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I have a couple final comments re: the version 11 and the changes 
between version 10 and version 11. Apologies for taking so long for 
this. I though I had done it already but realize now that I was 
remembering my response to the stunbis update.

1) idnits calls out a handful of things to check or resolve.
a) The doc should use documentation range IPv4 addresses throughout.
b) Are there any cases where IPv6 examples should also be provided?
c) There are some obsolete and/or outdated references to fix.

2) On page 19, there are two new uses of the word "can":
   "the TURN client can silently abandon"
   "the client can silently abandon"
These references are about applying address family precedence. Is this 
text meant to be normative? If so, it should use "MAY" instead of "can".

The rest looks as expected I think.

--Brandon

On 09/15/2017 02:47 PM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Folks,
> 
> we are starting a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on the following draft:
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis/
> 
> This WGLC will end on October 2nd. Please, send your comments to this
> list. Thanks!
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 
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One more nit that I just noticed ...

3) Section 15.13. ICMP Attribute contains a field called "Type" in the 
attribute value. Since attributes are TLV encoded with Type and Length 
as the first two fields, it might be better to call this field in the 
attribute value "ICMP Type" instead of just "Type".

--Brandon

On 10/01/2017 03:19 PM, Brandon Williams wrote:
> I have a couple final comments re: the version 11 and the changes 
> between version 10 and version 11. Apologies for taking so long for 
> this. I though I had done it already but realize now that I was 
> remembering my response to the stunbis update.
> 
> 1) idnits calls out a handful of things to check or resolve.
> a) The doc should use documentation range IPv4 addresses throughout.
> b) Are there any cases where IPv6 examples should also be provided?
> c) There are some obsolete and/or outdated references to fix.
> 
> 2) On page 19, there are two new uses of the word "can":
>    "the TURN client can silently abandon"
>    "the client can silently abandon"
> These references are about applying address family precedence. Is this 
> text meant to be normative? If so, it should use "MAY" instead of "can".
> 
> The rest looks as expected I think.
> 
> --Brandon
> 
> On 09/15/2017 02:47 PM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
>> Folks,
>>
>> we are starting a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on the following draft:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis/
>>
>> This WGLC will end on October 2nd. Please, send your comments to this
>> list. Thanks!
>>
>> Cheers,
>>
>> Gonzalo
>>
>> _______________________________________________
>> tram mailing list
>> tram@ietf.org
>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tram
>>
> 
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Thank you for the review.

Gonzalo and I will work on that next week and publish a new version.

Thanks.

On 09/30/2017 05:31 AM, Asveren, Tolga wrote:
> Here are my comments for draft-ietf-tram-stunbis-12 WGLC:
> (It could be easier for tracking purposes if authors reply in separate =

> threads/bundle relevant ones into separate threads)
> i- Please reference latest version of [I-D.ietf-ice-rfc5245bis], and in=
dicate=20
> that it should be updated by RFC Editor with the latest version/RFC num=
ber (if=20
> present) before publication of this document
> ii-
> STUN is intended to be used in context of one or more NAT traversal
>     solutions.  These solutions are known as STUN usages.  Each usage
>     describes how STUN is utilized to achieve the NAT traversal solutio=
n.
> I think there are use cases for non-NAT environments as well, e.g. RFC5=
626=20
> keep-alive for flows without NAT to detect Edge Proxy crash. Maybe addi=
ng a=20
> sentence along the following lines could be good:
> =E2=80=9CSTUN may also be used for cases where a NAT is not present, e.=
g., to detect=20
> crash of an Edge Proxy based on procedures defined in RFC5626 <referenc=
e RFC5626>.=E2=80=9D
> iii-
> Both types of transactions include a transaction ID, which
>     is a randomly selected 96-bit number.
> It may be useful to provide some guidance how this could be made (close=
 to)=20
> globally unique?
> iv-
> The server also uses
>     the transaction ID as a key to identify each transaction uniquely
>     across all clients.  As such, the transaction ID MUST be uniformly
>     and randomly chosen from the interval 0 .. 2**96-1, and SHOULD be
>     cryptographically random.
> There still is the possibility of a clash. What are the implications if=
 that=20
> happens? A short clarification could be useful.
> v- Structurally, it would be better to specify =E2=80=9Cbinding=E2=80=9D=
 as a =E2=80=9Cmethod=E2=80=9D in its=20
> own/separate section rather than in the sections pertaining to general =
message=20
> processing.
> vi-
> Absent other limits to
>     the rate of new transactions (such as those specified by ICE for
>     connectivity checks or when STUN is run over TCP), a client SHOULD
>     limit itself to ten outstanding transactions to the same server.
> What is the justification for this?
> vii-
> Alternatively, a
>     client MAY be configured with a set of domains or IP addresses that=

