  If there is exactly
   one entry in the request, and it has an address family identifier of
   zero and a metric of infinity (i.e., 16), then this is a request to
   send the entire routing table.

<unquote>

In section 4.1 of same RFC (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2453#section-4.1)=
, in first para, following text is available:

<quote>

   If the Address Family Identifier of the first (and
   only the first) entry in the message is 0xFFFF, then the remainder of
   the entry contains the authentication.

<unquote>

    Now what has confused me is that if a router is configured to use authe=
ntication, how should its 'request' message for full routing table look? Sh=
ould it go without authentication information or with authentication inform=
ation?

    If it goes with authentication information then it is not conforming to=
 the statement of 3.9.1. If it goes without authentication information then=
 it is not conforming to the user configuration and also there may be secur=
ity issues.

Regards,
Bharat

PS: I am currently not subscribed to RTG working group mailing list, so ple=
ase reply all so that I can get your reply.


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts director=
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 This draft is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group Working Group =
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	Title           : Framework for Loop-free convergence using oFIB
	Author(s)       : Mike Shand
                          Stewart Bryant
                          Stefano Previdi
                          Clarence Filsfils
                          Pierre Francois
                          Olivier Bonaventure
	Filename        : draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib-08.txt
	Pages           : 26
	Date            : 2013-01-04

Abstract:
   This document describes the framework of a mechanism for use in
   conjunction with link state routing protocols which prevents the
   transient loops which would otherwise occur during topology changes.
   It does this by correctly sequencing the forwarding information base
   (FIB) updates on the routers.

   This mechanism can be used in the case of non-urgent link or node
   shutdowns and restarts or link metric changes.  It can also be used
   in conjunction with a fast re-route mechanism which converts a sudden
   link or node failure into a non-urgent topology change.  This is
   possible where a complete repair path is provided for all affected
   destinations.

   After a non-urgent topology change, each router computes a rank that
   defines the time at which it can safely update its FIB.  A method for
   accelerating this loop-free convergence process by the use of
   completion messages is also described.

   The technology described in this document has been subject to
   extensive simulation using real network topologies and costs, and
   pathological convergence behaviour.  However mechanism described in
   this document are purely illustrative of the general approach and do
   not constitute a protocol specification.  The document represents a
   snapshot of the work of the Routing Area Working Group at the time of
   publication and is published as a document of record.  Further work
   is needed before implementation or deployment.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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There's also a htmlized version available at:
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The IESG has received a request from the Routing Area Working Group WG
(rtgwg) to consider the following document:
- 'A Framework for IP and MPLS Fast Reroute Using Not-via Addresses'
  <draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-notvia-addresses-10.txt> as Informational RFC

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Abstract

   This document presents a framework for providing fast reroute in an
   IP or MPLS network through encapsulation and forwarding to "not-via"
   addresses.  The general approach described uses a single level of
   encapsulation and could be used to protect unicast, multicast, and
   LDP traffic against link, router, and shared risk group failure,
   regardless of network topology and metrics.

   The mechanisms presented in this document are purely illustrative of
   the general approach and do not constitute a protocol specification.
   The document represents a snapshot of the work of the Routing Area
   Working Group at the time of publication and is published as a
   document of record.  Further work is needed before implementation or
   deployment.


The file can be obtained via
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The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:

   http://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1794/
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The IESG has received a request from the Routing Area Working Group WG
(rtgwg) to consider the following document:
- 'Framework for Loop-free convergence using oFIB'
  <draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib-08.txt> as Informational RFC

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Abstract

   This document describes the framework of a mechanism for use in
   conjunction with link state routing protocols which prevents the
   transient loops which would otherwise occur during topology changes.
   It does this by correctly sequencing the forwarding information base
   (FIB) updates on the routers.

   This mechanism can be used in the case of non-urgent link or node
   shutdowns and restarts or link metric changes.  It can also be used
   in conjunction with a fast re-route mechanism which converts a sudden
   link or node failure into a non-urgent topology change.  This is
   possible where a complete repair path is provided for all affected
   destinations.

   After a non-urgent topology change, each router computes a rank that
   defines the time at which it can safely update its FIB.  A method for
   accelerating this loop-free convergence process by the use of
   completion messages is also described.

   The technology described in this document has been subject to
   extensive simulation using real network topologies and costs, and
   pathological convergence behaviour.  However mechanism described in
   this document are purely illustrative of the general approach and do
   not constitute a protocol specification.  The document represents a
   snapshot of the work of the Routing Area Working Group at the time of
   publication and is published as a document of record.  Further work
   is needed before implementation or deployment.

