From nobody Thu Nov 10 16:59:03 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietf.org Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4E119129542; Thu, 10 Nov 2016 16:58:59 -0800 (PST) Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: The IESG To: "IETF-Announce" X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.37.1 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Sender: Message-ID: <147882593931.19702.320979439293981385.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Thu, 10 Nov 2016 16:58:59 -0800 Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org, savi@ietf.org, suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com, jeanmichel.combes@orange.com Subject: [savi] Last Call: (SAVI for Mixed Address Assignment Methods Scenario) to Proposed Standard X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Reply-To: ietf@ietf.org List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 11 Nov 2016 00:58:59 -0000 The IESG has received a request from the Source Address Validation Improvements WG (savi) to consider the following document: - 'SAVI for Mixed Address Assignment Methods Scenario' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2016-11-30. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract In networks that use multiple techniques for address assignment, the appropriate Source Address Validation Improvement (SAVI) methods must be used to prevent spoofing of addresses assigned by each such technique. This document reviews how multiple SAVI methods can coexist in a single SAVI device and collisions are resolved when the same binding entry is discovered by two or more methods. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ IESG discussion can be tracked via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ballot/ No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. The document contains these normative downward references. See RFC 3967 for additional information: rfc7039: Source Address Validation Improvement (SAVI) Framework (Informational - IETF stream) Note that some of these references may already be listed in the acceptable Downref Registry. From nobody Tue Nov 29 06:57:13 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietf.org Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 01479129BDC; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 06:57:12 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: internet-drafts@ietf.org To: X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.38.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <148043143199.11748.4701177622258065791.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 06:57:11 -0800 Archived-At: Cc: savi@ietf.org Subject: [savi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-savi-mix-13.txt X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 14:57:12 -0000 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Source Address Validation Improvements of the IETF. Title : SAVI for Mixed Address Assignment Methods Scenario Authors : Jun Bi Guang Yao Joel M. Halpern Eric Levy-Abegnoli Filename : draft-ietf-savi-mix-13.txt Pages : 11 Date : 2016-11-29 Abstract: In networks that use multiple techniques for address assignment, the appropriate Source Address Validation Improvement (SAVI) methods must be used to prevent spoofing of addresses assigned by each such technique. This document reviews how multiple SAVI methods can coexist in a single SAVI device and collisions are resolved when the same binding entry is discovered by two or more methods. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ There's also a htmlized version available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-savi-mix-13 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-savi-mix-13 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ From nobody Tue Nov 29 07:09:02 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietf.org Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7B7BB129603; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 07:08:57 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: internet-drafts@ietf.org To: X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.38.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <148043213749.11719.4215773663029796944.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 07:08:57 -0800 Archived-At: Cc: savi@ietf.org Subject: [savi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-savi-mix-14.txt X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 15:08:57 -0000 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Source Address Validation Improvements of the IETF. Title : SAVI for Mixed Address Assignment Methods Scenario Authors : Jun Bi Guang Yao Joel M. Halpern Eric Levy-Abegnoli Filename : draft-ietf-savi-mix-14.txt Pages : 11 Date : 2016-11-29 Abstract: In networks that use multiple techniques for address assignment, the appropriate Source Address Validation Improvement (SAVI) methods must be used to prevent spoofing of addresses assigned by each such technique. This document reviews how multiple SAVI methods can coexist in a single SAVI device and collisions are resolved when the same binding entry is discovered by two or more methods. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ There's also a htmlized version available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-savi-mix-14 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-savi-mix-14 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ From nobody Tue Nov 29 11:57:08 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietf.org Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 74F11129C47; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 11:57:05 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: "Alissa Cooper" To: "The IESG" X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.38.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <148044942545.11682.8581494465564239908.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 11:57:05 -0800 Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org, savi@ietf.org, jeanmichel.combes@orange.com Subject: [savi] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 19:57:05 -0000 Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- = Abstract = The phrase "must be used" sounds too prescriptive. I think something along the following lines would be more accurate: In networks that use multiple techniques for address assignment, the spoofing of addresses assigned by each technique can be prevented using the appropriate Source Address Validation Improvement (SAVI) methods. From nobody Tue Nov 29 15:08:06 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietf.org Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C89221294A8; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 15:08:03 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: "Alia Atlas" To: "The IESG" X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.38.