>     are trusted; if a certificate is received that identifies one of
>     those domains or IP addresses, the client considers the identity of=

>     the server to be verified.
> Isn=E2=80=99t this already covered by following from RFC6125 (at least =
the =E2=80=9Cdomain=E2=80=9D)
> 1.  The client constructs a list of acceptable reference identifiers
>         based on the source domain and, optionally, the type of service=

>         to which the client is connecting.
> ...
> As previously mentioned, this document specifies that
>        a URI-ID always contains a "host" component (or its equivalent)
>        containing a "reg-name".  (Matching only the "reg-name" rule fro=
m
>        [_URI_ <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6125>] limits verificatio=
n to DNS=20
> domain names, thereby
>        differentiating a URI-ID from a uniformResourceIdentifier entry
>        that contains an IP address or a mere host name, or that does no=
t
>        contain a "host" component at all.)
> It seems only =E2=80=9CIP=E2=80=9D is excluded.
> viii-
> It checks that the first two
>     bits are 0, that the magic cookie field has the correct value, that=

>     the message length is sensible, and that the method value is a
>     supported method.
> What does =E2=80=9Csensible=E2=80=9D mean in this context?
> ix-
> If the success response contains unknown comprehension-required
>     attributes, the response is discarded and the transaction is
>     considered to have failed.
> When would such a response be generated?
> x-
> If the error code is 500 through 599, the client MAY resend the
>        request; clients that do so MUST limit the number of times they =
do
>        this.
> It may be useful to provide some guidance/recommended values?
> xi-
> If the <host> part contains an IP address, then this IP address is
>     used directly to contact the server.  A "stuns" URI containing an I=
P
>     address MUST be rejected, unless the domain name is provided by the=

>     same mechanism that provided the STUN URI, and that domain name can=

>     be passed to the verification code.
> Isn=E2=80=99t this in conflict with the statement
> Alternatively, a
>     client MAY be configured with a set of domains or IP addresses that=

>     are trusted; if a certificate is received that identifies one of
>     those domains or IP addresses, the client considers the identity of=

>     the server to be verified.
> xii- Would it be useful to define a DHCP option for STUN Servers simila=
r to SIP=20
> in RFC3361?
> xiii-
> If the request was sent over an unreliable transport, the response
>     MUST be discarded, as if it was never received.  This means that
>     retransmits, if applicable, will continue.  If all the reponses
>     received are discarded then instead of signalling a timeout after
>     ending the transaction the layer MUST signal that an attack took
>     place.
> Why signal attack only if all retransmissions are problematic? Shouldn=E2=
=80=99t this=20
> happen even if only one is discarded?
> xiv- =E2=80=9CBasic Server=E2=80=9D, what does it really refer to? What=
 are alternatives? Was=20
> the goal here to describe behavior of a =E2=80=9CSTUN Binding Server=E2=
=80=9D? If so, shouldn=E2=80=99t=20
> it be renamed as such rather than as =E2=80=9CBasic Server=E2=80=9D? Or=
 are there procedures=20
> which pertain to =E2=80=9CBasic Servers in general=E2=80=9D (again what=
ever a Basic Server is)?=20
> Is defining behavior for a =E2=80=9Cbackward compatible server=E2=80=9D=
 the real goal here?
> xv-
> 10.  ALTERNATE-SERVER Mechanism
> What is raison d=E2=80=99etre for defining such a mechanism? Is there a=
n already known=20
> use case?
> xvi-
> It SHOULD NOT
>     utilize the short-term or long-term credential mechanism.  This is
>     because the work involved in authenticating the request is more tha=
n
>     the work in simply processing it.  It SHOULD NOT utilize the
>     ALTERNATE-SERVER mechanism for the same reason.
> Isn=E2=80=99t backward compatibility the real reason for not using cred=
entials and=20
> ALTERTNATE-SERVER? Otherwise there could be reasons other than processi=
ng cost=20
> which could make them applicable, e.g. for credentials, not wanting to =
serve=20
> illegitimate users, and for ALTERNATE-SERVER getting ready for an upgra=
de.
> xvii- From idnits:
> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 1321
>    ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 2104
>    ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2460
>    ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2617 (Obsoleted by RFC 7235, RF=
C 7615,
>       RFC 7616, RFC 7617)
>    =3D=3D Outdated reference: A later version (-12) exists of
>       draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis-01
>    -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2616=