The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib/ballot/


The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:

   http://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/875/

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hi alvaro,

i see now the disclosure when i use the IPR search function - e.g.
=
https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?option=3Ddocument_search&id_docum=
ent_tag=3Ddraft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa
thanks for fixing this.

what is still broken is the IPR column (=3Dempty) in the rtgwg master =
page.

http://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/rtgwg/

thanks,

/hannes

On Dec 19, 2012, at 6:29 PM, Alvaro Retana (aretana) wrote:

> Just to close the loop..  This issue has been fixed and the IPR now =
shows up.
>=20
> Alvaro.
>=20
> On 12/12/12 7:09 AM, "Stewart Bryant (stbryant)" <stbryant@cisco.com> =
wrote:
>=20
> There was a declaration against  draft-shand-remote-lfa-0,
> but the chairs did not set the replacement status correctly
> when draft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa-00 was published, so=20
> the new draft did not automatically inherit the existing
> IPR disclosure.
>=20
> Please can the chairs email the secretariat and request
> that they correct the meta-data so that the WG draft draft=20
> picks up IPR disclosure 1770 in the tracker.



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Hmm..I see.

Let me look into it.  The drafts are linked (as in one replaced the
other), but the "forwarding" of the IPR seems not to have worked.

Thanks!

Alvaro.

On 1/25/13 11:16 AM, "Hannes Gredler" <hannes@juniper.net> wrote:

>hi alvaro,
>
>i see now the disclosure when i use the IPR search function - e.g.
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?option=3Ddocument_search&id_docum=
en
>t_tag=3Ddraft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa
>thanks for fixing this.
>
>what is still broken is the IPR column (=3Dempty) in the rtgwg master page=
.
>
>http://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/rtgwg/
>
>thanks,
>
>/hannes
>
>On Dec 19, 2012, at 6:29 PM, Alvaro Retana (aretana) wrote:
>
>> Just to close the loop..  This issue has been fixed and the IPR now
>>shows up.
>>=20
>> Alvaro.
>>=20
>> On 12/12/12 7:09 AM, "Stewart Bryant (stbryant)" <stbryant@cisco.com>
>>wrote:
>>=20
>> There was a declaration against  draft-shand-remote-lfa-0,
>> but the chairs did not set the replacement status correctly
>> when draft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa-00 was published, so
>> the new draft did not automatically inherit the existing
>> IPR disclosure.
>>=20
>> Please can the chairs email the secretariat and request
>> that they correct the meta-data so that the WG draft draft
>> picks up IPR disclosure 1770 in the tracker.
>
>


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Looks OK here - does one of us have a caching problem?

Can you provide the exact path that fails so we can get it fixed.

Stewart

On 25/01/2013 16:16, Hannes Gredler wrote:
> hi alvaro,
>
> i see now the disclosure when i use the IPR search function - e.g.
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?option=document_search&id_document_tag=draft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa
> thanks for fixing this.
>
> what is still broken is the IPR column (=empty) in the rtgwg master page.
>
> http://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/rtgwg/
>
> thanks,
>
> /hannes
>
> On Dec 19, 2012, at 6:29 PM, Alvaro Retana (aretana) wrote:
>
>> Just to close the loop..  This issue has been fixed and the IPR now shows up.
>>
>> Alvaro.
>>
>> On 12/12/12 7:09 AM, "Stewart Bryant (stbryant)" <stbryant@cisco.com> wrote:
>>
>> There was a declaration against  draft-shand-remote-lfa-0,
>> but the chairs did not set the replacement status correctly
>> when draft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa-00 was published, so
>> the new draft did not automatically inherit the existing
>> IPR disclosure.
>>
>> Please can the chairs email the secretariat and request
>> that they correct the meta-data so that the WG draft draft
>> picks up IPR disclosure 1770 in the tracker.
>
>


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On 1/25/13 12:58 PM, "Stewart Bryant (stbryant)" <stbryant@cisco.com>
wrote:

>Looks OK here - does one of us have a caching problem?
>
>Can you provide the exact path that fails so we can get it fixed.

Stewart:

I see it wrong too.

1. https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/rtgwg/  Doesn't show anything in the
IPR column.