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <148046088379.11674.6733184292771489620.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 15:08:03 -0800 Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org, savi@ietf.org, jeanmichel.combes@orange.com Subject: [savi] Alia Atlas' No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 23:08:04 -0000 Alia Atlas has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- There are a number of acronyms that could use expansion or a reference for the first time they are used (CGA, DAD are the 2 I caught). This will probably be caught by the RFC Editor, but help sooner might be useful. I'm fairly certain that Joel Halpern hasn't worked at Newbridge Networks for quite a few years... From nobody Tue Nov 29 15:19:23 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietf.org Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C1FF0129479; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 15:19:18 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: "Ben Campbell" To: "The IESG" X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.38.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <148046155875.11650.16751209510820446492.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 15:19:18 -0800 Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org, savi@ietf.org, jeanmichel.combes@orange.com Subject: [savi] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 23:19:19 -0000 Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I have a few minor (non-binding) comments, and some editorial comments: Substantive: -3, 7th paragraph: "... SAVI binding table should be shared..." This seems like it might deserve a SHOULD, given that it seems like one of the main points of the document. -4: Can you define (or cite a definition) for "binding anchor"? - 6.1.1: Is the "manual" method excluded from consideration here? If so, it would be helpful to explain that, and why. - 6.1.2: It's not clear to me what the title "Overwritten preferences" means. Should this be "Exceptions"? - 6.1.2.2, paragraph 6, "message should be discarded": That seems important, should the should be SHOULD? -- (same paragraph), "It is suggested to limit the rate of defense NAs to reduce security threats to the switch." Can you elaborate on that threat, or cite something that does? - 6.2: I'm a bit surprised this section doesn't prioritize the binding with the longest expiration time. Or do you assume the manual method and FCFS method do not have expirations? -8: Can you elaborate on the correlation concern? Editorial: - General: There are a number of abbreviations that should be expanded on the first use. -1, paragraph 1: s/Validaiton/Validation - 3: Is there a reason the 4th method (manual) doesn't get a place on the list? If so, it would be helpful to add text to explain why. - 5: The DHCP/SLAAC and SeND/non-SeND headings seem ambiguous, in that it is not clear to me that the "/" means "these two things in combination", as opposed to "either of these methods". I suggest writing out what you mean rather than using the "/" as a shortcut. (Also, are these the only combinations that people need to think about?) -6: I assume "assignment separation" is the method described in section 5, but that section never uses those exact words. Please consider using a consistent term. -6.1.1, first paragraph "decide to whom" Does this mean to decide which binding anchor to use? (Otherwise, who is "whom"?) -- The use of a numbered list in 6.1.1 seems to imply some ordering or preference, but I don't think that is the intent. If so, please consider using an non-numbered list. - 6.1.2.2 could use some proofreading--there are a number of grammar errors and unclear statements. -- "value of a know binding anchor": s/know/known -- last paragraph: What is the antecedent of "It" in "It should not install..." -- s/"... prevent the node to assign..."/"... prevent the node from assigning..." -- I don't understand the intent of the second to last sentence well enough to suggest wording. - 6.1.3: Please spell out FCFS From nobody Tue Nov 29 22:57:29 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C4F9D129515; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:57:18 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -5.688 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.688 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-1.497, SPF_HELO_PASS=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_KAM_HTML_FONT_INVALID=0.01] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id bjLrk7Feb4GE; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:57:15 -0800 (PST) Received: from tsinghua.edu.cn (smtp38.tsinghua.edu.cn [166.111.204.62]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 095801295AF; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:57:08 -0800 (PST) Received: from junbi-X1-2 (unknown [101.5.132.16]) by app1 (Coremail) with SMTP id CsxvpgAnLkY3eD5YvgPtAA--.4807S2; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 14:56:55 +0800 (CST) Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 14:56:55 +0800 From: "Jun Bi" To: "Ben Campbell" , iesg References: <148046155875.11650.16751209510820446492.