>       (Obsoleted by RFC 7230, RFC 7231, RFC 7232, RFC 7233, RFC 7234, R=
FC 7235)
>    -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3489=

>       (Obsoleted by RFC 5389)
>    -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 5226=

> Thanks,
> Tolga
>=20
>=20
>=20



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Hi,

I completely missed the deadline on that.  I'll sent my long overdue revi=
ew beginning of next week.

Thanks.

On 09/15/2017 11:47 AM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Folks,
>=20
> we are starting a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on the following draft=
:
>=20
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis/
>=20
> This WGLC will end on October 2nd. Please, send your comments to this
> list. Thanks!
>=20
> Cheers,
>=20
> Gonzalo
>=20

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I should first apologize the the delay in reviewing this draft.  I never =
managed to get a sponsorship that spans the whole lifetime of a draft (or=
 a Working Group for that matter), and that why it is so difficult for me=
 to work on IETF stuff in a sustained and consistent manner.

Anyway, I was working on a review for turnbis-11 that was specifically fo=
cusing on the synchronization with stunbis, but I kept be distracted by i=
ssues related to the dual allocation feature.  So I decided instead to se=
nd a separate email for that, to make things less confusing.

My main comment about the dual allocation approach is about the choice of=
 adding a new attribute for that.  STUN supports sending multiple attribu=
tes of the same type, and has a default processing rule for them ("Any at=
tribute type MAY appear more than once in a STUN message.  Unless specifi=
ed otherwise, the order of appearance is significant:  only the first occ=
urrence needs to be processed by a receiver, and any duplicates MAY be ig=
nored by a receiver.")

So a TURNbis client that wants to do a dual allocating adds two REQUESTED=
-ADDRESS-FAMILY (RAF), one for IPv4 and one for IPv6.  An RFC 5766 server=
 will just use the first one and ignore the second.  The TURNbis client r=
eceives only one XOR-RELAYED-ADDRESS (XRA), for the first RAF it sent.

The client can choose the order, so it receives immediately a XRA from th=
e family it is most interested in, and can try a second allocation for th=
e other if the server is implementing RFC 5766.

I think that this makes for simpler rules to implement and simpler text.

Now some more specific comments about the text:

- Title and abstract

The draft should obsolete both RFC 5766 and RFC 6156, and that fact shoul=
d be repeated in the abstract.  The authors of RFC 6156 should be acknowl=
edged either in the Acknowledgment or Contributors section.

- Section 5.

The first item in the bullet list should say "the relayed transport addre=
ss or addresses;"

In the the fourth item, there is one time-to-expiry per relayed transport=
 address.

Same for the list of permissions in the fifth item.

"Both the relayed transport address and the 5-tuple MUST be unique across=
 all allocations, so either one can be used to uniquely identify the allo=
cation."

With the dual allocation, the 5-tuple no longer uniquely identify an allo=
cation.

- Section 6.2=20

I would suggest to make ADDRESS-ERROR-CODE more generic by renaming it as=
 WARNING-CODE and use the same format than for ERROR-CODE.  Then allocate=
 a new error code for that specific warning.  I would suggest to request =
the 0x8009 codepoint for that attribute.

Also I think we needs two different warnings, one that states that dual a=
llocation is not available in a TURNbis server, but both protocols are av=
ailable, and another that says that dual allocation failed because one of=
 the two protocols is not available.  This is to let the client know that=
 it is useless to try another allocation for the missing protocol.

What is the policy when reserving the next port with the EVEN-PORT attrib=
ute in a dual allocation, but one of them fails to find a pair of subsequ=
ent ports available?

It is not said that the Allocate successful response must contain two XRA=
s after a successful dual allocation.

I would also suggest to add some text that says that when a TURNbis serve=
r sends an Allocate success response, it must always send the XRAs in the=
 same order than the RAFs were sent.  So in case the server sends back by=
 mistake two XRAs, the first one matches the one requested by the client.=


The bullet list at the end needs also to be fixed for dual allocation.

- Section 6.3

Here's too, the text needs to be updated for the dual allocation case.