2. http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa-01  Doesn't have
an IPR option at the top (as does
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shand-remote-lfa-01)

3.=20
https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?option=3Ddocument_search&id_docume=
nt
_tag=3Ddraft-ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa  Does show that there is IPR on a
"related" document..

I can follow up with the Secretariat, but let me know if you are so we
don't duplicate.

Thanks!

Alvaro.


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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. Th=
e Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts=
 as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on spec=
ial request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Rout=
ing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see htt=
p://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it wo=
uld be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Ca=
ll comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion=
 or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-notvia-addresses-10
Reviewer: Ross Callon
Review Date: January 28, 2013
IETF LC End Date: January 31, 2013
Intended Status: informational

Summary:  This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits th=
at should be considered prior to publication.

Comments:

Generally this document is very well written and is very readable. I have o=
nly very minor comments that I think that you should consider prior to publ=
ication.

Major Issues:  No major issues found.

Minor Issues:

The first paragraph of 3.2 is a bit imprecise. It says that there are advan=
tages of using not-via in combination with LFA, but then two of the three a=
dvantages cited don't actually apply to the combination, but only to using =
LFA without not-via (which of course has the disadvantage of not offering c=
omplete coverage, as is discussed in the next paragraph).

Up until section 4.1, the document pretty much reads as if we are talking a=
bout node protection. 4.1 then just sort of forgets (or generalizes) this a=
nd jumps into options for both node protection and link protection. I think=
 that it is appropriate for section 3 to read the way that it currently doe=
s, since it is an overview and does a good job of introducing the technique=
 without confusing the reader with complexities (which are appropriately co=
vered later in the document). To me this implies that somewhere in section =
4, prior to the current section 4.1, you might want a brief discussion of n=
ode protection versus link protection. You might consider adding something =
like:

  In general it may be difficult for a router to quickly distinguish betwee=
n
  link failure and node failure. For example in figure 1 node S might see
  the link to node P suddenly totally fail. In general it is impossible to
  immediately determine whether node P has failed or if the link from S to =
P
  has failed (in some cases link layer indications might give information
  regarding what is going on, and the updates to link state packets from
  node P or from all neighbors of node P will eventually clarify what has
  failed once received and processed). For this reason it is generally
  safer to assume that node P has failed and where possible reroute
  traffic to the next node downstream from P. However, there may be cases
  where this is impossible. For example some destinations might be only
  reachable via node P, and in some topologies the failure of node P may
  partition the network. For this reason we need to consider both node and
  link failures.

Returning to section 4.1, I think that it would be a bit clearer if the las=
t sentence of the first paragraph were its own paragraph. This would cause =
4.1 to start with a general discussion, then have a paragraph about link pr=
otection, then have a paragraph about node protection.

The last sentence of section 4.1 is imprecise. It currently states: "In the=
 case of link protection this simply means that the advertisement from P to=
 S is suppressed, with the result that S and all other nodes compute a rout=
e to Ps which doesn't traverse S, as required". However, this does not actu=
ally compute a route that is guaranteed to not traverse node S, it computes=
 a route that does not traverse the link from S to P. The sentence should r=
ead: "In the case of link protection this simply means that the advertiseme=
nt from P to S is suppressed, with the result that S and all other nodes co=
mpute a route to Ps which doesn't traverse the link from S to P, as require=
d".

Section 5.1, second paragraph: "ANY failure" should be "ANY single failure"=
.

Section 6.1: At first glance it seemed somewhat drastic to have a MUST assu=
me that all other links of the SRLG have failed. After reading the entire s=
ection and thinking about this for a while, I have come to the conclusion t=
hat you are correct. However, I am wondering whether just a bit more explan=
ation might be useful. I am therefore wondering about additional explanatio=
n so that the first paragraph of section 6.1 might read:

   A Shared Risk Link Group (SRLG) is a set of links whose failure can
   be caused by a single action such as a conduit cut or line card
   failure.  When repairing the failure of a link that is a member of an
   SRLG, it is not immediately known whether the entire group has failed
   or only that link. In order to avoid multiple problems as explained
   below, it MUST be assumed that all the other links that are also
   members of the SRLG have also failed.  Consequently, any repair path
   MUST be computed to avoid not just the adjacent link, but also all
   the links which are members of the same SRLG.