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> X-Priority: 3 X-Has-Attach: no X-Mailer: Foxmail 7, 2, 7, 174[cn] Mime-Version: 1.0 Message-ID: <201611301456555274447@tsinghua.edu.cn> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_001_NextPart261175687432_=----" X-CM-TRANSID: CsxvpgAnLkY3eD5YvgPtAA--.4807S2 X-Coremail-Antispam: 1UD129KBjvJXoWxWw1UJrWxArWUWF4xtry7ZFb_yoWrGr1rpF W3tFW7Cr4kJr1xAwn7CF18Zr1Uu3s3Jr45Jr98Jr18A398ZF12yF4xKryFy347ArZ3G3Wj qr4Ikr1DXa45ArJanT9S1TB71UUUUUUqnTZGkaVYY2UrUUUUjbIjqfuFe4nvWSU5nxnvy2 9KBjDU0xBIdaVrnRJUUUkqb7Iv0xC_Kw4lb4IE77IF4wAFF20E14v26r1j6r4UM7CY07I2 0VC2zVCF04k26cxKx2IYs7xG6rWj6s0DM7CIcVAFz4kK6r1j6r18M28lY4IEw2IIxxk0rw A2z4x0Y4vE2Ix0cI8IcVAFwI0_tr0E3s1l84ACjcxK6xIIjxv20xvEc7CjxVAFwI0_Gr1j 6F4UJwA2z4x0Y4vEx4A2jsIE14v26rxl6s0DM28EF7xvwVC2z280aVCY1x0267AKxVW0oV Cq3wAS0I0E0xvYzxvE52x082IY62kv0487Mc02F40E42I26xC2a48xMc02F40Ex7xS67I2 xxkvbII20VAFz48EcVAYj21lYx0E2Ix0cI8IcVAFwI0_Jrv_JF1lYx0Ex4A2jsIE14v26r 1j6r4UMcvjeVCFs4IE7xkEbVWUJVW8JwACjcxG0xvY0x0EwIxGrwACY4xI67k04243AVAK zVAKj4xxMxAIw28IcxkI7VAKI48JMI8I3I0E5I8CrVAFwI0_JrI_JrWlx2IqxVCjr7xvwV AFwI0_JrI_JrWlx4CE17CEb7AF67AKxVWUAVWUtwCIc40Y0x0EwIxGrwCI42IY6xIIjxv2 0xvE14v26r1j6r1xMIIF0xvE2Ix0cI8IcVCY1x0267AKxVWUJVW8JwCI42IY6xAIw20EY4 v20xvaj40_Zr0_Wr1UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIE14v26r1j6r4UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIEc7CjxVAF wI0_Gr0_Gr1UMVCEFcxC0VAYjxAxZFUvcSsGvfC2KfnxnUUI43ZEXa7xUUeiWUUUUUU== X-CM-SenderInfo: xmxquxo6wvx0pjkxthxhgxhubq/ Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs , "draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org" , savi , "jeanmichel.combes" Subject: Re: [savi] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 06:57:19 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_001_NextPart261175687432_=---- Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 RGVhciBCZW4sDQoNCk1hbnkgdGhhbmtzIGZvciB5b3VyIGVkaXRvcmlhbCBjb21tZW50cyENCg0K DQoNCg0KQmVzdCBSZWdhcmRzLA0KDQpKdW4gQmkNCiANCkZyb206IEJlbiBDYW1wYmVsbA0KRGF0 ZTogMjAxNi0xMS0zMCAwNzoxOQ0KVG86IFRoZSBJRVNHDQpDQzogc2F2aS1jaGFpcnM7IGRyYWZ0 LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXg7IHNhdmk7IGplYW5taWNoZWwuY29tYmVzDQpTdWJqZWN0OiBbc2F2aV0g QmVuIENhbXBiZWxsJ3MgTm8gT2JqZWN0aW9uIG9uIGRyYWZ0LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXgtMTQ6ICh3 aXRoIENPTU1FTlQpDQpCZW4gQ2FtcGJlbGwgaGFzIGVudGVyZWQgdGhlIGZvbGxvd2luZyBiYWxs b3QgcG9zaXRpb24gZm9yDQpkcmFmdC1pZXRmLXNhdmktbWl4LTE0OiBObyBPYmplY3Rpb24NCiAN CldoZW4gcmVzcG9uZGluZywgcGxlYXNlIGtlZXAgdGhlIHN1YmplY3QgbGluZSBpbnRhY3QgYW5k IHJlcGx5IHRvIGFsbA0KZW1haWwgYWRkcmVzc2VzIGluY2x1ZGVkIGluIHRoZSBUbyBhbmQgQ0Mg bGluZXMuIChGZWVsIGZyZWUgdG8gY3V0IHRoaXMNCmludHJvZHVjdG9yeSBwYXJhZ3JhcGgsIGhv d2V2ZXIuKQ0KIA0KIA0KUGxlYXNlIHJlZmVyIHRvIGh0dHBzOi8vd3d3LmlldGYub3JnL2llc2cv c3RhdGVtZW50L2Rpc2N1c3MtY3JpdGVyaWEuaHRtbA0KZm9yIG1vcmUgaW5mb3JtYXRpb24gYWJv dXQgSUVTRyBESVNDVVNTIGFuZCBDT01NRU5UIHBvc2l0aW9ucy4NCiANCiANClRoZSBkb2N1bWVu dCwgYWxvbmcgd2l0aCBvdGhlciBiYWxsb3QgcG9zaXRpb25zLCBjYW4gYmUgZm91bmQgaGVyZToN Cmh0dHBzOi8vZGF0YXRyYWNrZXIuaWV0Zi5vcmcvZG9jL2RyYWZ0LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXgvDQog DQogDQogDQotLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tDQpDT01NRU5UOg0KLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLQ0KIA0KSSBoYXZl IGEgZmV3IG1pbm9yIChub24tYmluZGluZykgY29tbWVudHMsIGFuZCBzb21lIGVkaXRvcmlhbCBj b21tZW50czoNCiANClN1YnN0YW50aXZlOg0KIA0KLTMsIDd0aCBwYXJhZ3JhcGg6ICIuLi4gU0FW SSBiaW5kaW5nIHRhYmxlIHNob3VsZCBiZSBzaGFyZWQuLi4iDQpUaGlzIHNlZW1zIGxpa2UgaXQg bWlnaHQgZGVzZXJ2ZSBhIFNIT1VMRCwgZ2l2ZW4gdGhhdCBpdCBzZWVtcyBsaWtlIG9uZQ0Kb2Yg dGhlIG1haW4gcG9pbnRzIG9mIHRoZSBkb2N1bWVudC4NCiANCi00OiBDYW4geW91IGRlZmluZSAo b3IgY2l0ZSBhIGRlZmluaXRpb24pIGZvciAiYmluZGluZyBhbmNob3IiPw0KIA0KLSA2LjEuMTog SXMgdGhlICJtYW51YWwiIG1ldGhvZCBleGNsdWRlZCBmcm9tIGNvbnNpZGVyYXRpb24gaGVyZT8g SWYgc28sDQppdCB3b3VsZCBiZSBoZWxwZnVsIHRvIGV4cGxhaW4gdGhhdCwgYW5kIHdoeS4NCiAN Ci0gNi4xLjI6IEl0J3Mgbm90IGNsZWFyIHRvIG1lIHdoYXQgdGhlICB0aXRsZSAiT3ZlcndyaXR0 ZW4gcHJlZmVyZW5jZXMiDQptZWFucy4gU2hvdWxkIHRoaXMgYmUgIkV4Y2VwdGlvbnMiPw0KIA0K LSA2LjEuMi4yLCBwYXJhZ3JhcGggNiwgIm1lc3NhZ2Ugc2hvdWxkIGJlIGRpc2NhcmRlZCI6DQpU aGF0IHNlZW1zIGltcG9ydGFudCwgc2hvdWxkIHRoZSBzaG91bGQgYmUgU0hPVUxEPw0KIA0KLS0g KHNhbWUgcGFyYWdyYXBoKSwgIkl0IGlzIHN1Z2dlc3RlZCB0byBsaW1pdA0KICAgdGhlIHJhdGUg b2YgZGVmZW5zZSBOQXMgdG8gcmVkdWNlIHNlY3VyaXR5IHRocmVhdHMgdG8gdGhlIHN3aXRjaC4i DQogDQpDYW4geW91IGVsYWJvcmF0ZSBvbiB0aGF0IHRocmVhdCwgb3IgY2l0ZSBzb21ldGhpbmcg dGhhdCBkb2VzPw0KIA0KLSA2LjI6IEknbSBhIGJpdCBzdXJwcmlzZWQgdGhpcyBzZWN0aW9uIGRv ZXNuJ3QgcHJpb3JpdGl6ZSB0aGUgYmluZGluZw0Kd2l0aCB0aGUgbG9uZ2VzdCBleHBpcmF0aW9u IHRpbWUuIE9yIGRvIHlvdSBhc3N1bWUgdGhlIG1hbnVhbCBtZXRob2QgYW5kDQpGQ0ZTIG1ldGhv ZCBkbyBub3QgaGF2ZSBleHBpcmF0aW9ucz8NCiANCi04OiBDYW4geW91IGVsYWJvcmF0ZSBvbiB0 aGUgY29ycmVsYXRpb24gY29uY2Vybj8NCiANCiANCkVkaXRvcmlhbDoNCiANCi0gR2VuZXJhbDog VGhlcmUgYXJlIGEgbnVtYmVyIG9mIGFiYnJldmlhdGlvbnMgdGhhdCBzaG91bGQgYmUgZXhwYW5k ZWQgb24NCnRoZSBmaXJzdCB1c2UuDQogDQotMSwgcGFyYWdyYXBoIDE6IHMvVmFsaWRhaXRvbi9W YWxpZGF0aW9uDQogDQotIDM6IElzIHRoZXJlIGEgcmVhc29uIHRoZSA0dGggbWV0aG9kIChtYW51 YWwpIGRvZXNuJ3QgZ2V0IGEgcGxhY2Ugb24gdGhlDQpsaXN0PyBJZiBzbywgaXQgd291bGQgYmUg aGVscGZ1bCB0byBhZGQgdGV4dCB0byBleHBsYWluIHdoeS4NCiANCi0gNTogVGhlIERIQ1AvU0xB QUMgYW5kIFNlTkQvbm9uLVNlTkQgaGVhZGluZ3Mgc2VlbSBhbWJpZ3VvdXMsIGluIHRoYXQgaXQN CmlzIG5vdCBjbGVhciB0byBtZSB0aGF0IHRoZSAiLyIgbWVhbnMgInRoZXNlIHR3byB0aGluZ3Mg aW4gY29tYmluYXRpb24iLA0KYXMgb3Bwb3NlZCB0byAiZWl0aGVyIG9mIHRoZXNlIG1ldGhvZHMi LiBJIHN1Z2dlc3Qgd3JpdGluZyBvdXQgd2hhdCB5b3UNCm1lYW4gcmF0aGVyIHRoYW4gdXNpbmcg dGhlICIvIiBhcyBhIHNob3J0Y3V0LiAoQWxzbywgYXJlIHRoZXNlIHRoZSBvbmx5DQpjb21iaW5h dGlvbnMgdGhhdCBwZW9wbGUgbmVlZCB0byB0aGluayBhYm91dD8pDQogDQotNjogSSBhc3N1bWUg ImFzc2lnbm1lbnQgc2VwYXJhdGlvbiIgaXMgdGhlIG1ldGhvZCBkZXNjcmliZWQgaW4gc2VjdGlv bg0KNSwgYnV0IHRoYXQgc2VjdGlvbiBuZXZlciB1c2VzIHRob3NlIGV4YWN0IHdvcmRzLiBQbGVh c2UgY29uc2lkZXIgdXNpbmcgYQ0KY29uc2lzdGVudCB0ZXJtLg0KIA0KLTYuMS4xLCBmaXJzdCBw YXJhZ3JhcGggImRlY2lkZSB0byB3aG9tIg0KRG9lcyB0aGlzIG1lYW4gdG8gZGVjaWRlIHdoaWNo IGJpbmRpbmcgYW5jaG9yIHRvIHVzZT8gKE90aGVyd2lzZSwgd2hvIGlzDQoid2hvbSI/KQ0KIA0K LS0gVGhlIHVzZSBvZiBhIG51bWJlcmVkIGxpc3QgaW4gNi4xLjEgc2VlbXMgdG8gaW1wbHkgc29t ZSBvcmRlcmluZyBvcg0KcHJlZmVyZW5jZSwgYnV0IEkgZG9uJ3QgdGhpbmsgdGhhdCBpcyB0aGUg aW50ZW50LiBJZiBzbywgIHBsZWFzZSANCmNvbnNpZGVyIHVzaW5nIGFuIG5vbi1udW1iZXJlZCBs aXN0Lg0KIA0KLSA2LjEuMi4yIGNvdWxkIHVzZSBzb21lIHByb29mcmVhZGluZy0tdGhlcmUgYXJl IGEgbnVtYmVyIG9mIGdyYW1tYXINCmVycm9ycyBhbmQgdW5jbGVhciBzdGF0ZW1lbnRzLg0KLS0g ICJ2YWx1ZSBvZiBhIGtub3cgYmluZGluZyBhbmNob3IiOg0Kcy9rbm93L2tub3duDQotLSBsYXN0 IHBhcmFncmFwaDogV2hhdCBpcyB0aGUgYW50ZWNlZGVudCBvZiAiSXQiIGluICJJdCBzaG91bGQg bm90DQppbnN0YWxsLi4uIg0KLS0gcy8iLi4uIHByZXZlbnQgdGhlIG5vZGUgdG8gYXNzaWduLi4u Ii8iLi4uIHByZXZlbnQgdGhlIG5vZGUgZnJvbQ0KYXNzaWduaW5nLi4uIg0KLS0gSSBkb24ndCB1 bmRlcnN0YW5kIHRoZSBpbnRlbnQgb2YgdGhlIHNlY29uZCB0byBsYXN0IHNlbnRlbmNlIHdlbGwN CmVub3VnaCB0byBzdWdnZXN0IHdvcmRpbmcuDQogDQotIDYuMS4zOiBQbGVhc2Ugc3BlbGwgb3V0 IEZDRlMNCiANCiANCl9fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19f X19fDQpzYXZpIG1haWxpbmcgbGlzdA0Kc2F2aUBpZXRmLm9yZw0KaHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuaWV0Zi5v cmcvbWFpbG1hbi9saXN0aW5mby9zYXZpDQo= ------=_001_NextPart261175687432_=---- Content-Type: text/html; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable =0A
Dear Ben,
Many thanks for your editorial comments!
=0A