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Thanks Brandon for the review, Please see inline.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: tram [mailto:tram-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Brandon Williams
> Sent: Monday, October 2, 2017 12:50 AM
> To: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>; tram@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [tram] WGLC: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-11
>=20
> I have a couple final comments re: the version 11 and the changes between
> version 10 and version 11. Apologies for taking so long for this. I thoug=
h I had
> done it already but realize now that I was remembering my response to the
> stunbis update.
>=20
> 1) idnits calls out a handful of things to check or resolve.
> a) The doc should use documentation range IPv4 addresses throughout.

Fixed.=20

> b) Are there any cases where IPv6 examples should also be provided?

No.

> c) There are some obsolete and/or outdated references to fix.

Fixed all errors reported by idnits.=20

>=20
> 2) On page 19, there are two new uses of the word "can":
>    "the TURN client can silently abandon"
>    "the client can silently abandon"
> These references are about applying address family precedence. Is this te=
xt
> meant to be normative? If so, it should use "MAY" instead of "can".

"SHOULD" looks more suitable than "MAY".

>=20
> The rest looks as expected I think.

-Tiru

>=20
> --Brandon
>=20
> On 09/15/2017 02:47 PM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> > Folks,
> >
> > we are starting a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on the following draft=
:
> >
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis/
> >
> > This WGLC will end on October 2nd. Please, send your comments to this
> > list. Thanks!
> >
> > Cheers,
> >
> > Gonzalo
> >
> > _______________________________________________
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> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tram
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: tram [mailto:tram-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Brandon Williams
> Sent: Monday, October 2, 2017 1:37 AM
> To: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>; tram@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [tram] WGLC: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-11
>=20
> One more nit that I just noticed ...
>=20
> 3) Section 15.13. ICMP Attribute contains a field called "Type" in the at=
tribute
> value. Since attributes are TLV encoded with Type and Length as the first=
 two
> fields, it might be better to call this field in the attribute value "ICM=
P Type"
> instead of just "Type".

Replaced "Type" with "ICMP Type" and "Code" with "ICMP Code".

-Tiru

>=20
> --Brandon
>=20
> On 10/01/2017 03:19 PM, Brandon Williams wrote:
> > I have a couple final comments re: the version 11 and the changes
> > between version 10 and version 11. Apologies for taking so long for
> > this. I though I had done it already but realize now that I was
> > remembering my response to the stunbis update.
> >
> > 1) idnits calls out a handful of things to check or resolve.
> > a) The doc should use documentation range IPv4 addresses throughout.
> > b) Are there any cases where IPv6 examples should also be provided?
> > c) There are some obsolete and/or outdated references to fix.
> >
> > 2) On page 19, there are two new uses of the word "can":
> >    "the TURN client can silently abandon"
> >    "the client can silently abandon"
> > These references are about applying address family precedence. Is this
> > text meant to be normative? If so, it should use "MAY" instead of "can"=
.
> >
> > The rest looks as expected I think.
> >
> > --Brandon
> >
> > On 09/15/2017 02:47 PM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> >> Folks,
> >>
> >> we are starting a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on the following draf=
t:
> >>
> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis/
> >>
> >> This WGLC will end on October 2nd. Please, send your comments to this
> >> list. Thanks!
> >>
> >> Cheers,
> >>
> >> Gonzalo
> >>
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On 10/16/2017 07:14 PM, Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy wrote:
> Thanks Marc for the detailed review, Please see inline
>=20
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: tram [mailto:tram-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Marc Petit-
>> Huguenin
>> Sent: Saturday, October 14, 2017 12:59 AM
>> To: tram@ietf.org
>> Subject: [tram] Review of dual allocation in TURNbis-11
>>
>> I should first apologize the the delay in reviewing this draft.  I nev=
er managed
>> to get a sponsorship that spans the whole lifetime of a draft (or a Wo=
rking
>> Group for that matter), and that why it is so difficult for me to work=
 on IETF
>> stuff in a sustained and consistent manner.
>>
>> Anyway, I was working on a review for turnbis-11 that was specifically=