Nit:

At first glance section 3.1 seems a bit terse. I am undecided whether it wo=
uld be worthwhile to add a bit more explanation. The current text is clear =
enough to one well versed in the various routing technologies and what I ha=
ve been able to think of as possible additional text seems almost too obvio=
us. As an example the first paragraph could be added to, to read:

   A router can use an equal cost multi-path (ECMP) repair in place of a
   not-via repair. For example, if a router has multiple equal cost next ho=
ps
   to a particular destination, and the link to one fails, it just forwards=
 all
   traffic to the other equal cost next hop(s) without using not-via.

Similarly the second paragraph could be added to, to read:

   A router computing a not-via repair path MAY subject the repair to
   ECMP. For example in figure 1 there may be multiple equal cost paths
   from S to Bp, each of which avoids node P. Since not-via encapsulates
   a packet to Bp, equal cost multipath will work in the normal way for
   computing and using paths from S to Bp.

Again these updates almost seem too trivial, so I have included this sugges=
tion under "nits" and will leave it to the discretion of the authors whethe=
r they want to make any changes.


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<div>Hello, </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draf=
t. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related d=
rafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on=
 special request. The purpose of
the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more informatio=
n about the Routing Directorate, please see
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html">http://www.ie=
tf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html</a> </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, =
it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF La=
st Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discu=
ssion or by updating the draft.
</div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-notvia-addresses-10</div>
<div>Reviewer: Ross Callon </div>
<div>Review Date: January 28, 2013</div>
<div>IETF LC End Date: January 31, 2013</div>
<div>Intended Status: informational&nbsp; </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Summary:&nbsp; This document is basically ready for publication, but h=
as nits that should be considered prior to publication.</div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Comments: </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Generally this document is very well written and is very readable. I h=
ave only very minor comments that I think that you should consider prior to=
 publication. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Major Issues:&nbsp; No major issues found. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Minor Issues: </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>The first paragraph of 3.2 is a bit imprecise. It says that there are =
advantages of using not-via in combination with LFA, but then two of the th=
ree advantages cited don&#8217;t actually apply to the combination, but onl=
y to using LFA without not-via (which
of course has the disadvantage of not offering complete coverage, as is dis=
cussed in the next paragraph). </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Up until section 4.1, the document pretty much reads as if we are talk=
ing about node protection. 4.1 then just sort of forgets (or generalizes) t=
his and jumps into options for both node protection and link protection. I =
think that it is appropriate for
section 3 to read the way that it currently does, since it is an overview a=
nd does a good job of introducing the technique without confusing the reade=
r with complexities (which are appropriately covered later in the document)=
. To me this implies that somewhere
in section 4, prior to the current section 4.1, you might want a brief disc=
ussion of node protection versus link protection. You might consider adding=
 something like: </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>&nbsp; In general it may be difficult for a router to quickly distingu=
ish between </div>
<div>&nbsp; link failure and node failure. For example in figure 1 node S m=
ight see </div>
<div>&nbsp; the link to node P suddenly totally fail. In general it is impo=
ssible to</div>
<div>&nbsp; immediately determine whether node P has failed or if the link =
from S to P</div>
<div>&nbsp; has failed (in some cases link layer indications might give inf=
ormation</div>
<div>&nbsp; regarding what is going on, and the updates to link state packe=
ts from</div>
<div>&nbsp; node P or from all neighbors of node P will eventually clarify =
what has</div>
<div>&nbsp; failed once received and processed). For this reason it is gene=
rally</div>
<div>&nbsp; safer to assume that node P has failed and where possible rerou=
te</div>
<div>&nbsp; traffic to the next node downstream from P. However, there may =
be cases</div>
<div>&nbsp; where this is impossible. For example some destinations might b=
e only</div>
<div>&nbsp; reachable via node P, and in some topologies the failure of nod=
e P may</div>
<div>&nbsp; partition the network. For this reason we need to consider both=
 node and</div>
<div>&nbsp; link failures. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Returning to section 4.1, I think that it would be a bit clearer if th=
e last sentence of the first paragraph were its own paragraph. This would c=
ause 4.1 to start with a general discussion, then have a paragraph about li=
nk protection, then have a paragraph
about node protection. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>The last sentence of section 4.1 is imprecise. It currently states: &#=
8220;In the case of link protection this simply means that the advertisemen=
t from P to S is suppressed, with the result that S and all other nodes com=
pute a route to Ps which doesn't traverse
S, as required&#8221;. However, this does not actually compute a route that=
 is guaranteed to not traverse node S, it computes a route that does not tr=
averse the link from S to P. The sentence should read: &#8220;In the case o=
f link protection this simply means that the
advertisement from P to S is suppressed, with the result that S and all oth=
er nodes compute a route to Ps which doesn't traverse the link from S to P,=
 as required&#8221;. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Section 5.1, second paragraph: &#8220;ANY failure&#8221; should be &#8=
220;ANY single failure&#8221;. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Section 6.1: At first glance it seemed somewhat drastic to have a MUST=
 assume that all other links of the SRLG have failed. After reading the ent=
ire section and thinking about this for a while, I have come to the conclus=
ion that you are correct. However,
I am wondering whether just a bit more explanation might be useful. I am th=
erefore wondering about additional explanation so that the first paragraph =
of section 6.1 might read: </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; A Shared Risk Link Group (SRLG) is a set of links whose f=
ailure can</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; be caused by a single action such as a conduit cut or lin=
e card</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; failure.&nbsp; When repairing the failure of a link that =
is a member of an</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; SRLG, it is not immediately known whether the entire grou=
p has failed </div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; or only that link. In order to avoid multiple problems as=
 explained </div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; below, it MUST be assumed that all the other links that a=
re also</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; members of the SRLG have also failed.&nbsp; Consequently,=
 any repair path</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; MUST be computed to avoid not just the adjacent link, but=
 also all</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; the links which are members of the same SRLG.</div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Nit: </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>At first glance section 3.1 seems a bit terse. I am undecided whether =
it would be worthwhile to add a bit more explanation. The current text is c=
lear enough to one well versed in the various routing technologies and what=
 I have been able to think of as
possible additional text seems almost too obvious. As an example the first =
paragraph could be added to, to read: </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; A router can use an equal cost multi-path (ECMP) repair i=
n place of a</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; not-via repair. For example, if a router has multiple equ=
al cost next hops </div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; to a particular destination, and the link to one fails, i=
t just forwards all </div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; traffic to the other equal cost next hop(s) without using=
 not-via. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Similarly the second paragraph could be added to, to read: </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; A router computing a not-via repair path MAY subject the =
repair to</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; ECMP. For example in figure 1 there may be multiple equal=
 cost paths </div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; from S to Bp, each of which avoids node P. Since not-via =
encapsulates</div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; a packet to Bp, equal cost multipath will work in the nor=
mal way for </div>
<div>&nbsp;&nbsp; computing and using paths from S to Bp. </div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>Again these updates almost seem too trivial, so I have included this s=
uggestion under &#8220;nits&#8221; and will leave it to the discretion of t=
he authors whether they want to make any changes.</div>
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Authors, et al,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. Th=
e Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts=
 as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on spec=
ial request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Rout=
ing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see htt=
p://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it wo=
uld be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Ca=
ll comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion=
 or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-ordered-fib-08
Reviewer: Acee Lindem
Review Date: January 30, 2013
IETF LC End Date: January 31, 2013
Intended Status: informational