=0A

Best Regards,

Jun Bi
=0A
 
From:=  Ben Campbell
Date: 2016-11-30 07:19
Subject: [savi] Ben Campbell's No Objection= on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)
Ben = Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
=0A
draft-= ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection
=0A
 
=0A
When respo= nding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
=0A
e= mail addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this=0A
introductory paragraph, however.)
=0A
 
=0A 
=0A
Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement= /discuss-criteria.html
=0A
for more information about IESG DISCUS= S and COMMENT positions.
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A<= div>The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:=0A
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/
=0A<= div> 
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
----------= ------------------------------------------------------------
=0A
= COMMENT:
=0A
----------------------------------------------------= ------------------
=0A
 
=0A
I have a few minor (no= n-binding) comments, and some editorial comments:
=0A
 =0A
Substantive:
=0A
 
=0A
-3, 7th paragraph: = "... SAVI binding table should be shared..."
=0A
This seems like = it might deserve a SHOULD, given that it seems like one
=0A
of th= e main points of the document.
=0A
 
=0A
-4: Can yo= u define (or cite a definition) for "binding anchor"?
=0A
 <= /div>=0A
- 6.1.1: Is the "manual" method excluded from consideration h= ere? If so,
=0A
it would be helpful to explain that, and why.=0A
 
=0A
- 6.1.2: It's not clear to me what the = title "Overwritten preferences"
=0A
means. Should this be "Excep= tions"?
=0A
 
=0A
- 6.1.2.2, paragraph 6, "message = should be discarded":
=0A
That seems important, should the should= be SHOULD?
=0A
 
=0A
-- (same paragraph), "It is s= uggested to limit
=0A
   the rate of defense NAs to red= uce security threats to the switch."
=0A
 
=0A
Can = you elaborate on that threat, or cite something that does?
=0A
&n= bsp;
=0A
- 6.2: I'm a bit surprised this section doesn't prioriti= ze the binding
=0A
with the longest expiration time. Or do you as= sume the manual method and
=0A
FCFS method do not have expiration= s?
=0A
 
=0A
-8: Can you elaborate on the correlati= on concern?
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
Editorial= :
=0A
 
=0A
- General: There are a number of abbrev= iations that should be expanded on
=0A
the first use.
=0A 
=0A
-1, paragraph 1: s/Validaiton/Validation
=0A 
=0A
- 3: Is there a reason the 4th method (manual) doesn= 't get a place on the
=0A
list? If so, it would be helpful to add= text to explain why.
=0A
 
=0A
- 5: The DHCP/SLAAC= and SeND/non-SeND headings seem ambiguous, in that it
=0A
is not= clear to me that the "/" means "these two things in combination",
= =0A
as opposed to "either of these methods". I suggest writing out wha= t you
=0A
mean rather than using the "/" as a shortcut. (Also, ar= e these the only
=0A
combinations that people need to think about= ?)
=0A
 
=0A
-6: I assume "assignment separation" i= s the method described in section
=0A
5, but that section never u= ses those exact words. Please consider using a
=0A
consistent ter= m.
=0A
 
=0A
-6.1.1, first paragraph "decide to who= m"
=0A
Does this mean to decide which binding anchor to use? (Oth= erwise, who is
=0A
"whom"?)
=0A
 
=0A
-- T= he use of a numbered list in 6.1.1 seems to imply some ordering or
= =0A
preference, but I don't think that is the intent. If so,  ple= ase
=0A
consider using an non-numbered list.
=0A
 =
=0A
- 6.1.2.2 could use some proofreading--there are a number of= grammar
=0A
errors and unclear statements.
=0A
-- = "value of a know binding anchor":
=0A
s/know/known
=0A
= -- last paragraph: What is the antecedent of "It" in "It should not
= =0A
install..."
=0A
-- s/"... prevent the node to assign..."/= "... prevent the node from
=0A
assigning..."
=0A
-- I do= n't understand the intent of the second to last sentence well
=0Aenough to suggest wording.
=0A
 