>> focusing on the synchronization with stunbis, but I kept be distracted=
 by
>> issues related to the dual allocation feature.  So I decided instead t=
o send a
>> separate email for that, to make things less confusing.
>>
>> My main comment about the dual allocation approach is about the choice=
 of
>> adding a new attribute for that.  STUN supports sending multiple attri=
butes
>> of the same type, and has a default processing rule for them ("Any att=
ribute
>> type MAY appear more than once in a STUN message.  Unless specified
>> otherwise, the order of appearance is significant:  only the first occ=
urrence
>> needs to be processed by a receiver, and any duplicates MAY be ignored=
 by a
>> receiver.")
>>
>> So a TURNbis client that wants to do a dual allocating adds two REQUES=
TED-
>> ADDRESS-FAMILY (RAF), one for IPv4 and one for IPv6.  An RFC 5766 serv=
er
>> will just use the first one and ignore the second.  The TURNbis client=
 receives
>> only one XOR-RELAYED-ADDRESS (XRA), for the first RAF it sent.
>>
>> The client can choose the order, so it receives immediately a XRA from=
 the
>> family it is most interested in, and can try a second allocation for t=
he other if
>> the server is implementing RFC 5766
>=20
>=20
> No, the above change contradicts the behavior defined in https://tools.=
ietf.org/html/rfc6156#section-3=20
> <snip>
>=20
>    TURN servers allocate a single relayed transport address per
>    allocation request.  Therefore, Allocate requests cannot carry more
>    than one REQUESTED-ADDRESS-FAMILY attribute.  Consequently, a client=

>    that wishes to allocate more than one relayed transport address at a=

>    TURN server (e.g., an IPv4 and an IPv6 address) needs to perform
>    several allocation requests (one allocation request per relayed
>    transport address).
> </snip>
>=20
> You may want to go through the long discussion in the WG to pick a new
> attribute (ADDITIONAL-ADDRESS-FAMILY) for dual-stack allocation.

I still think it is unnecessarily complicated, but all right.

>=20
>>
>> I think that this makes for simpler rules to implement and simpler tex=
t.
>>
>> Now some more specific comments about the text:
>>
>> - Title and abstract
>>
>> The draft should obsolete both RFC 5766 and RFC 6156, and that fact sh=
ould
>> be repeated in the abstract.  The authors of RFC 6156 should be
>> acknowledged either in the Acknowledgment or Contributors section.
>=20
> Done.=20
>=20
>>
>> - Section 5.
>>
>> The first item in the bullet list should say "the relayed transport ad=
dress or
>> addresses;"
>=20
> Updated line to say "All TURN operations revolve around allocations, an=
d all TURN messages are associated with either a single or dual allocatio=
n."
>=20
>>
>> In the the fourth item, there is one time-to-expiry per relayed transp=
ort
>> address.
>>
>> Same for the list of permissions in the fifth item.
>>
>> "Both the relayed transport address and the 5-tuple MUST be unique acr=
oss
>> all allocations, so either one can be used to uniquely identify the al=
location."
>>
>> With the dual allocation, the 5-tuple no longer uniquely identify an a=
llocation.
>=20
> Yes, fixed.=20
>=20
>>
>> - Section 6.2
>>
>> I would suggest to make ADDRESS-ERROR-CODE more generic by renaming it=

>> as WARNING-CODE and use the same format than for ERROR-CODE.  Then
>> allocate a new error code for that specific warning.  I would suggest =
to
>> request the 0x8009 codepoint for that attribute.
>=20
> I don't understand the need to change ADDRESS-ERROR-CODE !

To make it more generic and reusable in future specifications.

>=20
>>
>> Also I think we needs two different warnings, one that states that dua=
l
>> allocation is not available in a TURNbis server, but both protocols ar=
e
>> available, and another that says that dual allocation failed because o=
ne of
>> the two protocols is not available.  This is to let the client know th=
at it is
>> useless to try another allocation for the missing protocol.
>=20
> I don't get the reason for two different warnings.=20

A server may support both IPv6 and IPv4 allocations and not support dual =
allocation, in which case the client can do a second allocation for the I=
Pv6 relayed address.

Alternatively the server may not support IPv6 at all, in which case the s=
econd allocation will fail and was unnecessary.

Using two different warnings permits to know if the second allocation wil=
l succeed or not.