Summary:  This document is basically ready for publication, but has clarifi=
cation that should be considered prior to publication.

Comments: The document accomplishes what it sets out to achieve in document=
ing the ordered FIB mechanism for avoidance of transient loops. While Appen=
dix B is useful, I think the document would be better without Appendix A. O=
f course, this is just my opinion.

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues:
                           1. The document could benefit for a precise defi=
nition of a "non-urgent topology change". From what I gathered, this is any=
 change that can be deferred during the ordered FIB delay.
                           2. Similarly, the document could benefit from a =
precise definition of the "rSPF". I checked RFC 5715 and it is not defined =
there either. I believe our discussions indicate that this is simply an SPF=
 where the shortest path back to us is used as the cost. For example, for t=
he first pass, the SPF would use our neighbor's link cost rather than our o=
wn.
                           3. It would be good to state early on that the c=
urrent oFIB mechanism is limited to a single link or node failure and that =
multiple unrelated failures result in reversion to normal FIB convergence.
                           4. Make sure the hold down timer is defined prec=
isely and early in the document. Currently, this doesn't happen until secti=
on 8.2.
                           5. Upon the initial reading, one may think there=
 is some correspondence between the Router (R) in sections 4 and the Router=
 (R) in section 5. Can this be clearer? Perhaps, (R) is not needed in secti=
on 4 since in all other sections, it refers to the computing router.
                           6. In section 5, I have trouble envisioning a ca=
se where a router would not be in an pre or post failure SPT. I guess if it=
 had no loopbacks and only unnumbered interfaces or only interfaces to broa=
dcast links offering a longer path???
                           7. In section 6.2, it would be instructive to sa=
y that a Link Down condition is represented by an infinite metric (or other=
wise cover this condition).
                           8. In section 8.5, I believe this a different ho=
ld down timer than the one used to group LSPs related to the same failure.