=0A
- 6.1.3: Plea= se spell out FCFS
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
___= ____________________________________________
=0A
savi mailing lis= t
=0A
savi@ietf.org
=0A
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/lis= tinfo/savi
=0A
=0A ------=_001_NextPart261175687432_=------ From nobody Tue Nov 29 22:59:31 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E80E71295A0; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:58:53 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -5.688 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.688 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-1.497, SPF_HELO_PASS=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_KAM_HTML_FONT_INVALID=0.01] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id g1tliXawZC1d; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:58:49 -0800 (PST) Received: from tsinghua.edu.cn (smtp39.tsinghua.edu.cn [166.111.204.63]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 47746129451; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:58:48 -0800 (PST) Received: from junbi-X1-2 (unknown [101.5.132.16]) by app1 (Coremail) with SMTP id CsxvpgCHqmmTeD5YMgXtAA--.17945S2; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 14:58:27 +0800 (CST) Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 14:58:27 +0800 From: "Jun Bi" To: "Alia Atlas" , iesg References: <148046088379.11674.6733184292771489620.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> X-Priority: 3 X-Has-Attach: no X-Mailer: Foxmail 7, 2, 7, 174[cn] Mime-Version: 1.0 Message-ID: <2016113014582741683910@tsinghua.edu.cn> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_001_NextPart716313637306_=----" X-CM-TRANSID: CsxvpgCHqmmTeD5YMgXtAA--.17945S2 X-Coremail-Antispam: 1UD129KBjvJXoWxJry8Kr1fArWUJryftFWUurg_yoW8Xr4kpF W3JrW7Gr1DJr1xJw48ZF18Xr1jv34UA3yUJF15Xr18AFW5AFnFkF4Ikr1rAry7GFy5Gr1x JrWjkw1DXw18ArUanT9S1TB71UUUUUUqnTZGkaVYY2UrUUUUjbIjqfuFe4nvWSU5nxnvy2 9KBjDU0xBIdaVrnRJUUUkqb7Iv0xC_Zr1lb4IE77IF4wAFF20E14v26r1j6r4UM7CY07I2 0VC2zVCF04k26cxKx2IYs7xG6rWj6s0DM7CIcVAFz4kK6r1j6r18M28lY4IEw2IIxxk0rw A2z4x0Y4vE2Ix0cI8IcVAFwI0_tr0E3s1l84ACjcxK6xIIjxv20xvEc7CjxVAFwI0_Gr1j 6F4UJwA2z4x0Y4vEx4A2jsIE14v26rxl6s0DM28EF7xvwVC2z280aVCY1x0267AKxVW0oV Cq3wAS0I0E0xvYzxvE52x082IY62kv0487Mc02F40E42I26xC2a48xMc02F40Ex7xS67I2 xxkvbII20VAFz48EcVAYj21lYx0E2Ix0cI8IcVAFwI0_JF0_Jw1lYx0Ex4A2jsIE14v26r 1j6r4UMcvjeVCFs4IE7xkEbVWUJVW8JwACjcxG0xvY0x0EwIxGrwACY4xI67k04243AVAK zVAKj4xxMxAIw28IcxkI7VAKI48JMI8I3I0E5I8CrVAFwI0_JrI_JrWlx2IqxVCjr7xvwV AFwI0_JrI_JrWlx4CE17CEb7AF67AKxVWUAVWUtwCIc40Y0x0EwIxGrwCI42IY6xIIjxv2 0xvE14v26r1I6r4UMIIF0xvE2Ix0cI8IcVCY1x0267AKxVW8JVWxJwCI42IY6xAIw20EY4 v20xvaj40_Zr0_Wr1UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIE14v26r1j6r4UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIEc7CjxVAF wI0_Gr0_Gr1UMVCEFcxC0VAYjxAxZFUvcSsGvfC2KfnxnUUI43ZEXa7xUUeiAUUUUUU== X-CM-SenderInfo: xmxquxo6wvx0pjkxthxhgxhubq/ Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs , "draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org" , savi , "jeanmichel.combes" Subject: Re: [savi] Alia Atlas' No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 06:58:54 -0000 X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 06:58:54 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_001_NextPart716313637306_=---- Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 RGVhciBBbGlhLA0KDQpNYW55IHRoYW5rcyBmb3IgeW91ciBlZGl0b3JpYWwgY29tbWVudHMgIQ0K DQoNCg0KDQpCZXN0IFJlZ2FyZHMsDQoNCkp1biBCaQ0KIA0KRnJvbTogQWxpYSBBdGxhcw0KRGF0 ZTogMjAxNi0xMS0zMCAwNzowOA0KVG86IFRoZSBJRVNHDQpDQzogc2F2aS1jaGFpcnM7IGRyYWZ0 LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXg7IHNhdmk7IGplYW5taWNoZWwuY29tYmVzDQpTdWJqZWN0OiBbc2F2aV0g QWxpYSBBdGxhcycgTm8gT2JqZWN0aW9uIG9uIGRyYWZ0LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXgtMTQ6ICh3aXRo IENPTU1FTlQpDQpBbGlhIEF0bGFzIGhhcyBlbnRlcmVkIHRoZSBmb2xsb3dpbmcgYmFsbG90IHBv c2l0aW9uIGZvcg0KZHJhZnQtaWV0Zi1zYXZpLW1peC0xNDogTm8gT2JqZWN0aW9uDQogDQpXaGVu IHJlc3BvbmRpbmcsIHBsZWFzZSBrZWVwIHRoZSBzdWJqZWN0IGxpbmUgaW50YWN0IGFuZCByZXBs eSB0byBhbGwNCmVtYWlsIGFkZHJlc3NlcyBpbmNsdWRlZCBpbiB0aGUgVG8gYW5kIENDIGxpbmVz LiAoRmVlbCBmcmVlIHRvIGN1dCB0aGlzDQppbnRyb2R1Y3RvcnkgcGFyYWdyYXBoLCBob3dldmVy LikNCiANCiANClBsZWFzZSByZWZlciB0byBodHRwczovL3d3dy5pZXRmLm9yZy9pZXNnL3N0YXRl bWVudC9kaXNjdXNzLWNyaXRlcmlhLmh0bWwNCmZvciBtb3JlIGluZm9ybWF0aW9uIGFib3V0IElF U0cgRElTQ1VTUyBhbmQgQ09NTUVOVCBwb3NpdGlvbnMuDQogDQogDQpUaGUgZG9jdW1lbnQsIGFs b25nIHdpdGggb3RoZXIgYmFsbG90IHBvc2l0aW9ucywgY2FuIGJlIGZvdW5kIGhlcmU6DQpodHRw czovL2RhdGF0cmFja2VyLmlldGYub3JnL2RvYy9kcmFmdC1pZXRmLXNhdmktbWl4Lw0KIA0KIA0K IA0KLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLQ0KQ09NTUVOVDoNCi0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0NCiANClRoZXJlIGFyZSBh IG51bWJlciBvZiBhY3JvbnltcyB0aGF0IGNvdWxkIHVzZSBleHBhbnNpb24gb3IgYSByZWZlcmVu Y2UNCmZvciB0aGUgZmlyc3QgdGltZSB0aGV5IGFyZSB1c2VkIChDR0EsIERBRCBhcmUgdGhlIDIg SSBjYXVnaHQpLiAgVGhpcw0Kd2lsbCBwcm9iYWJseSBiZSBjYXVnaHQgYnkgdGhlIFJGQyBFZGl0 b3IsIGJ1dCBoZWxwIHNvb25lciBtaWdodCBiZQ0KdXNlZnVsLg0KIA0KSSdtIGZhaXJseSBjZXJ0 YWluIHRoYXQgSm9lbCBIYWxwZXJuIGhhc24ndCB3b3JrZWQgYXQgTmV3YnJpZGdlIE5ldHdvcmtz DQpmb3IgcXVpdGUgYSBmZXcgeWVhcnMuLi4NCiANCiANCl9fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19f X19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fDQpzYXZpIG1haWxpbmcgbGlzdA0Kc2F2aUBpZXRmLm9y Zw0KaHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuaWV0Zi5vcmcvbWFpbG1hbi9saXN0aW5mby9zYXZpDQo= ------=_001_NextPart716313637306_=---- Content-Type: text/html; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable =0A
Dear Alia,
<= br>
Many thanks for your editorial comments !
=0A

=0A

Best Regards,

Jun Bi
=0A
 
Fr= om: Alia Atlas
Date: 2016-11-30 07:08
Subject: [savi] Alia Atlas' No Objecti= on on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)
Al= ia Atlas has entered the following ballot position for
=0A
draft-= ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection
=0A
 
=0A
When respo= nding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
=0A
e= mail addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this=0A
introductory paragraph, however.)
=0A
 
=0A 
=0A
Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement= /discuss-criteria.html
=0A
for more information about IESG DISCUS= S and COMMENT positions.
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A<= div>The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:=0A
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/
=0A<= div> 
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
----------= ------------------------------------------------------------
=0A
= COMMENT:
=0A
----------------------------------------------------= ------------------
=0A
 