>=20
>>
>> What is the policy when reserving the next port with the EVEN-PORT
>> attribute in a dual allocation, but one of them fails to find a pair o=
f
>> subsequent ports available?
>=20
> It's discussed in section 6.1
>=20
> <snip>
>    Clients MUST NOT
>    include ADDITIONAL-ADDRESS-FAMILY attribute in a Allocate request
>    that contains an EVEN-PORT attribute with the R bit set to 1.
> </snip>
>=20
>>
>> It is not said that the Allocate successful response must contain two =
XRAs
>> after a successful dual allocation.
>=20
> Good point, Updated draft.=20
>=20
>>
>> I would also suggest to add some text that says that when a TURNbis se=
rver
>> sends an Allocate success response, it must always send the XRAs in th=
e
>> same order than the RAFs were sent.  So in case the server sends back =
by
>> mistake two XRAs, the first one matches the one requested by the clien=
t.
>>
>> The bullet list at the end needs also to be fixed for dual allocation.=

>=20
> Agreed, fixed.=20
>=20
>>
>> - Section 6.3
>>
>> Here's too, the text needs to be updated for the dual allocation case.=

>=20
>=20
> Yup, updated.
>=20
> Cheers,
> -Tiru
>=20


--=20
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This is the second part of my review of TURNbis-11, i.e. everything but t=
he dual allocation part.

- Section 2.1, last paragraph:

May be a reference to RFC 5764 and RFC 7983 can be useful here.  Same in =
section 4, second paragraph and following.  Same at the beginning of sect=
ion 11.  Again in section 11.6 (if multiplexed, the message in the reserv=
ed range is not necessarily discarded).

- Section 2.2, first paragraph:

I think that an informative reference to RFC 7635 may be useful there, as=
 alternative to the STUN authentication mechanism.

- Section 2.9:

The whole 2.9 section and subsections looks normative and so should be mo=
ved after section 3, perhaps on their own top level section.

- Section 4, 4th paragraph:

I would replace "For each allocation..." by "For each Allocate request...=
", because of the dual allocation feature.

- Section 4, 12th paragraph:

Should make clear clear that UDP covers also DTLS.

- Section 6.1, 2nd paragraph:

If the port is multiplexed with other protocols (RTP, WebRtc, etc..) then=
 it has to reuse an existing socket.  The document should explain this.

- Section 6.2, 3th paragraph:

Is it time to recommend DTLS instead of UDP?  In that case we need to mak=
e DTLS mandatory in section 4 paragraph 11 (and I support that change).

- Section 6.4, second bullet:

Replace "...SRV procedures)." with "...DNS resolution procedures)."

- Sections 14, 15 and 16:

These are no longer new methods and attributes.  See also the next commen=
t.

- Section 19:

Here you need to update the existing methods, attributes and error code s=
o the IANA registries point to the RFC-to-be, then you request allocation=
 for the new attributes.  See section 17 of STUNbis on a way to do that (=
that was done following a discussion with the IANA representative at an I=
ETF meeting).=20

Note that ICMP should be comprehension-mandatory, not optional, as we do =
not want an old client to reject a Data indication with an ICMP attribute=
=2E

Also, I do not know what this SendErr method is.


Nits
----

Section 1:=20

s/connection to the Internet ./connection to the Internet./

Section 2.4, first paragraph:

The text switches between the words "mechanisms" and "way".  Choose one.

Section 6.2, item 8:

s/ADDITIONAL- ADDRESS-FAMILY/ADDITIONAL-ADDRESS-FAMILY/

Section 12.1, "Preferred Behavior"

s/Label Field[RFC3697]/Label Field [RFC3697]/

Section 21:

s/ADDRESS-ERRR-CODE/ADDRESS-ERR-CODE/

Section 22:

s/orginal/original/

--=20
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On 10/22/2017 09:45 AM, Marc Petit-Huguenin wrote:
> This is the second part of my review of TURNbis-11, i.e. everything but=
 the dual allocation part.
>=20
> - Section 2.1, last paragraph:
>=20
> May be a reference to RFC 5764 and RFC 7983 can be useful here.  Same i=
n section 4, second paragraph and following.  Same at the beginning of se=
ction 11.  Again in section 11.6 (if multiplexed, the message in the rese=
rved range is not necessarily discarded).
>=20
> - Section 2.2, first paragraph:
>=20
> I think that an informative reference to RFC 7635 may be useful there, =
as alternative to the STUN authentication mechanism.
>=20
> - Section 2.9:
>=20
> The whole 2.9 section and subsections looks normative and so should be =
moved after section 3, perhaps on their own top level section.
>=20
> - Section 4, 4th paragraph:
>=20
> I would replace "For each allocation..." by "For each Allocate request.=
=2E.", because of the dual allocation feature.
>=20
> - Section 4, 12th paragraph:
>=20
> Should make clear clear that UDP covers also DTLS.
>=20
> - Section 6.1, 2nd paragraph:
>=20
> If the port is multiplexed with other protocols (RTP, WebRtc, etc..) th=
en it has to reuse an existing socket.  The document should explain this.=