Nits:

                     1. Abstract - replace "However mechanism" with "Howeve=
r the mechanism". I chose singular since it is singular in the preceding te=
xt.
                     2. Introduction - replace "base (FIB)" with "bases (FI=
Bs)" in the first sentence.
                     3. Page 5, replace "change order no" with "change orde=
r, no".
                     4. Page 9, suggest adding "IGP " to "reverse connectiv=
ity check".
                     5. Page 10, suggest using parenthesis rather than rely=
ing on arithmetic precedence for equations, e.g., T0 + H + (rank * MAX_FIB)
                     6. There is a mixture of "neighbor" and "neighbour" in=
 the document. Of course, I prefer the US English to UK English since this =
is what all the OSPF RFCs use.
                     7. Section 8.1, the actions are formatting inconsisten=
tly. In one case, as a paragraph and the other as a list.
                     8. Page 19, replace "algorithms i.e." with "algorithms=
, i.e.".
                     9. Page 19 and Page 22, use of (PNSM) and (PN) is inco=
nsistent.
                  10. Page 23, Run-on sentence beginning "Manual configurat=
ion...".
                  11. There some instances where the opening clause for a s=
entence is preceded with a comma and some where it is not. I prefer the for=
mer. For example, section 4.2 appears to be written in a different style wi=
th missing punctuation.


Thanks,
Acee







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<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">I have been selected=
 as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorat=
e seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass throug=
h IETF last call and IESG review,
 and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide =
assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Direc=
torate, please see&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/rou=
ting.html">http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html</a></div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Although these comme=
nts are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if yo=
u could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you=
 receive, and strive to resolve them
 through discussion or by updating the draft.</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Document: draft-ietf=
-rtgwg-ipfrr-ordered-fib-08</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Reviewer: Acee Linde=
m</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Review Date: January=
 30, 2013</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">IETF LC End Date: Ja=
nuary 31, 2013</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Intended Status: inf=
ormational&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Summary:&nbsp; This =
document is basically ready for publication, but has clarification that sho=
uld be considered prior to publication.</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Comments: The docume=
nt accomplishes what it sets out to achieve in documenting the ordered FIB =
mechanism for avoidance of transient loops. While Appendix B is useful, I t=
hink the document would be better
 without Appendix A. Of course, this is just my opinion.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; "><br>
</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Major Issues: None&n=
bsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; "><br>
</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Minor Issues: &nbsp;=
 &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp=
; &nbsp;&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;1. The document could benefit for a precise definition of a &quot;non-urg=
ent topology change&quot;. From what I gathered, this is any change that ca=
n be deferred during the ordered FIB delay.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;2. Similarly, the document could benefit from a precise definition of the=
 &quot;rSPF&quot;. I checked RFC 5715 and it is not defined there either. I=
 believe our discussions indicate that
 this is simply an SPF where the shortest path back to us is used as the co=
st. For example, for the first pass, the SPF would use our neighbor's link =
cost rather than our own.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;3. It would be good to state early on that the current oFIB mechanism is =
limited to a single link or node failure and that multiple unrelated failur=
es result in reversion to normal
 FIB convergence.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;4. Make sure the hold down timer is defined precisely and early in the do=
cument. Currently, this doesn't happen until section 8.2.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;5. Upon the initial reading, one may think there is some correspondence b=
etween the Router (R) in sections 4 and the Router (R) in section 5. Can th=
is be clearer? Perhaps, (R) is
 not needed in section 4 since in all other sections, it refers to the comp=
uting router.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;6. In section 5, I have trouble envisioning a case where a router would n=
ot be in an pre or post failure SPT. I guess if it had no loopbacks and onl=
y unnumbered interfaces or only
 interfaces to broadcast links offering a longer path???&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;7. In section 6.2, it would be instructive to say that a Link Down condit=
ion is represented by an infinite metric (or otherwise cover this condition=
).&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbs=
p;8. In section 8.5, I believe this a different hold down timer than the on=
e used to group LSPs related to the same failure.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; "><br>
</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Nits:&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; "><br>
</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;1. Abstract - repla=
ce &quot;However mechanism&quot; with &quot;However the mechanism&quot;. I =
chose singular since it is singular in the preceding text.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;2. Introduction - r=
eplace &quot;base (FIB)&quot; with &quot;bases (FIBs)&quot; in the first se=
ntence.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;3. Page 5, replace =
&quot;change order no&quot; with &quot;change order, no&quot;.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;4. Page 9, suggest =
adding &quot;IGP &quot; to &quot;reverse connectivity check&quot;.&nbsp;</d=
iv>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;5. Page 10, suggest=
 using parenthesis rather than relying on arithmetic precedence for equatio=
ns, e.g., T0 &#43; H &#43; (rank * MAX_FIB)&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;6. There is a mixtu=
re of &quot;neighbor&quot; and &quot;neighbour&quot; in the document. Of co=
urse, I prefer the US English to UK English since this is what all the OSPF=
 RFCs use.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;7. Section 8.1, the=
 actions are formatting inconsistently. In one case, as a paragraph and the=
 other as a list. &nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;8. Page 19, replace=
 &quot;algorithms i.e.&quot; with &quot;algorithms, i.e.&quot;.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;9. Page 19 and Page=
 22, use of (PNSM) and (PN) is inconsistent.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 10. Page 23, Run-on sentence beg=
inning &quot;Manual configuration...&quot;.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;=
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 11. There some instances where t=
he opening clause for a sentence is preceded with a comma and some where it=
 is not. I prefer the former. For example, section 4.2 appears to be writte=
n in
 a different style with missing punctuation.&nbsp;</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; "><br>
</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; "><br>
</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Thanks,</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 15px; ">Acee&nbsp;</div>
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On 30/01/2013 18:33, Acee Lindem wrote:
> Authors, et al,
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this 
> draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or 
> routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG 
> review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is 
> to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about 
> the Routing Directorate, please see 
> http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, 
> it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other 
> IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them 
> through discussion or by updating the draft.
> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-ordered-fib-08
> Reviewer: Acee Lindem
> Review Date: January 30, 2013
> IETF LC End Date: January 31, 2013
> Intended Status: informational
> Summary: This document is basically ready for publication, but has 
> clarification that should be considered prior to publication.
> Comments: The document accomplishes what it sets out to achieve in 
> documenting the ordered FIB mechanism for avoidance of transient 
> loops. While Appendix B is useful, I think the document would be 
> better without Appendix A. Of course, this is just my opinion.