=0A
There are a number of = acronyms that could use expansion or a reference
=0A
for the firs= t time they are used (CGA, DAD are the 2 I caught).  This
=0Awill probably be caught by the RFC Editor, but help sooner might be=0A
useful.
=0A
 
=0A
I'm fairly certain that = Joel Halpern hasn't worked at Newbridge Networks
=0A
for quite a = few years...
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
________= _______________________________________
=0A
savi mailing list=0A
savi@ietf.org
=0A
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo= /savi
=0A
=0A ------=_001_NextPart716313637306_=------ From nobody Tue Nov 29 22:59:34 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7879F129431 for ; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:59:13 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -3.498 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.498 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-1.497, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=swm.pp.se Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id NThaZXkX1o7d for ; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:59:10 -0800 (PST) Received: from uplift.swm.pp.se (ipv6.swm.pp.se [IPv6:2a00:801::f]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 12CDC1295C5 for ; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 22:59:09 -0800 (PST) Received: by uplift.swm.pp.se (Postfix, from userid 501) id 775ABA9; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 07:59:07 +0100 (CET) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=swm.pp.se; s=mail; t=1480489147; bh=vkEzOjUvq+BQDMOT7w1KX4fRoRJTl7ZTgtmLqTdaqh4=; h=Date:From:To:Subject:From; b=QSmzNNPvXAoRTlaKeEnysifJESex2GE2GhTWLzflDd/Uth6RWeM//gMlqy/THmMnT vce9GBTuoP4GlrB31SrhjBmAF9w70y6Tj+eD3Y6AiSooJ5udb0omrsI+TiKC9uuKrb SYYRCmsTaVKJCI0I3BT0r3eaoql3vPJ09Ha8H8kQ= Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by uplift.swm.pp.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6869CA8 for ; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 07:59:07 +0100 (CET) Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 07:59:07 +0100 (CET) From: Mikael Abrahamsson To: savi@ietf.org Message-ID: User-Agent: Alpine 2.02 (DEB 1266 2009-07-14) Organization: People's Front Against WWW MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=US-ASCII Archived-At: Subject: [savi] PIO-X considerations X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 06:59:13 -0000 Hi, we have proposed https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-pioxfolks-6man-pio-exclusive-bit-01 in 6man. I'd like to understand more how SAVI documents would be impacted by this. Would a new SAVI document be created if PIO-X flag would get adopted by 6man, or should our document update any existing SAVI document(s)? -- Mikael Abrahamsson email: swmike@swm.pp.se From nobody Tue Nov 29 23:01:48 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 351801295CF; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 23:01:47 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -5.698 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.698 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-1.497, SPF_HELO_PASS=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id QDexgxWoO6MQ; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 23:01:45 -0800 (PST) Received: from tsinghua.edu.cn (smtp36.tsinghua.edu.cn [166.111.204.60]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0F4A21295B2; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 23:01:40 -0800 (PST) Received: from junbi-X1-2 (unknown [101.5.132.16]) by app5 (Coremail) with SMTP id DsxvpgD3_oZBeT5YKMdsAA--.5686S2; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 15:01:23 +0800 (CST) Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 15:01:23 +0800 From: "Jun Bi" To: "Alissa Cooper" , iesg References: <148044942545.11682.8581494465564239908.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> X-Priority: 3 X-Has-Attach: no X-Mailer: Foxmail 7, 2, 7, 174[cn] Mime-Version: 1.0 Message-ID: <2016113015012128847113@tsinghua.edu.cn> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_001_NextPart286734345788_=----" X-CM-TRANSID: DsxvpgD3_oZBeT5YKMdsAA--.5686S2 X-Coremail-Antispam: 1UD129KBjvJXoW7Ary5WFy5uFy3Gr13urWkXrb_yoW8GF17pa y3JrW2yr4DJr1xta1ku3W8Xr109348AF4UJF15Xr18AFn8AFnrAF4Ikry0yry7XFWUGw1x Xr1jk34DXw1UAwUanT9S1TB71UUUUUUqnTZGkaVYY2UrUUUUjbIjqfuFe4nvWSU5nxnvy2 9KBjDU0xBIdaVrnRJUUUyGb7Iv0xC_Zr1lb4IE77IF4wAFF20E14v26r1j6r4UM7CY07I2 0VC2zVCF04k26cxKx2IYs7xG6rWj6s0DM7CIcVAFz4kK6r1j6r18M28lY4IEw2IIxxk0rw A2z4x0Y4vE2Ix0cI8IcVAFwI0_tr0E3s1l84ACjcxK6xIIjxv20xvEc7CjxVAFwI0_Gr1j 6F4UJwA2z4x0Y4vEx4A2jsIE14v26rxl6s0DM28EF7xvwVC2z280aVCY1x0267AKxVW0oV Cq3wAS0I0E0xvYzxvE52x082IY62kv0487Mc02F40E42I26xC2a48xMcIj6xIIjxv20xvE 14v26r126r1DMcIj6I8E87Iv67AKxVWUJVW8JwAm72CE4IkC6x0Yz7v_Jr0_Gr1lF7xvr2 IYc2Ij64vIr41lFcxC0VAYjxAxZF0Ew4CEw7xC0wACY4xI67k04243AVC20s07MxAIw28I cxkI7VAKI48JMI8I3I0E5I8CrVAFwI0_JrI_JrWlx2IqxVCjr7xvwVAFwI0_JrI_JrWlx4 CE17CEb7AF67AKxVWUAVWUtwCIc40Y0x0EwIxGrwCI42IY6xIIjxv20xvE14v26r1I6r4U MIIF0xvE2Ix0cI8IcVCY1x0267AKxVW8JVWxJwCI42IY6xAIw20EY4v20xvaj40_Zr0_Wr 1UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIE14v26r1j6r4UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIEc7CjxVAFwI0_Gr0_Gr1UMVCE FcxC0VAYjxAxZFUvcSsGvfC2KfnxnUUI43ZEXa7xUUeMiUUUUUU== X-CM-SenderInfo: xmxquxo6wvx0pjkxthxhgxhubq/ Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs , "draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org" , savi , "jeanmichel.combes" Subject: Re: [savi] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 07:01:47 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_001_NextPart286734345788_=---- Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 RGVhciBBbGlzc2EsDQoNCk1hbnkgdGhhbmtzIGZvciB5b3VyIGVkaXRvcmlhbCBjb21tZW50cyAh DQoNCg0KDQoNCkJlc3QgUmVnYXJkcywNCg0KSnVuIEJpDQogDQpGcm9tOiBBbGlzc2EgQ29vcGVy DQpEYXRlOiAyMDE2LTExLTMwIDAzOjU3DQpUbzogVGhlIElFU0cNCkNDOiBkcmFmdC1pZXRmLXNh dmktbWl4OyBzYXZpLWNoYWlyczsgamVhbm1pY2hlbC5jb21iZXM7IHNhdmkNClN1YmplY3Q6IEFs aXNzYSBDb29wZXIncyBObyBPYmplY3Rpb24gb24gZHJhZnQtaWV0Zi1zYXZpLW1peC0xNDogKHdp dGggQ09NTUVOVCkNCkFsaXNzYSBDb29wZXIgaGFzIGVudGVyZWQgdGhlIGZvbGxvd2luZyBiYWxs b3QgcG9zaXRpb24gZm9yDQpkcmFmdC1pZXRmLXNhdmktbWl4LTE0OiBObyBPYmplY3Rpb24NCiAN CldoZW4gcmVzcG9uZGluZywgcGxlYXNlIGtlZXAgdGhlIHN1YmplY3QgbGluZSBpbnRhY3QgYW5k IHJlcGx5IHRvIGFsbA0KZW1haWwgYWRkcmVzc2VzIGluY2x1ZGVkIGluIHRoZSBUbyBhbmQgQ0Mg bGluZXMuIChGZWVsIGZyZWUgdG8gY3V0IHRoaXMNCmludHJvZHVjdG9yeSBwYXJhZ3JhcGgsIGhv d2V2ZXIuKQ0KIA0KIA0KUGxlYXNlIHJlZmVyIHRvIGh0dHBzOi8vd3d3LmlldGYub3JnL2llc2cv c3RhdGVtZW50L2Rpc2N1c3MtY3JpdGVyaWEuaHRtbA0KZm9yIG1vcmUgaW5mb3JtYXRpb24gYWJv dXQgSUVTRyBESVNDVVNTIGFuZCBDT01NRU5UIHBvc2l0aW9ucy4NCiANCiANClRoZSBkb2N1bWVu dCwgYWxvbmcgd2l0aCBvdGhlciBiYWxsb3QgcG9zaXRpb25zLCBjYW4gYmUgZm91bmQgaGVyZToN Cmh0dHBzOi8vZGF0YXRyYWNrZXIuaWV0Zi5vcmcvZG9jL2RyYWZ0LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXgvDQog DQogDQogDQotLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tDQpDT01NRU5UOg0KLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLQ0KIA0KPSBBYnN0 cmFjdCA9DQogDQpUaGUgcGhyYXNlICJtdXN0IGJlIHVzZWQiIHNvdW5kcyB0b28gcHJlc2NyaXB0 aXZlLiBJIHRoaW5rIHNvbWV0aGluZw0KYWxvbmcgdGhlIGZvbGxvd2luZyBsaW5lcyB3b3VsZCBi ZSBtb3JlIGFjY3VyYXRlOg0KIA0KSW4gbmV0d29ya3MgdGhhdCB1c2UgbXVsdGlwbGUgdGVjaG5p cXVlcyBmb3IgYWRkcmVzcyBhc3NpZ25tZW50LCB0aGUNCnNwb29maW5nIG9mIGFkZHJlc3NlcyBh c3NpZ25lZCBieSBlYWNoIHRlY2huaXF1ZSBjYW4gYmUgcHJldmVudGVkIHVzaW5nDQp0aGUgYXBw cm9wcmlhdGUgU291cmNlIEFkZHJlc3MgVmFsaWRhdGlvbiBJbXByb3ZlbWVudCAoU0FWSSkgbWV0 aG9kcy4NCiANCiANCg== ------=_001_NextPart286734345788_=---- Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable =0A
Dear Alissa,

