Subject: IESG comments on CGA draft: Summary

From: Pekka Nikander <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 9 Mar 2004 07:05:15 -0500

The CGA draft was discussed a couple of weeks ago
at the IESG telechat.  There were two Comments and
one Discuss item.  In practise, this means that we have
to address the Discuss item but we may either ignore
or incorporate the comments; Comments are not blocking.

Once we've resolved the Discuss item and Comments at
the mailing list, Tuomas should issue a new ID version,
which will then advance towards the RFC Editor Queue.

The comments are by:

1. Ted Hardie, suggesting some strengthening of wording
      in text concerning other applications.
2. Thomas Narten, requesting a clarification

The Discuss item is by:

3. Russ Housley, requesting a text change and a reference
       change towards RFC3279 and some other changes.

I will send separate mails about these later on; in the
mean while, they are available in the Draft Tracker at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/public/pidtracker.cgi? 
command=print_ballot&ballot_id=1205&filename=draft-ietf-send-cga

In addition to the IESG comments, we have one typo,
recorded by JINMEI earlier:

>>    More specifically, there are two cases when a node creates neighbor
>>    cache entries upon receiving Soliciations:
>> ...
>>    2.  During Duplicate Address Detection (DAD), if a node receives a
>>        Neighbor Solicitation for the same address it is soliciting  
>> for,
>>        the situation is considered a collision, and the node must  
>> cease
>>        to solicit for the said address.
>
> "Soliciations should be Solicitations in the first sentence

--Pekka Nikander

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