AAH took a lot of thought, so we would rather not loose it, if it works 
better I could reverse the order of the appendixes.
>
> Major Issues: None
>
> Minor Issues:
>              1. The document could benefit for a precise definition of 
> a "non-urgent topology change". From what I gathered, this is any 
> change that can be deferred during the ordered FIB delay.
The abstract now says
"This mechanism can be used in the case of non-urgent (management 
action) link or node shutdowns and restarts or link metric changes."

3.1.1 says

"First consider the non-urgent failure of a link (i.e. where an operator 
or a network management system (NMS) shuts down a link thereby removing 
it from the currently active topology) or the increase of a link metric 
by the operator or NMS ."

The point is of course that although a link is shut down rather than 
failing, a remote node cannot distinguish the two cases.

>              2. Similarly, the document could benefit from a precise 
> definition of the "rSPF". I checked RFC 5715 and it is not defined 
> there either. I believe our discussions indicate that this is simply 
> an SPF where the shortest path back to us is used as the cost. For 
> example, for the first pass, the SPF would use our neighbor's link 
> cost rather than our own.
We use rSPT in here.

As you know we are looking for a formal definition.

I have put in Section 5

This computation required the introduction of the concept of a reverse 
Shortest Path Tree (rSPT). The rSPT uses the cost towards the root 
rather than from it and yields the best paths towards the root from 
other nodes in the network
[I-D.draft-bryant-ipfrr-tunnels].

If there is a better ref we can swap in Auth48.




>              3. It would be good to state early on that the current 
> oFIB mechanism is limited to a single link or node failure and that 
> multiple unrelated failures result in reversion to normal FIB 
> convergence.
Done (in section 2).
>              4. Make sure the hold down timer is defined precisely and 
> early in the document. Currently, this doesn't happen until section 8.2.
On first use it says:

If all events received within some hold-down period (the time that a 
router waits to acquire a set of LSPs which should be processed together) h
>              5. Upon the initial reading, one may think there is some 
> correspondence between the Router (R) in sections 4 and the Router (R) 
> in section 5. Can this be clearer? Perhaps, (R) is not needed in 
> section 4 since in all other sections, it refers to the computing router.
R is now removed.