Many thanks for your editorial comments&= nbsp;!
=0A

=0A

Best Regards,

Jun Bi
=0A
 
=
Date: 2016-11-30 0= 3:57
Subject: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMME= NT)
Alissa Cooper has entered the following bal= lot position for
=0A
draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection
= =0A
 
=0A
When responding, please keep the subject line = intact and reply to all
=0A
email addresses included in the To an= d CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
=0A
introductory paragraph, ho= wever.)
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
Please refer = to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
=0A
= for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
=0A 
=0A
 
=0A
The document, along with other b= allot positions, can be found here:
=0A
https://datatracker.ietf.= org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/
=0A
 
=0A
 
= =0A
 
=0A
----------------------------------------------= ------------------------
=0A
COMMENT:
=0A
--------------= --------------------------------------------------------
=0A
&nbs= p;
=0A
=3D Abstract =3D
=0A
 
=0A
The phra= se "must be used" sounds too prescriptive. I think something
=0A
= along the following lines would be more accurate:
=0A
 =0A
In networks that use multiple techniques for address assignment, = the
=0A
spoofing of addresses assigned by each technique can be p= revented using
=0A
the appropriate Source Address Validation Impr= ovement (SAVI) methods.
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
=0A ------=_001_NextPart286734345788_=------ From nobody Wed Nov 30 02:51:59 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietf.org Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6614A129560; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 02:51:57 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit From: "Mirja Kuehlewind" To: "The IESG" X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.38.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <148050311738.6730.12570542079888312055.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 02:51:57 -0800 Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org, savi@ietf.org, jeanmichel.combes@orange.com Subject: [savi] =?utf-8?q?Mirja_K=C3=BChlewind=27s_No_Objection_on_draft-i?= =?utf-8?q?etf-savi-mix-14=3A_=28with_COMMENT=29?= X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 10:51:57 -0000 Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Probably Ben caught them already but there are a few cases where there should be an upper letter SHOULD instead of a lower latter should. From nobody Wed Nov 30 06:58:49 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: savi@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id EDDF61294E6; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 06:58:42 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -5.698 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.698 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-1.497, SPF_HELO_PASS=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id ZOcUG2lZyJQs; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 06:58:40 -0800 (PST) Received: from tsinghua.edu.cn (smtp36.tsinghua.edu.cn [166.111.204.60]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 713AD1294DB; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 06:58:39 -0800 (PST) Received: from junbi-X1-2 (unknown [101.5.132.16]) by app5 (Coremail) with SMTP id DsxvpgA3M4Ea6T5YFEFuAA--.13908S2; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 22:58:35 +0800 (CST) Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 22:58:35 +0800 From: "Jun Bi" To: "Mirja Kuehlewind" , iesg References: <148050311738.6730.12570542079888312055.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> X-Priority: 3 X-Has-Attach: no X-Mailer: Foxmail 7, 2, 7, 174[cn] Mime-Version: 1.0 Message-ID: <2016113022583481872851@tsinghua.edu.cn> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_001_NextPart258236218474_=----" X-CM-TRANSID: DsxvpgA3M4Ea6T5YFEFuAA--.13908S2 X-Coremail-Antispam: 1UD129KBjvJXoW7Zr1fuF1rXr4DXFWDCr4xXrb_yoW8Gr1Up3 y3Gr47Gr1DJryxJw18Z3W8Ar1jv34kAw4UJF13Jr18AFW5AF1DtF18Kr1rAry7JFy5Gr4x XrWjk34DJw1UArUanT9S1TB71UUUUUUqnTZGkaVYY2UrUUUUjbIjqfuFe4nvWSU5nxnvy2 9KBjDU0xBIdaVrnRJUUUylb7Iv0xC_Cr1lb4IE77IF4wAFF20E14v26r1j6r4UM7CY07I2 0VC2zVCF04k26cxKx2IYs7xG6rWj6s0DM7CIcVAFz4kK6r1j6r18M28lY4IEw2IIxxk0rw A2z4x0Y4vE2Ix0cI8IcVAFwI0_Ar0_tr1l84ACjcxK6xIIjxv20xvEc7CjxVAFwI0_Gr1j 6F4UJwA2z4x0Y4vEx4A2jsIE14v26rxl6s0DM28EF7xvwVC2z280aVCY1x0267AKxVW0oV Cq3wAS0I0E0xvYzxvE52x082IY62kv0487Mc02F40E42I26xC2a48xMcIj6xIIjxv20xvE 14v26r106r15McIj6I8E87Iv67AKxVWUJVW8JwAm72CE4IkC6x0Yz7v_Jr0_Gr1lF7xvr2 IYc2Ij64vIr41lFcxC0VAYjxAxZF0Ew4CEw7xC0wACY4xI67k04243AVC20s07MxAIw28I cxkI7VAKI48JMI8I3I0E5I8CrVAFwI0_JrI_JrWlx2IqxVCjr7xvwVAFwI0_JrI_JrWlx4 CE17CEb7AF67AKxVWUAVWUtwCIc40Y0x0EwIxGrwCI42IY6xIIjxv20xvE14v26r1j6r1x MIIF0xvE2Ix0cI8IcVCY1x0267AKxVWUJVW8JwCI42IY6xAIw20EY4v20xvaj40_Zr0_Wr 1UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIE14v26r1j6r4UMIIF0xvEx4A2jsIEc7CjxVAFwI0_Jr0_Gr1l6VAC Y4xI67k04243AbIYCTnIWIevJa73UjIFyTuYvj7UU6p_UUUUU X-CM-SenderInfo: xmxquxo6wvx0pjkxthxhgxhubq/ Archived-At: Cc: savi-chairs , "draft-ietf-savi-mix@ietf.org" , savi , "jeanmichel.combes" Subject: Re: [savi] =?utf-8?q?Mirja_K=C3=BChlewind=27s_No_Objection_on_draft-i?