>=20
> - Section 6.2, 3th paragraph:
>=20
> Is it time to recommend DTLS instead of UDP?  In that case we need to m=
ake DTLS mandatory in section 4 paragraph 11 (and I support that change).=

>=20
> - Section 6.4, second bullet:
>=20
> Replace "...SRV procedures)." with "...DNS resolution procedures)."
>=20
> - Sections 14, 15 and 16:
>=20
> These are no longer new methods and attributes.  See also the next comm=
ent.
>=20
> - Section 19:
>=20
> Here you need to update the existing methods, attributes and error code=
 so the IANA registries point to the RFC-to-be, then you request allocati=
on for the new attributes.  See section 17 of STUNbis on a way to do that=
 (that was done following a discussion with the IANA representative at an=
 IETF meeting).=20
>=20
> Note that ICMP should be comprehension-mandatory, not optional, as we d=
o not want an old client to reject a Data indication with an ICMP attribu=
te.

Correction: we *do* want an old client to reject a Data indication with a=
n ICMP attribute.

>=20
> Also, I do not know what this SendErr method is.
>=20
>=20
> Nits
> ----
>=20
> Section 1:=20
>=20
> s/connection to the Internet ./connection to the Internet./
>=20
> Section 2.4, first paragraph:
>=20
> The text switches between the words "mechanisms" and "way".  Choose one=
=2E
>=20
> Section 6.2, item 8:
>=20
> s/ADDITIONAL- ADDRESS-FAMILY/ADDITIONAL-ADDRESS-FAMILY/
>=20
> Section 12.1, "Preferred Behavior"
>=20
> s/Label Field[RFC3697]/Label Field [RFC3697]/
>=20
> Section 21:
>=20
> s/ADDRESS-ERRR-CODE/ADDRESS-ERR-CODE/
>=20
> Section 22:
>=20
> s/orginal/original/
>=20

--=20
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the TURN Revised and Modernized WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN): Relay Extensions to Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN)
        Authors         : Tirumaleswar Reddy
                          Alan Johnston
                          Philip Matthews
                          Jonathan Rosenberg
	Filename        : draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
	Pages           : 83
	Date            : 2017-10-22

Abstract:
   If a host is located behind a NAT, then in certain situations it can
   be impossible for that host to communicate directly with other hosts
   (peers).  In these situations, it is necessary for the host to use
   the services of an intermediate node that acts as a communication
   relay.  This specification defines a protocol, called TURN (Traversal
   Using Relays around NAT), that allows the host to control the
   operation of the relay and to exchange packets with its peers using
   the relay.  TURN differs from some other relay control protocols in
   that it allows a client to communicate with multiple peers using a
   single relay address.

   The TURN protocol was designed to be used as part of the ICE
   (Interactive Connectivity Establishment) approach to NAT traversal,
   though it also can be used without ICE.

   This document obsoletes [RFC5766] and [RFC6156].


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Subject: Re: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
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This revision addresses comments from Brandon and dual allocation related c=
omments from Mark.

-Tiru

> -----Original Message-----
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> drafts@ietf.org
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> Subject: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
>=20
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts direct=
ories.
> This draft is a work item of the TURN Revised and Modernized WG of the
> IETF.
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>         Title           : Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN): Relay=
 Extensions
> to Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN)
>         Authors         : Tirumaleswar Reddy
>                           Alan Johnston
>                           Philip Matthews
>                           Jonathan Rosenberg
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
> 	Pages           : 83
> 	Date            : 2017-10-22
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> Abstract:
>    If a host is located behind a NAT, then in certain situations it can
>    be impossible for that host to communicate directly with other hosts
>    (peers).  In these situations, it is necessary for the host to use
>    the services of an intermediate node that acts as a communication
>    relay.  This specification defines a protocol, called TURN (Traversal
>    Using Relays around NAT), that allows the host to control the
>    operation of the relay and to exchange packets with its peers using
>    the relay.  TURN differs from some other relay control protocols in
>    that it allows a client to communicate with multiple peers using a
>    single relay address.
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>    The TURN protocol was designed to be used as part of the ICE
>    (Interactive Connectivity Establishment) approach to NAT traversal,
>    though it also can be used without ICE.
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>    This document obsoletes [RFC5766] and [RFC6156].
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis/
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