As has been described, a single event such as the failure or restoration 
of a single link, single router or a linecard may be notified to the 
rest of the network as a set of individual link change events. It is 
necessary to deduce from this collection of link state notifications the 
type of event that has occurred in the network and hence the required 
ordering.

When a link change event is received which impacts the receiving 
router's FIB, the routers at the near and far end of the link are noted.

If all events received within some hold-down period (the time that a 
router waits to acquire a set of LSPs which should be processed 
together) have a single router in common, then it is assumed that the 
change reflects an event (line-card or router change) concerning that 
router.

In the case of a link change event, the router at the far end of the 
link is deemed to be the common router.

All ordering computations are based on treating the common router as the 
root for both link and node events.


>              6. In section 5, I have trouble envisioning a case where 
> a router would not be in an pre or post failure SPT. I guess if it had 
> no loopbacks and only unnumbered interfaces or only interfaces to 
> broadcast links offering a longer path???
This is the case where you have an unused link (due to costs), i.e. a 
link not on any shortest path.

>              7. In section 6.2, it would be instructive to say that a 
> Link Down condition is represented by an infinite metric (or otherwise 
> cover this condition).
I have added "Inclusion or removal of link" to the information list.
>              8. In section 8.5, I believe this a different hold down 
> timer than the one used to group LSPs related to the same failure.
Yes.

I have changes this to AAH_Hold_down_timer expires

Pierre and Mike please check this.
>
> Nits:
>
>        1. Abstract - replace "However mechanism" with "However the 
> mechanism". I chose singular since it is singular in the preceding text.
done
>        2. Introduction - replace "base (FIB)" with "bases (FIBs)" in 
> the first sentence.
Done

>        3. Page 5, replace "change order no" with "change order, no".
Done
>        4. Page 9, suggest adding "IGP " to "reverse connectivity check".
Done
>        5. Page 10, suggest using parenthesis rather than relying on 
> arithmetic precedence for equations, e.g., T0 + H + (rank * MAX_FIB)
Done
>        6. There is a mixture of "neighbor" and "neighbour" in the 
> document. Of course, I prefer the US English to UK English since this 
> is what all the OSPF RFCs use.
I will deal - but given we are Europeans... :)

>        7. Section 8.1, the actions are formatting inconsistently. In 
> one case, as a paragraph and the other as a list.
Done
                      8. Page 19, replace "algorithms i.e." with 
"algorithms, i.e.".
Done
>        9. Page 19 and Page 22, use of (PNSM) and (PN) is inconsistent.
Done
>     10. Page 23, Run-on sentence beginning "Manual configuration...".
Done
>     11. There some instances where the opening clause for a sentence 
> is preceded with a comma and some where it is not. I prefer the 
> former. For example, section 4.2 appears to be written in a different 
> style with missing punctuation.
>
>
I think I got them, but RFC Editor will get this

Thanks for the review

Stewart

> Thanks,
> Acee
>
>
>
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts director=
ies.
 This draft is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group Working Group =
of the IETF.

	Title           : Framework for Loop-free convergence using oFIB
	Author(s)       : Mike Shand
                          Stewart Bryant
                          Stefano Previdi
                          Clarence Filsfils
                          Pierre Francois
                          Olivier Bonaventure
	Filename        : draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib-09.txt
	Pages           : 27
	Date            : 2013-01-31

Abstract:
   This document describes the framework of a mechanism for use in
   conjunction with link state routing protocols which prevents the
   transient loops which would otherwise occur during topology changes.
   It does this by correctly sequencing the forwarding information base
   (FIB) updates on the routers.

   This mechanism can be used in the case of non-urgent (management
   action) link or node shutdowns and restarts or link metric changes.
   It can also be used in conjunction with a fast re-route mechanism
   which converts a sudden link or node failure into a non-urgent
   topology change.  This is possible where a complete repair path is
   provided for all affected destinations.

   After a non-urgent topology change, each router computes a rank that
   defines the time at which it can safely update its FIB.  A method for
   accelerating this loop-free convergence process by the use of
   completion messages is also described.

   The technology described in this document has been subject to
   extensive simulation using real network topologies and costs, and
   pathological convergence behaviour.  However the mechanism described
   in this document are purely illustrative of the general approach and
   do not constitute a protocol specification.  The document represents
   a snapshot of the work of the Routing Area Working Group at the time
   of publication and is published as a document of record.  Further
   work is needed before implementation or deployment.


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