= =?utf-8?q?etf-savi-mix-14=3A_=28with_COMMENT=29?= X-BeenThere: savi@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: Mailing list for the SAVI working group at IETF List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 14:58:43 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_001_NextPart258236218474_=---- Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 RGVhciBNaXJqYSwNCg0KTWFueSB0aGFua3MgZm9yIHlvdXIgY29tbWVudC4NCg0KDQoNCg0KQmVz dCBSZWdhcmRzLA0KDQpKdW4gQmkNCiANCuWPkeS7tuS6uu+8miBNaXJqYSBLdWVobGV3aW5kDQrl j5HpgIHml7bpl7TvvJogMjAxNi0xMS0zMCAxODo1MQ0K5pS25Lu25Lq677yaIFRoZSBJRVNHDQrm ioTpgIHvvJogc2F2aS1jaGFpcnM7IGRyYWZ0LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXg7IHNhdmk7IGplYW5taWNo ZWwuY29tYmVzDQrkuLvpopjvvJogW3NhdmldTWlyamEgS8O8aGxld2luZCdzIE5vIE9iamVjdGlv biBvbiBkcmFmdC1pZXRmLXNhdmktbWl4LTE0OiAod2l0aCBDT01NRU5UKQ0KTWlyamEgS8O8aGxl d2luZCBoYXMgZW50ZXJlZCB0aGUgZm9sbG93aW5nIGJhbGxvdCBwb3NpdGlvbiBmb3INCmRyYWZ0 LWlldGYtc2F2aS1taXgtMTQ6IE5vIE9iamVjdGlvbg0KIA0KV2hlbiByZXNwb25kaW5nLCBwbGVh c2Uga2VlcCB0aGUgc3ViamVjdCBsaW5lIGludGFjdCBhbmQgcmVwbHkgdG8gYWxsDQplbWFpbCBh ZGRyZXNzZXMgaW5jbHVkZWQgaW4gdGhlIFRvIGFuZCBDQyBsaW5lcy4gKEZlZWwgZnJlZSB0byBj dXQgdGhpcw0KaW50cm9kdWN0b3J5IHBhcmFncmFwaCwgaG93ZXZlci4pDQogDQogDQpQbGVhc2Ug cmVmZXIgdG8gaHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuaWV0Zi5vcmcvaWVzZy9zdGF0ZW1lbnQvZGlzY3Vzcy1jcml0 ZXJpYS5odG1sDQpmb3IgbW9yZSBpbmZvcm1hdGlvbiBhYm91dCBJRVNHIERJU0NVU1MgYW5kIENP TU1FTlQgcG9zaXRpb25zLg0KIA0KIA0KVGhlIGRvY3VtZW50LCBhbG9uZyB3aXRoIG90aGVyIGJh bGxvdCBwb3NpdGlvbnMsIGNhbiBiZSBmb3VuZCBoZXJlOg0KaHR0cHM6Ly9kYXRhdHJhY2tlci5p ZXRmLm9yZy9kb2MvZHJhZnQtaWV0Zi1zYXZpLW1peC8NCiANCiANCiANCi0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0N CkNPTU1FTlQ6DQotLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0t LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tDQogDQpQcm9iYWJseSBCZW4gY2F1Z2h0IHRoZW0gYWxy ZWFkeSBidXQgdGhlcmUgYXJlIGEgZmV3IGNhc2VzIHdoZXJlIHRoZXJlDQpzaG91bGQgYmUgYW4g dXBwZXIgbGV0dGVyIFNIT1VMRCBpbnN0ZWFkIG9mIGEgbG93ZXIgbGF0dGVyIHNob3VsZC4NCiAN CiANCl9fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fDQpzYXZp IG1haWxpbmcgbGlzdA0Kc2F2aUBpZXRmLm9yZw0KaHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuaWV0Zi5vcmcvbWFpbG1h bi9saXN0aW5mby9zYXZpDQo= ------=_001_NextPart258236218474_=---- Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable =0A
Dear Mirja,
=
Many thanks for your comment.
=0A

=0A

Best Regards,

Jun Bi
=0A
 
= =E5=8F=91=E4=BB=B6=E4=BA=BA=EF=BC=9A Mirja Kuehlewind
=E5=8F=91=E9=80=81=E6=97=B6= =E9=97=B4=EF=BC=9A 2016-11-30 18:51
=E6=94=B6= =E4=BB=B6=E4=BA=BA=EF=BC=9A The = IESG
=E4=B8=BB=E9=A2=98=EF=BC=9A [savi]Mirja K=C3= =BChlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)
<= /div>
Mirja K=C3=BChlewind has entered the following ballot= position for
=0A
draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection
=0A 
=0A
When responding, please keep the subject line intac= t and reply to all
=0A
email addresses included in the To and CC = lines. (Feel free to cut this
=0A
introductory paragraph, however= .)
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
Please refer to ht= tps://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
=0A
for m= ore information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
=0A
&nb= sp;
=0A
 
=0A
The document, along with other ballot= positions, can be found here:
=0A
https://datatracker.ietf.org/d= oc/draft-ietf-savi-mix/
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A 
=0A
---------------------------------------------------= -------------------
=0A
COMMENT:
=0A
-------------------= ---------------------------------------------------
=0A
 =0A
Probably Ben caught them already but there are a few cases wher= e there
=0A
should be an upper letter SHOULD instead of a lower l= atter should.
=0A
 
=0A
 
=0A
_______= ________________________________________
=0A
savi mailing list=0A
savi@ietf.org
=0A
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinf= o/savi
=0A
=0A ------=_001_NextPart258236218474_=------